Hello, Atsuro! From my queue, sorry for the delay.
Didn't have time to mod Insane because it's a long song >_> so i just modded the first three diffs.
That's all, Good luck~
[> General <]
- - Timing Check: The second offset should be on 15,595, adjust with 180BPM, and remove the next two offsets. With this suggestion, it is confirmed the timing is correct.
- - The Hard and Insane spread gap is quite huge. But if you optionally do this, then it's not an issue to be fixed. Well, be careful when other modders after me will mention this for sure.
- - You should change the red combo colour to avoid inflicting with the background since it's also red. Just change to dark red or find a different colour.
- - 02:56:913 - I don't think this part is intense enough for a kiai time. It's just the vocal break and hearing only instruments.
- - Checked everything, fine.
- 00:07:700 (1) - Add whistle?
- 00:08:500 (1,2,3) - Check the spacing, almost the circle is close to the tail. Seems like you were using 0.9x instead of 1.0x?
- 00:24:548 (2,3) - Make symmetry? same flow, but smoother.
- 00:38:915 (1,2) - Good symmetry, but you'd better check the spacing here.
- 00:52:914 (3,1) - Swap NC, new track.
- 01:28:913 (1,2) - Flow almost break here, so i prefer making a sharp blanket.
- 01:39:580 (1,2,3) - I prefer a symmetry here, well... curve or sharp, it's still symmetric.
- 01:42:247 (1,2) - Too nazi, recorrect blanket.
- 02:00:913 (1,2,1,2) - Not important, but... each two sliders overlap each other? i wonder why...
- 02:07:247 (2,3) - I think you should make these two sliders the same position together, might improve the flow a little.
- 02:15:414 (2,1) - Overlap is pretty visible, split to keep them clear for beginners.
- 02:28:747 (3) - Add finish on head?
- 02:51:580 (1,2) - Recorrect blanket.
- 03:06:247 (3) - This should be curved for smoother flow in Easy diff, not sharped.
- 03:24:248 (1,2) - Check spacing~
- 03:37:247 (3,1) - Recorrect blanket.
- 03:54:747 (2,3) - ^, or not making one?
- 04:00:914 (4) - I think you should shorten the slider's length and add a circle next to it for the rhythm, to reflect with the vocals in the song track.
- 04:21:414 (3,4) - You haven't done this overlap in any parts in the diff, i recommend you to split and keep slider tails clear.
- - Not bad with symmetry, but you need to check them up again for the spacing. Don't be the second Tari.
- - Hi LixRei~ 8D
- 00:03:700 (3,4,1) - Avoid overlapping slider (1) with circle (3), by splitting them, try to find a place for slider (1), or make a Triangle.
- 00:16:923 (3) - Try to change this slider's position, it just goes off and gets back to where it was from the head because of the repeat arrow. So to keep flow nicer, here's my example, but you can try a different position than this one > http://puu.sh/eDRp3/aa884c9522.png
- 00:27:580 (3) - ^
- 00:34:224 (1) - Parallize this slider for a bit.
- 00:36:915 (1,2) - You could've made a better symmetry here.
- 00:41:914 (2,3,4,5) - Form a better square formation?
- 00:44:914 (1,3) - You can possibly make a blanket here, not really important.
- 00:59:081 (2,1) - Are you trying to perfectly overlap these two?
- 01:03:580 (1,2,1) - Stack all body slider perfectly? It might not be visible, but good flow.
- 01:15:747 (1,2) - Weird pattern, i might help to improve it a little > http://puu.sh/eDSoT/af2b1b559f.png
- 01:18:080 (3) - Parallize this sharpen slider.
- 01:26:247 (1,1) - Symmetry?
- 01:37:913 (2,3,4,1) - Instead of stacking circle (3) and (4) for no movements, try to make a diamond here if possible.
- 01:42:913 (2,3,4) - Try to make slider (3) blanket (2)'s tail, keep the slider (4) blanket, it'll improve flow big!
- 01:55:580 (3,4) - Almost the same reason as above, but just blanket slider (4) on circle (3), it's just a repeat arrow.
- 02:00:913 (1,1) - Likely an overlap, not important for a split because of the spacing.
- 02:16:247 (2,1,2,3) - Good symmetry, but the issue is the same as 01:37:913 (2,3,4,1) -
- 02:18:580 (1,2) - Recorrect the double blanket here.
- 02:22:580 (2) - Move to x:100|y:140?
- 02:34:080 (3) - Parallelize sharp slider.
- 02:40:247 (4,5,1) - Imo, this sounds offbeat, the rhythm is on 1/1 beat, but the song track makes it offbeat. How about changing the rhythm a little bit here?
- 02:59:580 (1) - Slider is pretty confusing to players, since it's a Normal diff, it might lead to unrankability when players can't notice it's border in Easy/Normal diffs to know it's position. So i recommend you to change that.
- 03:02:747 (2) - Add circle?
- 03:25:248 (2,3,4,1) - Make a diamond formation? this grid is really clear for one.
- 03:34:248 (1,2,3) - Recorrect this triangle.
- 03:42:914 - Why is this part of the song track off to break? i prefer mapping some notes here.
- 03:57:080 (3) - Curve? idk, just curve.
- 04:05:414 (1,2,1) - Keep them symmetric, you almost done it right.
- 04:16:080 (3) - Same as 03:57:080 (3) -
- 04:31:414 - Copy-pasted from here? > 01:22:747 (1) -
- - A little work needed with the sharp slider, it's a good mapping, but try to focus utilizing the sliders you're creating.
- 00:25:542 (7,1) - Recorrect blanket.
- 00:30:913 (6,1) - Might be the spacing big enough for a small jump like this one.
- 00:32:898 (5,6) - Quite an offbeat, 1/6 doesn't fit the song track, just follow the vocals instead.
- 00:35:329 (4,5) - ^
- 00:48:581 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - What kind of weird pattern is this? i thought it'd be a Hexagon formation, but the pattern breaker circle (6) and (7) just.... pff nvm
- 00:59:413 (1) - This slider head almost touched the healthbar, you should bring it downgrid, or find somewhere else to avoid unrankability.
- 01:01:580 (3,2) - Purpose overlap?
- 01:56:414 (4) - Remove drum whistle.
- 01:57:414 (2,3,4) - Spacing looks different here, mind for a check?
- 02:06:247 (5,6) - Stack perfectly.
- 02:25:913 (3,5) - Recorrect blanket.
- 02:55:747 (1,2,3) - Spacing check~
- 03:03:580 (1,2) - Stack slider tail.
- 03:13:358 (2,3,1) - I don't think this anti-jump makes sense with the song track you're hearing here, so just split or stack.
- 03:34:248 (1,3,2) - Likely nazi, stack all.
- 03:48:914 (1) - WTH, remove NC, still in the same track. Even if you're making a jump for this pattern, just keep new combos consistent in all diffs.
- 04:05:414 (1,4) - Overlap, or purposely doing that?
- 04:24:747 (3,4) - Ctrl + G? better playstyle.
- - Good mapping techniques, just some minor issues spotted out here.
Didn't have time to mod Insane because it's a long song >_> so i just modded the first three diffs.
That's all, Good luck~