Charlotte wrote:

hi~ from m4m sorrrrry late

[ about]

1. d is don note
2. k is kat note
3. D is big don note
4. K is big kat note

[ General]

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  Widescreen Support→uncheck (Futsuu & Muzukashii) Oups

[ Futsuu]

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  00:37:385 - add d? (option)
  
  02:02:530 - add d? (option)

Is it me or did you failed on the timing? Else all refused due to non sense (because w've no sounds) or it doesn't fit on how i mapped the futsuu, sorry. :<

[ Muzukashii]

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  00:30:116 - move to 00:30:361 - because,I think 2-4 is good. Definitivly agree.
  
  00:45:601 - move to 00:45:842 - ^ Also.
  
  01:45:848 - change d.I think d is good. Yep, fits well.

[ Oni]

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  00:30:116 - move to 00:30:351 - because,I think good rhythm. Hmm made something different, instead of movegin i'll add 2 d in order to make ddkkk.
  
  01:11:127 - add d.because,k k k is simple.so kdk k is good? Why not, it fits good enough.
  
  01:26:623 - ^ also
  
  01:28:799 - add k? (option) Really hating kddk patterns, plus i would like to make theses doublets visble
  
  02:03:750 - add k? (option) straem→k D=Good flow? THe stream is quite enough good and doesnt need to enlarge it, plus i find it better to make this D moar visible.

Nice mapset Good luck

1. I want to eat a sandwyich

1. Can you make the vol louder, because it can't be heard clearly :')
2. 00:15:605 (1) - no need for finish. see futsuu for reference, and this note here doesn't need to be emphashized, following the futsuu and 'greeting' the new players with a big note isn't a good thing =v=;;
3. 00:15:605 (1,2,3,4) - why don't you just make it same with 00:20:928 (6,7,8,9) - ? my thought is sudden change of rhythm is hard for new players. also, there are some 1/2 that i don't really support at. welp this is just a suggestion, but i highly recommend it. or if you want, try dkdk (1/1) at the 1/2 part. enough breaks and simple pattern and let
4. 00:20:928 (6,7,8,9) - be. apply to the rest too
   00:54:315
   Kantan
   Futsuu
   The gap is too far between them, try adding a note at 00:55:283 for the diffspread between them
5. 01:11:251 (56) - can be moved here 01:10:767 so the break from 01:09:799 to 01:11:734 balanced. apply to 01:14:638 (61) - too , but it's actually it's up to you.
6. 01:35:444 (88) - misplaced? idk, but sounds better at 01:35:928 because it suits the music well. the first one stopped at 01:34:960, then to make the 'mark' of the changing music, place a note 01:35:928, and it goes higher at 01:36:412 (89) - . why explain so hard ;v;
7. 01:41:734 (96,97,98) - why don't just make this same with 01:32:541 (84,85,86,87) - , because they have the same music lols
8. 01:47:057 (103) - move to 01:47:541, 01:46:089 (101) - move to 01:45:605. explaining time /o/ balanced breaks (ofc) and consistency with 01:32:057 (83,84,85) - , also for balanced spread with futsuu. (the futsuu contains d
   kkd there, and yours only contains that. meaning it should be merrier than that
9. 01:57:702 (117) - move to 01:58:186. heavier drum
   The patterns are okay, but some placement is off (i've mentioned some) but other than that i think this diff is nice :3

Senritsu wrote:

[Kin's Kantan]

1. Can you make the vol louder, because it can't be heard clearly :') Done for the kiai
2. 00:15:605 (1) - no need for finish. see futsuu for reference, and this note here doesn't need to be emphashized, following the futsuu and 'greeting' the new players with a big note isn't a good thing =v=;; The big note D have the same sound as the music, so I really want to keep it
3. 00:15:605 (1,2,3,4) - why don't you just make it same with 00:20:928 (6,7,8,9) - ? my thought is sudden change of rhythm is hard for new players. also, there are some 1/2 that i don't really support at. welp this is just a suggestion, but i highly recommend it. or if you want, try dkdk (1/1) at the 1/2 part. enough breaks and simple pattern and let
4. 00:20:928 (6,7,8,9) - be. apply to the rest too I don't want a 20 secs part to be exactly the same every 4/1. So it swap pattern every 2 big white tick.
   00:54:315
   Kantan
   Futsuu
   The gap is too far between them, try adding a note at 00:55:283 for the diffspread between them the fact is, this part is a WAY calm than the 1st part, adding some note will make it harder than the 1st one, I won't create 2 part which have the same difficulty with one really calm, and the 2nd one louder. Also, I changed some note, and added 2 notes.
5. 01:11:251 (56) - can be moved here 01:10:767 so the break from 01:09:799 to 01:11:734 balanced. apply to 01:14:638 (61) - too , but it's actually it's up to you. prefer keep it
6. 01:35:444 (88) - misplaced? idk, but sounds better at 01:35:928 because it suits the music well. the first one stopped at 01:34:960, then to make the 'mark' of the changing music, place a note 01:35:928, and it goes higher at 01:36:412 (89) - . why explain so hard ;v; I missplaced 2 other note + doesn't goes with the melody
7. 01:41:734 (96,97,98) - why don't just make this same with 01:32:541 (84,85,86,87) - , because they have the same music lols changed earlier ^ (2 note missplaced)
8. 01:47:057 (103) - move to 01:47:541, 01:46:089 (101) - move to 01:45:605. explaining time /o/ balanced breaks (ofc) and consistency with 01:32:057 (83,84,85) - , also for balanced spread with futsuu. (the futsuu contains d 1st one fixed, the 2nd isn't fixed, because it follow the melody
   kkd there, and yours only contains that. meaning it should be merrier than that
9. 01:57:702 (117) - move to 01:58:186. heavier drum same as this one ^ ; melody
   The patterns are okay, but some placement is off (i've mentioned some) but other than that i think this diff is nice :3

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1. lol BG 1365x768 why did i miss this
   should be 1366x768 tho, idk if it is allowed to only misses 1 px

1. 00:56:251 don't you want to add a note here, since the music ended here too? like a k to make it has the same note as before (to make it become easier to play)
2. 01:25:283 (78) - idk if this is missing a finish (same vibe as 01:17:541 (67) - )
3. 01:58:186 (tho you rejected this on my mod before but i will try another approach lol) if you're following the melody here, just add a d for consistency with 01:49:476 (108,109,110) -

1. 00:30:847 missing a k? ww
2. Please do compare this part 00:47:299 ~ 00:51:412
   Kantan
   Futsuu
   Muzukashii
   You can fill up futsuu with some notes here and there so the diffspread will be balanced. Otherwise.. This is becoming really weird. This is the best i can give http://puu.sh/eMkap.jpg, and try reducing some notes at muzukashii.
3. 01:56:251 (220) - 01:40:767 (179) -missing a finish here? same vibe as 01:47:783 (197,198,199,200) - preference tho
4. nothing particular here w

1. SV change (as long as i remember tho) is not allowed at Muzu, and only allowed at Oni and above.
2. 00:22:380 (18) - my suggestion is to move this to 00:22:621 for making it same with futsuu. yeah the break is kinda weird, but it suits the music well (not the break, but 00:22:621)
3. 00:27:944 (28,29,30) - i think this is unnecessary (applies to all triplets within this area) why, because the spread (meh) and more consistency (doublemeh). i think the current one is a bit overmapped, since it can be mapped simpler (counting that this is muzukashii and the spread between futsuu is a bit huge, because the futsuu uses the same rhythm over and over while the muzu not) on futsuu, you only add a single note here 00:33:509 (31,32) - compared to kantan, but on the gap to muzukashii, it suddenly becomes crowded 00:31:089 ~ 00:46:573. idk, try adding some notes at futsuu or make muzu more quiet, please choose~ ☆ and more detail were already explained at futsuu
4. how about removing the triplet 01:09:436 (155) - to give a break to the player and because.. well.... the diffspread on this side is kinda unbalanced >vv> my suggestion is to make a simpler version of Oni here 01:09:920 with something like http://puu.sh/eMoDp.jpg same goes with 01:24:557 (207,208,209,210,211,212,213,214,215) -
5. 01:16:815 (180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187,188) - this part is same as oni, but it has more note than oni which is 01:17:178 (182) - . welp, try making it simpler than oni is the best way i guess? like pattern i suggested above
6. 01:32:662 (238,239) - remove this to emphasize the melody 01:32:541 (237) - and the vibe 01:33:025 (239) - . i mean, there's no music playing 01:32:783 (238) - right? and 01:32:662 (238) - doesn't hold any music i suppose. but it's up to you, or just remove the triplet ww
7. 01:46:331 (288,289) - remove them since they don't exist on the oni, and much gap with futsuu (?)
8. 01:50:686 (301) - try removing this for some variation
9. 02:02:299 suggesting this kind of pattern on this part http://puu.sh/eMqCf.jpg, since you can only hear the echo at 02:02:299, and to make a variation too. ww
   My opinion is that this contains too much ddd (?) and has some unbalanced diffspread that i mentioned above there. there are some others too, but... still like i said on the beginning, im still practicing, so i hope if you dont agree with some of my opinion, do tell where my mistakes are.

1. ummhmm.. i have a feeling this has a same case as my map *rolls*
2. 00:26:976 (37) - this can be removed, since no music is playing there
3. 00:29:154 another spread problem ;v;
   Futsuu
   Muzukashii
   Oni
   dat sudden streams on oni though, kinda gives me heartattack
4. Same case as Muzukashii on the next part ~ 00:46:573 (119) -
5. Also has the same case
6. 00:55:283 (151) - you placed d here on futsuu and muzu, why not changing this note too
7. 01:13:428 (223,224,225,226,227,228,229,230,231,232,233,234,235,236,237,238,239,240) - not agreeing on these streams, remembering how empty muzu is compared to oni on this part.. try deleting some notes and simplyifing the pattern. also at next part 01:18:751 (250,251,252,253,254,255,256,257,258,259,260,261,262,263,264,265,266,267,268,269) - too. and furthermore 01:26:492 (290,291,292,293,294,295,296,297,298,299,300,301,302,303,304,305,306,307,308,309,310,311,312,313,314,315,316,317,318,319,320,321,322,323,324,325,326,327,328,329) -
   In case you want to compare that last one with muzu
   Oni
   Muzu
   Yup. that's the gap. how muzu has so many breaks, yet on Oni you fill the breaks with streams that some are hard and not balanced with the muzu itself.
8. 01:44:396 (383,384,385,386,387,388,389) - imo this pattern is too hard too, with a muzu that has maximum a pattern like ddd, which makes it a big gap between both of them
9. 02:02:057 (478,479,480,481,482,483,484,485,486,487,488,489,490) - too long, if it should be compared to the other diffs, and 02:03:751 should have a note, if you decided to simplify this though
10. Oni has some irregular patterns here, which kinda bothers me, because some of them are a bit hard too play. My map is even slower than this, and the pattern is not too complicated compared to this, and i got some complaints. so.. yeah.

Senritsu wrote:

feel free to hate me for being an asshole because im being late like 2 months
yeaa just slap me if this mod is being a nuisance enough. im learning how to diffspread from here and on

[General]

1. lol BG 1365x768 why did i miss this hmmm redowload because i've already fixed it, cf Nardoxyribonucleic (i guess x_x).
   should be 1366x768 tho, idk if it is allowed to only misses 1 px

[Futsuu]

1. 00:30:847 missing a k? ww yep ww
2. Please do compare this part 00:47:299 ~ 00:51:412
   Kantan
   Futsuu
   Muzukashii
   You can fill up futsuu with some notes here and there so the diffspread will be balanced. Otherwise.. This is becoming really weird. This is the best i can give http://puu.sh/eMkap.jpg, and try reducing some notes at muzukashii. I follow your spread on futsuu but not the patterns dome d changed to k, also i won't change the muzu one i feel it's good enough. Thanks for this analyse
3. 01:56:251 (220) - 01:40:767 (179) -missing a finish here? same vibe as 01:47:783 (197,198,199,200) - preference tho Well, i don't want to spam finish so no. :<
4. nothing particular here w w

[Muzukashii]

1. SV change (as long as i remember tho) is not allowed at Muzu, and only allowed at Oni and above. #Taiko said minor changes is ok. Also by the low bpm and 1/1 distance, it's not a problem and kiai part is still well visible.
2. 00:22:380 (18) - my suggestion is to move this to 00:22:621 for making it same with futsuu. yeah the break is kinda weird, but it suits the music well (not the break, but 00:22:621) It creates a disorder with oni one (kkd), futsuu is also kkd and i consider mine good too. :>
3. 00:27:944 (28,29,30) - i think this is unnecessary (applies to all triplets within this area) why, because the spread (meh) and more consistency (doublemeh). i think the current one is a bit overmapped, since it can be mapped simpler (counting that this is muzukashii and the spread between futsuu is a bit huge, because the futsuu uses the same rhythm over and over while the muzu not) on futsuu, you only add a single note here 00:33:509 (31,32) - compared to kantan, but on the gap to muzukashii, it suddenly becomes crowded 00:31:089 ~ 00:46:573. idk, try adding some notes at futsuu or make muzu more quiet, please choose~ ☆ and more detail were already explained at futsuu Ok, so i've delete the triplet and move to k d, but i will keep the others triplet coz i want to prepare the player to the triplet on kiai time, also because you talked about spread, the futsuu is repetitive, and the muzu is semi-remetitive and teh oni not, so the repetitive amount is decreasing along the diff.
4. how about removing the triplet 01:09:436 (155) - to give a break to the player and because.. well.... the diffspread on this side is kinda unbalanced >vv> my suggestion is to make a simpler version of Oni here 01:09:920 with something like http://puu.sh/eMoDp.jpg same goes with 01:24:557 (207,208,209,210,211,212,213,214,215) - Well you may have notice that my muzu kiai part is quite repetitive and this pattern is use many time along the part, so i cannot change this pattern (or at least not only this one m8)
5. 01:16:815 (180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187,188) - this part is same as oni, but it has more note than oni which is 01:17:178 (182) - . welp, try making it simpler than oni is the best way i guess? like pattern i suggested above Well you right, but on the oni one the previous patterns are more complex than the muzu one, so it's kinda break, but your point of view is interesting tho.
6. 01:32:662 (238,239) - remove this to emphasize the melody 01:32:541 (237) - and the vibe 01:33:025 (239) - . i mean, there's no music playing 01:32:783 (238) - right? and 01:32:662 (238) - doesn't hold any music i suppose. but it's up to you, or just remove the triplet ww ww I just delete the middle one, overmapping i guess.
7. 01:46:331 (288,289) - remove them since they don't exist on the oni, and much gap with futsuu (?) Yep!
8. 01:50:686 (301) - try removing this for some variation Nope, disturbing the patterns like.
9. 02:02:299 suggesting this kind of pattern on this part http://puu.sh/eMqCf.jpg, since you can only hear the echo at 02:02:299, and to make a variation too. ww Keep nticing because it's the final part so... wwww
   My opinion is that this contains too much ddd (?) and has some unbalanced diffspread that i mentioned above there. there are some others too, but... still like i said on the beginning, im still practicing, so i hope if you dont agree with some of my opinion, do tell where my mistakes are. Well you're arguing your suggestion so the debate is more interesting than xx:xx:xx k, but i like your point of view during modding

[Oni]

1. ummhmm.. i have a feeling this has a same case as my map *rolls* Mohhhhh *_*
2. 00:26:976 (37) - this can be removed, since no music is playing there Yep
3. 00:29:154 another spread problem ;v; Hey, i've got triples (oh baby a....), on the muzu one, and you're saying me to remove, normal you'll got some spread now xD
   Futsuu
   Muzukashii
   Oni
   dat sudden streams on oni though, kinda gives me heartattack
4. Same case as Muzukashii on the next part ~ 00:46:573 (119) - Just because i've added some doublets and one triplet you got an heartbreak? Plz! xD
5. Also has the same case wut?
6. 00:55:283 (151) - you placed d here on futsuu and muzu, why not changing this note too Yep
7. 01:13:428 (223,224,225,226,227,228,229,230,231,232,233,234,235,236,237,238,239,240) - not agreeing on these streams, remembering how empty muzu is compared to oni on this part.. try deleting some notes and simplyifing the pattern.Ok now the spread is better. also at next part 01:18:751 (250,251,252,253,254,255,256,257,258,259,260,261,262,263,264,265,266,267,268,269) - too. and furthermore 01:26:492 (290,291,292,293,294,295,296,297,298,299,300,301,302,303,304,305,306,307,308,309,310,311,312,313,314,315,316,317,318,319,320,321,322,323,324,325,326,327,328,329) -
   In case you want to compare that last one with muzu
   Oni
   Muzu
   Yup. that's the gap. how muzu has so many breaks, yet on Oni you fill the breaks with streams that some are hard and not balanced with the muzu itself.
8. 01:44:396 (383,384,385,386,387,388,389) - imo this pattern is too hard too, with a muzu that has maximum a pattern like ddd, which makes it a big gap between both of them srsly? This is easier than kkddk xD Do you even played std? inb4 zazazao keyboard pattern.
9. 02:02:057 (478,479,480,481,482,483,484,485,486,487,488,489,490) - too long, if it should be compared to the other diffs, and 02:03:751 should have a note, if you decided to simplify this though Nope, this is the ending, so i've to be this part harder as a finish, same as muzukashi, also the d you want me to add doesn't fit good with the previous stream, even if there's one on luzukashii diff.
10. Oni has some irregular patterns here, which kinda bothers me, because some of them are a bit hard too play. My map is even slower than this, and the pattern is not too complicated compared to this, and i got some complaints. so.. yeah.

Maybe, but i've to kep some pattern, i won't make only kkd or ddk pattern, else it will be a muzukashii or too easy Oni and there's won't have challenge. :<

I'm sorry for the delayed and this crappy mod
Feel free to kick me for this very lateness
Hope it helped, and good luck ;vvvv;/

Genocide wrote:

well
from raika and my queue form hue

[General]
your resolution BG is 1365 x 768 , it should be 1366x768 Already said above, strange because i've fixed it since nardo's one.
Edit : I've redowloaded it, and it's fine, did you downloaded mine way to earlier than the fix?

[Oni]
00:26:976 (37) - delete? keep it consistent with 00:28:912 - Fixed with Senritsu.
02:00:484 (470,471) - ctrl + g? emphasize the kats The pattern will be harder to play since the mod above complain about the patterns, i won't make harder ones xD

well i don't like the music one xD Lel i always give you maps you dislike, sorry for not mapping kawaïï moe moe maps :'(
hope it help you, good luck
/me runs

ikin5050 wrote:

I wanted to mod this and i came up with the following.

general

i'll get back to you on this, but i have a idea for a SB which includes small flashing / strobe at the main beats in the song 'mainly kiai time' and you name / kin's name in it, as a storyboard, but i'll message you and see if it's possible and if i can make something that would be good for this

Why not, i'm not close with it let's try. (Hi secret)

Oni

great diff, but 1 thing
at 02:02:057 (the last stream) i think this would be good if it was split in a bursts of 7 and a burst of 5. this is because the entire song doens't feel that heavy on the drums and i think that this long stream doesn't add that much to the song. i do think that having 2 smaller bursts works better because i personally feel it fits the way the song is mapped better Seems good, also many modders complains about the last stream. I also added the d between the last stream and the finish, and fixed the SV change at the end.

Muzu

another great diff, but starting from the kiai time there's a lot of ddd patterns. i agree that d should be the main note here, but i think that changing the patterns up a bit to ddk dkd kdd would work better because it adds more variety, but still keeps the rhythm you want for this map Well i agree with you, but it's muzukashii diff, so i'm avoid this kind of patterns. This is also how a map a muzuz

Futsuu

00:40:525 - add kat here Nope, disordering the whole part, also you don't give me reason so there's no arguing else i'm using kkd pattern when it sounds.

sorry if i didn't give you a lot of concrete things to change, but this is already very well mapped

[I]MMoRTal[S] wrote:

[Futsuu]
00:59:396 (77,78) - u w0t remove finish Well i really want to keep these finishers, because without, it's so basic. Keep noticing this point for further mods.

give a little break to normal player :/
01:04:234 - delete
01:11:009 - delete
01:18:751 - delete
01:26:492 - delete All refused because it creates 3/2 breaks which doesn't fit with what i want to, except at the end for the vocals. I can accept to make breaks, but for 2/1 spacing so.
01:56:734 - delete for consistency Yep you right, well i update this section to fit better with the same part

[Muzukashii]

00:32:904 - delete because this 1/4 doesn't fit with calm part and make it not like Oni
00:38:468 - ^
00:40:646 - ^ All refused too because i don't wan't to wait kiai time for triples, also the spread between all my diff (kantan excepted because it's kin's) will be broken. Plus on the second part i used to do a different rythm / pattern, so it will be strange if the calmest part is harder.


00:59:396 (121,122) - again REMOVE FINISH DDDDD No D:

01:03:267 - d please ,drum here

Same rythm as futsuu, the sound are the same between this and teh previous one, plus if i d here, it's a desorder with the same patterns. Also the next pattern of this one sound bad with a kd, or at least doesn't have the same intensity.

[Oni]
00:43:670 (106) - d please Yep, i did the same on the previous pattern i don't know why i did double k here.
00:50:807 (134,135) - Ctrl+G Nope the sound is higher on the 2nd
00:56:855 (156,157) - ^

00:59:396 (162,163) - AND YET remove finish please blabla

01:27:581 (288,289) - Ctrl+G Sure coz of the battery

Konpaku Sariel wrote:

oni

00:22:621 (23) - add d for ballance

01:02:541 (170) - d Ok since i did this on other diff.
01:03:267 (172,173,174,175,176) - ddkkd or d_k__ Nope i really prefer my version after testing. Or at least give me some justifications about why.
01:04:476 (178) - d Well why not but i also prefer my version since it sounds borring a ddkdd k pattern (not enough k for me). Still keeping my version until further mods
01:05:686 (182) - delete or d (i recommend delete) Wht not.
01:26:492 (280) - d Since on my previous diff, it's k. Nope
01:26:976 (282) - d Because there's only bass here, i won't make different from the 2 circles before.
01:36:654 (332) - ^ Yep
01:41:976 (359) - ^ Nope, sounds ugly.
01:44:396 (371) - ^ to snap drum sounds Yea why not, plus the 2 remain k are more audible.

chaica wrote:

Hi. from forum.

Oni

01:49:355 - delete? -I think sound after kdk well sounds. Why not

This is the map of the overall great can! There was no place to be too pointed out! Good Luck!

Raiden wrote:

Hey :3 mod for a M4M

Oni

1. 00:23:831 (26,27) - ctrl+g Nope, it doesn't fit how i mapped this.
2. 00:25:767 (33,34) - ^
3. 00:27:702 (38,39) - ^
4. 00:29:638 (43,44) - ^
5. 00:38:468 (83) - change for k? Ok since i did the same pattern before, for consistency so.
6. 00:31:573 (52,53) - ctrl+g?
7. 00:33:509 (60,61) - ^
8. 00:35:444 (69,70) - ^
9. 00:37:380 (77,78) - ^
10. 00:39:315 (86,88) - ^
11. 00:41:251 (95,96) - ^
12. 00:43:186 (104,105) - ^
13. 01:12:218 (217) - Change to k? Nope prefer my version.
14. 01:35:444 (330) - change to d? Because the vocals are higher, i think it's better to keep k
15. 01:39:315 (347) - ^
16. 01:43:186 (368) - ^
17. 01:47:299 (388) - ^
18. 01:47:057 (387,388) - ^
19. 01:58:428 (446,447,448) - kkd instead of ddk? fits better imo Maybe but this is not the way i mapped the music. Prefer my version too
20. 02:00:605 (459) - change for d? It's strange but here, the k is justified, like have a d here would make a void

Muzu

1. 00:19:960 (12,13) - ctrl+g?
2. 00:29:638 (36,37) - ^
3. 00:31:573 (42,43) - ^
4. 00:39:315 (69,70) - ^
5. 00:45:121 (89,90) - ^ Same reason as oni
6. 01:11:009 (162) - change to d? Here we got the bass which is the most noticable and is not downing, so it's kk for me.
7. 01:18:751 (191) - ^
8. 01:26:493 (220) - ^
9. 01:44:638 (286) - ^
10. 01:47:299 (296) - ^
11. 01:49:234 (302) - ^ Here the vocals are important and high, so keeping the k
12. 01:50:565 (306) - move to 01:50:807 - instead? Ok so here, you noticed than the triples are earlier, it's because i don't want any ddk for triplets
13. 01:52:501 (313) - move to 01:52:742 - instead?

Futsuu

1. 00:46:089 (53,54) - ctrl+g? Fits the pitch much more imo All my diff got this template and i found good enough since the second part is more calm, making a D make this change
2. 01:03:267 (84) - change to d? No, bass
3. 01:04:718 (88) - ^ Not in the way i mapped this
4. 01:11:009 (105) - ^ and move 01:11:976 (108) - to 01:12:218 - instead? Prefer mine
5. 01:18:751 (126) - Change to d? Bass

And that's pretty much my mod :3

GL on the ranking~~

game rock wrote:

Hi, from my queue

d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)

[ Futsuu]

00:34:234 - Add a d? for the rhythm. Ok
00:45:847 - Add a d and here 00:46:331 - Add a k, because to follow the combination and the pattern. Ok and no, this i a new section so i have to avoid this k.
00:55:767 - Change to k. Nope, i want to keep this d, else this will be a spam of k, and i want to use d and k to differ the vocals.
00:59:396 - Add a d,because is not neccesary a D here. Why no one understand the aim of these finishers?! D`:
01:00:363 - ^

[ Muzukashii]

00:55:767 - Change to k.
00:59:396 - Add a d,because is not neccesary a D here.
01:00:363 - ^
01:34:960 - Change to k. Same reason as futsuu, the vocals are not going higher, plus the beats increase the argue
01:54:799 - Change to d and here 01:55:041 - Change to k Nope, as you can see, i did on the section patterns like xxx x o all the way,this would be a disorder to do this way.

[ Oni]

00:48:751 - Change to k for the rhythm in this part. it sounds weird. :/
00:50:202 - Change to k. Louder than previous one.
00:51:049 - Change to k for the rhythm in this part. ok for both
00:52:984 - ^
00:59:396 - Add a d,because is not neccesary a D here.
01:00:363 - ^ same as futsuu
01:42:702 - Change to k to follow the pattern. Too much repetivive, sounds a bit weird, and there's the beats.

Sory but I can's mod Inner Oni, because I'm very mod for mod this. But i don't have inner! :O

Nice Beatmap!, I hope my mod has been helpful you :3, Good luck~ ~

Surono wrote:

hello small dragon *thats dregen?/?/ <(``) uwu wut? oO

[Kantan]
Nice~

[Futsuu]
01:44:396 (197) - add d nice too~ xD In order to follow my previous pattern at 01:36:170 ok, but k so, not d, consistency.
01:51:654 (216,217,218,219) - change dkdk or dkdd I don't find a valuable reason for both, i mean it doesn't fit on how i mapped the music. i don't know how to explain this but mine sounds better.
01:59:880 (238) - d k' instead.

[Muzukashii]
Nice too~ thks m8

[Oni]
00:45:242 (113) - change d, bcuz sound "hah" or bla bla in 00:45:363 (114) - xD hahaha xD ANyway fixed since it's the only dkk of the section so for the consistency.
01:35:081 (327) - k nice nice
01:52:863 (419) - d nice too~ xD Fixed

Sorry for Fast Mod xD i must hurry go to school~ this nice map~ Hope Help too~ x3

1. 00:15:605 (1) - Remove finisher, finishes at the start of the song seems weird and higher diffs don't have this.
2. Some notes doesn't land properly on beats like 01:02:541 (45) on 01:02:783
3. Have some 3/1 or 4/1 breaks on kiai time.

1. 01:33:267 (167) - Remove, have some recovery time after finish
2. Other than that, this diff seems fine.

1. Seems ok.

1. 00:47:541 (122,123) - Don
2. 01:52:621 (417) - ^
3. 01:12:097 (216) - Kat
4. All in Oni are just suggestions

Neil Leo wrote:

Short mods from my modding queue, as you requested:

[Futsuu]

1. 01:33:267 (167) - Remove, have some recovery time after finish Yep and i do some 3/2 break on the same kind of vocals and blah blah blah.
2. Other than that, this diff seems fine.

[Muzukashii]

1. Seems ok.

[Oni]

1. 00:47:541 (122,123) - Don [/color]
2. 01:52:621 (417) - ^ Nope it's fine since there's no beat to use a d here.
3. 01:12:097 (216) - Kat [/color]
4. All in Oni are just suggestions

That's all where's Inner Oni...

game rock wrote:

[ Kantan]

00:20:202 - Add a k. I don't want to use 3/2 on kantan diff
00:56:251 - Add a k. it doesn't follow the main instrument
01:54:315 - Change to k. I don't like the k here
01:58:186 - Add a d. I'm not following the drum here

Neil Leo wrote:

[Kin's Kantan]

1. 00:15:605 (1) - Remove finisher, finishes at the start of the song seems weird and higher diffs don't have this. even if higher diff don't have it, I won't remove it, because the first note is strong
2. Some notes doesn't land properly on beats like 01:02:541 (45) on 01:02:783 I don't like using 3/2 on kantan
3. Have some 3/1 or 4/1 breaks on kiai time. hey, it's a Kantan diff, what did you expect ?

[-MrSergio-] wrote:

Well... your mod was supposed to be almost at the end of all the others, but Feint has a bonus in my queue :^) Feint is love, feint is life, but Envy is even moar! :^)

SPOILER

~ Legend ~

1. Black = Just a suggestion, feel free to refuse
2. Blue = Highly recommended suggestion. You need a strong reason to refuse this
3. Red = Unrankable. You MUST fix this

Please reply with:

1. Green = Fixed
2. Red = Didn't fix
3. Orange = Fixed part of the suggestion

[General]

1. I wonder why you put "Sandwych" in your tags... xD

Because kin said it! And sadwych is love D: , i may remove it if it's a cause of DQ but i hope it won't be. lol

[Oni]

1. 00:30:726 (49) - In the first part of this diff you use kats to make emphasis on a particular sound, but in this case there isn't that sound so maybe convert this note into a d? After some reflexions i accept the argue is valuable. Plus it fits better the music on game
2. 00:38:468 (83) - Same as above ^, but I guess it works fine even as it is now... well... it's up to you xD So... ^
3. 00:59:396 (162,163) - While playing these notes felt a bit strange (probably due to the 5/2 pause), so what about using those notes as the end of a couple of spinners?
   SPOILER

   Like this I guess...
   Ok so here i find no reason to make spiner worth, first this is the last second before kiai, so i really should relax the hands player instead of making spam of kdkd for spinner. Secondly this section is too calm even by reducting the volume hitsound, this is not a place to make payer break their keyboard. The idea is not bad but i'd rather see this on a standard set instead of taiko. I also consider spinner for part where there's vocal who keep singin' the same syllab for longlong time or as a finisher of a sound why not.
4. 01:03:388 (9) - Hm... seeing the previous triplet (01:02:299 (4,5,6) - ) I kinda expected this note to be a d The bass is still a bit here to make it valudable, also making a d here would make less noticable the next d where it needs to be important since there's battery.
5. 01:25:404 (114,116) - What about a Ctrl + G on these notes? Since feels kinda strange the approach to this note 01:26:009 (118) - Nvm, it looks fine on a second thought I'm gonna still argue , ok so the first d is to show the (based) battery, and the last k is obvious, so for the 3 between, maybe you noticed the 2 lasts are the same so i've to use the same note, so i found logic to split them by a k.

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:59:396 (162,163) - Same as for the Oni, this part feels a bit awkward... Maybe this time use just one spinner instead Bleh
2. 01:03:509 (134) - Maybe convert it into a d? Inb4 "I'm not following the bass" xD inb4 based xD
3. 02:03:992 - Can you use the same SV of your kiai here too? I was kinda mislead by that part at the end :/ Oups, fixed :/

[Futsuu]

1. Nothing~

[Kantan]

1. Nothing here too~

Nice mapset :3
Good luck finding those Taco BNs xD

• [Kin's Kantan]

1. 00:22:863 (8) - consider deleting this note for simplicity ? The pattern at 00:22:863 (8,9,10) - is a bit difficult because of the different snappings.
2. 00:30:605 (16) - ^
3. 00:38:347 (24) - ^
4. 01:15:121 (62) - this note could be deleted for a 4/1 break. Currently the part from 01:01:573 to 02:03:992 - is rather dense for the difficulty because of the lack of 4/1 or longer breaks.
5. 01:30:121 (82) - ^
6. 01:46:089 (102) - ^
7. 02:01:573 (122) - ^

• [Futsuu]
  
  Consider HP+1 for a better spread of difficulty setting ?

1. 00:22:138 (11) - this note could be deleted to give a break since 3/2 + 3/2 + 1/2 notes are quite hard for the difficulty. Also, patterns are quite consecutive from 00:15:605 to 00:46:573 - owing to the lack of 2/1 or longer breaks.
2. 00:29:880 (24) - ^
3. 00:37:621 (39) - ^
4. 01:08:347 (99,100) - Again, deletions are necessary since the kiai is really dense because of the consecutive 1/2 + 1/1 pattern chains.
5. 01:16:089 (120,121) - ^
6. 01:23:831 (141,142) - ^
7. 01:31:331 (162,163,164) - ^
8. 01:39:315 (182,183) - ^
9. 01:46:815 (203,204) - ^
10. 01:54:557 (223,224) - ^
11. 02:02:299 (244,245) - ^
    
    The notes are in fact good, but such a kind of pattern chains should not be long for Futsuu due to difficulty concerns.

• [Muzukashii]
  
  SV changes are not recommended in lower difficulties. Consider using SV 1.4 throughout the difficulty ?

1. 01:31:331 (237,238,239,240) - It would be better to delete these notes since 2/1 or longer breaks are absent from 01:01:331 to 02:03:992 -
2. 02:03:025 (355) - consider deleting this note ? It lacks instrumental support, and it would be better not to make 1/4 + 1/2 patterns too lengthy for Muzukashii.

• [Oni]

1. 01:03:267 (171,172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180) - consider changing these notes to ddkkk kkddd ? This could follow both the music and the snares in a way better.
2. 01:05:928 (184,185,186,187,188) - maybe try kdkkd ? It sounds better imo.
3. 01:21:412 (258) - changing this note to k could maintain a better snare consistency.

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Hi, here is the M4M as requested.

• [Futsuu]
  
  Consider HP+1 for a better spread of difficulty setting ? Talked with kin, and i think it's ok, i don't also want to increase all my diff with +1 and getting an oni at 6/6 which is useless for a 3.13 SR. Also kin found useless to getting a 2 OD & HP on his kantan.
  
  Maybe 3.5 is a better solution?

1. 00:22:138 (11) - this note could be deleted to give a break since 3/2 + 3/2 + 1/2 notes are quite hard for the difficulty. Also, patterns are quite consecutive from 00:15:605 to 00:46:573 - owing to the lack of 2/1 or longer breaks. Yeah i think it's the best place to give breaks moreover after ther 1/2 patterns.
2. 00:29:880 (24) - ^
3. 00:37:621 (39) - ^ ^ for both
4. 01:08:347 (99,100) - Again, deletions are necessary since the kiai is really dense because of the consecutive 1/2 + 1/1 pattern chains.
5. 01:16:089 (120,121) - ^
6. 01:23:831 (141,142) - ^
7. 01:31:331 (162,163,164) - ^ Rip i've no choice :'(
8. 01:39:315 (182,183) - ^
9. 01:46:815 (203,204) - ^
10. 01:54:557 (223,224) - ^
11. 02:02:299 (244,245) - ^
    
    All applied rip :'(
    
    The notes are in fact good, but such a kind of pattern chains should not be long for Futsuu due to difficulty concerns.

• [Muzukashii]
  
  SV changes are not recommended in lower difficulties. Consider using SV 1.4 throughout the difficulty ? Still want to talk about if it's necessary or not. I think that without this 1.20 this would be a boring kiai.

1. 01:31:331 (237,238,239,240) - It would be better to delete these notes since 2/1 or longer breaks are absent from 01:01:331 to 02:03:992 - Ok fixed.
2. 02:03:025 (355) - consider deleting this note ? It lacks instrumental support, and it would be better not to make 1/4 + 1/2 patterns too lengthy for Muzukashii. Definitively agree.

I also turned 03:03:751 to d, for consistency with oni. And sounds more logic.

• [Oni]

1. 01:03:267 (171,172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180) - consider changing these notes to ddkkk kkddd ? This could follow both the music and the snares in a way better. I tried your pattern but i didn't find it good. If i listen this carefuly, i think my version is better
   
2. 01:05:928 (184,185,186,187,188) - maybe try kdkkd ? It sounds better imo. Kiss. Dayum nice
3. 01:21:412 (258) - changing this note to k could maintain a better snare consistency. Why not.

You may call me back after fixing these :3

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Hi, here is the M4M as requested.

• [Kin's Kantan]

1. 00:22:863 (8) - consider deleting this note for simplicity ? The pattern at 00:22:863 (8,9,10) - is a bit difficult because of the different snappings.
2. 00:30:605 (16) - ^
3. 00:38:347 (24) - ^ ye deleted
4. 01:15:121 (62) - this note could be deleted for a 4/1 break. Currently the part from 01:01:573 to 02:03:992 - is rather dense for the difficulty because of the lack of 4/1 or longer breaks.
5. 01:30:121 (82) - ^
6. 01:46:089 (102) - ^
7. 02:01:573 (122) - ^ It'll just kill the gaps between the kantan & the futsuu. Also, the pattern I used, are not complex for a Kantan, it' should be okay