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BiBi - Fuyu ga Kureta Yokan [CatchTheBeat]
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Topic Starter
as requested~
LOVE LIVE (･∀･)
[General]
Add "Love live" to tag 233333
enable countdown off
wait you keep players playing for total 5:24 !! consider adding a break
[Timing]
add BPM 92.000 OFFSET 319994
move BPM 96.000 OFFSET 320335 to OFFSET 320320
move next one to BPM 84.000 OFFSET 320622
should be like this if moved right
[Memory]
Hitsounds:
00:12:085 (4) - move the finish hitsound from the middle to the head or ... oh I just don't understand the existence of this finish since the previous clap will hide this hitsound
00:22:187 (2) - whistle?
00:27:850 (1) - whistle on tail?
00:44:993 (1) - whistle on head?
00:47:442 (1) - ^
00:53:565 (1) - slidertick with whistle hitsound?
00:59:687 (1,2) - 3 whistles ? check again here
01:06:422 (3) - missing clap
01:10:095 (3) - ^
01:11:320 (4) - ^
01:12:544 (2) - clap on head
01:13:769 (3) - clap on head
02:53:718 (2,3) - something like 00:12:085 (4,5) ? check the hitsounds~
03:04:432 (8) - remove clap
03:04:585 (1) - whistle on head
03:29:075 - 03:48:667 : finishes follow the piano sounds will feel better or you can choose another sampleset to make finishes follow the current rhythm and whistles follow the piano
Patterns:
00:08:871 (2,1) - ctrl + G?
00:11:014 (2) - make it a small stream moving right? 00:28:463 (3,4) - DS is a little big here?
00:32:748 (1,2,3,4) - These notes are not CLSW styled (/runs) something like Z-shaped or S-shaped will look better (exam is running away)
00:48:514 (1,2) - DS larager?
01:01:065 (2) - move a bit left
01:35:503 (2,3,4,5) - this stream a grid left
02:48:973 (2) - nc?
03:05:809 (1,2) - they are too close?
04:36:575 (3,4) - DS larger?
That's all lol
Rank it rank it
EDIT:
Topic Starter
Fixed all patterns and remastered hitsounds. Thank you!
hello :3 Great map!
Sorry if mod is useless, still learning!
The map is fun to play!
Sorry if not helpful mod 
Good luck with rank!
Sorry if mod is useless, still learning!
GENERAL
Change HP to 7.
AR could be 9,1 or 9,2. Seems to fit better than AR 9.
Remove Count Down
Change HP to 7.
AR could be 9,1 or 9,2. Seems to fit better than AR 9.
Remove Count Down
MEMORY
00:32:748 (1,2,3,4) - I would suggest to ctrl+g (2) and (4).
00:35:197 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:41:014 (5,6) - Make them more curved for a better flow?
00:55:707 (1) - Would sugges to breake this up into 2 more sliders, and make the player move a little here.
01:35:503 (2,3,4,5) - Curve this stream more.
01:54:789 (1,2) - Bend these more to the side, to force the player to be more precise with movements.
02:04:585 (1,2,3,4,5) - You just made a hyper on 02:04:279 (6) to here. Bend the stream more, as players tend to move more to the right on notes like this.
02:05:044 (6,7) - make (6) hyper to (7). Reason i think this would be good, is since you use the finish sound on (7) start. And it would make nice for a hyper. 02:09:177 (3) - ctrl+g this?
02:16:830 (1,2,3) - Increase the SV on these notes, to make a little bit of a bigger gap.
02:32:748 (1) - Shorten this slider to the red tick at 02:33:054 then make a short hyper form the slider end to 02:33:207 and then place a note at the original slider end. The vocals at this point could be mapped.
02:36:269 (1,2) - Make (1) a slider to the start of (2). Then make a hyper from the slider end to 0:2:36:728 since there is a strong beat here. And make that last one into a slider.
02:48:360 (1) - same as 00:55:707 (1)
03:07:569 (8,1) - You can make (8) hyper to (1) to make this stream a little more interesting.
03:09:483 (1,2) - Increase the DS between these.
03:10:095 (3,4) - ^
03:20:503 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe place (2) at x232, (3) at x312 and (4) at x232 to make this have a little more movement?
03:28:385 (5,1) - (5) should hyper to (1), since you use the finish sound on (1). It fits more IMO.
03:37:187 (1) - You could make this more interesting by spliting it up or something? Seems kinda boring to do this stream as it is..
03:38:718 (2,1) - (2) could hyper to (1), as its a high piano sound on (1).
03:39:789 (3,1) - (2) could hyper to (1), same reason as above.
03:41:014 (2,1) - (2) could hyper to (1), same reason as above.
03:42:238 (4,1) - (4) could hyper to (1), same reason as above.
03:43:616 (4,1) - ^
03:44:687 (4,1) - ^
03:46:064 (4,1) - ^
03:47:442 (1,2,3,4,5) - ctrh+h this, and move it to x364. A hyper could fit here!
04:31:524 (3) - same as 00:55:707 (1)
04:47:442 (1,2,3,4) - Make this a bit more curved?
04:48:054 (5,6,7,8) - ^
04:52:340 (1) - move to x376 to make (8) hyper to it. Seems to fit IMO.
05:17:748 (2,3,1) - place (3) at x480 and (1) at x352.
05:24:714 (1,2) - Bend (1) all the way to the left, and place (2) at x238
00:32:748 (1,2,3,4) - I would suggest to ctrl+g (2) and (4).
00:35:197 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:41:014 (5,6) - Make them more curved for a better flow?
00:55:707 (1) - Would sugges to breake this up into 2 more sliders, and make the player move a little here.
01:35:503 (2,3,4,5) - Curve this stream more.
01:54:789 (1,2) - Bend these more to the side, to force the player to be more precise with movements.
02:04:585 (1,2,3,4,5) - You just made a hyper on 02:04:279 (6) to here. Bend the stream more, as players tend to move more to the right on notes like this.
02:05:044 (6,7) - make (6) hyper to (7). Reason i think this would be good, is since you use the finish sound on (7) start. And it would make nice for a hyper. 02:09:177 (3) - ctrl+g this?
02:16:830 (1,2,3) - Increase the SV on these notes, to make a little bit of a bigger gap.
02:32:748 (1) - Shorten this slider to the red tick at 02:33:054 then make a short hyper form the slider end to 02:33:207 and then place a note at the original slider end. The vocals at this point could be mapped.
02:36:269 (1,2) - Make (1) a slider to the start of (2). Then make a hyper from the slider end to 0:2:36:728 since there is a strong beat here. And make that last one into a slider.
02:48:360 (1) - same as 00:55:707 (1)
03:07:569 (8,1) - You can make (8) hyper to (1) to make this stream a little more interesting.
03:09:483 (1,2) - Increase the DS between these.
03:10:095 (3,4) - ^
03:20:503 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe place (2) at x232, (3) at x312 and (4) at x232 to make this have a little more movement?
03:28:385 (5,1) - (5) should hyper to (1), since you use the finish sound on (1). It fits more IMO.
03:37:187 (1) - You could make this more interesting by spliting it up or something? Seems kinda boring to do this stream as it is..
03:38:718 (2,1) - (2) could hyper to (1), as its a high piano sound on (1).
03:39:789 (3,1) - (2) could hyper to (1), same reason as above.
03:41:014 (2,1) - (2) could hyper to (1), same reason as above.
03:42:238 (4,1) - (4) could hyper to (1), same reason as above.
03:43:616 (4,1) - ^
03:44:687 (4,1) - ^
03:46:064 (4,1) - ^
03:47:442 (1,2,3,4,5) - ctrh+h this, and move it to x364. A hyper could fit here!
04:31:524 (3) - same as 00:55:707 (1)
04:47:442 (1,2,3,4) - Make this a bit more curved?
04:48:054 (5,6,7,8) - ^
04:52:340 (1) - move to x376 to make (8) hyper to it. Seems to fit IMO.
05:17:748 (2,3,1) - place (3) at x480 and (1) at x352.
05:24:714 (1,2) - Bend (1) all the way to the left, and place (2) at x238
The map is fun to play!
Sorry if not helpful mod Good luck with rank!
Topic Starter
razor sharp
Razor Sharp wrote:
hello :3 Great map!
Sorry if mod is useless, still learning!GENERAL
Change HP to 7.
AR could be 9,1 or 9,2. Seems to fit better than AR 9.
Remove Count DownMEMORY
00:41:014 (5,6) - Make them more curved for a better flow? Keeping consistency with previous objects, so no change.
00:55:707 (1) - Would sugges to breake this up into 2 more sliders, and make the player move a little here. This one is a kind of 'hold', I don't want to let the catcher moves on that part.
01:54:789 (1,2) - Bend these more to the side, to force the player to be more precise with movements. Looks not necessary imo.
02:09:177 (3) - ctrl+g this? Hmm, it doesn't lookin good for me.
02:32:748 (1) - Shorten this slider to the red tick at 02:33:054 then make a short hyper form the slider end to 02:33:207 and then place a note at the original slider end. The vocals at this point could be mapped. Kinda overmap for me, it's way too far.
02:36:269 (1,2) - Make (1) a slider to the start of (2). Then make a hyper from the slider end to 0:2:36:728 since there is a strong beat here. And make that last one into a slider. Not necessary.
02:48:360 (1) - same as 00:55:707 (1) same as 00:55:707 (1)
03:07:569 (8,1) - You can make (8) hyper to (1) to make this stream a little more interesting. Ew, I don't wanna add 1/8 hypers..
03:09:483 (1,2) - Increase the DS between these. I don't use DS on whole mapping.. and it may makes the patterns hard.
03:10:095 (3,4) - ^ ^
03:20:503 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe place (2) at x232, (3) at x312 and (4) at x232 to make this have a little more movement? Nope, it'll ruin the whole patterns. And I don't feel good at its flow.
03:28:385 (5,1) - (5) should hyper to (1), since you use the finish sound on (1). It fits more IMO. Again, 1/8 HDashes are way too much for the song.
03:37:187 (1) - You could make this more interesting by spliting it up or something? Seems kinda boring to do this stream as it is..same as 00:55:707 (1)
03:38:718 (2,1) - (2) could hyper to (1), as its a high piano sound on (1). It's impossible to find the spot, and it looks not necessary since it's calm part. If we need to emphasis, just using timing jumps is enough. Same goes to the others.
03:39:789 (3,1) - (2) could hyper to (1), same reason as above.
03:41:014 (2,1) - (2) could hyper to (1), same reason as above.
03:42:238 (4,1) - (4) could hyper to (1), same reason as above.
03:43:616 (4,1) - ^
03:44:687 (4,1) - ^
03:46:064 (4,1) - ^
03:47:442 (1,2,3,4,5) - ctrh+h this, and move it to x364. A hyper could fit here! It's 1/8 HDash.
04:31:524 (3) - same as 00:55:707 (1) :facepalm:
04:47:442 (1,2,3,4) - Make this a bit more curved?
04:48:054 (5,6,7,8) - ^ This one is my favorite, so both haven't changed.
04:52:340 (1) - move to x376 to make (8) hyper to it. Seems to fit IMO. 1/8 HDash again.
05:17:748 (2,3,1) - place (3) at x480 and (1) at x352. No, I don't wanna make jump on there.
05:24:714 (1,2) - Bend (1) all the way to the left, and place (2) at x238 It's the end of the completion of snow crystal shape, forever keeping those.
The map is fun to play!
Good luck with rank!
Rest have fixed, thanks!
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hype eli eli eli \o/
hope my mod can help even just a bit ^^;
anyway GL for approve !!!
hype eli eli eli \o/
♥~ Memory ~♥
00:33:360 - you dont added note at here since I hear eli voice at here correctly with melodic voice
00:33:667 (5) - remove this slider and try to added note at red & blue line since it's perfect for eli voice like this
00:35:809 - missing note maybe? the note 00:36:116 (5) - & 00:38:565 (5) - you can follow suggest above if you want
00:46:371 (2) - I heard a melody from red line maybe you can fix that
00:47:748 (2) - you can move this note a bit to x:240
00:48:514 (1) - same as note 00:46:371 (2) - , I heard a melody on red line
00:52:034 (5) - I was think that you can make this slider SV more higher like 1,5 for niko voice and move a bit far like x:432
00:53:412 - missing note maybe for niko voice
00:56:320 (2) - this slider kinda too stacked with slider 00:55:707 (1) - so maybe you can move slider 00:56:320 (2) - to x:136
00:56:626 (3) - if you follow suggest ^ maybe you can change this slider to 1/2 like this
01:00:912 (1,2,3,4) - maybe you can improve this note like this or this
01:11:320 (4,5) - idk , maybe if you want, this part should be 1/1 slider (if you remove note 5) but it's up to you
01:26:626 (1) - maybe you can increase this note SV too since it's fit for their voice
01:35:809 (1) - increase the SV maybe since it's fit for the hitsound
01:40:707 (5) - you dont NC this note ?
01:55:401 (1) - this slider to close with a note 01:55:095 (2) - , so try to move kinda far & increase the sv like this
02:24:177 (1) - maybe you can remove this slider and make to 1/2 slider to 02:24:483 - like this ( at note 3 , move to x:56 & make the SV to 1,5 )
02:29:687 (5) - make this note like this if you want
02:44:381 (4) - you can improve this note like this
02:44:993 (1) - if you follow suggest above, make this note SV to 1,3 and move to x:32
02:49:126 (2) - seems there's no melody or voice at there so maybe you can remove this note if you want
03:03:973 (3,4,5,6,7) - seems this place not perfect for added little streams at here, maybe you can fix that
03:08:871 (1) - make this note SV kinda higher to 1,3 for better little hard jump , example like this
03:30:299 (1,2,3,4,5) - Idk how to say at this part but maybe you can increase a bit about the distance since it's almost stacked or almost too close
03:49:279 (3) - maybe this slider you can move a little far to x:344
04:11:626 (4,2) - x: 96 & x:496 ( for a little zig zag lol )
04:16:218 (2) - ctrl+g this note then move to x:504
04:16:677 (1) - I hear a beat for blue & red line, maybe you can fix that
04:17:748 (5) - move to x:152 & you can put a note on a blue line after this note since I hear voice that fits for a note
04:32:136 (1) - maybe you can change this slider pattern like this
04:51:728 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - maybe this streams note you can put more far since the hitsound on note "1" not fit for closer with note 04:51:422 (2) -
05:07:493 (2) - not good or maybe too closer with note "1" end slider , so put to x:256
05:13:156 (1) - dont NC this note lol, you know what I mean
05:18:054 (1) - same as above lol
here extra bg if you want
00:33:667 (5) - remove this slider and try to added note at red & blue line since it's perfect for eli voice like this
00:35:809 - missing note maybe? the note 00:36:116 (5) - & 00:38:565 (5) - you can follow suggest above if you want
00:46:371 (2) - I heard a melody from red line maybe you can fix that
00:47:748 (2) - you can move this note a bit to x:240
00:48:514 (1) - same as note 00:46:371 (2) - , I heard a melody on red line
00:52:034 (5) - I was think that you can make this slider SV more higher like 1,5 for niko voice and move a bit far like x:432
00:53:412 - missing note maybe for niko voice
00:56:320 (2) - this slider kinda too stacked with slider 00:55:707 (1) - so maybe you can move slider 00:56:320 (2) - to x:136
00:56:626 (3) - if you follow suggest ^ maybe you can change this slider to 1/2 like this
01:00:912 (1,2,3,4) - maybe you can improve this note like this or this
01:11:320 (4,5) - idk , maybe if you want, this part should be 1/1 slider (if you remove note 5) but it's up to you
01:26:626 (1) - maybe you can increase this note SV too since it's fit for their voice
01:35:809 (1) - increase the SV maybe since it's fit for the hitsound
01:40:707 (5) - you dont NC this note ?
01:55:401 (1) - this slider to close with a note 01:55:095 (2) - , so try to move kinda far & increase the sv like this
02:24:177 (1) - maybe you can remove this slider and make to 1/2 slider to 02:24:483 - like this ( at note 3 , move to x:56 & make the SV to 1,5 )
02:29:687 (5) - make this note like this if you want
02:44:381 (4) - you can improve this note like this
02:44:993 (1) - if you follow suggest above, make this note SV to 1,3 and move to x:32
02:49:126 (2) - seems there's no melody or voice at there so maybe you can remove this note if you want
03:03:973 (3,4,5,6,7) - seems this place not perfect for added little streams at here, maybe you can fix that
03:08:871 (1) - make this note SV kinda higher to 1,3 for better little hard jump , example like this
03:30:299 (1,2,3,4,5) - Idk how to say at this part but maybe you can increase a bit about the distance since it's almost stacked or almost too close
03:49:279 (3) - maybe this slider you can move a little far to x:344
04:11:626 (4,2) - x: 96 & x:496 ( for a little zig zag lol )
04:16:218 (2) - ctrl+g this note then move to x:504
04:16:677 (1) - I hear a beat for blue & red line, maybe you can fix that
04:17:748 (5) - move to x:152 & you can put a note on a blue line after this note since I hear voice that fits for a note
04:32:136 (1) - maybe you can change this slider pattern like this
04:51:728 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - maybe this streams note you can put more far since the hitsound on note "1" not fit for closer with note 04:51:422 (2) -
05:07:493 (2) - not good or maybe too closer with note "1" end slider , so put to x:256
05:13:156 (1) - dont NC this note lol, you know what I mean
05:18:054 (1) - same as above lol
here extra bg if you want
hope my mod can help even just a bit ^^;
anyway GL for approve !!!
Topic Starter
Not mentioned suggestions were fixed, thx!GAMI wrote:
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hype eli eli eli \o/♥~ Memory ~♥00:33:360 - you dont added note at here since I hear eli voice at here correctly with melodic voice I've followed its guitar sounds.
00:33:667 (5) - remove this slider and try to added note at red & blue line since it's perfect for eli voice like thissame reason as above.
00:35:809 - missing note maybe? the note 00:36:116 (5) - & 00:38:565 (5) - you can follow suggest above if you want same reason as above.
00:46:371 (2) - I heard a melody from red line maybe you can fix that That's why I added bonus greenline on middle of the slider. This will give a sound effect so I'm sure.
00:47:748 (2) - you can move this note a bit to x:240 I wanna keep the distance between 00:47:748 (2,3) - as 4 spaces.
00:48:514 (1) - same as note 00:46:371 (2) - , I heard a melody on red line same reason as.
00:52:034 (5) - I was think that you can make this slider SV more higher like 1,5 for niko voice and move a bit far like x:432 not necessary imo...
00:56:320 (2) - this slider kinda too stacked with slider 00:55:707 (1) - so maybe you can move slider 00:56:320 (2) - to x:136 x : 176 instead.
00:56:626 (3) - if you follow suggest ^ maybe you can change this slider to 1/2 like this not really necessary.. I wanna keep its rhythm.
01:00:912 (1,2,3,4) - maybe you can improve this note like this or this Looks like mine is much better, just improved its basic shape.
01:11:320 (4,5) - idk , maybe if you want, this part should be 1/1 slider (if you remove note 5) but it's up to you Aren't they pretty nice? I'm sure it's okay to keep like those
01:26:626 (1) - maybe you can increase this note SV too since it's fit for their voice I don't wanna do that.. It'll ruin the map's whole style.
01:35:809 (1) - increase the SV maybe since it's fit for the hitsound Not really necessary.
01:40:707 (5) - you dont NC this note ? This one follows with others' NC rule. It's fine.
01:55:401 (1) - this slider to close with a note 01:55:095 (2) - , so try to move kinda far & increase the sv like this As I told to Razor Sharp, I don't wanna add 1/8 HDashes on whole mapset.
02:24:177 (1) - maybe you can remove this slider and make to 1/2 slider to 02:24:483 - like this ( at note 3 , move to x:56 & make the SV to 1,5 ) Looks like it's kinda overmap.
02:29:687 (5) - make this note like this if you want HDashes won't fit with its atmosphere.
02:44:381 (4) - you can improve this note like this Not really a better form imo. Same goes with below.
02:44:993 (1) - if you follow suggest above, make this note SV to 1,3 and move to x:32
03:30:299 (1,2,3,4,5) - Idk how to say at this part but maybe you can increase a bit about the distance since it's almost stacked or almost too close 4 spaced jumps are enough!
03:49:279 (3) - maybe this slider you can move a little far to x:344 Oh no, I don't like timing jumps
04:11:626 (4,2) - x: 96 & x:496 ( for a little zig zag lol ) I have better idea for this.
04:16:218 (2) - ctrl+g this note then move to x:504 anti-flow movements would fit more.
04:16:677 (1) - I hear a beat for blue & red line, maybe you can fix that Seems fine to keep this.
04:17:748 (5) - move to x:152 & you can put a note on a blue line after this note since I hear voice that fits for a note
04:32:136 (1) - maybe you can change this slider pattern like this Alright, decided to use 1/8 HDash on there.
04:51:728 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - maybe this streams note you can put more far since the hitsound on note "1" not fit for closer with note 04:51:422 (2) - Not necessary.
05:07:493 (2) - not good or maybe too closer with note "1" end slider , so put to x:256 Reworked.
here extra bg if you wantI found better one o.o
hope my mod can help even just a bit ^^;
anyway GL for approve !!!