1. Hard (2.83 stars, 571 notes)
2. Insane (3.72 stars, 806 notes)
3. Normal (1.53 stars, 289 notes)

1. BG換1024*768/1366*768?
2. BG用jpeg格式減file size
3. Audio Lead In 換番2000
4. Tags 加 vocaloid & vocaloid2

1. 00:54:905 (1) - del finish at slider head? 音樂聽個時冇;w; 做的話後面相似的都要改
2. 01:10:389 (3) - NC?
3. 02:02:647 (1) - 漏左加finish
4. 02:29:744 (3) - NC?
5. 03:12:324 (4) - 1 grid down 同番前面直線
6. 04:07:970 (3) - finish at the end?

1. 02:54:421 (4,5,1) - 咁放? 想跟番個flow
   SPOILER

   
2. 03:58:655 (5,1) -
   SPOILER

   
3. 04:25:268 (2) - 好似唔係幾對音;w; 放1個折返slider係 04:25:147 ?

1. 00:46:074 (3) -
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:10:994 (2) - 個音係 01:11:115 開始
3. 04:25:873 (5) - finish

happy623 wrote:

Mio~

[General]

1. BG換1024*768/1366*768?
2. BG用jpeg格式減file size
3. Audio Lead In 換番2000
4. Tags 加 vocaloid & vocaloid2 以上All fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:54:905 (1) - del finish at slider head? 音樂聽個時冇;w; 做的話後面相似的都要改 我聽到有啵
2. 01:10:389 (3) - NC? 好
3. 02:02:647 (1) - 漏左加finish fixed
4. 02:29:744 (3) - NC? 好
5. 03:12:324 (4) - 1 grid down 同番前面直線 好www
6. 04:07:970 (3) - finish at the end? 好

[Hard]

1. 02:54:421 (4,5,1) - 咁放? 想跟番個flow
   SPOILER

   
   太遲睇MOD依家無左張圖;_;我覺得依家都OK
2. 03:58:655 (5,1) -
   SPOILER

   
   同上
3. 04:25:268 (2) - 好似唔係幾對音;w; 放1個折返slider係 04:25:147 ?

我係跟keyboard d聲

[Insane]

1. 00:46:074 (3) -
   SPOILER

   
   我喺(4)度做左D手腳
2. 01:10:994 (2) - 個音係 01:11:115 開始 fixed
3. 04:25:873 (5) - finish

fixed

加油

blueloniess wrote:

哟，这是我的M4M，我先摸了，希望能够快点看咱的图~~~ 今天會看完XDD
首先我记得rank指南（ranking guidelines ）中有说到，一个图中最多只能接受3个滑条速度（包括1x），具体请看wiki，里面有写
這只是guide line，我也想清楚才用這些SV的

insane

00:00:712 (1,2) -这里两个很不错的，但是00:01:679 (1,2) - 这里2个突然放这么近好突兀..要么都这么近，要么都是像第一个和第二个一样远
因為這個比較低音，所以我放近點，我稍稍放遠了一點
00:05:550 (1,2) - ↑ 同上
00:15:953 (7,1) - 平行一下 不，現在我覺得很好看 XDD
00:21:276 (4,5) - ↑ 同上
01:01:679 (1,2,3) - ↑ 同上
01:28:655 (3,5) - ↑ 同上
01:16:921 (4,5,6) - 你的图里面感觉有很多这样的挤在一起的滑条，总感觉难看啊這個我改了一點
01:36:276 (4,5,6) - ↑ 把(4)移開了一點
01:42:082 (2,1,2) - ↑ 這個我覺得可以
02:01:800 (4) - 前面几个挤的还可以。。。这个就感觉是个叛徒了2333 我是跟vocal + 鼓MAP的
02:10:873 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - 总觉得这些叠起来好看多了比如：
我用了第2個方法修改，這裡的的spacing有點問題
02:25:268 (6,7) - good
02:40:147 (2,3,4) - 这几个挤不说而且感觉节奏好怪 vocal
02:44:018 (3,4) - 叠一下 這是我個人的喜好...我不太喜樂太多的stacking
03:51:518 (2,3) - .....感觉有很多都是这样挤在一起的结尾，可以考虑改成这样，跟下面的那个滑条对的上，而且感觉好看多了
我知道stacking在現今的mapping用得越來越多，但我真的不太喜歡

SPOILER

04:18:131 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 每次看到这样的都会觉得难受...弄成这样整齐多了不说还可以当作是读图梗来坑人2333 我裡我再看也覺得自己MAP得很難看 XD 用了類似的方法，但沒stack
04:26:357 - 从这里开始放这么多绿线干什么？绿线对滑条又没有什么影响.... spinner會有漸細聲

hard

00:14:744 (3,4) - .....跟insane一样。。。感觉不好看 不
01:45:711 - 一直看到这里，我都感觉前面有些地方东西方少了，比如01:06:760 -01:17:405 - 01:18:373 - ，或者说，全部用滑条，比如01:16:195 (1,2) - 这里可以考虑滑条01:17:526 (4,5) - 滑条01:20:066 (1,2) - 滑条 明白0.0 改了很多
01:59:260 (2,3) - 我决定就算在看到这样的让我不舒服的滑条摆法我还是无视算了...
02:45:228 (1,2) - 平行
固意的 xD
03:13:776 (4,1,2,3) - 这个大blanket中夹03:13:776 (4) - 这个叛徒是什么鬼2333
good
04:04:582 (1,2,3,4) - 这个4方跳没放好
這不是四方跳0.0

我一般不看NM和EZ，所以，抱歉...
总体来说吧

[*]排版我个人不是很喜欢的，特别是那些挤在一起的滑条...希望能够改进。。。另外总觉得节奏有点怪啊，然后就是音效的声音有点小的说~希望能够加大~~~ 我個人不好stacking www，那些滑條有部份也確實不太好...但整腽來說我蠻喜歡的0.0
最后，good luck~~ thanks
这几天能够看看咱的图吗？就今天吧www，M4M有優先權

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

對不起不過我真的不會MOD normal OWO
我的MOD給你作參考 可改可不改你決定@@
整體而言就是滑條過度頻繁使用ww 筆記~

[HARD]

我的NC是跟小節分的 (很大可能是因為我彈結他吧www)，所以就不改了

00:08:453 (1) - NC用掉
00:08:937 (2) - NC
00:16:195 (1) - NC用掉
00:16:679 (2) - NC
01:16:437 - 加個NOTE八 因為是hard，我不想太多1/4後立刻有notes
01:22:244 - ^ ^
02:17:526 (4) - 滑條延長至02:17:889 vocal是現在這樣的
03:23:816 (1) - SPIN從03:23:937開始 不，因為結他是左前一條紅線開始的，不想有太多delay
03:27:687 (1) - SPIN從03:27:808開始 ^
03:33:857 (1) - SPIN從03:33:857開始 ^
03:50:550 (3) - 改成2個滑條 改為減少一個repeat，不想用連續1/4 slider

[INSANE]

00:06:760 (2,3,4) - 排列可在好一點 我完全看不到問題 0.0 還是我的審美觀有點兒那個 xD
00:44:260 (4) - 改為1個滑條 不，有鼓聲
01:10:994 (2) - 應該在01:11:115 對www 明明改了一次，手殘邋原了www
01:11:720 (3) - 改為1個NOTE並放在01:11:841 有drum roll
01:17:889 (7) - 改為2個NOTE 不，太難了
01:25:268 (7) - 應該在01:25:147 vocal
02:01:800 (4) - 改為2個NOTE 好
02:38:211 (3) - 改為1個NOTE不，前面也是這樣
02:39:058 (2) - ^ 不，跟後面的pattern對齊
03:15:470 (4) - 改為2個NOTE 不，跟前面的pattern對齊
03:19:945 (1) 03:23:816 (1) 03:27:687 (1) 跟HARD一樣 我也跟HARD一樣www
03:49:824 (1,2,3) - 分開一點 固意stack的

Mio_chan wrote:

blueloniess wrote:

哟，这是我的M4M，我先摸了，希望能够快点看咱的图~~~ 今天會看完XDD
首先我记得rank指南（ranking guidelines ）中有说到，一个图中最多只能接受3个滑条速度（包括1x），具体请看wiki，里面有写
這只是guide line，我也想清楚才用這些SV的

insane

00:00:712 (1,2) -这里两个很不错的，但是00:01:679 (1,2) - 这里2个突然放这么近好突兀..要么都这么近，要么都是像第一个和第二个一样远
因為這個比較低音，所以我放近點，我稍稍放遠了一點
00:05:550 (1,2) - ↑ 同上
00:15:953 (7,1) - 平行一下 不，現在我覺得很好看 XDD
00:21:276 (4,5) - ↑ 同上
01:01:679 (1,2,3) - ↑ 同上
01:28:655 (3,5) - ↑ 同上
01:16:921 (4,5,6) - 你的图里面感觉有很多这样的挤在一起的滑条，总感觉难看啊這個我改了一點
01:36:276 (4,5,6) - ↑ 把(4)移開了一點
01:42:082 (2,1,2) - ↑ 這個我覺得可以
02:01:800 (4) - 前面几个挤的还可以。。。这个就感觉是个叛徒了2333 我是跟vocal + 鼓MAP的
02:10:873 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - 总觉得这些叠起来好看多了比如：
我用了第2個方法修改，這裡的的spacing有點問題
02:25:268 (6,7) - good
02:40:147 (2,3,4) - 这几个挤不说而且感觉节奏好怪 vocal
02:44:018 (3,4) - 叠一下 這是我個人的喜好...我不太喜樂太多的stacking
03:51:518 (2,3) - .....感觉有很多都是这样挤在一起的结尾，可以考虑改成这样，跟下面的那个滑条对的上，而且感觉好看多了
我知道stacking在現今的mapping用得越來越多，但我真的不太喜歡

SPOILER

04:18:131 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 每次看到这样的都会觉得难受...弄成这样整齐多了不说还可以当作是读图梗来坑人2333 我裡我再看也覺得自己MAP得很難看 XD 用了類似的方法，但沒stack
04:26:357 - 从这里开始放这么多绿线干什么？绿线对滑条又没有什么影响.... spinner會有漸細聲

hard

00:14:744 (3,4) - .....跟insane一样。。。感觉不好看 不
01:45:711 - 一直看到这里，我都感觉前面有些地方东西方少了，比如01:06:760 -01:17:405 - 01:18:373 - ，或者说，全部用滑条，比如01:16:195 (1,2) - 这里可以考虑滑条01:17:526 (4,5) - 滑条01:20:066 (1,2) - 滑条 明白0.0 改了很多
01:59:260 (2,3) - 我决定就算在看到这样的让我不舒服的滑条摆法我还是无视算了...
02:45:228 (1,2) - 平行
固意的 xD
03:13:776 (4,1,2,3) - 这个大blanket中夹03:13:776 (4) - 这个叛徒是什么鬼2333
good
04:04:582 (1,2,3,4) - 这个4方跳没放好
這不是四方跳0.0

我一般不看NM和EZ，所以，抱歉...
总体来说吧

[*]排版我个人不是很喜欢的，特别是那些挤在一起的滑条...希望能够改进。。。另外总觉得节奏有点怪啊，然后就是音效的声音有点小的说~希望能够加大~~~ 我個人不好stacking www，那些滑條有部份也確實不太好...但整腽來說我蠻喜歡的0.0
最后，good luck~~ thanks
这几天能够看看咱的图吗？就今天吧www，M4M有優先權

Peachtrees wrote:

M4M for your Q >w</

Normal

00:14:260 (2) - could try extending this by 1/2, feels more interesting to play no because i follow the keyboard

00:22:002 (4) - I personally feel like this slider covers too many sounds to be worth keeping :c ok fixed

00:37:244 (4) - consider adding a circle? to hard imo

00:43:050 (6) - ^ vocals feel rather strong, and I feel as though this works as a build-up for the downbeat. your call! ok

00:57:082 (3) - beat on this red tick feels very strong, adding a circle might work no, I don't think it is strong enough to add sth in normal

01:34:824 (4) - skipping vocals here feel a bit weird =w= change the previous note to slider

01:43:413 (1) - could move this to start on the blue tick instead you're right

02:16:437 (3) - you mapped this 'du du' sound previously, so adding a circle here might work. not sure if you mind this being 1/2 heavy though uwu no because I map to the cymbal crash

02:27:324 (4,2) - why not stack these ok, though I don't think it's stacking lol

02:43:292 (1,2) - sloppy blanket fixed

03:33:373 (5) - this beat feels very strong, so consider adding a circlee c: not strong imo, it's just a transitional note

Hard

00:21:034 (3,4) - I feel as though this would looks better if both of these slider looked the same :c (copy 3 and then rotate it until it fits) I think it doesn't matter whether they look the same or not, so no

00:22:970 (1,2,3) - seems a liiiitle to spaced out, they don't feel that much stronger than the previous 3 mapped to the same sound they have higher pitch

00:31:437 (6,1) - dont really feel like this should be a jump too. the previous ones highlight the vocals, but I feel like also highlighting the downbeat here feels a bit to much and hurts the flow but I think it's fun to highlight them because of the pitch and the absense of vocal in the downbeat of the next bar

00:47:163 (1,2,3,4) - why not implement some symmetry here oh yeah

00:52:970 (1) - a bit strange to have no emphasize on this when you did it for all previous downbeats I don't understand this 0.0

00:58:171 (5,1,2) - feels too harsh >< alright, reduced

01:18:131 (1,2) - why not make this a slider instead? the gap between 1 and 2 feels a tad bit weird 1.5x spacing to emphasize the 3-3-2 pattern of vocal

01:35:066 (4,5,1) - looks kinda sloppy :c reshaped

01:56:841 (1) - feels very strong but has very little emphasize on it :c I think crash is kinda enough

02:07:970 (6,1) - ^ the spacing change is enough I think

02:52:970 (1,2) - pointed out something similar previously I think. gap between 1 and 2 feels sorta odd while having vocals going on in the background
similar to 01:18:131 (1,2), I will take note on this to see any other point out this

03:04:341 (1) - feels like this downbeat should have something clickable on it :c no change because similar patterns

03:15:953 (4) - ^ there are a lot of these 1/4 sliders, but these are two examples where I feel like having the tail on the downbeat doesnt feel as nice


03:58:292 (4,5,1) - looks a bit sloppy >< this one I think is alright

Insane

00:06:518 (1,2,3,4,1) - feels a bit overdone :c haha I just want to build up the atmosphere

00:22:970 (1) - might just be me, but I feel as though the big SV change feels kinda unreasonable actually it is similar to hard, 1.5x spacing and SV

00:26:841 (4,5) - flow between these is kinda meh you;re right, fixed

00:35:792 (1,2,3) - why are these so close?:c it's just normal 1.5x, there is jump before so it seems to be close

00:56:841 (1,2) - ^ ^ xD

01:00:711 (1,2) - ^ all these feel rather strong, so it feels like the spacing between them could be a little more taxing I think it's enough

01:18:131 (1,2) - same thing with the Hard, I PERSONALLY feel like this gap feels rather weird I like the vocal here so I put 1.5x jump

01:45:953 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3085056 sliderpointsss =w= oh yeah XDD

02:06:518 (9,1) - flows kinda meh because the emphasize is a bit off :c
no , reason similar to hard 00:31:437 (6,1)

02:21:760 (3,1) - feels like this jump could be a little meaner
no, you are mean xDDD just kidding

02:38:695 (1,2) - these two feels sorta unfitting :c I don't think they accurately represent the song noted, if someone else point out this I will make changes

03:06:276 (8,1) - space these out just a liiiiitle more ok a liiiiittle more

03:27:324 (4,5) - again, feels like this needs to be more spaced out yeah

Good luck =w=b

1. tags suggetion:
   EXIT TUNES PRESENTS GUMing

1. 01:43:413 (1,1) - I prefer to move spinner-end to big white line 01:45:228
2. 02:47:163 (1,2) - you can make better blanketting. how about this?
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   196,136,167163,6,0,P|235:88|299:78,1,120,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   378,112,168131,2,0,P|341:157|283:170,1,120,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

3. 03:07:486 (2,3) - why not blanket correctly, keeping symmetric pattern with 03:06:518 (1) - ?
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   239,318,186518,6,0,P|271:268|325:245,1,120,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   325,147,187486,2,0,P|271:125|239:75,1,120,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   332,52,188453,1,2,0:0:0:0:

4. 03:13:776- clap
5. 04:08:453- I prefer to add clap or finish

1. about SV, 0.5x~1.5x is too big and changing point is too many. so, very difficult with respect to StarRating.
   I recommend to decrease them at least hard-diff
2. 00:03:857 (2) - this reverse is very hard to see...
3. 00:07:244 (4) - ^. espesially, stack is not good
4. 01:43:413 (1) - end at 01:45:228
5. 02:18:010 (5,1,2) - too difficult. I recommend to decrease spacing between 02:18:131 (1,2) - and avoid 5-1 stack.
   u~m, suggetion, here
   
6. 03:17:163- whistle
7. 04:08:937 (1,2) - I prefer to delete

1. 00:07:728 (2,3,4,5) - I suggest to change to reverse slider like 00:03:857 (4) -
   1/6 circle stream is hard to find rhythm
2. 00:38:453- um, I prefer to add a note
3. 01:07:849 (6,7,8) - 1/2 slider is better for following vocal
4. 02:27:203 (6,7,8) - ^
5. 02:17:284 (5,6,7,8) - this stream is not suitable for this part, imo
6. 03:49:824 (1,2) - hard to see. I suggest not to stack correctly
7. 04:10:026 (3) - delete

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[General]

1. tags suggetion:
   EXIT TUNES PRESENTS GUMing

added
[Normal]

1. 01:43:413 (1,1) - I prefer to move spinner-end to big white line 01:45:228 no because vocal ends there
2. 02:47:163 (1,2) - you can make better blanketting. how about this? oh yeah
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   196,136,167163,6,0,P|235:88|299:78,1,120,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   378,112,168131,2,0,P|341:157|283:170,1,120,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

3. 03:07:486 (2,3) - why not blanket correctly, keeping symmetric pattern with 03:06:518 (1) - ? ok
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   239,318,186518,6,0,P|271:268|325:245,1,120,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   325,147,187486,2,0,P|271:125|239:75,1,120,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   332,52,188453,1,2,0:0:0:0:

4. 03:13:776- clap oh yeah O.o
5. 04:08:453- I prefer to add clap or finish

there's nothing in the music I think
[Hard]

1. about SV, 0.5x~1.5x is too big and changing point is too many. so, very difficult with respect to StarRating. I think is just fine, 0.5x is used seldom so I think it's ok, but I will take a note of that
   I recommend to decrease them at least hard-diff
2. 00:03:857 (2) - this reverse is very hard to see... the default skin shows it clearly
3. 00:07:244 (4) - ^. espesially, stack is not good oh I will unstack this
4. 01:43:413 (1) - end at 01:45:228 no, vocal ends here
5. 02:18:010 (5,1,2) - too difficult. I recommend to decrease spacing between 02:18:131 (1,2) - and avoid 5-1 stack.
   u~m, suggetion, here
   Hmm, I think mine flows SLIGHTLY better since the vocal very fluent, actually I plan to repeated sliders at this point but it is way to hard to read
6. 03:17:163- whistle yeah, forgotten xD
7. 04:08:937 (1,2) - I prefer to delete

no due to vocal
[Insane]

1. 00:07:728 (2,3,4,5) - I suggest to change to reverse slider like 00:03:857 (4) -
   1/6 circle stream is hard to find rhythm I think it's okay because (1) the pattern happens the second time already (2) the music is building up
2. 00:38:453- um, I prefer to add a note hmm, may consider it in future, now no
3. 01:07:849 (6,7,8) - 1/2 slider is better for following vocal you're right
4. 02:27:203 (6,7,8) - ^ ^
5. 02:17:284 (5,6,7,8) - this stream is not suitable for this part, imo changed sth
6. 03:49:824 (1,2) - hard to see. I suggest not to stack correctly It's just fine I think as the slider is on top
7. 04:10:026 (3) - delete

ok
pleasant song! thanks

~Good Luck~

ohad1881 wrote:

hi there!
you requested a reverse m4m in my queue
[normal]
00:20:550 (2,4) - overlap i think fixed
00:22:002 (4,1) - ^^ ^^
00:42:566 (5) - nc? no because I like to put NC on long white line
01:01:195 (4,1) - overlap this is acceptable I think
01:20:066 (1,3) - ^^ so little lol, move by 1 grid
01:41:841 (4,6) - ^^ this is not avoidable
the problems keep coming just fix overlaps... ok :3
[hard]
00:31:679 (1,2) - swap nc? no, I like NC on white line :3
00:39:421 (1,2) - ^^ ^^
00:47:163 (1,2) - ^^ ^^
try to be more consistent with your DS the patterns are fine but hard diffs should contain atleast 80% in DS
also fix the rest of the nc swaping well, too boring to have constant DS, but I remap the second verse since I make a serious mistake
[insane]
00:29:623 (7,1) - swap nc no, reason like the other diff
00:33:373 (5,3) - not perfectly stacked well it is a coincidence lol, i have no intention to stack and I cannot see the reason for this
00:54:663 (5,1) - this is a bit to hard for 3.9 diff the beat is so strong that I feel a big jump is needed, btw this is an insane I think it's okay to leave it as now
00:58:534 (8,1) - ^^ ^^
00:59:986 (3) - nc yeah
01:21:397 (7) - 64 33 stack I can't understand 0.0
01:23:937 (1) - dont stack oh right
01:50:792 (6,1) - ^^ - make a triangle with the two notes after for both no change for this, since this part of the map is special
02:14:502 (2) - toooo far mentioned already above
02:15:711 (3) - nc ^^
02:18:373 (2) - far again... ^^
02:19:341 (3) - nc ^^
02:27:687 (1,2) - not good flow, also hard.. the flow is alright I think 0.0 no jerky movement
02:30:469 (2,3,4,5) - make this a repeat slider no xD I like 1/6
02:55:873 (5) - nc no, i don't have nc in similar parts of this song
03:33:615 (8) - ^^ this is an exceptional case where I won't put NC, singleton NC due to spinner afterward is weird imo
03:50:550 (4) - ctrl g this and then 03:50:792 (5) - ctrl g this ok
04:25:873 (5) - nc just like 03:33:615 (8)
thats all!
sorry if it was a bit short i just couldn't find anything in normal/hard except for repeating things..
gl! nvm, your mod help me a lot and makes me think more about my map
ill send you my map in PM

1. 00:06:518 (1,2) - I think it would be more legit if these distant is same as 00:04:582 (1,2) - and 00:05:066 (3,4) -
2. 00:22:002 (1,2) - blanket would be improved a bit
3. 00:49:099 (8) - add Nc and remove NC from 00:49:341 (1) -
4. 00:51:034 (8) - add NC and remove NC from 00:51:276 (1) -
5. 01:11:720 (3) - 1/8 sound imo better, just suggest!
6. 01:52:486 (1) - remove NC
7. 02:08:454 (7,7) - maybe stack these
8. 02:30:469 (2,3,4,5) - 1/6 stream isn't needed here. maybe make it 1/4?
9. 03:33:736 (1) - maybe add Finish hitsound
10. 03:49:824 (1) - same as before ^
11. 04:07:970 - add Finish hitsound
12. 04:08:453 (7) - add Finish hitsound

1. 00:02:647 (1,2) - keep same distant as 00:01:679 (1,2) - and 00:00:712 (1,2) -
2. 00:08:211 (7,8,1) - I don't recommend to stack NC in hard.
3. 00:22:002 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this part will be maybe too difficult for hard players. Replace them with reverse slider.
4. 02:12:808 (2,3,4) - keep distant same between these circles
5. 03:33:615 (7) - add NC
6. 03:33:736 (1) - add Finish hitsound
7. 04:07:970 (4) - add Finish hitsound, it fits there imo
8. 04:23:937 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - same as before ^

smsh150 wrote:

Hello!
Came from my queue.

[Insane]

1. 00:06:518 (1,2) - I think it would be more legit if these distant is same as 00:04:582 (1,2) - and 00:05:066 (3,4) - the spacing is 0.8x, 1.6x, 2.4x, 3.2x, so no fix for now
2. 00:22:002 (1,2) - blanket would be improved a bit fixed
3. 00:49:099 (8) - add Nc and remove NC from 00:49:341 (1) - I understand the reason behind this mod... but I will not change this as all similar pats has the same comboing, and even same DS
4. 00:51:034 (8) - add NC and remove NC from 00:51:276 (1) - just similar to above
5. 01:11:720 (3) - 1/8 sound imo better, just suggest! I will note this down, since that part has a drum roll(idk how to call that continuous hitting) it sounds great and tense to me now, but may change in future
6. 01:52:486 (1) - remove NC no because this is differ from ths previous pattern, I do combo by following the string sound
7. 02:08:454 (7,7) - maybe stack these no, because keeping this part consistent with other similar part
8. 02:30:469 (2,3,4,5) - 1/6 stream isn't needed here. maybe make it 1/4? listen carefully to the music and you can here a drum similar to 01:11:720 (3)
9. 03:33:736 (1) - maybe add Finish hitsound no because the chorus is calm after the spinner
10. 03:49:824 (1) - same as before ^ no finish sounds in music
11. 04:07:970 - add Finish hitsound ^
12. 04:08:453 (7) - add Finish hitsound

^
[Hard]

1. 00:02:647 (1,2) - keep same distant as 00:01:679 (1,2) - and 00:00:712 (1,2) - It is the same distance if you are using the space between the sliders groups instead of simple DS
2. 00:08:211 (7,8,1) - I don't recommend to stack NC in hard. why??? it is clear readable of hard players imo
3. 00:22:002 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this part will be maybe too difficult for hard players. Replace them with reverse slider.
4. 02:12:808 (2,3,4) - keep distant same between these circles I want to build up the atmosphere of the gameplay
5. 03:33:615 (7) - add NC refer to the previous mod post for detail
6. 03:33:736 (1) - add Finish hitsound similar to insane
7. 04:07:970 (4) - add Finish hitsound, it fits there imo no because there isn't in the music
8. 04:23:937 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - same as before ^ ^

Good Luck! ^^
Ps. sorry for being this late... I have been recently so busy :/ nvm thanks for your modding

Do not use sliderslide, sliderwhistle, and spinnerspin hitsounds in a way that would replicate a hitsound on a circle, slider start, slider end, slider tick, or slider repeat. Sliderslide, sliderwhistle, and spinnerspin hitsounds are considered continuous hitsounds, meaning that their files play from start to end and loop as one continuous sound for the length of the held object. Do not alter any section of a held object to play a single hitsound.

intoon wrote:

[Normal]

03:03:373 (2) - remove repeat?
03:11:115 (2) - ^
no to both, intended

[Hard]

03:32:163 (2,3,4) - inconsistent distance snap fixed

[Insane]

00:51:760 (2,3,4) - make more straight? intended, absolutely straight looks weird
02:01:437 (3,4,5) - ^ ^
01:11:720 (3) - oh... too short... look so bad by overlapped reverse arrow... changed to 1/8
01:21:034 (6,7) - i'd like to make clearly about reading, in relax map. change to sth else since it is ugly imo now www
01:25:147 - add note? no, due to vocal
02:04:099 (6,7,1) - inconsistent distance snap fixed
02:26:841 (4,5,6,7) - ^ fixed
02:21:760 (3) - ctrl+G intended, to make the pattern consistent
03:49:824 (1,2,3) - recommend to change another partten. so bad for playing yea


01:34:341 (2) - and etc...... im not sure whether this is fine or not, about using diff hitsound in slider tick with slider's start and etc...

Do not use sliderslide, sliderwhistle, and spinnerspin hitsounds in a way that would replicate a hitsound on a circle, slider start, slider end, slider tick, or slider repeat. Sliderslide, sliderwhistle, and spinnerspin hitsounds are considered continuous hitsounds, meaning that their files play from start to end and loop as one continuous sound for the length of the held object. Do not alter any section of a held object to play a single hitsound.

I think I am just changing the slider tick sound, which is not included in the rule.

since my modding is short ,i don't mind your modding's(m4m) length. Seriously

FlyingRUPig wrote:

Finally got around to doing this mod xP

I had no issues with Normal

Hard

00:08:695 Add note? no, the keyboard sound is long

00:16:437 ^ no, the keyboard sound is long

01:42:324 Seems a bit too far of a jump for Hard actually it is just 1.5x

02:18:010 (5,1,2) Seems a bit too hard for Hard players will expect a jump here since this is already the forth time of the jump

02:48:010 (3) Maybe move a bit to the left (minor issue) nah, due to DS

02:49:099 (1,2) Blanket can be tweaked slightly (very minor insignificant issue)ok

Insane

00:37:486 (1,2,3,4,5) I know you're mapping to the vocals but seems a bit empty and off compared to the rest of the song.
this line appears only once in the whole song, so i think it's ok

00:58:776 (1,2) Distance may be a little too far. I think it's ok since this should be expected after the first jump

01:34:945 (1) Flows fine, but looks weird to me being on the left. idk why I make use of slider leniency

01:48:615 (3,4,1) Why not do the thing you did at 01:07:002 (2,3,4)? idk either XD, but it looks fine to me

01:52:486 (1,2,1) Ditto, but not really as neccessary with the way these sliders are. what does ditto mean?

02:14:260 (1,2) Again, may be too much of a jump for the star diff. I don't think it is really too much, since the spacing of this diff is quite large actually

03:49:824(1,2,3) Weird comboyea fixed

Great mapset! It's very good right now and I had only a few issues. Good luck with the ranking process
Thanks for using my M4M queue!

sodarose wrote:

From your queue
不介意的话我用中文？
[Insane]
00:09:784 (6,7,1) - Flow不好 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3141985 nice
00:17:526 (6) - 节奏不对把。 而且00:17:526 (6,7) - 这样放感觉好难看 沒不對，跟了KEYBOARD

00:19:582 (3,3) - Stack? ????

00:22:365 (2,2) - 只有我感觉节奏怪吗;w; 跟了KEYBOARD

00:48:373 (5,4) - Stack stack反而沒那麼好看我覺得

01:01:679 (1,2) - 试试这个节奏？https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3142005 不行，因為有鼓聲

01:05:308 (3,5) - 平行会好看很多 好

01:15:107 (4,3) - 尽量不要碰到 ???

01:34:341 (2,3) - Flow怪怪的 用slider leniency處理

01:42:808 这个音挺明显的，01:42:687 (2) - 这里换连打？先記錄，因為我當初也有這個想法，但覺得這樣MAP太沒特色了

00:31:679 (9,1) - 02:06:518 (9,1) - 交换NC 后面的不提了 不，細心想過的

03:50:066 (2,3) - 感觉放出来好 改了一點節奏，但疊起來比較好，因為都是SNARE聲

04:06:034 (1,1) - 不要碰到好


[Hard]
00:46:437 (4,4,5) - Stack? 不太愛stack

01:26:720 (3,3) - 为什么在kiai里的间距比前面的要小 沒有呀

02:29:744 (1,2,3) - W'histle 有點吵耳

02:51:034 (1,1) - Stack好

04:04:582 (1,2,3,4) - 放的太随意了用DS角度來看不是

加油

1. 00:22:970 (5) - make straight the slider,just a suggestion
2. 01:11:599 - decrease the volume inherited point,maybe somewhere in the 40%,because it's too loud
3. 01:11:841 - ^
4. 02:37:486 (4) - copy 02:36:518 (3),paste,ctrl+J,ctrl+H and put it in the same place,try this
5. 04:07:970 (3) - try on the last lap to put a finish,just a suggestion

1. 00:03:857 (2) - try to delete the whistle from the 2 and the last of the circles,just a suggestion
2. 02:27:808 (1,2) - blanket?
3. 02:44:623 (3) - copy 02:44:018 (2),paste,remove reverse,ctrl+J,ctrl+H and put in place
4. 02:45:228 (1) - copy 02:45:711 (2),paste,ctrl+H,ctrl+J and put it back
5. 02:52:365 (4) - copy 02:51:760 (3),paste,remove reverse,ctrl+J,ctrl+H and put in place
6. 02:56:236 (4) - copy 02:55:631 (3),paste,remove reverse,ctrl+J,ctrl+H and put in place
7. 03:04:341 (1) - copy 03:03:373 (3),paste,remove reverse,ctrl+J,ctrl+H and put in place
8. 03:56:236 (4) - copy 03:55:631 (3),paste,remove reverse,ctrl+J,ctrl+H and put in place

1. 00:54:420 (4,5) - the distance is smaller,because during the game confused at what point to press
2. 01:37:486 (1) - copy 01:36:881 (6),paste,ctrl+H,ctrl+J to add a reverse and put in place
3. 01:58:776 (1) - rotate - 19 degrees and put on x:88 y:244,just a suggestion

Chamue wrote:

Hi,Sorry for the long wait

Normal

1. 00:22:970 (5) - make straight the slider,just a suggestion I make it curver instead lol
2. 01:11:599 - decrease the volume inherited point,maybe somewhere in the 40%,because it's too loud I think it;s alright now because theI want to put emphasis on the drum
3. 01:11:841 - ^
4. 02:37:486 (4) - copy 02:36:518 (3),paste,ctrl+J,ctrl+H and put it in the same place,try this good
5. 04:07:970 (3) - try on the last lap to put a finish,just a suggestion

no because there is no such sound in the music

Hard

Try to make CS a 3.5,because the Normal 3,and Insane 4. .5 CS is ridiculous to me

1. 00:03:857 (2) - try to delete the whistle from the 2 and the last of the circles,just a suggestion
2. 02:27:808 (1,2) - blanket? no
3. 02:44:623 (3) - copy 02:44:018 (2),paste,remove reverse,ctrl+J,ctrl+H and put in place
4. 02:45:228 (1) - copy 02:45:711 (2),paste,ctrl+H,ctrl+J and put it back
5. 02:52:365 (4) - copy 02:51:760 (3),paste,remove reverse,ctrl+J,ctrl+H and put in place
6. 02:56:236 (4) - copy 02:55:631 (3),paste,remove reverse,ctrl+J,ctrl+H and put in place
7. 03:04:341 (1) - copy 03:03:373 (3),paste,remove reverse,ctrl+J,ctrl+H and put in place
8. 03:56:236 (4) - copy 03:55:631 (3),paste,remove reverse,ctrl+J,ctrl+H and put in place

sorry I know why you would like to do those suggestion, but all no to above because those sliders are not a pair imo. In terms of rhythm and pitch, I can't see why they need to be parallel

Insane

1. 00:54:420 (4,5) - the distance is smaller,because during the game confused at what point to press If you are familiar with the music, you will know the pattern
2. 01:37:486 (1) - copy 01:36:881 (6),paste,ctrl+H,ctrl+J to add a reverse and put in place similar to hard
3. 01:58:776 (1) - rotate - 19 degrees and put on x:88 y:244,just a suggestion

Thanks for modding :3

ken2010123 wrote:

irc mod

2015-06-12 21:05 ken2010123: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/219970 Last Note. - Route Sphere [Insane]]
2015-06-12 21:05 Mio_chan: ok :3 thx
2015-06-12 21:05 ken2010123: 建議HP6會好D
2015-06-12 21:06 Mio_chan: 因為個MAP太易?_?
2015-06-12 21:06 ken2010123: 唔係，主要係因為124BPM
2015-06-12 21:06 Mio_chan: ok done
2015-06-12 21:06 ken2010123: 同埋HR後9.8都好難下
2015-06-12 21:07 ken2010123: 00:07:728 (2,3,4,5) -
2015-06-12 21:07 ken2010123: 雙數連打其實好難玩架x.x
2015-06-12 21:07 Mio_chan: 因為果度係1/6 0.0
2015-06-12 21:09 ken2010123: 咁前面3個變成折返slider啦
2015-06-12 21:09 Mio_chan: try try sin
2015-06-12 21:10 ken2010123: 00:22:728 (3,4) -
2015-06-12 21:10 ken2010123: 呢度都有D難
2015-06-12 21:11 ken2010123: slider後連打要雙數，加上後面個slider又變成單數
2015-06-12 21:12 ken2010123: 00:23:696 (3,4) - 同上
2015-06-12 21:12 ken2010123: 同埋大間距好難玩=_=
2015-06-12 21:14 Mio_chan: 00:07:728 改左啦
2015-06-12 21:16 Mio_chan: 其餘兩個我覺得無咩問題 0.0 因為我想有個加速喺度，同埋我本身玩全換XD
2015-06-12 21:16 ken2010123: =A=但係大部分玩家都會被呢個坑左（包括我
2015-06-12 21:17 ken2010123: 00:22:365 (2) - 呢個直接變成3個圓圈
2015-06-12 21:17 ken2010123: 而且本身00:22:486 - 有鼓音
2015-06-12 21:18 Mio_chan: 咁樣突出唔到個keyboard 0.0
2015-06-12 21:19 ken2010123: 00:22:728 (3,4,3,4) - 一係呢兩個換成slider？
2015-06-12 21:20 ken2010123: 不過都係隨你喜歡啦，總之我覺得連打既數量比較重要，普通既單數，slider後雙數
2015-06-12 21:21 Mio_chan: slider做唔到我想要個效果xox
2015-06-12 21:22 ken2010123: 00:51:760 (2,3,4) - 呢個建議先兩個圓圈再折返slider
2015-06-12 21:24 Mio_chan: ok
2015-06-12 21:24 ken2010123: 01:25:147 - 漏鼓音
2015-06-12 21:25 ken2010123: 見你普通都係跟vocal多
2015-06-12 21:25 ken2010123: 普遍
2015-06-12 21:26 Mio_chan: ok
2015-06-12 21:26 Mio_chan: 係呀~
2015-06-12 21:26 ken2010123: 以前我高難度都跟vocal多，但係發現其實跟樂器更加好玩，變化亦會多D
2015-06-12 21:26 ken2010123: 低難度跟vocal就會好D
2015-06-12 21:27 ken2010123: 02:09:300 (4,5) - blanket？
2015-06-12 21:27 ken2010123: 02:10:146 (6,2) - 6放去2個尾到？
2015-06-12 21:28 Mio_chan: 我依家呢個MAP係咩都跟LOL
2015-06-12 21:29 Mio_chan: 02:09:905 (5) - 係完全放錯位
2015-06-12 21:29 Mio_chan: 我本身諗住對稱，可能唔小心郁錯左
2015-06-12 21:29 ken2010123: 0.0
2015-06-12 21:29 ken2010123: ok
2015-06-12 21:30 Mio_chan: lol 玩咁多次我都check唔到www
2015-06-12 21:30 ken2010123: 02:20:066 (1,2,1,2) -
2015-06-12 21:30 ken2010123: 02:19:582 (2,1) - 呢兩個spacing可能太近
2015-06-12 21:31 ken2010123: 之前成日被人指出spacing問題x.x
2015-06-12 21:31 Mio_chan: done
2015-06-12 21:32 ken2010123: 02:27:203 (5,6,7) - 盡量唔好slider後單數連打了，真係好難
2015-06-12 21:33 ken2010123: 02:30:469 (2,3,4,5) - 呢個換做折返slider會好D？
2015-06-12 21:34 Mio_chan: 我個得circle好D，因為呢度d鼓聲係咁打出黎
2015-06-12 21:34 Mio_chan: 覺得
2015-06-12 21:35 ken2010123: 不過玩起上嚟會有難度;w;
2015-06-12 21:35 ken2010123: 通常我都做善良圖
2015-06-12 21:36 ken2010123: 呢種梗比較難玩
2015-06-12 21:36 ken2010123: 02:52:728 (6) -
2015-06-12 21:36 ken2010123: 呢個slider尾係重音，唔建議放slider尾
2015-06-12 21:37 ken2010123: 放圓圈會好D
2015-06-12 21:37 ken2010123: 因為重音係玩家會禁落去果下
2015-06-12 21:37 ken2010123: slider尾唔需要重新禁一下
2015-06-12 21:38 Mio_chan: ya
2015-06-12 21:38 Mio_chan: 改左佢先，同埋我發現個Finish好似多左XDDD
2015-06-12 21:39 ken2010123: qwq
2015-06-12 21:39 ken2010123: 03:12:808 -
2015-06-12 21:39 ken2010123: 漏音
2015-06-12 21:40 ken2010123: 成個圖好少有多過5個既連打，估計你係故意既=_=
2015-06-12 21:40 ken2010123: 其實長連打（5-9個）係適合一般玩家玩
2015-06-12 21:41 ken2010123: 反而太多2連、3連，會搞到覺得難玩
2015-06-12 21:41 ken2010123: 大膽D放多幾個單數連打係好既√
2015-06-12 21:41 Mio_chan: 因為我覺得長連打唔係好岩呢首歌XD
2015-06-12 21:42 ken2010123: 咁就睇你系唔系想做善良圖了=_=
2015-06-12 21:42 ken2010123: 隨你喜歡啦
2015-06-12 21:42 ken2010123: 03:18:857 (3,5) - blanket
2015-06-12 21:44 Mio_chan: ok
2015-06-12 21:45 ken2010123: 01:33:857 - 漏音
2015-06-12 21:47 Mio_chan: 成首歌全部位果度都無音 0.0
2015-06-12 21:48 ken2010123: 01:33:857 - 你用50%細心聽下,有個好微既鼓音
2015-06-12 21:48 ken2010123: 50%playback rate
2015-06-12 21:48 Mio_chan: 有個tom sound
2015-06-12 21:49 Mio_chan: bass drum- -
2015-06-12 21:49 Mio_chan: 呢個我諗多陣先，你繼續住先啦xd
2015-06-12 21:55 ken2010123: 01:31:316 (5,1) -
2015-06-12 21:56 ken2010123: 排版上1擺去5既前面
2015-06-12 21:57 ken2010123: normal果度，drain時間太長了
2015-06-12 21:57 ken2010123: 最低難度要求係每1:30就係break time一次
2015-06-12 21:57 ken2010123: *就要
2015-06-12 21:57 Mio_chan: 我delete左(5)整其他野
2015-06-12 21:58 ken2010123: normal既01:46:679 - 至01:58:776 - 可以整break time
2015-06-12 21:58 ken2010123: 咁就冇問題了
2015-06-12 21:58 Mio_chan: 真架 0.0?
2015-06-12 21:59 ken2010123: rank準則係咁寫既
2015-06-12 21:59 Mio_chan: 好啦咁/.\...
2015-06-12 21:59 ken2010123: 前面1:46就冇問題，因為根據歌既節奏唔同，都可以接受
2015-06-12 22:01 ken2010123: 個人認為hard個排版好睇幾多下
2015-06-12 22:01 ken2010123: =。=
2015-06-12 22:03 Mio_chan: @@
2015-06-12 22:04 ken2010123: 睇到你系音效方面都落左唔少功夫
2015-06-12 22:04 ken2010123: 不過我覺得排版可以更好既
2015-06-12 22:04 Mio_chan: 當然xD
2015-06-12 22:04 Mio_chan: 沒有最好www
2015-06-12 22:04 ken2010123: www
2015-06-12 22:05 ken2010123: 03:53:937 (3,4) -
2015-06-12 22:05 ken2010123: hard
2015-06-12 22:05 ken2010123: 呢度未blanket好
2015-06-12 22:05 Mio_chan: done
2015-06-12 22:06 ken2010123: 01:08:453 (1,3) - 點解呢兩個好似咁奇怪既
2015-06-12 22:06 ken2010123: slider D描點飛左出嚟
2015-06-12 22:07 Mio_chan: 唔明xox
2015-06-12 22:07 ken2010123: 01:33:978 (2,3) - blanket
2015-06-12 22:07 ken2010123: 唔明就算啦，冇影響
2015-06-12 22:07 ken2010123: XD
2015-06-12 22:08 Mio_chan: 下www
2015-06-12 22:08 ken2010123: 01:48:615 (3,1) - blanket
2015-06-12 22:08 Mio_chan: 果個其實無諗住blanket 0.0 blanket麻麻地 133978
2015-06-12 22:08 Mio_chan: 148615 ok
2015-06-12 22:08 ken2010123: ok
2015-06-12 22:09 ken2010123: 02:28:776 (3) -
2015-06-12 22:09 ken2010123: 02:27:808 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/im58I/82826ebe3c.png
2015-06-12 22:10 ken2010123: 類似咁既feel
2015-06-12 22:11 Mio_chan: ok
2015-06-12 22:12 ken2010123: 02:29:744 (1,2,3,4) - spacing可以大小小
2015-06-12 22:13 Mio_chan: anti-jump得幾好呀睇落 0.0 (我覺得www)
2015-06-12 22:14 ken2010123: 咦
2015-06-12 22:14 ken2010123: 你睇緊你insane定hardx.x
2015-06-12 22:14 ken2010123: 岩岩我講果幾個都係hard嚟
2015-06-12 22:14 Mio_chan: ?_?
2015-06-12 22:14 Mio_chan: 我知呀
2015-06-12 22:15 ken2010123: 哦，咁就ok
2015-06-12 22:15 Mio_chan: XD
2015-06-12 22:20 ken2010123: normal都做得好好
2015-06-12 22:20 Mio_chan: (Y)
2015-06-12 22:20 ken2010123: 加翻breaktime就ok
2015-06-12 22:23 ken2010123: insane都係盡量少D難玩既連打梗啦（依家嚟講DT都幾難玩下
2015-06-12 22:23 Mio_chan: oh 0.0
2015-06-12 22:23 Mio_chan: 我呢個遲D先汁，要D時間諗下點處理 0.0
2015-06-12 22:23 ken2010123: 嗯
2015-06-12 22:23 Mio_chan: 同埋睇下邊D要改邊D唔洗
2015-06-12 22:23 Mio_chan: XD
2015-06-12 22:24 Mio_chan: (全換既人係唔會明呢D野幾痛苦LOL)
2015-06-12 22:24 ken2010123: 我mod唔到其他大問題了，祝順利起飛~
2015-06-12 22:24 Mio_chan: thanks =D

祝順利起飛~加油

Muya wrote:

yo

［Insane］
00:03:857 (4) - better rhythm is this http://puu.sh/ioJyK/2ee5a3157e.jpg just a warning The notes are snapped in 1/6 actually
00:07:728 (2) - same ^, remove this and add circle to 00:07:728? if follow drum, I think good rhythm ^
00:07:970 (3) - add clap here? I think you are forget add clap yes
00:17:526 (6,7) - http://puu.sh/ioKlZ/4c935bbedb.jpg better rhythm, if change, you can add clap to 00:17:647 yes
00:22:365 (2,3) - ^ same, you can add clap to 00:22:486 no because I follow the keyboard pretty much
00:22:970 (1,2) - ^ same, if possible, please follow drum rhythm http://puu.sh/ioKHQ/deb260aa2c.jpg no because I follow the keyboard pretty much
00:31:921 (1,2) - I feel this stack doesn't fit in this part fixed
00:33:857 (1,2) - ^ same fixed
00:57:082 (2) - 1 grid left, maybe better than now http://puu.sh/ioLeU/c6c1a91d90.jpg fixed
01:18:373 - I think need note to here no because I want to emphasize vocal
01:33:373 (8) - you can fix this overlap, try this pattern http://puu.sh/ioMj2/2a95cecdfe.jpg fixed
01:33:857 - same as 01:18:373 - same
02:37:728 - same as 01:18:373 - same
03:57:082 - same as 01:18:373 - same
04:25:994 (1) - in this case, fade down volume isnt fit, overall 70% is fine but doesn't include 04:30:711's 10% fixed

［Hard］
00:03:857 (2) - same as Insane same
00:07:728 (6) - same as Insane same
00:22:970 (1,2,3) - 00:22:002 (1,2,3) - are fine, but this part should follow drums noted on this, I don't want to change it due to the keyboard sound... but I may change my mind
01:03:857 (4,5,1) - maybe hard a bit in Hard. I don't know what to do with this 0.0
01:33:978 (2,3) - too big this jump slider leniency will cause this to be a jump with same DS with (1),(2)
01:42:687 (4,5) - same ^ same
02:30:470 (4) - why 02:30:711- this sound follow at slidertick? I think slider's end is better oh yeah fixed
02:53:332 (2,3) - too big this jump same
04:24:905 (1,2,3) - same as 00:22:970 - same
04:25:631 (3,4) - I think this too big jump are wrong, 04:24:905 (1,2,3) - here is 3/4 rhythm part, but when (3) to (4), 1/2 rhythm and big jump maybe player is confuse. fixed
04:25:994 (1) - same as Insane fixed

［Normal］
do not use 3/4 snap slider if possible ow... It's quite hard to fixed at this stage and I think it's ok, will take this in mind in future mapping
04:14:986 (2,3,4) - make a perfectry triangle here? or fix a (2,4)'s overlap please. fixed
04:25:994 (1) - same as Insane fixed

good luck~

[-Deemo-] wrote:

m4m~

[Insane]
01:05:308 (3,4) - Maybe keep it consistent with the previous pattern (the one at 01:02:405 (3,1) - fix previous pattern instead
03:14:260 (1,2) - Doesn't really end up flowing into each other make both sliders curve a bit
03:57:203 (2,3) - ^ rearrange the shape a bit
Wow this difficulty was incredibly awkward trying to play this why you say so 0.0?

[Hard]
00:06:518 (1,2,3) - 00:08:211 (7,8,1) - Be careful with this, hard players might mistake the stacked (1,2,3) as a triplet or tap (7,8,1) the same way they did for (1,2,3) approaching circle should be enough
00:22:970 (1,2,3) - Since Hard usually revolves around the idea of "Following mostly "what you can hear", you can't ignore the strong beats at 00:23:211 and 00:23:453. There isn't anything at 2 beat-wise it is weird to me if I following the keyboard for half and then drum for half
01:08:453 (1,2) - It really feels like the 2 should be blanketed by 1 blanketing does not suit the pattern, though moving the position of (2) a bit
01:48:615 (3,1) - blanket slider end in 1? yeah
02:20:066 (1,2,1,2) - spacing inconsistent, players might think they will have to press the second 2 later since the previous 1,2 sequence wasn't spaced far at all use 1.5x instead
02:22:486 (2) - I would stack this on top of 02:20:792 (2) - and move 3 slightly close since it's far when you move the 2 I think the flow now is better

It can be a triangle

03:16:679 (1,2) - the straight slider into a curved slider like that looks real ugly imo change the shape a bit
03:22:002 (1,2,3) - You can stack the on the end of slider 1 Not following your instruction but I do make some changes
03:25:873 (1,2) - Blanket~ no since I don't want symmetry here
04:23:937 (1) - Move over slighter to be in the center of slider 3 the spacing don't allow me to do so

Image

04:24:905 (1) - if you fixed ^, stack this on top of the 1, slight move the positions of 2,3,4 to make it more triangular again, also, look at what I said for 00:22:970 (1,2,3) -

When I say slider #, just ignore the fact that I said slider since it really sounds confusing

That's all I got .3.

Edit~ Whoops, forgot to mention that your kiai time aren't consistent, and you have no GDs so fix it .w.

Foreverends wrote:

M4M requestttttttttttttttttttt~

Insane
00:10:389 (1) - 我個人就覺得呢度用折回會有啲怪._. 建議00:10:873 - 可以用circle代替~ 我跟keyboard所以兩個都有repeat
00:11:679 - 真係要放棄1/6 ;w;? 感覺個音存在感好大_(:3 點解我咩都聽唔到xox，唔理呢個住www
00:13:050 (4) - 可以放上啲到大約x:176 y:116 感覺個型會好睇啲 \:D/ 郁左去第二個位 \:D/
01:01:679 (1,2) -

我覺得個rhythm咁樣或者會好啲

呢個我諗左好耐，決定mark低佢，因為我又想跟vocal但係又真係無左下drum聲~_~
01:10:389 (1) - slider中間同尾要唔要試下加whistle added
01:16:437 (2,3,4) -

ypu want some三角形 owo?

好正，但係呢個MAP唔係咁岩放random spacing www
01:21:397 (7) - 頭加clap? 唔岩位，加左好怪聽落
01:21:760 (8) - clappppppppppp ^
03:12:324 (3,4) - 有少少怪:o NC一下? yeah~
03:17:042 (3) - 中間粒點拉上一格 ow< 結果我用no grid 整左XD

Hard
00:00:712 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 呢一類型hi邊會唔會唔太好._. 可以試下用至少ds1.8分開佢地少少 good
01:02:647 (1) - 未blanket好 fixed
01:11:841 (5,1) - nc互換\:D/ 唔想www 想白線NC
01:30:711 (3) - 感覺有啲遠,可以ctrl g一下 /w\ 之後用1.1放返好01:31:437 (4,5,1) - stack左算數 www感覺仲好
01:51:034 (1) - 拉落兩格 done
01:56:357 (4) - ctrl < 之後放返好好似比較順 依家個FLOW都OK
02:20:066 (1,2,1,2,3) - 這不是Insane的梗嗎lol 根本就係www
02:37:849 (2) - ctrl g? no, 呢個圖特登整成咁
04:00:711 (1,2) - nc互換\:D/ 呢個圖比較老土所以想用D老土既comboing www

Normal
感覺沒什麼問題 _(:3

先這樣了
繼續加油owo/
good luck~~~~