1. Futsuu (2.13 stars, 259 notes)
2. Kantan (1.25 stars, 168 notes)
3. Muzukashii (2.78 stars, 433 notes)
4. Oni (3.33 stars, 588 notes)

remiliuh wrote:

this map is super super super fun *o* i found no issues in any of the difficulties!! its easy and relaxed but still really fun to play!! good job!!

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"05f5f500baa1cd1149a02f00bb12c8fcc3ce2da1.jpg",0,125
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

Genocide wrote:

maybe this isn't a mod so feel free to ignore my suggestion

[General]
oni = hpod =5
muzu = hpod= 4
futsuu = hpod = 3
kantan = hpod = 2 for better spread Keep. hpod=2 or 3 at 135bpm is too easy.
Offset 279 :arrow : 280

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"05f5f500baa1cd1149a02f00bb12c8fcc3ce2da1.jpg",0,125
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

use that code idk what does this mean. sry i keep.
Your BG resolution is 788x443 try to find one 1025x768 , it will be rankable found a new one instead
00:39:167 - for preview song ok
and untick the wide screen on song setup -> design ok. but i wonder if it will effect sth?

[Oni]
00:19:612 (1,1,1) - kdk more clean and follow the vocal keep. the vocal 'e ra' is higher.
00:38:945 (3) - d since you did 00:39:391 (1) - K here change to ddk
00:43:945 - add don here since you did ddd 00:43:168 (1,1,1) - keep
00:44:613 (1) - d ok
00:45:835 (1) - K? hmm i don't thing it so , try change it to mini kat its more fit with the song ok
01:21:501 - add don here cause 01:17:946 (137) - ok
01:31:168 (209,210,211,212,213,214,215,216) - 3/2 spam is annoying imo, try add 01:31:723 - don here and 01:32:612 - don too keep
01:35:613 (233) - k ok
01:39:278 - d here for better snare imo ok
good luck !

mrdumpling64 wrote:

Hi from mod queue, sorry for taking a while.

Kantan

HP: 4 --> 3 ok

00:13:167 (1,1) - dk? I think it fits her vocal better. changed to dd
00:48:278 (1) - k? keep
00:52:723 (1) - K? I think it fits the ”で” better. ok

otherwise nothing really, notes placed fit with vocals very well.

Futsuu

00:00:279 (1,1) - finishers ok
00:01:167 (1) - move to 00:00:945 (1) - since that is where the drum sound is. keep
00:13:612 (1) - k keep

Muzukashi

HP, OD: 5 --> 4 keep

00:06:057 (1) - k keep
00:24:279 (1) - swap with 00:24:057 (1) - keep
00:55:391 (1) - k? keep
01:08:502 (1) - k? ok
01:17:168 (1,1) - I think d is more suitable here because her voice deepens at this point. ok

Oni

nothing really to point out.

Good luck.

1. d is don note
2. k is kat note
3. D is big don note
4. K is big kat note

• 
  
  Good~

• 
  
  *00:03:838 - why Kantan=first notes is here? I think Futsuu is good.
  
  *00:10:945 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - This pattern=follow the vocal (Very Good). but,1/1-pattern is long.so 00:11:394 - & 00:13:164 - delete? I think 1/1-pattern=max 5-notes? (Kantan) other...
  
  *01:00:276 - delete.because,pattern is long & 01:00:721 - new part melody start line.
  
  *01:01:170 - & 01:02:952 - delete. same as above.
  
  *second kiai time=1/1-pattern is xxx-xxx-xxx-xxx=I feel hard.I think first kiai time is good.so some delete?
  
  [ Futsuu][list:1337]
  
  *00:04:055 - & 00:05:848 - & 00:07:608 - delete.1/2-pattern is xxx-xxx-xxx-xxx=I feel hard.so some delete.
  
  *00:29:402 - delete.no need.
  
  *00:41:400 - delete.I think hard.
  
  *00:48:508 - ^
  
  *00:55:390 (1,1,1,1,2,3,1,2) - If hard pattern,00:56:497 - & 00:57:167 - delete. (option)
  
  *01:31:161 - delete.1/2-six notes=I feel hard...
  
  *01:38:278 - ^

• 
  
  *00:03:604 - delete.no need.
  
  *00:10:383 - delete.
  
  *00:10:708 - ^
  
  *00:23:175 - pattern is long so delete.
  
  *00:37:385 - ^
  
  *00:51:608 - ^ but,kiai time...so (option)
  
  *00:51:957 - delete.no need.
  
  I check First verse.Try change Second verse.

• 
  
  *00:35:620 - delete
  
  *00:42:279 - ^
  
  *01:32:062 - ^
  
  *01:25:399 - ^

Charlotte wrote:

hi~.from game in chat

[ about]

1. d is don note
2. k is kat note
3. D is big don note
4. K is big kat note

[ General]

• 
  
  Good~

[ Kantan]

• 
  
  *00:03:838 - why Kantan=first notes is here? I think Futsuu is good. filled
  
  *00:10:945 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - This pattern=follow the vocal (Very Good). but,1/1-pattern is long.so 00:11:394 - & 00:13:164 - delete? I think 1/1-pattern=max 5-notes? (Kantan) other... shortened by my way.
  
  *01:00:276 - delete.because,pattern is long & 01:00:721 - new part melody start line. ok
  
  *01:01:170 - & 01:02:952 - delete. same as above.
  
  *second kiai time=1/1-pattern is xxx-xxx-xxx-xxx=I feel hard.I think first kiai time is good.so some delete? made some changes
  
  [ Futsuu][list:1337]
  
  *00:04:055 - & 00:05:848 - & 00:07:608 - delete.1/2-pattern is xxx-xxx-xxx-xxx=I feel hard.so some delete. ok
  
  *00:29:402 - delete.no need. ok
  
  *00:41:400 - delete.I think hard.
  
  *00:48:508 - ^
  
  *00:55:390 (1,1,1,1,2,3,1,2) - If hard pattern,00:56:497 - & 00:57:167 - delete. (option)
  
  *01:31:161 - delete.1/2-six notes=I feel hard...
  
  *01:38:278 - ^ generally becomes simpler than before

[ Muzukashii]

• 
  
  *00:03:604 - delete.no need. ok
  
  *00:10:383 - delete. keep
  
  *00:10:708 - ^ keep
  
  *00:23:175 - pattern is long so delete. made another change
  
  *00:37:385 - ^ ok
  
  *00:51:608 - ^ but,kiai time...so (option) keep
  
  *00:51:957 - delete.no need.
  
  I check First verse.Try change Second verse. almost changed

[ Oni]

• 
  
  *00:35:620 - delete
  
  *00:42:279 - ^
  
  *01:32:062 - ^
  
  *01:25:399 - ^ shortened the patterns

Oni diff=fan map=V=! Good luck fun* lol

Thank you for your modding!

• [Kantan]

1. 00:34:501 (1) - consider moving this note to 00:33:612 - ? The use of triple 1/1 notes is too frequent, which makes this part a bit monotonous.
2. 00:38:501 (1) - maybe k for the snare sound which is similar to 00:38:056 (1) - ?
3. 00:42:945 (1) - consider removing finish here ? A bit overemphasized since it does not have the cymbal sound like 00:39:390 (1) and 00:46:501 (1) -
4. 00:52:723 (1) - D would be better since the vocal pitch is lower than 00:52:278 (1) -
5. 00:56:723 (7) - move to 00:56:278 - and change to k ? It would sound better imo.
6. 01:00:278 (13) - move to 00:59:834 - and remove finish ? ^
7. 01:00:723 - Adding d here would be great for the vocal if you change ^
8. 01:23:390 (1) - d ? This could reflect the pitch change in a way better.
9. 01:32:722 (1) - same as 00:42:945 (1) -
10. 01:45:612 (1) - k and 01:46:056 (1) - d for following the vocal ?

• [Futsuu]

1. 00:00:279 (1,1) - you may remove the finish here for consistency across all diffs.
2. 00:20:278 (1) - k would be better for the relatively high-pitched vocal.
3. 00:30:945 (1,1,1) - consider changing these notes to d k d for both the vocal and the snare.
4. 00:33:612 (1,1) - similar to ^ , d k could fit the pitch increase nicely.
5. 00:42:945 (1) - same as Kantan. This note could be changed to k for the high-pitched vocal rather than using D.
6. 00:48:945 (1) - k could fit both the snare and the higher-pitched vocal well.
7. 00:51:834 (1) - d and 00:52:723 (1) - D ? It sounds better when putting the big note at the end.
8. 01:00:278 (2) - This note could be deleted to allow a short rest for the part starting from 00:53:612 -
9. 01:09:390 (1) - maybe k here could reflect the different vocal pattern compared to 01:08:501 (1) -
10. 01:23:390 (1) - same as Kantan
11. 01:32:723 (1) - same as 00:42:945 (1) -
12. 01:41:167 (1) - maybe k for pattern consistency as 00:51:390 (1) - ?
13. 01:41:611 (1) - d and 01:42:501 (1) - D ? It sounds better when putting the big note at the end.
14. 01:45:612 (1,1) - k d could accompany the pitch drop here nicely.

• [Muzukashii]

1. 00:12:279 (1) - d would be better since the vocal pitch is lower than 00:11:390 (1) -
2. 00:15:835 (1) - ^
3. 00:37:613 (1,1) - consider swapping these notes to d k ? The vocal pitch at 00:37:835 (1) - is higher than that at 00:37:613 (1) -
4. 00:42:946 (1) - same as Kantan
5. 00:47:391 (1) - d would be nice since it has a lower vocal pitch than 00:47:168 (1) -
6. 01:00:279 (1) - same as Futsuu
7. 01:00:723 (1) - D would be better for pattern consistency.
8. 01:14:945 (1) - ^
9. 01:24:056 (1) - k here could fit both the high-pitched vocal and the snare well.
10. 01:28:279 (1) - maybe k as you did in Futsuu ?
11. 01:32:723 (1) - same as 00:42:946 (1) -
12. 01:38:502 (1,1) - consider swapping these notes to d k ? The vocal at 01:38:724 (1) - is higher-pitched than 01:38:502 (1) -

• [Oni]

1. 00:31:501 and 00:31:723 - add d for the drums ?
2. 00:42:945 (1) - same as Kantan
3. 00:48:502 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - try kdk kkd ? This could fit the vocal in a way better imo.
4. 01:00:723 (41) - same as Muzukashii
5. 01:05:835 (69,70,71) - kkd could accompany the pitch drop as well as the snares.
6. 01:14:946 (119) - same as Muzukashii
7. 01:21:278 - same as 00:31:501 -
8. 01:24:056 (169) - k would be better since the vocal pitch is quite high.
9. 01:32:723 (213) - same as 00:42:945 (1) -
   
   Quite good.

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Hi, here comes the M4M as requested in my queue.

• [Kantan]

1. 00:34:501 (1) - consider moving this note to 00:33:612 - ? The use of triple 1/1 notes is too frequent, which makes this part a bit monotonous. made some similar changes.
2. 00:38:501 (1) - maybe k for the snare sound which is similar to 00:38:056 (1) - ? keep, it's good for me
3. 00:42:945 (1) - consider removing finish here ? A bit overemphasized since it does not have the cymbal sound like 00:39:390 (1) and 00:46:501 (1) - nope, i dont think it is overemphasized.
4. 00:52:723 (1) - D would be better since the vocal pitch is lower than 00:52:278 (1) - ok
5. 00:56:723 (7) - move to 00:56:278 - and change to k ? It would sound better imo. no, thats really what i want to keep
6. 01:00:278 (13) - move to 00:59:834 - and remove finish ? ^ keep
7. 01:00:723 - Adding d here would be great for the vocal if you change ^ ^
8. 01:23:390 (1) - d ? This could reflect the pitch change in a way better. i dont think it matters
9. 01:32:722 (1) - same as 00:42:945 (1) - ^
10. 01:45:612 (1) - k and 01:46:056 (1) - d for following the vocal ?

choose to keep

• [Futsuu]

1. 00:00:279 (1,1) - you may remove the finish here for consistency across all diffs. sure
2. 00:20:278 (1) - k would be better for the relatively high-pitched vocal. ok
3. 00:30:945 (1,1,1) - consider changing these notes to d k d for both the vocal and the snare. keep
4. 00:33:612 (1,1) - similar to ^ , d k could fit the pitch increase nicely. ok
5. 00:42:945 (1) - same as Kantan. This note could be changed to k for the high-pitched vocal rather than using D. i choose this way to emphasis, and thats what i do in remaining diffs
6. 00:48:945 (1) - k could fit both the snare and the higher-pitched vocal well. ok
7. 00:51:834 (1) - d and 00:52:723 (1) - D ? It sounds better when putting the big note at the end. ok
8. 01:00:278 (2) - This note could be deleted to allow a short rest for the part starting from 00:53:612 - rest comiing soon. and i think it is necessary.
9. 01:09:390 (1) - maybe k here could reflect the different vocal pattern compared to 01:08:501 (1) - ok
10. 01:23:390 (1) - same as Kantan keep
11. 01:32:723 (1) - same as 00:42:945 (1) - ^
12. 01:41:167 (1) - maybe k for pattern consistency as 00:51:390 (1) - ? ok
13. 01:41:611 (1) - d and 01:42:501 (1) - D ? It sounds better when putting the big note at the end.ok
14. 01:45:612 (1,1) - k d could accompany the pitch drop here nicely.

umm.. keep

• [Muzukashii]

1. 00:12:279 (1) - d would be better since the vocal pitch is lower than 00:11:390 (1) - keep
2. 00:15:835 (1) - ^keep
3. 00:37:613 (1,1) - consider swapping these notes to d k ? The vocal pitch at 00:37:835 (1) - is higher than that at 00:37:613 (1) - it has better feeling imo, nothing to do with vocal
4. 00:42:946 (1) - same as Kantan keep, as i said above.
5. 00:47:391 (1) - d would be nice since it has a lower vocal pitch than 00:47:168 (1) - keep. better feeling.
6. 01:00:279 (1) - same as Futsuu keep
7. 01:00:723 (1) - D would be better for pattern consistency. since i didnt change the former one, keep.
8. 01:14:945 (1) - ^ nope
9. 01:24:056 (1) - k here could fit both the high-pitched vocal and the snare well. made some similar change
10. 01:28:279 (1) - maybe k as you did in Futsuu ? better feeling here. cuz i dont like kkdkk, uncomfortable.
11. 01:32:723 (1) - same as 00:42:946 (1) - keep
12. 01:38:502 (1,1) - consider swapping these notes to d k ? The vocal at 01:38:724 (1) - is higher-pitched than 01:38:502 (1) - keep 0 0

• [Oni]

1. 00:31:501 and 00:31:723 - add d for the drums ? yea i listened quite careful here and i was shocked that u can hear such little sound! But since its my mapset i dont want to be too sticky to the original music.
2. 00:42:945 (1) - same as Kantan ^
3. 00:48:502 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - try kdk kkd ? This could fit the vocal in a way better imo. ok
4. 01:00:723 (41) - same as Muzukashii ^
5. 01:05:835 (69,70,71) - kkd could accompany the pitch drop as well as the snares. changed to ddk
6. 01:14:946 (119) - same as Muzukashii ^
7. 01:21:278 - same as 00:31:501 - ^
8. 01:24:056 (169) - k would be better since the vocal pitch is quite high. ok
9. 01:32:723 (213) - same as 00:42:945 (1) - ^
   
   Quite good.

That's all and good luck~

game rock wrote:

Hi from Game's Queue

d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)

[Kantan]

00:18:056 - Change to k? It is better and has rhythm. keep.
00:21:612 - Change to K? Is better. D is ok
00:34:501 - Change to k To make a combination: http://puu.sh/dTCqZ/eeb4756afa.jpg k d d follow the vocal
00:35:834 - Change to K. ^
01:07:834 - Change to k for the pattern and: http://puu.sh/dTDyf/288b604b50.jpg ^
01:11:390 - Change to K. idk why, i dont like K. D is strong enough to emphasis
01:23:834 - Change to d, Is better. peak vocal
01:25:612 - Change to K. ^
01:30:945 - Change to d for the pattern. ok
01:36:278 - ^ keep
01:47:834 - Change to k. fine


[Futsuu]

00:21:612 - Change to K, Ago as a sound Clap. ^
00:35:834 - ^ ^
00:37:612 - Change to k. ok
00:41:167 - Change to k To do this:
00:41:612 - Delete this note, and change to k here 00:41:834 - and change to d here 00:42:056 - dk kd mine more follow the vocal
01:07:834 - Change to d? Is better. it is d
01:11:390 - Change to K, Ago as a sound Clap. keep
01:25:612 - ^ ^
01:38:501 - Delete this note for dk k keepd.


[Muzukashii]

00:51:834 - Change this to k for the rhythm. ok
00:52:723 - Change to K for the sound. keep
01:17:390 - Change to k for the pattern. keep. For 135bpm muzu 1/2. theres almost no pattern to say.
01:48:945 - Change to k. no kdd in muzu


[Oni]

00:04:501 - Change to k? for the rhythm and the pattern. fine
00:14:501 - ^ keep
00:48:501 - Change to d? keep
01:34:723 - Change to d? is better. keep
01:35:612 - ^ obviously KANA emphasis

I hope what my mode has been helped you , good luck

1. Use this. the difference Before After
   
   SPOILER

   [Events]
   //Background and Video events
   0,0,"Toooooothbrashattack.jpg",0,125
   //Break Periods
   //Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
   //Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
   //Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
   //Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
   //Storyboard Sound Samples
   //Background Colour Transformations
   3,100,163,162,255

2. remove your name at tag... you don't need that (and all the tag, i don't even sure myself :3 )
3. not sure there official song has (Short Ver.) 'w' put it in tag if there's no actual (Short Ver.) on the official song
4. 01:43:390 - as the end of the 2nd kiai
5. please don't use so much NC :3 modder will point your mistake easier
6. About Spread :
   
   SPOILER

   K F @91 notes difference = 0.9 SR difference
   F M @175 notes difference = 0.65 SR difference
   M O @155 notes difference = 0.55 SR difference
   
   idk, why K F difference is quite high :3 try re-check for Futsuu