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haha5957
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haha5957

Olivarus wrote:

I know you're not done in years but:
I would be really happy if I could modd your map :D
And I hope that you leave out the breaks on Insane (but I'm sure that you gonna fix that^^)
So tell me when you're done ok?
It looks pretty nice already so keep going :D
Thanks a lot for your willingness to help :D I'll definitely look for you when I'm done~

Since I'm super lazy and I'm kinda not in condition to play osu! everyday this IS gonna take long :O
LQA20Ans
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Joined November 2011
LQA20Ans
welcome back...?
haha5957
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Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
haha5957
started working on this again. reworked extra diff and will get other diffs done ASAP
Star Stream
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Star Stream
irc날먹
SPOILER
10:51 Star Stream: 좀 어색한부분이
10:51 Star Stream: 많은거같은데 박자가
10:51 haha5957: example
10:52 Star Stream: 00:41:823 (1,2,3,4,5) -
10:52 Star Stream: 00:41:823 (1,2) - 불필요
10:53 Star Stream: 01:03:963 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
10:53 haha5957: dz
10:53 haha5957: ㅇㅋ
10:53 Star Stream: 이부분
10:53 Star Stream: 1,2,3을 지우고 1/2슬라로
10:53 Star Stream: 빨간색 4번위에 스택시키면 베리굿
10:54 Star Stream: 01:46:894 (9) - 부터 01:47:434 - 까지 슬라로 처리하면 좋을거같은
10:55 Star Stream: 01:47:434 - 부분은 5%로 하고
10:55 Star Stream: 지금은 조금 심심
10:56 Star Stream: 02:41:974 (1) - 02:43:864 - 까지
10:57 Star Stream: 02:47:779 - 에 노트 하나 대충 (208,192)쯤에 넣으면 오버매핑이지만 더 좋을듯한
10:57 Star Stream: 소리는 대충 2~30%정도로하고
10:58 Star Stream: 02:53:044 (5,1) - 두개 다 1/2슬라로 처리
10:59 Star Stream: 02:54:664 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - 스트림 계속 이어기진 하는데 분위기가 다르니 빨간색 4개를 1/4슬라 리핏으로
11:00 Star Stream: http://puu.sh/gbtv9/b54275d1f6.jpg 이런느낌
11:01 haha5957: 사실 아직도 1분대의 슬라이더 모양 그리는 중
11:01 haha5957: ㅋㅋ
11:01 Star Stream: 02:54:934 - ~ 이부분 스트림도 계속 이어지는부분이기땜에 대충 이런식으로 처리하심 더 플레이하기 잼슴여http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2820271
11:01 haha5957: ㅋ.ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
11:02 Star Stream: ㅋ.ㅋ
11:02 Star Stream: 계속 쓸테니
11:02 Star Stream: 천천히 보십셔
11:03 Star Stream: 02:58:579 - (128,380)쯤에 서클 하나 놓고 02:58:714 (1) - 리핏두개
11:04 Star Stream: 03:01:414 (1) - 리핏 두개 더 하고 03:02:089 (1) - 빨간색 1,2 랑 같은 모양이 되도록 1/2슬라
11:04 Star Stream: 03:04:249 (2) - 얘도 1/2슬라로 위치 조금 수정하고
11:05 Star Stream: 거리가 너무 좁아서 1/2인줄, 1 위치가 (32,180)정도로 가게
11:07 Star Stream: 03:10:054 (9) - 1/4 리핏슬라 03:10:324 - 까지
11:08 Star Stream: 03:12:349 (1,2,1,2) - 이부분 박자는 요로코롬 http://puu.sh/gbu3u/cb3808eefa.jpg
11:08 Star Stream: 03:14:374 (1,1) - 여긴 슬라 하나보단 1 3 1 3 연타가 어울리는듯
11:08 Star Stream: 3부분을 슬라로해도대고
11:10 Star Stream: 03:15:184 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - 이부분을 03:15:184 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - 이렇게
11:10 Star Stream: 03:31:385 (6) - 1/2슬라로
11:10 Star Stream: 03:33:545 (4) - 요기도
11:11 Star Stream: 03:36:380 - 2위에 서클 하나 스택
11:11 Star Stream: 04:00:275 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - 이부분은 많이 어렵지만 원하시는대로 하시길
11:12 Star Stream: 나머지는 베리굿하네여
11:15 Star Stream: irc모딩으로 올려야징
haha5957
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Topic Starter
haha5957
thanQ berry mangchi ^o^/
Ranger
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Joined June 2011
Ranger
yup o/

[Insane]

AR 8.5로 하시는거 추천합니다

  1. 00:48:573 ~ 00:53:703 - 아까도 말했다시피 여기 너무 허전해요ㅠ 노트 좀 추가해주세요
  2. 01:38:253 (1,2,1,2) - 요즘 이런식으로 여러번 반복하는 슬라이더 안쓰더군요. 4/4 슬라이더로 여러게 만드시는거 어떠세요?
  3. 02:51:019 - 노트 추가하시는거 추천합니다
  4. 03:13:159 - ^
  5. 04:03:515 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 스트림 모양 좀 다듬어야 할것 같아요
쿠도스 날먹이라니ㅠ
haha5957
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haha5957
음 우선 AR은 확실히 8.5로 변경할게염! 그 허전한 부분도 사실 귀찮고 아이디어가 안떠올라서 대충 찍어놓고 나중에 해야지 하고 넘겼는데 역시 아니나 다를까 너무 티나네염ㅋㅋㅋ

나중에 되면 고칠게여! 그리고 1/4 리핏 슬라이더들이 반응이 안좋네여 흑흑ㅠㅠ 그거 말곤 방법이 없는뎅....
ktgster
Elite Mapper
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Joined November 2008
ktgster
log
20:05 haha5957: hello :O
20:05 ktgster: hi
20:05 haha5957: uh.uh.
20:05 haha5957: are you open for the testplay at the moment?
20:05 haha5957: ._.
20:05 ktgster: sure
20:06 haha5957: thanks
20:06 *haha5957 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/512000 xi - Freedom Dive]
20:06 haha5957: whatever diff you wish
20:06 haha5957: both very appreciated
20:06 haha5957: ,O.,
20:11 ktgster: that stream at the end
20:11 ktgster: is very inconsistent in difficulty
20:12 haha5957: yeah
20:12 haha5957: kinda wanna insist though
20:12 haha5957: until it gets serious
20:12 ktgster: it IS out of place
20:12 ktgster: like, 2 times already, these were mapped with 1/2's
20:12 ktgster: its a nice map overall
20:13 ktgster: some rhythms feel like something RLC would use
20:13 haha5957: :O
20:13 haha5957: how do you think of the AR?
20:13 haha5957: some calls for 9.4
20:13 ktgster: its fine, you could even put it at 9
20:13 haha5957: ok ;D
20:13 ktgster: i actually would prefer you to map the short version
20:13 ktgster: thats just me though
20:14 ktgster: and im always a nitpicker who never agrees on any map being perfect
20:14 haha5957: i also thought about that but short version is little different
20:14 haha5957: like it feels like different music and i dont like it
20:14 haha5957: xD
20:14 ktgster: like
20:14 ktgster: 01:30:693 - this part is kinda just lazy
20:15 haha5957: lol
20:15 haha5957: got caught
20:15 haha5957: xDDD
20:15 ktgster: instead of sliders, you coudl just use a circle
20:15 ktgster: and you'd be surprised on how more initiative it is
20:16 ktgster: some of your streams don't look very good at all
20:16 haha5957: like
20:16 ktgster: 02:25:774 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - this for instance, it looks like you tried to make this round
20:16 ktgster: and you get these really weird curves instead
20:16 haha5957: yeah
20:16 haha5957: will change
20:17 ktgster: 03:04:654 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - 5 and 6 have a weird angle change
20:17 ktgster: even if it was intentional, shouldn't the angle change be at 5?
20:18 haha5957: correct
20:18 haha5957: ill actually just make it little more smooth i think
20:19 ktgster: im not too happy about the NCing but its fine
20:19 haha5957: which?
20:19 haha5957: the last slider?
20:20 ktgster: nah just the general NCing style here
20:20 ktgster: 00:25:893 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - although is this really necessary?
20:20 haha5957: :O
20:20 ktgster: i swear you could make this drain 7 with these NC's from drain 5.9
20:20 haha5957: its the acceleration though
20:20 haha5957: too often?
20:21 ktgster: well i don't really use NCing for any speed changes really
20:21 ktgster: i just stylized them
20:21 ktgster: again, this is just me though
20:21 ktgster: guess thats it for Universe, i might mod this when you get some more mods
20:22 ktgster: now this map seems fun so i'll do insane too
20:22 *ktgster is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/512000 xi - Freedom Dive [Insane]]
20:22 haha5957: ok thanks :O
20:27 ktgster: i swear, the beginning jumps are harder than Universe
20:27 haha5957: lol
20:27 ktgster: also, im pretty sure theres some mod going to tell you to raise this to AR 9
20:28 haha5957: hmmm
20:28 haha5957: kinda agreed
20:28 haha5957: i mean
20:28 haha5957: i know this is not prefered but
20:28 haha5957: i want my map to increase difficulty as map gets closer to end
20:28 haha5957: so its kinda hard to pick an AR
20:29 ktgster: [https://osu.ppy.sh/s/280329 who cares, this map murders your eyes and soul]
20:29 ktgster: well AR aside, technical problems
20:29 ktgster: 00:38:043 (4,5) - what?
20:30 haha5957: nonsense antijump i guess
20:30 haha5957: didnt notice
20:31 ktgster: 00:41:013 (1,2) - weird jump, a bit too big compared to your previous ones before
20:32 ktgster: 00:48:978 (2) - almost overlap, probably just bad placement or intentional
20:32 haha5957: i think i just wantedto stack with previous circle there
20:32 haha5957: but will fixi think
20:33 ktgster: 01:20:973 (1,2,3,4,5) - this pattern, looks pretty rad
20:33 haha5957: fixed
20:33 ktgster: and i mean rad, i mean... bad
20:33 haha5957: too radical?
20:33 ktgster: maybe
20:33 ktgster: smooth it up
20:33 ktgster: 01:30:693 - lazy part 2?
20:33 ktgster: did you like, do this on all the diffs?
20:34 haha5957: actually insane and unvierse are onlytwodiffs that are done now so..
20:34 haha5957: but i couldnt get any other ideas though
20:34 haha5957: well i guess I need to think more on that part
20:34 ktgster: circles man
20:34 haha5957: cuz i actually was lazy on that part
20:34 haha5957: xD
20:34 haha5957: hmm
20:34 ktgster: sliders only really limit your creativity on that part in all honesty
20:35 ktgster: and just for funzies, 01:30:828 (2) - move 1 pixel to the left
20:36 ktgster: 01:55:534 (1,2) - shouldn't this be 1/2?
20:37 haha5957: i somehow felt the blue tick for 1 though
20:37 haha5957: 1/2 seems much legit for (2) anyways
20:37 ktgster: well i can hear the blue tick
20:37 ktgster: then again, im so used to the song's melody that i kinda forget which ones are 1/1's and which ones are 1/2's
20:38 ktgster: and speaking of which, some of your 1/3's could be a bit tricky for players unfamiliar to the song
20:39 haha5957: screw it! who does not know the freedom dive(goes crazy)
20:39 haha5957: but then full of 1/2 seems too uh
20:39 haha5957: what is it called
20:39 haha5957: mono...some bigword
20:39 ktgster: 1/2 spam
20:39 haha5957: yeah.that
20:40 ktgster: 03:00:334 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - k 17 note stream here
20:40 ktgster: only 2 exists in this whole difficulty
20:40 ktgster: and that other one is right at the end
20:40 haha5957: yeah right
20:40 haha5957: without that the star diff falls to like 4.74 i think
20:40 ktgster: so essentially, thats a spike in difficulty
20:40 haha5957: uhm.
20:41 haha5957: actually
20:41 ktgster: and its not really something i'd like in the middle of that
20:41 haha5957: yeah..umm
20:41 ktgster: as for the 2nd one, you can keep that
20:43 haha5957: uhh too hard
20:43 haha5957: there are two parts that i want it to be kinda
20:43 haha5957: highlighted?
20:43 haha5957: maybe difficulty spike
20:43 haha5957: one is that 17k stream
20:43 haha5957: another is the last kiai
20:43 ktgster: well even in the middle piano section, its a bit too easy compared to that part
20:44 haha5957: (throughout the whole mapset though)
20:44 ktgster: i guess you could spice up some parts of it
20:44 ktgster: now where the hell is that note
20:44 haha5957: huh
20:44 ktgster: im trying to find a 1/4 slider that lead straight into a slider
20:45 haha5957: oh
20:45 haha5957: last of piano part i think
20:45 ktgster: well can't reallly seem to find it so i guess thats that
20:46 ktgster: its a nice map, not much i could find...
20:46 haha5957: 03:08:704 (4,1) -
20:46 haha5957: this i guess?
20:46 ktgster: no not that
20:46 ktgster: it had no repeats
20:47 ktgster: now telling you every detail would kinda just take forever so i guess this is where im going to leave it
20:47 ktgster: expect a long mod of suggestions someday
20:47 haha5957: yeah thanks it helped a lot
20:47 haha5957: do you want a kudosu for this?
20:47 haha5957: i think it deserves
20:48 ktgster: well i don't really mind but okay
haha5957
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haha5957
applied pretty much everything.. kinda wanna insist the last long stream though, i agree with the diff spike issue but its kinda intended there..

at least tried to make it bit more doable by adding one 1/2 inbetween(it resulted in dropping star rating by 0.05 lol)
Lami
1,756 posts
Joined June 2011
Lami
[Universe]

ar9.5

옛날 슬라 그리는 식이라 그런지 슬라가 안예쁘......쿨럭

00:03:753 (2) - 더 예뻣으면 좋겠음
01:15:573 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 심심함
02:47:307 (8,9,1) - ^
02:45:214 (17) - remove
03:06:207 (1,2) - 요기랑 박자 같게 02:58:714 (1) -
03:16:467 (8,1) - 스트림이랑 디스턴스 스냅 같게
04:12:628 (16,1) -
03:18:289 (7,8,9,1,2,3,4) - 둥글게 꺽이는데가 같았으면 좋겟어요
03:59:195 (1,2) - 멜로디가 올라가는 부분이라 여기처럼 노트 4개 썻으면 좋겠어요 03:41:915 (1,2,3,4) -
haha5957
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haha5957
ar9.5랑 심심하다시는 부분 뺴고는 고쳤으염! 그 심심하다는 데는 사실 딱히 아이디어가...
nxthxn
nxthxn
Best Freedom Dive map Ive seen.
That section pass in the hard difficulty is way too long.
haha5957
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haha5957
haha thanks xD

Hard and normal is WIP though... will try to finish asap
haha5957
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haha5957
ok..

Seems like I will also need easy to fit the difficulty gap...
nxthxn
nxthxn
Is the Hard gonna have streams? if so, PLEASE NOOOOOO
haha5957
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haha5957
star rating goal is somewhere around

universe : 6.3
Insane : 5.0
Hard : 4.1
Normal : 2.8
Easy : 1.8


hard is very unlikely to have 1/4 streams but maybe some triples or 5ks on the very highlights i guess...?

I will not have time till next weekend anyways :<
nxthxn
nxthxn
What has happened to the Easy? You have to click, like 6 notes at a time?
nxthxn
nxthxn
Hard is probably more like Hyper.
All the Hard songs I've seen are 2.50 to 3.50 stars. Anything above that is probably Hyper.
Little
2,509 posts
Joined November 2012
Little
Hi, from your queue.
Insane:
Replay: http://puu.sh/gBTir/bbd3e0cb3d.osr
Screenshot: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2894091
Phos-
773 posts
Joined December 2012
Phos-
Hi, for your queue!
Insane:
Replay: http://puu.sh/gBViE/3f8f0ecc04.osr
Screenshot: http://puu.sh/gBV7D/25f74459ec.jpg
Pretty nice map ^^
Spayyce
693 posts
Joined December 2013
Spayyce
Hey, from your queue ! :D
Insane:
Replay: http://puu.sh/gBVLJ/1cfb620df0.osr
Screenshot: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2894186
Kin
2,618 posts
Joined August 2010
Kin
I'm too noob to play the Universe diff ;w;

idk how to play

Insane :
Replay : https://puu.sh/gBX2M/a58979345c.osr
screenshot : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2894213
Krfawy
1,374 posts
Joined March 2012
Krfawy
Hello! I'm Krfawy and I am posting my replay and screenshots from two highest diffs.

DL link (both - replay and pics included in the rar-pack): *CLICK*

*Note from the tester - those are my very first attemptings on both Insane and Universe difficulties. Sorry that I sucked at them, but as you can notice I am not a good player and not a high-ranked one especially when I do not really play osu! anymore. Quite catchy mapset, but I liked both diffs!
Anxient
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Joined June 2014
Anxient
i cant mod something i cant play :<
Insane

00:02:133 (1,2) - better blanket
00:25:893 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - 4 hit combo? (1,2,3,4 - 1,2,3,4)
00:28:593 (3) - why 1/4 slider? imo 1/2 better
00:30:078 (5,1) - better blanket
00:44:388 (2,3,4) - move all of these to start at white tick, delete 00:45:198 (5) -
00:49:518 (4,1) - better blanket
02:04:174 (1,2,3,4) - curve stream plz?
02:50:074 (3) - angle to the right (rotate 13 degrees)
03:05:734 (1) - move to x88 y332
03:37:055 (1,2,3,4) - make 1/2 sliders? owo
03:54:875 (3) - bring to x328 y316
04:17:015 (5) - NC? ;v

good luck!
haha5957
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Topic Starter
haha5957
thanks! fixed most of them ouo
pkk
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pkk
I really like how you mapped 02:50:614 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - in your Universe diff, the sliders and flow are super sexyyyy

keep up the good work (ﾉ´ヮ´)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧
Anxient
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Anxient
haha5957
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haha5957

pkk wrote:

I really like how you mapped 02:50:614 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - in your Universe diff, the sliders and flow are super sexyyyy

keep up the good work (ﾉ´ヮ´)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧
thank you ! :D

Anxient wrote:

lol 666 ownz
haha5957
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haha5957
changed difficulty name

Insane -> Extra
Hard -> Insane
Normal -> Hard
Easy -> Normal


..due to them being much harder than i expected
haha5957
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haha5957
reworked insane
Arphimigon
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Arphimigon

Damn. 4 mins 6 diffs!
[General]
Has potential. Quite a few flow problems and difficulty spikes but nothing that can't be fixed with a little elbow grease.
Not very nice on the eyes (or the ears cus freedom dive) though overall, probably would need a look at again to fix design quality later on.

[Hard]
This has way too many curves. It's mainly the same kind of patterning throughout the whole map, very little changing in the sliders and/or patterns.
00:02:133 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Hitting all of these on the red tick felt weird, just plain off.
00:21:573 (1,2) - Make these curves more similar?
00:42:633 (5) - Expected a 3/4 reverse heh
00:49:653 (1,2,3,4) - These kinda look badly placed. Would make into a nicer curve.
Better placement
00:52:893 (1,2,3) - Y u no triangle dis
01:02:613 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Haha okay hard reading </3
01:36:093 (1,2) - Should both be on x:363 y:236
01:40:413 (3) - NC for consistency with Insane
02:04:579 (4) - Is there a reason to stop the flow here when the music is just getting emphasized? I would get this note out from under this rock!
02:07:954 (2) - ^
03:15:724 (3,4,5) - Triangle dis pls
03:42:995 (2) - The DS from before and after this should be the same.
03:48:125 (1,1) - Ends and starts should stack, looks bad like this

[Insane]
Not bad at all, just weird to look at. Off points here and there but no big flaw to point out.
00:03:618 (2) - I don't like this note in rhythm terms. Feels better if the last slider is a reverse.
00:07:533 (5) - Looks ugly!
00:08:613 (1,2) - Curves should be similar, they look weird being different.
00:10:503 (4) - x:256 y:280 for triangle
00:20:763 (4) - Not stacked on end of slider.
00:35:343 (4) - Why is this so far away from being straight ahead of the slider? Make it closer.
00:53:298 (2) - Needs a little spread from the last slider. Looks crammed.
00:58:293 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Ruins flow on a fairly upbeat section to have notes under sliders!
01:06:461 - Note here, you had a double before and its weird to not have one now.
01:11:253 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - These overlaps make it boring. I would suggest having at least a small DS on them to keep people movin'
01:12:333 (1,2,3,4) - Meh triangle, you can do this better!
01:15:303 (4,3) - Slider ends overlap bad!
01:18:273 (2,3) - Not stacked right.
01:46:894 (1) - Not symettrical!
01:49:661 - Same thing about doubles
01:58:774 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Some DS please? A little?
02:23:614 (1,2,3,4) - Should all be equally spaced
02:49:669 (4,5,6,7) - Plain weird to read.
03:18:694 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - The whole map didn't have hardly above 5 singletap 1/2s at any point. This is like a difficulty spike.
03:20:584 (7,8,9) - Would make it follow the last slider better by moving more left.
03:52:040 (4,5,6) - Raise a little please <3
03:52:715 (7) - Should curve around last slider body.
04:06:215 (1,2,3,4) - Would make all these increase DS over time, since the it fits the music. Slider 3 ruins it.

[Extra]
Plays fine overall, but the design quality lacks eye candy! Since the map isn't into nazimod state yet though I wont mention that stuff.
00:03:213 (1,2) - Fix blanket
00:04:293 (1) - Ewww make a better wave cmon
00:24:273 (2) - Make the curve, more curved! Flows into next curve more!
00:25:083 (2,3,4,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Idea is good, layout is bad. You could make them all blanket, all symmetrical, use rotational symmetry etc. This isn't great.
00:59:778 (2,2) - Try to make centered it possible
01:36:498 (3,4) - These just look wrong placed here, you have loads of options.
02:01:474 (3) - Ruins flow to have this short slider here. Long sliders all the way.
02:53:044 (2) - k
03:10:054 (1) - Reverse 1/4 sliders are okay, if not clustered. Curves make this happen. I would just make straight.
04:04:055 (1) - Doesn't flow all too well from stream, curve with it!
04:11:615 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - Longest stream of map in the last 10 seconds. Damn that is gonna piss many off.

[Universe]
Same problem as above.
00:10:638 - Sounds better if this is removed.
00:15:093 (1) - Curve last slider body.
00:27:513 (1) - Shouldn't be curved so much.
00:30:753 (4,5,6) - Weird flow here.
00:33:858 (2,1) - Should be directly ahead of last slider. x:349 y:104 works.
01:14:763 (2) - You sure about not using ctrl-g on this?
01:31:908 (4) - Should a flip of 01:31:098 (1) -
01:32:448 (6) - ^ with note 5
01:46:894 (9) - Make end curve neater, after the loop section
01:57:964 (2) - Flow shouldn't be stopped like this.
02:05:794 (4,5) - This plays baaaaaaaad omg fix why is it so high! It doesn't even flow nice seriously omg okay I'll stop ranting
02:17:134 (1) - End red point looks weird and feels unnecessary
02:50:479 (9,10,1) - Can't tell if i like this sharp turn, can't you curve the whole stream into this?
02:51:559 (5,1,2,3,4,5) - Imo they get too spaced, esp 4 because of the angle change.
02:56:554 (3,4,5) - Fix DS
03:01:414 (1,2,3,4,5) - Curve more upwards please.
03:03:979 (1,2) - Feels wrong with rhythm, plays bad regarding spacing and flow, delete redo sorry
03:05:734 (1) - Face more down
03:10:054 (9) - ^ more up/left
03:11:809 (4,1,2,3,4) - Strongly advise against these types of sliders to streams, they feel weird and are often a cause of a combo break.
03:15:184 (3,4,5) - Eh could be better
03:30:575 (1,2,3,4) - Not a proper curve.
03:37:730 (11,12,1) - Turn feels a little too sharp here.
03:41:105 (5,5) - Not stacked right!
03:45:155 (1,2,3) - Feels too far for me, and the pressure of the last jumps adds to it.
04:11:615 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - SUDDEN SPACING INCREASE yeah keep if you like idc

gl with this!
(this mod only took like 2 hours yay)
haha5957
1,433 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
haha5957
SPOILER

Arphimigon wrote:


Damn. 4 mins 6 diffs!
[General]
Has potential. Quite a few flow problems and difficulty spikes but nothing that can't be fixed with a little elbow grease.
Not very nice on the eyes (or the ears cus freedom dive) though overall, probably would need a look at again to fix design quality later on.

[Hard]
This has way too many curves. It's mainly the same kind of patterning throughout the whole map, very little changing in the sliders and/or patterns.
00:02:133 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Hitting all of these on the red tick felt weird, just plain off.
00:21:573 (1,2) - Make these curves more similar?
00:42:633 (5) - Expected a 3/4 reverse heh
00:49:653 (1,2,3,4) - These kinda look badly placed. Would make into a nicer curve.
Better placement
00:52:893 (1,2,3) - Y u no triangle dis
01:02:613 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Haha okay hard reading </3
01:36:093 (1,2) - Should both be on x:363 y:236
01:40:413 (3) - NC for consistency with Insane
02:04:579 (4) - Is there a reason to stop the flow here when the music is just getting emphasized? I would get this note out from under this rock!
02:07:954 (2) - ^
03:15:724 (3,4,5) - Triangle dis pls
03:42:995 (2) - The DS from before and after this should be the same.
03:48:125 (1,1) - Ends and starts should stack, looks bad like this

[Insane]
Not bad at all, just weird to look at. Off points here and there but no big flaw to point out.
00:03:618 (2) - I don't like this note in rhythm terms. Feels better if the last slider is a reverse.
00:07:533 (5) - Looks ugly!
00:08:613 (1,2) - Curves should be similar, they look weird being different.
00:10:503 (4) - x:256 y:280 for triangle
00:20:763 (4) - Not stacked on end of slider.
00:35:343 (4) - Why is this so far away from being straight ahead of the slider? Make it closer.
00:53:298 (2) - Needs a little spread from the last slider. Looks crammed.
00:58:293 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Ruins flow on a fairly upbeat section to have notes under sliders!
01:06:461 - Note here, you had a double before and its weird to not have one now.
01:11:253 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - These overlaps make it boring. I would suggest having at least a small DS on them to keep people movin'
01:12:333 (1,2,3,4) - Meh triangle, you can do this better!
01:15:303 (4,3) - Slider ends overlap bad!
01:18:273 (2,3) - Not stacked right.
01:46:894 (1) - Not symettrical!
01:49:661 - Same thing about doubles
01:58:774 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Some DS please? A little?
02:23:614 (1,2,3,4) - Should all be equally spaced
02:49:669 (4,5,6,7) - Plain weird to read.
03:18:694 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - The whole map didn't have hardly above 5 singletap 1/2s at any point. This is like a difficulty spike.
03:20:584 (7,8,9) - Would make it follow the last slider better by moving more left.
03:52:040 (4,5,6) - Raise a little please <3
03:52:715 (7) - Should curve around last slider body.
04:06:215 (1,2,3,4) - Would make all these increase DS over time, since the it fits the music. Slider 3 ruins it.

[Extra]
Plays fine overall, but the design quality lacks eye candy! Since the map isn't into nazimod state yet though I wont mention that stuff.
00:03:213 (1,2) - Fix blanket
00:04:293 (1) - Ewww make a better wave cmon
00:24:273 (2) - Make the curve, more curved! Flows into next curve more!
00:25:083 (2,3,4,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Idea is good, layout is bad. You could make them all blanket, all symmetrical, use rotational symmetry etc. This isn't great.
00:59:778 (2,2) - Try to make centered it possible
01:36:498 (3,4) - These just look wrong placed here, you have loads of options.
02:01:474 (3) - Ruins flow to have this short slider here. Long sliders all the way.
02:53:044 (2) - k
03:10:054 (1) - Reverse 1/4 sliders are okay, if not clustered. Curves make this happen. I would just make straight.
04:04:055 (1) - Doesn't flow all too well from stream, curve with it!
04:11:615 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - Longest stream of map in the last 10 seconds. Damn that is gonna piss many off.

[Universe]
Same problem as above.
00:10:638 - Sounds better if this is removed.
00:15:093 (1) - Curve last slider body.
00:27:513 (1) - Shouldn't be curved so much.
00:30:753 (4,5,6) - Weird flow here.
00:33:858 (2,1) - Should be directly ahead of last slider. x:349 y:104 works.
01:14:763 (2) - You sure about not using ctrl-g on this?
01:31:908 (4) - Should a flip of 01:31:098 (1) -
01:32:448 (6) - ^ with note 5
01:46:894 (9) - Make end curve neater, after the loop section
01:57:964 (2) - Flow shouldn't be stopped like this.
02:05:794 (4,5) - This plays baaaaaaaad omg fix why is it so high! It doesn't even flow nice seriously omg okay I'll stop ranting
02:17:134 (1) - End red point looks weird and feels unnecessary
02:50:479 (9,10,1) - Can't tell if i like this sharp turn, can't you curve the whole stream into this?
02:51:559 (5,1,2,3,4,5) - Imo they get too spaced, esp 4 because of the angle change.
02:56:554 (3,4,5) - Fix DS
03:01:414 (1,2,3,4,5) - Curve more upwards please.
03:03:979 (1,2) - Feels wrong with rhythm, plays bad regarding spacing and flow, delete redo sorry
03:05:734 (1) - Face more down
03:10:054 (9) - ^ more up/left
03:11:809 (4,1,2,3,4) - Strongly advise against these types of sliders to streams, they feel weird and are often a cause of a combo break.
03:15:184 (3,4,5) - Eh could be better
03:30:575 (1,2,3,4) - Not a proper curve.
03:37:730 (11,12,1) - Turn feels a little too sharp here.
03:41:105 (5,5) - Not stacked right!
03:45:155 (1,2,3) - Feels too far for me, and the pressure of the last jumps adds to it.
04:11:615 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - SUDDEN SPACING INCREASE yeah keep if you like idc

gl with this!
(this mod only took like 2 hours yay)
Thanks very much for the modding and your 2 hours xD

i fixed 90% of the things, most of minuses being the difficulty spike issue.. idk if you noticed but the spikes occurs on pretty much same part of the music (which kinda means those are intended and I honestly wanna insist)
_handholding
3,109 posts
Joined April 2014
_handholding
Hi, your m4m request

Hard
00:04:023 (4) - place it just above slider end so the approach circle is clearer
00:33:858 - Myabe add a note here for better flow?
01:54:859 - ^
02:04:579 (4) - I'd recommended placing this note on top of slider (5). It makes it alot easier to read or in the middle of it
02:47:239 (3) - Swap this around this with the slider at 02:47:509 (1). It would give better flow
03:35:435 (3) - Is the DS from (2,3) a bit too big for this difficulty
03:55:955 (2) - Maybe replace this slider with 2 notes?
04:15:935 (5) - I think it would be better to take out 5 and let the (4) finish at 04:16:948

Insane
02:20:509 - Start NC here instead of at 02:20:374 (1)
02:46:834 (3) - Finish slider at 02:47:239
02:47:509 (4) - Start slider at 02:47:374 and finish at 02:47:644
03:05:734 (1) - I think this should finish at 03:06:072

I cant really mod the normal tills its finished and the other 2 difficulties are too hard for me. Hope this mod was useful
Want 2 Buy Avon
264 posts
Joined February 2014
Want 2 Buy Avon

[Hard]
  1. 00:09:693 (3,4,5,6) - This square isn't even, it varries only a little bit but you could fix it up if you wanted
  2. 00:11:043 (2,3) - I don't think this flows that great since the slider goes up and not towards the next note
  3. 00:14:553 (5,1,2) - The little tiny overlap looks a bit messy, and the 5 doesn't flow very nicely into the 1, maybe angle the 5 some so it flows better
  4. 00:37:773 (1,2) - The blanket could be fixed a tiny bit towards the tail
  5. 01:03:153 (3) - I'm not a fan of this many repeats because it could be made more interesting with 2 1/2 sliders but that might be just me
  6. 01:05:853 (4,5) - These could flow better, atm the feel like they flow kinda strangely
  7. 01:18:813 (3) - This curve feels kinda harsh compared to all the other sliders around it, maybe make it not as curved to fit in
  8. 01:19:893 (1,2) - This blanket could be improved
  9. 01:33:258 (2,4) - These could be blanketed
  10. 01:34:068 (3,4) - Same with these
  11. 01:37:983 (4,1) - This blanket could be touched up
  12. 01:38:253 (1,2,1) - To me, 1/1 sliders that repeat more than once feels like an older mapping technique and I'm not a fan of them, but idk if others have the same problem that I do with them so you might be able to keep them
  13. 01:46:894 (1,1) - This blanket could be better
  14. 01:47:704 (1,1) - And this one
  15. 01:46:894 (1) - umm I'm not sure why the slider end is set to 5% to be honest, I feel like there should be some kind of sound
  16. 01:49:594 (4,2) - This slight overlap isn't very nice to look at
  17. 01:57:694 (4,5) - Could be blanketed
  18. 02:17:134 (1,1) - This overlap isn't good looking either
  19. 02:21:454 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - You could use a circle's approach circle as a template to make this a smooth curve
  20. 02:44:134 (1,3) - I'd blanket these because it'd look better to me
  21. 02:51:762 (2) - Skipping the downbeat and having this offbeat slider is pretty weird to me, it'd make it feel really odd to play
  22. 02:54:934 (1,2) - This blanket could be better
  23. 03:03:574 (1,2) - I'd move these apart a bit or blanket them
  24. 03:12:754 (1,2,3,4) - You could make this into a square using the tail end of the slider
  25. 03:18:694 (1,2) - You could break these up some. the amount of repeats might be not that great imo
  26. 03:28:955 (1) - And I don't know why this slider head has 5% volume either
  27. 03:32:735 (3,4,5,1) - You could make this into a square with the slider tail too
  28. 04:02:975 (4,1) - Blanket maybe?
  29. 04:15:395 (4,5) - Again I don't like this many repeats

[Insane]
  1. 00:07:533 (5,6) - Blanket could be better
  2. 00:22:923 (4,5) - You could move these some to blanket them
  3. 00:24:273 (2,1) - Could be blanketed better
  4. 00:41:013 (1,2) - ^
  5. 00:44:793 (3,4) - I'd make these the same angle since 1 and 2 are
  6. 00:57:213 (1,2) - Blanket could be better here too
  7. 01:09:093 (1,2) - ^
  8. 01:09:633 (2,3,1) - These overlaps aren't very nice looking in my opinion
  9. 01:14:223 (2,1) - Blanket could be touched up some
  10. 01:19:893 (1,2) - These could be blanketed
  11. 01:30:693 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This whole section is all straight lines and could be a lot more intersting I think
  12. 01:38:253 (1,2,1,2) - Still think 1/1 sliders that repeat more than once aren't that good
  13. 01:46:894 (1) - I think a better way to emphasis the sound here than making the hitsound 5% is you could decrease the slider velocity. same with the hard
  14. 01:49:594 (2) - It seems odd to not stack this one when almost every other time in the song the notes are stacked
  15. 01:52:294 (1,2) - This blanket could be improved
  16. 01:59:314 (1,2,3) - This feels like it doesn't flow well
  17. 02:09:574 (1,2) - Blanket could be better
  18. 02:25:774 (1,2,3,4) - These should all be the same angle and they aren't
  19. 03:40:295 (1,3) - Could be blanketed better
  20. 03:51:702 (3,6) - You could blanket these if you wanted to
The extra and universe diffs are beyond what I can mod, sorry ;w;
Sylas
Elite Mapper
1,022 posts
Joined January 2014
Sylas
Hi ^^ M4M from your queue

Universe


The overall difficulty seems pretty harsh, I would recommend lowering it to at least an 8.5
00:03:753 (2) - If you move the middle anchor point to x:212 y:20 the slider should blanket 00:03:213 (1) better
00:37:773 (1,2,3,4) - I think the map should play a bit better if you make the spacing in this stream the same as in 00:39:933 (1,2,3,4)
00:41:013 (6) - NC?
01:14:763 (2) - The flow could be improved by rotating this slider by about 20ish (selection centre)
01:22:053 (17) - NC
01:46:894 (9) - NC and also I don't think it's rankable to have a silent note like this slider's end, the volume has to be at least 25%
02:18:484 (2,3,4,5,6) - For aesthetic purposes, making this pattern a perfect triangle would be better (just move 3 to about x:148 y:204)
02:25:774 (9) - I think it's better if you add a NC here
02:50:479 (9,10,1) - I don't really like the way this stream curves at the end, consider curving the whole stream so it's more smooth
02:56:824 (5,6,7,8,1) - ^
03:20:854 (17) - NC?
03:43:535 (1) - Move this slider to about x:260 y:184 so it blankets 03:43:265 (5) better
04:17:015 (17) - NC

Extra


Really nice diff I don't think theres much you can improve here
but the overall difficulty seems a bit harsh, maybe lower it to an even 8?
And also a NC would be nice here 03:20:854 (3)

Insane


01:09:633 (2,3,1) - I don't like this overlap, you could try moving 01:10:173 (1) to about x:340 y:112 so it's right under 01:09:903 (3), I think it plays better
01:06:798 (4,1) - Someone could confuse these notes as 1/4 instead of 1/2 since right before you have the same pattern but with 1/4 notes instead (01:18:273 (2,3))
01:18:678 (4,1) - ^
02:48:454 (1,2,3,4) - Make each of these sliders repeat one more time, I think it sounds better
Can't find anything else important

I'm not good at modding easier difficulties so I guess this concludes my mod
Gl with this map :D
haha5957
1,433 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
haha5957
thanks for the moddings! some major things i remember i didnt fix :


flow issues : I personally like current flow if i didn't fix it

spacing issues : most of them were intended if i didn't fix it


but w/e most of them are fixed! thanks again!
Mortem
690 posts
Joined July 2013
Mortem
hello. m4m

General:
Enable & set some custom colors.
Remove countdown

Normal:
01:09:903 (2,3) - Fix blanket.
01:14:493 (1) - Remove NC.
01:32:853 (1,1) - Maybe remove new combos and make it like you did here (with combos) 03:31:655 (1,2,1,2,3) -
01:45:814 (2) - ^
01:55:534 (1) - ^
01:56:884 (3) - Add NC.
01:57:694 (1) - Remove NC.
02:47:104 (2) - Maybe move it little bit up to make a blanket? (+rearrangeit)?
02:58:309 (2) - Can be blanketed better. (Just play with those grey dots on slider)
03:07:354 (1) - Remove NC. (you have in this part combos like 1,2,1,2,1,2,..)
03:47:855 (1,2) - Same as in the similar parts (remove NC)
03:52:175 (1) - ^
04:05:135 (1) - ^

Hard:
01:14:493 (5) - Blanket.
01:49:054 (3) - Unsnapped slider!

Insane & Extra seems fine.

Universe:
02:05:861 (5) - Unsnapped slider!
03:04:047 (2) - ^
03:42:455 (1) - ^

Amazing mapset!
Hope that helps.
Good Luck!!!
haha5957
1,433 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
haha5957
fixed pretty much everything! thank you OuO
nxthxn
nxthxn
ITS DONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Now this just needs to get ranked.
Bara-
11,955 posts
Joined April 2013
Bara-


Such a good map, I hope my mod will help you, as this map is of really high quality

[Extra]
00:05:373 (1,2) - Try to blanket these 2, it'll look better (move to 128:256)
00:33:858 (2) - Move to 340:152. It looks better when circles have the same distance from the previous note to the next note (here it is 1.20 in both ways)
00:57:213 (1,2) - Improve blanket, you can move (2) to 352:76 (Also gets the aesthetics from ^^)
01:00:723 (2) - Improve blanket, move to 472:136
01:10:038 (5) - Improve blanket, move to 460:189
01:22:053 (5) - Consider adding a NC, because the start of the end
01:38:253 (1,2,1,2) - These sliders don't feel nice, as they are long, many repeats and feel boring. Try to add more node to the slider to make a feel nicer, I recommend you to add 2/3 red nodes to it, and some grey nodes to make it look nicer
01:49:864 (4) - Make this a little less curvy to improve the blanket with (3)
02:05:659 (2) - Move to 344:296 ti improve blanket (1 grid down)
02:06:874 (3) - Same as ^^, as those were stacked before, so I guess you will change this as well
02:22:939 (2) - Move to 202:257 to improve blanket
03:12:754 (4) - Add a reverse? Looks/Sounds better to me
04:14:045 (2,3,4) - This plays weird. The previous patterns were all ctrl >> notes, but this is not, I strongly recommend to change (3) so it gets the same effect

Sorry for such small mod, I really like this map, thus you get a star :3
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