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Rhodanthe* - Yumeiro Parade

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Little
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Topic Starter
Little
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on April 26, 2015 at 12:59:07 PM

Artist: Rhodanthe*
Title: Yumeiro Parade
Source: ハロー！！きんいろモザイク
Tags: Hello!! kin-iro mosaic anime opening tv size Nishi Asuka 西 明日香 Tanaka Manami 田中 真奈美 Taneda Risa 種田 梨沙 Touyama Nao 東山 奈央 Uchiyama Yumi 内山 夕実 yf_bmp
BPM: 180
Filesize: 18442kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (3.1 stars, 252 notes)
  2. Jumping!! (4.44 stars, 316 notes)
  3. Normal (2.03 stars, 171 notes)
  4. yf's Easy (1.5 stars, 117 notes)
Download: Rhodanthe* - Yumeiro Parade
Download: Rhodanthe* - Yumeiro Parade (no video)
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---------------
Opening from Hello! Kin-iro Mosaic.

Easy - yf_bmp

Here's >Season 1 opening< (and my first map).
Last edited by Little , edited 23 times in total.
Kin
2,622 posts
Joined August 2010
Kin
I-iro mosaic
yf_bmp
Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper
1,631 posts
Joined December 2011
yf_bmp
new mp3 by examination: http://puu.sh/h2veK/669ab620bb.mp3

check this in case:

Title:Yumeiro Parade
TitleUnicode:夢色パレード
Artist:Rhodanthe*
ArtistUnicode:Rhodanthe*
Source:ハロー！！きんいろモザイク
Tags:フライングドッグ

Working on my Easy diff
Lanturn
osu! Alumni
3,912 posts
Joined March 2012
Lanturn
ME PLEASE

cute song.

*finds ending to this show*

My.... My.... Best Friends?


I think I found my calling.
yf_bmp
Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper
1,631 posts
Joined December 2011
yf_bmp
Done http://puu.sh/haHrs/e83a11f65c.zip
Doormat
2,050 posts
Joined September 2013
Doormat
Hello there kouhai, visiting you from my modding queue victim list

awawawawa we're mapping the same song and your maps are so much better than mine ;w;

Let's get started, shall we..?

yf's Easy
- The note at 00:36:763(2) could start a little earlier, possibly at 00:36:596.
  • :idea: Maybe you can try something like this?
    SPOILER
    Before

    After
Normal
- The slider at 01:26:763(3) can be made a little more curvy to better blanket 01:26:263(1)

Hard
- Consider reversing (Ctrl + G) the slider at 00:03:263(7)
- Consider making the note at 00:37:929(7) a 1/2 slider
- Maybe move the note at 00:43:263(7) so that it stacks on top of the note at 00:43:429(8)?
- Why not make the notes at 00:47:929(6, 7, 8) a triangular jump?
  • :idea: Maybe you can try something like this?
    SPOILER
Seriously though, the maps are really good way better than mine lol

Hope this helps ;)
obligatory Karen gif
Little
2,509 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Little
Doormat

Doormat wrote:

Hello there kouhai, visiting you from my modding queue victim list

awawawawa we're mapping the same song and your maps are so much better than mine ;w; It comes with experience :3

Let's get started, shall we..?

Normal
- The slider at 01:26:763(3) can be made a little more curvy to better blanket 01:26:263(1) ok, fixed the blanket.

Hard
- Consider reversing (Ctrl + G) the slider at 00:03:263(7) Nah, I like it better the way it is.
- Consider making the note at 00:37:929(7) a 1/2 slider Thought about that, also thought about adding a circle 1/2 later, but I prefer to give a little 1/1 break for the player since there's such a long string of 1/2 beat spacings.
- Maybe move the note at 00:43:263(7) so that it stacks on top of the note at 00:43:429(8)? Alright, I guess that's better.
- Why not make the notes at 00:47:929(6, 7, 8) a triangular jump? Stacking the first two gives stronger emphasis to the third, which is what I want here.
  • :idea: Maybe you can try something like this?
    SPOILER
Seriously though, the maps are really good way better than mine lol

Hope this helps ;)
Sorry for the late reply... was just finishing up with exams. :3
Thanks for modding!
Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Narcissu
M4M ： https://osu.ppy.sh/s/296952

AudioLeadIn: 0 → 2000

move preview to 00:48:763 - ?

try add custom colors ↓↓↓ ?

colors
[Colours]
Combo1: 255,128,255
Combo2: 128,255,255
Combo3: 255,255,128
Combo4: 128,128,255

[Insane]

01:10:263 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - it's too difficult in my opinion …… music fade out yet

01:26:763 (3) - NC to point SV*0.75 ?

[Hard]

01:26:763 (3) - NC ?

sorry i can't find more orz

good luck ><
Shurelia
Global Moderator
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Joined December 2013
Shurelia
M4M~



~ From Lovely Modding Quest! ~


[General]
- Is this an Anime Opening? If it is , then add "Opening" to the tags.
- Add "Meis Clauson" to the tags because it's the composer name. (Optional)
- I don't know why, but the timing is a bit off for me at the first part. You may want to give it a recheck.

[Easy]
  1. 00:02:096 (1,1) - I don't know why you made these have a different distance than the others. I would prefer easy diff have a constant diff.]
  2. 00:55:596 (3) - have a different distance with the next object. Should be fixed.
  3. 00:59:596 (1) - ^^^ with the previous object
  4. 01:06:263 (3) - same as previous.

[Normal]
  1. 00:49:263 (2,3) - I feel like stacking these two is not right. Because 00:53:263 (5,6) - looks same but different rhythm. I would recommend (2) to be unstacked and moved to 131 ,255

[Hard]
  1. No Comment on this.

[Jumping!!]
  1. 00:40:096 (1) - I feels like using 1/4 slider at here didn't fit well with the song. How about to change this into a circle?

That's all for me, Hope this help. And good luck!
Little
2,509 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Little
Narcissu

Narcissu wrote:

M4M ： https://osu.ppy.sh/s/296952

AudioLeadIn: 0 → 2000 2000 seems a bit long. Added 1500.

move preview to 00:48:763 - ? No.

try add custom colors ↓↓↓ ? ok, added.

[Insane]

01:10:263 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - it's too difficult in my opinion …… music fade out yet I think it's not too hard.

01:26:763 (3) - NC to point SV*0.75 ? Not needed.

[Hard]

01:26:763 (3) - NC ? -

sorry i can't find more orz

good luck ><
Shurelia

Shurelia wrote:

M4M~



~ From Lovely Modding Quest! ~


[General]
- Is this an Anime Opening? If it is , then add "Opening" to the tags. ok, added.
- Add "Meis Clauson" to the tags because it's the composer name. (Optional)
- I don't know why, but the timing is a bit off for me at the first part. You may want to give it a recheck. It seems right to me.

[Normal]
  1. 00:49:263 (2,3) - I feel like stacking these two is not right. Because 00:53:263 (5,6) - looks same but different rhythm. I would recommend (2) to be unstacked and moved to 131 ,255 No, it's fine.

[Hard]
  1. No Comment on this.

[Jumping!!]
  1. 00:40:096 (1) - I feels like using 1/4 slider at here didn't fit well with the song. How about to change this into a circle? I think it helps get the right feeling for (2).

That's all for me, Hope this help. And good luck!
Thanks.
Peachtrees
815 posts
Joined May 2013
Peachtrees
M4M from your Q!

See if this is worth modding back for you

Easy

00:12:263 (2,3) - minor spacing issue, still quite noticeable

00:15:763 (3,4) - ^ again, very minor, though I feel like fixing this isn't too much of a hastle + I do think that these little things are noticeable

00:17:263 (2,4) - obligatory nazi stack

00:26:929 (3,1) - spacing

00:54:596 (2,3) - uneven sapacing between these two (1.2)

00:59:096 (4,1) - ^ I don't think uneven spacing like this is unrankable or anything (or is it?) but shouldn't the easiest Diff have constant spacing throughout?

I feel as though a lot of these spacing things are very minor, yet noticeable. I don't know if cleaning this up a little (as in making the spacing perfectly even) is neccessary, though I feel like I'd make the map look a tiny bit neater ><

Though I will say that this is a GREAT Diff uwu

Normal

00:31:763 (3) - veeery minor and might just be me, but giving this a little upward curve for a little upward swing into the next slider feels nice =w= http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3046486

00:42:096 (3,4,5) - wouldn't something like this work too? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3046467 that'd get rid of the overlap and the (sort of) uneven spacing

00:48:596 (4) - this sounds feels very strong >< I guess skipping this is perfectly fine, just my 2 cents

00:56:096 (5,1) - obligatory nazi blanket

00:57:596 (2) - again just my two cents, but the shape looks kind of sloppy :c

01:26:596 (2,3) - nazi stack

Hard

00:16:763 (9) - I think moving this upwards like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3046517 would feel more natural. though that would require some re-arranging...your call ><

00:33:596 (3,4,5,6) - aren't these a little close? don't get me wrong this looks pretty neat, I just don't see why those would be so close when there's nothing in the song to back this up

01:03:429 (5,6,7) - uneven spacing between these intentional? it kinda works fine as it currently is, just making sure you didn't miss this ><

Jumping!!

00:04:763 (1,2) - I feel like this would feel a tad bit nicer if you moved up 2 a liitte

00:50:596 (7,8,9) - why not make an even triangle between these three? also I feel like these could bigger (the jumps), though I'm honestly not 100% sure about that. just feels like the vocals are very 'jumpy' here

01:17:763 (4,1) - obligatory nazi blanket

01:26:763 (3,4) - might just be me, but I feel as though this would work a lot better with 4's tail blanketing perfect with 3. again, very minor but sorta noticeable since the blanket is visible for so long due to 3's lenght
Little
2,509 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Little
Peachtrees

Peachtrees wrote:

Normal

00:31:763 (3) - veeery minor and might just be me, but giving this a little upward curve for a little upward swing into the next slider feels nice =w= http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3046486 ok

00:42:096 (3,4,5) - wouldn't something like this work too? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3046467 that'd get rid of the overlap and the (sort of) uneven spacing I like it better the way it is now.

00:48:596 (4) - this sounds feels very strong >< I guess skipping this is perfectly fine, just my 2 cents -

00:56:096 (5,1) - obligatory nazi blanket Improved blanket.

00:57:596 (2) - again just my two cents, but the shape looks kind of sloppy :c Seems fine to me.

01:26:596 (2,3) - nazi stack k

Hard

00:16:763 (9) - I think moving this upwards like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3046517 would feel more natural. though that would require some re-arranging...your call >< Nope.

00:33:596 (3,4,5,6) - aren't these a little close? don't get me wrong this looks pretty neat, I just don't see why those would be so close when there's nothing in the song to back this up It seems fine to me.

01:03:429 (5,6,7) - uneven spacing between these intentional? it kinda works fine as it currently is, just making sure you didn't miss this >< I don't distance snap Hard. This was intended.

Jumping!!

00:04:763 (1,2) - I feel like this would feel a tad bit nicer if you moved up 2 a liitte Moved a bit.

00:50:596 (7,8,9) - why not make an even triangle between these three? also I feel like these could bigger (the jumps), though I'm honestly not 100% sure about that. just feels like the vocals are very 'jumpy' here It's better the way it is.

01:17:763 (4,1) - obligatory nazi blanket blame osu for messing up my blankets.

01:26:763 (3,4) - might just be me, but I feel as though this would work a lot better with 4's tail blanketing perfect with 3. again, very minor but sorta noticeable since the blanket is visible for so long due to 3's lenght -
Thanks.
Haruto
1,815 posts
Joined December 2013
Haruto
Hi from my Modding queue
sorry if im late D:

[General]
  1. Please make HP to 2 and OD to 2 in yf's Easy ;)
  2. ~=~=~=~ HP to 4 and OD to 3 in Normal ;)
[yf's Easy]
  1. 00:00:929 (1,1) - this 1/2 is too hard for newbies, and the ovelaps really looks ugly o.o
  2. 00:03:596 (1,1) - too hard for newbies
  3. 00:31:429 (3) - can you make the slider more smoother?
  4. 00:38:263 (1) - make the slider more smoother please? example
  5. 00:50:596 (4,1,2) - how about this kind of blanket? Example
  6. 00:55:596 (3) - NC please?
  7. 01:00:929 (3) - NC? because its a big white tick
  8. 01:01:263 (4,1,2) - how about this kind of blanket? Example
  9. 01:03:596 (3) - NC?
  10. 01:06:263 (3) - NC?
  11. 01:07:596 (5) - NC please
  12. 01:11:596 (2) - NC?
  13. 01:12:263 (3,1) - Overlapping this really looks ugly, try to blanket it please ;)
  14. 01:18:096 (1,2) - fix spacing here please
Nice and Clean Difficulty btw ;)

[Normal]
  1. 00:01:596 (2) - 1/2 slider fits better also add note here 00:01:929 -
  2. 00:11:263 - add a note please? there's a drum sound here
  3. 00:16:929 (1,2,3,4) - try this pattern? http://puu.sh/hoY4z/53c2231851.jpg
  4. 00:38:929 - add a note here, there's a drum sound
  5. 00:40:096 (4) - how about 2/1 slider? this will be fit better imo
  6. 00:41:596 - add a note here?
  7. 00:43:263 (5) - hmm, this drum sound kinda late i think
  8. 00:44:263 - add a note here? there's a bass/drum sound there
  9. 00:47:263 - ^
  10. 00:48:596 - add a note and use default clap here please?
  11. 00:49:596 (3) - how about 1/2 slider and then add a note here 00:49:929 -
  12. 01:00:263 (2) - ^ add a note here 01:00:596 -
  13. 01:03:096 - add a note please?
  14. 01:07:596 (1) - how about 1/2 slider? then add a 1/2 slider here 01:07:929 - would be good imo :)
  15. 01:20:763 (1) - the slider kinda ugly, can you improve/remove it?
  16. 01:21:929 - add a note here?
Sorry i cant mod full mapset ;w;
hope my mod is helpful
Good luck btw ;)
Sgord1
174 posts
Joined April 2014
Sgord1
Hi there! M4m from your modding queue! Your mapset looks clean, all of listed below are just suggestions. Feel free to ignore anything. Ask me if you don't understand, my english sucks D:

[yf's Easy]
00:00:929 (1,1) - how about fix this overlap?
00:00:929 (1,1,1,1) - How about avoid stacks? Looks fine, but may make the game a bit not intuitive since most of map on Easy diff has no stacks.
00:02:096 (1,1) - better to remove NCs from these
00:06:929 (2) - well, 00:07:263 here should a slider tail and here a clickable object 00:07:429 . I can explain: on this 00:07:429 there is a very strong beat, isn't it better to make it clickble for better gaming experience?
00:14:929 (2) - for better blanket it's better to make this slider without red points. (huh, even despite it's fine already)
00:16:929 (1) - there is no any beat, but a circle is. 00:16:429 (4) - replace it with repeating slider. In this case, of course NC 00:17:263 (2) - here
00:19:596 put a clickable oject here
00:33:263 (2,3) - overlap is fine, but better to fix it, isn't it?
00:43:596 (1) - try another flow direction
00:59:596 (1) - check spacing
01:07:596 (5) - NC?
01:12:263 (3,1) - how about fix this overlap?
01:14:929 (3) - Do not stack! Since this object should be visible according to AR it might confuse

[Normal]
Are you sure about changing SV? 0,75 is too much imho
00:02:763 (4) - ehh... No beat, but a note is here. Remove it
00:10:096 (4) - nazi: this slider is ugly :\
00:57:596 (2) - try to curve it another way for better flow
01:03:929 (5) - try to space it as usual without stacks
01:20:763 (1) - this slider would look better if you make the spread of red and white point more symmetrical
01:24:263 (2) - is it supposed to be straight?

[Hard]
00:03:263 (7) - a bit strange placement isn't it? (the flow I mean)
00:12:763 (5,7) - these objects are visible at the same time and have the same beginning, it might be very sudden. Maybe better to unstack?
00:16:929 (1) - replace it with non-repeating slider. Otherwise, I can't uderstand what it follows: the rhythm or vocals
00:18:096 (4,6) - it can be blanketed better
00:32:929 (1,2) - this stack is confusing since there was another stack 00:32:429 (7,8) - here with another time gap
00:47:929 (6,7,8) - place them in straight line or make a jump. It will make it more plesant to play
00:53:429 (5,6) - a bit strange change of spacing isn't it?
01:03:929 (6) - here should be the same spacing space(5-6)=space(6-7) I mean
01:06:096 (6,8) - how about fix this overlap?

[Jumping!!]
How about OD-1?
00:01:929 (5) - this note is overlapped. Why do you put it here when there is so much space availible?
00:21:763 (1) - remove NC (it repeats several times in your map, and I would reconsider NCs in whole map)
00:40:096 (1) - how about remove and replace it with a note?
The main problem modding Insane diffs is that everything is allowed here and the only things I can point on are general issues.
In this diff I would make it a bit easier. I can explain: listening to this song, I do not expect it to be so hard with different overlapping jumps. So that's why I siggest you to make the play on it smoother.


Well, anyways, WOW! WHAT A COOL MAPSET YOU MADE! I HOPE TO SEE IT RANKED SOON!
Good luck!
Frostings
913 posts
Joined May 2013
Frostings
Oh man, two mods while I was modding. Sorry if suggestions overlap

[General]
Looks like the BG is temporary, but here's one that has been sharpened with higher saturation if you're interested
BG
I made sure the filesize was similar to the one you already have. If you want a slightly better image but bigger filesize let me know

[yf's Easy]
  1. I would highly recommend AR +0.5 because there are some parts where the note density is very high and makes it hard to read. Also you use some stacks which can get confusing with low AR. +1 AR seems a little too fast though
  2. You have some useless green timing points that you should remove
    Timing Points
    38263,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
    46263,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
  3. 00:31:429 (3) - I suggest cleaning up this slider to make it neater. Maybe make it similar to this 01:26:763 (2) - ?
  4. 01:07:596 (5) - Make a New Combo here
    Nice mapping
[Normal]
  1. 00:00:929 - Just a note about this section, the piano is pretty obscure and hard to follow, I think it would be more intuitive to follow the vocals
    For example you can:
    1. 00:02:763 (4) - delete this note
    2. 00:03:096 (4) - Move this 1/2 back, making sure to fix the spacing on 00:03:596 (1) -
  2. 00:05:429 (5) - small suggestion, I think it plays better as 1/1 than 3/2. The 3/2 makes it feel like a 3/4 slider in a Hard
  3. 00:23:929 (3) - I think it'll be more fun to change this to a 1/2 slider starting 1/2 beats earlier. It'll also get rid of some polarity issues
  4. 00:49:263 (2) - Might be better to have big crash sounds here, for example a Normal sample with Normal whistle and finish, switching the finish from the note previous
  5. 00:51:596 (1,2) - same with here, and the similar parts in the rest of the kiai. It'll emphasize it very well
  6. 01:15:429 (1) - also here as well and the similar parts that follow

[Hard]
  1. 00:00:930 - Just a note about this section, it is very fast and the note density is quite high for such a relatively calm section. I think as a design choice, it might be better to map the intro similar to this section 00:38:263 - , using less note density, slower SV and calmer distance snap
  2. Also the same hitsounds suggestion applies here as Normal

[Jumping!!]
  1. Maybe I would recommend the same thing here as Hard, but it's Insane so not quite as a big deal
  2. 00:15:096 (5,6,1) - Just a small design choice for the future: in my opinion, patterns like this affect the structure and the flow a little. The transition from 6 into 1 is slightly awkward in the way that it's almost a straight line, but the direction of the 1 slider differs slightly from that path. Another example would be something like this 00:37:263 (5,6) - . Just some food for thought
  3. 00:19:596 (1,2,3,4) - It feels strange that the first three sliders have exaggerated curves compared to the fourth. Also the transition from 3 to 4 is a bit awkward because the direction that 3 points conflicts with the position of 4. Personally I would make the first three sliders have smoother curves, and make 4 be more curved and sit higher (maybe above 2) to make the transition there better.
  4. 01:10:263 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - wow nice :)
  5. also the same hitsounds suggestions as Normal if you choose to take them.

Hope this helps !
yf_bmp
Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper
1,631 posts
Joined December 2011
yf_bmp
fixed a lot aaaah
SPOILER
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: yumeiro parade.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 48846
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Yumeiro Parade
TitleUnicode:夢色パレード
Artist:Rhodanthe*
ArtistUnicode:Rhodanthe*
Creator:CloudSplash16
Version:yf's Easy
Source:ハロー！！きんいろモザイク
Tags:Hello!! kin-iro mosaic anime opening tv size Nishi Asuka 西 明日香 Tanaka Manami 田中 真奈美 Taneda Risa 種田 梨沙 Touyama Nao 東山 奈央 Uchiyama Yumi 内山 夕実 yf_bmp
BeatmapID:679228
BeatmapSetID:295685

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:3.5
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"tempbg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
930,333.333333333333,4,2,1,50,1,0
48929,-100,4,2,1,50,0,1
70263,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,128,255
Combo2 : 128,255,255
Combo3 : 255,255,128
Combo4 : 128,128,255

[HitObjects]
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296,208,3596,6,0,P|358:221|448:92,1,240,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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228,120,6929,2,0,B|236:168|236:168|214:236,1,120,2|2,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
156,292,7763,1,2,0:1:0:0:
232,316,8096,2,0,P|276:312|316:320,1,80,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,348,8763,6,2,P|425:302|425:243,1,120,4|2,0:0|1:1,0:1:0:0:
356,204,9596,2,0,P|318:158|318:99,1,120,2|2,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
368,36,10429,2,0,L|456:28,2,80,2|2|2,0:1|0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
318,99,11429,6,2,B|276:100|248:108|248:108|208:79,1,120,4|2,0:0|1:1,0:1:0:0:
132,100,12263,2,0,B|94:103|62:91|62:91|22:119,1,120,2|2,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
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20,348,13763,1,2,0:1:0:0:
100,344,14096,6,2,B|128:328|136:296|136:296|134:237,1,120,4|2,0:0|1:1,0:1:0:0:
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416,224,16929,5,4,0:0:0:0:
344,188,17263,2,0,P|319:112|324:32,1,160,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
404,48,18263,2,0,P|443:51|482:42,2,80,0|0|0,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
323,32,19263,2,0,P|284:23|244:26,1,80,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,100,19929,6,0,B|195:136|195:136|159:164|115:156|94:115,1,160,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
20,83,20929,2,0,P|43:52|79:36,2,80,0|0|0,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,164,21929,2,0,L|31:243,1,80,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,300,22596,6,0,B|128:284|168:304|168:304|200:276|240:280,1,160,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
308,320,23596,2,0,P|348:332|392:328,2,80,0|0|0,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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288,24,26096,2,0,B|320:40|320:40|344:40|368:44|368:44|404:32,1,120,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
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492,240,27596,5,4,0:2:0:0:
412,244,27929,2,0,B|368:256|368:256|336:240|295:247,1,120,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,304,28763,2,0,P|213:230|262:171,1,160,2|2,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,164,29763,2,0,L|392:168,1,40,0|4,3:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
452,124,30263,5,6,3:2:0:0:
408,56,30596,2,0,B|348:40|348:40|291:51,1,120,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,84,31429,2,0,B|197:51|156:36|119:57|119:57|103:77|113:104,1,160,2|2,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,176,32429,2,0,L|140:228,1,40,0|4,3:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
88,276,32929,5,6,3:2:0:0:
168,292,33263,2,0,B|208:288|208:288|244:296|244:296|288:292,1,120,0|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
351,339,34096,2,0,P|325:266|358:195,1,160,2|0,0:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
432,160,35096,2,0,L|480:156,1,40,0|0,3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
448,80,35596,6,0,B|416:48|416:48|348:32|348:32|305:47,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,28,36763,2,0,B|156:60|156:60|88:76|88:76|45:60,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,132,37763,2,0,L|16:204,1,40,8|4,1:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
4,252,38263,6,0,B|40:304|112:304|112:304|192:272|259:319,1,280,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,348,39929,2,0,L|460:344,1,80,0|0,3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
508,280,40596,1,0,0:0:0:0:
492,200,40929,6,0,B|450:139|370:143|370:143|298:183|304:260,1,280,2|2,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,316,42429,2,0,L|168:308,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,344,43096,2,0,L|48:352,1,40,0|12,3:0|1:3,0:0:0:0:
4,287,43596,6,0,P|55:161|5:33,1,280,2|2,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,64,45263,2,0,L|208:52,1,80,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,116,45929,1,0,1:2:0:0:
308,52,46263,6,0,L|388:64,1,80,4|0,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
416,140,46929,1,0,1:0:0:0:
440,220,47263,2,0,L|428:284,1,40,0|4,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,312,47763,2,0,B|324:292|300:320|253:298,1,120,4|4,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,356,48929,5,4,0:1:0:0:
172,312,49263,2,0,P|188:235|149:167,1,160,14|10,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
72,144,50263,1,2,0:0:0:0:
132,88,50596,2,0,B|184:80|220:124|220:124|240:100|272:96,1,160,10|10,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
348,124,51596,5,2,0:0:0:0:
284,176,51929,2,0,P|266:252|295:326,1,160,14|10,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
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295,326,53929,1,10,1:2:0:0:
360,276,54263,5,4,0:0:0:0:
424,228,54596,2,0,B|416:176|416:176|432:128|432:128|424:72,1,160,10|10,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
348,120,55596,2,0,L|335:31,1,80,2|10,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
256,52,56263,2,0,L|269:141,1,80,0|10,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
220,196,56929,6,0,L|208:275,2,80,4|10|2,0:0|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
148,160,57929,2,0,L|108:153,1,40,10|4,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,72,58429,2,0,L|196:87,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
260,52,59096,2,0,L|268:104,1,40,0|10,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
344,56,59596,5,4,0:1:0:0:
412,100,59929,2,0,P|396:177|435:245,1,160,14|10,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
512,272,60929,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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232,284,62263,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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289,90,64596,1,10,1:2:0:0:
224,140,64929,5,4,0:0:0:0:
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396,268,67596,6,0,L|407:347,2,80,10|10|10,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
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448,95,69096,2,0,P|463:59|458:20,1,80,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,48,69763,2,0,L|336:44,1,40,4|8,0:0|1:3,0:0:0:0:
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216,348,74929,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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356,180,78929,2,0,P|318:226|318:285,1,120,2|2,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
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132,284,81596,2,0,B|94:281|62:293|62:293|22:265,1,120,2|2,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
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20,36,83096,1,2,0:1:0:0:
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416,160,86263,5,4,0:0:0:0:
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Little
2,509 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Little
Haruto_Aizawa

Haruto_Aizawa wrote:

[General]
  1. ~=~=~=~ HP to 4 and OD to 3 in Normal ;) Too easy imo.
[Normal]
  1. 00:01:596 (2) - 1/2 slider fits better also add note here 00:01:929 - I want to keep this opening part rhythmically simple, since the music is more calm here.
  2. 00:11:263 - add a note please? there's a drum sound here Current rhythm is better for emphasis of the offbeat notes in the trumpet.
  3. 00:16:929 (1,2,3,4) - try this pattern? http://puu.sh/hoY4z/53c2231851.jpg Too rhythmically complex.
  4. 00:38:929 - add a note here, there's a drum sound No, following vocal.
  5. 00:40:096 (4) - how about 2/1 slider? this will be fit better imo I don't think so.
  6. 00:41:596 - add a note here? -
  7. 00:43:263 (5) - hmm, this drum sound kinda late i think It is not.
  8. 00:44:263 - add a note here? there's a bass/drum sound there No, following vocal.
  9. 00:47:263 - ^ Added.
  10. 00:48:596 - add a note and use default clap here please? No, I prefer to leave this empty, to let the downbeat at the start of the kiai be stronger.
  11. 00:49:596 (3) - how about 1/2 slider and then add a note here 00:49:929 - No.
  12. 01:00:263 (2) - ^ add a note here 01:00:596 - No.
  13. 01:03:096 - add a note please? No.
  14. 01:07:596 (1) - how about 1/2 slider? then add a 1/2 slider here 01:07:929 - would be good imo :) I don't think so.
  15. 01:20:763 (1) - the slider kinda ugly, can you improve/remove it? I like it.
  16. 01:21:929 - add a note here? No.
Sgord1

Sgord1 wrote:

[Normal]
Are you sure about changing SV? 0,75 is too much imho I'm sure.
00:02:763 (4) - ehh... No beat, but a note is here. Remove it There's piano note.
00:10:096 (4) - nazi: this slider is ugly :\ Uhh.. sorry, I'm not good with slider shapes.. Changed to something else.
00:57:596 (2) - try to curve it another way for better flow I think it flows fine.
01:03:929 (5) - try to space it as usual without stacks I think stack fits better here.
01:20:763 (1) - this slider would look better if you make the spread of red and white point more symmetrical No, the shape is totally intended to be this way.
01:24:263 (2) - is it supposed to be straight? No.

[Hard]
00:03:263 (7) - a bit strange placement isn't it? (the flow I mean) It is, but I like it.
00:12:763 (5,7) - these objects are visible at the same time and have the same beginning, it might be very sudden. Maybe better to unstack? I think it's fine.
00:16:929 (1) - replace it with non-repeating slider. Otherwise, I can't uderstand what it follows: the rhythm or vocals I don't think there's any problem with it..
00:18:096 (4,6) - it can be blanketed better Well, it's not really a blanket. I placed it so (6) passes through the midpoint of (4).
00:32:929 (1,2) - this stack is confusing since there was another stack 00:32:429 (7,8) - here with another time gap It's fine.
00:47:929 (6,7,8) - place them in straight line or make a jump. It will make it more plesant to play It is a jump. (6,7) are stacked to make (8) feel stronger when jumped to.
00:53:429 (5,6) - a bit strange change of spacing isn't it? I don't know... is it?
01:03:929 (6) - here should be the same spacing space(5-6)=space(6-7) I mean Why?
01:06:096 (6,8) - how about fix this overlap? How to fix it? What is wrong with it?

[Jumping!!]
How about OD-1? Current OD fits well imo. I'll probably raise the settings of other diffs though.
00:01:929 (5) - this note is overlapped. Why do you put it here when there is so much space availible? Overlap is intentional.
00:21:763 (1) - remove NC (it repeats several times in your map, and I would reconsider NCs in whole map) It helps with readability since they are 1/1 offbeat stacks.
00:40:096 (1) - how about remove and replace it with a note? I like it the way it is for emphasizing start of (2), but I'll consider changing this if it becomes a problem for ranking.
The main problem modding Insane diffs is that everything is allowed here and the only things I can point on are general issues.
In this diff I would make it a bit easier. I can explain: listening to this song, I do not expect it to be so hard with different overlapping jumps. So that's why I siggest you to make the play on it smoother.
Frostings

Frostings wrote:

[General]
Looks like the BG is temporary, but here's one that has been sharpened with higher saturation if you're interested Cool, thanks. :)
I made sure the filesize was similar to the one you already have. If you want a slightly better image but bigger filesize let me know

[Normal]
  1. 00:00:929 - Just a note about this section, the piano is pretty obscure and hard to follow, I think it would be more intuitive to follow the vocals Nice. Fixed.
    For example you can:
    1. 00:02:763 (4) - delete this note
    2. 00:03:096 (4) - Move this 1/2 back, making sure to fix the spacing on 00:03:596 (1) -
  2. 00:05:429 (5) - small suggestion, I think it plays better as 1/1 than 3/2. The 3/2 makes it feel like a 3/4 slider in a Hard I prefer to leave it as 3/2, because I brought out the 1/2 rhythm between 00:05:096 (4,5) to which 00:05:429 (5,1) is just another iteration of the rhythm pattern in the music.
  3. 00:23:929 (3) - I think it'll be more fun to change this to a 1/2 slider starting 1/2 beats earlier. It'll also get rid of some polarity issues ok, fixed.
  4. 00:49:263 (2) - Might be better to have big crash sounds here, for example a Normal sample with Normal whistle and finish, switching the finish from the note previous I see what you mean, but I personally don't think it needs to be that big. At least I don't hink it warrants a finish. Changed it to add normal-hitnormal and normal-hitwhistle.
  5. 00:51:596 (1,2) - same with here, and the similar parts in the rest of the kiai. It'll emphasize it very well ~
  6. 01:15:429 (1) - also here as well and the similar parts that follow I prefer for this part to be softer.

[Hard]
  1. 00:00:930 - Just a note about this section, it is very fast and the note density is quite high for such a relatively calm section. I think as a design choice, it might be better to map the intro similar to this section 00:38:263 - , using less note density, slower SV and calmer distance snap I don't tend to use lower SV for "calm" sections. To me, SV is more for expressing how "heavy" or "light" the feel of the music is, so I prefer to keep the SV. I simplified the section a bit by changing the rhythm to get lower object density, and got rid of some jumps.
  2. Also the same hitsounds suggestion applies here as Normal k

[Jumping!!]
  1. Maybe I would recommend the same thing here as Hard, but it's Insane so not quite as a big deal I think it's fine. But nerfed one of the really big jumps.
  2. 00:15:096 (5,6,1) - Just a small design choice for the future: in my opinion, patterns like this affect the structure and the flow a little. The transition from 6 into 1 is slightly awkward in the way that it's almost a straight line, but the direction of the 1 slider differs slightly from that path. Another example would be something like this 00:37:263 (5,6) - . Just some food for thought Yeah, I was thinking to change that first one, but couldn't really think of a good solution at the time. Moved (6) to fit the curve of (1). The second one seems fine to me. I don't feel any problem with the flow there.
  3. 00:19:596 (1,2,3,4) - It feels strange that the first three sliders have exaggerated curves compared to the fourth. Also the transition from 3 to 4 is a bit awkward because the direction that 3 points conflicts with the position of 4. Personally I would make the first three sliders have smoother curves, and make 4 be more curved and sit higher (maybe above 2) to make the transition there better. I feel like the current shapes are appropriate. (3,4) is supposed to be a sort of "trick" I use to make the flow feel bouncy. I think it works well for emphasizing the consecutive offbeats, so I'll keep it.
  4. 01:10:263 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - wow nice :) ~
  5. also the same hitsounds suggestions as Normal if you choose to take them. yep
Good mod.
Thanks for modding!
Changed bg and hitsounds; should be redownloaded if downloaded before Apr. 25.
Also updated yf's Easy.
Sekai
6,376 posts
Joined February 2011
Sekai
Hey Cloud, random mod here =w=/ time to get this moving on ;w; Let's go <3



yf's Easy:
  1. 00:00:929 (1,1,1,1) - are you sure this is fine for easy diff? I really suggest you to change them, to 1 1/1 notes, but i still think you should change them, since it's not that good to have such stuff on easy diffs ></ it'll just makes it harder to play. And this is easy diff after all orz
  2. 00:15:763 (3) - I really don't suggest you to have such repeated sliders in easy diff and with this high bpms it'll just ruin the spread, I suggest you to change to 1 1/1 slider instead like this:
  3. 01:11:596 (2) - ^
  4. 01:14:263 (2) - ^
  5. 01:25:096 (3) - ^
You may want to avoid the 1/2 sliders, since the bpm for this song is a bit too high and it's breaking the map, and you don't want to get this map dq for this kind of reasons right? like in this post p/4081218 this map kinda got dq for this reasons..So yeah =3=/


We did the other diffs on IRC o3o/

baka irc mod =3=/
01:17 *Sekai-nyan is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/664171 Rhodanthe* - Yumeiro Parade [Hard]]
01:17 Sekai-nyan: cloud o3o/
01:17 Sekai-nyan: time to bubble this =3=
01:18 CloudSplash16: wa
01:18 CloudSplash16: so fast
01:18 Sekai-nyan: lol yeah
01:18 Sekai-nyan: i want to bubble this moe song ;w;
01:19 Sekai-nyan: in normal 00:29:929 (6,1) -
01:19 Sekai-nyan: and in all diffs tbh
01:19 Sekai-nyan: better to follow the finish in the background o3o
01:19 Sekai-nyan: like on the note and slider's head of 1
01:20 Sekai-nyan: it'll sound better tbh
01:20 CloudSplash16: I don't hear any cymbal though...
01:20 CloudSplash16: I think it's too much ;w;
01:20 Sekai-nyan: baka it fits xD
01:21 Sekai-nyan: well
01:21 Sekai-nyan: maybe just on the note o3o
01:21 Sekai-nyan: i won't force you though xD
01:22 Sekai-nyan: it's up to you
01:22 CloudSplash16: I prefer not to do it :P
01:22 Sekai-nyan: =3=
01:22 Sekai-nyan: hai hai
01:22 Sekai-nyan: btw are you allowed to change stuff on easy?
01:23 CloudSplash16: idk...
01:23 CloudSplash16: i guess not
01:23 Sekai-nyan: okay then
01:27 Sekai-nyan: 00:18:596 (8,1) -
01:27 *Sekai-nyan is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/683891 Rhodanthe* - Yumeiro Parade [Jumping!!]]
01:27 Sekai-nyan: dat trap
01:27 Sekai-nyan: Cloud so hentai xD
01:29 CloudSplash16: k... lemme find some way to change it
01:31 Sekai-nyan: ^ you should, since it's only one you did on the whole map lol
01:31 Sekai-nyan: it looks a bit weird
01:33 CloudSplash16: k, i changed it
01:33 CloudSplash16: check again
01:33 Sekai-nyan: good baka =w=
01:33 CloudSplash16: oops i forgot hitsound
01:33 Sekai-nyan: =3=/
01:35 CloudSplash16: k fixed it lol
01:35 Sekai-nyan: gogo update o3o
01:35 CloudSplash16: also
01:35 CloudSplash16: What do you think about 00:40:096 (1,2) -
01:36 Sekai-nyan: on insane?
01:36 CloudSplash16: yeah :P
01:36 Sekai-nyan: well
01:36 Sekai-nyan: why not changing it
01:36 Sekai-nyan: to triple?
01:36 Sekai-nyan: it's fine but still
01:36 Sekai-nyan: it's the only one =3=
01:37 Sekai-nyan: you mostly added triple on parts like this
01:37 CloudSplash16: oh, actually, 1/4 is overmapped here
01:38 CloudSplash16: i just use this because i though it felt cool xD
01:38 Sekai-nyan: lol baka
01:38 Sekai-nyan: overmapping isn't cool xD
01:38 Sekai-nyan: just baka =3=
01:38 CloudSplash16: I think it's better if I just remove it? http://puu.sh/hpEST/9d1dcaecd0.jpg
01:39 Sekai-nyan: yeah that might fit better on this part
01:39 Sekai-nyan: at least not overmapped now
01:39 Sekai-nyan: Cloud, you're not overmapper ;w;
01:39 Sekai-nyan: so don't that orz
01:40 Sekai-nyan: don't do*
01:40 CloudSplash16: oh
01:40 CloudSplash16: k
01:40 CloudSplash16: lol
01:40 CloudSplash16: and
01:40 CloudSplash16: I was thinking maybe I should half the combo lengths in the kiai section
01:40 CloudSplash16: because the long combos are too harsh
01:40 Sekai-nyan: you noticed it huh xD
01:41 Sekai-nyan: i totally was a bit like "WTF" on them lol
01:41 Sekai-nyan: since it's going too long
01:41 Sekai-nyan: 00:50:096 (6) -
01:41 Sekai-nyan: just add nc on stuff like this maybe?
01:42 CloudSplash16: yeah, did it
01:42 CloudSplash16: all
01:42 Sekai-nyan: on hard as well
01:42 Sekai-nyan: since there are few which end up too long =3=
01:43 CloudSplash16: All of it?
01:43 CloudSplash16: or just kiai?
01:43 CloudSplash16: lol i feel like the combos are long, but if I half the length, the combos are really short
01:43 Sekai-nyan: well, if it's only kiai it'll be a bit weird imo
01:44 Sekai-nyan: so better do them all
01:44 CloudSplash16: k
01:44 Sekai-nyan: so yeah o3o/
01:44 Sekai-nyan: moecloud =w=/
01:46 CloudSplash16: ah
01:46 CloudSplash16: i have one more question
01:46 CloudSplash16: What do you think about the 1/2s at the start of yf's Easy?
01:47 Sekai-nyan: i already posted them xD
01:47 Sekai-nyan: i mean i will post it lol
01:47 CloudSplash16: oh xD
01:47 Sekai-nyan: and it kinda a bit too much
01:47 Sekai-nyan: and nya's map got dq for it
01:48 Sekai-nyan: so he should be removing them
01:48 CloudSplash16: yeah, there were a lot of dq recently about 1/2 in Easy
01:49 Sekai-nyan: i don't get why people do it tbh xD
01:49 Sekai-nyan: it's easy diff orz
01:49 CloudSplash16: k, i updated. :P
01:49 Sekai-nyan: =w=
01:49 Sekai-nyan: let's see


That's all, call me back once easy diff is fixed o3o/
yf_bmp
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Little
2,509 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Little
Updated.
Kawashiro
1,525 posts
Joined April 2012
Kawashiro
Hello, Im come from your queue (M4M request)
My map is Here! (I hope to check about bubble)

Black color is just suggestion
Red color is Must fix

yf's Easy

  1. 00:02:096 (1,1) - Delete NC is better
  2. 00:19:263 (4) - Change to 2 circle and add NC first one is correct beat
  3. 01:26:263 (1) - Change to 1/1 slider, Like it http://puu.sh/hr4kF/54a4f4d1f7.jpg

Normal

  1. 00:55:263 (2) - change like it http://puu.sh/hr4qM/3f8c9190c7.jpg
  2. 00:11:096 (6) - Set sampleset to soft and add whistle
  3. 00:32:596 (6) - Set sampleset to soft and add whistle at slider tail
  4. 00:59:596 (1,1) - Add finish is not bad

Hard

  1. 00:02:096 (1,1) - Delete NC.... I think your NC Cycle is very short... Change all NC like it
  2. 00:47:929 (2,3) - Idk why use stack to here?

Jumping!!

  1. 00:02:096 (1,1) - I already said it to Hard, your NC Cycle is very short
  2. 00:05:429 (3) - Ctrl G is better flow
  3. 00:38:929 (3) - Move to 00:39:096
  4. 00:40:263 (4) - Move to 00:40:096
  5. 00:40:929 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - This beat is correct http://puu.sh/hr5m5/de2d7bbaaa.jpg
  6. 00:42:929 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^ http://puu.sh/hr5p8/7605da0662.jpg
Good map! GL :)
Little
2,509 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Little
UnLock-

UnLock- wrote:

Normal

  1. 00:55:263 (2) - change like it http://puu.sh/hr4qM/3f8c9190c7.jpg Too many consecutive 1/2.
  2. 00:11:096 (6) - Set sampleset to soft and add whistle No.
  3. 00:32:596 (6) - Set sampleset to soft and add whistle at slider tail No.
  4. 00:59:596 (1,1) - Add finish is not bad It is.

Hard

  1. 00:02:096 (1,1) - Delete NC.... I think your NC Cycle is very short... Change all NC like it It's fine. I don't want my combos in Hard to much longer than Insane.
  2. 00:47:929 (2,3) - Idk why use stack to here? To emphasize jump to (4).

Jumping!!

  1. 00:02:096 (1,1) - I already said it to Hard, your NC Cycle is very short No.
  2. 00:05:429 (3) - Ctrl G is better flow No.
  3. 00:38:929 (3) - Move to 00:39:096 No.
  4. 00:40:263 (4) - Move to 00:40:096 No.
  5. 00:40:929 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - This beat is correct http://puu.sh/hr5m5/de2d7bbaaa.jpg No.
  6. 00:42:929 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^ http://puu.sh/hr5p8/7605da0662.jpg No.
Good map! GL :)
Sekai
6,376 posts
Joined February 2011
Sekai
checked everything, and it seems okay to go now o3o/

Bubbled~
Rumia-
2,531 posts
Joined July 2012
Rumia-
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2015-04-27 00:40 CloudSplash16: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/683891 Rhodanthe* - Yumeiro Parade]
2015-04-27 00:40 CloudSplash16: tv size race lol
2015-04-27 00:41 Rumia-: ahahaha
2015-04-27 00:41 Rumia-: easier for me to check
2015-04-27 00:41 CloudSplash16: there's another set that looks like will be ranked soon xD
2015-04-27 00:42 Rumia-: gotta go fast
2015-04-27 00:42 CloudSplash16: :3
2015-04-27 00:44 Rumia-: 00:45:429 (1) - whistle on head ? w
2015-04-27 00:44 CloudSplash16: ACTION is away: brb, lunch >.<
2015-04-27 00:44 Rumia-: oh ye
2015-04-27 00:44 Rumia-: insane ;w;
2015-04-27 00:46 CloudSplash16: whoops
2015-04-27 00:46 CloudSplash16: k wait
2015-04-27 00:46 CloudSplash16: lol
2015-04-27 00:46 Rumia-: lol
2015-04-27 00:47 Rumia-: if ur having lunch then i guess ill make a post then ><
2015-04-27 00:47 Rumia-: sorry to interrupt ;w;
2015-04-27 00:47 CloudSplash16: lol don't worry
2015-04-27 00:47 Rumia-: lol
2015-04-27 00:47 CloudSplash16: i wanna go fast
2015-04-27 00:47 CloudSplash16: so i'll stick around for a bit
2015-04-27 00:47 CloudSplash16: k added
2015-04-27 00:48 Rumia-: 00:37:929 (7) - i think its better off without whistle if u listened to the drum ww
2015-04-27 00:48 CloudSplash16: ok
2015-04-27 00:48 CloudSplash16: fixed
2015-04-27 00:48 CloudSplash16: just type the rest of the stuff into chat and I'll come back when I'm done eating xD
2015-04-27 00:49 CloudSplash16: thanks
2015-04-27 00:49 Rumia-: lol
2015-04-27 00:49 CloudSplash16: :P
2015-04-27 00:49 Rumia-: ok fix that on hard too
2015-04-27 00:49 Rumia-: or other diff that needs to do the same ww
2015-04-27 00:52 Rumia-: i guess thats all then , call me back when u updated , also enjoy ur lunch :3
2015-04-27 00:56 CloudSplash16: back, fixing now
2015-04-27 00:56 CloudSplash16: k wait
2015-04-27 01:00 CloudSplash16: ok, i fixed it :3
2015-04-27 01:01 Rumia-: ok
qualify~
Little
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