Duca - Zettai Darli'n [Taiko]‬ · forum‬

00:13:557 - Add k? - Feel empty
00:24:498(5,6) - k? - I feel similar tone about 00:23:969(4)
01:07:910(83,85) - k? - I think it's not necessary finish and high tone than 01:07:204(82,84)
01:10:381(87,88) - d k? - ^
01:30:498(121) - remove finish? - ^
01:36:145(131) - ^

Song Setup - Design - Misc. Toggles - Uncheck Widescreen Support - This is Unrankable
00:13:557(6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Can you try this pattern? - I think this pattern is more suitable about song

I feel so good this diff

Duca ~~!!
Good Luck~

PatZar

3,079 posts

Joined March 2013

PatZar 2014-11-21T07:13:28+00:00

m4m >:33

[Oni]
00:30:940 (113) - delete? the snare is too ugly here
00:55:822 (239,240) - 239/240 d , for interest pattern and flow
00:56:440 (244) - move 1/2 to right , because this is an important beat
01:02:440 (276,277,278) - kdk? it's following the beat and vocal imo
01:06:498 (297,298,299,300) - dkdk / 01:06:498 (297,298,299,300,301) - dkkdk
01:13:028 (329,332) - D-k
01:18:763 (367) - delete for gap sound <3
01:24:498 (404) - d same reason with 00:55:822 (239,240) -
01:41:969 (524) - delete it isn't important imo
01:47:439 (556,557,558,559,560,561) - DKDKDK for better emphasize

[JuDa's Oni]
00:17:091 (35) - D? for nice beat and sound
01:05:091 (292) - D for stress sound
01:12:326 (330,335) - swap
01:24:679 (412,413,414) - dKK ?for better emphasize
01:47:439 (556,557,558,559,560,561) - DKDKDK same reason with oni
Nice Oni !

[Muzu]
01:16:557 (260) - delete? it's annoying though
01:27:851 (314) - delete and 01:27:675 (313) - d for consistent with 01:16:381 (259) -
01:47:263 (401) - delete and 01:47:616 - D , you're missing the important beat sound
01:48:675 (406) - D same reason with other diff

That's all
Futsuu and kantan are good already
~~futsuu, 2.24SR but Normal icon fml~~
nananananananananana that intro <333333333333333333333333

NeviltiS

100 posts

Joined February 2014

NeviltiS 2014-11-21T08:19:01+00:00

Hi~

[Kantan]
00:16:381 (10) - delete? (same as 00:11:440 (2,3,4,5) pattern)
00:18:498 (12) - k?

[Futsuu]
00:25:028 - add k?

[Muzukashii]
00:12:145 (4) - d? (same as 00:14:263 (12,13,14) background sound)
00:49:204 (148) - move to 00:49:028?

[JuDa's Oni]
00:25:297 (90) - delete? (I think that k kkd is better than kkkkd)
01:45:326 (546) - d?

[Oni]
00:15:675 (23) - delete? (Is better to separate notes)
01:01:557 (271) - d?
01:46:557 (549) - delete?

nice map!
good luck

Hanjamon

1,461 posts

Joined June 2012

Hanjamon 2014-11-21T14:34:52+00:00

Hi toara~ mod requested by pm, you have more mods for check ^ this will be a bit confuse (?

d=Don
D=Big Don
k=Katsu
K=Big Katsu

[General]

I think you used the cuttingedge version of osu! for update/upload the map, right? At least for me, when I try to update with that version, the editor removes the BG of one diff, the Oni is without BG, fix this ;w;

Also, JuDa's <--- you forgot the s

You forgot to disable ''widescreen support'' in some diffs like the Futsuu, is not necessary that option

[Kantan]

00:21:322 (18) - change to k? sounds better imo
00:37:557 (29) - change to k? i think sounds better using k in this sound
00:40:381 (34) - change to k? ^ same reason
00:43:204 (39) - change to k? ^ same reason
00:46:028 (44) - change to k? ^ same reason
01:48:498 (153) - i don't like the idea of using xx 1/2 in a Kantan, remove this note? sounds good too

[Futsuu]

00:20:969 (24,25) - control+g? (k d k d d k) sounds better imo
00:42:851 (83,84) - control+g? (d k) i think sounds better
00:45:675 (89,90) - control+g? (d k) ^ same reason
01:17:969 (173) - or 01:18:322 (174) - change to k? i think sounds better
01:35:616 (217,218) - change to k? sounds better imo
01:45:498 (246,247) - control+g? (d k) sounds better imo

[Muzukashii]

00:43:204 (124) - change to k? i think sounds better
01:03:145 (205,206) - control+g? (d k d k) k d - d k d k sounds good imo

[Oni]

00:43:204 (174) - same as Muzu, change to k?
01:22:734 (393,394,395) - change this triplet to kkd and 01:23:087 (396) - to k? sounds good imo
01:29:881 - add a k here? (kkd) i can hear a sound and ddd kkd kkk i think sounds good

[JuDa's Oni]

All timing points are not the same as the other diffs! This diff starts with 150 offset but the others with 146, fix all timing points

01:09:149 (311,312) - control+g? (k d) i think sounds good

This is all, good luck ^^

toara_fict

1,319 posts

Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

toara_fict 2014-11-21T21:49:52+00:00

- Racoon -

- Racoon - wrote:
Hi~ From pm request~
Kantan

00:13:557 - Add k? - Feel empty okay.
00:24:498(5,6) - k? - I feel similar tone about 00:23:969(4) okay.
01:07:910(83,85) - k? - I think it's not necessary finish and high tone than 01:07:204(82,84) okay.
01:10:381(87,88) - d k? - ^ Hmmm good idea. btw keep
01:30:498(121) - remove finish? - ^　( move 01:30:851 (141) - => 01:31:557 (142) - )
01:36:145(131) - ^ ( delete 01:36:498 (151) - notes. ) :3 ) :3

Futsuu

Song Setup - Design - Misc. Toggles - Uncheck Widescreen Support - This is Unrankable Fix~ _(:3JL
00:13:557(6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Can you try this pattern? - I think this pattern is more suitable about song　Nice!

Muzukashii
I feel so good this diff Thanks <3

Duca ~~!! <3
Good Luck~ Thanks~　ヾ(｡>﹏<｡)ﾉﾞ

Genocide

Genocide wrote:
m4m >:33 >:33

[Oni]
00:30:940 (113) - delete? the snare is too ugly here okay.
00:55:822 (239,240) - 239/240 d , for interest pattern and flow 239/241 change d :3
00:56:440 (244) - move 1/2 to right , because this is an important beat Good. change :3 ( 00:34:028 (127) - too )
01:02:440 (276,277,278) - kdk? it's following the beat and vocal imo Hmmm... okay change.
01:06:498 (297,298,299,300) - dkdk / 01:06:498 (297,298,299,300,301) - dkkdk no change.
01:13:028 (329,332) - D-k keep.
01:18:763 (367) - delete for gap sound <3 okay.
01:24:498 (404) - d same reason with 00:55:822 (239,240) - Hmmm..... keep.
01:41:969 (524) - delete it isn't important imo okay.
01:47:439 (556,557,558,559,560,561) - DKDKDK for better emphasize keep.

[Muzu]
01:16:557 (260) - delete? it's annoying though ( move 01:16:910 - )
01:27:851 (314) - delete and 01:27:675 (313) - d for consistent with 01:16:381 (259) - okay. & 01:27:851 - ^ )
01:47:263 (401) - delete and 01:47:616 - D , you're missing the important beat sound okay.
01:48:675 (406) - D same reason with other diff _(:3JL ?

That's all
Futsuu and kantan are good already :3
~~futsuu, 2.24SR but Normal icon fml~~
nananananananananana that intro <333333333333333333333333 nanananananana <3333333 (๑•﹏•)

Thanks Genocide :3

NeviltiS

NeviltiS wrote:
Hi~ Hi~

[Kantan]
00:16:381 (10) - delete? (same as 00:11:440 (2,3,4,5) pattern) ( add 00:13:557 - ) pattern :3
00:18:498 (12) - k? okay.

[Futsuu]
00:25:028 - add k? next note Finish note. Hmmm keep. ;w;

[Muzukashii]
00:12:145 (4) - d? (same as 00:14:263 (12,13,14) background sound) okay.
00:49:204 (148) - move to 00:49:028? Hmmm.. I follow vocal... keep )

[Oni]
00:15:675 (23) - delete? (Is better to separate notes) nope.
01:01:557 (271) - d? okay.
01:46:557 (549) - delete? nope.

nice map!
good luck Thanks Mod & star ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶

Hanjamon

Hanjamon wrote:
Hi toara~hi~ mod requested by pm, you have more mods for check ^ this will be a bit confuse (? don't worry =w=

d=Don
D=Big Don
k=Katsu
K=Big Katsu
[General]

I think you used the cuttingedge version of osu! for update/upload the map, right? At least for me, when I try to update with that version, the editor removes the BG of one diff, the Oni is without BG, fix this ;w; fix ;w;

Also, JuDa's <--- you forgot the s I'm baka ;w; fix.

You forgot to disable ''widescreen support'' in some diffs like the Futsuu, is not necessary that option ^ baka ;w;
[Kantan]

00:21:322 (18) - change to k? sounds better imo okay.
00:37:557 (29) - change to k? i think sounds better using k in this sound ^
00:40:381 (34) - change to k? ^ same reason ^
00:43:204 (39) - change to k? ^ same reason ^
00:46:028 (44) - change to k? ^ same reason ^
01:48:498 (153) - i don't like the idea of using xx 1/2 in a Kantan, remove this note? sounds good too As you say. fix
[Futsuu]

00:20:969 (24,25) - control+g? (k d k d d k) sounds better imo okay.
00:42:851 (83,84) - control+g? (d k) i think sounds better okay.
00:45:675 (89,90) - control+g? (d k) ^ same reason okay.
01:17:969 (173) - or 01:18:322 (174) - change to k? i think sounds better okay 01:18:322 (174) - change k note :3
01:35:616 (217,218) - change to k? sounds better imo okay.
01:45:498 (246,247) - control+g? (d k) sounds better imo okay.
[Muzukashii]

00:43:204 (124) - change to k? i think sounds better okay.
01:03:145 (205,206) - control+g? (d k d k) k d - d k d k sounds good imo I like pattern. fix
[Oni]

00:43:204 (174) - same as Muzu, change to k? okay.
01:22:734 (393,394,395) - change this triplet to kkd and 01:23:087 (396) - to k? sounds good imo Hmmm... okay.
01:29:881 - add a k here? (kkd) i can hear a sound and ddd kkd kkk i think sounds good okay.
This is all, good luck ^^ Really thanks (๑˃̵ᴗ˂̵)و all fix~

Kantan ~ Oni Update. ─=≡Σ((( つ•̀ω•́)つ

Juda's reply coming soon ⊂('ω'⊂ )))Σ≡=─༄༅༄༅༄༅༄༅༄༅

Charlotte

1,908 posts

Joined December 2013

Charlotte 2014-11-22T00:55:34+00:00

Hi from m4m
d
k
D(big d)
K(big k)

Kantan

00:34:384 - 削除。単音ずつ拾ったほうが良い気がします。
00:35:802 - ^
00:47:438 - を00:47:623 - ここへ移動。しかし難しいと感じたらno changeで。

Futsuu

00:47:785 - 削除。必要ないと思いました。
01:04:032 - を01:04:192 - ここへ移動。より合うと思います。
01:30:862 - dを追加。ボーカルに合わせて入れてみてはどうでしょうか？

Muzukashii

00:25:204 (54,55) - を1/2左に移動してdkdkkk Dか1/2左に移動してdkdkkkのdを削除してdk kkk Dを提案します。

Juda's Oni

very good!

Oni

00:33:853 - dを追加。より合うと思います。
00:56:178 - dを追加。必要ないかな？良いと感じたら入れてください。
01:34:814 - kを追加。合うと思いますが,1/4が続くので難しく感じたらno changeで。

頑張ってください。modが役に立てば幸いです。

Metsaller

119 posts

Joined May 2014

Metsaller 2014-11-22T16:23:58+00:00

Hello :3
I came for the mod request o3o/

kantan

00:16:381 - change to k sounds better
00:19:204 (15) - move to -> 00:19:028
00:31:910 (37,38,39,40) - k, d d k <- This combination is better for the rhythm
00:54:498 - Same^
01:18:498 - Change to k
01:26:969 - Change to d maybe?
01:29:793 - change to k
01:32:616 (144) - move to -> 01:32:440

00:19:028 - change to k
00:36:498 - Change to k maybe? only if you want :v
01:21:145 - Change to k
01:29:616 - Change to k
01:47:616 - Missing Big Don? D:

00:12:145 - change to k
01:21:145 - change to k

Juda's Oni

-Nothing to change-
=3=

Oni

00:11:793 - change to k
00:14:616 - change to k
00:26:440 - d d k, d sounds better
00:33:498 (125,126) - i like more d k
00:49:028 - d d k, d
00:53:087 - change to k
00:53:263 - d d k d k
01:01:734 - change to k

Nice Work! :3

toara_fict

1,319 posts

Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

toara_fict 2014-11-22T21:59:06+00:00

Charlotte

Charlotte wrote:
Hi from m4m :3
d
k
D(big d)
K(big k)

Kantan

00:34:384 - 削除。単音ずつ拾ったほうが良い気がします。 okay.
00:35:802 - ^ こちらも削ると単発だけになる気もするのでkeep.
00:47:438 - を00:47:623 - ここへ移動。しかし難しいと感じたらno changeで。 okay. ただVocal沿いになるのでmove & change k.

Futsuu

00:47:785 - 削除。必要ないと思いました。 yes.
01:04:032 - を01:04:192 - ここへ移動。より合うと思います。 keep. 悪くはないのですが、そこにmoveすると01:04:557 - こちらにもadd noteしたほうが良くなるので現状keep.
01:30:862 - dを追加。ボーカルに合わせて入れてみてはどうでしょうか？okay. add note :3

Muzukashii

00:25:204 (54,55) - を1/2左に移動してdkdkkk Dか1/2左に移動してdkdkkkのdを削除してdk kkk Dを提案します。 Good. dk kkk Dで

Oni

00:33:853 - dを追加。より合うと思います。ですよね（ add )
00:56:178 - dを追加。必要ないかな？良いと感じたら入れてください。↑と同じで00:56:440 - こっちにadd note :3
01:34:814 - kを追加。合うと思いますが,1/4が続くので難しく感じたらno changeで。okay. add note

頑張ってください。modが役に立てば幸いです。Thank you :3 とっても助かりました! :3

-Kriston-

-Kriston- wrote:
Hello :3 :3
I came for the mod request o3o/ o3o/

kantan

00:16:381 - change to k sounds better okay.
00:19:204 (15) - move to -> 00:19:028 no change ;w; ( I don't want to 1/2 shift )
00:31:910 (37,38,39,40) - k, d d k <- This combination is better for the rhythm yes. change
00:54:498 - Same^ ^
01:18:498 - Change to k okay.
01:26:969 - Change to d maybe?
01:29:793 - change to k okay.
01:32:616 (144) - move to -> 01:32:440 no change ;w; ( I don't want to 1/2 shift )

Futsuu

00:19:028 - change to k I don't follow piano sounds.
00:36:498 - Change to k maybe? only if you want :v okay.
01:21:145 - Change to k okay.
01:29:616 - Change to k I don't follow piano sounds.
01:47:616 - Missing Big Don? D:no. Futsuu DDDD very hard _(:3JL

Muzukashii

00:12:145 - change to k no change ( some 00:14:969 (14) - )
01:21:145 - change to k okay.

Oni

00:11:793 - change to k keep
00:14:616 - change to k ^
00:26:440 - d d k, d sounds better Nice change :3
00:33:498 (125,126) - i like more d k okay.
00:49:028 - d d k, d Nice change :3
00:53:087 - change to k keep.
00:53:263 - d d k d k Nice change :3
01:01:734 - change to k Hmmm.. keep.

Nice Work! :3 Thanks :3

Update :3

kouzuki_karen

948 posts

Joined March 2013

kouzuki_karen 2014-11-23T02:36:14+00:00

hello~ (pm mod request)

Kantan:

Good

Futsuu:

00:43:910 (85,86,87) - suggest change to kdk (it matches a bit better to the music in my opinion)
01:07:910 (146) - k (it sounds better for the vocals).
01:28:028 (198) - suggest add d

Muzukashi:

00:23:087 (46,47,48,49) - suggest kddk or dddk
00:33:145 (85) - d
00:42:234 (120) - add k
00:48:145 (146) - add finisher
00:53:616 (166) - d (?)
01:31:204 (329) - k (?)

Oni:

00:14:616 (18) - k
00:53:263 (224,225,226,227,228) - ddkkd
01:01:381 (273) - k (?)
01:16:910 (356) - k (?)
01:26:351 (419) - k (?)
01:42:322 (529) - d

Juda's Oni

00:11:444 (2) - k (?)
00:20:973 (59,60) - dd
00:55:914 (240) - k
00:56:267 (242,243,244) - kkk
01:35:444 (484,485,486,487,488) - ddkkd

toara_fict

1,319 posts

Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

toara_fict 2014-11-23T03:55:47+00:00

mrdumpling64

mrdumpling64 wrote:
hello~ (pm mod request)　:3

Kantan:

Good 　 Yay

Futsuu:

00:43:910 (85,86,87) - suggest change to kdk (it matches a bit better to the music in my opinion) Hmmm.. I don't follow vocal no change.
01:07:910 (146) - k (it sounds better for the vocals). ^
01:28:028 (198) - suggest add d okay.

Muzukashi:

00:23:087 (46,47,48,49) - suggest kddk or dddk add d :3
00:33:145 (85) - d no change ( same 00:56:439 (179) - )
00:42:234 (120) - add k okay :3
00:48:145 (146) - add finisher have
00:53:616 (166) - d (?)　follow drum
01:31:204 (329) - k (?) ^

Oni:

00:14:616 (18) - k Hmmm... keep
00:53:263 (224,225,226,227,228) - ddkkd I follow 00:53:616 (228,229) - drum sounds.
01:01:381 (273) - k (?) ^
01:16:910 (356) - k (?) ^
01:26:351 (419) - k (?) ^
01:42:322 (529) - d ^

Thank you :3c Update~

- Love1yV1ruS -

88 posts

Joined October 2012

- Love1yV1ruS - 2014-11-23T08:04:31+00:00

Free mod from Virus.

00:47:616 (65) - this note is quite strange for Kantan level. Maybe 1/2 forward or backward.

Futsuu & Muzukashii - None. All notes are friendly...

Oni

01:12:498 (329) - After 2 big notes, this note is quite unnecessary.

Guest Oni

00:14:091 (17,18) - Ctrl + g
00:25:032 (88) - k to d

Enjoy~

Kurokotei

Featured Artist

1,648 posts

Joined June 2010

Kurokotei 2014-11-23T13:36:56+00:00

Hey! Mod request via PM!

[Kantan]

00:35:440 (43,44,45) - kkd? to make a reverse pattern with the previous one
00:43:910 (58,59,60) - ddk? to vary a bit
00:58:028 (83,84,85) - kkd? to make a reverse pattern
01:11:440 (107) - remove? it'll give a break to the player + it emphasizes the 2 next notes

[Futsuu]

00:23:440 (29) - you know, I hate non-monochrome 1/2 clusters in Futsuu, so change to k? (fits the song as well)
00:24:322 (32) - ^
00:24:851 (34) - change to d?
00:41:440 (78) - delete? I think you know why *runs*
00:41:969 (80) - change to k to follow the voice?
00:42:145 (81) - delete if you followed the suggestion above
00:54:498 (112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121,122,123,124,125,126,127,128) - I suggest you to cut this 1/1 + 1/2 stream somewhere, it's pretty tricky for a Futsuu imo
01:14:616 (162,163) - not going to point this one since it's fitting the voice and I suppose it's okay at the end of the map
01:43:557 (240,241,242,243,244,245,246,247,248,249,250,251,252,253,254) - again, I suggest you to cut this stream somewhere

[Muzukashii]

Looks clean, have a star!

[Oni]

00:11:793 (4) - k to follow the snare?
00:14:616 (18) - ^
00:41:616 (168) - change to d? follow the voice better imo
01:26:087 (416,417,418,419,420) - remove 417 or 419, a 5-hits cluster doesn't fit here

[JuDa's Oni]

00:47:797 (198,199,200) - k d d would flow better imo

That's all! Good luck!

K-2

231 posts

Joined August 2012

K-2 2014-11-23T14:55:19+00:00

00:19:204 (15) - move to 00:19:028 and k?
00:46:734 (63) - k
00:47:616 (65) - d
01:39:675 (155) - k?
01:42:499 (160) - k?

00:19:028 (19) - k
01:01:734 (133) - d

00:19:910 (34) - k?
00:24:851 (53) - d?
01:20:969 (283,284) - kd?

JuDa's Oni

00:24:855 (87) - d
01:18:679 (370,371) - dk?
01:21:502 (389,390) - dk?

Oni

00:19:028 (45) - k?
01:41:087 (522,523,524,525,526) - k d ddd?

I WILL GET FIRST RANK OF KANTAN!!!!!!!!

Good Luck~!

verto

307 posts

Joined October 2012

verto 2014-11-23T16:40:01+00:00

Kantan

SPOILER

00:18:498 (14,15) - invert
00:27:322 (29) - don't you think K would fit the strong cymbal sound there?
00:29:793 (33,34,35) - should be the same pattern as 00:26:969 (28,29,30) -
and 00:32:616 (38,39,40) -
and 00:41:087 (53,54,55) -
and 00:52:381 (73,74,75) -
00:35:440 (43,44) - drag 1/2 backwards (if rejected invert the colours of these 00:35:440 (43,44,45) - )
00:38:263 (48) - drag 1/2 backwards as well, these aren't on the most audible drum sounds.
00:38:969 (50) - snare, so d->k
00:43:910 (58) - ^
00:49:910 (69,70) - invert colours also 69 K
00:53:792 (76,77) - invert
00:55:204 (78,79,80) - snare cymbal kick k K d
00:58:028 (83,84,85) - ^
00:59:439 (86) - big cymbal sound K
01:01:557 (90) - k for snare
01:02:969 (92) - ^
01:03:675 (93) - d for kick
01:05:793 (97) - k for snare
01:13:557 (110,111) - invert
01:14:969 (113,114) - k->d 113 and bring 114 forward with 1/1
01:26:263 (132,133) - ^
01:19:910 (121,122) - invert
01:36:851 (150,151,152) - ^
01:43:204 (161) - k->d or move it 1/2 backwards

WIP

toara_fict

1,319 posts

Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

toara_fict 2014-11-23T20:36:11+00:00

- Love1yV1ruS -

- Love1yV1ruS - wrote:
Free mod from Virus. :3

Kantan

00:47:616 (65) - this note is quite strange for Kantan level. Maybe 1/2 forward or backward.keep. but move 00:47:793 (65) - 3:

Futsuu & Muzukashii - None. All notes are friendly... :3c

Oni

01:12:498 (329) - After 2 big notes, this note is quite unnecessary. no change. ( this diff 'Oni' )

Enjoy~ :3v

Thanks Modding :3c

Sayaka-

Sayaka- wrote:
Hey! Mod request via PM! Thank you ~ :3 )

[Kantan]

00:35:440 (43,44,45) - kkd? to make a reverse pattern with the previous one I follow Snare
00:43:910 (58,59,60) - ddk? to vary a bit　^
00:58:028 (83,84,85) - kkd? to make a reverse pattern okay. this follow vocal
01:11:440 (107) - remove? it'll give a break to the player + it emphasizes the 2 next notes okay. delete :3

[Futsuu]

00:23:440 (29) - you know, I hate non-monochrome 1/2 clusters in Futsuu, so change to k? (fits the song as well) yes.
00:24:322 (32) - ^ ^
00:24:851 (34) - change to d? yes. change
00:41:440 (78) - delete? I think you know why *runs* keep. 00:41:440 - have a snare sounds ><
00:41:969 (80) - change to k to follow the voice? keep. If 00:41:440 (78) - delete -> change k :3
00:42:145 (81) - delete if you followed the suggestion above ^
00:54:498 (112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121,122,123,124,125,126,127,128) - I suggest you to cut this 1/1 + 1/2 stream somewhere, it's pretty tricky for a Futsuu imo It happens if fit the Vocal
01:14:616 (162,163) - not going to point this one since it's fitting the voice and I suppose it's okay at the end of the map Hmmm..
01:43:557 (240,241,242,243,244,245,246,247,248,249,250,251,252,253,254) - again, I suggest you to cut this stream somewhere again

[Muzukashii]

Looks clean, have a star! wow

[Oni]

00:11:793 (4) - k to follow the snare? okay
00:14:616 (18) - ^ ^
00:41:616 (168) - change to d? follow the voice better imo yes.
01:26:087 (416,417,418,419,420) - remove 417 or 419, a 5-hits cluster doesn't fit here okay. delete note :3

That's all! Good luck! Thank you ~ :3

Lunaris Filia

Lunaris Filia wrote:
Kantan

00:19:204 (15) - move to 00:19:028 and k? Kantan not use move 1/2 ;w;
00:46:734 (63) - k okay
00:47:616 (65) - d okay.
01:39:675 (155) - k? no change (00:23:440 (22) - 01:36:851 (149) - some )
01:42:499 (160) - k? ^

Futsuu

00:19:028 (19) - k okay.
01:01:734 (133) - d Hmmm.. keep

Muzukashii

00:19:910 (34) - k?
00:24:851 (53) - d? no change.
01:20:969 (283,284) - kd? okay. But this form don't want to use..

Oni

00:19:028 (45) - k? I follow 00:18:851 (44,45,46,47) - kd dk.
01:41:087 (522,523,524,525,526) - k d ddd? Nice idea. but keep. I put pattern

I WILL GET FIRST RANK OF KANTAN!!!!!!!! 　:3!
Good Luck~! Thanks ~ :3 :3

_verto_

WIP.

Update~ :3

snowball112

363 posts

Joined February 2013

snowball112 2014-11-24T20:55:04+00:00

Hey ^^ mod from pm req.

- SV 1.4 for all difficulties seems a bit strange. Maybe set Kantan SV to 1 and Futsuu SV to 1.2? This might be better.

- The first spinner 00:08:616 (1) across all difficulties that have it feels strange in my opinion as the music doesn't really call for the use of a spinner here. Maybe replace it using single notes starting at either 00:08:616 or 00:10:028.

- Maybe move 00:11:793 (3) to 00:12:498 and 00:14:616 (8) to 00:15:322 (9)? Feels better to play in my opinion.

- Maybe move 00:23:969 (23) to 00:23:087 and turn into a d and make 00:23:440 (23) a k? Might play out better for newer players if you keep the spacing simpler here.

- Maybe move 00:27:675 (30) to 00:27:851 and delete 00:27:322 (29) or move 00:27:322 (29) to 00:26:616. It may sound better to follow the piano more here and the larger space gives players time to prepare for the different spacing of 00:27:851 (30,31).

- Maybe move 00:30:145 (34) to 00:30:851 (35)?

- Maybe move 00:35:440 (43) to 00:35:263 (43) and delete 00:35:793 (44). I know this make it more difficult in terms of changing spacing but if you leave large enough breaks it should be fine in my opinion and fit to the music better.

- Move 00:38:616 (49) to 00:39:322 (50) and 00:41:440 (54) to 00:42:145 (55). This feels better to play in my opinion.

- Remove 00:44:263 (59) and move 00:47:087 (64) to 00:47:793.

- Move 00:49:910 (69) to 00:50:616 (70)? Similarly you could:
- Move 00:52:733 (74) to 00:53:440.
- Move 00:55:557 (79) to 00:56:263.
- Move 01:01:204 (89) to 01:01:910.
- Move 01:04:028 (94) to 01:04:734.
Even though what you have here fits well, in my opinion it sounds better if you play the triplets a bit later than what you currently have.

- Even though 01:12:145 (107,108) fit, this part sounds a bit weird because it strongly feels that notes at 01:12:322 and 01:13:028 are missing. Maybe move 01:12:145 (107) to 01:12:498 and 01:12:851 (108) to 01:13:204 onto the finishes in the music? This sounds better in my opinion. However, you could also:
- add a note at 01:12:498 (108) and move 01:13:910 (110) to 01:13:204 to creat a 5-note 1/1 pattern. This may work even better with the buildup in the music before the kiai.

- Maybe move 00:12:145 (4) to 00:12:322 and 00:12:851 (5) to 00:12:675 (5) and add a note at 00:13:028 (6)?
- Move 00:13:910 (7) to 00:15:145?
- Move 00:15:675 (11) to 00:15:498 and move 00:16:381 (12) to 00:16:204 and add a note at 00:15:851 (12)?
These change make the beginning play out better in my opinion.

I feel that you should not need to use the triplets 00:42:145 (120,121,122) and 00:47:793 (143,144,145) and 01:10:381 (235,236,237) which don't really fit in my opinion, especially the first two. Since the song is calm between 00:25:557 (56) and 00:59:440 (192), I feel like you should not use them here. The last one also feels a bit strange because there I think that there is nothing in the music that calls for a triplet here. If you do want to use some, I'd suggest you use them either:

- somewhere between 00:11:440 (2) and 00:25:557 (56) to the drums in the background OR

- before or together with the finishes before the kiai at 01:12:145 (243,244) and 01:12:851 (245,246). Here you could:
- Move the first finishes 01:12:145 (243) to 01:12:498 (244) and 01:12:851 (245) to 01:13:204
- Add a triplet at 01:12:675 (245,246,247)
- Add another finish note at 01:12:145 (243)
This might be more fun to play in my opinion.

Hope this helps and good luck ^^

toara_fict

1,319 posts

Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

toara_fict 2014-11-24T22:37:36+00:00

snowball112 wrote:
Hey ^^ mod from pm req.
General
- SV 1.4 for all difficulties seems a bit strange. Maybe set Kantan SV to 1 and Futsuu SV to 1.2? This might be better. Kantan Futsuu change SV1.2 :3

- The first spinner 00:08:616 (1) across all difficulties that have it feels strange in my opinion as the music doesn't really call for the use of a spinner here. Maybe replace it using single notes starting at either 00:08:616 or 00:10:028.I'm not going to change in the status quo.
Kantan
- Maybe move 00:11:793 (3) to 00:12:498 and 00:14:616 (8) to 00:15:322 (9)? Feels better to play in my opinion.

- Maybe move 00:23:969 (23) to 00:23:087 and turn into a d and make 00:23:440 (23) a k? Might play out better for newer players if you keep the spacing simpler here.

- Maybe move 00:27:675 (30) to 00:27:851 and delete 00:27:322 (29) or move 00:27:322 (29) to 00:26:616. It may sound better to follow the piano more here and the larger space gives players time to prepare for the different spacing of 00:27:851 (30,31).

- Maybe move 00:30:145 (34) to 00:30:851 (35)?

- Maybe move 00:35:440 (43) to 00:35:263 (43) and delete 00:35:793 (44). I know this make it more difficult in terms of changing spacing but if you leave large enough breaks it should be fine in my opinion and fit to the music better.

- Move 00:38:616 (49) to 00:39:322 (50) and 00:41:440 (54) to 00:42:145 (55). This feels better to play in my opinion.

- Remove 00:44:263 (59) and move 00:47:087 (64) to 00:47:793.

- Move 00:49:910 (69) to 00:50:616 (70)? Similarly you could:
- Move 00:52:733 (74) to 00:53:440.
- Move 00:55:557 (79) to 00:56:263.
- Move 01:01:204 (89) to 01:01:910.
- Move 01:04:028 (94) to 01:04:734.
Even though what you have here fits well, in my opinion it sounds better if you play the triplets a bit later than what you currently have.

- Even though 01:12:145 (107,108) fit, this part sounds a bit weird because it strongly feels that notes at 01:12:322 and 01:13:028 are missing. Maybe move 01:12:145 (107) to 01:12:498 and 01:12:851 (108) to 01:13:204 onto the finishes in the music? This sounds better in my opinion. However, you could also:
- add a note at 01:12:498 (108) and move 01:13:910 (110) to 01:13:204 to creat a 5-note 1/1 pattern. This may work even better with the buildup in the music before the kiai.
Futsuu
- Maybe move 00:12:145 (4) to 00:12:322 and 00:12:851 (5) to 00:12:675 (5) and add a note at 00:13:028 (6)?
- Move 00:13:910 (7) to 00:15:145?
- Move 00:15:675 (11) to 00:15:498 and move 00:16:381 (12) to 00:16:204 and add a note at 00:15:851 (12)?
These change make the beginning play out better in my opinion.
Muzukashii
I feel that you should not need to use the triplets 00:42:145 (120,121,122) and 00:47:793 (143,144,145) and 01:10:381 (235,236,237) which don't really fit in my opinion, especially the first two. Since the song is calm between 00:25:557 (56) and 00:59:440 (192), I feel like you should not use them here. The last one also feels a bit strange because there I think that there is nothing in the music that calls for a triplet here. If you do want to use some, I'd suggest you use them either:

- somewhere between 00:11:440 (2) and 00:25:557 (56) to the drums in the background OR

- before or together with the finishes before the kiai at 01:12:145 (243,244) and 01:12:851 (245,246). Here you could:
- Move the first finishes 01:12:145 (243) to 01:12:498 (244) and 01:12:851 (245) to 01:13:204
- Add a triplet at 01:12:675 (245,246,247)
- Add another finish note at 01:12:145 (243)
This might be more fun to play in my opinion.
Hope this helps and good luck ^^

Almost fix. ( Kantan Change pattern. )　However, there are many indications that ignoring up my sound

Update.

Snowy Heart

127 posts

Joined August 2012

Snowy Heart 2014-11-25T10:36:06+00:00

I will mod this ,but now I take a post first~

K=Big Blue
k=small blue
D=Big Red
d=small red

General:No

Kantan
HP:-1(5.0 is too high for new player)
00:23:440 (22) - change to k?
01:05:086 (96) - change to D?
01:35:439 (147) - change to d?

Futsuu:
00:23:440 (29) - change to k,it sounds more better
00:27:498 (40) - I think this need to delete,It sounds not fit the music
01:05:086 (136) - same as Kantan
01:40:557 - add d?
01:47:616 - add d too~

Muzukashii
00:23:440 (48) - same as Kantan
maybe you can use this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/228102200:26:616 (59) - to 00:27:851 (63) -
00:46:557 (137,138) - d k?
00:49:733 (150) - to 00:50:969 (155) - same as (59) to 63
01:05:086 (213) - same as Kantan

Maybe I need more time,sorry

JUDYDANNY

1,519 posts

Joined October 2011

JUDYDANNY 2014-11-26T16:44:39+00:00

I'm very surprised that toara planned to get rank

sorry to reply.

Red

Applied as your suggestion.
Blue

Not changed because there're other reasons or not my style.
Green

kept or changed some.

"Genocide"

00:17:091 (35) - D? for nice beat and sound not changed.Sounds not loud, not fit as music.
01:05:091 (292) - D for stress sound not changed. this don makes music very lonely, finisher don’t fit.
01:12:326 (330,335) – swap not changed.for Emphasize to just only 01:12:149 (330) - , 01:12:855 (335) - .
01:24:679 (412,413,414) - dKK ?for better emphasize nope. Linked on kiai 1st using DD.
01:47:439 (556,557,558,559,560,561) - DKDKDK same reason with oni no change.
Nice Oni ! Thanks!

"NeviltiS"

00:25:297 (90) - delete? (I think that kkkd is better than kkkkd) keep, but good suggestion. I may changed some on this phrase.
01:45:326 (546) - d? Applied, sounds good as a same.

"Hanjamon”

All timing points are not the same as the other diffs! This diff starts with 150 offset but the others with 146, fix all timing points
01:09:149 (311,312) - control+g? (k d) i think sounds good changed 01:09:855 (316,317,318) - ddk , instead of your suggestion. good suggestion~

"mrdumpling64”

00:11:444 (2) - k (?) not changed. I don’t think it’s important to (seems like to) follow 00:10:738 (1,2) - pitch up.
00:20:973 (59,60) - dd not changed, follow the snare part.
00:55:914 (240) - k changed some.
00:56:267 (242,243,244) - kkk changed some.
01:35:444 (484,485,486,487,488) - ddkkd not changed, no need to 1/2 divisor dkd rhythm.

"- Love1yV1ruS -"

00:14:091 (17,18) - Ctrl + g no change. 00:14:267 (18,19) - pitch is same.
00:25:032 (88) - k to d uuum,, keep. I want to avoid to 00:22:208 (69) - same part.

"Sayaka-"

00:47:797 (198,199,200) - k d d would flow better imo no change. snare sounds 00:47:973 (199) - . makeing a variation is no problem.

"Lunaris Filia"

00:24:855 (87) – d Applied
01:18:679 (370,371) - dk? ups, fixed www.
01:21:502 (389,390) – dk ^
very useful, thanks a lot!

Thanks for mods !

ｵﾌｾｯﾄ146?

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toara_fict

1,319 posts

Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

toara_fict 2014-11-26T23:40:00+00:00

Snowy Heart

Snowy Heart wrote:
I will mod this ,but now I take a post first~

K=Big Blue
k=small blue
D=Big Red
d=small red

General:No

Kantan
HP:-1(5.0 is too high for new player) okay.
00:23:440 (22) - change to k? change00:24:145 (23) - k
01:05:086 (96) - change to D? okay.
01:35:439 (147) - change to d? okay.

Futsuu:
00:23:440 (29) - change to k,it sounds more better this diff Futsuu. no change.
00:27:498 (40) - I think this need to delete,It sounds not fit the music Hmmm.. no change
01:05:086 (136) - same as Kantan okay.
01:40:557 - add d? 00:23:440 (29) - too
01:47:616 - add d too~ ^

Muzukashii
00:23:440 (48) - same as Kantan same as Kantan
maybe you can use this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/228102200:26:616 (59) - to 00:27:851 (63) - Nice
00:46:557 (137,138) - d k? okay.
00:49:733 (150) - to 00:50:969 (155) - same as (59) to 63 Good change :3
01:05:086 (213) - same as Kantan okay.

Maybe I need more time,sorry very very thanks you :3c

Alldiff Update :3c

@JuDa. offset change 150 :3 & PM送るタイミング遅くなってごめんなさい_(:3JL

Asagi Mutsuki

osu!trivium Champion

1,476 posts

Joined February 2013

Asagi Mutsuki 2014-12-02T05:27:39+00:00

hey baka juda and moeara \(・ω・)\

General

Add "Kurano-kunchi no Futago Jijou" into tags since its the romanised name of the vn

Kantan

The big notes is a little too much ;w; It sounds pretty loud when playing and I cannot hear the music clearly since they appear quite often, maybe change some of them into small notes? See examples below~
00:17:091 - imo this one can be changed to small note doesn't feel really strong enough o.o
00:34:738 (41,42,43) - maybe change to d k k to have 00:31:914 (36,37,38) reverse? d d d sounds really strange @_@
01:23:444 - change this to big don? pitch is lower than 01:24:149 ._.
01:44:620 - big note in 1/1 is hard to play for Kantan, change to small don instead?

Futsuu

00:42:149 - This should be moved to 00:41:973 to fit the vocal and also 00:39:149 ~
01:04:738 - ^
01:05:797 (138,139,140,141,142,143,144,145,146) - orz why do you use three dkd lazy toara *me slaps* The music isn't same there, so the pattern should be a little different ;w; Try this owo
01:17:973 (169,170) - Change to k d because the vocal pitch is from high to low \:D/
01:29:267 - change this to kat too because high pitch =w=

Muzu

00:23:091 (46,47) - imo swapping these two will follow the music better too o.o
00:26:444 - Why do you miss the vocals here, this should be mapped too
00:49:032 - ^
00:58:385 - imo deleting this note will make the piano at 00:58:208 more clearer owo
01:15:149 (251,252,253,254,255,256,257) - um...maybe try something like this since it can emphasize the vocals better
01:26:444 (306,307,308,309,310,311,312) - ^

Oni

00:41:973 - change this to kat since it fits much better with the "ki" in the music ><
01:29:444 (440,441,442,443,444,445,446,447,448) - Although this follows the snare, but it doesn't fit the song really well ;w; Tried a little bit and just deleting 01:30:238 and changing 01:30:326 to kat will make this whole part better imo

JuDa's Oni

00:11:973 - this note isn't following the song really well you used normal rhythm in 00:14:267 (18,19) so having a pretty strange rhythm here sounds....strange (lol)
00:43:738 - eh this part is really calm so deleting this note would give some more breaks which fits the song here
kiai is really cool =w=b

orz sorry for bad mod since i haven't modded for some time ;w;
good luck on ranking!

eeezzzeee

979 posts

Joined August 2013

eeezzzeee 2014-12-02T10:13:47+00:00

Hello! from PM mod request
Sorry that this is a little late!

KEY
00:00:00 (1,2,3) - change
- explain if i think it needs

[Kantan]
00:18:502 (14,15) - add d at 00:18:855 and change (15) to k
- to fit the melody, also makes it a little more interesting

[Futsuu]
00:27:679 (41) - move to 00:27:855
- the placement of the doubles should be like 00:51:679 (101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108) -
00:30:502 (49) - move to 00:30:679
00:34:208 (59) - move to 00:34:032
- loud piano sound here
00:42:855 (80) - delete
- theres not much sound here
00:50:267 (97) - move to 00:50:444
01:05:797 (138,139,140) - change (139) to d and remove (138)
- i think this should be different than the dkd's after it

[Muzukashii]
00:34:032 - add d here
- loud piano sound here
01:20:973 (281,282) - ctrl + g
- it seems weird to me that this is the hardest (only ddk) in the map

[JuDa's Oni]
Good! Nothing to suggest really

00:59:444 (260) - finish

[Oni]
00:17:444 (34) - k
00:45:149 (183) - remove
00:46:385 (188) - remove
01:30:855 (451,452,453,454) - change to k ddk
- mostly because i think a k fits better at 01:30:855

That's all! Good luck

JUDYDANNY

1,519 posts

Joined October 2011

JUDYDANNY 2014-12-02T12:03:17+00:00

cdhsausageboy wrote:
hey baka juda and moeara \(・ω・)\

JuDa's Oni
00:11:973 - this note isn't following the song really well you used normal rhythm in 00:14:267 (18,19) so having a pretty strange rhythm here sounds....strange (lol) no change, preceded to follow bass sounds than rhythm.
00:43:738 - eh this part is really calm so deleting this note would give some more breaks which fits the song here deleted 00:44:444 (180) - that sounds not hit, instead of your suggestion.
kiai is really cool =w=b Thanks ^o^

orz sorry for bad mod since i haven't modded for some time ;w;
good luck on ranking!

eeezzzeee wrote:
Hello! from PM mod request
Sorry that this is a little late!

[JuDa's Oni]
Good! Nothing to suggest really

00:59:444 (260) - finish changed some~

That's all! Good luck

Thanks for mods!

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Grimbow

460 posts

Joined February 2012

Grimbow 2014-12-04T03:29:48+00:00

Mod from req! o/

d - Small don
D - Big don
k - Small kat
K - Big kat

Black means something that I think needs changed
Orange is just a suggestion

[Kantan]

00:49:208 (67) - Change this to a k? It goes well with the k k d that comes after it and I think it plays well as a k!
01:16:738 (114,115) - ctrl+g, it follows the song better as k d k
01:27:679 (132) - Change this to a k? It would contrast well with the previous suggestion

[Futsuu]

00:37:561 (68,69) - ctrl+g, this puts the k on the clap that is audible in the song
00:40:385 (74) - Change to a k? There is also an audible clap here

One of the most fun Futsuu's I've ever played!

[Oni]

00:20:620 (54,55,56) - Change this to a kkd to match the drums?

[JuDa's Oni]

01:21:238 (386) - Remove the whistle on this and add a whistle to 01:21:414 (388) - to make it contrast with the dkddd pattern?

Really fun and relaxing map to play

I'll shoot a star when I get some! Good luck with the rank

neonat

Beatmap Nominator

3,547 posts

Joined April 2012

neonat 2014-12-07T02:55:19+00:00

Kantan

00:43:914 (57,58,59) - the pattern of dkd here just feels like it contradicts the tune here, as the lowest pitch of the song is at 00:44:270 - which is currently the kat. It might be better as kdk or ddk
01:10:738 (105) - remove finish, I don't think you should use big don too often, and for the 1/1 beat here, it was still fine enough if the gap between notes was 2 beats
01:23:444 (125,126) - remove the finish on these 2 notes, they kind o take away the impact of the big kat of 01:24:855 (127) when that note is the peak of this section in the middle of the chorus
01:33:326 (142) - change to k? Highest pitch here in the music
01:44:620 (161) - same as 01:10:738 (105)

Futsuu

01:17:973 (169,170) - k d instead of d k because of the higher pitch is at 01:17:973
01:25:208 (187) - change to k for higher pitch

Muzukashii

00:23:091 (46,47,48,49) - ddkk would fit better to the tune of the song
00:23:973 (50) - change to k, it's the same as 00:24:502 (52)
00:29:091 (69) - it's the same pitch as 00:28:914 (68) - use similar object? both either kat or don
00:34:914 (91) - the piano here is at a higher pitch, use k?
01:45:855 (395) - finish here, big kat since you highlighted notes like 01:44:620 (391) with finish, all these lead up to the ending

JuDa's Oni

00:19:120 (48) - you should shift this note to 00:19:297 where the drum triplet in the music is, it is not at 00:19:120

Oni

01:02:797 (280) - change to k to fit the pitch better
01:43:032 (532) - ^

Good Luck

toara_fict

1,319 posts

Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

toara_fict 2014-12-07T18:36:48+00:00

sorry late.

cdh

cdhsausageboy wrote:
hey baka juda and moeara \(・ω・)\

General
Add "Kurano-kunchi no Futago Jijou" into tags since its the romanised name of the vn
add :3

Kantan
The big notes is a little too much ;w; It sounds pretty loud when playing and I cannot hear the music clearly since they appear quite often, maybe change some of them into small notes? See examples below~
00:17:091 - imo this one can be changed to small note doesn't feel really strong enough o.o
00:34:738 (41,42,43) - maybe change to d k k to have 00:31:914 (36,37,38) reverse? d d d sounds really strange @_@
01:23:444 - change this to big don? pitch is lower than 01:24:149 ._.
01:44:620 - big note in 1/1 is hard to play for Kantan, change to small don instead?
Okay.all fix

Futsuu
00:42:149 - This should be moved to 00:41:973 to fit the vocal and also 00:39:149 ~
01:04:738 - ^
01:05:797 (138,139,140,141,142,143,144,145,146) - orz why do you use three dkd lazy toara *me slaps* The music isn't same there, so the pattern should be a little different ;w; Try this owo
01:17:973 (169,170) - Change to k d because the vocal pitch is from high to low \:D/
01:29:267 - change this to kat too because high pitch =w=
Okay.all fix

Muzu
00:23:091 (46,47) - imo swapping these two will follow the music better too o.o
00:26:444 - Why do you miss the vocals here, this should be mapped too
00:49:032 - ^
00:58:385 - imo deleting this note will make the piano at 00:58:208 more clearer owo
01:15:149 (251,252,253,254,255,256,257) - um...maybe try something like this since it can emphasize the vocals better
01:26:444 (306,307,308,309,310,311,312) - ^
Okay.all fix

Oni
00:41:973 - change this to kat since it fits much better with the "ki" in the music >< 00:41:973 (169,170) - swap.
01:29:444 (440,441,442,443,444,445,446,447,448) - Although this follows the snare, but it doesn't fit the song really well ;w; Tried a little bit and just deleting 01:30:238 and changing 01:30:326 to kat will make this whole part better imo
okay.

orz sorry for bad mod since i haven't modded for some time ;w;
good luck on ranking! Thank you cdh ></

eeezzzeee

eeezzzeee wrote:
Hello! from PM mod request
Sorry that this is a little late!

KEY
00:00:00 (1,2,3) - change
- explain if i think it needs

[Kantan]
00:18:502 (14,15) - add d at 00:18:855 and change (15) to k
- to fit the melody, also makes it a little more interesting okay. add

[Futsuu]
00:27:679 (41) - move to 00:27:855
- the placement of the doubles should be like 00:51:679 (101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108) -
00:30:502 (49) - move to 00:30:679
00:34:208 (59) - move to 00:34:032
- loud piano sound here
00:42:855 (80) - delete
- theres not much sound here
00:50:267 (97) - move to 00:50:444
01:05:797 (138,139,140) - change (139) to d and remove (138)
- i think this should be different than the dkd's after it
Okay. All fix :3

[Muzukashii]
00:34:032 - add d here
- loud piano sound here k
01:20:973 (281,282) - ctrl + g
- it seems weird to me that this is the hardest (only ddk) in the map　That's right.

[Oni]
00:17:444 (34) - k ok
00:45:149 (183) - remove ok
00:46:385 (188) - remove No. Have sounds.
01:30:855 (451,452,453,454) - change to k ddk ok
- mostly because i think a k fits better at 01:30:855 ok

That's all! Good luck thank you~ :3

Grimbow

Grimbow wrote:
Mod from req! o/

d - Small don
D - Big don
k - Small kat
K - Big kat

Black means something that I think needs changed
Orange is just a suggestion

[Kantan]

00:49:208 (67) - Change this to a k? It goes well with the k k d that comes after it and I think it plays well as a k!
01:16:738 (114,115) - ctrl+g, it follows the song better as k d k
01:27:679 (132) - Change this to a k? It would contrast well with the previous suggestion

[Futsuu]

00:37:561 (68,69) - ctrl+g, this puts the k on the clap that is audible in the song
00:40:385 (74) - Change to a k? There is also an audible clap here

One of the most fun Futsuu's I've ever played! \:3/

[Oni]

00:20:620 (54,55,56) - Change this to a kkd to match the drums?

Really fun and relaxing map to play I'll shoot a star when I get some! Good luck with the rank Thank you ~ :3 All fix.

neonat

neonat wrote:
Kantan

00:43:914 (57,58,59) - the pattern of dkd here just feels like it contradicts the tune here, as the lowest pitch of the song is at 00:44:270 - which is currently the kat. It might be better as kdk or ddk was change cdh's Mod :3v
01:10:738 (105) - remove finish, I don't think you should use big don too often, and for the 1/1 beat here, it was still fine enough if the gap between notes was 2 beats keep.
01:23:444 (125,126) - remove the finish on these 2 notes, they kind o take away the impact of the big kat of 01:24:855 (127) when that note is the peak of this section in the middle of the chorus ^
01:33:326 (142) - change to k? Highest pitch here in the music okay.
01:44:620 (161) - same as 01:10:738 (105) ok.

Futsuu

01:17:973 (169,170) - k d instead of d k because of the higher pitch is at 01:17:973 ok
01:25:208 (187) - change to k for higher pitch yes, but 01:23:973 (183,184) - notes put k. keep

Muzukashii

00:23:091 (46,47,48,49) - ddkk would fit better to the tune of the song
00:23:973 (50) - change to k, it's the same as 00:24:502 (52)
00:29:091 (69) - it's the same pitch as 00:28:914 (68) - use similar object? both either kat or don
00:34:914 (91) - the piano here is at a higher pitch, use k? ok
01:45:855 (395) - finish here, big kat since you highlighted notes like 01:44:620 (391) with finish, all these lead up to the ending No.have sound but unnatural

Oni

01:02:797 (280) - change to k to fit the pitch better I follow Drum.
01:43:032 (532) - ^

Good Luck thank you :3c

update :3c

JUDYDANNY

1,519 posts

Joined October 2011

JUDYDANNY 2014-12-07T23:29:26+00:00

Grimbow wrote:
[JuDa's Oni]

01:21:238 (386) - Remove the whistle on this and add a whistle to 01:21:414 (388) - to make it contrast with the dkddd pattern?

neonat wrote:
JuDa's Oni

00:19:120 (48) - you should shift this note to 00:19:297 where the drum triplet in the music is, it is not at 00:19:120

Thanks for modding, all fixed as your suggestion

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toara_fict

1,319 posts

Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

toara_fict 2014-12-11T20:35:55+00:00

Update :3

Nofool

Elite Mapper

1,108 posts

Joined February 2011

Nofool 2014-12-12T20:28:45+00:00

Hi' and sorry for the delay ;_;
good mapset anyways.

[Oni]
- 00:33:502 (125,126,127,128,129,130) - mm that d k d k... is too long/repetitiv imo, i don't know what tu suggest tho :c. I tried to put another pattern in it be it never really sounds good ;_;
- 00:42:326 (171) - maybe remove this note ? not really needed and for less k d k d.. patterns.
- 00:46:208 - add d here and then remove - 00:46:385 (187) - ? fits more the melody/vocal (as you do on the whole map).
- random suggestion : try to add a finish at - 00:58:208 (253) - and remove - 00:58:385 (254) - ? sounds good imo.
- 01:11:091 (319,320,321) - try k k k instead of d d d ?

[JuDa's Oni]
- 00:41:708 (169,170) - maybe remove these notes ? sounds a bit better without imo.
- try to move - 00:46:385 (187) - to - 00:45:679 - ? more consistency with all the ddkd+ emphasize more the piano/melody.
- 01:02:091 (15) - remove ? like at - 00:59:267 -.
- move - 01:03:944 (25) - to - 01:03:767 - ? ddk ddd doenst' really sound good imo, like at - 00:41:708 - (where i might suggested something stupid...).

[Muzukashii]
- try to move - 00:20:444 (36) - to - 00:20:797 - ? sounds a bit cooler imo.

[Futsuu]
- 00:12:855 (5,6) - move these two notes to 1/2 before (on red lines) ? it might increase the difficulty a bit for beginner but it definitely sounds better + not that hard considering the rest of the diff.
- 00:15:679 (11) - ^ same for this one but not the second =>(12).
- 00:37:561 (68,69,70,71) - mm these 4 notes sound a bit weird, mainly because they don't follow the piano like most of the other on this part. maybe try something like/similar to that instead :

cursor is at - 00:37:385 -.
- 00:40:385 (74,75,76,77) - ^^ same problem for these 4 notes, try to find something else if you applied the suggestion above ?
- 01:00:149 (125,126,127,128) - ^.
- 01:02:973 (131,132,133,134) - ^.

[Kantan]
No much to say, i'm alright with that style.
potential issues for this diff : kiai feels easier than the rest of the map (more airy while the song is a bit more... idk how to say). And also not any notes on red lines, i think that should be a good thing for a kantan but i saw some mapsets disqualified because the Kantan was not fitting that well the song because only white lines x_x.
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Good luck'

mingmichael

1,720 posts

Joined May 2012

mingmichael 2014-12-18T13:30:03+00:00

NO KDS

i'm going to check this mapset after you check Nofool's mods ^

a note from me, a spread diff between Futsuu and Muzukashii is really horrible. here, i give you a small example :

they are Kantan~Futsuu~Muzukashii from 01:24:855 - until 01:29:620 -

this is just a small example. you can see from the pictures above. see, the gap between Futsuu and Muzukashii? Futsuu just consists 1/1 notes and some 1/2 with some breaks, but your Muzukashii has full 1/1 and 1/2 notes and just has a less break (it needs more breaks). you should do some deletions for your Muzukashii. try to simplify some patterns and remember for the spread diff between Futsuu and Muzukashii. the most important one is about break. we can use more notes for Muzukashii (like we can use more 1/2 notes), but it doesn't mean we can map all the patterns with 1/1+1/2. no no, we should have a proper break which is 3/2 breaks or more than it, to make some breaks for the players. Futsuu has many 3/2 break or more than 3/2 breaks, so Muzukashii which one diff higher than Futsuu, at least it should have it too. well, i'll give you the suggestions later in my proper mods soon.

and also, you have 2 Onis in this mapset. it would be better to map one of your Onis easier. IMO you can make your Oni easier a bit, so it can be said that JuDa's Oni is harder than yours. i will give a proper mod about this too later

you can try to make some changes by yourself after you look this mod

toara_fict

1,319 posts

Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

toara_fict 2014-12-30T03:00:14+00:00

Nofool wrote:
Hi' and sorry for the delay ;_;
good mapset anyways.

[Oni]
- 00:33:502 (125,126,127,128,129,130) - mm that d k d k... is too long/repetitiv imo, i don't know what tu suggest tho :c. I tried to put another pattern in it be it never really sounds good ;_;
- 00:42:326 (171) - maybe remove this note ? not really needed and for less k d k d.. patterns.
- 00:46:208 - add d here and then remove - 00:46:385 (187) - ? fits more the melody/vocal (as you do on the whole map).
- random suggestion : try to add a finish at - 00:58:208 (253) - and remove - 00:58:385 (254) - ? sounds good imo.
- 01:11:091 (319,320,321) - try k k k instead of d d d ?

[JuDa's Oni]
- 00:41:708 (169,170) - maybe remove these notes ? sounds a bit better without imo.
- try to move - 00:46:385 (187) - to - 00:45:679 - ? more consistency with all the ddkd+ emphasize more the piano/melody.
- 01:02:091 (15) - remove ? like at - 00:59:267 -.
- move - 01:03:944 (25) - to - 01:03:767 - ? ddk ddd doenst' really sound good imo, like at - 00:41:708 - (where i might suggested something stupid...).

[Muzukashii]
- try to move - 00:20:444 (36) - to - 00:20:797 - ? sounds a bit cooler imo.

[Futsuu]
- 00:12:855 (5,6) - move these two notes to 1/2 before (on red lines) ? it might increase the difficulty a bit for beginner but it definitely sounds better + not that hard considering the rest of the diff.
- 00:15:679 (11) - ^ same for this one but not the second =>(12).
- 00:37:561 (68,69,70,71) - mm these 4 notes sound a bit weird, mainly because they don't follow the piano like most of the other on this part. maybe try something like/similar to that instead :

cursor is at - 00:37:385 -.
- 00:40:385 (74,75,76,77) - ^^ same problem for these 4 notes, try to find something else if you applied the suggestion above ?
- 01:00:149 (125,126,127,128) - ^.
- 01:02:973 (131,132,133,134) - ^.

[Kantan]
No much to say, i'm alright with that style.
potential issues for this diff : kiai feels easier than the rest of the map (more airy while the song is a bit more... idk how to say). And also not any notes on red lines, i think that should be a good thing for a kantan but i saw some mapsets disqualified because the Kantan was not fitting that well the song because only white lines x_x.
_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

Good luck'

Sorry late>< All fix :3 Really thanks :3

toara_fict

1,319 posts

Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

toara_fict 2014-12-30T03:01:32+00:00

mingmichael wrote:
NO KDS

i'm going to check this mapset after you check Nofool's mods ^

a note from me, a spread diff between Futsuu and Muzukashii is really horrible. here, i give you a small example :

they are Kantan~Futsuu~Muzukashii from 01:24:855 - until 01:29:620 -

this is just a small example. you can see from the pictures above. see, the gap between Futsuu and Muzukashii? Futsuu just consists 1/1 notes and some 1/2 with some breaks, but your Muzukashii has full 1/1 and 1/2 notes and just has a less break (it needs more breaks). you should do some deletions for your Muzukashii. try to simplify some patterns and remember for the spread diff between Futsuu and Muzukashii. the most important one is about break. we can use more notes for Muzukashii (like we can use more 1/2 notes), but it doesn't mean we can map all the patterns with 1/1+1/2. no no, we should have a proper break which is 3/2 breaks or more than it, to make some breaks for the players. Futsuu has many 3/2 break or more than 3/2 breaks, so Muzukashii which one diff higher than Futsuu, at least it should have it too. well, i'll give you the suggestions later in my proper mods soon.

and also, you have 2 Onis in this mapset. it would be better to map one of your Onis easier. IMO you can make your Oni easier a bit, so it can be said that JuDa's Oni is harder than yours. i will give a proper mod about this too later

you can try to make some changes by yourself after you look this mod

Hmmm... Muzu & Oni a little easier.

JUDYDANNY

1,519 posts

Joined October 2011

JUDYDANNY 2015-01-06T12:54:24+00:00

Nofool wrote:
Hi' and sorry for the delay ;_;
good mapset anyways.

[JuDa's Oni]
- 00:41:708 (169,170) - maybe remove these notes ? sounds a bit better without imo. I think so, too! fixed.
- try to move - 00:46:385 (187) - to - 00:45:679 - ? more consistency with all the ddkd+ emphasize more the piano/melody. no change, music need a break as a variation on 00:45:679.
- 01:02:091 (15) - remove ? like at - 00:59:267 -. fixed.
- move - 01:03:944 (25) - to - 01:03:767 - ? ddk ddd doenst' really sound good imo, like at - 00:41:708 - (where i might suggested something stupid...). fixed.
Good luck'

Thanks for mod!

ｵｸﾚﾃｺﾞﾒﾝﾅｻｲ

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toara_fict

1,319 posts

Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

toara_fict 2015-01-11T03:42:14+00:00

Sorry late. Update :3

Razorflamekun

162 posts

Joined October 2014

Razorflamekun 2015-01-15T00:50:59+00:00

Hi! Random mod!

00:14:267 (7) - Make big note. There's emphasis here.
00:17:091 (12) - Make big note. There's emphasis here.
00:28:385 (31) - Make big note. There's emphasis here.
00:34:032 (41) - Make big note. There's emphasis here.

Other than that, this difficulty was fun to play

Great work! Hope this helps

toara_fict

1,319 posts

Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

toara_fict 2015-01-15T04:02:32+00:00

Razorflamekun wrote:
Hi! Random mod!

Kantan
00:14:267 (7) - Make big note. There's emphasis here.
00:17:091 (12) - Make big note. There's emphasis here.
00:28:385 (31) - Make big note. There's emphasis here.
00:34:032 (41) - Make big note. There's emphasis here.

Other than that, this difficulty was fun to play Great work! Hope this helps

some fix :3 Thanks~

Last edited by toara_fict 2015-02-02T04:26:23+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

-Sh1n1-

3,404 posts

Joined September 2012

-Sh1n1- 2015-02-01T01:01:37+00:00

Hi~~ u.u sorry for loooong delay

[About]

d is don note
k is kat note
D is finish don note
K is finish kat note

[Muzukashii]

00:12:326 - add d
00:21:679 (40,41,42,43,44,45) - weird ._. imo. Try to move 00:22:032 (42) - to 00:22:208 -
01:23:267 (291) - move to 01:23:620 - following the voice
01:38:444 - you shoul add a note here. Try this: 01:38:620 (360,361,362) - move to 01:38:620 (360,361,362) - if you change <-- at 01:38:620 - should be d.
01:41:267 - add k.
01:44:091 - add a note here.

[JuDa's Oni]

01:03:767 (23) - move to 01:03:591 - , without notes triplet start at 01:03:502 - like this: 01:00:326 (5,6,7,8,9) -
01:30:238 (187) - delete, is not necessary.
01:10:032 (57) - change to d. ddd pattern is better.

[Oni]

00:30:855 (112) - change to d
00:43:561 (173) - here I can't feel anything, two options: 1- delete / 2- change to d
00:39:679 (155) - I'm not sure about this finish, if you want to keep you should add finish at 00:35:267 (133) - 00:35:620 (134) - 00:38:091 (146) - but if you remove finish you should remove finish at 00:36:855 (141) - too.
01:12:855 (325,326) - change to DD, because 01:12:149 (322,323) - have the same sound.

Take my star Toara :3

qoot8123

1,500 posts

Joined March 2011

qoot8123 2015-02-04T03:44:39+00:00

hi o/ m4m as requested :3

[

Kantan]

General

00:25:561 - ~ 00:48:149 - on the oni, this part is less dense than first part, i think you should make some 4/1 break here to make this part less dense

00:48:149 - ~ 01:13:561 - this part should be a bit denser than 00:25:561 - ~ 00:48:149 - but not same as first part,you may compare the oni's spread, and overhaul it a bit

01:36:149 - ~ 01:48:502 - needs less dense on this part to differ kiai part

Notes

00:10:738 (1) - i think you can remove this note to make more 4/1 break,although there is a cymbal sound, this note is not really necessary imo
00:24:149 (24) - this note this a bit offbeat, i think it can move to 00:25:208 - , it would sounds better and make more break

[

Futsuu]

General

00:26:267 - ~ 00:48:149 - same as kantan, you may reduce the density on this part. ex : you can remove 00:26:620 (37) - this note (00:27:149 (39) - this note also could be remove,but it is optional)

00:48:149 - ~ 01:13:561 - same as kantan, should be less dense a bit

01:36:149 - ~ 01:48:679 - same as kantan, needs to be less dense, ex: 01:36:502 (213) - you can remove this note

Notes

00:18:149 (16) - this note could be remove to emphasize the rhythm more
01:34:738 (208,209) - remove the finish here? i feel this big note is not really necessary tho
01:46:208 (241,242) - this doublet could be removed to make some break on futsuu

[

Muzukashii]

General

00:25:561 - ~ 00:48:149 - same as kantan, needs make more easier

00:48:149 - ~01:13:561 - same as kantan

Notes

00:16:385 (20) - move to 00:16:208 - to make a consistency with former part
00:17:444 (24) - remove to make some 3/2 break
00:23:267 (47,51) - ^
01:15:326 (254) - move to 01:15:855 - ? i think it may more fit the vocal's accent
01:26:620 (306) - ^
01:21:767 (284,285) - remove? i feel the distance with 01:20:797 (278,279,280) - is a bit close, it would be more easier if remove them
01:22:385 (287,288,289,290,291,292) - how about this more fit the rhythm
01:34:738 (343) - and 01:35:267 (345) - these finish is a bit loud to me, try to remove one of them
01:46:208 (391) - remove and move 01:46:561 (393) - to 01:46:914 - in order to make some 3/2 breaks on muzu

onis are good, but kantan to muzu have some spread issue,find 2~3 more good mod, and then call me back

toara_fict

1,319 posts

Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

toara_fict 2015-02-08T08:34:05+00:00

-Sh1n1- wrote:
Hi~~ u.u sorry for loooong delay

[About]

d is don note
k is kat note
D is finish don note
K is finish kat note
[Muzukashii]

00:12:326 - add d have sounds. however this diff muzu no change
00:21:679 (40,41,42,43,44,45) - weird ._. imo. Try to move 00:22:032 (42) - to 00:22:208 - Hmmm..
01:23:267 (291) - move to 01:23:620 - following the voice KddK is hard
01:38:444 - you shoul add a note here. Try this: 01:38:620 (360,361,362) - move to 01:38:620 (360,361,362) - if you change <-- at 01:38:620 - should be d. no change
01:41:267 - add k. ^
01:44:091 - add a note here. ^

[Oni]

00:30:855 (112) - change to d no
00:43:561 (173) - here I can't feel anything, two options: 1- delete / 2- change to d ..?
00:39:679 (155) - I'm not sure about this finish, if you want to keep you should add finish at 00:35:267 (133) - 00:35:620 (134) - 00:38:091 (146) - but if you remove finish you should remove finish at 00:36:855 (141) - too. some change
01:12:855 (325,326) - change to DD, because 01:12:149 (322,323) - have the same sound. okay
Take my star Toara :3 thanks :3

qoot8123 wrote:
hi o/ m4m as requested :3

[ Kantan]

General
:idea: 00:25:561 - ~ 00:48:149 - on the oni, this part is less dense than first part, i think you should make some 4/1 break here to make this part less dense
00:48:149 - ~ 01:13:561 - this part should be a bit denser than 00:25:561 - ~ 00:48:149 - but not same as first part,you may compare the oni's spread, and overhaul it a bit
01:36:149 - ~ 01:48:502 - needs less dense on this part to differ kiai part

Notes
00:10:738 (1) - i think you can remove this note to make more 4/1 break,although there is a cymbal sound, this note is not really necessary imo okay.
00:24:149 (24) - this note this a bit offbeat, i think it can move to 00:25:208 - , it would sounds better and make more break okay.

[ Futsuu]

General
:idea: 00:26:267 - ~ 00:48:149 - same as kantan, you may reduce the density on this part. ex : you can remove 00:26:620 (37) - this note (00:27:149 (39) - this note also could be remove,but it is optional)
00:48:149 - ~ 01:13:561 - same as kantan, should be less dense a bit
01:36:149 - ~ 01:48:679 - same as kantan, needs to be less dense, ex: 01:36:502 (213) - you can remove this note

Notes
00:18:149 (16) - this note could be remove to emphasize the rhythm more okay.
01:34:738 (208,209) - remove the finish here? i feel this big note is not really necessary tho okay.
01:46:208 (241,242) - this doublet could be removed to make some break on futsuu okay.

[ Muzukashii]

General
:idea: 00:25:561 - ~ 00:48:149 - same as kantan, needs make more easier
00:48:149 - ~01:13:561 - same as kantan

Notes
00:16:385 (20) - move to 00:16:208 - to make a consistency with former part okay.
00:17:444 (24) - remove to make some 3/2 break okay.
00:23:267 (47,51) - ^ okay.
01:15:326 (254) - move to 01:15:855 - ? i think it may more fit the vocal's accent wow! good :3
01:26:620 (306) - ^ okay.
01:21:767 (284,285) - remove? i feel the distance with 01:20:797 (278,279,280) - is a bit close, it would be more easier if remove them okay.
01:22:385 (287,288,289,290,291,292) - how about this more fit the rhythm okay.
01:34:738 (343) - and 01:35:267 (345) - these finish is a bit loud to me, try to remove one of them okay.
01:46:208 (391) - remove and move 01:46:561 (393) - to 01:46:914 - in order to make some 3/2 breaks on muzu okay.

onis are good, but kantan to muzu have some spread issue,find 2~3 more good mod, and then call me back okay :3 Thanks Modding :3
00:25:561 - ~ 00:48:149 - Kantan ~ Muzu change little easier.
01:36:149 - ~ 01:48:502 - ^
00:48:149 - ~ 01:13:561 - change pattern :3

JUDYDANNY

1,519 posts

Joined October 2011

JUDYDANNY 2015-02-09T01:09:52+00:00

-Sh1n1- wrote:
[JuDa's Oni]

01:03:767 (23) - move to 01:03:591 - , without notes triplet start at 01:03:502 - like this: 01:00:326 (5,6,7,8,9) - no change, emphasized to vocal variatoin.
01:30:238 (187) - delete, is not necessary. fmmmmm. For this, keep in mind.
01:10:032 (57) - change to d. ddd pattern is better. changed some pattern .

Thanks for mod

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toara_fict

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Topic Starter

toara_fict 2015-02-10T13:31:36+00:00

update.

Renka

878 posts

Joined May 2014

Renka 2015-02-10T15:00:05+00:00

どうも～　ゲーム内チャットから

00:53:797 - change k?

01:16:385 - change k?　
01:31:738 - change d? 　そのあとのkkkがよく聞こえると思うので

00:38:444(103,104,105) - ddk?　よりよく聞こえると思います
01:40:914 - change k? 同じくらいの高さに聞こえるので

あまり指摘する部分が見当たらなかった…　ランクド目指して頑張ってください！　good luck!

toara_fict

1,319 posts

Joined July 2012

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toara_fict 2015-02-10T20:37:51+00:00

chaica wrote:
どうも～　ゲーム内チャットから

Kantan
00:53:797 - change k? Dramで拾っているのでd 00:53:091 (61) - こっちをkに変更

Futsuu
01:16:385 - change k?　全難易度dで置いてる気がするのでno. ( Drum sounds. )
01:31:738 - change d? 　そのあとのkkkがよく聞こえると思うので kkkの連打をdkdに変更

Muzukashii
00:38:444(103,104,105) - ddk?　よりよく聞こえると思います　00:38:797 (105) - ここをkに変更　00:38:620 (104) - 　ここはkで拾ってるのでdkkに
01:40:914 - change k? 同じくらいの高さに聞こえるので　okay~

あまり指摘する部分が見当たらなかった…　ランクド目指して頑張ってください！　good luck! 助かりましたありがとう

azger

Former osu!taiko Champion: 2014

12 posts

Joined February 2013

azger 2015-02-15T00:17:03+00:00

Twitterから

[Kantan]
01:33:326 (124) - d
01:35:444 (128) - k

[Futsuu]
修正すべき点が見つかりませんでした！

[Muzukashii]
00:20:444 - add d
00:20:620 (35) - k
00:20:973 (37) - del
00:21:149 - add k : ここは個人的にドラムの音取りを重視した方が良いかなと思いました

00:21:855 (40) - del
00:22:032 (41) - d
00:22:208 - add d : 上のmodを採用した場合にkdkのパターンが連続するため

00:39:326 (107) - k : 直後のdを強調するため
01:01:914 (199) - k : 同上

01:12:855 (242) - K
01:13:032 (243) - K : 曲のピッチが上がっているのとサビの始まりのDを強調できるので、少々騒がしい気もしますがKの方が良いと思いました

toara_fict

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toara_fict 2015-02-15T02:13:01+00:00

azger wrote:
Twitterから

[Kantan]
01:33:326 (124) - d
01:35:444 (128) - k

[Futsuu]
修正すべき点が見つかりませんでした！

[Muzukashii]
00:20:444 - add d
00:20:620 (35) - k
00:20:973 (37) - del
00:21:149 - add k : ここは個人的にドラムの音取りを重視した方が良いかなと思いました悩みましたが変えました

00:21:855 (40) - del
00:22:032 (41) - d
00:22:208 - add d : 上のmodを採用した場合にkdkのパターンが連続するため

00:39:326 (107) - k : 直後のdを強調するため
01:01:914 (199) - k : 同上

01:12:855 (242) - K
01:13:032 (243) - K : 曲のピッチが上がっているのとサビの始まりのDを強調できるので、少々騒がしい気もしますがKの方が良いと思いました

全部修正しました(似たような所はFutsuu. Oniも変更)　助かりましたありがとうございます！

BlackHairEND

305 posts

Joined March 2013

BlackHairEND 2015-02-16T02:15:54+00:00

Hi toara~

from TS3!

01:44:620 - change k　ここは個人的な音取りなのであまり強くはいえないのですが、少し音が上がってるように感じましたし、前の部分( 01:37:561 (130,131,132) - )でk d kとうっているのでこれでもいいのではないかと思いました！

01:21:679 - を 01:20:973 - ここに移動　自分的にはこっちのほうがあってるかなって感じがしましたね。　裏でリム？の音がなっているように聞こえましたし変えてもてはいかがでしょうか？

00:43:914 - change k　ここはリムの音で少し高くなっているように聞こえたのでkがいいのではないかと思いました。
これ以外には特に変更できそうな部分は感じられませんでした！　good maps!

00:58:032 - add k　後ろから高いﾁｬｶﾁｬｶ恩が聞こえるので追加してみてもいいかも？
01:11:267 - と 01:11:355 - にdを追加してみてはいかがでしょうか？　ドラムの音がなってる感じもしますし、サビに入る前の盛り上げということで3連を組み込んでみてもありかなと思いました！

難しいはプレイしてみてサビにもう少し盛り上げを入れてみてもいいかな？という感想を持ちました！　ですが、あくまで私の感覚なので参考程度にしていただけると嬉しいです！

ランクド目指して頑張ってください応援してます！　Fight!

toara_fict

1,319 posts

Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

toara_fict 2015-02-16T05:05:04+00:00

BlackHairEND wrote:
Hi toara~
from TS3!

Kantan
01:44:620 - change k　ここは個人的な音取りなのであまり強くはいえないのですが、少し音が上がってるように感じましたし、前の部分( 01:37:561 (130,131,132) - )でk d kとうっているのでこれでもいいのではないかと思いました！ここは全部d ( drum )で拾ってるからno change.

01:21:679 - を 01:20:973 - ここに移動　自分的にはこっちのほうがあってるかなって感じがしましたね。　裏でリム？の音がなっているように聞こえましたし変えてもてはいかがでしょうか？ okay~ それにあわせて　01:31:208 (120,121,122,123) - 　こっちも変更

Futsuu
00:43:914 - change k　ここはリムの音で少し高くなっているように聞こえたのでkがいいのではないかと思いました。　言ってること正しいしkの音だとおもうけど00:44:267 (74) - こっちの音の強調でd置いてるはず　とりあえずkeep.
これ以外には特に変更できそうな部分は感じられませんでした！　good maps!

Muzukashii
00:58:032 - add k　後ろから高いﾁｬｶﾁｬｶ恩が聞こえるので追加してみてもいいかも？置くなら　00:58:385 (186) - 　こっちかなぁ　Muzuだしとりあえず置かないでおきます_(:3JL
01:11:267 - と 01:11:355 - にdを追加してみてはいかがでしょうか？　ドラムの音がなってる感じもしますし、サビに入る前の盛り上げということで3連を組み込んでみてもありかなと思いました！ okay ~ 01:10:473 (234) - こっちのkkkを消してdddで置いた

難しいはプレイしてみてサビにもう少し盛り上げを入れてみてもいいかな？という感想を持ちました！　ですが、あくまで私の感覚なので参考程度にしていただけると嬉しいです！
ランクド目指して頑張ってください応援してます！　Fight!

　
変えた部分は他の難易度もあわせるように変更したよ～

ありがとーう

mingmichael

1,720 posts

Joined May 2012

mingmichael 2015-02-20T02:44:31+00:00

こんにちわ owo

Red ~> unrakable issue, must be changed
Blue ~> highly suggested, consider to use it
Black ~> suggestion, just free to choose it

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Muzukashii]

☞ okay!

Notes Structure

☞ basically patterns are nice, but i just worry for the usage of the breaks which are really low for this Muzukashii. well, i try to give a little suggestion for it, and the next will be handled by qoot

Notes

• delete this note 00:17:620 - . it's not really useful for using a 1/2 doublet there suddenly. just make it natural with a 1/1 note and a 2/1 break there

• move this note 00:20:444 - to 00:20:973 - . it will help the vocal when the vocal comes out on 00:20:973 - with a note

• well, try to move 00:34:914 - to 00:35:091 - . this kat will help player to emphasize the don on 00:35:267 - because the kat will be on the white strike, on the 4th beat on 00:35:091 - . so it will help the don which is on the 7/8 on 00:35:267 -

• move 00:57:502 - to 00:57:679 - . reason is same like above ^

• just an additional note on 01:06:679 - . try to delete it since it doesn't follow any particular sounds. and also deleting will increase the usage of the 1/2 break on your muzu

• here, i suggest you to delete 01:18:502 - ; 01:18:591 - and 01:18:679 - . well i know that you wanna try to use a little 1/4 triplet and it's nice actually. but, you must consider for the usage of the breaks for your Muzukashii. from the beginning of the song until kiai, you just have a littleeeeee extra break (the breaks which are more than 1/2 breaks, like 3/4 break or 2/1 break). so that's why during kiais, i try to suggest some breaks for it when the vocals/instruments doesn't come and it's perfect for using that break. in this point, we can hear that 01:18:502 - ; 01:18:591 - and 01:18:679 - don't give any sounds there. vocals are off and so are instruments (well actually it has a small snare on 01:18:502 - , but not really important since you followed the vocals. make it consistent). so that's why this becomes a good point and reason for using that break, an extra break. don't need to worry, it doesn't destroy your pattern since that 1/4 triplet is just an additional note which is not a "must" thing that we should have

• 01:29:797 - ; 01:29:885 - and 01:29:973 - . same like above ^

• 01:32:797 - ~ 01:33:326 - , try to use o ooo O. that 1/4 kat triplet will emphasize the snare on 01:32:973 - perfectly. and also the pattern becomes better too IMO

• delete 01:34:032 - and change 01:33:855 - to be don. to make a xx-xxxx-xx-xxxx pattern between 01:33:679 - and 01:36:149 - . much better right for the pattern right now, after you change it?

• remove the finisher on 01:44:620 - . make it consistent like 01:38:973 - and 01:41:797 - which don't have any finishers

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☞ okay!

Notes Structure

☞ basically it's fine

Notes

• ehh a 1/2 doublet pattern on 00:11:797 - ; 00:11:973 - ? ugh i don't really get the reason why, but i think 00:11:973 - should be on 00:12:149 - . it's same like the next part that you don't use a note on the red strike, like 00:14:797 -

• well i am not a big fans for a double 1/4 triplet. you can try to delete 00:21:061 - and move 00:21:591 - to 00:21:238 - . IMO this kind of pattern is same like your pattern, but this kind of pattern will make a less 1/4 triplet which will help players too

• delete 00:44:091 - . i deleted that note to make the vocals clearly with a single 1/1 only. not really useful for using some of 1/2 additional notes for 1/1 vocals actually

• here again, delete 00:46:208 - . at least give a little break again there (even though it has a 3/2 break before) between 00:45:855 - and 00:48:149 -

• try to swap 00:58:914 - and 00:59:091 - . a kat on 00:59:091 - will emphasize the snare sound perfectly which the song gives

• you can try to move 01:10:297 - to 01:10:473 - and change it to be kat. a ooo-triplet will emphasize the big don on 01:10:738 - perfectly because a ooo-triplet has a stronger pitch than a pair of 1/2 kat

• delete 01:21:414 - . please be wise for the usage of the pattern, like 1/4 5plets pattern. i really don't get any reasons for the usage of that pattern and actually that 1/4 5plets notes are just an additional note only, and it's just a creation from the mapper. and also remember, this is just an Oni diff, not an Inner Oni which has many improvisation of the patterns. becareful with this kind of pattern next time

• 01:29:885 - delete too ^

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