_Unreality_ wrote:

Hello from mod req

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00:20:644 (3,4,5,1) - may be mini stream? There's so just pause for this https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/oOSn4nR.png sure, i like it
00:24:801 - add note ? https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/OOxhAbb.png doesn't feel right
01:13:633 (3,4,5) - delete combo (4) don't agree
01:50:807 (9,1) - delete combo (1) or 01:50:807 (9) - this slider finish red tick fixed slider
02:51:459 (4,5,6) - delete combo (5) don't agree
04:00:752 - and 04:01:078 - add 2 slider or 2 circle ... example https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/ga50SnC.png don't like how it sounds
04:19:665 - spinner finish fixed

A good map . I have not found more problems .

Good luck !

Kuki wrote:

[General] fixed all of this

1. Artist = ゆいこんぬ と あやぽんず＊
2. Romanised Artist = yukionnu & ayaponzu*
3. Title = モンスターズマスク
4. Romanised Title = Monsters Mask
5. Source = Nico Nico Douga
6. Tip: Vocals are the only time sliders should start on red ticks generally. Keep this in mind.

[Extra]

1. 00:02:383 (1) - This note ends on the white tick, not the blue tick (there is no beat there at all). fixed
2. 00:03:687 (3,4,5) - The slider starts on a red tick, and the triple doesn't fit. Try this instead: http://puu.sh/gRmx0/055f438bd4.jpg fixed
3. 00:05:970 (3) - This note is too hidden and hard to read. Consider something else. fixed
4. 00:06:459 (1,2) - These shouldn't be on red ticks, this fits and sounds nicer: http://puu.sh/gRmzE/2cd168d65d.jpg fixed
5. 00:09:068 (1,2) - Same thing here. fixed
6. This doesn't fit very well, it has a slider on a red tick and seems like it may be too fast for the part you're mapping. Try this instead: http://puu.sh/gRmIn/62926f183f.jpg. If you don't like that just remove/replace the red tick slider. which part?
7. 00:29:285 (3) - Make the reverse arrow silent here. hmm ok
8. 00:40:372 (1) - This isn't really mapped to a vocal, try a triple here perhaps? sure, sounds a little better
9. 03:13:144 (1) - Needs to be moved up one square to suit stream. fixed
10. 03:17:587 (2,3,4) - These are not even 1/4, these have a completely different beat to the entire song, though they fit the rhythm you shouldn't have the beat differ like this. Replace with this instead: http://puu.sh/gRnsf/a19d4b6a5c.jpg fixed
11. 04:19:665 - Here you have the spinner go completely silent. This sounds really weird when playing, you should instead make the spinner slowly fade with the song. fixed

[Red tick sliders not mapped to vocals]

1. 00:51:785 (3) this slider seems alright here
2. 00:58:633 (5) same with this one
3. 01:01:568 (2) fixed
4. 01:09:068 (1) i like this one
5. 01:19:502 (1,2) fixed
6. 01:21:785 (4,5) fixed
7. 01:29:611 (3,1) fixed
8. 01:42:328 (2) fixed
9. 01:42:981 (1,2) fixed
10. 01:45:915 (2,3) fixed
    
    I Listed some here to give you an idea of what needs to be fixed, and so you can get these out of the way easier.

Good luck getting this ranked, i'll work on my GD this weekend!

HolyNightmare wrote:

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general: I think you can change to Ar 9, there isn´t really a difference between Ar 9 and Ar 9.2
Change to Ar 9 pls :3 i think ar9.2 feels a little better to me, i'll ask some other people about their opinions on this, thanks

first of all, i already love this song <3

00:15:263 (1) - not really necessary , delete maybe ? sure

00:51:622 (2) - ^ i think this one is necessary though


00:46:404 (3) - change these jumps, feels so wrong with this circle at the slider :/ changed, should be better now

Hope this helped you at least a little bit.
Tried my best to mod but can´t really find anything, map is awesome <3
Good Luck with ranking

wendao wrote:

ah hi

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1. Metronome should be 4/4, not 3/4 fixed
2. 00:04:339 (2) - this kinda... not a good slider changed a bit
3. 00:07:763 (8) - move to 264,296 for sexier movement done
4. 00:11:187 (3) - 1 grid up? done
5. 00:21:622 (3) - better stack fixed
6. 00:22:926 (3) - this too fixed
7. 00:23:252 (5) - stack to (1)? (you did the same at 00:38:578 (4,1)) fixed, i think (?)
8. 00:27:818 (2) - and stack here too (to (4)) fixed
9. 00:29:611 - inaudible hitsound (unrankable iirc) fixed
10. 00:33:198 (3,4,5) - what about a proper triangle? seems fine to me right now
11. 00:45:426 (5,1) - this is so sudden anti-jump, I'd prefer stack instead changed
12. 01:26:187 (1) - stack the slider end properly with 01:25:372 (2) - ? got it as close as i could
13. 01:44:937 (2,3,4,5) - aa... overmapped changed
14. 01:56:187 (1) - stack the slider end properly (2nd node move to 348,204 || last node move to 392,260 fixed
15. 02:22:111 (4) - stack fixed
16. 02:34:013 (1,2,3,4,5) - overmapped here too (it's not a good use to spam 1/4 slider here) changed
17. 03:02:383 (1) - no need to NC here fixed
18. 03:19:665 - expand the break to here? good idea
19. 03:39:883 (1) - remove NC fixed
20. 03:45:752 (1) - remove whistle? sounds a little better with whistle there i think
21. 03:55:535 (1) - this is should be 1/6 notes, not 1/8 fixed

good luck!

[ Way ] wrote:

Holy shit, I uploaded this song to YouTube like 3 months ago! Didn't think anyone would map it, but it's great someone did!
Randomly found this in #modreqs btw~

<3

[General]
done all of this except i'm still trying to find some nice colors

1. This is the official site with the correct metadata: http://mashikura.net/goods/nejimaki_to_okitegami/
   You'll need someone to double check, but here's what I would suggest:
   

   Artist: ゆいこんぬ
   Romanised Artist: yuikonnu
   Title: モンスターズマスク feat. あやぽんず＊
   Romanised Title: Monster's Mask feat. ayaponzu*

2. Remove the source, this song didn't come from a show or a game. Leave it blank and don't let anyone tell you otherwise.
3. Try to find some custom combo colors to use
4. Disable letterbox during breaks since you don't have a storyboard
5. Remove your name from tags?

[Extra]
Listen to wendao about the 4/4 metronome in the timing menu http://puu.sh/gSOqF.png fixed

1. 00:03:687 (3) - i'd like to hear the major guitar strum get clicked, it's passive at the end of the slider right now though. highly recommend putting a note or slider on that red tick. i had it like this previously, i'll try it again i guess
2. 00:04:339 (2) - please kill some of the squigglies at the end of this :[ fixed
3. 00:23:252 (5,1) - this feels really weird to play. you probably won't change it, just wanted to point it out though. feels fine in my opinion
4. 00:29:285 (3) - not sure if this is unrankable, however there's no point in making this a reverse slider if you're just going to silence the reverse arrow, especially since there are vocals at that part. increase volume. fixed
5. 00:57:654 (1) - the sliders in this part until the start of kiai feel too speedy. most people would increase SV during kiai slowed sv to 1.2 from 1.5
6. 01:20:154 (3) - i was about ready to bitch at this stream but i actually liked it, wp fixed...oh
7. 01:24:557 (7) - oh god this slider, pls change D: yeah i never really knew what to do here, changed though
8. 01:28:796 (1,3) - blanket better fixed
9. 01:50:807 (1) - too many squigglies at the end makes this slider ugly fixed
10. 01:53:089 (2) - there's no drum beat on the red tick, but there's one on the blue tick. might not change though, since the triple is easier to hit yes, i originally just had the blue/white notes there but it was more awkward than simply having the triple
11. 02:10:535 (1) - starting the slider on the end of the 1 feels better imo changed, i like it too
12. 03:05:970 (3) - this is useless, sounds out of place. replace with anything in the world besides a 1/16 kick slider .-. there's a snare roll here, maybe i'll change this if more people dislike it but i personally think it's ok
13. 03:12:736 (4,1,2,3,4,1) - would be really cool to see the DS gradually rise to 1.10, instead of random distances and having the last two being 1.10 DS fixed
14. 03:17:057 (1) - from here until the break should be in 1/3 snap. i feel like this pattern would play pretty well: http://puu.sh/gSK75.jpg changed
15. 03:18:361 (1) - add a finish sure
16. 03:21:785 (1,2,3) - these slider jumps come out of nowhere immediately after a slow part in the break. replace with a stream or put the sliders closer together moved them a tad bit closer but i think they were fine already
17. 03:44:285 (1) - fix overlap with the 5 fixed
18. 03:47:709 (3) - end this on the start of the 1 fixed
19. 03:55:535 (1) - should be 1/3 snap again, continues until the next slider. this pattern plays well here: http://puu.sh/gSKrm.jpg changed, good pattern too, thanks
20. 03:59:448 (3) - don't see the point of this besides increase max score+combo. sounds really out of place same as the other one
21. 04:14:611 (1) - start the spinner on the blue tick before it fixed

I'd offer a GD since I really really like this song, but I have way too much on my hands right now to make one ;~;
Really nice map though, I hope to see this song get ranked! Good luck!

neonat wrote:

Artist should be ヘンゼル・プリマヴェーラ starring ゆいこんぬ according to the album
That should be something like Hansel & Primavera starring yuikonnu
no idea about the exact translation though

Add TOKOTOKO and 西沢さんP to tags and remove Nico Douga and yuikonnu

You could use better custom colours

Extra

Your custom hitsounds lack a finish with cymbal sounds, which would help for sounds like the one found at 00:20:970 (1) and 00:31:404 (1) just put in a finish hitsound last night
00:40:372 (10,11,1) - shouldn't be a triplet, especially when there is nothing at 00:40:453 and the focus should be on the held vocal replaced with a slider

SPOILER

00:50:970 (1) - don't curve the second curve so extremely, it looks badly done fixed
00:53:415 (9,10,1) - angle them in line, or use a curved slider instead fixed
01:15:263 (7,8,9,1) - this sort of movement, changing it would make it better, especially between 01:15:426 (8,9,1) this is personally my favorite pattern in the map so idk if i will change it
02:46:323 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - differs from the NC as 01:20:154 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) when they are the same, follow either or, but not have both fixed
03:45:752 (1) - random whistle on slider body? You never used this before good catch...fixed