Dazardz wrote:

I'm glad I came across this beatmap. Nice song and nice map, but I have found maybe a few weird parts.

Easy Difficulty
I think this difficulty is fine except from one part.

Every hit circle and slider from 01:12:810 (4) to 01:15:744 (3) is out of time. I think you already know how to fix it though.

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Normal Difficulty
01:50:881 (4) - 01:51:044 (5) = You might have made a mistake here. I think the slider here should be spaced closer to the hit circle and overlap it because the gap in time between that circle and slider is too small for the spacing you've used here.

01:43:055 (1) - 01:43:544 (2) = You have the same problem here too. Maybe you should try spacing the 2nd combo slider closer to the 1st combo slider.

00:50:392 (1) = This slider is spaced too close to this slider 00:49:088 (4)
Because the 00:50:392 (1) slider starts way after 00:49:088 (4) in timing, they both seem spaced too close to each other. You might want to try moving this slider lower on the grid so that it's further away from the slider before it.

01:17:130 (1) = Try moving this hit circle and the slider after it further away. They're quite close to 01:16:642 (2) compared to the timing you have to hit the circle.

01:20:555 (1) = Now this hit circle and the slider after it are also a bit too close to 01:19:251 (6) in my opinion. Difference in time is massive, but the spacing is small. It can be confusing.

01:03:924 (7) = This hit circle is spaced too far away from 01:03:436 (6) because of similar reasons about the above. The time difference is too small for the spacing to be that big on normal difficulty. Try moving the hit circle and slider upwards a little.

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Hard Difficulty

01:46:152 (3) = I think this hit circle is spaced too close to 01:45:500 (2) You may want to move the hit circle further away because the time you press the hit circle is far away but the spacing makes the timing look small. It's hard to read.

00:07:185 (6) This hit circle and 00:42:565 (1) this hit circle are both close to the sliders but not on top of it which is fine, but it makes 02:28:543 (7) this hit circle and slider confusing to read. The timing for the hit circle to slider on the first 2 hit circles I mentioned are the same, but the 3rd hit circle to slider I mentioned looks similar to the other ones you've used in the map but the timing for the hit circle to slider is different. It's confusing because people playing this map should be used to the timing you've used for the first 2 hit circle to sliders. For this 3rd one at the end, you might want to just place the hit circle on top of the slider, or add another hit circle and shorten the slider by one reverse point. Or you could leave the 3rd one as it is, and put the hit circles on top of the sliders in the 1st and 2nd one I mentioned.

Hope that wasn't confusing. Anyway, that's all for hard difficulty.

I won't do the insane map because you said it's a work in progress. Also, if you want another difficulty, I'd be happy to do anything from Normal to Extra.

Atsuro wrote:

Hi

Just passing by to give you the correct title, you have to add "(アニメOP Version)" to the title and "(Anime OP Version)" to the Romanised title
Font of the title: http://www.amazon.co.jp/dp/B00VIE9VJS/r ... knock+days
You can copy it from my mapset: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/310224
No kudosu

Good luck!

Dazardz wrote:

I've played every difficulty again and again and I can't find much wrong that I would be able to help you out with. The hitsounds are fine too, but this is all I found. There probably is still a lot of things that need modding though, so maybe an experienced modder can also help you out.

Normal Difficulty

00:51:043 (2) - Not sure if I agree with this slider being in there like that. It feels forced in there and it disrupts the rhythm of the map. Maybe you could try just adding a hit circle before this (00:51:369 (1)) slider and see how it sounds.

Hard Difficulty

01:15:500 (5) - I feel like this slider shouldn't be as small as you left it. You've snapped it to 1/8 but it'd be just fine or even better if it was snapped to 1/4. If you leave the slider how it is, it wouldn't match the sound or beat of anything going on in the background. The sound you were trying to map actually goes at the speed of a 1/4 slider.

That's about all I've got for now but I can check again of course. I'm new to modding myself, I'm sure I've missed out things. I'm also going to finish my difficulty as soon as possible now.