1. The distance snap between 00:07:482 (4) - and 00:07:862 (1) - is smaller than the distance snap before that (because you changed slider velocity on that slider). I'd suggest fixing that since easy maps look a lot better if they are uniform IMO.
2. 00:07:862 (1,2,3) - The distance snap between these also looks different, did you change (increase) it there?
3. 01:16:269 (1) - I had trouble with that when playing your map because starting that slider at a red tick seems more natural to me. The beat on the red tick is much more pronounced than the one on the white tick, where you started it on. I'd suggest maybe starting the slider at the red tick.

Setsurei wrote:

01:22:936 (1,2) - I'm not sure where did the red one start

Amasuro wrote:

Setsurei wrote:

01:22:936 (1,2) - I'm not sure where did the red one start

Oh, I started it at 01:22:769. Oops

1. Untuk Custom hitsound S:C2 kok suara whistle sama clap nya sama? engga didelete aja yang clapnya? berasa boros gitu XD

1. 00:04:282 (4) - Delete clap? Itu kayanya down beat deh lebih baik engga usah dikasih hitsound
2. 00:05:882 (2) - Sama
3. 00:12:662 (7) - Add finish di awal slider? biar sama kaya 00:09:462 (2) - 00:11:062 (5) -
4. 00:14:262 - Untuk yang itu kayanya lebih baik pake S:C1 deh, soalnya suara normal hit S:C2 terlalu keras, lagian di sana ga ada suara kaya drum di lagunya
5. 00:15:937 (2) - Yah kok suara vokal di big tick nya dilewat, padahal nadanya bisa dibuat gini http://puu.sh/coa5K/bc8e70b54c.jpg ; http://puu.sh/coamC/a13171b4d3.jpg
6. 00:18:604 (2) - Sama
7. 00:31:937 (2) - Sama
8. 00:27:271 (2) - Yang itu lebih baik diganti 1/1 aja deh http://puu.sh/coaMA/fe754e5d4c.jpg
9. 00:41:270 (2) - Entah kenapa aku engga terlalu suka sama bentuk S yang pendek gitu XD, mungkin bisa dirubah gini http://puu.sh/cobal/6f8102cd25.jpg
10. 00:57:603 (1,2) - Blanket bagian akhir bisa dirapihin lagi di sini http://puu.sh/cobSf/91e22f2b7c.jpg
11. 01:25:603 (3) - Aku kurang yakin sama slider itu, soalnya pas bagian bentuk melingkar kadang susah buat dibaca apalagi mungkin buat pemula
    
    Bentuk slidernya banyak yang aneeeh XD

1. 00:03:882 (2) - Delete clap di akhir slider? bagian itu berasa down beat deh
2. 00:04:682 (1) - Sama
3. 00:05:482 (2) - Sama
4. 00:12:662 (1) - Spinnernya lebih baik dipanjangin aja deh sampe big tick terus set C:S2 di 00:14:262 - Soalnya suara hit S:C1 terlalu gede
5. 00:53:936 (4) - Kalo itu dipindah ke x:344 y:128 bgmn? soalnya suara gitar yang ini 00:54:270 (5) - meninggi jadi menurut aku nada sebelumnya letaknya lebih baik lebih rendah biar kerasa efek pas di situ XD 00:54:270 (5) -
6. 01:04:269 (3) - Kalo rhythm yang itu kaya gini bgmn? http://puu.sh/cod2d/52d95251cc.jpg Terus ditambahin finish di bagian awal slider. Soalnya punya nada yang sama kaya ini 01:03:436 (2) -
7. 01:10:269 (5,6,1) - Entah kenapa buat aku nada yang itu kurang cocok

1. 00:03:882 (4) - Delete clap di akhir slider? soalnya bagian itu kaya downbeat
2. 00:04:682 (1) - Sama
3. 00:05:482 (2) - Sama
4. 00:11:062 (1) - Tambah finish
5. 00:12:762 (1) - Suara finish terlalu gede, terus kayanya agak ga coco kalo dikasih finish, soalnya di situ engga ada suara cymbal, Mending pake S:C2 terus engga usah dikasih finish
6. Kayanya yang ini dikasih circle deh biar lebih fit sama lagunya 00:35:826 - sama 00:35:826 - walaupun agak lemah di situ kedengeran suara drum
7. 00:41:104 (4) - Tambah whistle di akhir slider
8. 00:43:937 (4) - Tambah suara whistle di kepala slider

1. 00:03:882 (4) - Lebih baik delete deh whistle di akhir slider, soalnya bagian itu berasa down beat deh
2. 00:05:082 (2,4) - Sama
3. 00:41:270 (5) - Tambah suara whistle di awal kepala?
4. 00:43:937 (2) - Tambah suara whistle di kepala

1. I feel SV is very high for easy. (normal is same so, too)
2. 00:11:062 (5) - NC
3. 00:32:271 (3,4) - blanket correctly
4. 00:38:271 (3) - how about cuving rightside a little?
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:52:270 (1) - curve gently. not good flow
6. 00:57:603 (1) - remove NC
7. 01:10:936 (4) - NC
8. 01:09:269 (2,4) - too close?
9. 01:10:269 (3,4) - I prefer to follow vocal. just a suggetion~
   
10. 01:18:936 (1) - end at 01:21:603

1. 00:02:682 (3,1,2) - mmm, not good flow...
2. 00:20:271 (1,2,3) - round pattern is better
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:36:771 (2) - delete. too hard
4. 00:38:271 (1,2,3,4,5) - difficult... suggetion
   
5. 00:44:270 (1) - I recommend to keep 1/3 rhythm. change to slider: 00:44:270~00:44:604 ?
6. 01:10:269 (5,1) - I prefer to follow vocal
   

1. 00:15:493 (2,3) - stack
2. 00:21:271 (4,5) - it is better to avoid stack
3. 00:34:604 (3,4,5,6,7) - hard to find rhythm. how about this?
   
4. 00:58:769 (1) - remove NC
5. 00:59:603 (1) - ^
6. 01:21:353 (4) - the slider starting at blue line is avioded, imo. suggetion
   

1. 01:18:936 (5,1) - swap NC
2. 01:19:186- add a note
3. 01:21:603 (3,1) - swap NC
4. 01:23:269- I prefer to add a note
5. 01:24:603- ^

1. 00:09:462 (2,3) - having this setup would make the pattern more organized
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2. 00:18:937 (3,4) - imo this should be changed into a 2/1 slider to better represent the held vocal. theres also nothing on 00:19:271 -
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3. 00:29:271 (2,3) - switch these objects? so that the head of the slider is on the stongest vocal and new measure at 00:29:604 -
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:41:270 (2,3) - improve blanket a bit o3o the tail of 00:41:270 (2) - has a lot more space than the head
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:57:603 (3,4) - blanket bit better o3o
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:18:936 (1) - should end at 01:21:769 - imo since it is by far the strongest note there in that section. with that, you could change the polarity and have the sliders on 01:23:103 - and 01:24:436 - following the same strongest sound. following that would be a 3/2 spacing but that is allowed o-o itll be a bit harder but i really think that the sliders and spinner could follow the music waaay better otherwise easy players might click the sliders to the strongest notes that you arent representing.. you did it for 01:14:936 (5,1) - anyways o3o so 3/2 spacing shoudl be fine. as for the blanket:
   SPOILER

   

Sognux wrote:

Hello!

I suck at modding so please bare with me ;-; *I suck at modding so please bear with me (nazi grammar :>)

Also, try to stick mapping with only 1 Beat Snap Divisior per song, you used 1/3 and 1/4 for the LIAR diff. please listen carefully on the song, there are parts with 1/3 between 00:14:938 - and 00:36:271 - , the rest are all in 1/4 beats

Normal
01:22:936 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Maybe you can do this part in another way? Didnt like how it sounded with the music. like the objects are less? well I don't want to go on instrument beat detailed (because this is Normal diff)

Hard
00:21:271 (4,5,6) - Either move the first note or the two other notes. I prefer stack, easier to read

LIAR
00:30:937 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like the timing of the 2 and 4. this is 1/3 beat
00:33:604 (1,2,3) - Maybe end the slider 1 tick earlier then put the 2 1 tick earlier aswell. this is empty here 00:33:937 - , also I want to focus it ends at strong beat 00:34:271 -

This was a good beatmap, good luck on getting it ranked. thanks for the mod! no change

• 1. I like the song, mungkin nyisip nyisip diff (HAREZ PLZ NO)
  2. Gw lebih menikmati diff Hard daripada diff LIAR, sorry
  
  [Easy]
  • 1. ... Overmapped, kebanyakan note 1/1 buat dipencet, butuh lebih banyak 2/1, soalnya ini bakal bikin beginner susah nahan slidernya
    2. 00:07:882 (1) - better check this note, unsnapped
    3. 01:22:937 (1,2) - I really hate this, it's so random, meanwhile di kiai penuh note di white line || diff normal aja lebih gampang kok realize-nya ;_;
    
    [Normal]
    • 1. 00:54:603 - ketika semua diff berhenti disini, kenapa Normal malah overmapped?
      
      [Hard]
      • 1. 00:21:271 (4,5,6) - I'd not recommend this, stack terus ganti beat itu susah
        2. 00:52:353 (1) - kenapa ga geser ke 00:52:436 - aja, more easy to read, more neat the map is
        
        [LIARRRRRR, SANGAT LIAR]
        • 1. well, nothing much to say here... but, again, gw lebih menikmati diff Hard daripada diff ini
          2. also, diff ini kurang kerasa "over"map nya ketimbang Normal-Hard gap, especially di part Kiai
          3. 00:12:762 (1) - same as Hard diff case
          4. 00:22:271 (9,1) - this is good
          5. 01:22:769 (7,1) - this is so confusing for me, walaupun lumayan kebaca alurnya
          
          sorry can't find more, this piece of gold map is ready for rank
          
          good luck

Senritsu wrote:

bug more bat pls

1. 00:01:462 objects are inaudible at 10% volume, up it to 40% atleast
2. 00:07:862 (4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - your comboing in this section is a bit weird to me, mainly cuz you are not following the music with them, try this:
3. 00:07:862 add NC, 00:08:662 remove NC, 00:09:462 add NC, 00:10:262 remove NC, 00:11:062 add NC
4. 00:19:437 (4,5,6) - this should be snapped in 1/4
5. 00:20:382 (2,3,4) - use normal sampleset?
6. 00:23:437 (2,3,4) - your spacing is really confused to play here, 3 and 4 need more distance, due to the big gap in the timeline
7. 00:24:215 I feel that this circle is not following nothing in the song, is not better to remove it and keep just the one with vocals, 00:24:160 (5) - 00:24:271 (7) -
8. 00:45:270 add whistle? your fake clap ^^
9. 00:47:270 ^
10. 00:59:603 remove NC
11. 01:04:269 ^
12. 01:29:353 5% is too low use atleast 30% or 40% to make this rankable

1. I feel more comfortable with AR 7.5, it avoid a lot of overlaps in kiai part, also the last jumpy part feel better as well
2. Hitsounds suggestion in Liar may apply here as well
3. 00:01:462 objects are inaudible at 10% volume, up it to 40% atleast
4. 00:14:662 your spinner is not supposed to end here like Liar diff?
5. 00:21:271 (4,6) - blanket is off, also the stack 00:21:493 (5,6) -
6. 00:43:604 (3,4,1) - use the same spacing between them
7. 00:56:936 this need 1 or 2 grids to the left, since is overlaping with 00:56:103 (5) - (In game)
8. 01:29:353 5% is too low use atleast 30% or 40% to make this rankable

1. 00:01:462 objects are inaudible at 10% volume, up it to 40% atleast
2. Hitsounds suggestion in Liar may apply here as well
3. 00:12:662 add a circle with finish and start the spinner 1/2 later in 00:12:862
4. 00:36:771 remove this circle is not following nothing or almost inaudible in the music
5. 00:46:604 (1,2,3) - maybe use a repeat slider instead?
6. 01:29:353 same as Liar

1. Hitsounds suggestion in Liar may apply here as well
2. 00:01:462 objects are inaudible at 10% volume, up it to 40% atleast
3. 01:29:353 same as Liar
   
   call me back after you reply to this

General

Easy

Normal

Hard

LIAR

The difficulty's arrangement is so nice. Good luck

scanter wrote:

Hi o3o/ \owo hi

General

1. Please add the White Fox to tag. This is a animation of the publisher. added, and added Square Enix too
2. This song hasn't unique or harsh sound. I think it is soft song. so I recommend add muted sliderslide on. http://puu.sh/czS5D/eff7543ce6.wav because some people suggested this too, then I'll add it

Easy

1. 00:07:862 (1) - What about makes more gentle curve? it is a little tricky. like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2196301 I love this spiky slider lol
2. 01:25:603 (3) - Turn down volume the slider's end? it is not fit song's end. if I decrease the sound again it will not be hearable

Normal

1. 00:34:937 (3) - What about change just 2 circle? drum sound are outstanding. this one I want to preserve slider
2. 00:36:937 (2,3) - Following vocals? http://puu.sh/czSOI/dc48211230.jpg ok, changed to that
3. 00:50:270 (5) - wow.. good :3

Hard

1. 00:12:862 (1) - Sound has is gradually raised, so what about try to gradually raise volume here? it will be too loud on the spinner end
2. 00:23:437 (2) - Not 1/2 tempo, but 1/3. 00:23:493 put this place is right. if you dunno where to place, just stack is fine. moved and fixed the distances
3. 00:24:104 (4) - ^ same. ^ same
4. 00:30:160 (4) - Not 1/3 tempo, but 1/2 lol. right place is 00:30:937 here. lol I am so confused with this being brought up like 1/3 then 1/6 then 1/3 again and now back to 1/6. changed anyway
5. 00:44:270 (1) - Why distance suddenly down? it is strange. 2.0 focusing on violin there, after that going back to normal distance
6. 01:01:103 (2,3,4) - You followed vocals almost. so I recommend this rhythm. http://puu.sh/czSbI/4b85aee63d.jpg ok changed
7. 01:29:353 (3) - Volume down is not here, but 01:29:603 here. and add deceleration here is suitable. moved all green line on every diff, and about the deceleration I think its ok like this, because accelerating it too is also suitable, so I prefer a constant one rather than making them decel or accel

LIAR

1. Overall, NC seems strange. If you want please tell me 1:1 pm. I can assist NC pattern.
2. 00:12:862 (1) - Same as Hard. same
3. 00:24:215 (6) - I'm confident this is over-mapping. how about to erase this note? 00:19:549 (5) - this is okay. followed vocals well. deleted on previous mod
4. 01:01:269 (5,6) - Rhythm is a little strange. I recommend this. http://puu.sh/czKcq/1b9fd3c317.jpg changed
5. 01:04:019 - Add 1 circle? ok, and changed pattern too for easy play
6. 01:17:436 (4,5,1) - Just I want to say it seems most notes are followed vocal. so I recommend this rhythm. http://puu.sh/czKoc/3213b790a2.jpg this one its ok as it is
7. 01:29:353 (4) - Same as Hard. same

The difficulty's arrangement is so nice. Good luck thanks for mod!

pishifat wrote:

not really sure why 00:19:493 (4) - is on the 1/3 tick

Setsurei wrote:

00:19:493 (4) - if I put it on the red tick, the sound is too early

Natsu wrote:

00:19:437 (4,5,6) - this should be snapped in 1/4

Setsurei wrote:

00:19:437 (4,5,6) - snapped to 1/4 and fix distance too

pishifat wrote:

pishifat wrote:

not really sure why 00:19:493 (4) - is on the 1/3 tick

Setsurei wrote:

00:19:493 (4) - if I put it on the red tick, the sound is too early

Natsu wrote:

00:19:437 (4,5,6) - this should be snapped in 1/4

Setsurei wrote:

00:19:437 (4,5,6) - snapped to 1/4 and fix distance too

maybe i should start typing in pink. it seems more effective

1. looking for metadata, I found this: http://www.mayamarika.com/artist/mayama ... /DFCL-2098
2. Liar Mask anime size

1. 00:19:437 (4,5,6) - use a repeat slider instead? since I'm not a fan of having 1/6 and 1/4 beats at the same section, mainly cuz is really confused to play

1. 00:23:493 this one should be snapped in 00:23:437 like you did on liar, also make more sense with the music, the vocal is not really clear at this part tho, so is better if you follow the instruments
2. 00:30:271 - after some testing and opinions, this slider is really hard to read for a hard diff, mmm try 0.50 sv? the one at insane is fine, but this one is a combo breaker tho

1. 00:13:862 will be nice if you reduce volume at spinner end

• 1. Liar Mask
  2. 蜃気楼
  3. Liar Mask anime size
  4. Liar Mask instrumental

1. changed the LIAR diff to Liar because it was before caps-ed title, back to normal
2. removed TV Size from tags