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Gaia

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Gaia 2014-12-26T21:53:14+00:00

koreapenguin wrote:
What the Gaia ( ╯`Д´)╯彡┻━┻
┻━┻ ︵ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ What the kp

Warning My BAD English...

General
about combo color... http://puu.sh/dJVKq/e46b625518.png seem combo2 color is almost the same as combo5 in game http://puu.sh/dJVNL/f1a49d239f.jpg, i can't feel the difference imo. so how about delete or make sure by doing this http://puu.sh/dJVTY/978942365f.jpg more pale than combo5, if you keep using that i think it will be meaningless okie change ^^

Easy
00:08:895 (1) - Delete finish on slider head, i can't hear any cymbal sound, also if you added there then should add here 01:05:700 (1) - becuz same song. well del or add it's up to you added on 2nd point
00:49:369 (2) - add whistle on slider head, i guess you forgot oops :p
nothing to say, good easy diff C:

Normal
00:04:280 (2,3,4,5) - it's not a big problem but i would recommend a change to the 1/2 sliders, 1/2 stack (i personally hate 1/2 circle stacks on beginner diff) circle might be too hard for beginners. also the sliders don't really fit with the song imo. agree !
00:08:895 (1) - same as easy diff fixed
00:42:978 (1,2) - i don't want recommend this, it's harder for them to catch the timing next to 00:43:511 (2) - here. so how about just spread it? hmm I use this kind of 1/2 pattern a lot, i think it's okay
00:57:002 (5) - it's very fit with vocal but... feel so weird cuz 00:57:179 - there is have strong sound, so how about this? http://puu.sh/dJXEL/da13c58190.jpg 00:57:179 - emphasize here, it's better to play ah I want to emphasize the vocals too hmmm, let me think a bit more o3o

Good diff even this ((:
Insane
Nothing to say, also fine to play Good >w<

that's all sorry poor mod ; ^ ; but this map is find to play
~~when you asking mod req then make unsnapnotes~~

I love you kp

Lally

3,177 posts

Joined December 2011

Lally 2014-12-29T21:04:14+00:00

hello o3o

[Easy]

OD and HP -1
00:04:990 (2) - what about whistle+ clap here?
00:17:416 (1) - why don't you try something like this ↓ for a better flow o3o is just a small change but imo looks better
SPOILER
00:45:818 - it sound a little bit weird without this downbeat :/ why don't you try to map it somehow
01:04:635 (4) - why don't you try to change this slider like this for a better flow and pattern
SPOILER

[Normal]

00:04:812 (3) - same suggestion as easy for the slider end whistle+clap
00:08:895 (1,2,3) - personally for this pattern i would have a great suggestion :V because how it flows is a bit strange o3o
SPOILER
my suggestion is to remove the repeat and instead to add a circle to create a better flow =w= try it out i think it will fit bettah
00:11:735 (1,2,3) - quit the same suggestion here :V i dunno but those reverse with this kind of blanket doesent flow good imo
SPOILER
00:37:830 - here you can totally hear t
hat is something missing , why don't you add a circle here?
00:45:818 - same as easy here is missing something try to map it

[Mocchi]

00:04:812 (6) - same suggestion as E/N whistle+clap
00:07:830 (5,6) - blanket?

hope that it helps ^-^

Gaia

2,808 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Gaia 2014-12-30T00:03:54+00:00

Lally wrote:
hello o3o hihi

[Easy]
OD and HP -1 the settings shouldn't be that low imo, i kept OD the same but dropped HP to 2.5
00:04:990 (2) - what about whistle+ clap here? the music feels different from the other parts so i think it's alright
00:17:416 (1) - why don't you try something like this ↓ for a better flow o3o is just a small change but imo looks better not exactly like urs but i changed it
SPOILER
00:45:818 - it sound a little bit weird without this downbeat :/ why don't you try to map it somehow idk it's easy i don't really want 1/2 spacing s:
01:04:635 (4) - why don't you try to change this slider like this for a better flow and pattern sure
SPOILER
[Normal]
00:04:812 (3) - same suggestion as easy for the slider end whistle+clap same
00:08:895 (1,2,3) - personally for this pattern i would have a great suggestion :V because how it flows is a bit strange o3o awesome XD
SPOILER
my suggestion is to remove the repeat and instead to add a circle to create a better flow =w= try it out i think it will fit bettah
00:11:735 (1,2,3) - quit the same suggestion here :V i dunno but those reverse with this kind of blanket doesent flow good imo ahh this one i want to keep my way cuz i think it fits the music a bit better
SPOILER
00:37:830 - here you can totally hear t
hat is something missing , why don't you add a circle here? following percussion here owo
00:45:818 - same as easy here is missing something try to map it messes my pattern up but i might consider :>
hope that it helps ^-^

Thaanksssss c:

Momochikun

1,927 posts

Joined October 2012

Momochikun 2014-12-30T00:54:22+00:00

-Yuzuriha-inori- wrote:
from mi topic

Mochi's Hard[/b]

01:17:948 (3,4) - stack ok

good luck XD

star presents !! ☆彡

HelloSCV wrote:
from my queue

[Hard]
00:22:919 - since there is proper sound for placing objects, emptying this part isn't nice idea. why don't you change 00:22:741 (7) - this note to 1/2 slider? or just adding a note here is good choice as well added slider
example

00:51:499 (5,1) - swap NC because it fits better with the songhmm no change
too awesome gg[/list]

nice maps lol good luck

koreapenguin wrote:
What the Gaia ( ╯`Д´)╯彡┻━┻

Mochi's Hard
01:02:505 (2) - how about delete just clap on slider tail? feel so it's some noise, just do Normal sampleset it's better than add clap
ok

s[/list]

that's all sorry poor mod ; ^ ; but this map is find to play
~~when you asking mod req then make unsnapnotes~~

Lally wrote:
hello o3o

[Mocchi]
00:04:812 (6) - same suggestion as E/N whistle+clap it doesn't fit imo
00:07:830 (5,6) - blanket?
ok

hope that it helps ^-^

Thanks :3

SPOILER

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Title:Hishoku no Sora ~TV SIZE~
TitleUnicode:緋色の空 ~TV サイズ~
Artist:Kawada Mami
ArtistUnicode:川田まみ
Creator:Gaia
Version:Mochi's Hard
Source:灼眼のシャナ
Tags:Momochikun pan P_A_N Shakugan no Shana opening op
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192,315,60552,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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232,130,63392,2,0,P|254:190|267:279,1,145,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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193,243,68363,5,0,1:0:0:0:
193,243,68540,2,0,B|134:252|134:252|101:239|101:239|52:247,1,145,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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67,111,69250,2,0,L|77:37,2,72.5,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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375,289,71025,2,0,P|419:296|447:302,1,72.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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219,106,79014,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2015-01-01T08:41:35+00:00

gaia酱新年快乐~
摸摸你的图因为我感觉有点无聊
在2015年第一的摸图<3

General

把preview time方在00:05:256 -，如果在游戏里，听得有点慢，听"zzzh“的声音了
tags里面删除”op”因为只有2个字，在search找不了
第一的combo颜色显得pure白色就unrankable，用橙轻色怎么样？this

Easy

OD2,5，OD3有点高
00:12:801 (2,3) –有两个1/2sliders我感觉难一点因为之前在00:09:960 (2,3) –你已经用那个1/2,如果用简单的节奏我觉得比较好比如 http://puu.sh/dV4nf.jpg
00:15:818 –在这里有强的声音，应该mapped，我知道00:15:996 –有强的鼓不过00:15:818 –是音乐的旋律所以map00:15:818 –感觉比较好，我的建议是把00:15:286 (2,3) –变成 http://puu.sh/dV5U3.jpg
00:17:416 (1) –做这个slider比较对称怎么样？有的好看的图案，也有更好的flow http://puu.sh/dV6wh.jpg
00:30:197 (3,4) –只我的建议，这里音乐感到轻了所以我觉得简单的节奏比较好，可以把那个sliders变成3/2 slider repeat
00:38:718 (3) –flow感觉有点奇怪，试试这个吧 ,我觉得比较顺利的
00:45:286 (3) –头上加鼓sampleset因为vocal，没drum就感觉空了
00:46:173 (1) –repeat加鼓sampleset吧，这里有音乐的旋律
00:50:434 (4,5) –(4)删除clap音因为这里没有kick drum, 也应该00:51:144 (5) –删除finish，其实cymbal音在00:50:966 –响了
00:52:741 –跳这cymbal音是故意吗？我觉得太空了，也觉得应该mapped,把00:51:499 (1,2) – 变成 http://puu.sh/dV8Et.jpg 觉得比较好
01:00:019 (1,2) –(1)的头上和(2)的尾巴加finish怎么样？我以为在强的vocal你喜欢用finish比如01:05:700 –所以听得01:00:019 (1,2) –没有finish有点inconsistency了
01:09:783 –原因跟00:52:741 –一样的，把01:08:540 (1,2,3) –变成 http://puu.sh/dV9In.jpg
01:13:866 (4) –删除finish,cymbal响在01:13:688 –了
01:24:161 (3) –同上

Normal

AR5，AR4太慢了
00:04:812 (3) –头上应该用normal-clap因为这里有kick drum，也跟00:04:280 –一样的
00:10:138 (4) –只我的建议如果中node移动到60,268，flow感觉比较好
00:16:351 (4) –在尾巴上有normal我觉得太响了，用soft-clap怎么样？还给便衣的hitsound
00:22:386 (4) -只我的建议，我觉得如果中node移动到168，152，这个slider显得比较好看，flow也感到比较好
00:30:730 (4) –头上加drum所以drum可以强调vocal?
00:33:570 (4) –同上
00:46:528 (2,3) –sliders的尾巴上加drum吧，感觉有点空了，还有音乐的旋律
00:50:079 (3) –删除clap，听得好奇怪
01:01:085 (3) –slider的尾巴上加finish因为vocal很响了，也跟01:00:019 –应该相容
01:01:617 (4) –我觉得对称的图案比较好看 http://puu.sh/dVcAt.jpg (lol your name)
01:11:025 (1,2) –我觉得这个对新手难读了, http://puu.sh/dVcND.jpg
01:13:511 (6) – 跟Easy的01:13:866 (4) –一样的

Hard

00:04:812 (6) –cobaen ngek’i clap nang ekor e? Samar2 krungu kick drum e, imo sisan whistle tok kurang kuat
00:09:783 (2,3) –flow e dari yg (1) itu rada miring, moro2 lurus ngene kerasa gak konsisten imo coba en mlaku’no 00:10:138 (3) – nang 64,132
00:11:558 (8) –lek dari suara drum e luwih pas nganggo whistle imo
00:12:801 (4) –finish nang ekor kroso aneh, coba en 00:12:446 (3) –jadino slider repeat terus nang 00:12:978 – nganggo circle di stack karo 00:13:333 – jadi e onok jump ngono
00:14:398 (1) –podo karo 00:11:558 (8) –
00:16:706 – mek taste ku lek 50% luwih pas di musik soal e 60% jek keroso kebanteren
00:24:339 (5,6) –blanket e sek iso luwih apik iki, lek di tontok nganggo approarch circle, durung circle bener
00:27:889 -, 00:28:244 – berisik makek clap imo, mendingan nganggo whistle
00:38:540 (4,6) –sek iso luwih simetris iki, welek lek gak simetris rasae
00:45:463 (8) –mlakuno nang 352,340 ben natural melok i flow mbelok e slider
00:52:741 (4) –finish nang endas soal e onok cymbal
00:53:806 (6) –finish nang tail e intentional iki? Soal e onok e kick drum tok
00:55:582 (4) – podo karo 00:52:741 (4) –
01:03:392 (5) –coba luwih curve no slider iki, flownya moro2 berubah jadi e rodo aneh imo http://puu.sh/dVrKb.jpg
01:13:333 (6) –yok opo lek mlakuno nang 412,188? Ketok lek 01:13:333 (6,2) –iki wez kape overlap. Rodo elek imo

Insane

AR9跟面包’s diff一样？我觉得你的diff比他比较容易所以用AR8,7比较好
哎呀，说实话从Hard到Insane的spread有点高的，如果你的Insane可以有些1/1 sliders然后删除或则减少（i prefer remove)1/4slider的跳，spread感觉比较好

PAN

00:29:398 (4) –i know this one isnt overmap but it heard not really fit to map especially in calm music part
00:44:043 (7) – same here, not really fit, especially 00:44:132 – overmap at this time
nice flow but a little bit weird when non kiai parts have lot of 1/4 and kiai is jumping 1/2 but i guess it’s style after all

Gaia

2,808 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Gaia 2015-01-01T20:31:53+00:00

Xinely wrote:
gaia酱新年快乐~ 美醬也新年快樂! >w<
摸摸你的图因为我感觉有点无聊
在2015年第一的摸图<3 <3

General
把preview time方在00:05:256 -，如果在游戏里，听得有点慢，听"zzzh“的声音了恩但改到 00:05:167 - 我覺得剛好
tags里面删除”op”因为只有2个字，在search找不了恩好
第一的combo颜色显得pure白色就unrankable，用橙轻色怎么样？this hmm 這不是純白但我還是把它改深一點了

Easy
OD2,5，OD3有点高還好吧 o3o
00:12:801 (2,3) –有两个1/2sliders我感觉难一点因为之前在00:09:960 (2,3) –你已经用那个1/2,如果用简单的节奏我觉得比较好比如 http://puu.sh/dV4nf.jpg 我是覺得因為之前有一的節奏玩家應該對這個pattern熟悉, 先留著
00:15:818 –在这里有强的声音，应该mapped，我知道00:15:996 –有强的鼓不过00:15:818 –是音乐的旋律所以map00:15:818 –感觉比较好，我的建议是把00:15:286 (2,3) –变成 http://puu.sh/dV5U3.jpg 跟著鼓嘛 ><
00:17:416 (1) –做这个slider比较对称怎么样？有的好看的图案，也有更好的flow http://puu.sh/dV6wh.jpg 嗯
00:30:197 (3,4) –只我的建议，这里音乐感到轻了所以我觉得简单的节奏比较好，可以把那个sliders变成3/2 slider repeat vocal ><
00:38:718 (3) –flow感觉有点奇怪，试试这个吧 ,我觉得比较顺利的沒照你說的但是改了
00:45:286 (3) –头上加鼓sampleset因为vocal，没drum就感觉空了
00:46:173 (1) –repeat加鼓sampleset吧，这里有音乐的旋律
00:50:434 (4,5) –(4)删除clap音因为这里没有kick drum, 也应该00:51:144 (5) –删除finish，其实cymbal音在00:50:966 –响了刪了finish但這裡應該有clap吧
00:52:741 –跳这cymbal音是故意吗？我觉得太空了，也觉得应该mapped,把00:51:499 (1,2) – 变成 http://puu.sh/dV8Et.jpg 觉得比较好 ok
01:00:019 (1,2) –(1)的头上和(2)的尾巴加finish怎么样？我以为在强的vocal你喜欢用finish比如01:05:700 –所以听得01:00:019 (1,2) –没有finish有点inconsistency了
01:09:783 –原因跟00:52:741 –一样的，把01:08:540 (1,2,3) –变成 http://puu.sh/dV9In.jpg okey
01:13:866 (4) –删除finish,cymbal响在01:13:688 –了
01:24:161 (3) –同上

Normal
AR5，AR4太慢了同意
00:04:812 (3) –头上应该用normal-clap因为这里有kick drum，也跟00:04:280 –一样的
00:10:138 (4) –只我的建议如果中node移动到60,268，flow感觉比较好 hmmm 是故意的 :s
00:16:351 (4) –在尾巴上有normal我觉得太响了，用soft-clap怎么样？还给便衣的hitsound
00:22:386 (4) -只我的建议，我觉得如果中node移动到168，152，这个slider显得比较好看，flow也感到比较好很好 ^^ 改瞜
00:30:730 (4) –头上加drum所以drum可以强调vocal? 這是歌聲的echo我覺得安靜點比較好
00:33:570 (4) –同上
00:46:528 (2,3) –sliders的尾巴上加drum吧，感觉有点空了，还有音乐的旋律
00:50:079 (3) –删除clap，听得好奇怪有吧 o3o
01:01:085 (3) –slider的尾巴上加finish因为vocal很响了，也跟01:00:019 –应该相容
01:01:617 (4) –我觉得对称的图案比较好看 http://puu.sh/dVcAt.jpg (lol your name) XD 恩改瞜
01:11:025 (1,2) –我觉得这个对新手难读了, http://puu.sh/dVcND.jpg 我把sliderend 不overlap應該比較好了
01:13:511 (6) – 跟Easy的01:13:866 (4) –一样的

Insane
AR9跟面包’s diff一样？我觉得你的diff比他比较容易所以用AR8,7比较好有兩個AR9的diff應該不怎麼樣吧, 我不喜歡低於AR9的insane =w=
哎呀，说实话从Hard到Insane的spread有点高的，如果你的Insane可以有些1/1 sliders然后删除或则减少（i prefer remove)1/4slider的跳，spread感觉比较好
spread 這個問題我跟一些BAT討論過了, 他們說應該還好只不過我有一些back and forth跳有點難, 所以我把他們改小一點了

沒講到的 hitsounds 通通都改瞜 ^^
謝謝美醬摸圖 >3<

Milan-

1,473 posts

Joined August 2011

Milan- 2015-01-02T03:17:15+00:00

aaaaaaaaa

irc yiuuun

2015-01-01 23:38 Milan-: i'd prefer a more constant ds for this kind of diffs
2015-01-01 23:39 Gaia: lmao
2015-01-01 23:39 Gaia: i dont use ds on insanes
2015-01-01 23:40 Milan-: uhm light insane is like a hard+ anyways uhm 
2015-01-01 23:40 Milan-: 00:00:375 (1,2) -  vs 00:01:795 (1,2) - 
2015-01-01 23:40 Milan-: is the same sound but the second has way more space
2015-01-01 23:41 Gaia: oh true
2015-01-01 23:41 Gaia: fixed
2015-01-01 23:44 Milan-: 00:02:860 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - this part plays weird to me
2015-01-01 23:44 Milan-: cuz 
2015-01-01 23:44 Milan-: from 5 to 6 is a big jump
2015-01-01 23:44 Milan-: then u just keep the flow in a "1x1 space"
2015-01-01 23:45 Gaia: sure i can nerf that a bit
2015-01-01 23:45 Milan-: or u can move 00:02:860 (5) - to x196 y323
2015-01-01 23:45 Milan-: play better i think
2015-01-01 23:46 Gaia: thats an even bigger jump lmao
2015-01-01 23:46 Milan-: ye but it plays better lolol
2015-01-01 23:47 Milan-: or stack with 00:03:570 (2) - 
2015-01-01 23:47 Milan-: somethingsomething
2015-01-01 23:47 Gaia: nah its too close that way
2015-01-01 23:47 Gaia: its ok i got it right where i want it
2015-01-01 23:47 Gaia: http://puu.sh/dX5GH/83dd72fd4b.jpg
2015-01-01 23:48 Milan-: okey xd, uh 00:03:925 (3,4,1) - this is just weird i think using like 1.7 ds or similar is better
2015-01-01 23:48 Milan-: the music doesnt even have something to emphasis
2015-01-01 23:49 Milan-: http://puu.sh/dX5Yp/a72e29d930.jpg
2015-01-01 23:49 Gaia: hmm
2015-01-01 23:49 Gaia: 4 is a pretty big note cuz the snare
2015-01-01 23:49 Gaia: and 1 is nc and long note
2015-01-01 23:49 Gaia: uhhh
2015-01-01 23:50 Gaia: =3=
2015-01-01 23:50 Gaia: fine
2015-01-01 23:50 Gaia: not so close like urs tho
2015-01-01 23:50 Milan-: >w< 
2015-01-01 23:51 Milan-: 00:08:185 (3,4) - personal preference but can u separate them?
2015-01-01 23:51 Milan-: move them more away(?
2015-01-01 23:52 Gaia: a bit
2015-01-01 23:52 Gaia: sure
2015-01-01 23:52 Gaia: why not lol
2015-01-01 23:53 Milan-: 00:08:895 (1) - [http://puu.sh/dX6oB/c11d9b0095.jpg wuuuuuuuuuuu]
2015-01-01 23:53 Gaia: lol
2015-01-01 23:53 Gaia: then my next pattern is dead
2015-01-01 23:54 Gaia: pls
2015-01-01 23:54 Milan-: u can move things a bit /w\ it just gives a better emphasis to the finish imo
2015-01-01 23:56 Gaia: lol
2015-01-01 23:56 Gaia: well
2015-01-01 23:56 Gaia: it points to the left
2015-01-01 23:56 Gaia: which is also the end
2015-01-01 23:56 Gaia: not much i can do with my pattern
2015-01-01 23:56 Gaia: also
2015-01-01 23:56 Gaia: its not like mine is an issue or anything so its alright
2015-01-01 23:58 Milan-: oki
2015-01-01 23:58 Milan-: 00:39:783 (6) - 
2015-01-01 23:58 Milan-: this can be just 2 1/4 slider
2015-01-01 23:58 Milan-: cuz the finish at00:39:960 - 
2015-01-01 23:59 Milan-: just use a regular ds if u do so
2015-01-01 23:59 Gaia: hm maybe
2015-01-01 23:59 Milan-: or even use 1/4 and 2 notes
2015-01-01 23:59 Gaia: but i dont wanna make this so hard rofl
2015-01-02 00:00 Milan-: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2430247
2015-01-02 00:00 Milan-: wuu u can do something better than that tho ahahdasx
2015-01-02 00:00 Gaia: eh
2015-01-02 00:01 Gaia: LOL
2015-01-02 00:02 Gaia: I'll consider it o3o
2015-01-02 00:03 Milan-: 01:01:262 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/dX7Nt/d322008f32.jpg
2015-01-02 00:03 Milan-: what u have doesnt fit imo >>
2015-01-02 00:04 Gaia: LOL
2015-01-02 00:04 Gaia: damm
2015-01-02 00:04 Gaia: ok
2015-01-02 00:04 Milan-: 01:02:150 (4) - this follows nothing 
2015-01-02 00:05 Gaia: ;w;
2015-01-02 00:06 Milan-: uhm if u follow the yiuuuuuuuun
2015-01-02 00:06 Milan-: this should be end at 01:02:682 - and add triple 01:02:771 - 
2015-01-02 00:06 Gaia: yiuuuuuuun
2015-01-02 00:06 Milan-: yea like a plain
2015-01-02 00:06 Milan-: yiuuuuuun
2015-01-02 00:06 Gaia: lol
2015-01-02 00:07 Gaia: i did this instead
2015-01-02 00:07 Gaia: http://puu.sh/dX8nB/c30293b97b.jpg
2015-01-02 00:07 Milan-: gud
2015-01-02 00:07 Milan-: 01:06:943 (4) - mc
2015-01-02 00:08 Milan-: nc
2015-01-02 00:08 Gaia: oops
2015-01-02 00:09 Milan-: 01:11:025 (5,6,1) - this is quite disorienteigndgosnidol
2015-01-02 00:09 Milan-: disoriented()?
2015-01-02 00:09 Milan-: let me use translator lol
2015-01-02 00:09 Gaia: lol
2015-01-02 00:09 Gaia: yeah
2015-01-02 00:09 Gaia: disoriented
2015-01-02 00:10 Milan-: misleading
2015-01-02 00:10 Milan-: ok haha
2015-01-02 00:10 Gaia: well
2015-01-02 00:10 Gaia: i was trying to break flow for emphasis
2015-01-02 00:10 Milan-: yep but it feels so forced
2015-01-02 00:10 Gaia: it should be fine
2015-01-02 00:11 Gaia: o3o
2015-01-02 00:11 Milan-: atleast rotate 01:11:380 (1) -  a bit down so it isn't on the same line of 01:11:025 (5,6) - 
2015-01-02 00:12 Gaia: hmm
2015-01-02 00:12 Gaia: i changed it a bit
2015-01-02 00:14 Milan-: the rest is fine to me
2015-01-02 00:15 Milan-: a bunch of inconsistency about spacing, but it seems u map like that so yai
2015-01-02 00:15 Milan-: that's
2015-01-02 00:16 Gaia: yai
2015-01-02 00:16 Gaia: yaay
2015-01-02 00:16 Gaia: yey
2015-01-02 00:16 Gaia: \o/

LexiaLovesU

822 posts

Joined June 2012

LexiaLovesU 2015-01-02T04:57:22+00:00

Mod from Queue

Key:
Red = Unrankable
Blue = Highly Suggested

General

No kiai ? I think you should use to accent the chorus properly >.<

Easy

Lower the OD to 2 so that the spread is even it will go 2>4>6 also usually OD is one less then AR
00:07:120 (2) - a kick slider in easy really? Gaia kick sliders are so hard for a newbie to hit they end so suddenly it always leaves the newbie to lose track of where they are, if you going to do them in easy they do both of these things 1 make them flow into the next note nicely no sudden turns and make the rhythm between act like a 1/1 so basically a 1/2 with a 1/2 or 1/1 with a 1/1.
00:09:960 (2,3) - Same as above the flow is sudden kick sliders are hard for newbies make the flow more natural and smooth by making them flow into eachother.
00:12:801 (2,3) - Same as above the flow is sudden kick sliders are hard for newbies make the flow more natural and smooth by making them flow into eachother.
00:33:037 (3) - Make this curve upwards a bit for a better smoother flow
00:55:404 (3,4) - Same as above the flow is sudden kick sliders are hard for newbies make the flow more natural and smooth by making them flow into eachother.
00:56:469 (5) - Ending a Slider on such a strong note is a bad idea baka. On such strong notes to properly emphasize the emotion in gameplay is to allow it to be clickable not doing this leaves the gameplay to be sorta dissapointing >.<
01:00:019 (1) - Add a Finish here its fits well with the emotion from her vocals owo
01:28:422 (1) - Remove the 1 nc here they only confuse people and they don't look very professional

This Easy is actually pretty nice so pattern could use a bit more polishing but overall this easy isn't bad good job

Normal

00:07:830 (4,1) - I think the curved slider after a straight slider looks pretty weird I would have done something like this
This seems less random tbh
00:27:357 (4) - I feel like the flow is a bit weird since you made the straight slider flow upward but then made the next slider's placement completely oppsite of the flow it a bit odd to hit since the
00:31:617 (1) - The flow between these 2 is a bit bad since you made 1 flow away from 2's placement this causes an unnatural flow in easy the flow should be very smooth i suggest you make 1 flow into the next note for better flow owo
00:42:090 (4) - Same as above basically
00:57:002 (5) - Ending a Slider on such a strong note is a bad idea baka. On such strong notes to properly emphasize the emotion in gameplay is to allow it to be clickable not doing this leaves the gameplay to be sorta dissapointing >.<
01:08:895 (2) - The flow between these 2 is a bit bad since you made 1 flow away from 2's placement this causes an unnatural flow in easy the flow should be very smooth i suggest you make 1 flow into the next note for better flow owo
01:11:025 (1) - Same as above but this one is highly suggested since it is a 1/2 note 1/2 notes in normal should have a smooth flow into it
01:19:191 (4) - Please try something different it just looks so weird ;w;
01:28:422 (1) - Remove the 1 nc here they only confuse people and they don't look very professional

That's it This is a great normal really really nice job >w<

Momo's Hard

00:04:280 (4) - Move this not to x308 y124 so that the distance between 00:04:457 (5,6) - looks visually the same as the distance between 4 and 5 it just make the pattern look more neat and organized owo
00:07:298 (4,5) - I think you should make the curves on these sliders a bit large so that the blankets look a bit a better and more like vibrant like so
00:11:735 (1) - personal feeling here I usually think a curve that curves the same way as the slider before it looks weird why don't you try this
00:12:801 (4) - Ending a Slider on such a strong note is a bad idea baka especially since it has a finish at the end. On such strong notes to properly emphasize the emotion in gameplay is to allow it to be clickable not doing this leaves the gameplay to be sorta dissapointing >.<
00:27:712 (6) - This note right here doesn't really feel like it should be an underlap idk to me it just seems a bit random as an underlap
00:38:895 (5,6) - I think 6 comes out a bit too suddenly its somewhat hard to read since of 4s placement is still somewhat fading out there so I think you should make 6 a bit more noticeable
00:52:741 (4) - You forgot the finish at the head if you listen carefully to the bgm you will hear cymbol like sound
00:55:582 (4) - Same as above
01:00:730 (3) - This jump seems a bit too large for a Hard diff I think you should lower it a bit for the hard players ;w;
01:02:150 (1) - If you going to have a NC on this make it a Antijump if not an anti jump an NC isn't needed on it personally I think an Antijumps fits better with the music here anyways
01:02:860 (3) - Add an NC here since it is the start of kiai has a finish it seems odd to not have a NC. An NC here properly emphasizes kiai time
01:04:102 (7,8) - Same as suggestion as 00:07:298 (4,5)
01:05:700 (1) - I think you should add a finish here it fits very well with the emotion here owo also keep consistency with 01:17:061 (1)
01:13:511 (1) - Remove the NC here there isn't much reason for it to be here
01:14:221 (3) - Add an NC here since it is the start of kiai has a finish it seems odd to not have a NC. An NC here properly emphasizes kiai time
01:17:416 (3) - Nazi but fix this blanket its uneven with 3 and 4 ;w;
01:27:889 (1) - Remove this combo I honestly don't see the point in it ;w;

Wow mocha as usually I love your diffs good job >w<

Light Insane

00:00:375 (1,2) - Please make these slider the symertical before I go nuts ;w; its bugging me pretty bad since you did a pattern which looks best if they are the same xD
00:07:475 (1,2,3) - your slider shapes here look a bit random as a pattern they don't compliment each other very well I think you should revise it a bit and make it look batter with eachother
00:11:025 (4,5) - I think you should move these circles a bit so that the pattern looks more organized currently the circle pattern is a bit random I think doing something like this will improve it a bit and make your map look a bit more professional owo
00:15:108 (2,3,4,5,6) - Also another pretty random pattern that doesn't really complement well with the notes
00:22:386 (3,4,5,6) - This applys to almost all patterns in the map like this one >.< This pattern is so linear jumping into a linear is pretty annoying to do since most of you map is jumpy you have a very turning and fast gameplay linear patterns being the exact opposite as curvy and fast flow, will leave the player overjumping the notes since you made a sudden change in the flow of the map which in light insane isn't very recommend if you are going to make a linear pattern I highly suggest you ease into it don't not make a sudden change into extremely linear pattern so that you don't catch the players off guard. I think you should make the flow of this pattern not so straight you should add curves a bit so that player still has the turning momentum to the pattern owo
Xinely Also agrees with this owo
00:28:067 (3,4,1) - Since this is a light insane I highly suggest you make the sliders tails point towards the next notes so that the flow is easier to follow I think you shouldn't make them point away from each other cause that more insane pattern but making them flowing into eachother would be perfect for light insane owo
00:39:250 (4) - 4's placement is a bit random as of now it doesn't look very good so I suggest you revise this a bit to make it look a bit better owo I did this type of pattern >w<
00:39:428 (5,6,1) - Since this is a light insane I highly suggest you make the sliders tails point towards the next notes so that the flow is easier to follow I think you shouldn't make them point away from each other cause that more insane pattern but making them flowing into eachother would be perfect for light insane owo
00:42:978 (1) - How about you make this curve into 2 so that the flow of 00:42:978 (1) will transition into the flow of 00:43:511 (2,3,4) better since the flow wont be as sharp owo
00:50:789 (3,4,1) - Since this is a light insane I highly suggest you make the sliders tails point towards the next notes so that the flow is easier to follow I think you shouldn't make them point away from each other cause that more insane pattern but making them flowing into eachother would be perfect for light insane owo
01:10:670 (3,4,5,6) - This pattern is like that pattern in Xi Freedom Dive Another that is super annoying to hit since it flow is really really linear please gaia that in a light insane ;w;

That's it owo

Insane

00:22:386 (5,6,7,8) - I find this part here pretty overmapped I dont hear anything in the bgm for those notes could just be me but I don't want to take risk so I will leave it up to xinely owo
01:11:913 (2,3,4,5,6) - Revise this random pattern into something less random? ;w;

That's it I like this insane very fun to play good job owo

Pan's Insane

00:19:369 (4,5,6,7,8) - Overmapped nothing in the bgm at all Xinely decide if you think it is rankable I don't really think so tbh
00:46:351 (3,4,5,6,7) - Same as above
01:00:375 (1) - Remove NC here there is no point for 1 nc like this 01:00:019 (1) - its only going to confuse players

That's it I like your style Pan <3

Last edited by LexiaLovesU 2015-01-04T06:20:52+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

guineaQ

1,588 posts

Joined December 2013

guineaQ 2015-01-02T22:23:35+00:00

attack on Gaia

23:51 Gaia: qchan
23:51 guineaQ: wot
23:51 Gaia: will u irc a tv size diff
23:51 Gaia: just 1 >.>
23:51 guineaQ: ./np
23:52 *Gaia is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/580407 Kawada Mami - Hishoku no Sora ~TV SIZE~ [Light Insane]]
23:53 guineaQ: dling
23:53 guineaQ: but internet is being a nub
23:53 Gaia: ty bae
23:53 Gaia: lol
23:54 guineaQ: lemme testplay it first
23:54 Gaia: k
23:56 guineaQ: uh
23:56 Gaia: uhh
23:56 guineaQ: uhhh
23:56 Gaia: uhhhh
23:56 guineaQ: 00:16:351 (2) - consider ctrl+g?
23:57 Gaia: uhh then the spacing gets fked up
23:57 guineaQ: k then
23:57 guineaQ: 00:22:386 (3,4,5,6) - not really fond of this kind of stuffs
23:57 guineaQ: straight lines aren't really the best biologically
23:57 Gaia: actually ill change the first point a bit
23:57 Gaia: yo
23:57 guineaQ: cus human hand can't really draw straight lines well
23:58 Gaia: straight line
23:58 Gaia: it emphasizes the decending piano so well ;w;
23:58 guineaQ: and i hear small jump from that piano
23:59 Gaia: hm
00:00 guineaQ: [http://puu.sh/dZ9ML/f1db6dc5d5.jpg would have done something like this if i were you]
00:00 guineaQ: since 5 has a snare
00:00 guineaQ: justifies are bigger spacing
00:00 guineaQ: justifies a*
00:00 guineaQ: god damn it i should sleep
00:00 Gaia: LOL
00:00 Gaia: ;w;
00:00 guineaQ: actually a triangular flow might feel better
00:01 Gaia: tell that to kibb i got this pattern from him
00:01 *Gaia runs
00:01 guineaQ: I only like kibb's slow bpm maps
00:01 Gaia: lmao
00:01 Gaia: this isnt that fast
00:01 guineaQ: I don't remember seeing that 4 circle super nazi straight line in kibb's maps though
00:02 Gaia: wat
00:02 Gaia: he has straight lines all the time
00:03 guineaQ: 00:25:582 (5,6) - 
00:03 guineaQ: why
00:03 guineaQ: do these have same spacing as 00:25:227 (3,4) - 
00:03 guineaQ: i no understandu
00:03 guineaQ: piano so stronk
00:03 Gaia: =3=
00:03 guineaQ: i expect fycho style overjump
00:03 guineaQ: well its kinda tricky
00:03 Gaia: this is light insane yooo
00:03 guineaQ: since it is light insane
00:03 Gaia: please
00:04 Gaia: i made this diff for the spread lmao
00:04 guineaQ: 00:44:398 (1,2,3,4) - idk why you guys love this so much
00:04 Gaia: tbh since i jumped on 00:25:582 (5) - its enough emphasis to me
00:04 Gaia: LOL
00:05 Gaia: dude that covers the bass and vocals
00:05 Gaia: like
00:05 Gaia: killing 2 birds with one stone
00:05 guineaQ: 00:28:067 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - it's a light insane he said
00:05 Gaia: lol
00:05 Gaia: idk
00:05 Gaia: what should i do there then o3o
00:06 guineaQ: can you try removing all the streams and check what the star rating would be
00:06 guineaQ: or lemme do that
00:06 Gaia: there has to be streams in the light insane
00:06 Gaia: i mean the reason i made it is cuz there werent enough streams and jumps in the hard
00:06 Gaia: lmao
00:07 guineaQ: cus ppl do not use SV speed up at hards unlike me =3=
00:07 guineaQ: never had problem with hard to insane diff spread
00:07 Gaia: i use sv speed ups in hards
00:07 Gaia: well
00:07 Gaia: i used to
00:07 Gaia: i never speed up sv now :D
00:08 Gaia: rarely*
00:08 guineaQ: I'm probably like the only mapper that I know in vicinity
00:08 guineaQ: that uses 1.25x SV in hard
00:08 Gaia: i do too
00:08 Gaia: lmao
00:09 guineaQ: you mean in whole kiai time at 4 minute map
00:09 Gaia: i used 1.25 sv in normal in my first map
00:09 Gaia: rofl
00:09 guineaQ: and where the hell is your kiai in the light insane lmao
00:09 Gaia: no kiai
00:09 Gaia: =3=
00:09 Gaia: never kiai
00:09 guineaQ: is that a trend these days
00:09 Gaia: idk
00:09 guineaQ: [http://puu.sh/dZbrj/94b6a25f10.jpg i mean where is my orange stripe]
00:09 Gaia: i only know P A N who does it
00:10 Gaia: no orange stripe
00:10 Gaia: 00:25:937 (1,2,3) - does this bother u a bit
00:10 Gaia: o3o
00:10 guineaQ: did i choke there when I testplayed
00:10 guineaQ: if not its fine
00:11 Gaia: hm ima change it up a bit
00:11 guineaQ: 00:47:593 (2,3,4) - fix the shape ffs
00:11 guineaQ: i couldn't bare to look
00:11 Gaia: lmao
00:11 Gaia: ok
00:12 guineaQ: the only thing that annoyed me where those straight lines
00:12 Gaia: straight lines ftw
00:12 guineaQ: 01:11:203 (6,1) - rip flow
00:12 Gaia: yeah
00:12 guineaQ: 01:15:996 (2,3,4) - you call these effing blanket
00:12 Gaia: it was for emphasis
00:14 Gaia: fixed i guess
00:14 guineaQ: 01:14:221 (1) - I expected this to be little more at left but oh well
00:15 guineaQ: you are not flow nazi like me so oh well
00:15 Gaia: lol ok
00:15 guineaQ: wowow
00:15 guineaQ: so many 1/2 sliders ine asy
00:15 guineaQ: easy*
00:16 Gaia: i shifted 01:14:221 (1) - a bit if ur wondering
00:16 Gaia: lol
00:16 Gaia: gg
00:16 Gaia: its fine tho
00:16 Gaia: soo
00:16 Gaia: :^)
00:16 guineaQ: after trying to fix Aerous' easy on liar mask
00:16 Gaia: please.
00:16 guineaQ: a lot of easies look better to me now
00:16 Gaia: wow
00:16 Gaia: rood
00:16 guineaQ: AT LEAST YOU BLANKET PROPERLY
00:17 Gaia: = =
00:17 guineaQ: YOU DONT KNOW HOW MANY TIMES I WANTED TO PRESS ESC
00:17 Gaia: i mod blankets
00:17 Gaia: lmao
00:17 Gaia: pls
00:17 guineaQ: did you use grid snap
00:18 Gaia: yeah
00:18 Gaia: always
00:18 guineaQ: yeah cus some blankets were off by like 1 pixel and i realize everything was snapped by 2 pixels so
00:18 guineaQ: 00:56:469 (5,1) - ow what is dis m8
00:18 Gaia: lol
00:18 *guineaQ is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/557404 Kawada Mami - Hishoku no Sora ~TV SIZE~ [Easy]]
00:18 Gaia: 1 pixel
00:18 Gaia: meh
00:19 Gaia: that
00:19 Gaia: is
00:19 Gaia: a sexy pattern
00:19 guineaQ: ikr
00:19 guineaQ: only if
00:19 Gaia: oh btw
00:19 Gaia: so we're done with light insane?
00:19 guineaQ: the only real complaint I have was the straight line
00:19 Gaia: lmao
00:19 Gaia: ok
00:20 Gaia: neeeeew styleeeee
00:20 Gaia: i used to hate straight lines too
00:20 Gaia: dw
00:20 guineaQ: I hate squares
00:20 guineaQ: cus they are not human friendly
00:20 Gaia: i dont have squares
00:20 Gaia: i have triangles tho!!!!1!
00:20 guineaQ: same logic with straight line
00:21 guineaQ: curves are niceu cus they are biological
00:21 guineaQ: straight lines feel forced
00:21 Gaia: lmao
00:21 Gaia: flow nazi
00:21 Gaia: pls
00:21 guineaQ: blanket+flow nazi
00:21 guineaQ: what should I add next
00:21 Gaia: k post log pls

Momochikun

1,927 posts

Joined October 2012

Momochikun 2015-01-03T04:54:59+00:00

SPOILER

11:31 Momochikun: 00:03:215 (1,2,3) - try http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2438791 ?
11:32 Gaia: hmm i'll change it up a bit
11:33 Momochikun: 00:28:067 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - hmm since she said it was too much stream, i didn't expect something like this in the diff ><
11:33 Gaia: lol
11:33 Gaia: what should i do?
11:33 Gaia: i was wondering about that too but
11:33 Gaia: idk lol
11:34 Momochikun: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2438803
11:35 Gaia: the thing is
11:35 Gaia: in my insane i have streams and kickslider jumps
11:35 Gaia: i dont mind changing but im worried that if i change the gap would be bigger
11:36 Momochikun: it does fine, you got some stream in this diff
11:36 Gaia: okie then
11:36 Gaia: maybe like
11:36 Gaia: half 1/4 reverse and half stream?
11:36 Gaia: o3o
11:36 Momochikun: sure
11:37 Gaia: okie
11:37 Momochikun: 00:14:398 (6) - clap ?
11:38 Gaia: its not in the music o3o
11:38 Momochikun: 00:35:877 (1) - missing drum sampleset i guess
11:39 Gaia: sure
11:39 Momochikun: 00:42:090 (3,4) - would be easier if they just be a 1/1 slider to follow the vocal
11:39 Momochikun: 00:45:641 (6,1) - unstack ><
11:40 Momochikun: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2438821

11:40 Gaia: lol
11:40 Gaia: okie
11:41 Gaia: 00:42:090 (3,4) - i wanna keep for my pattern tho s:
11:41 Gaia: i jumped on 00:45:818 (1) - cuz bass change
11:41 Momochikun: 01:01:262 (1) - no finish here ?
11:42 Gaia: lol why does everyone say that >.>
11:42 Gaia: its not in the music tho s:
11:42 Momochikun: because that vocal quite fitting with finisjh
11:42 Momochikun: finish*
11:42 Gaia: lol
11:42 Momochikun: 01:03:570 (3) - looks a bit cramped, reduce the curve a bit ?
11:42 Gaia: ugh i dont really want to add anything that isnt in the music
11:43 Gaia: and ok
11:45 Momochikun: why the hp isn't 6,5 too ? o.o
11:45 Momochikun: 01:15:996 (2,3,4) - this could be more neat if you add more curve tbg
11:45 Momochikun: tbh*
11:46 Gaia: hm
11:46 Gaia: idk lol
11:46 Gaia: okie sure
11:46 Momochikun: hp 6 is for hard diff orz
11:46 Gaia: lol
11:46 Gaia: okey
11:47 Momochikun: 00:40:138 (1) - just imo, but whistle is better than finish since u hear no cymbal at music
11:48 Gaia: im pretty sure there is
11:49 Momochikun: well, that's all maybe.. good luck
11:49 Gaia: lol
11:50 Gaia: thanks :3
11:50 Gaia: oh btw
11:50 Momochikun: i'm noob
11:50 Gaia: looool
11:50 Gaia: BAT please =3=
11:50 Gaia: btw do u think this is a problem http://puu.sh/e08cH/4b1377eb6f.jpg
11:51 Momochikun: the flow could be better either you change (1) to curve slider or ctrl g (5) and (6)... but that's just my sense
11:51 Momochikun: or ctrl g (1) should be good to
11:51 Gaia: does it bother you a lot though
11:51 Gaia: owo
11:52 Momochikun: everyone got their own style lol
11:52 Gaia: lol
11:52 Gaia: okie
11:53 Gaia: hehe
11:53 Gaia: post log?
11:53 Momochikun: eh.. do 1 diff mod really worth kd ? o.o
11:53 Gaia: yeaaah
11:53 Gaia: well
11:53 Gaia: it shows that i got a mod at least o3o

Xinely wrote:
gaia酱新年快乐~
摸摸你的图因为我感觉有点无聊
在2015年第一的摸图<3

Hard
00:04:812 (6) –cobaen ngek’i clap nang ekor e? Samar2 krungu kick drum e, imo sisan whistle tok kurang kuat wes bolak balik di mention iki, yo wes added
00:09:783 (2,3) –flow e dari yg (1) itu rada miring, moro2 lurus ngene kerasa gak konsisten imo coba en mlaku’no 00:10:138 (3) – nang 64,132 wes kadung lanjut nang pattern selanjut ee..
00:11:558 (8) –lek dari suara drum e luwih pas nganggo whistle imo onok clap kok, added whistle mesisan
00:12:801 (4) –finish nang ekor kroso aneh, coba en 00:12:446 (3) –jadino slider repeat terus nang 00:12:978 – nganggo circle di stack karo 00:13:333 – jadi e onok jump iki fumichawn style, keeping lah
00:14:398 (1) –podo karo 00:11:558 (8) –
00:16:706 – mek taste ku lek 50% luwih pas di musik soal e 60% jek keroso kebanteren yowes pas' e piro ? 55 ae lol
00:24:339 (5,6) –blanket e sek iso luwih apik iki, lek di tontok nganggo approarch circle, durung circle bener nggeh
00:27:889 -, 00:28:244 – berisik makek clap imo, mendingan nganggo whistle pas karo musik, pancen berisik ngunu soale
00:38:540 (4,6) –sek iso luwih simetris iki, welek lek gak simetris rasae woke
00:45:463 (8) –mlakuno nang 352,340 ben natural melok i flow mbelok e slider iki dudu ta gae garis miring , pancen tangga
00:52:741 (4) –finish nang endas soal e onok cymbal k
00:53:806 (6) –finish nang tail e intentional iki? Soal e onok e kick drum tok lali opo'o kok tak gawe ngene, wes pokok' e
00:55:582 (4) – podo karo 00:52:741 (4) –
01:03:392 (5) –coba luwih curve no slider iki, flownya moro2 berubah jadi e rodo aneh imo http://puu.sh/dVrKb. ngene wes apik kok imo
01:13:333 (6) –yok opo lek mlakuno nang 412,188? Ketok lek 01:13:333 (6,2) –iki wez kape overlap. Rodo elek imo moved sitik

LexiaLovesU wrote:
Mod from Queue

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Momo's Hard
00:04:280 (4) - Move this not to x308 y124 so that the distance between 00:04:457 (5,6) - looks visually the same as the distance between 4 and 5 it just make the pattern look more neat and organized owo ok
00:07:298 (4,5) - I think you should make the curves on these sliders a bit large so that the blankets look a bit a better and more like vibrant like so
its enough imo
00:11:735 (1) - personal feeling here I usually think a curve that curves the same way as the slider before it looks weird why don't you try this
00:12:801 (4) - Ending a Slider on such a strong note is a bad idea baka especially since it has a finish at the end. On such strong notes to properly emphasize the emotion in gameplay is to allow it to be clickable not doing this leaves the gameplay to be sorta dissapointing >.< orz i like them
00:27:712 (6) - This note right here doesn't really feel like it should be an underlap idk to me it just seems a bit random as an underlap
00:38:895 (5,6) - I think 6 comes out a bit too suddenly its somewhat hard to read since of 4s placement is still somewhat fading out there so I think you should make 6 a bit more noticeable moved 6 a bit down
00:52:741 (4) - You forgot the finish at the head if you listen carefully to the bgm you will hear cymbol like yes
00:55:582 (4) - Same as above
01:00:730 (3) - This jump seems a bit too large for a Hard diff I think you should lower it a bit for the hard players ;w; fixed
01:02:150 (1) - If you going to have a NC on this make it a Antijump if not an anti jump an NC isn't needed on it personally I think an Antijumps fits better with the music here anyways
01:02:860 (3) - Add an NC here since it is the start of kiai has a finish it seems odd to not have a NC. An NC here properly emphasizes kiai time nope ~
01:04:102 (7,8) - Same as suggestion as 00:07:298 (4,5)
01:05:700 (1) - I think you should add a finish here it fits very well with the emotion here owo also keep consistency with 01:17:061 (1) did the opposite
01:13:511 (1) - Remove the NC here there isn't much reason for it to be here
01:14:221 (3) - Add an NC here since it is the start of kiai has a finish it seems odd to not have a NC. An NC here properly emphasizes kiai time same
01:17:416 (3) - Nazi but fix this blanket its uneven with 3 and 4 ;w
01:27:889 (1) - Remove this combo I honestly don't see the point in it ;w;

Wow mocha as usually I love your diffs good job >w<

thanks

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Knotts

712 posts

Joined May 2013

Knotts 2015-01-03T09:41:21+00:00

irc mod

SPOILER

00:44 Gaia: stop playing and irc my diff
00:45 Knotts: zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
00:45 Gaia: .
00:48 Knotts: 00:00:375 (1,2) - why are these not copy pastas of each other?
00:48 Knotts: looks like poop
00:50 Gaia: bcuz copy pasta is for poopheads
00:50 Knotts: 00:10:315 (1,2) - ctrl + g or new pattern
00:51 Gaia: ooh
00:52 Gaia: aight
00:52 Knotts: 00:22:031 (2) - you could move this to (0,94) for symmetry
00:52 Gaia: uh ok
00:52 Knotts: might be a little off
00:52 Knotts: i just yoloed it
00:53 Gaia: lmao
00:53 Gaia: i just
00:53 Gaia: ctrl+j'd it
00:53 Knotts: 00:27:002 (4,5) - this could be ctrl + g 
00:53 Knotts: sounds like a bigger jump there would be alright
00:54 Gaia: i just moved 4 a bit down instead
00:55 Knotts: 00:45:286 (4,5,6,1) - wtf is this lmao
00:55 Knotts: looks and feels weird 
00:57 Knotts: 01:01:085 (5) - i dont this this one should be in the linear line thing
00:57 Gaia: lol
00:57 Knotts: well i guess since its the light insane
00:58 Gaia: ill shift it down a bit
00:59 Gaia: huh
00:59 Knotts: 01:19:724 (6,7,1) - move to (310,238) for the line with 01:19:191 (3,5) -
00:59 Knotts: lol
01:00 Gaia: lol that
01:00 Gaia: what if i said
01:00 Gaia: on purpose
01:00 Knotts: i guess if u want
01:00 Knotts: im just shooting stuff out there
01:00 Knotts: take what u want
01:01 Gaia: aight
01:01 Knotts: 00:01:617 (5) - sounds like the slider would start here
01:02 Gaia: lol
01:02 Gaia: eh too late
01:08 Knotts: 00:32:150 (2,3,4) - looks a little stuffed, maybe you could try something like this http://puu.sh/e0yjJ/f1fb6c7305.jpg
01:08 Gaia: nice
01:09 Knotts: 00:50:789 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - streams a little blehh
01:10 Knotts: but whatever
01:10 Gaia: lmao
01:11 Knotts: shana's regular form really makes me not want to watch this
01:11 Knotts: she should stay red haired
01:11 Gaia: loool
01:11 Gaia: please
01:11 Gaia: theyre both good
01:12 Knotts: 01:23:984 (1,2,3) - booo
01:12 Knotts: that's so lame lol
01:13 Gaia: please
01:13 Gaia: u give a better suggestion then
01:13 Gaia: lol
01:13 Gaia: straight linesssssss
01:13 Knotts:  just make some slider art that blankets stuff
01:13 Knotts: that always works
01:14 Gaia: sliderart
01:14 Gaia: on a 1/1 slider
01:14 Gaia: please
01:14 Knotts: yee
01:14 Gaia: i dont have 2.0x sv ok
01:14 Knotts: be prepared to witness the most amazing slider art
01:15 Gaia: lmao
01:15 Gaia: like
01:15 Gaia: a straight line
01:15 Gaia: kinda squigly
01:15 Gaia: i dont want squigly in my map
01:15 Gaia: and never be ranked
01:15 Gaia: he's gunna tensho it up
01:15 Knotts: squigly doesn't make slider art does he?
01:16 Knotts: i dont know what you consider squigly lol
01:16 Gaia: like
01:16 Gaia: a lot of anchors
01:17 Gaia: but at a low angle
01:18 Gaia: [http://puu.sh/e0z9X/9a7430aac6.jpg lmao so ugly]
01:18 Knotts: i think i went too squigly, but it flows into 4 nicely
01:18 Knotts: http://puu.sh/e0zar/c2929dbf05.jpg
01:18 Knotts: LOOOOOl
01:18 Knotts: looks like a turd
01:20 Gaia: eh
01:20 Gaia: idea is nice
01:20 Gaia: id use it
01:20 Gaia: but random sliderart outta nowhere isnt how i roll
01:20 Gaia: lmao
01:20 Gaia: for the record i did try it out
01:20 Knotts: psh
01:21 Knotts: can that even be considered slider art
01:21 Gaia: yeah
01:21 Gaia: irregular sliders
01:21 Gaia: please
01:22 Knotts: well, moving on
01:23 Gaia: k
01:23 Knotts: 01:14:043 (5) - you missing a finish here?
01:23 Gaia: nope
01:23 Knotts: are you sure?
01:23 Knotts: i hear itt
01:24 Knotts: its the exact same finish sound as 01:14:221 (1) - 
01:24 Gaia: oh
01:25 Gaia: too quiet to hitsound imo
01:25 Gaia: and its in the middle of my finish spam
01:25 Gaia: so itd sound too loud
01:26 Knotts: 01:15:996 (2,3)  - shouldn't whistle be removed from (2)'s tail and put on (3)'s tail?
01:26 Gaia: oh
01:26 Gaia: nice
01:26 Gaia: catch
01:31 Knotts: 01:20:256 (2,3,5,1) - flows a little strange
01:32 Gaia: 01:21:144 (1) - flow break for emphasis
01:33 Knotts: 01:26:114 (2,3,4) - what about this thing
01:34 Gaia: 01:26:292 (3) - jump
01:34 Knotts: maybe ctrl + g 01:26:292 (3,4) - would work
01:35 Gaia: i wanna keep them the same ds as 01:27:002 (1,2,3) -
01:35 Knotts: ctrl g those too then
01:35 Knotts: heh.
01:36 Knotts: it is the end
01:36 Knotts: so jumps galore
01:36 Gaia: ok
01:36 Gaia: uh
01:36 Gaia: 01:27:712 (4) - jump
01:36 Gaia: :>
01:39 Knotts: well i guess im done then
01:39 Knotts: did you end up changing 01:23:984 (1,2,3) - into anything?
01:39 Gaia: nope lol
01:39 Knotts: well whatever, doesnt matter
01:39 Gaia: if it was another map
01:39 Gaia: i woulda

Chaoslitz

Elite Mapper / Elite Storyboarder

2,307 posts

Joined November 2013

Chaoslitz 2015-01-03T11:34:04+00:00

As requested o//

[Light Insane]

00:00:375 (1,2,3) - Just moving these three sliders a little bit higher, for the flow between 00:01:085 (3,4)
00:03:215 (1,3) - If you are having a blanket here? If yes fix it ;p
00:04:990 (3) - imo a note will be better than a slider
00:15:818 (6) - Place this note a bit lower
00:21:499 (5) - Add whistle?
00:27:357 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - seems to much clap here.. I suggest you replace clap with whistle in these point:
00:27:357
00:27:534
00:27:889
00:36:232 (3,4,5) - I don't like stacking 3 slider's tail together
Suggestion
00:39:960 - Remove finish
01:01:085 (5,1) - exchange the place in timeline, using slider at 01:01:085 to follow vocal
01:01:440 (1) - If you exchanged that, NC here
01:14:043 (5,1) - Suggest triplet here

Good Luck >w<

Gaia

2,808 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Gaia 2015-01-03T18:39:03+00:00

LexiaLovesU wrote:
Mod from Queue

Key:
Red = Unrankable
Blue = Highly Suggested

General
No kiai ? I think you should use to accent the chorus properly >.< 2015 style hehe

Easy
Lower the OD to 2 so that the spread is even it will go 2>4>6 also usually OD is one less then AR oky
00:07:120 (2) - a kick slider in easy really? Gaia kick sliders are so hard for a newbie to hit they end so suddenly it always leaves the newbie to lose track of where they are, if you going to do them in easy they do both of these things 1 make them flow into the next note nicely no sudden turns and make the rhythm between act like a 1/1 so basically a 1/2 with a 1/2 or 1/1 with a 1/1. i changed this a bit tho
00:09:960 (2,3) - Same as above the flow is sudden kick sliders are hard for newbies make the flow more natural and smooth by making them flow into eachother.
00:12:801 (2,3) -
00:33:037 (3) - Make this curve upwards a bit for a better smoother flow
00:55:404 (3,4) - Same as above the flow is sudden kick sliders are hard for newbies make the flow more natural and smooth by making them flow into eachother.
00:56:469 (5) - Ending a Slider on such a strong note is a bad idea baka. On such strong notes to properly emphasize the emotion in gameplay is to allow it to be clickable not doing this leaves the gameplay to be sorta dissapointing >.< i understand your reasoning, but there isn't much provided in the music to make that happen in an easy diff, I want to emphasize the vocal afterall
01:00:019 (1) - Add a Finish here its fits well with the emotion from her vocals owo its not in the musicccc D:
01:28:422 (1) - Remove the 1 nc here they only confuse people and they don't look very professional nah i like this it fits as the finale imo

@1/2 slider flow: the flow here is more linear tbh, although it's not the most ideal flow it isn't that much of a problem either; same goes to all the other points

This Easy is actually pretty nice so pattern could use a bit more polishing but overall this easy isn't bad good job

Normal
00:07:830 (4,1) - I think the curved slider after a straight slider looks pretty weird I would have done something like this
This seems less random tbh
it looks good to me :>
00:27:357 (4) - I feel like the flow is a bit weird since you made the straight slider flow upward but then made the next slider's placement completely oppsite of the flow it a bit odd to hit since the i do this a lot too and i really like it :V
00:31:617 (1) - The flow between these 2 is a bit bad since you made 1 flow away from 2's placement this causes an unnatural flow in easy the flow should be very smooth i suggest you make 1 flow into the next note for better flow owo changed this
00:42:090 (4) - Same as above basically changed this too
00:57:002 (5) - Ending a Slider on such a strong note is a bad idea baka. On such strong notes to properly emphasize the emotion in gameplay is to allow it to be clickable not doing this leaves the gameplay to be sorta dissapointing >.< ..same as easy
01:08:895 (2) - The flow between these 2 is a bit bad since you made 1 flow away from 2's placement this causes an unnatural flow in easy the flow should be very smooth i suggest you make 1 flow into the next note for better flow owo i like this s:
01:11:025 (1) - Same as above but this one is highly suggested since it is a 1/2 note 1/2 notes in normal should have a smooth flow into it i like this too.. s:
01:19:191 (4) - Please try something different it just looks so weird ;w; whaaaat it flows sooo nicely >.>
01:28:422 (1) - Remove the 1 nc here they only confuse people and they don't look very professional same as easy

That's it This is a great normal really really nice job >w<

loool the copy and paste >:3 thanks Lexi-chan /me is slapped

Chaoslitz wrote:

As requested o// \o\

[Light Insane]
00:00:375 (1,2,3) - Just moving these three sliders a little bit higher, for the flow between 00:01:085 (3,4) true, fixed
00:03:215 (1,3) - If you are having a blanket here? If yes fix it ;p lol okey
00:04:990 (3) - imo a note will be better than a slider hmm i like this slider s:
00:15:818 (6) - Place this note a bit lower oh yeah it's a bit close to 1 so i moved it right instead
00:21:499 (5) - Add whistle? hmm, there doesnt sound like there's a drum beat so leaving it like this
00:27:357 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - seems to much clap here.. I suggest you replace clap with whistle in these point:
00:27:357
00:27:534
00:27:889 they're all in the music ><
00:36:232 (3,4,5) - I don't like stacking 3 slider's tail together your pattern is really nice, but it's not what I was going for with my current pattern so i think its ok
Suggestion

00:39:960 - Remove finish it's in the music? O:
01:01:085 (5,1) - exchange the place in timeline, using slider at 01:01:085 to follow vocal actually i'm following the vocals imo, the 'se' of sekai is on the white tick and the 'kai' is on the red and she holds the 'kai' longer so i used a slider to represent it ><
01:01:440 (1) - If you exchanged that, NC here so yeah x_x
01:14:043 (5,1) - Suggest triplet here doesnt seem to be in the music? :<

Good Luck >w<

Thanks k-ossssss \:D/

and also a big thanks to everyone who irc'd... I love you all !!
except knotts maybe

Knotts

712 posts

Joined May 2013

Knotts 2015-01-04T01:06:22+00:00

Gaia wrote:
except knotts maybe

Lmao. Map something more recent pls

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2015-01-04T04:41:19+00:00

recheck, since Lexia wants to continue her mod, i will waiting her first
no kudo

use chinese pin yin now LOL

10:24 *Xinely is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/546179 Silent Siren - Koi Yuki]
10:24 Xinely: cute : 10/10
10:24 Gaia: wwwww
10:24 Gaia: >////<
10:24 Xinely: btw rip
10:24 Xinely: i still have your version which
10:24 *Xinely is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/557404 Kawada Mami - Hishoku no Sora ~TV SIZE~ [Easy]]
10:24 Xinely: Q_Q
10:24 Gaia: Koi Yuki = Mei jiang magnet confirmed
10:25 Gaia: Q~Q
10:25 Gaia: rip recheck
10:25 *Xinely is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/557404 Kawada Mami - Hishoku no Sora (TV Size) [Easy]]
10:26 Xinely: oh success!
10:26 Xinely: manual change btw lol
10:27 Gaia: LOL
10:27 Gaia: www
10:27 Gaia: smart
10:27 Gaia: XD
10:27 Xinely: you dont change anything in hitsound files right? 8)
10:29 Gaia: nope
10:29 Gaia: only applied mods
10:29 Gaia: and changed bg
10:29 Xinely: ok
10:29 Gaia: OH
10:29 Gaia: finally lv98
10:30 Gaia: lol
10:30 Gaia: time to stop playing =3=
10:30 Xinely: why QAQ
10:30 Xinely: http://puu.sh/e2GRb.jpg current BG is this right?
10:30 Gaia: play more = rank drops faster
10:30 Gaia: LOL
10:30 Gaia: orz
10:30 Gaia: yup
10:30 Gaia: idk if i should keep the overlap on the sword tbh lol
10:32 Xinely: eh sword? you mean the bg?
10:32 Gaia: yeah
10:32 Gaia: lol
10:32 Xinely: i guess it is fine w
10:33 Gaia: if meijiang says so w
10:34 Xinely: ww
10:35 Xinely: 00:15:996 (3) - if it just my feel or i feel something like normal-sliderslide sounds at this slider?
10:35 Xinely: start from Easy btw, i forgot to np lol
10:35 Gaia: lol ok
10:35 Gaia: um
10:36 Gaia: so what do i do lol
10:36 Gaia: o3o
10:37 Xinely: i dunno too
10:37 Xinely: forget it lol
10:37 Gaia: lool
10:37 Xinely: oh.. my bad ears, it sounds like sliderslide with 100% but use 25% and works fine
10:37 Xinely: anyway..
10:38 Xinely: why my recheck uses english when i modded with chinese lmao
10:38 Gaia: o3o
10:38 Gaia: owo
10:38 Gaia: hmm
10:38 Gaia: xiang yong zhong wen ma
10:38 Gaia: ?
10:38 Xinely: hmm ke yi
10:38 Gaia: lol
10:39 Gaia: recheck in pin yin
10:39 Gaia: and people who read it will be like wtf
10:39 Xinely: hao de
10:39 Gaia: 1 map
10:39 Gaia: modded in chinese javanese english and pin yin
10:39 Gaia: xinely pro bat
10:39 Gaia: =w=/
10:40 Xinely: wo yong yin ni yu ye ke yi
10:40 Gaia: dan wo ting bu dong a
10:40 Gaia: orz
10:40 Xinely: lai xue yin ni yu :p
10:40 *Xinely is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/557404 Kawada Mami - Hishoku no Sora (TV Size) [Easy]]
10:41 Gaia: XD
10:41 Gaia: awkawkw
10:41 Xinely: 00:30:730 (4) - zai tou shang jia whistle? gen vocal de
10:41 Gaia: =3=
10:42 Gaia: whistle
10:42 Gaia: hai shi drum sampleset
10:42 Xinely: aiya.. wo de yi si shi drum 
10:42 Gaia: en
10:42 Gaia: ok jia le
10:42 Xinely: blame your custom lol
10:42 Xinely: 00:33:570 (4) - tong shang
10:42 Gaia: 00:33:570 (4) - zhe li ye jia lo
10:42 Gaia: yup
10:43 Xinely: ninja LOL
10:43 Gaia: XD
10:43 Xinely: 00:42:090 (4) - tong shang 
10:44 Gaia: ok
10:44 Gaia: 00:44:398 (2) - ye shi lo
10:44 Xinely: hao
10:44 Xinely: mochi gen wo shuo, mo hard diff de shi jian, lai zhao ta yi qi irc
10:45 Gaia: ok
10:45 Gaia: yi qi irc
10:45 Gaia: ww
10:45 Gaia: mian bao ne
10:45 Gaia: =w=
10:45 Gaia: bu zai xian !?!?!?!
10:46 Xinely: mian bao offline le
10:46 Gaia: yup
10:46 Gaia: orz
10:46 Xinely: hen hao de easy.. xian zai jian cha normal
10:46 Gaia: C:
10:47 *Xinely is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/556823 Kawada Mami - Hishoku no Sora (TV Size) [Normal]]
10:47 Gaia: 00:42:090 (4) - 00:44:398 (4) - wo jia le sampleset
10:47 Xinely: 00:04:812 (3) - wei ba shang whistle huan clap? wo ting le kick drum de sheng yin
10:47 Gaia: gen easy yi yang
10:48 Xinely: hao
10:48 Gaia: hmm
10:49 Gaia: gan jue bu dui ><
10:49 Xinely: ups
10:49 Xinely: normal clap i mean
10:50 Gaia: oh
10:50 Gaia: lol
10:50 Gaia: ok :3
10:51 Gaia: qi ta de diff wo ye gai yi xi
10:51 Gaia: xia*
10:52 Xinely: 00:16:351 - wo jue de cong zhe ge shi dao 00:17:061 - normal de sheng yin you dian gao de, yong 55% zen me yang?
10:53 Gaia: hmm
10:53 Gaia: shi shi kan
10:53 Gaia: wo yong 60 o3o
10:54 Xinely: hao
10:55 Xinely: 01:13:688 - zhe li wo zhi dao you "zzz" cymbal de sheng yin bu guo gao le yi dian, yong 60%? 01:13:866 - ru guo tong yi, zai zhe li hui yong 

80%
10:56 Gaia: chorus ma
10:56 Gaia: ying gai yao da sheng yi dian
10:56 Gaia: o3o
10:56 Gaia: almost said kiai but dont have one :p
10:56 Xinely: o, hao de
10:58 *Xinely is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/580407 Kawada Mami - Hishoku no Sora (TV Size) [Light Insane]]
10:58 Gaia: okie
11:00 Xinely: 00:11:203 (5,6,7) - nazi, 00:11:203 (5) - yi dong dao 148,60 san jia xing de tu'an bi jiao hao
11:00 Gaia: lol ok
11:02 Xinely: 00:22:386 (3,4,5,6) - yong liang ge 1/2 sliders ba, shuo shi hua zhe light insane you dian nan le lol
11:02 Gaia: :<
11:02 Gaia: lol
11:02 Gaia: dan shi..
11:02 Gaia: gang qing de sheng yin
11:02 Gaia: orz
11:03 Gaia: hen xi huan de shuo
11:03 Xinely: hmm (3,4) stacked ran hou (5,6) stacked zen me yang?
11:04 Gaia: hmm
11:04 Gaia: ben lai shi xiang
11:04 Gaia: gang qing de sheng yin wang xia jiang
11:04 Gaia: suo yi wo circle ye man man xia lai
11:04 Xinely: hao
11:05 Gaia: cao my style lol
11:05 Gaia: .!kill gaia
11:05 Xinely: btw, HP 6? Hard he Insane dou you 0,5 different (rip pinyin lol) 
11:05 Xinely: *OD gen HP dou you 0,5 different
11:06 Gaia: hm
11:06 Gaia: mochi jian yi de
11:06 Gaia: ta shuo HP6 shi Hard
11:06 Gaia: bu shi he insane
11:06 Gaia: light insane *
11:06 Gaia: lol
11:06 Xinely: 00:28:422 (4,5,6,7) - yong 1/4 slider repeat ba, 00:28:067 (3) - hou ying gai stream gan jue you dian nan
11:06 Gaia: aahhh
11:06 Xinely: light insane jiu shi Hard+ lol
11:07 Gaia: en wo ye you dian bu que ding zhe bu fen
11:07 Gaia: =3=
11:07 Gaia: dan ru guo jiao Hard+ de hua mei you ren hui wan
11:07 *Gaia runs
11:07 *Xinely da bao si ni
11:08 *Gaia ded
11:09 Xinely: 00:42:090 (3,4) - light insane bu yao tiao Q_Q , wo de jian yi shi 00:42:090 (3) - ctrl+g ran hou 00:42:446 (4) - yi dong dao 484,128
11:09 Xinely: normal spacing is da best
11:09 Gaia: btw
11:09 Xinely: yes?
11:09 Gaia: gang gang zhe yang gai http://puu.sh/e2LHf/2ac0198c8e.jpg
11:10 Xinely: ok
11:10 Gaia: ok
11:10 Xinely: 00:42:090 (3,4) - light insane bu yao tiao Q_Q , wo de jian yi shi 00:42:090 (3) - ctrl+g ran hou 00:42:446 (4) - yi dong dao 484,128 <-- shou 

dao le ma? 
11:10 Xinely: wo de shang wang rip le
11:10 Gaia: wa
11:10 Gaia: rip
11:10 Gaia: en sho dan le
11:11 Gaia: 00:42:090 (3) - wo shi jue de vocal la
11:11 Gaia: tiao qi shi bu shi hen da de spacing
11:11 Gaia: 00:41:558 (1) - ye you tiao dao a
11:11 Xinely: ok 
11:12 Xinely: 00:42:978 (1,2,3,4) - bu guo hen duo tiao hou zhe li hai you tiao? Q_Q
11:12 Xinely: wo xi wang 00:42:978 (1,2,3,4) - yong sliders Q_Q
11:12 Gaia: hmmm
11:13 Xinely: zhe shi xian de Insane
11:13 Xinely: bu shi light insane imo :C
11:13 Gaia: lol
11:13 Gaia: <<< first time light insane
11:13 Gaia: op
11:13 Xinely: :C
11:14 Xinely: 00:50:789 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - xian de insane.. light insane jiu shi max yong triplet. yong 1/4 slider repeat hao xiang 00:28:067 - 
11:15 Gaia: zhe yang ru he?  http://puu.sh/e2Mif/56caf6f462.jpg
11:15 Gaia: ^ 00:42:978 (1) -
11:15 Xinely: xian de bi jiao hao
11:16 Gaia: xian
11:16 Gaia: ?
11:16 Gaia: 先
11:16 Gaia: or 现
11:16 Gaia: lol
11:16 Xinely: 显得
11:16 Gaia: OH
11:16 Gaia: okie
11:16 Gaia: rip no accents dunno which word
11:16 Xinely: lol
11:17 Xinely: guess it xD
11:17 Gaia: XD
11:17 Gaia: ni jue de zhe yang hui tai nan ma?
11:17 Gaia: http://puu.sh/e2Mz9/3caae460d4.jpg
11:17 Xinely: 01:01:085 (5) - inconsistency spacing, yinwei 1,39x , qi ta de yuan 01:00:552 (2,3,4) - yong 1,3x /runs
11:17 Gaia: 3 gen 1 stack
11:17 Gaia: LOL
11:18 Xinely: jian dan 
11:18 Gaia: okie
11:18 Gaia: 01:01:085 (5) - qi shi shi gu yi yong 1.4 spacing de shuo
11:18 Gaia: orz
11:20 Xinely: ah ok bu guo, you bie de wen ti.. wo jue de flow gan jue ke neng bi jiao hao, ru guo gen 01:01:262 (1) - slider's curve, flow gan jue bi jiao 

zi ran (wait natural is use this right?) http://puu.sh/e2MPl.jpg
11:21 Gaia: zi ran = natural yup :D
11:21 Gaia: hmm
11:21 Xinely: my taste only :P
11:22 Gaia: lool
11:22 Gaia: 5 doesnt seem special anymore
11:22 Gaia: gg
11:22 Gaia: zen me ban
11:22 Gaia: D:
11:22 Xinely: QAQ
11:22 Gaia: >~<
11:23 Xinely: (5) make become triangle? wait. rip pin yin and let me give pic
11:23 Gaia: LOL
11:24 Xinely: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2447127
11:25 Gaia: dat jump
11:25 Gaia: wocao
11:25 Xinely: 01:08:363 (4,5) - sampleset normal gu yi de? wo de er huo bing le /slapped , i mean tai xiang le. soft sampleset bi jiao hao
11:25 Xinely: tiao shen me? :P /runs
11:25 Gaia: >.>
11:26 Xinely: www
11:26 Gaia: hmm
11:26 Gaia: ok soft sampleset
11:26 Gaia: dan 01:08:363 (4) - jia whistle
11:27 Gaia: hai shi liang ge dou jia？
11:27 Gaia: o-o
11:27 Xinely: soft-hitnormal
11:27 Xinely: liang ge dou soft-hitnormal
11:27 Gaia: hitnormal gan jue tai an jing le
11:28 Gaia: ying gai yao jia ge she me
11:28 Xinely: whistle ba :p
11:28 Gaia: en jia le whistle
11:28 Gaia: XD
11:29 Xinely: ok done, chuang, chuang zai na li (床) /runs
11:29 Gaia: orz
11:29 Gaia: lol
11:30 Gaia: aaaaa mei jiang ni zhen de hui bian cheng lan zhu
11:30 Gaia: zhe yang xia qu de hua
11:30 Gaia: D:
11:30 Xinely: xia qu?
11:30 Gaia: 下去
11:30 Xinely: rip no accent cant guess
11:30 Xinely: :p
11:30 Xinely: hmm
11:31 Xinely: qi ta de xian de ke yi
11:31 Gaia: \:D/

Gaia

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Topic Starter

Gaia 2015-01-04T06:44:36+00:00

Lexi-chan's mod pt2 owo

LexiaLovesU wrote:
Mod from Queue

Key:
Red = Unrankable
Blue = Highly Suggested

General
No kiai ? I think you should use to accent the chorus properly >.<

Light Insane
00:00:375 (1,2) - Please make these slider the symertical before I go nuts ;w; its bugging me pretty bad since you did a pattern which looks best if they are the same xD lol ok
00:07:475 (1,2,3) - your slider shapes here look a bit random as a pattern they don't compliment each other very well I think you should revise it a bit and make it look batter with eachother this is intentional actually, i don't want to use the same slider shape over and over again lol. i did this in koi yuki too actually =w=
00:11:025 (4,5) - I think you should move these circles a bit so that the pattern looks more organized currently the circle pattern is a bit random I think doing something like this will improve it a bit and make your map look a bit more professional owo i did the opposite actually i messed the triangle up// i hate clean geometric shapes :>
00:15:108 (2,3,4,5,6) - Also another pretty random pattern that doesn't really complement well with the notes it fits the whatever the thing is in the bg imo
00:22:386 (3,4,5,6) - This applys to almost all patterns in the map like this one >.< This pattern is so linear jumping into a linear is pretty annoying to do since most of you map is jumpy you have a very turning and fast gameplay linear patterns being the exact opposite as curvy and fast flow, will leave the player overjumping the notes since you made a sudden change in the flow of the map which in light insane isn't very recommend if you are going to make a linear pattern I highly suggest you ease into it don't not make a sudden change into extremely linear pattern so that you don't catch the players off guard. I think you should make the flow of this pattern not so straight you should add curves a bit so that player still has the turning momentum to the pattern owo Gunna keep this particular one but I'll change up the other ones in other places
Xinely Also agrees with this owo
00:28:067 (3,4,1) - Since this is a light insane I highly suggest you make the sliders tails point towards the next notes so that the flow is easier to follow I think you shouldn't make them point away from each other cause that more insane pattern but making them flowing into eachother would be perfect for light insane owo i disagree, in game you literally just hold ur cursor on the slider and do nothing (nobody can go back and forth at such a high speed anyways) what really matters if you wanna get technical is the space between the slider end and the slider head, which i think isn't much of a problem
00:39:250 (4) - 4's placement is a bit random as of now it doesn't look very good so I suggest you revise this a bit to make it look a bit better owo I did this type of pattern >w< ehh 3->4 is an antijump which doesnt work and besides i like it this way, i love overlaps :]
00:39:428 (5,6,1) - Since this is a light insane I highly suggest you make the sliders tails point towards the next notes so that the flow is easier to follow I think you shouldn't make them point away from each other cause that more insane pattern but making them flowing into eachother would be perfect for light insane owo slight change to this one
00:42:978 (1) - How about you make this curve into 2 so that the flow of 00:42:978 (1) will transition into the flow of 00:43:511 (2,3,4) better since the flow wont be as sharp owo nice
00:50:789 (3,4,1) - Since this is a light insane I highly suggest you make the sliders tails point towards the next notes so that the flow is easier to follow I think you shouldn't make them point away from each other cause that more insane pattern but making them flowing into eachother would be perfect for light insane owo same as above
01:10:670 (3,4,5,6) - This pattern is like that pattern in Xi Freedom Dive Another that is super annoying to hit since it flow is really really linear please gaia that in a light insane ;w; fixed i think

That's it owo

Insane
00:22:386 (5,6,7,8) - I find this part here pretty overmapped I dont hear anything in the bgm for those notes could just be me but I don't want to take risk so I will leave it up to xinely owo i guess I will too
01:11:913 (2,3,4,5,6) - Revise this random pattern into something less random? ;w; it's not random imo

That's it I like this insane very fun to play good job owo

yay!
thanks again lexi-chan w

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2015-01-04T06:51:23+00:00

[Light Insane]

00:07:120 (6,1) - why do u always do this? u know its a bad rhythm >_> something more like 00:12:801 (5,1) - is a much more suitable rhythm for places like this.
also varies your rhythms from the boring 1/2 slider spam shet u use.
00:18:659 (6,1) - ^ 00:24:339 (1) - this is good
00:55:404 (4,1) - =_=
mainly fix these ;_; make more of these delicious rhythms 00:12:801 (5,1) -
same issue with ur insane q:
00:42:978 (1,3) - i feel like stack leniency is gunna ruin this line lol
01:02:150 (4,5) - it would be cool if you slowed this part down a bit
01:08:540 (1,2) - why no copy pasterino
01:26:114 (2,3,4,5) - this linear flow feels so awkward lol

why does light insane and insane look exactly the same

LexiaLovesU

822 posts

Joined June 2012

LexiaLovesU 2015-01-05T03:11:22+00:00

Congratz on bubble owo

Gaia

2,808 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Gaia 2015-01-05T03:13:41+00:00

owo

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2015-01-05T03:15:49+00:00

终于从3个recheck到用3个语言我觉得这张图变成好了(kibbleru lexia op powers)

rechecked and everything is fine in my eyes
confirmed 2015 style = no kiai ~~RIP my FL skill~~

Bubbled!~ ヽ(｡ゝω・｡)ﾉ

xxdeathx

2,661 posts

Joined July 2013

xxdeathx 2015-01-05T05:20:26+00:00

gaia couldn't wait 5 min after xinely's bubble to request this

[General]

Why is the final spinner ending on a blue tick? The music fades out so it makes more sense to end on white or red.
Since the title 緋色の空(TVサイズ) doesn't have a space before the parentheses, should you remove it for the romanized title too?

[Easy]

00:13:866 (4) - This section doesn't have any 2/1 breaks for a long time, and Easy diffs should have some. Remove this circle to make one.
01:02:150 (4) - Remove this for the same reason as above ^ (maybe you can keep a circle at 01:02:505 if you want)

[Normal]

01:19:724 (5) - This doesn't fall on a strong enough note to justify putting it in a Normal.

[Hard]

00:07:298 (4,5,6) - Don't be lazy, fix these blankets. (or let Gaia fix them for you if you want to be lazy)
01:04:102 (7,8) - ^

[Insane]

00:27:446 (2,4,6,8) - Overmapped, and it would make more sense to make 00:27:357 (1,3,5,7) - into jumps to emphasize the drums that you can hear loudly and clearly.
00:50:079 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - ^
01:01:262 (7,1) - The spacing makes it easy to get fooled into thinking these continue the 1/2 rhythm, so you should stack these to telegraph the 1/1 change.
01:02:150 (3) - and add an NC here
01:13:954 (6,8) - Overmapping streams isn't good

Gaia

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Topic Starter

Gaia 2015-01-05T06:11:52+00:00

xxdeathx wrote:
gaia couldn't wait 5 min after xinely's bubble to request this lol

[General]
Why is the final spinner ending on a blue tick? The music fades out so it makes more sense to end on white or red. uhh i hear still hear the music on the red tick but i dont hear it on the white so i thought blue would be more suitable
Since the title 緋色の空(TVサイズ) doesn't have a space before the parentheses, should you remove it for the romanized title too? I thought so too actually o3o
[Easy]
00:13:866 (4) - This section doesn't have any 2/1 breaks for a long time, and Easy diffs should have some. Remove this circle to make one. i think it's fine, easys should be simple 1/1 rhythms which i have here and occasionally/rarely some 1/2s
01:02:150 (4) - Remove this for the same reason as above ^ (maybe you can keep a circle at 01:02:505 if you want) fixed this tho, changed to circle/ i didnt like how it looked anyways lol
[Normal]
01:19:724 (5) - This doesn't fall on a strong enough note to justify putting it in a Normal. agree
[Insane]
00:27:446 (2,4,6,8) - Overmapped, and it would make more sense to make 00:27:357 (1,3,5,7) - into jumps to emphasize the drums that you can hear loudly and clearly.
00:50:079 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - ^
01:01:262 (7,1) - The spacing makes it easy to get fooled into thinking these continue the 1/2 rhythm, so you should stack these to telegraph the 1/1 change. It should be fine, it's a new combo after all
01:02:150 (3) - and add an NC here added
01:13:954 (6,8) - Overmapping streams isn't good

FIXED ALL THE STREAMS -> JUMPS!!
i could've sworn they were streams whaat

Thaaaaaankssss !

also changed 00:50:789 (3,4) - in light insane to 2 circles cuz thats overmapped too o3o

xxdeathx

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xxdeathx 2015-01-05T08:59:24+00:00

01:01:262 (7,1) - new combo isn't a universal excuse to use shitty spacing/placement that throws the player off. if you don't want to stack, then at least don't use the same spacing as you did earlier with the 1/2 jumps. put it 1/2 as far apart or twice as far.

Gaia

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Topic Starter

Gaia 2015-01-05T16:30:55+00:00

oky made the spacing bigger for insane
mochi also told me to fix it so i did

all updated c:

xxdeathx

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xxdeathx 2015-01-05T22:12:13+00:00

Change the romanized title back to Hishoku no Sora (TV Size)