Nightmare - Alumina ~TV Size~ · forum

FlobuFlobs

Joined June 2011

Topic Starter

FlobuFlobs 2014-11-01T22:00:07+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Samstag, 21. Mai 2022 at 20:31:59

Artist: Nightmare
Title: Alumina ~TV Size~
Source: Death Note
Tags: Sakito Smoothie Mao Pereira006 Desperate-kun
BPM: 185
Filesize: 14170kb
Play Time: 01:08
Difficulties Available:

Desperate's Easy (2,07 stars, 104 notes)
Insane (4,5 stars, 231 notes)
Mao's Insane (4,77 stars, 254 notes)
Pereira's Normal (2,35 stars, 114 notes)
Smoothie's Hard (3,25 stars, 176 notes)

Download: Nightmare - Alumina ~TV Size~
Download: Nightmare - Alumina ~TV Size~ (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------

Easy - by Desperate-kunNormal - by Pereira006Hard - by SmoothieInsane - MeInsane - Mao

~~Extra - Senpaii please~~

Old Map lol, Should probably rank it already

6 Bubble pops !! <3

SPOILER

Last edited by FlobuFlobs 2022-05-21T18:32:41+00:00, edited 84 times in total.

Mao

Elite Mapper II

2,963 posts

Joined December 2012

Mao 2014-11-09T23:05:35+00:00

Good luck :p

FlobuFlobs

610 posts

Joined June 2011

Topic Starter

FlobuFlobs 2014-11-09T23:18:30+00:00

*^*!

Unusual-bot

Unusual-bot 2014-11-11T03:53:20+00:00

hi there, i'm here for m4m
let's start

Easy
00:14:185 (3,4) - blanket properly
00:28:294 (5) - 332|220 better blanket
00:27:969 (4,7) - stack properly
00:33:969 (4) - 308|184 better blanket
00:46:618 (4,5,1) - do something so these three blanket properly

example

00:49:212 (3) - ctrl+shift+r then do this
00:51:807 (4) - 300|68
00:52:780 (5) - 20|88
00:53:429 (6) - 176|208
01:01:537 (2) - 408|248
01:02:510 (3) - 124|180
please avoid overlapping notes in easy like 00:37:861 (3,5) -

Normal
00:05:104 (4) - 184|384 better flow for next pattern
00:08:023 (1) - 404|260 better blanket
00:12:564 (4) - 232|216 ^
00:13:212 (1) - 104|224 ^ and blanket
00:14:185 (2,3) - 316|264 ^
00:46:942 (1) - 232|168
00:53:104 (4) - 212|104 then ctrl+shift+r and to this
00:53:753 (5) - 268|308 if you do ^
01:01:375 (5) -

this pattern is better

01:02:510 (1) - 192|248
01:02:834 (2) - 104|168
01:03:483 (3) - 192|148
01:04:131 (4) - 312|128
01:04:131 (4) - 476|276

Hard
00:18:077 (7) - 80|236 better blanket
00:58:456 (4,5) - make it straight
01:01:861 (6,7,8,9,10,1) -

pattern better imo

Pereira006

osu! Alumni

2,801 posts

Joined October 2010

Pereira006 2014-11-11T05:25:33+00:00

NaCulus wrote:
hi

Normal
00:05:104 (4) - 184|384 better flow for next pattern
00:08:023 (1) - 404|260 better blanket
00:12:564 (4) - 232|216 ^
00:13:212 (1) - 104|224 ^ and blanket
00:14:185 (2,3) - 316|264 ^
00:46:942 (1) - 232|168
00:53:104 (4) - 212|104 then ctrl+shift+r and to this
00:53:753 (5) - 268|308 if you do ^
01:01:375 (5) -
this pattern is better

01:02:510 (1) - 192|248
01:02:834 (2) - 104|168
01:03:483 (3) - 192|148
01:04:131 (4) - 312|128
01:04:131 (4) - 476|276

Fix 3 things blanket, and other things blanket not fix because is intentional and fix 1 pattern in 01:01:375 (5) thank you

SPOILER

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TitleUnicode:Alumina ~TV Size~
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Smoothie

558 posts

Joined August 2011

Smoothie 2014-11-11T16:24:15+00:00

NaCulus wrote:
hi there

Hard
00:18:077 (7) - 80|236 better blanket Alright
00:58:456 (4,5) - make it straight Okay
01:01:861 (6,7,8,9,10,1) - I prefer it the way it is now~
pattern better imo

Thank you

Update

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Factorial

691 posts

Joined August 2013

Factorial 2014-11-12T05:46:41+00:00

From Flobu's Modding Queue
These are based on my personal preferences...

[Epicz]'s Easy
00:41:834 (1) - Start slider at 00:41:753
01:03:158 (1) - Shorten spinner to 01:04:780
01:05:834 (1) - Start this at 01:05:753
I usually don't recommend a slider after slider...

Pereira's Normal
00:19:375 - Add circle here

Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2014-11-12T13:26:50+00:00

Hi

[General]
Check the Aimod, it said something and try to fix those things
Uncheck wide screen support ( your map doesn't has SB)

[Mao's Insane]

00:10:618 (1,2) - Stack properly
00:14:185 (3) - Maybe Ctrl+G this and 00:14:510 (4) - you will get nice flow (+ fun) imo
00:15:483 (8,1) - Blanket is a little bit off at (1) 's tail
00:41:104 (3) - NC for changing in spacing like what you did here 00:43:699 (1,2) -
00:55:050 (2,4) - Blanket is a bit off
Nice Insane

[Insane]

00:04:131 (1,2) - DS=1.0x
00:13:861 - Add a note here , it feel a bit empty for me
00:16:131 (2) - I think ending slider on emphasized beat will make the flow to the next notes a bit bad , try this rhythm
SPOILER
00:31:050 (8,9) - Maybe use DS 1.0x here
00:33:969 (4) - NC
00:36:239 (6) - I would place this linear with 00:35:591 (2,4) - so it will flow better
00:40:456 (3) - NC
00:51:321 (2,3) - Blanket is a little bit off here
Okay Insane , I think you can make the flow a litile bit more natural

[Smoothie's Hard]

00:00:240 (1,2) - Blanket is a a bit off here
00:00:888 (3,4) - imo flow here is a bit too sudden , try decrease spacing here
00:17:591 (6,7) - ^
00:28:456 (1) - Maybe placing it like this would give you a better flow
SPOILER
00:28:780 (2) - NC this instead of 00:28:456 (1) -
00:38:834 (7) - Maybe placing like this
SPOILER
Because I think if you make the spacing (1) a bit more it would play nice here
00:50:510 (3) - Ctrl+G and you will get nice flow here 00:50:510 (3,4,5) -
01:04:942 - Add a note here, it feel empty for me
Okay Hard,, a little bit impove on flow and this should be good now

Good luck

FlobuFlobs

610 posts

Joined June 2011

Topic Starter

FlobuFlobs 2014-11-12T15:31:33+00:00

CelsiusLK wrote:
Hi
[Insane]
00:13:861 - Add a note here , it feel a bit empty for me There's nothing to add a beat and its fine as it is
00:36:239 (6) - I would place this linear with 00:35:591 (2,4) - so it will flow better Its personal opinion, the movement wouldnt change too much anyway, i like it my way
Okay Insane , I think you can make the flow a litile bit more natural

Fixxed the rest, thanks for the mod

Mao

Elite Mapper II

2,963 posts

Joined December 2012

Mao 2014-11-12T20:51:45+00:00

CelsiusLK wrote:
[Mao's Insane]
00:10:618 (1,2) - Stack properly These aren't supposed to be stacked :<
00:14:185 (3) - Maybe Ctrl+G this and 00:14:510 (4) - you will get nice flow (+ fun) imo Hm, I don't like the Jump from 2 then. Therefore keeping it for now.

Everything else has been applied. Thanks!

Code

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TitleUnicode:Alumina ~TV Size~
Artist:Nightmare
ArtistUnicode:Nightmare
Creator:FlobuFlobs
Version:Mao's Insane
Source:Death Note
Tags:Sakito
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Smoothie

558 posts

Joined August 2011

Smoothie 2014-11-12T21:30:13+00:00

CelsiusLK wrote:

Hi

Changes

[Smoothie's Hard]

00:00:240 (1,2) - Blanket is a a bit off here Fixed
00:00:888 (3,4) - imo flow here is a bit too sudden , try decrease spacing here I unstacked (4)
00:17:591 (6,7) - ^ I think this one is fine.
00:28:456 (1) - Maybe placing it like this would give you a better flow Yup
SPOILER
00:28:780 (2) - NC this instead of 00:28:456 (1) - Done
00:38:834 (7) - Maybe placing like this
SPOILER
Because I think if you make the spacing (1) a bit more it would play nice here I actually prefer is the way it is.
00:50:510 (3) - Ctrl+G and you will get nice flow here 00:50:510 (3,4,5) - Done
01:04:942 - Add a note here, it feel empty for me I would like to keep this short pause there.
Okay Hard,, a little bit impove on flow and this should be good now

Thank you.

Update

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396,152,3483,2,0,P|412:100|372:16,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,23,3969,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,100,4131,2,0,L|176:76,1,140,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
181,76,4618,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,164,4780,2,0,P|96:140|8:152,1,140,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
8,236,5267,5,0,0:0:0:0:
8,236,5348,1,0,0:0:0:0:
8,236,5429,2,0,L|0:308,1,70,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,352,5753,2,0,L|160:364,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,356,6077,2,0,B|280:332|328:348|328:348|300:300,1,140,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,288,6564,2,0,L|316:156,1,140
380,96,7050,2,0,P|412:76|456:76,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
323,166,7375,6,0,P|291:186|247:186,1,70
196,124,7699,1,0,1:0:0:0:
216,36,7861,2,0,P|148:44|104:116,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,188,8348,2,0,L|8:204,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,276,8672,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,276,8834,2,0,B|140:288|136:232|212:244,1,140
220,152,9321,6,0,P|260:172|236:328,1,210,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,243,9969,2,0,P|280:228|344:344,1,210,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,356,10618,6,0,P|476:372|524:360,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,280,10942,2,0,P|440:264|392:276,1,70,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,324,11267,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,324,11429,2,0,B|296:344|296:344|188:328,1,140
132,292,11915,2,0,P|96:316|-4:308,1,140,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
2,311,12564,6,0,P|8:268|-12:220,1,70
60,103,12888,2,0,P|53:137|59:171,1,70,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,140,13212,2,0,B|156:100|156:100|120:4,2,140,0|0|0,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,140,14023,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,192,14185,6,0,P|260:204|300:200,1,70,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
435,245,14510,2,0,P|401:244|368:256,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,296,14834,2,0,L|132:320,2,140,0|0|0,1:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
400,152,15807,6,0,P|468:152|524:220,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,60,16294,2,0,L|300:28,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,100,16780,1,0,1:0:0:0:
256,100,16942,1,0,1:0:0:0:
196,31,17104,2,0,L|60:60,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,199,17591,2,0,P|48:156|120:164,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,236,18077,2,0,L|84:316,1,70,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,232,18402,6,0,L|184:384,1,140,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,360,18888,2,0,P|316:328|420:336,1,140,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,232,19375,2,0,P|460:248|516:232,1,105,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
508,236,19699,22,0,P|516:152|400:144,2,210.000008010865,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,220,21158,5,0,0:0:0:0:
336,188,21321,2,0,P|320:144|332:96,1,70,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,220,21645,2,0,P|436:264|424:312,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,360,21969,1,0,1:0:0:0:
380,360,22131,2,0,L|300:372,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,280,22456,2,0,L|216:292,1,70,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
232,200,22780,2,0,P|172:212|84:196,1,140
56,116,23267,2,0,P|52:72|60:40,1,70,0|0,1:0|0:0,1:0:0:0:
160,132,23591,6,0,P|172:192|160:276,1,140,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
162,269,24077,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,324,24239,2,0,L|8:336,2,70,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
92,232,24726,2,0,P|144:192|228:224,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,136,25212,2,0,P|292:164|304:204,1,70,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,156,25537,2,0,P|396:192|388:232,1,70,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,204,25861,2,0,P|480:248|464:284,1,70,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
400,328,26185,6,0,P|344:288|248:288,1,140,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
196,328,26672,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,328,26834,2,0,B|152:360|152:360|104:336|56:344,1,140,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
32,260,27321,2,0,P|24:216|36:176,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,148,27645,2,0,P|116:192|104:232,1,70,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
20,80,27969,2,0,L|160:56,1,140
278,121,28456,2,0,P|246:135|212:132,1,70,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,32,28780,6,0,P|352:56|444:32,1,140,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
496,100,29267,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,169,29429,2,0,P|404:109|424:44,1,140,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
512,208,29915,2,0,L|480:344,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,288,30402,2,0,L|388:364,1,70,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,320,30726,2,0,P|292:360|260:376,1,70,8|0,3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
270,373,30969,1,0,1:0:0:0:
270,373,31050,2,0,L|184:364,1,70,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
52,272,31375,6,0,P|104:248|196:272,1,140,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
124,332,31861,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,332,32023,2,0,L|108:184,1,140,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
68,112,32510,2,0,L|-16:104,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
109,193,32834,2,0,L|179:200,1,70,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,152,33158,2,0,P|288:108|248:32,1,140
256,36,33645,6,0,P|216:44|184:40,1,70,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,168,33969,2,0,L|496:188,1,140,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
490,187,34456,1,0,0:0:0:0:
460,272,34618,2,0,P|448:308|452:344,2,70,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
490,187,35104,2,0,P|452:152|472:64,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,28,35591,2,0,P|344:12|316:12,1,70,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,104,35915,2,0,P|292:112|256:136,1,70,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,192,36239,2,0,P|304:220|296:256,1,70,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
216,292,36564,6,0,L|180:144,1,140,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
100,116,37050,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,156,37212,2,0,P|12:100|64:32,1,140,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
100,116,37699,2,0,L|120:192,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,260,38023,2,0,P|32:280|-8:280,1,70,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
118,183,38348,2,0,B|156:172|156:172|256:204,1,140
328,152,38834,2,0,P|380:160|424:148,1,70,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,84,39158,6,0,P|484:184|412:248,1,210,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
397,157,39807,2,0,P|484:188|492:300,1,210,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,336,40456,2,0,B|368:352|368:352|324:344|324:344|272:364,1,140
116,276,41104,2,0,P|96:240|96:204,1,70,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,224,41429,2,0,P|204:260|204:296,1,70
160,368,41753,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,41834,12,4,44023,3:0:0:0:
160,132,44348,6,0,P|140:64|168:-12,2,140,4|0|0,2:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
248,156,45158,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,132,45321,2,0,P|112:124|84:132,1,70,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,212,45645,2,0,L|268:248,2,140,0|0|0,1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
92,296,46456,1,0,0:0:0:0:
3,289,46618,2,0,P|10:255|31:227,1,70,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
131,369,46942,6,0,P|97:379|63:375,1,70,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,328,47267,2,0,P|244:320|288:332,1,70,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,260,47591,2,0,P|380:232|476:232,1,140,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
480,320,48077,1,0,0:0:0:0:
468,228,48239,2,0,L|452:80,1,140,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
272,68,48888,2,0,L|200:60,1,70,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,24,49212,2,0,P|112:56|120:100,1,70,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,176,49537,6,0,L|0:192,2,140,4|0|0,0:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
216,240,50348,1,0,0:0:0:0:
302,233,50510,2,0,P|296:199|276:172,1,70,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,316,50834,2,0,P|236:332|188:328,1,70,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,296,51158,2,0,P|402:296|433:312,1,70,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,240,51483,2,0,L|496:76,1,140,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
404,104,51969,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,24,52131,6,0,P|380:16|316:72,1,140,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
320,148,52618,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,171,52780,2,0,P|415:136|404:104,1,70,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,12,53104,2,0,P|236:44|239:79,1,70,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,144,53429,2,0,P|156:76|160:4,2,140,0|0|0,1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
96,188,54239,1,0,1:0:0:0:
96,188,54321,1,0,1:0:0:0:
96,188,54402,2,0,L|8:192,1,70,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
4,280,54726,6,0,B|72:296|72:248|144:276,2,140,4|0|0,0:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
8,372,55537,1,0,0:0:0:0:
8,372,55699,2,0,L|100:384,1,70,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,368,56023,2,0,B|188:348|208:348|208:348|256:368|324:368,2,140,0|0|0,1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
76,380,56834,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,300,56996,2,0,P|28:264|40:216,1,70,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
233,265,57321,6,0,P|241:301|229:349,1,70,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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194,142,57969,2,0,P|132:120|62:146,1,140,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
8,72,58456,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,40,58618,2,0,L|244:4,1,140,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
376,132,59104,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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312,320,60402,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,320,60564,2,0,L|160:340,1,140,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
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288,296,63483,1,0,1:0:0:0:
252,212,63645,2,0,L|208:76,1,140,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
124,44,64131,2,0,P|80:36|48:44,1,70,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
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124,44,64780,1,0,1:0:0:0:
304,28,65104,6,0,L|368:60,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,116,65429,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,65672,12,2,68672,0:0:0:0:

Rakuen

1,654 posts

Joined March 2013

Rakuen 2014-11-20T21:32:21+00:00

( =`･ω･´) Rakuen's Modding Queue (NM/M4M)

Default = Normal mods
Opt. = Optional / Minor / Nazi
Blue = Strongly recommended
Red = Unrankable issue

[General]
:3

[KIAI Time]
Prefer the KIAI time to be at this part (or both of them), from 00:44:348 - to 01:05:104 -
Same as the Preview Point

[Preview Point]
Prefer it to be at 00:19:699 - , the blue tick, a small interval isn't necessary imo after a few test

[Hitsounds]
Could try this custom hitsound as your clap: http://puu.sh/cYOm9/c6458a9ce8.wav
Sounds closer to the music's clap

Or you could try standard's normal-hitnormal

Could also use more standard drum samples for the bass kick etc.

[Epicz's Easy]

Distance snap: For Easy, it's required a consistent distance snap with DS function in order to make the map rankable.
00:00:240 (1) - Blanket, tail:
Image
00:02:185 (3) - Blanket, could try refering slider ball / approach circle for the others:
Image
00:05:429 (1) - Try to snap this with DS
00:10:618 (6) - NC (new combo) should start here instead of 00:10:942 (1) - (for consistency)
00:14:185 (3) - Have to snap this as well, remain 1.0x DS
00:15:807 (4) - Could blanket better with this, as shown previously
00:15:807 (4) - NC missed here
00:20:996 (3) - NC to indicate KIAI start
00:23:429 (6) - This one's too hard to read for Easy, the stacks are too close between 00:21:645 (4) - . Also you need a new combo here.
00:24:888 - I'd map this part, you can hear there's dragging vocal and drum cover
00:28:294 (5) - NC have to be increased in KIAI part, every 2 beats
00:31:375 (2) - NC should start here instead of 00:30:402 (1) -
00:33:969 (4) - NC as mentioned before
00:36:564 (1) - Unstack this with 00:34:618 (5) - , part of the slider tail is covered:
Image
00:39:158 (5) - NC for off-KIAI and rhythm change
00:41:834 (1) - Spinner is wrongly placed, should start at 00:41:753 - and ends 00:43:050 - , following the beat and stop earlier giving beginners more time to ready the next note
00:47:267 (5) - NC should be at here instead of 00:47:915 (1) - (consistency)
00:47:915 (1) - Could be blanket better~
00:48:564 (2) - Do not change DS for the whole diff
00:49:861 (4) - NC should be at here instead of 00:50:510 (1) - (consistency)
00:52:780 (5) - NC here, remove for 00:54:077 (1) -
00:54:726 (3) - NC
00:59:915 (4) - NC here for new beat, instead of 01:00:239 (1) -
01:02:510 (3) - NC for constant beat (opt. for last slider)
01:03:158 (1) - Suggest to stop spinner at 01:05:104 - followed by the piano
01:05:834 (1) - Feel this spinner is not necessary, nothing is playing at that part since you already have an ending spinner

[Pereira's Normal]

00:00:888 (3,4,5) - Rhythm here is a bit off, 00:01:212 (4) - should be at like 00:01:050 - because of the vocal. If you're following the drum then a note would be suggested at 00:01:375 - and 00:01:537 -
00:06:077 (3,4,5) - ^
00:14:185 (2,3) - A bit overmapped, try not to follow pattern same as 00:11:591 (2,3) - cuz there's no vocal at 00:14:348 -
00:19:699 (2) - I'd NC here for rhythm change
00:23:267 (6) - I'd prefer to follow the vocal at 00:23:429 - instead of the clap, no point since you ignored some recently by sticking to the vocal 00:22:456 (5) -
00:27:645 (4) - Slider is off the vocal, try extending it by a time 1/2 longer to 00:28:294 - (including the reverse), vocal is at 00:27:969 - instead of 00:27:888 - if you hear it carefully
00:33:969 (1) - Same as 00:23:267 (6) - on mod following the vocal (looks copy pasted)
00:38:023 (4) - Applies same as
00:27:645 (4) - (copy pasted part)
00:39:807 - Clap sounded here, remove clap for 00:40:131 (2) -
00:41:104 - Missing clap, and remove clap for 00:41:429 (4) -
01:05:104 (6) - NC, for rhythm change and consistency
01:05:104 (6,7,8) - They sounded at where piano plays, suggest to add another one at 01:05:591 - to fully stick to it, then start spinner afterwards 01:05:753 -
01:08:672 - Might wanna make the volume to 5% cuz it's complete silent

[Smoothie's Hard]

00:03:321 (2) - Jump is too big imo, hard to read since the song just started
00:19:618 - Could try lowering the volume here to decrease noise (opt.)
00:33:969 (2) - Feels like NC should start here instead of 00:33:645 (1) - , feel free to keep if you think the pattern looks nicer :\
Nice diff~

[Insane]

Audio Lead-In conflicts with other diffs. The others have 2000 meanwhile this has 0
00:18:726 (2) - Feels like this one's too close to 00:18:888 (3) - comparing with others
00:19:212 (4) - ^ , imo this kinda pattern isn't fun
00:19:699 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Overmapped in my humble opinion...could try 2 sliders with slowed down SV to stick with the vocal, instead of streams
00:25:780 (7) - Slightly overmapped, in the song it only sounded 5 hits which are 00:25:861 (8,9,10,11,1) -
00:29:429 (2,3) - Finish, in the music
00:29:753 - Consider putting something here for the clap, following vocal is abit too specific
00:29:915 - Missing finish
00:30:402 (2) - Missing clap
00:31:050 (8,9) - Clap~
00:39:158 - Volume a bit low, suggest something like 60%
00:41:753 (1) - Missing Finish
00:42:077 (3) - Missing clap
00:42:726 (6) - ^
00:43:050 - Clap is sounded in the song
00:43:699 (5) - ^
00:44:348 - Volume is too low here, imo should be same as where KIAI did
01:04:699 (4) - I can hear no steam at this point, could try moving the circle to 01:05:023 -

[Mao's Insane]

00:10:618 (1,2) - Not really sure if it's a mistake or intentional, in testing mode there's auto off-stack even if it's perfectly stacked in the editor
00:43:050 (1) - Clap sounds in the song
00:44:023 (2) - NC here for anti jump after stream? Looks better imo (opt.)
00:58:456 - Soft additions for the hitsound?
01:01:212 (1) - ^ Intentional? xD
01:05:753 - Hmm no ending spinner like other diffs? Then this timing point might be unused
Good one~

FlobuFlobs

610 posts

Joined June 2011

Topic Starter

FlobuFlobs 2014-11-20T22:27:35+00:00

Rakuen wrote:
[General]
:3 <3

[KIAI Time]
Prefer the KIAI time to be at this part (or both of them), from 00:44:348 - to 01:05:104 -
Same as the Preview Point

I think it's everones own opinion, i like how it is, so no change

[Insane]
[*]00:19:212 (4) - ^ , imo this kinda pattern isn't fun
I will try to change it if i get another mod about this

[*]00:19:699 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Overmapped in my humble opinion...could try 2 sliders with slowed down SV to stick with the vocal, instead of streams
^

[*]00:44:348 - Volume is too low here, imo should be same as where KIAI did
The kiai part itself is louder than the part here, so i keep it
[/list]

Thanks for the usefull mod ! <3

rest Fixxed

Last edited by FlobuFlobs 2014-11-20T22:34:26+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Smoothie

558 posts

Joined August 2011

Smoothie 2014-11-20T22:32:42+00:00

Everything fixed.
Thanks for the mod, Rakuen~

Update

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: 30-Nightmare - Alumina (Tv Size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 19618
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 49212
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 0.9999999

[Metadata]
Title:Alumina ~TV Size~
TitleUnicode:Alumina ~TV Size~
Artist:Nightmare
ArtistUnicode:Nightmare
Creator:FlobuFlobs
Version:Smoothie's Hard
Source:Death Note
Tags:Sakito
BeatmapID:535609
BeatmapSetID:228762

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Konachan.com - 19518 amane_misa death_note.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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Last edited by Smoothie 2014-11-20T22:38:37+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Pereira006

osu! Alumni

2,801 posts

Joined October 2010

Pereira006 2014-11-20T22:38:32+00:00

Rakuen wrote:
( =`･ω･´) Rakuen's Modding Queue (NM/M4M)

[Pereira's Normal]
00:00:888 (3,4,5) - Rhythm here is a bit off, 00:01:212 (4) - should be at like 00:01:050 - because of the vocal. If you're following the drum then a note would be suggested at 00:01:375 - and 00:01:537 - Can't pick to follow full vocals, I don't wanna this diff more harder, I will pick only vocal wich is higher than normal and weak, anyway I change my own
00:06:077 (3,4,5) - ^ ^
00:14:185 (2,3) - A bit overmapped, try not to follow pattern same as 00:11:591 (2,3) - cuz there's no vocal at 00:14:348 - Can't do that, If full follow lyrics is hard to play, I did explain before
00:19:699 (2) - I'd NC here for rhythm change no, keep it
00:23:267 (6) - I'd prefer to follow the vocal at 00:23:429 - instead of the clap, no point since you ignored some recently by sticking to the vocal 00:22:456 (5) - stay, same before
00:27:645 (4) - Slider is off the vocal, try extending it by a time 1/2 longer to 00:28:294 - (including the reverse), vocal is at 00:27:969 - instead of 00:27:888 - if you hear it carefully still fit, because the vocal is long when at 00:27:888 vocal back to begin (I mean vocal repeat), stay
00:33:969 (1) - Same as 00:23:267 (6) - on mod following the vocal (looks copy pasted) no
00:38:023 (4) - Applies same as no
00:27:645 (4) - (copy pasted part) no
00:39:807 - Clap sounded here, remove clap for 00:40:131 (2) - ya, fix
00:41:104 - Missing clap, and remove clap for 00:41:429 (4) - ^
01:05:104 (6) - NC, for rhythm change and consistency ups, I forget put nc, fix
01:05:104 (6,7,8) - They sounded at where piano plays, suggest to add another one at 01:05:591 - to fully stick to it, then start spinner afterwards 01:05:753 - ya, better, fix
01:08:672 - Might wanna make the volume to 5% cuz it's complete silent 10% is fine but well, fix

I understand about rhythm but I can't pick to full follow lyrics what I did explain, I did follow less vocals and some beats to newbies player pass this diff, sorry refuse, anyway thank you mod also about general I will let to FlobuFlobs if he agree, he can change my diff for consistency

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Rakuen

1,654 posts

Joined March 2013

Rakuen 2014-11-21T09:21:38+00:00

No kds

Forgot to mention something.

The background looks intentionally stretched...idk >w<"

Color of Combo 3 and Combo 4 looks very close

Maybe can replace one of them with the purple color tattoo on her chest / chin / lips (background)

Mao

Elite Mapper II

2,963 posts

Joined December 2012

Mao 2014-11-22T18:01:35+00:00

Rakuen wrote:
[Mao's Insane]
00:58:456 - Soft additions for the hitsound? ↓
01:01:212 (1) - ^ Intentional? xD yep
01:05:753 - Hmm no ending spinner like other diffs? Then this timing point might be unused I don't like a spinner here because I feel like the notes are making a good fade-out. If anyone else wants me to add it, I'll do so.

Everything else has been applied. Thanks o/

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Ultima Fox

621 posts

Joined August 2013

Ultima Fox 2014-12-03T23:38:40+00:00

hello, from M4M

[Epicz Beginner]

00:39:158 (5) - New Combo Here
00:55:699 (2) - Why make part of this soft?

[Easy]

00:14:185 (4) - New Combo
00:54:726 (3,4) - Make a better blanket

[Pereira's Normal]

Nothing Found

[Smoothie's Hard]

00:52:780 (3,4) - Copy Paste To make the same slider, than ctrl h + ctrl j
01:04:131 (5,6) - ^
Why doesnt this mode have the video?

[Insane]

CS a tad bit high?
00:20:348 (2) - Include this in the stream? (make it a bunch of circles)
01:05:591 (1) - No Need for new combo here

Good Luck

FlobuFlobs

610 posts

Joined June 2011

Topic Starter

FlobuFlobs 2014-12-04T00:09:11+00:00

GyroX20 wrote:
[Easy]

00:14:185 (4) - New Combo Done
00:54:726 (3,4) - Make a better blanket I dont want to blank here

[Insane]

CS a tad bit high? Fine for me, i like high cs, its kinda oldschool
00:20:348 (2) - Include this in the stream? (make it a bunch of circles) You can hear that it sounds different from the other
01:05:591 (1) - No Need for new combo here Changed

Good Luck

Thanks

Smoothie

558 posts

Joined August 2011

Smoothie 2014-12-04T00:22:33+00:00

GyroX20 wrote:
[Smoothie's Hard]

00:52:780 (3,4) - Copy Paste To make the same slider, than ctrl h + ctrl j
01:04:131 (5,6) - ^ These slider were placed like that intentionally. So i'd like to keep them the way they are.
Why doesnt this mode have the video?

JeZag

518 posts

Joined August 2013

JeZag 2014-12-04T23:22:29+00:00

Mod as requested =w=
General

SPOILER

I see how the combo colors fit, but having red blue grey combos repeating doesn't fit the whole video (some parts contain no blue)

Suggestion

00:00:240 to 00:20:915 - Use a light grey/dark grey combo colors
00:20:996 to 00:39:158 - current blue / random grey combo colors
00:39:158 to end - use red / random grey combo colors

I'd rather see the kiai time from 00:44:348 to 01:05:104
And have the preview point around here (00:43:375 maybe?)
Also Aimod (ctrl+shft+a) gives an audio bitrate error

Beginner

SPOILER

00:05:429 (1,2) - Looks weird... make 00:05:429 (1) look like it's supposed to flow into 00:06:402 (2)
00:19:699 (1,2) - idk if you should stack on a "beginner" diff
00:24:888 - A bit empty here... map the guitar?
00:38:185 (4,5) - Doesn't look good; change 00:38:185 (4) a bit
00:40:456 (7) - Doesn't blanket 00:41:429 (8) well
00:55:699 (2) - Doesn't fit the rhythm
00:58:618 - you need a note here, so change 00:58:294 (3)

Easy

SPOILER

00:04:131 (7) - Use two 1/1 sliders instead of this long one
00:18:402 (4) - I would rather see this instead: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2309848
00:26:834 (2,3) - Not sure if you should have /2 rhythm in an easy
00:29:429 (7,8) - Same
00:36:239 (6,2) - Looks weird because they don't stack right
00:54:726 (3,4) - 1/2 rhythm again

Normal

SPOILER

00:03:483 (2) - Use a 1/1 slider; no need for repeat
00:27:645 (4) - Weird and doesn't fit the music (make it a bit longer)
00:38:023 (4) - ^^^
01:05:104 (1,2,3,4) - you may want to reduce the distance between them for a normal diff

Hard

SPOILER

00:19:699 (1) - Players hate the silent hit sound
00:37:375 - Missing a beat
Pro diff

Insane

SPOILER

00:10:618 (1) - Inconsistency with the music makes this unpredictable (3 similar sounding guitar notes)
What I'd expect: All sliders start one one side (in the screen shots all start left to right) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2309753 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2309760
00:10:942 - Have a circle here instead of slider tail for more power and connection to song
00:19:699 (1,2) - Nothing in the music to support 1/16 stream at all but 00:20:672 (2,3,4,5) fit well
I would recommend something like: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2309728
00:32:510 (1) - I personally dislike sliders that repeat more than once, especially when slider velocity is a bit fast
00:32:510 (1) - ctrl+h would make it flow better afterwards: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2309777
00:37:699 (1) - Again
00:40:780 Something here or delete 00:39:807 (2) and put something on 00:40:131
TL;DR follow the lyrics or the instruments and don't switch too quickly
00:44:996 (3,4) - These circles should flow to match the song IMO, so don't stack
00:53:429 (1) - Same thing here
I would have a circle at 00:54:402 ( also ctrl+G 00:53:429 (1)): https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2309821 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2309824
Works especially well because you put a special hitsound at 00:54:158
00:55:861- Don't have a slider tail where the lyrics should be
00:58:618 (1) - Again
01:00:239 (2,3) - Probably the largest jump in this difficulty, which doesn't fit the music because it doesn't really stand out in the song
01:05:834 (1) - Quieter hitsound on the spinner (little to no sound on the spinner)

Mao's Insane

SPOILER

00:58:456 (1) - Not used to whistle histound x.x
Pro diff

Smoothie

558 posts

Joined August 2011

Smoothie 2014-12-05T00:31:23+00:00

JeZag wrote:
Hard
SPOILER
00:19:699 (1) - Players hate the silent hit sound Oops... Seems like i placed the green line at 00:19:699 wrong
00:37:375 - Missing a beat I think this slider goes pretty well. 00:37:212 (3)
Pro diff

Thanks~

Changes

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: 30-Nightmare - Alumina (Tv Size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 19618
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 49212
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 0.9999999

[Metadata]
Title:Alumina ~TV Size~
TitleUnicode:Alumina ~TV Size~
Artist:Nightmare
ArtistUnicode:Nightmare
Creator:FlobuFlobs
Version:Smoothie's Hard
Source:Death Note
Tags:Sakito
BeatmapID:535609
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//Break Periods
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FlobuFlobs

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FlobuFlobs 2014-12-05T00:32:00+00:00

JeZag wrote:
Mod as requested =w=
General
SPOILER
I see how the combo colors fit, but having red blue grey combos repeating doesn't fit the whole video (some parts contain no blue)
Suggestion
00:00:240 to 00:20:915 - Use a light grey/dark grey combo colors
00:20:996 to 00:39:158 - current blue / random grey combo colors
00:39:158 to end - use red / random grey combo colors
I get the idea, i have to think about it and ask a bit around

I'd rather see the kiai time from 00:44:348 to 01:05:104
And have the preview point around here (00:43:375 maybe?)
Those parts are quieter than the actual kiai, i think its personal opinion

Also Aimod (ctrl+shft+a) gives an audio bitrate error
~~Yea, noticed it but im lazy Lol~~

Easy
SPOILER
00:04:131 (7) - Use two 1/1 sliders instead of this long one
Sorry but its fine for me, it would be too much clicking and the diff is already really hard for a easy

00:26:834 (2,3) - Not sure if you should have /2 rhythm in an easy
Probably not but it fits so good lol, im waiting for a mod that helps me out with that
^

00:54:726 (3,4) - 1/2 rhythm again

Insane
SPOILER
00:10:618 (1) - Inconsistency with the music makes this unpredictable (3 similar sounding guitar notes)
What I'd expect: All sliders start one one side (in the screen shots all start left to right) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2309753 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2309760
I get the point but the flow transition between the circles and slider doesnt really work that well, it over emphasizes the circle instead of the slider and i want to emphasize the slider.
Also the reason why i didnt stacked 00:10:294 (5,6) - is because the music doesnt repeats and this way i can emphasize 00:10:294 (5,6,1) - those beats in the music better

00:10:942 - Have a circle here instead of slider tail for more power and connection to song
I dont really get it lol, why

00:19:699 (1,2) - Nothing in the music to support 1/16 stream at all but 00:20:672 (2,3,4,5) fit well
I would recommend something like: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2309728

00:32:510 (1) - I personally dislike sliders that repeat more than once, especially when slider velocity is a bit fast
So? xD

00:37:699 (1) - Again
Changed it Somehow else

00:40:780 Something here or delete 00:39:807 (2) and put something on 00:40:131
TL;DR follow the lyrics or the instruments and don't switch too quickly
You are right but i cant let such a loud important sound out of the map, i changed it somehow else

00:44:996 (3,4) - These circles should flow to match the song IMO, so don't stack
They do, the vocals are stacked to emphasize them instead of a jump

00:53:429 (1) - Same thing here
I would have a circle at 00:54:402 ( also ctrl+G 00:53:429 (1)): https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2309821 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2309824
Works especially well because you put a special hitsound at 00:54:158
I made the last tick Clickable but i didnt ctrl+g it, it would flow extremly bad, its already a jump

00:55:861- Don't have a slider tail where the lyrics should be
The Vocal on the white tick is stronger than on the red tick, 2 circle would ignore the louder vocal

01:05:834 (1) - Quieter hitsound on the spinner (little to no sound on the spinner)
Its already 5%
As far as i know, less is unrankable xD

Fixxed the rest, Thanks

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