CDFA wrote:

Gonna re-mod insane and re-check the other stuff.

Insane:
00:18:937 (4) - This jumps is VERY weird, because the direction of my mouse is going to the right, but then I'm jerking to the left.
changed the slider 3 to the left a bit compared to before where it was going to the right.

00:36:271 (1,2,1,2,3) - Not a fan of how this spacing is all the same but the timing is all over the place.
Changed the spacing by moving 00:36;937 higher and the next slider with higher DS. The next few notes i increased the distance too. http://puu.sh/dxOfm/fbe17ec129.jpg and http://puu.sh/dxOhh/822e04a918.jpg


Yay. I can go ahead and rebubble afterwards.

Gaia wrote:

I'll agree with Guinea about 00:30:271 (1) - cuz i think 0.9 -> 0.4x sv is kinda a big drop, even 0.5x is kinda pushing it tbh
also consider ending that slider at around 00:30:854 - cuz that's when the guitar ends and there is no sound at 00:30:604
I changed SV to 0.55x and didnt change where it ended since i looked into the other ranked liar masks and they end at the same time.


@Inori's insane plz help my ocd and stack 00:42:270 (1) - on (126, 266)


no kds ofc otherwise somebody will ninja desu gun at denying again

Gaia wrote:

I'll agree with Guinea about 00:30:271 (1) - cuz i think 0.9 -> 0.4x sv is kinda a big drop, even 0.5x is kinda pushing it tbh
also consider ending that slider at around 00:30:854 - cuz that's when the guitar ends and there is no sound at 00:30:604



@Inori's insane plz help my ocd and stack 00:42:270 (1) - on (126, 266)

OK thanks


no kds ofc otherwise somebody will ninja desu gun at denying again

Setsurei wrote:

used the same link with p/3473466 / p/3473573

http://www.mayamarika.com/artist/mayama ... /DFCL-2098

the title suddenly changed into:
Liar Mask（anime size ver.）

o_o

I saw so many Liar Mask sets, however I'm too lazy to inform them all,
so BATs, please do so when bubbling / qualifying lol

Lanturn wrote:

You'll be fine with either or really. Just point to the one you used since we don't have a priority system. There aren't any scans yet either to help one or the other. Knowing Sony though, they'll pull an IGNITE on us and have two different official titles lol.

Anime official website: Liar Mask anime size
http://akame.tv/cd.html

Publisher Official Website: Liar Mask（anime size ver.）
http://www.sonymusic.co.jp/artist/mayam ... /DFCL-2098

Artist Official Website: Liar Mask（anime size ver.）
http://www.mayamarika.com/artist/mayama ... /DFCL-2098

Cherry Blossom wrote:

Recheck

Easy

1. 00:04:282 (4) - inconsistent spacing with 00:02:682 (2) -
2. 00:41:270 (2) - same ^

call me back.

1. Several issues in snapping throughout the Insane difficulties:
   
   • 
     Insane

   1. 00:15:438 (2) - Should be snapped to the following 1/3-Tick.
   2. 00:18:271 (2) - Tail should be snapped to 1/3.
   3. 00:23:937 (4) - ^
   4. 00:26:604 (3) - ^
   5. 00:30:937 (1,2) - Should be snapped like 00:33:604 (1,2) - .
   6. 00:31:604 (3,4) - This should follow 1/3 like this to be accurate.
   7. 00:32:271 (1,2,3) - All sliders should be snapped to 1/3.
   8. 00:34:271 (3,4) - Same as 00:30:937 (1,2) - .
      
      -Yuzuriha's Insane
   9. 00:07:082 (1) - End should be snapped to 1/3.
   10. 00:16:937 (3,4) - , 00:22:271 (3,4) - , 00:27:604 (3,4) - Should be snapped to 1/2.
   11. 00:15:604 (3) - Should be 1/2.
   12. 00:23:604 (3) - ^
   13. 00:24:271 (1) - ^
   14. 00:30:826 (5) - ^
   15. 00:50:604 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1/2 (or 3/4 with soft-sampleset at the tails) would sound much better here as well imo.

1. I'm not sure if it's just me but it would be quite nice to see the first combo color a bit brighter to see the difference to the third one better. Example
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 6,140,185
   Combo2 : 181,174,175
   Combo3 : 231,0,20
   Combo4 : 87,89,88
   Combo5 : 244,123,132

1. The way the last section has been hitsounded with the drum-sampleset-like claps sound kind of odd. Why didn't you just do it like in the Insane?
2. 00:01:482 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'd recommend you to use curved Sliders here instead of these red anchor ones to follow this calm and quiet atmosphere of the song much better.
3. 00:26:937 (3) - How about moving this higher to get a kind of wave-ish movement? That would play pretty nice if you ask me.
4. 00:30:937 - The volume in this section is like very very low. Please raise it by at least 20% and also place claps like you did in the Insane. As it is now, the part feels really quiet and can't represent the drums at all.
5. 00:33:604 (1,3) - These two don't really fit each other in my opinion. How about using such a CTRL+G|H pattern?
6. 00:36:271 - Again in this section these red anchor sliders like 00:37:271 (3) - , 00:43:270 (2) - and 00:48:270 (1,2) - for instance don't fit this soft violin imo. For 00:43:270 (2) - for example a wave would fit well if you ask me.
7. 00:48:270 (1) - Why is the end so short? The Slider doesn't really fit here imo and even if it might be a personal preference, something like this would be way smoother.
8. 00:56:936 (4) - The red anchor here is barely visible ingame so why is it even there? Do you want to emphasize something? Otherwise just delete the anchor and go for a linear one.
9. 01:11:603 (2) - It's pretty sad how the red tick in the middle has been ignored here since it's a really strong cymbal and also strong vocals. This would sound much better.
10. 01:16:936 (3,4) - The rhythm here was quite hard to follow for me. Following the strong cymbals like this works well.
11. This could take some improvements in terms of these red anchor Sliders.

1. 00:16:937 (3,4) - Didn't you use gaps for 1/3 before? Looks kind of inconsistent to me. Trying this would clean it up and make it consistent.
2. 00:28:271 (1,2) - /Minor/ - Consistent 1/1 Spacing would be much cooler here.
3. 00:29:604 (4,5,6,1) - I usually like such patterns but I didn't really enjoy playing it here. This would play much smoother imo.
4. 00:35:604 (1,2,3) - What happened to the DS here? Also the giant jump between 00:36:049 (3,1) - is kind of sudden.
5. 00:40:937 (4,5,6) - Do you try to follow the vocals with this triplet? I'm quite unsure if they even hit the blue tick. A 1/2 Slider would sound much better in my ears.
6. 00:43:270 (1,2,3,1) - Maybe it's just me but these are placed somewhat weird. Relocating it as a kind of square or triangle would be nice.
7. 00:54:270 (1) - Might be a personal preference but the shape could be improved a lot by smoothening out the curves.
8. 00:59:436 (4) - Why is there a bigger jump to this note? The vocals on the following one are much more emphasized so that a jump to them would make more sense imo.
9. 01:00:936 (3,4) - Perhaps it's just me but it would be nice to see those jumps a bit toned down as it's the easiest Insane. Stacking 4 with 01:00:603 (2) - 's tail would work.
10. 01:01:269 (5) - There's a pretty strong cymbal on the red tick this ends on that would be much more natural as a clickable action. Either using two circles or CTRL+G'ing 01:01:103 (4,5) - rhythm-wise would work.
11. 01:03:269 (2,3) - The stack here kinda kills the the momentum. Unstacking them would continue the flow from the previous objects and with that make it play more natural.
12. 01:04:936 (3,4,5,6) - Shortening the Spacing would be much better here to aim this. Keep in mind it's your easiest Insane difficulty.
13. 01:09:769 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Unsure if it's just me but reducing the spacing could make this more enjoyable to aim. Nothing you have to apply though.
14. 01:10:435 (9,1) - The stream to anit-jump may be kind of confusing to play. Having a bigger spacing to 1 would improve the readability a lot.
15. 01:13:269 (6) - Why is there a finish on the tail?
16. The diff can take some more professional mods to be improved :/

1. 00:11:862 (3,4) - What are you following with the tails? The pressure isn't needed here and there are also some quiet drum sounds. 1/2 would sound much better.
2. 00:15:604 (3) - /Minor/ - Blanket with 00:16:271 (1) - looks pretty poor. It can be easily improved like this. I'd also like to mention the overlap with 00:14:938 (1,3) - which looks a bit out of place here imo, but if you want to keep it, it should be fine.
3. 00:16:604 (2,3) - What happened to the spacing?
4. 00:28:771 (2,3) - It would be nice to see these unstacked as all the others here were 1/3 which made me feel weird at clicking this making me almost click it like 1/3 lol
5. 00:31:271 (2) - The rhythm is pretty weird to follow because you left out the strong drum at 00:31:382 - which is at least for me the most emphasized and with that the most important note here. This would be much better if you ask me. (Additionally removing 00:31:937 (4) - would emphasize the stronger drum note afterwards as well)
6. 00:35:160 (2,3) - This might be just me but this was pretty hard to follow as the other 2/3 gaps here had much bigger spacing. A diamond would work well.
7. 00:57:436 (7,8,1) - Stacking this with 00:56:103 (1) - 's head like this would even out the pattern in order to fit 00:56:769 (3,6) - better.
8. 01:02:603 (5) - The extension here doesn't really fit that well in my opinion. Decreasing its length by 1/4 would help. If you don't want this, put soft-sampleset at the tail to get rid of that overdone sound there.
9. 01:09:269 (1,2,3) - What is this? There's nothing on the blue tick 1 is ending on and 2|3 are kinda out of place as well. Try this for a much more natural rhythm.
10. 01:19:436 (1,2,3) - Having the same DS visually between the notes but different gaps in time doesn't really make sense to me and may be confusing as well. Having a more clear spacing could improve this by a lot. (Applies for the following ones as well)
11. 01:25:603 (1,2,3,4) - Why is the DS between the Sliders itself so different? The music is pretty much the same. Also the very small spacing to 4 really slows me down while playing this. Trying something like this here would play much more fluent. (Applies for the following ones as well)

Cherry Blossom wrote:

rip incoming.

guineaQ wrote:

On a more helpful note, Aerous I'll be willing to do that same aesthetic polishing mod I did for your easy again if you wish to.

Just send me a pm after you polish out the rhythm as Mao suggested.

1. Several issues in snapping throughout the Insane difficulties:
   [notice]
   • 
     Insane
   1. 00:15:438 (2) - Should be snapped to the following 1/3-Tick.
   2. 00:18:271 (2) - Tail should be snapped to 1/3.
   3. 00:23:937 (4) - ^
   4. 00:26:604 (3) - ^
   5. 00:30:937 (1,2) - Should be snapped like 00:33:604 (1,2) - .
   6. 00:31:604 (3,4) - This should follow 1/3 like this to be accurate.
   7. 00:32:271 (1,2,3) - All sliders should be snapped to 1/3.
   8. 00:34:271 (3,4) - Same as 00:30:937 (1,2) - .
      
      Changed it to what you told me to do
      
      ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
      
      

      Additional Modding

      
      [General]
      
      1. I'm not sure if it's just me but it would be quite nice to see the first combo color a bit brighter to see the difference to the third one better. Example
         

         [Colours]
         Combo1 : 6,140,185
         Combo2 : 181,174,175
         Combo3 : 231,0,20
         Combo4 : 87,89,88
         Combo5 : 244,123,132

      I'll add the colors , when Yuzu has applied mods
      
      [ Easy]
      
      1. The way the last section has been hitsounded with the drum-sampleset-like claps sound kind of odd. Why didn't you just do it like in the Insane? Added hitsounds
      2. 00:01:482 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'd recommend you to use curved Sliders here instead of these red anchor ones to follow this calm and quiet atmosphere of the song much better. Changed to curved sliders
      3. 00:26:937 (3) - How about moving this higher to get a kind of wave-ish movement? That would play pretty nice if you ask me. Moved it higher
      4. 00:30:937 - The volume in this section is like very very low. Please raise it by at least 20% and also place claps like you did in the Insane. As it is now, the part feels really quiet and can't represent the drums at all. Made it to 45
      5. 00:33:604 (1,3) - These two don't really fit each other in my opinion. How about using such a CTRL+G|H pattern? CTRL + H , added
      6. 00:36:271 - Again in this section these red anchor sliders like 00:37:271 (3) - , 00:43:270 (2) - and 00:48:270 (1,2) - for instance don't fit this soft violin imo. For 00:43:270 (2) - for example a wave would fit well if you ask me. I'll consider , no change for now
      7. 00:48:270 (1) - Why is the end so short? The Slider doesn't really fit here imo and even if it might be a personal preference, something like this would be way smoother. No change here , since I think its fine now
      8. 00:56:936 (4) - The red anchor here is barely visible ingame so why is it even there? Do you want to emphasize something? Otherwise just delete the anchor and go for a linear one. (SELF REMINDER) Double check this part
      9. 01:11:603 (2) - It's pretty sad how the red tick in the middle has been ignored here since it's a really strong cymbal and also strong vocals. This would sound much better. [color=#FF000]Changed to what you told me to do[/color]
      10. 01:16:936 (3,4) - The rhythm here was quite hard to follow for me. Following the strong cymbals like this works well. I'll consider , but for now I'll leave it
      11. This could take some improvements in terms of these red anchor Sliders.
      [ Insane]
      
      1. 00:16:937 (3,4) - Didn't you use gaps for 1/3 before? Looks kind of inconsistent to me. Trying this would clean it up and make it consistent. Added a gap , similar to previous pattern.
      2. 00:28:271 (1,2) - /Minor/ - Consistent 1/1 Spacing would be much cooler here. Added spacing
      3. 00:29:604 (4,5,6,1) - I usually like such patterns but I didn't really enjoy playing it here. This would play much smoother imo. [Changed what you told me to
      4. 00:35:604 (1,2,3) - What happened to the DS here? Also the giant jump between 00:36:049 (3,1) - is kind of sudden. Made the DS consistent and made DS smaller between 00:36:049 (3,1)
      5. 00:40:937 (4,5,6) - Do you try to follow the vocals with this triplet? I'm quite unsure if they even hit the blue tick. A 1/2 Slider would sound much better in my ears. Changed to to a 1/2 slider
      6. 00:43:270 (1,2,3,1) - Maybe it's just me but these are placed somewhat weird. Relocating it as a kind of square or triangle would be nice.
         [Changed to triangle
      7. 00:54:270 (1) - Might be a personal preference but the shape could be improved a lot by smoothening out the curves. Its fine i think
      8. 00:59:436 (4) - Why is there a bigger jump to this note? The vocals on the following one are much more emphasized so that a jump to them would make more sense imo. Changed to consistent distance
      9. 01:00:936 (3,4) - Perhaps it's just me but it would be nice to see those jumps a bit toned down as it's the easiest Insane. Stacking 4 with 01:00:603 (2) - 's tail would work. Changed this part and made the jumps a bit
      10. 01:01:269 (5) - There's a pretty strong cymbal on the red tick this ends on that would be much more natural as a clickable action. Either using two circles or CTRL+G'ing 01:01:103 (4,5) - rhythm-wise would work. [Changed by CTRL +G'ing
      11. 01:03:269 (2,3) - The stack here kinda kills the the momentum. Unstacking them would continue the flow from the previous objects and with that make it play more natural. Unstacked them
      12. 01:04:936 (3,4,5,6) - Shortening the Spacing would be much better here to aim this. Keep in mind it's your easiest Insane difficulty. Lowered my spacing
      13. 01:09:769 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Unsure if it's just me but reducing the spacing could make this more enjoyable to aim. Nothing you have to apply though. Its fine , but I might change the DS a bit though
      14. 01:10:435 (9,1) - The stream to anit-jump may be kind of confusing to play. Having a bigger spacing to 1 would improve the readability a lot. Added bigger spacing
      15. 01:13:269 (6) - Why is there a finish on the tail? Whoops accident , nice catch
      16. The diff can take some more professional mods to be improved :/

Gaia wrote:

!summon Q-chan

Mao wrote:

Reason for Disqualification

1. Several issues in snapping throughout the Insane difficulties:
   
   • 
     
     -Yuzuriha's Insane

   1. 00:07:082 (1) - End should be snapped to 1/3. OK
      
   2. 00:16:937 (3,4) - , 00:22:271 (3,4) - , 00:27:604 (3,4) - Should be snapped to 1/2. OK
      
   3. 00:15:604 (3) - Should be 1/2. sorry... i think matched better 1/3 than 2/1
      
   4. 00:23:604 (3) - ^
   5. 00:24:271 (1) - ^
   6. 00:30:826 (5) - ^ OK
   7. 00:50:604 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1/2 (or 3/4 with soft-sampleset at the tails) would sound much better here as well imo. OK

___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________


[ -Yuzuriha's Insane]

1. 00:11:862 (3,4) - What are you following with the tails? The pressure isn't needed here and there are also some quiet drum sounds. 1/2 would sound much better. OK
   
2. 00:15:604 (3) - /Minor/ - Blanket with 00:16:271 (1) - looks pretty poor. It can be easily improved like this. I'd also like to mention the overlap with 00:14:938 (1,3) - which looks a bit out of place here imo, but if you want to keep it, it should be fine. OK
   
3. 00:16:604 (2,3) - What happened to the spacing? OK
   
4. 00:28:771 (2,3) - It would be nice to see these unstacked as all the others here were 1/3 which made me feel weird at clicking this making me almost click it like 1/3 lol sorry
   
5. 00:31:271 (2) - The rhythm is pretty weird to follow because you left out the strong drum at 00:31:382 - which is at least for me the most emphasized and with that the most important note here. This would be much better if you ask me. (Additionally removing 00:31:937 (4) - would emphasize the stronger drum note afterwards as well) sorry
6. 00:35:160 (2,3) - This might be just me but this was pretty hard to follow as the other 2/3 gaps here had much bigger spacing. A diamond would work well. sorry... i think difficaut
7. 00:57:436 (7,8,1) - Stacking this with 00:56:103 (1) - 's head like this would even out the pattern in order to fit 00:56:769 (3,6) - better. OK
   
8. 01:02:603 (5) - The extension here doesn't really fit that well in my opinion. Decreasing its length by 1/4 would help. If you don't want this, put soft-sampleset at the tail to get rid of that overdone sound there. 5slider teil add soft sample
9. 01:09:269 (1,2,3) - What is this? There's nothing on the blue tick 1 is ending on and 2|3 are kinda out of place as well. Try this for a much more natural rhythm. I changed a little
   
10. 01:19:436 (1,2,3) - Having the same DS visually between the notes but different gaps in time doesn't really make sense to me and may be confusing as well. Having a more clear spacing could improve this by a lot. (Applies for the following ones as well) OK
    
11. 01:25:603 (1,2,3,4) - Why is the DS between the Sliders itself so different? The music is pretty much the same. Also the very small spacing to 4 really slows me down while playing this. Trying something like this here would play much more fluent. (Applies for the following ones as well) OK

CDFA wrote:

this song sux anyway

1. For the future, put on Grid level 4 of you're using grid snap for DSing as well. Or else you'll get some inconsistent spacings here and there like the one's i mention below.
2. 00:04:682 (5) - Whistle on sliderend
3. 00:09:062 (2,3) - Looks clearly like a blanket, so please fix it appropriately.
4. 00:22:937 (1,2,3) - Spacing here is really off. fix.
5. 00:30:937 (1,2,3) - Blanket and spacing are off
6. 00:34:604 (2,3) - Blanket properly. Also at 01:00:936 (2,3) -
7. 00:48:270 - Uhm, it feels weird to set finish HS on all slider HS here to be honest when you compare it to your Insane where you haven't set them at all. Try to be consistent here.
8. 01:05:936 (1,2,3) - Spacing again.
9. 01:08:269 (1) - Make this: http://puu.sh/dQQ0P/4940419ad7.jpg . Looks much cooler B-)
10. 01:18:936 - Soft-sample in the easy while it's NC:3-sample in the insane ugh... Better make it normal-sample, also because the finish HS don't fit in the music too well.
11. 01:18:936 (1,2,1) - Check spacing.
12. This got much better as well. Structure could be still improved.

1. 00:01:482 (1,2,3) - Check the spacing here again, it should be the same (check with CTRL+J slider 3 and make sure it overlaps with 1)
2. 00:11:462 (1,2,3) - If you want to think about this pattern by making 1 slightly curvy, then copypaste it with -120°/240°: http://puu.sh/dQzDL/aee3d83f1c.jpg
3. 00:16:937 (3) - 1/2 slider is more viable for the piano imo, also: 00:17:437 - You miss a vital beat in the track if you leave this out, make 00:17:271 (4) - a slider. Suggestion? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2411449
4. 00:18:937 (4) - This beat follows vocal and chorus, and I think setting a circle isn't the most viable solution because both are holding notes. Better make a 1/1 slider here.
5. 00:22:604 - Better set a slider here to follow instrumental as well.
6. 00:23:437 (2) - For a better HS effect on the next beat, make this soft-sample only.
7. 00:33:382 - Set a beat here to make clear that you're following the drum snares.
8. 00:36:049 (3) - Finish instead?
9. 00:40:270 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing is really weird here, keep the 1.8xDS in this combo.
10. 00:42:270 (4) - Miss NC here.
11. 00:42:270 (4,5,6) - Try to use the same DS here. Why is this so high-spaced? ><
12. 00:45:770 (2,3) - A bit more to the right, there should be a jump to the next blue combo naturally: http://puu.sh/dQBt7/ed5136ae7d.jpg
13. 01:07:603 (1) - Minor: Push this up a bit so it doesn't overlap with the upcoming circle 3.
14. 01:07:603 (1,3) - NC on 3 first.
15. 01:09:102 (1,2) - ^
16. 01:17:436 (1,2) - ^, as your general rule of NCing is NC after every stanza
17. 01:11:103 (2) - This offbeat slider starts on a beat that is notably weaker than the beat where it's ending. Might avoid this by fixing up the rhythm pattern: http://puu.sh/dQF8B/be7cd8da98.jpg
18. 01:18:936 - I feel like the after-kiai section looks really dispersed due to your style spacing objects relatively high. You could consider using some symmetric patterns to make it look neater.
    To give an example, you could 01:20:269 (1,2,3,4) - delete these and instead copy-paste and ctrl+H the previous combo at 01:18:936 (1,2,3,4) - . Will look like: http://puu.sh/dQDeN/47ebc65e48.jpg
    The same can be applied to 01:26:936 (1,2,3,4) - by deleting this and replace with 01:25:603 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - . It will look like: http://puu.sh/dQCQr/77865d6472.jpg
    I don't know if this fits to your style at all, but symmetry was the easiest way I could come up with to give you an idea of how you could improve this section while still maintaining the high spacing. Feel free to decline this whole point, as it's pretty much personal :v
19. Some weird spacing here and there and sometimes you seem to follow the vocal too much that you miss out beats in the background music. Otherwise nice job, this got much better already from the first time i looked at it.

1. 00:11:862 (3,4,5) - Strange spacing here, why not make it equal? (Or at least with a higher emphasis between 4-5)
2. 00:15:604 (3) - 00:23:604 (3) - 00:24:271 (1) - I don't think this is a DQ reason, these follow the vocal fine.
3. 00:22:271 (3,4) - I think i pointed that out before already: I really recommend you switch these out with 1/2 sliders. For 3 I could somewhat understand that it goes with the e-guitar, but 4 follows nothing appropriate in the track.
4. 00:27:604 (3,4) - Same as above. What exactly are these sliders following?
5. 00:31:271 (2) - Ehh, this slider starts on no beat relatable to the music and makes for an awkward rhythm.
   Same suggestion as Mao. If not, then at least explain why you do so, I won't be content with a 'sorry'. :c
6. 00:33:937 (2) - This is a void beat, there's no beat in the track at where it ends.
   In addition, 00:34:160 (2) - has the same issue. The vocal is on the red tick via 1/4 BS, not the violet one via 1/3 BS.
   You have to simplify this: http://puu.sh/dQM4d/d7b623a62d.jpg
7. 00:38:771 (1) - No need for NC, delete
8. 00:50:270 (4,1) - NC at 4 already.
9. Better. Still too many extended sliders for my taste :/

guineaQ wrote:

Gaia wrote:

!summon Q-chan

!summoning succeeded
!Gaia gains +10 exp in summoning skill
Just took a quick peek at the Easy, yes it looks much better, but not perfect

So I'm here to help you make it perfect (aesthetics wise and some hitsound errors too I heard)

But remember that this is YOUR map so it's totally up to you to distinguish whether you really want to apply these or not
HUGE LOADS OF PICS AHEAD

Some will be repeating the same thing from previous mod but that's because you chose to ignore it :> so im gonna rub it in your face again nah jk

I'm going to be looking at EVERYTHING

Ultra Mega Deluxe Easy mod

Aesthetics/Flow/Happiness

1. 00:01:482 (1,2,3) - So I have 3 issues with this pattern
   1. The flow is not the most optimal one
   2. This kind of pattern can be easily symmetric
   3. Slider shapes can be spiced up
   
   You can ignore 2 and 3 but I think it's necessary that you fix the problem (1) at least
   
   problem 1 fixed

   
   
   smooth it out a bit
   
   
   problem 1 & 2 fixed

   
   
   pretty simple
   
   Well for 3 I'm not gonna put it here since this is the part you get to have fun with slider shapes (as long as you don't spam like 13313413135 nodes)
   There is nothing wrong with using ctrl c+v+j+h+g they are there to help you make neat stuffs
2. 00:04:682 (5) - it would be nice if you made this reverse slider symmetrical to one above which is 00:03:082 (3) -
3. 00:09:062 (2,3) - recheck blanket
4. 00:16:271 (3) - x:238 y:54
5. 00:17:604 (1,2,3) - what do you think about this?
   
   this i mean this

   
   
   the 3's red joint is exactly on the slider tick
6. 00:20:271 (1,2,3) - Look at the box for full explanation/suggestions
   
   Click dis for profit

   Few issues, the rhythm/aesthetic and flow.
   
   First of all use this rhythm:
   
   
   And for aesthetics/flow placement I recommend
   
   Beware that slider 1 might be touching the HP bar so play around with it a little (for slider 1 I just did ctrl+< and ctrl+g)
   
   Explanation for that rhythm: You missed a big guitar strum at the white tick 00:21:937 - and for this you can actually use a 1/1 reverse slider like you already did at 00:24:271 (3) -
7. 00:22:937 (1,2,3) - Just very minor suggestion
   
   dis suggestion

   
8. 00:25:604 (1,2,3) - just minor, smoothen out the flow like
   
   dis

   
   
   don't forget to rearrange
9. 00:28:271 (1,2,3) - below dis u have a box, open it
   
   yee

   
   
   I recommend S shaped slider for slider 1 due to the vocal hold/vibration.
10. 00:30:937 (1,2) - blanketorino
11. 00:30:937 (1,2,3,4) - dis flow works finer
    
    dem flows

    
12. 00:33:604 (1,2,3) - imagine a world full of blanke- em no
    
    suggestion

    
    
    The slider end of slider 1 makes some neat shape with 00:30:937 (1,2,3) - , check it out on editor :>
13. 00:36:271 (1,2,3) - simple fix, just straighten these out
    
    liek

    
14. 00:37:271 (3,1,2) - Having your objects connect seamlessly is nice
    
    SPOILER

    
15. 00:39:271 (2,1) - is fine but 00:41:270 (2,1,2) - can be spiced up liek
    
    dis

    
    btw i made 00:41:270 (2) - like that so the first direction of slider is parallel to 00:40:270 (1) - , and the rest of the slider direction going away from 00:39:271 (2) - 's slider end
16. 00:46:270 (1,2,3) - ok im running out of ideas
    
    really

    
    
    Could use the same logic as 00:28:271 (1,2,3) - and made 3 a S shaped slider but than you would need to rearrange other patterns :<
17. 00:48:270 (1,1) - I would give either more convoluted shape for these sliders or make them into 1/1 reverse sliders.
    I'm just gonna copy paste from my previous easy mod for this lol
    <00:48:270 (1) - I think it would be better to use single reverse slider because there is noticeable vocal syllable at 00:48:604 -
    00:49:270 (2,1,2) - same issue as 00:48:270 (1) - , but i don't think it is necessary to change them because their syllable rhymes like for 00:50:270 (1) - it is from "ka" to "ta" and 00:49:270 (2) - is from "hi" which almost sounds like yi to "yo"which almost sounds like "hyo" unlike 00:47:270 (3) - which clearly doesnt have neither rhyme or assonance since its from "ku" to "sa">
18. 01:00:936 (2,3) - Check blanket =w=b
19. 01:02:936 (1,3) - dont want to be too nazi (Wait I think its too late for that) but the symmetry isn't perfect
20. 01:04:936 (4,1,2) - This flows much better
    
    wwwwww flowwwwww

    
21. 01:08:269 (1,2) - check blanket wlajdglasga
22. 01:12:936 (3,4,5) - just minor fix
    
    wdwdwdw

    
23. 01:18:936 (1) - sometimes simple is best, the problem i have with current shape is that its kinda too packed tight
    
    make the slider path more visible

    
24. 01:21:603 (1,2,3) - simple rearrangement
    
    sdfasfas

    
25. 01:23:936 (4,5) - ^^
    
    

Hitsounds

1. 00:17:604 (1) - Whistle on slider head Changed
2. 00:18:937 (3) - ^^ Changed
3. 00:21:604 (3) - drum sampleset at the end sounds better rather than normal I think its fine as it is
4. 00:24:271 (3) - ^^ Changed
5. 00:26:937 (3) - ^^ Changed
6. 00:59:603 (3) - you put whistle on the slider body by accident, remove it Changed
7. 01:15:603 (1) - ^^ Changed
8. 01:21:603 (1,2,3,4,5) - maybe you can put some hitsounds on these?

Added

if you do fix majority of this rename the diff to guineaQ's Easy LOL JUST KIDDING

Feel free to call me back to double check whether you got dem aesthetics right

VINXIS wrote:

CDFA wrote:

this song sux anyway

yeh

from me fukin modding q

just the Easy diff cuz that's wat u said

General

l2readmoddingqueuerulesuscrob
jmmxp didn't die for this

wheres the widescreen suport m9

EZ mod

00:03:982 (4) - x:40 y:184
00:29:271 (2,3) - make a blanket pls
00:42:270 (1,2) - ^
00:49:270 (2,1) - ^
00:54:936 (1) - x:352 y:152
01:04:103 (3,4) - blanketpls
01:25:603 (1) - take out the 5% volume there's no point putting it ther mang and u dont want it unranked again lo l (idk i was told 5% vol. is unrankable or smth like that)
i also think you could map likea measure more because the spinner feels 2long4me
lolnvm

k hurry and get it reranked so i can hdhr captin's pp

xxdeathx wrote:

Yeah, this song's 1/3 is really tough to get right. Best to cross-check with all difficulties to make sure they're consistent.

Julie wrote:

For timing issue I still find this >,<

Insane
00:31:437 (2) - this part doesn't have any sound, while the drum is on 1/3 here 00:31:382
00:31:937 (4) - slider end really not sure, I hear drum part here 00:32:049 or if you want to end it for voice 00:32:160 , all 1/3 for me for these part
00:34:604 (4) - slider end only one that is snap on 1/4 while all this 00:33:604 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) is 1/3. You can either end it here 00:34:826 for voice or 00:34:715 - for drum sound

Welp gl reranking it

Pho wrote:

And I thought it'd pass the 7-days limit QQ

Call me back via PM if you want a shorter mod on the DQ issues, I'm willing to take a closer look on your insane now (and also again on yuzuriha's if wanted).

Allright, here goes round 2.

Bold: Unrankable / very highly recommended
Red: Highly recommended

[Easy]

1. For the future, put on Grid level 4 of you're using grid snap for DSing as well. Or else you'll get some inconsistent spacings here and there like the one's i mention below.
2. 00:04:682 (5) - Whistle on sliderend
3. 00:09:062 (2,3) - Looks clearly like a blanket, so please fix it appropriately.
4. 00:22:937 (1,2,3) - Spacing here is really off. fix.
5. 00:30:937 (1,2,3) - Blanket and spacing are off
6. 00:34:604 (2,3) - Blanket properly. Also at 01:00:936 (2,3) -
7. 00:48:270 - Uhm, it feels weird to set finish HS on all slider HS here to be honest when you compare it to your Insane where you haven't set them at all. Try to be consistent here.
8. 01:05:936 (1,2,3) - Spacing again.
9. 01:08:269 (1) - Make this: http://puu.sh/dQQ0P/4940419ad7.jpg . Looks much cooler B-)
10. 01:18:936 - Soft-sample in the easy while it's NC:3-sample in the insane ugh... Better make it normal-sample, also because the finish HS don't fit in the music too well.
11. 01:18:936 (1,2,1) - Check spacing.
12. This got much better as well. Structure could be still improved.

Changed all of them

[Insane]

1. 00:01:482 (1,2,3) - Check the spacing here again, it should be the same (check with CTRL+J slider 3 and make sure it overlaps with 1) Changed
2. 00:11:462 (1,2,3) - If you want to think about this pattern by making 1 slightly curvy, then copypaste it with -120°/240°: http://puu.sh/dQzDL/aee3d83f1c.jpg Changed
3. 00:16:937 (3) - 1/2 slider is more viable for the piano imo, also: 00:17:437 - You miss a vital beat in the track if you leave this out, make 00:17:271 (4) - a slider. Suggestion? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2411449 Changed
4. 00:18:937 (4) - This beat follows vocal and chorus, and I think setting a circle isn't the most viable solution because both are holding notes. Better make a 1/1 slider here. Changed
5. 00:22:604 - Better set a slider here to follow instrumental as well. Changed
6. 00:23:437 (2) - For a better HS effect on the next beat, make this soft-sample only. Changed
7. 00:33:382 - Set a beat here to make clear that you're following the drum snares. Changed
8. 00:36:049 (3) - Finish instead? Changed
9. 00:40:270 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing is really weird here, keep the 1.8xDS in this combo. Changed
10. 00:42:270 (4) - Miss NC here. Changed
11. 00:42:270 (4,5,6) - Try to use the same DS here. Why is this so high-spaced? >< Changed
12. 00:45:770 (2,3) - A bit more to the right, there should be a jump to the next blue combo naturally: http://puu.sh/dQBt7/ed5136ae7d.jpg No change here , since I placed it there on purpose.
    
13. 01:07:603 (1) - Minor: Push this up a bit so it doesn't overlap with the upcoming circle 3. Changed
14. 01:07:603 (1,3) - NC on 3 first.Changed
15. 01:09:102 (1,2) - ^ Changed
16. 01:17:436 (1,2) - ^, as your general rule of NCing is NC after every stanza Changed
17. 01:11:103 (2) - This offbeat slider starts on a beat that is notably weaker than the beat where it's ending. Might avoid this by fixing up the rhythm pattern: http://puu.sh/dQF8B/be7cd8da98.jpg Changed
18. 01:18:936 - I feel like the after-kiai section looks really dispersed due to your style spacing objects relatively high. You could consider using some symmetric patterns to make it look neater. Changed
    To give an example, you could 01:20:269 (1,2,3,4) - delete these and instead copy-paste and ctrl+H the previous combo at 01:18:936 (1,2,3,4) - . Will look like: http://puu.sh/dQDeN/47ebc65e48.jpg Changed
    The same can be applied to 01:26:936 (1,2,3,4) - by deleting this and replace with 01:25:603 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - . It will look like: http://puu.sh/dQCQr/77865d6472.jpg Changed
    I don't know if this fits to your style at all, but symmetry was the easiest way I could come up with to give you an idea of how you could improve this section while still maintaining the high spacing. Feel free to decline this whole point, as it's pretty much personal :v
19. Some weird spacing here and there and sometimes you seem to follow the vocal too much that you miss out beats in the background music. Otherwise nice job, this got much better already from the first time i looked at it.