pinataman wrote:

Hi. From #modrequest

[General]

The hitsounds in Theramdn's easy were very nice, I would have liked to have them in the other difficulties because they fit the song well. Thank you very much <3333

[Theramdan's easy]

01:56:022 (1,2) - Consider making these sliders parallel? (rotated 1 by 3 degrees)

SPOILER

~done

01:50:772 (1,2) – I didn't like the flow from 1 to 2, maybe flipping 01:50:022 (3) - to make room for a rotation like this?

SPOILER

~somehow fixed my own way, looks similar tho


Hope this helps, good luck!

Setsurei wrote:

[theramdans' Easy]
idk why I don't like the drum in this diff, this song fits a lighter drum sound, so if you want to preserve the drum, reduce the volume a bit ~reduced volumes
01:20:022 (3) - rotate 45° CCW selection centre~done
00:27:147 (4) - any of these 2, to improve flow to next object

SPOILER

~I took the first one
00:44:022 (4) - blanket fix, move the tail up for a bit ~done
01:36:897 (2) - this one I prefer it to curve the opposite

SPOILER

~done
01:42:522 (4) - rotate 20° CCW selection centre or more ~done
01:47:772 (4) - fix blanket ~blanket removed
02:03:897 (2) - well I know what you're doing here with 02:06:147 (4) - , but I prefer ctrl g, and then fix distance (imo the flow is nicer, you can see what I'm pointing at looking at the screenshot)

SPOILER

~wait wait what? I dont get this ?w?
good luck

Don wrote:

Hey! M4M.

[General]
I hate that finish. Please. Remove it. It's so distracting. ~rly? Maybe it is just you

[Easy]
Tick rate +1 because you're mapping sliderws with 1/6 notes ~For real? I am not
00:06:897 (2) - I think this wave could be more wavy so it'd look better by putting the anchors on the same x coord. ~Did you mean the y coordinate?
00:08:022 (3,4) - This isn't blanketed too well ~*tilts head* Yeah, right
01:47:022 (3,4) - A slider end on a big white tick is almost never a good idea, consider a rhythm like this.

Rhythm

~done
01:50:772 (1) - Consider changing this slider to two singles, it'd fit the difficulty curve. ~two 1/1 circles? no no
01:54:897 (3,1) - This should be blanketed I feel, it'd look better ~keeping this, coz it is a triangle
01:56:022 (1,2) - Try to make these two slider parts that are almost parallel parallel to make it more visually satisfying (difference between y / difference between x) ~Yes, it is been paralleled in the previous mod
01:58:272 (1,2) - I feel like this'd fit better as a blanket as well ~Blanket incoming
Definitely the strongest map of the set stylistically speaking. ~lol, thanks

neonat wrote:

Easy

I detect some NC inconsistencies, but they didn't really bother me.................that much ~ gotta take a look at them

00:08:022 (3,4) - I'm pretty sure you can make this blanket better ~ I know dude, I am trying! \o/
00:30:522 (1) - a more evenly distributed slider would be nice ~ will try
00:41:772 (1) - a straight slider looks really weird above 00:40:647 (2) ~ Make it ~bezier~
01:47:022 (3,4) - make 01:47:772 (4) curve more around the previous slider ~ this object at this tick is a circle now
01:48:897 (1,2) - the heavy beat is at 01:49:272 - swap the places of the objects so that the circle starts before the slider and the slider starts at 01:49:272 ~ fixed

Feith wrote:

haloo..
dari mod que
inilah hasilnya !!!

[Hard]
00:04:647 (1) - remove nc I think that should be NC, since the SV changed
00:06:522 (1) - ^ Same
00:54:147 (1) - make it leaning towards the bottom left ? No need to do
01:51:522 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - nah, scrabled... fell panic when this comes very instantly Actually I want to make that part hard, if you feel panic maybe you should get used with the patern first


overall semua diff udah bagus kok Makasiiih dedeee
oh,ya. saya masih 14thn, terlalu muda untuk dipanggil "kak"

Breezy wrote:

wendao's Insane

SPOILER

00:09:147 (1) - This slider's end isn't snapped? 1/3 snapping

00:09:522 (2) - This note feels odd to me. I don't think so

00:13:084 - Add a circle? no

00:14:209 - ^ no

00:17:209 - ^ (Better flow) intentional anti-jump

00:17:584 - ^ (Better flow) ^

00:17:959 - ^ (Better flow) ^

00:26:022 (1,2) - Make a cool slider shape out of these? It looks bland the way it is right now. lack of imagination, sorry

00:44:022 - I hear potential for a triplet here. that's why I 'wiggled' that slider

00:47:397 (4) - Make this slider go up? sorry no

00:51:147 (2,3,4,5) - Make a jumpy pattern here? I did

01:01:459 - Add a circle here for better flow? that's an intentional trap, just fyi

01:11:022 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Might be confusing in Hidden. ^

01:20:772 - Add a circle. I followed the backsound

01:32:772 - Not sure why only this difficulty had the break in it, maybe because of HP drain? But like I said before, add this break to every difficulty.

01:36:897 (1) - Stack this more neatly. intentional manual stack

01:38:022 (1) - ^ ^

01:39:147 (4,5,6) - I see potential for a triangular pattern here. ???

01:43:834 - Add a circle. it'll ruin the backsound

02:03:897 - You could make a triplet here, but that's up to the mapper. same as 00:44:022 -

Breezy wrote:

Hi! I would be willing to do M4M with you, I saw this on #modreqs.
Here is my my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/208506

Thanks!

Normal

SPOILER

Something I noticed right away about this map is that it doesn't have the same hitsounds as the Easy. Why not? Because I don't like the way it sounded

00:06:897 (3,4) - Maybe make this a slider? Sure

00:27:147 (5) - I think you should move this slider up a little, it's almost going off the grid screen. Thanks for the warn, but when you play it still on screen

01:04:084 - This tick feels empty, I heard music here. Maybe make the reverse slider that precedes this time section extended to end on this time? Fixed, but I'm not sure how to fixed that, still not found good rhythm and patern

01:22:647 (3,4) - Maybe make the shape of these 2 look better, it looks a bit awkward having it stretch out across the screen. I don't know, but those 2 is on screen

01:28:647 - Add a circle. Sure

01:33:522 - A break should go around here. Curently no

01:39:522 (4) - This note would look better if it wasn't stacked. Might be hard to read if someone were to play on Hidden. No need to

01:44:397 - A circle fits in here. Yes, you're right

Hard

SPOILER

00:20:022 (2,3,4) - Try to change up these patterns a bit, they are a little repetitive. It's ok, since the song itself repetitive

00:50:959 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This might be difficulty to read for players on Hard. I want to make one or two part is hard, and I follow the piano sound there

01:05:022 - Add a circle here. Fixed, adjust the rhythm instead

01:23:022 - ^ Same

01:32:397 - Break here? Curently no

01:51:522 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This same pattern might also be difficult to read. I want to make one or two part is hard, and I follow the piano sound there

Breezy wrote:

Hi! I would be willing to do M4M with you, I saw this on #modreqs.
Here is my my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/208506

Thanks!

theramdans' Easy

SPOILER

00:04:647 (4) - Maybe make this a slider and end it at 00:05:397 ~no, it is definitely a stop there

00:14:022 - This part feels a bit empty, maybe add something somewhere here? ~added a slider

00:22:647 (4) - I think this circle would flow better if you add it somewhere around X 12/Y 598. ~no, it is weird ._.

00:49:647 (5) - Maybe turn this into a slider and end it at 00:50:772 ~no, I want to emphasize the pre-break moment there

01:33:522 - Why not add a break in here? ~It used to be a break in here, but for the sake of consistency with other diffs, it was removed

01:40:272 (1) - Something about the hitsound of this circle doesn't feel right. Maybe it's too loud?~no, you can see that the part after and before it has the same volume patterns (from 35 to 15 and to 35 again then repeat), so it is for the sake of consistency

Xgor wrote:

[Insane]
01:11:022 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Noot sure what there anti-jumps are here, They doesn't really make all that much sense to the music I'm pretty sure there is piano sound that goes to higher pitch (I don't know what it is).. so I'll keep it for now
02:02:772 (1,1,1,1,2,1,1,1,1) - The new combo spam around here feels just forced and unnecessary. I suggest you keep the combing consistent here to the rest of the diff. ah okay then

AndreasHD wrote:

Hi, MOD4MOD here ~


[General]

Your Insane diff has "H" icon on website, which I think is ok. I just want you to be aware of it (as you probably are lol). it's fine because the BPM is low (don't expect me to overmap this )


[wendao's Insane]

00:04:647 (1,2,3) - Since you have sliders like this later in the map which changes combocolor, you should make new combo on (2) & (3) here aswell. keep

02:10:647 (4) - Finish hitsound? disturbing I guess

00:59:772 (1,2,3) - These doesn't have NC either.

01:07:272 (3) - soft whistle at the head of slider? no

01:09:897 (1) - ^ no

01:21:147 (1) - And remove the whistle at the head of this slider? did something different

01:25:272 (3,4) - maybe switch the whistle on these no

I can't see anything else to change really.. Don't think this diff needs more mods imo. gj, nice style btw. thank you

Xgor wrote:

[Images]
Konachan.com - 132051 anubis1982918 moon purple scenic signed stars.jpg dosn't seems to be used anywhere. It's just the same as bg.jpg so please just remove it. Already done, maybe you have from previous version

thanks.png has quite a lot of unnecessary transparency. Please crop that out. I don't know I already try to resize but when done the size is bigger than previous -_- So no change on that one

Maybe make clouds.png more detailed? It's kinda hard to see details of it right now. Sure, someone already told me that

[Storyboard Design]
Right now the clouds.png moves too slow to be be noticeable that it's really moving, if you make it move more during that time it will be more noticeable. Right now it just looks more like a white filter on the BG. Fixed, actually I want make a fog, but it appear I fail XD

Not sure what flipping the BG in the middle of the SB is supposed to mean to the song... It more confuses me if anything. I don't know what to put on SB, so I randomly flipping the bg, and it appears it's fit when the song stop and change rhythm, curently no change


Aand here's a quick mod. Thaanks

[Hard]
Right now the diff spread is could be improved a lot if you made Hard easier, It's much closer to insane than Normal right now
Stuff like 00:50:959 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - and 01:51:522 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - is way more confusing than anything in Insane so it's harder than it at some parts. You and other modders were right, remap a bit. I hopeee it easier now

AndreasHD wrote:

Hi, MOD4MOD here ~


[General]

Your mp3 file is only 128kbps .. you know you can have a 192kbps file? atleast consider it I can't find or convert the mp3, just used Loctav's sound

Your Insane diff has "H" icon on website, which I think is ok. I just want you to be aware of it (as you probably are lol). But I think its insane enough

[Normal]

00:07:647 (4,5,6) - First of all, you should avoid stacking like this in a 'Normal' diff because they will read it as a fast stream. They think it's easier to read spaced out notes. I prefer to stack, as a normal I think that's still readable

00:26:397 (4,5) - Since all of the other difficulties have perfect blankets, I think you want this blanket better.

SPOILER

Fixed

make it like this if you want it perfect

SPOILER

Fixed

There are a few more of these 01:00:147 (2,3) - but yeah.. Im not gonna make a "Nazi mod" as they call it:) Fixed

01:08:397 (1,2,3) - Think about what I said about the stacking in Normal. I came up with an example of how you could map it if you need one,

SPOILER

Same explaination

01:43:647 (2) - Make this a reverse-slider remove this 01:44:397 (3) - and make sure this 01:44:772 (1) - is distance-snapped correctly after. Fixed

01:40:272 (1,2) - make these an angle like this?

SPOILER

Fixed

01:42:897 (1) - If you an angle like in this picture, it will feel better to play.

SPOILER

Fixed

01:43:647 (2) - You could angle this aswell Fixed


[Hard]

00:51:522 (4,5) - CTRL+G these two I do remap
00:51:897 (1,2) - and these two I do remap

actually make this whole section 00:50:959 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - easier to read, because this is 'Hard' diff. Players at that lvl thinks this is really confusing, trust me. I know it looks really cool, but it will only be confusing on a 'Hard' diff. Fixeeeed remapped

01:11:022 (7) - NC Sure

01:12:522 (1) - Remove NC Sure


01:51:522 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same as before, make this easier to read for hardplayers. Fixeeeed remapped

100Michael wrote:

[insane]
*Retry counter walks away..*

Garven wrote:

Greetings from the Christmas queue hi

[Insane]
I recommend tick rate 1 for the song overall, but 2 works okay for this map for most places. ok
00:54:428 (2) - This was odd to encounter. I think having a bent slider would represent that violin better imo I don't know what bent slider is, but did something to that slider
01:09:522 (3) - Instead of using an awkward unsnapped slider end, why not make 01:09:147 (2,3) - a slider?looks great
01:18:897 (1) - Why not a 1/2 slider and fit with the piano? ok
01:23:022 (3) - ^ no, there's no piano sound in here
01:29:209 (1) - End this at 01:33:334 - I feel better to end it at 01:32:397 -
01:52:647 (1,1,1) - Just make them all one combo done

Garven wrote:

Greetings from the Christmas queue Helloooo Garven~

[General]
thanks.png could be more aggressively cropped Yes fixed, same as Xgor said
tbh, kiai doesn't really fix this song very well. There's nothing that's such a powerful change that really prompts flashing and a fountain of stars. Yes, there's nothing such a powerful change on the song, but for me that kiai fit well with the song itself and with the snow SB, it's like the strongest part that give more feel like it's the chorus of the song. Sorry I can't explain it well XD, I keep it like that for now no changes

[Normal]
01:53:772 (1) - Too soon after a spinner for a Normal. You'll want to give at least two beats, but the best place musically would be to end it at 01:52:647 - Yes, I heard that issue too. Fixed

[Hard]
Take a good look at your new combos. They are really inconsistent length-wise. Fixed. I make NC every after two big tick, but since there's some slider that have diffrent SV, maybe some NC is sometimes shorter than it should be
00:39:522 (1) - I'd recommend that you increase the slider velocity a little bit here so that the repeat arrow is a little more visible I tried to have a diffrent SV on that one, doesn't feel right for me. But, I fixed that with not stacking the circle and slider, I moved the slider up ahead so the reverse arrow is still visible enough to be seen
00:44:022 (1) - ^ Same
Really nice map. Thank you for the compliment, it makes me happy

Mako Sakata wrote:

Tumben wendao updatenya ga pake .zip XD

Garven wrote:

[Hard]
00:04:647 (1,1,1) - You still have blurbs of newcombo spam Fixed

[Insane]
01:23:022 (3) - You might want to listen a little closer. The piano is still gliding along at this point.

Garven wrote:

[Insane]
01:23:022 (3) - You might want to listen a little closer. The piano is still gliding along at this point.