Pandiar wrote:

hi
M4M from your Q

image resolution is high,sorry

00:03:812 (6) - x440y108 draw a curve What do you mean by that?
00:11:812 (4) - add whistle? Fixed
00:12:427 (7) - add whistle start point Fixed
00:13:658 (3) - add whistle Fixed
00:14:273 (1) - add whistle start point Fixed
00:14:889 (5) - ^ Fixed
00:15:504 (1) - ^ Fixed
00:16:735 (7) - ^ Fixed
00:17:966 (6) - ^ Fixed
00:18:581 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
00:28:427 (1) - how about this ? for better flow Fixed

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00:30:581 (1) - how about this? Fixed

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00:33:350 (1) - stack on 00:32:273 (2) Fixed
00:37:196 (5) - move about x384y168 Fixed
00:39:504 (1,2,3) - how about this? Fixed

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01:16:273 (3) - single note is better imo Fixed
01:54:581 - 01:54:735 (1) should start that point. for example Fixed

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02:30:581 (2) - remove it and move spinner like this Fixed

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02:43:812 (7) - should follow music.try this Fixed

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An is always cool
good luck !

sullyjhf wrote:

Yo Tochi!
M4M from your modding queue!

1. Drain time under 5min (299657 Milliseconds), so this mapset can't go approval
2. BG is so small. You should look for another one.

1. 00:00:120 (1,2) - add whistle
2. 00:10:889 (4) - why you ignore this sound?
3. 00:30:581 (1) - remove NC
4. 00:30:581 (5,1) - And try this pattern
   
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5. 00:51:504 (1,2) - Try this.
   

   323,103,51504,6,0,P|363:192|324:280,1,200,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   188,280,51966,2,0,P|149:191|189:103,1,200,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

6. 00:52:427 (1,2,3) - put 256,192?
7. 01:07:196 (1) - Remove This because this is overmap and don't fit music at all.
8. 01:07:350 (2) - exchange for a circle. there is no sound on 01:07:427 (7) -
9. 01:13:966 (1,2) - overmap. Correct rhythm is
   
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10. 01:14:581 (1) - you should end at 01:14:812
11. 01:18:889 (1,2) - overmap. Correct rhythm is
    
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12. 01:41:043 (7) - ^
    
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13. 02:30:273 (1) - remove clap. it breaks pattern
14. 02:54:889 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - overmap. Correct rhythm is
    
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15. 02:59:812 (1,2) - ^
    
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16. 03:23:812 (2,3,4) - unacceptable DS change, Please keep them.
17. 04:06:895 (1) - You should extend 04:06:587 (4) - because current pattern is not good.
18. 05:03:818 (1,2,1) - why you don't put streams????

sullyjhf wrote:

Yo Tochi!
M4M from your modding queue!

1. First off I just want to start by saying that this map and song choice are fantastic and I'm super looking forward to it getting ranked! Thank you! >.<
2. Maybe change to HP6 to make it slightly more challenging? Remember that it's a marathon, you can easy get tired + failing, by a 12 long stream!
3. 00:11:196 (1) - I think up to here should have a slightly lower slider velocity to match the pace and feel of the song at this section. Well, yeah good idea. But this is also fine ^^
4. 00:30:504 (4) - This note being abbove the slider kinda looks weird. If i were to reshape it, it would kill the spacing. If you took a screenshot, of an example, it would be helpful for geting ideas on how to reshape it.
5. 00:45:196 (4) - This rhythm fits with the piano in the background better. Yes, Fixed!
   
6. 00:50:581 (1) - This small section's claps don't fit with the snares of the music. Fixed!
7. 01:04:427 (3) - POSSIBLY change this to a 1/6 repeat slider because that is what the music does. (imo people will read this as a 1/8 repeat slider and it will be fine). Fixed!
   Like this:
   
   Or you could do what you did here: 01:13:966 (1) which doesn't fit to the music but is easier to play and read.
8. 01:04:889 (1) - Move this slider one 1/4 tick to the right and take out the (2) Fixed!
   
   This fits with the music waaay better than before.
9. 02:21:658 (1) - why are there any claps in this whole section? It sounds boring without some hitsounds. It feels empty
10. 02:34:273 (2) - This section should have the claps instead, you can put the clap aswell as the ching finish sound, I'm not gonna list them all because I'm sure you can hear where the snares are. The "ching" sounds more calm, and i also want to use it.
11. 02:53:658 (1) - I think this is meant to be a kick drum No change, it sounds fine.
12. 02:54:120 (2) - ^
13. 02:56:120 (1) - ^
14. 02:58:581 (1) - ^
15. 03:01:043 (1) - aswell as all of these Same as above.
16. There are alot more after this that should be kick drums instead of snare drums. I think it's ur skin that has the good kick drum sound, cuz i don't hear that it's god
    Up to like here 03:13:350
17. 03:23:812 (2) - imo this should be a NC because it is so close to the (1) but so 2 whole beats away. Fixed!
18. 04:14:741 (1) - Snare in wrong place No, it fits better here, and there's no other places for it.
19. 04:15:972 (3) - ^
20. 04:17:203 (1) - ^
21. 04:18:433 (6) - ^ tbh these should all be kick drums
22. 05:16:436 (4) - NC Random NC.

Urushi38 wrote:

M4M

[General]

1. Drain time under 5min (299657 Milliseconds), so this mapset can't go approval Drain time is 5:02, and there's alot of breaks. There's actually enough.
2. BG is so small. You should look for another one. BG is fine, it's actually how it should be, i talked about it with a QAT

[Sensibel]

1. 00:00:120 (1,2) - add whistle Fixed!
2. 00:10:889 (4) - why you ignore this sound? What do you mean??
3. 00:30:581 (1) - remove NC Fixed!
4. 00:30:581 (5,1) - And try this pattern Fixed!
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:51:504 (1,2) - Try this. Shit, how do i do this?? screenshot would be better
   

   323,103,51504,6,0,P|363:192|324:280,1,200,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   188,280,51966,2,0,P|149:191|189:103,1,200,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

6. 00:52:427 (1,2,3) - put 256,192? No, cuz there's a blanket.
7. 01:07:196 (1) - Remove This because this is overmap and don't fit music at all. I honestly made this for "fun" i knew someone would notice it. But yeah, removed.
8. 01:07:350 (2) - exchange for a circle. there is no sound on 01:07:427 (7) - Huh?
9. 01:13:966 (1,2) - overmap. Correct rhythm is Fixed!
   
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10. 01:14:581 (1) - you should end at 01:14:812 Fixed!
11. 01:18:889 (1,2) - overmap. Correct rhythm is Fixed!
    
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12. 01:41:043 (7) - ^ Not this.
    
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13. 02:30:273 (1) - remove clap. it breaks pattern Fixed!
14. 02:54:889 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - overmap. Correct rhythm is Fixed!
    
    SPOILER

    
15. 02:59:812 (1,2) - ^ Fixed!
    
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16. 03:23:812 (2,3,4) - unacceptable DS change, Please keep them. Um, this DS fits the section.
17. 04:06:895 (1) - You should extend 04:06:587 (4) - because current pattern is not good. Fixed!
18. 05:03:818 (1,2,1) - why you don't put streams???? Fixed!

good luck Thank you