SHOKUBAI PHANTOM GIRL feat. Megpoid GUMI - KININARU AITSU-WA · forum

Celizavia

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Celizavia 2014-07-06T10:13:51+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, November 07, 2014 at 2:42:38 PM

Artist: SHOKUBAI PHANTOM GIRL feat. Megpoid GUMI
Title: KININARU AITSU-WA KAIZYU SHONEN
Tags: vocaloid My Crush Was a Monster Boy Rock Minao verlaren luxodeh
BPM: 184.73
Filesize: 5514kb
Play Time: 02:05
Difficulties Available:

Easy (1.36 stars, 84 notes)
Luxo's Insane (4.58 stars, 439 notes)
Minao's Easy (1.52 stars, 131 notes)
Normal (1.56 stars, 130 notes)
Verlaren's Hard (3.31 stars, 311 notes)

Download: SHOKUBAI PHANTOM GIRL feat. Megpoid GUMI - KININARU AITSU-WA KAIZYU SHONEN
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Easy by Me
Minao's Easy by Minao
Normal by Me
Verlaren's Hard by Verlaren
Luxo's Insane By Luxodeh

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Last edited by Celizavia 2014-11-07T07:43:23+00:00, edited 28 times in total.

Ciyus Miapah

3,028 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2014-07-10T01:06:05+00:00

quickmod™ by fortune cookies!

it just a timing mod you have requested
the right timing is:
BPM → 184.732
Offset → 978

and something again, you should remap this map again, from inherited timing to Notes. sorry for that

Hitorikko

301 posts

Joined August 2013

Hitorikko 2014-07-20T06:39:24+00:00

Normal

01:56:605 (3) - Object too far from previous object ( Aimod really helps )
00:40:602 (2,3) - this two are really close. Maybe move 00:40:602 (2) to x:40 y:288
00:56:842 (3) - offmap
00:59:441 (3) - ^
01:46:211 (3) - overlap
02:03:100 (1) - spinner ends here 02:05:374

hope that will help.. Good luck !

Minao

219 posts

Joined November 2013

Minao 2014-07-28T07:20:20+00:00

Hi!
Easy GD accepted

It's fun because I listened this song some days ago while searching randomly for vocaloids songs

Kyouren

5,657 posts

Joined October 2012

Kyouren 2014-07-31T03:55:25+00:00

Hai~

Artist: SHOKUBAI PHANTOM GIRL (not Megpoid GUMI)
Tittle (Use Romaji): 気になるあいつは怪獣少年 (Short Ver.)
Tittle: Ki ni Naru Aitsu wa Kaijuu Shounen (Short Ver.)
Add in tags: My Crush Was a Monster Boy Rock Megpoid GUMI

Sorry, i forget: Delete Vocaloid in Source

Minao

219 posts

Joined November 2013

Minao 2014-07-31T06:33:42+00:00

H!!
Here is the Easy diff: http://puu.sh/ayubP/07cf20c52c.rar
I made the changes proposed by Gokugohan.
I hope you'll like it!

Celizavia

568 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Celizavia 2014-07-31T13:35:29+00:00

fixed all mods

waiting for insane GD and 1 more Hard GD

Kyouren

5,657 posts

Joined October 2012

Kyouren 2014-07-31T14:04:04+00:00

Call me if you map is pending~

Verlaren

Verlaren 2014-08-16T22:00:20+00:00

Hi, sorry for so looong delay. I did have a little time due to business trip.

GD diff ---> https://puu.sh/aVpyM/da72b1ad34.zip

If you do not like, you can just throw "it".

Ringating

717 posts

Joined August 2013

Ringating 2014-08-17T03:27:36+00:00

from my queue:

i did your mod a bit ago and kept putting off posting it for some reason (i'm lazy :/). anyway, I extended your image to the right and left by mirroring the image at those spots so that 16:9 players don't get unnecessary upscaling. 4:3 players won't see the mirrored bits. Here is the new bg:

image

png because losslessly compressed png ended up being smaller than max quality jpg:

no kudosu

zhengyuanhang

58 posts

Joined February 2013

zhengyuanhang 2014-08-18T10:59:25+00:00

From queue

General
1. This song is 4/4, not 3/4. Fix it in Easy, Normal and Luxo's Insane diff.

Easy
1. 00:04:875 (6,1) - Too far
00:42:226 (4,1) - ^
2. 00:26:636 (4,1) - Stack better
3. 00:31:508 (5,1) - Too close
01:53:356 (2,3) - ^
01:58:878 (2,3) - ^
4. 00:50:346 (1,1) - Do not place notes so close after spinner
01:42:313 (1,1) - ^

Normal
1. Your DSs in this song are just a mess. Please adjust the DSs to make them almost equal.
2. 01:42:313 (1,1) - Do not place notes so close after spinner

Verlaren's Hard
1. Change AR into 8.

Minao

219 posts

Joined November 2013

Minao 2014-08-18T11:39:54+00:00

Hi!
Minao's Easy changes, as requested

http://puu.sh/aXwqp/4fa3aade4f.rar

Celizavia

568 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Celizavia 2014-08-18T15:30:24+00:00

zhengyuanhang wrote:
From queue

General
1. This song is 4/4, not 3/4. Fix it in Easy, Normal and Luxo's Insane diff. okay
Easy
1. 00:04:875 (6,1) - Too far
00:42:226 (4,1) - ^
2. 00:26:636 (4,1) - Stack better
3. 00:31:508 (5,1) - Too close
01:53:356 (2,3) - ^
01:58:878 (2,3) - ^
4. 00:50:346 (1,1) - Do not place notes so close after spinner
01:42:313 (1,1) - ^
remap this diff
Normal
1. Your DSs in this song are just a mess. Please adjust the DSs to make them almost equal. i don't make any changes in The DS, i think thats equal
2. 01:42:313 (1,1) - Do not place notes so close after spinner okay

Minao wrote:
Hi!
Minao's Easy changes, as requested
http://puu.sh/aXwqp/4fa3aade4f.rar

Thanks! Will update it later
for modders, please hold up your mod first please

Tician

215 posts

Joined March 2013

Tician 2014-08-18T16:35:33+00:00

General

- Maybe change the combo colour 2 to something a little brighter so it`s more different to the combo 3 (btw nice colours, appropriate to the background!)

Easy

- Sliders are too fast set them to 1,00 or less

00:00:978 (1) - stop slider at 00:01:627
00:02:114 (2) - stop slider at 00:02:926
00:03:901 (4) - move it, it's irritating for beginners when circles overlap each other
00:08:773 (5) - maybe set the reverse arrow 00:09:909 or 00:10:072 i am not sure, i think its both OK
(or if you dont want to keep it that long make an edge and delete the arrow^^)

00:24:363 (1) - end it 00:24:688 or 00:25:012
00:26:636 (4,1) - dont overlap in easy diff =)
00:30:534 (4) - maybe start it 00:30:859 (and shorten it to the half) and keep the gap?
00:53:920 (4) - move it to (beginning) 00:30:859 place a circle on 00:53:919 instead and move
00:31:508 (5) to 00:31:833 (or delete it and keep the gap)
00:53:920 (4) - ^ nearly same thing start with 4 circles
01:11:133 (1) - same as 00:08:773 (5)
01:45:887 (4) - same as 00:53:920 (4) and 00:53:920 (4)

Miano's Easy

00:54:244 (3) - Let it reverse one more time
01:09:834 (3) - ^same
01:38:416 (4) - ^same
01:28:347 - move it to another point its overlapping this one 01:29:322 (1) and can confuse new players
01:44:912 (1) - length it to 01:45:886 and move 01:45:886 (2) to 01:46:211 and 01:46:861 (3) to 01:47:185
01:50:109 (1) - Let it reverse on more time and move 01:51:083 (2) to 01:51:408 and 01:52:057 (3) to 01:52:382
02:00:827 (2) - Let it reverse one time and move 02:01:476 (3) to 02:01:801 and 02:02:451 (4) to 02:02:776
02:04:075 (1) - change it with this one 02:05:049 (2) so you have 4 circles in a row

Done! Pretty like that song and the maps =)

Minao

219 posts

Joined November 2013

Minao 2014-08-21T15:49:30+00:00

Tician wrote:
[Miano's Easy]
00:54:244 (3) - Let it reverse one more time Nope because it doesn't fit with the voice
01:09:834 (3) - ^same ^
01:38:416 (4) - ^same ^
01:28:347 - move it to another point its overlapping this one 01:29:322 (1) and can confuse new players I know it but I really like how it is now T^T I don't change for now but if I get more comments about it I'll change it
01:44:912 (1) - length it to 01:45:886 and move 01:45:886 (2) to 01:46:211 and 01:46:861 (3) to 01:47:185 Nope because I try to fit with the voice and this proposition doesn't.
01:50:109 (1) - Let it reverse on more time and move 01:51:083 (2) to 01:51:408 and 01:52:057 (3) to 01:52:382 No for the same reasons
02:00:827 (2) - Let it reverse one time and move 02:01:476 (3) to 02:01:801 and 02:02:451 (4) to 02:02:776 ^
02:04:075 (1) - change it with this one 02:05:049 (2) so you have 4 circles in a row Sorry but I don't like when there is too many circles in a row, I think 3 is fine for an Easy

Done! Pretty like that song and the maps =)
Sorry for changing nothing. I don't get why you suggested to add reverse sliders wihtout rhythmical reasons. Maybe you thought it would make a better flow, but I don't think so... Thank you anyway!!

Tician

215 posts

Joined March 2013

Tician 2014-08-22T23:30:42+00:00

How about the other Easy one? I am sry I am just beginner in modding

No Kudosu?

I tried my best and I am always looking for feedback to my modding-way - so thank you for that feedback =)

Ringating

717 posts

Joined August 2013

Ringating 2014-08-23T01:55:23+00:00

Tician wrote:
How about the other Easy one? [ . . . ] No Kudosu?

The main mapper seems to be busy, and mappers of guest diffs can't give you kudosu. so that would explain the lack of response on the other diffs and your lack of kudosu

Minao

219 posts

Joined November 2013

Minao 2014-08-23T08:02:11+00:00

Tician wrote:
How about the other Easy one? I am sry I am just beginner in modding No Kudosu?

I tried my best and I am always looking for feedback to my modding-way - so thank you for that feedback =)

Yeah as Ringating said, Celizavia is probably busy and I can't give you anything, but when he/she will come back you will have your kodosu, don't worry!

Celizavia

568 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Celizavia 2014-08-24T16:54:43+00:00

Tician wrote:
How about the other Easy one? I am sry I am just beginner in modding No Kudosu?

I tried my best and I am always looking for feedback to my modding-way - so thank you for that feedback =)

Thanks for the mod btw, i kinda remap the easy diff so yeah

Minao wrote:
Yeah as Ringating said, Celizavia is probably busy and I can't give you anything, but when he/she will come back you will have your kodosu, don't worry!

Sorry for late update on the mod. Btw im a girl lol

Skyhmer

372 posts

Joined November 2013

Skyhmer 2014-08-27T23:17:56+00:00

Normal (Did you use 1/6 divisors? If so, you might wanna ask around if that's even allowed on normal, I dont think so.)
------------------------------------

Go to 1/2 division and pretty much extend every slider to the next white ticks, adjust patterns as necessary.

Please

00:03:576 (1) - Extend #1 until it ends at 00:04:875

00:05:037 (2) - Replace with circle at 00:05:200 -

pm me if you think this needs further modding
Verlaren's Hard
------------------------------------

00:22:414 (4,5) - Would move #5 closer to #6 Like This.

01:43:450 (1) - Make this spinner only last till 01:44:587

Verlaren

Verlaren 2014-08-29T14:43:58+00:00

Gleipnirx11 wrote:
Verlaren's Hard
------------------------------------

00:22:414 (4,5) - Would move #5 closer to #6 Like This. - sry, no, because so 00:22:739 (5) will orerlap 00:23:713 (5)

01:43:450 (1) - Make this spinner only last till 01:44:587 - fixed

Thank You for mod.

Changes

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Gumi - My Crush Was A Monster Boy short version.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 52620
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.8
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
SkinPreference:User
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 21764,42551,58054,84125,89322,91920,94518,125374
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 0.9

[Metadata]
Title:Ki ni Naru Aitsu wa Kaijuu Shounen (Short Ver.)
TitleUnicode:気になるあいつは怪獣少年 (Short Ver.)
Artist:SHOKUBAI PHANTOM GIRL feat. Megpoid Gumi
ArtistUnicode:SHOKUBAI PHANTOM GIRL feat. Megpoid Gumi
Creator:Celizavia
Version:Verlaren's Hard
Source:
Tags:vocaloid My Crush Was a Monster Boy Rock Minao verlaren luxodeh
BeatmapID:481427
BeatmapSetID:190428

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.60000000596046
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"just rename it.png",0,0
//Break Periods
2,11245,20864
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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10884,-100,4,1,1,35,0,0
11209,-100,4,1,1,45,0,0
52945,-100,4,1,1,70,0,1
73407,-100,4,1,1,55,0,0
104912,-100,4,1,1,70,0,1
124075,-100,4,1,1,35,0,0
125374,-100,4,1,1,10,0,0


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Combo2 : 128,128,128
Combo3 : 255,128,128
Combo4 : 242,24,57

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Celizavia

568 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Celizavia 2014-08-30T14:58:34+00:00

Updated, need new mods miaw (=ﾟωﾟ)ﾉ

SoGa

236 posts

Joined June 2013

SoGa 2014-08-31T05:09:48+00:00

Hi Celizavia^^ ~ From a nooby Modder SoGa's Modding Queue

[General]

Why is ez and nm have no Hitsound.
Sry for my poor english
Set AudioLeadin to 2000ms
Minao's Easy

00:11:371 (1) - Finish
[Easy]

00:02:114 (2) - Better change this one.
00:10:721 (2) - Clap or Finish
00:43:850 (2) - Blanket it ?
00:54:244 (2) - Try this ?
Iyaa
00:52:945 (1) - Blanket it ?Even tho ur following ds
01:31:595 (1) - Separate it a little bit from spinner And add Clap
02:02:776 (1) - Delete
[Normal]

00:00:978 Maybe the sampleset u can use Soft but up to u
00:03:576 (1) - Not recommend
00:10:721 (2) - Clap or Finish ?
00:29:235 (4) - Move it to X:192 Y:72 ?
00:30:859 (3) - Try this ?
Iyaa
00:39:953 (1) - This ? or something , better not overlap there ,is not beuty !
Iyaa
00:53:594 (2) - ^
00:44:825 (4) - X:344 Y:240
01:49:784 (3) - X:424 Y:104

Sry for this poor Mod ._.
GL~~

kakifly

940 posts

Joined April 2014

kakifly 2014-09-01T00:45:00+00:00

m4m !

Minao's Easy

- i suggest stack head of 00:19:166 (4) - onto head of 00:16:568 (1) - , remember to modify the shape so it still blankets afterwards
- 00:24:363 (1) - the end of this slider shouldnt have the clap hitsound since im asuming you are putting a clap on every 5th beat?
- 00:28:260 (3) - move this down; it overlaps the health bar
- 00:29:559 (1) - remove clap on repeat, same reason as above
- 00:34:756 (5) - remove clap on tail ^^^^
- 00:36:055 (6,7) - i think you'll know what to do ^^^^
- 00:52:295 (5) - move down; it overlaps with the slider
- 01:12:432 for the break i suggest you start the actual break at 01:13:732 like this

SPOILER

- 01:24:125 (1) - starting here the notes get a lot more dense; perhaps you could leave some notes 1/1 beat apart ?
- 01:48:160 (2,3) - make these into 1 slider so its easier to play for a beginner

SPOILER

- 02:04:075 (1,2) - either remove these or lower the hitsound a lot on these since there is no instrumentals; just vocals

Easy

- 00:06:174 (1,2) - make these into a 4 beat slider instead?

SPOILER

- 00:07:473 (2,3) - can be a 1/1 beat slider since the sounds on 00:08:123 (4,5) - are much more loudif you listen carefully
- 00:23:064 (2,1) - this overlap IMO doesnt look good
- 00:33:457 (3,4) - same as my second suggestion
- 00:42:551 (1,2) - how about having it like this for better flow?

SPOILER

make adjustments to the next few notes if you do this
- 00:51:645 (3,1) - i would just prefer these like this since the spacing is to little for a nice looking blanket having a niceflow would look much better IMO

SPOILER

again; adjustments are needed for the next few notes if you do this
- 01:00:740 (1,2,3) - make sure the Y axis line up on these ( y:113) so they look more organized

SPOILER

- 01:08:535 (1,2) - same as second suggestion
- 01:13:082 about the break; same thing as minao's easy
- 01:26:399 (4,1) - have like this for better flow

SPOILER

- 01:29:322 (1) - shorten by half a beat or 1 beat since personally i find a note right after the spinner being difficult when i was first starting out on osu
- 01:31:595 (1) - maybe move it to x180 y184 for better flow and less overlapping
- 01:44:912 (1) - move to x380 y116 for better flow, also i personally dislike the overlapping of 01:46:211 (2) -
- 01:56:604 (3,4,1) - please improve the flow here xD
- 02:00:503 (1,2) - same as second suggestion
- 02:02:776 (1) - ???????? sorry but where this is placed is so random xD move it somewhere near x436 y48 also take off NC because 02:01:802 (5) - is NC
- 02:03:100 (1) - end it where the vocal ends which is at 02:05:049

Normal

- Lower OD by 1
- 00:05:037 (2) - the actually guitar ends at 00:05:281 (blue tick) so i suggest following the beat here with a circle on 00:05:200
- 00:28:260 (3) - distance snap this note (and many others; check through aimod) adjust the next few notes
- 00:32:158 (1,2) - blanket
- 00:39:628 (5) - move to x216 y108 for better flow and no overlapping
- 00:39:953 (1,2) - blanket? i mean you did blanket with 00:40:927 (3,4) - so idk why not here
- 00:42:551 (1,3) - please line these up on the y aixs so they are completely symmetrical
- 00:43:850 (3,4,1) - flow and arrangement is awkward here i suggest something like this

SPOILER

- 00:47:748 (1) - prevent overlap if possible; move the slider head
- 00:53:594 (2) - prevent overlap
- 00:53:919 (3,4) - DS these notes!!
- 00:59:441 (3,4) - ^
- 01:00:740 (1) - this is almost unrankable you are taking a risk xD according to the criteria the first repeat in a repeat slider has to be completely visible so i highly suggest you change the shape of this slider
- 01:03:338 (1) - avoid overlap again
- 01:05:612 (4) - stack on tail of 2 slider
- 01:05:612 (4,1,2,3) - DS these notes!! please watch your spacing and make sure it is consistent throughout the song
- 01:08:535 (1,2) - ^
- 01:24:125 (1,2) - fix blanket
- 01:29:322 (1) - the thing with the spinner i mentioned previously again xD
- 01:34:518 (1,2,3,4,5) - may i suggest this rhythm since the current one is a bit hard and overmapped

SPOILER

- 01:42:313 (1) - spinner thing again...
- 01:49:784 (3,1) - spacing!!
- 01:52:383 (4,1) - blanket better
- 02:03:100 (1) - same thing as easy

well hope that helped and good luck !

Melophobia

osu! Alumni

2,230 posts

Joined September 2011

Melophobia 2014-09-01T23:45:37+00:00

No kds!

According to the music video on niconico the title is KININARU AITSU-WA KAIZYU SHONEN. And you don't need (Short Ver.) if you've cut the song youself.

Minao

219 posts

Joined November 2013

Minao 2014-09-02T10:16:11+00:00

SoGa wrote:
Minao's Easy

[list]
00:11:371 (1) - Finish No because there is already a finish hitsound on the previous object, so I don't think it's needed.

Thank you!

kakifly wrote:
m4m !

Minao's Easy

- i suggest stack head of 00:19:166 (4) - onto head of 00:16:568 (1) - , remember to modify the shape so it still blankets afterwards Good idea
- 00:24:363 (1) - the end of this slider shouldnt have the clap hitsound since im asuming you are putting a clap on every 5th beat? Changed. I don't know if I put a clap on every 5th beat, I place hitsounds with my own feeling ^^"
- 00:28:260 (3) - move this down; it overlaps the health bar I think it depends on what skin the player is using but you're right. I moved it down as much as I can without breaking the pattern
- 00:29:559 (1) - remove clap on repeat, same reason as above Done
- 00:34:756 (5) - remove clap on tail ^^^^ Done
- 00:36:055 (6,7) - i think you'll know what to do ^^^^ Done
- 00:52:295 (5) - move down; it overlaps with the slider Done
- 01:12:432 for the break i suggest you start the actual break at 01:13:732 like this I changed it but I used Notepad. I don't know if it's possible to do it in the editor mode and how @.@"
- 01:24:125 (1) - starting here the notes get a lot more dense; perhaps you could leave some notes 1/1 beat apart ? I deleted one note
- 01:48:160 (2,3) - make these into 1 slider so its easier to play for a beginner I didn't fuse them into one slider but I simplified this part
- 02:04:075 (1,2) - either remove these or lower the hitsound a lot on these since there is no instrumentals; just vocals Lowered the hitsounds to 35%

Thank you a lot! very helpful and good mod!

To Celizavia -> my diff

http://puu.sh/biagq/0d397cba0b.rar

The Girls

128 posts

Joined August 2013

The Girls 2014-09-04T20:57:56+00:00

Hi Nana~ from Nana's Mod Queue

[Minao's Easy]

Your background picture is different for this map compared to others.
Easy is below 1.50 stars. Your difficulty is above that. Tone down by removing some red-tick circles.

[Easy]

Again. Needs to be below 1.50 stars.
AIMod: Audio lead is inconsistent with that of Normal.
00:02:114 (2) - Blanket around (1).
00:24:363 (1) - Overlay hiding not recommended for Easy.
00:34:756 (1) - Close up star.
00:43:850 (2) - Ugly overlay. Consider blanketing or moving (2) down.
00:45:150 (1) - Inconsistent DS
01:33:219 (4) - This needs to go. Its not unique or pretty when you overlay it under hit circles like that.
01:41:014 (2) - Make parallel
Overall it feels very free-handed...and doesn't feel very well manicured. Like you sort of just mapped the next beat within the range of the previous with very little scoop.

[Normal]

00:08:773 (1) - DS. Must be uniform of Normal.
00:28:179 (3) - Blanket around (2)
00:37:355 (1, 2, 3) - Try windmill. like this
SPOILER
00:39:953 (1) - Blanket on (2)
00:44:825 (4) - Find a better place for this. it looks really sloppy between two sliders where you blanket one but not the other.
00:52:945 (1) - Pull the slider upright more to avoid unnecessary overlay.
00:54:244 (4) - DS
01:00:090 (4) - Just rotate (3) and blanket around (2)
01:05:936 (1) - DS. Actually your entire DS paradigm is completely different after this point. Got to fix the next entire passage. Just turn on DS if you can't catch your own DS errors.
01:24:450 (2, 4) - No. Do you see how you have inconsistent DS here and as well blanketing to different widths.
01:38:416 (3) - Blanket.
01:46:211 (2) - Confusing overlay. Try this
SPOILER
01:50:109 (1) - DS
01:52:707 (1) - Blanket.

[Verlaren's Hard]

Audio Leadin error in AIMod
01:00:740 (1, 2, 3, 4) - Make into perfect pentagon.
01:26:723 (1, 2) - Why not place in center?
01:44:912 (1, 2, 3) - Blanket.
01:50:839 (3, 4) - Blanket.

[Insane]

00:02:520 (2) -There is no 1/4 note here
00:02:926 (4, 5) - Wrong length. Should end on red ticks.
Rest of it looks pretty good.

GL with your map.

Nozhomi

Global Moderator

4,569 posts

Joined May 2013

Nozhomi 2014-09-08T13:15:34+00:00

Hi~ from Strawberry Mousse Modding Queue.
Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why to improve my futur mods.
If you've any question, ask me in-game.

- General :

Audio-Lead-In conflict with Normal.
There is 2 PNG on the map folder. Use same BG for all diff and remove the bad PNG.
Disable Widescreen Support of all diff.

- Luxo's Insane :

00:11:371 - NC and remove it at 00:12:508 - .
00:14:619 (3,1) - Bad flow here. Try to move or rotate 00:14:619 (3) - .
00:45:637 (2,3) - Bad blanket.
01:35:818 (1,1) - Stack them, it will fix overlap for 01:37:279 (6,7,8,1) -, he not looks so good imo.
01:59:203 (2,3,4) - What do you think about this http://puu.sh/bqEpz/80d5a61bb8.jpg ?
02:00:989 (2,3,4,1) - Bad blanket.
02:02:288 (3,4,5) - I would move them to 184:104 for a better flow and look.

- Verlaren's Hard :

00:05:200 (5) - Your DS change a lot here for no real reason. And there is no logic too because you didn't use it for this part 00:08:773 - .
00:24:200 (6) - Looks like you follow the lyric, so remove this circle he is overmapped.
00:26:961 (5) - NC no ?
00:31:346 (3,4) - Bad blanket.
00:58:791 (3,5) - Overlap.
01:00:415 (6,1,2,3,4) - Make a perfect star here (tool Create polygon circles).
01:08:535 (1,2) - Improve blanket.
01:14:381 (3,4) - You didn't use the same spacing than 01:13:732 (1,2) - even if it's the same rhythm. Fix this for consistency of this map.
01:15:031 (5,7) - Overlap and bad blanket.
01:20:227 (5,6,5,6) - Same problem than 01:14:381 -.
01:34:518 - to 01:42:313 - Here you use 2 differents rhythm structure separated at 01:39:715 - , but when I listen music, it absolutly the same. Keep some consistency and follow a unique rhythm here for these parts.
01:50:271 (2,3,4) - Bad blanket.
01:50:758 (3,5) - Overlap.
01:52:382 (6,1,2,3,4) - Star pattern pls (like 01:00:415 - )
02:00:502 (1,2) - Improve blanket.

- Normal :

AR5 for diffspread (Verlaren's Hard AR7 / Normal AR5 / Minao's Easy AR3 / Easy AR1)
00:07:149 (3,4) - Overlap.
00:08:773 - This rhythm sounds bad when I listen it. I suggest this one http://puu.sh/bqEr6/efee8e706c.jpg.
00:23:064 (3,1,2) - To improve flow here, I suggest this http://puu.sh/bqEsp/4000fde078.jpg.
00:27:611 (2,3) - Bad blanket.
00:30:534 (2,1) - Blanket maybe ?
00:33:457 (3) - To improve flow move it to 192:332.
00:34:107 (5) - Need confirmation but I think the end of slider is out of playfield.
00:35:731 (2) - Move it to 196:84.
00:38:654 (3,5) - Overlap.
00:40:927 (3,4) - Bad blanket.
00:43:850 (3,1) - Little overlap.
00:46:449 (3,1) - Overlap.
00:48:722 (2,3) - Improve blanket.
00:52:945 (1,2) - Overlap.
00:53:919 (3,4) - Bad DS !
01:24:125 (1,2) - Bad DS (for consistency) and blanket.
01:26:074 (5,1) - Bad DS (0.96x instead of 0.8x).
01:52:707 (1,2) - Bad DS.
00:57:817 (4,1) - Blanket.
01:00:740 (1) - Unrankable slider. The reverse arrow is hidden by slider start.
01:00:740 (1,1) - Overlap.
01:05:612 (4,1,2,3,4) - Bad DS ! Keep 0.8x.
01:11:133 (1,2) - Blanket.
01:24:125 (1,2) - ^
01:25:099 (3,4) - ^
01:35:818 (5,2) - Overlap.
01:37:767 (2,3) - Blanket.
01:47:185 (4,1) - ^
01:49:784 (3,1) - Bad DS !
01:52:383 (4,1) - Blanket.
01:52:707 (1,2) - Bad DS !
01:54:980 (4,1) - Blanket this.

- Minao's Esay

AR 3 for diffspread (see Normal for explanation).
Use same stack leniency than other diff pls.
00:34:756 - NC.
02:04:075 - Use soft hitsound it fit more with music.
02:05:049 (2) - Remove finish.

- Easy :

00:08:773 (1) - Make it end at 00:10:072 - , sounds better.
00:23:064 (2,1) - This overlap looks bad imo.
00:42:551 (1,2) - Overlap.
01:33:219 (4,1) - Overlap.
01:47:510 (3) - Improve blanket like this http://puu.sh/bqEtb/b65d6f505d.jpg (anchor point 1 -> 295:320 / anchor point 1 -> 358:344 / slider end -> 409:304).
01:50:433 (2,3) - Overlap, also wtf happend with anchor point for 01:50:433 (2) - ? You can do the same like this http://puu.sh/bqEv1/bd045383db.jpg.
01:55:305 (1,3) - ^
02:02:776 (1) - Don't hide a circle by a slider on an Easy diff !

Normal and Easy diff have a lack of construction. Work on this point.
Good luck Mukyu~

Celizavia

568 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Celizavia 2014-09-09T14:36:57+00:00

thanks for the mods, for upcoming modders please halt the mod first since im was kinda busy and cant update it in a quick time.

Minao

219 posts

Joined November 2013

Minao 2014-09-11T19:45:30+00:00

The Girls wrote:
[Minao's Easy]
Your background picture is different for this map compared to others. I think Celizavia already changed because it's fixed for me now
Easy is below 1.50 stars. Your difficulty is above that. Tone down by removing some red-tick circles. I don't think 0.02 point is that important... I'll change it if I get other comments about it.

Thank you!

Nozhomi wrote:
- Minao's Esay Youpi un français! \o/
AR 3 for diffspread (see Normal for explanation). Ouip
Use same stack leniency than other diff pls. Ça change quelques endroits mais si j'ai pas le choix c'est ok u.u"
00:34:756 - NC. Ok
02:04:075 - Use soft hitsound it fit more with music. Oui
02:05:049 (2) - Remove finish. okay

Merci pour le mod!

My diff

http://puu.sh/bv1l9/f68229fc90.rar

luxoDeh

1,497 posts

Joined February 2012

luxoDeh 2014-09-12T12:13:01+00:00

The Girls wrote:
00:02:520 (2) -There is no 1/4 note here no, it's ok
00:02:926 (4, 5) - Wrong length. Should end on red ticks. ^
Rest of it looks pretty good.
GL with your map.

[notice]- General :

Audio-Lead-In conflict with Normal.
There is 2 PNG on the map folder. Use same BG for all diff and remove the bad PNG.
Disable Widescreen Support of all diff.

- Luxo's Insane :

00:11:371 - NC and remove it at 00:12:508 - .
00:14:619 (3,1) - Bad flow here. Try to move or rotate 00:14:619 (3) - .
00:45:637 (2,3) - Bad blanket.
01:35:818 (1,1) - Stack them, it will fix overlap for 01:37:279 (6,7,8,1) -, he not looks so good imo. not fixed here
01:59:203 (2,3,4) - What do you think about this http://puu.sh/bqEpz/80d5a61bb8.jpg ?
02:00:989 (2,3,4,1) - Bad blanket.
02:02:288 (3,4,5) - I would move them to 184:104 for a better flow and look.

[/quote]

the rest is fixed.
here's the code

code

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Gumi - My Crush Was A Monster Boy short version.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 52620
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.8
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
SkinPreference:User
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 58054
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1.6

[Metadata]
Title:KININARU AITSU-WA KAIZYU SHONEN
TitleUnicode:気になるあいつは怪獣少年
Artist:SHOKUBAI PHANTOM GIRL feat. Megpoid Gumi
ArtistUnicode:SHOKUBAI PHANTOM GIRL feat. Megpoid Gumi
Creator:Celizavia
Version:Luxo's Insane
Source:
Tags:vocaloid My Crush Was a Monster Boy Rock Minao verlaren luxodeh
BeatmapID:481426
BeatmapSetID:190428

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.60000000596046
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"just rename it.png",0,0
//Break Periods
2,73932,83525
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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52945,-100,3,1,0,55,0,1
60902,-100,3,1,0,55,0,1
63013,-100,3,1,0,55,0,1
73407,-100,3,1,0,35,0,0
89240,-100,3,1,0,15,0,0
91270,-100,3,1,0,55,0,0
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104912,-100,3,1,0,65,0,1
115305,-83.3333333333333,3,1,0,65,0,1
124075,-100,3,1,0,15,0,0


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Combo1 : 69,50,60
Combo2 : 128,128,128
Combo3 : 255,128,128
Combo4 : 242,24,57

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Verlaren

Verlaren 2014-09-13T13:12:54+00:00

The Girls

Audio Leadin error in AIMod -
01:00:740 (1, 2, 3, 4) - Make into perfect pentagon.
01:26:723 (1, 2) - Why not place in center?
01:44:912 (1, 2, 3) - Blanket.
01:50:839 (3, 4) - Blanket.

Nozhomi

00:05:200 (5) - Your DS change a lot here for no real reason. And there is no logic too because you didn't use it for this part 00:08:773 - .
00:24:200 (6) - Looks like you follow the lyric, so remove this circle he is overmapped.
00:26:961 (5) - NC no ?
00:31:346 (3,4) - Bad blanket.
00:58:791 (3,5) - Overlap.
01:00:415 (6,1,2,3,4) - Make a perfect star here (tool Create polygon circles).
01:08:535 (1,2) - Improve blanket.
01:14:381 (3,4) - You didn't use the same spacing than 01:13:732 (1,2) - even if it's the same rhythm. Fix this for consistency of this map.
01:15:031 (5,7) - Overlap and bad blanket.
01:20:227 (5,6,5,6) - Same problem than 01:14:381 -.
01:34:518 - to 01:42:313 - Here you use 2 differents rhythm structure separated at 01:39:715 - , but when I listen music, it absolutly the same. Keep some consistency and follow a unique rhythm here for these parts.
01:50:271 (2,3,4) - Bad blanket.
01:50:758 (3,5) - Overlap.
01:52:382 (6,1,2,3,4) - Star pattern pls (like 01:00:415 - )
02:00:502 (1,2) - Improve blanket.

Some all fixed, thanks for modding.

update

osu file format v13

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AudioFilename: Gumi - My Crush Was A Monster Boy short version.mp3
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LetterboxInBreaks: 1
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Title:KININARU AITSU-WA KAIZYU SHONEN
TitleUnicode:気になるあいつは怪獣少年
Artist:SHOKUBAI PHANTOM GIRL feat. Megpoid Gumi
ArtistUnicode:SHOKUBAI PHANTOM GIRL feat. Megpoid Gumi
Creator:Celizavia
Version:Verlaren's Hard
Source:
Tags:vocaloid My Crush Was a Monster Boy Rock Minao verlaren luxodeh
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naoe dami

365 posts

Joined April 2012

naoe dami 2014-09-15T04:10:42+00:00

from my queue

click click

[Minao's Easy]
why not CS 3 or CS 2?

[Normal]
00:00:978 (1) - rotate the head clockwise
00:04:550 (2) - better like this

00:05:525 (4) - stack with 00:04:550 (2)
00:06:174 (1) - mirror it
00:08:773 (4,5,6) - blanket
00:26:311 (4,5,6) - better to make it become slider
00:27:935 (3) - try to same as 00:26:961 (1)
00:29:559 (1,2) - blanket
00:37:030 (4,1) - too far spacing for normal
01:07:885 (6,1) - avoid stack
01:10:808 (5) - x:304 y:200
01:24:125 (1,2) - blanket
01:31:920 (1,2,3) - fix the parallel
01:37:929 (2) -

01:50:759 (3) - stack the tail with 01:51:733 (5) -
01:57:254 (3,4) - fix the spacing

Sorry, I can't mod another diffs cuz I'm really busy with my campus activity, good luck with your map \ :3 /

Celizavia

568 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Celizavia 2014-09-15T11:00:21+00:00

naoe dami wrote:
from my queue

[Normal]
00:00:978 (1) - rotate the head clockwise
00:04:550 (2) - better like this

00:05:525 (4) - stack with 00:04:550 (2)
00:06:174 (1) - mirror it
00:08:773 (4,5,6) - blanket
00:26:311 (4,5,6) - better to make it become slider nope, prefer this triplets
00:27:935 (3) - try to same as 00:26:961 (1) fixed
00:29:559 (1,2) - blanket no, weird blankets
00:37:030 (4,1) - too far spacing for normal [/color]
01:07:885 (6,1) - avoid stack ^
01:10:808 (5) - x:304 y:200
01:24:125 (1,2) - blanket
01:31:920 (1,2,3) - fix the parallel
01:37:929 (2) - okay

01:50:759 (3) - stack the tail with 01:51:733 (5) -
01:57:254 (3,4) - fix the spacing

Sorry, I can't mod another diffs cuz I'm really busy with my campus activity, good luck with your map \ :3 /

Thanks for the mod.

EDIT: SOMEHOW MY EASY DIFF HAS GONE MISSING, PLEASE DON'T MOD FIRST UNTIL I GOT IT BACK (dunno how, maybe re-map again)

truonant

408 posts

Joined October 2013

truonant 2014-09-24T07:11:31+00:00

Hello~ from my Mod Queue
Sorry for short mod, been busy with uni. I only modded normal, but I played hard and lunatic and they play great.

In general, go back and make sure the distance is consistent because I noticed that some blankets are really close while some are quite far. For example: 01:09:184 (3) – VS 00:56:842 (3) –
00:03:576 (1) – perfect stack
00:05:525 (4) – blanket on slider tail of 00:04:875 (3) –
00:07:311 (2,4) – avoid overlap - Suggestion: http://puu.sh/bLHCU/9cc3145aba.jpg
00:32:158 (1) – distance
00:33:457 (2) – stack
00:37:355 (1) – avoid overlap
00:37:030 (4) – distance
00:47:748 (1) - blanket
00:52:945 - Quoting a QAT“too soon after a spinner for a Normal. It'll usually be halved recovery time from the Easy, so 2-3 beats would be preferable for this level of difficulty”
01:04:312 (2) – blanket
01:05:936 (4) - ^
01:07:885 (6) – angle like this for better flow and to fix overlap http://puu.sh/bLHSp/bb427accc7.jpg
01:09:834 (4) – don’t blanket the approach circle, blanket the slider in this case http://puu.sh/bLHX0/5815528c67.jpg 01:27:698 (2) - move to x396 y:128 for better flow
01:28:672 (3) – ctrl+g for better flow
01:29:322 (1) – use a different slider
01:31:595 (1) – NC
01:31:920 (2,3,4,1) – overlap
01:37:929 (2) – I would avoid using double repeat slider
01:39:715 (1) - distance
01:41:014 (3) – blanket
01:51:733 (5) – avoid overlap and do this http://puu.sh/bLIkE/040e24c3fe.jpg
01:52:707 (1) – Now you can stack head on slider tail of 01:50:759 (3) –
01:56:279 (2) – blanket
01:57:903 (4) – blanket
01:57:903 (4,5,6,1) - Better flow? http://puu.sh/bLInZ/be167147e2.jpg

good luck! here's a star

Gaia

2,808 posts

Joined May 2013

Gaia 2014-09-28T03:51:14+00:00

heyyya from my giving back queue~

why do u two time me like this ;w; jk xD

[Minao's Easy]
1 thing in your AIMod to fix~

well, i went through your map didnt find much, howeverrrrrr this diff has really awkward flow.. i.e.
00:02:277 (2,3,4) - 00:08:448 (3,4) - 00:10:397 (5,1) - 00:22:739 (2,3) - 00:27:935 (2,3) - 00:32:807 (2,3) - 00:41:577 (2,1,2) - 00:46:449 (4,5,1) - 00:50:346 (3,4) - 00:52:295 (5,1) - and im just gunna stop there..
it's okay for some small flow variations but those above dont flow really well and i think it could potentially be a major problem.
i do like your blanket patterns tho, nice

[Normal]
00:01:952 (3,1) - doesnt look good cuz u didnt stack it properly
00:04:875 (3,4) - double blanket?
00:07:311 (2,4) - overlap looks bad, 00:07:311 (2,3) - flows poorly too
00:10:721 (6) - dont stack these
00:24:038 (4) - 00:26:311 (4,5,6) - ^ really weird use of stacks imo
00:30:534 (2) - use 2 sliders instead
00:32:158 (1) - spacing.
00:37:355 (1) - does not flow well and looks bad.
00:41:902 (4) - doesnt flow well
00:43:850 (2) - the last anchor at the end is really unneccessary
00:47:748 (1) - blanket
00:50:346 (1) - weird use of spinner, and doesnt have enough space after it to be rankable anyways
00:59:765 (5) - dont overlap it looks bad
01:04:312 (2) - blanket
01:05:936 (4) - ^
01:07:885 (6) - point it down instead, flow better
01:09:834 (4) - blankett
01:11:133 (1) - another weird use of spinner
01:27:698 (2) - 01:28:672 (3) - bad flow
01:31:920 (1,2,3) - doenst look very good, avoid the overlapping.. something u might like? http://puu.sh/bQJKr/a2b8bd2085.jpg
01:34:518 (1) - doesnt look very good, if u followed ^ then this can be blanketed by 01:33:219 (3) - kinda
01:39:715 (1) - spacing and blanket are both wrong
01:37:117 (1,2) - change the rhythm of (2) to that of (1)'s
01:42:313 (1) - another odd spinner imo
01:51:733 (5) - overlap
01:54:656 (3) - open it up more it flows better http://puu.sh/bQJYg/95f998b45a.jpg
01:56:279 (2) - spacing and blanket both wrong
01:57:903 (4) - blanket
01:59:527 (5,6) - flow is bad, overlap is unappealing
02:03:100 (1) - really awkward as well.

i think u should go back and fix your blankets flow and spacing cuz i didnt point everything out

[Verlaren's Hard]
CS3 Hard? CS 4 or atleast CS3.5 please

00:04:713 (3,4,5) - uneven spacing
00:08:285 (7,8,9,1) - pretty challenging spacing for a hard.
00:36:055 (5) - use 2 sliders instead
00:38:654 (7) - u stacked the triple earlier so this antijump is unneccessary
00:40:927 (4) - another odd use of antijumps
01:03:338 (1) - (and after ) spacing
01:09:184 (2) - spacing.
01:23:475 (7) - no need for the 2nd reverse
01:55:305 (1) - dont overlap

a big issue here is your spacing. look at 01:08:535 (1,2) - 02:00:502 (1,2) - then look at 01:07:885 (7,8) - they're the same spacing yet they're spaced differently in the timeline.
i also think you have some really random use of antijumps.

Sorry I can't really mod Insane atm but from my quick glance it should be alright.

good luck and have fun!

Minao

219 posts

Joined November 2013

Minao 2014-09-28T14:54:32+00:00

Gaia wrote:
[Minao's Easy]
1 thing in your AIMod to fix~ I think AIMod is drunk for this time, because the object is well distance snapped...

well, i went through your map didnt find much, howeverrrrrr this diff has really awkward flow.. i.e.
00:02:277 (2,3,4) - 00:08:448 (3,4) - 00:10:397 (5,1) - 00:22:739 (2,3) - 00:27:935 (2,3) - 00:32:807 (2,3) - 00:41:577 (2,1,2) - 00:46:449 (4,5,1) - 00:50:346 (3,4) - 00:52:295 (5,1) - and im just gunna stop there..
it's okay for some small flow variations but those above dont flow really well and i think it could potentially be a major problem.
Well, it's difficult for me to make some changes to the patterns you indicated, because I don't think they are awkward: since I made them, I just think they are normal...
i do like your blanket patterns tho, nice Thanks!

Thanks for the mod, but no changes, because I don't know what to do XD

streeteelf

439 posts

Joined May 2013

streeteelf 2014-10-01T22:08:21+00:00

SEE's Modding Queue

Sry for delay, had my own work to do, but finally found some time.

[General]

-Kiai on big white ticks (beginning and ending).

[Minao's Easy]

-01:50:109 (1) - Don't place points out of play field.

-Maintain the same DS, not eg. 0.9 and later 1.2.

[Normal]

-00:30:534 (2) - Make this 2 circles and slider w/o reverse, it's better I think.
-00:37:030 (4,1) - Place them in different way.
-01:32:570 (2,3) - Don't cover reverse, even a little.

-Maintain the same DS.

[Verlaren's Hard]

-00:36:055 (5) - Try 1 reverse and circle, not 2 reverse arrows.
-01:00:253 - Parts like this - Circle
-You can use lower SV in slower parts, there are 2 for me: 00:42:551 - 00:45:150 and 01:29:322 - 01:31:595.

[Luxo's Insane]

-Nice map, but you can use lower SV in slower parts, there are 2 for me: 00:42:551 - 00:45:150 and 01:29:322 - 01:31:595.

Nice mapset, good luck~

Celizavia

568 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Celizavia 2014-10-04T09:43:51+00:00

got so busy since it was exam week, finally im back

truonant wrote:
Hello~ from my Mod Queue
Sorry for short mod, been busy with uni. I only modded normal, but I played hard and lunatic and they play great.

In general, go back and make sure the distance is consistent because I noticed that some blankets are really close while some are quite far. For example: 01:09:184 (3) – VS 00:56:842 (3) –
00:03:576 (1) – perfect stack
00:05:525 (4) – blanket on slider tail of 00:04:875 (3) –
00:07:311 (2,4) – avoid overlap - Suggestion: http://puu.sh/bLHCU/9cc3145aba.jpg code please?
00:32:158 (1) – distance
00:33:457 (2) – stack
00:37:355 (1) – avoid overlap
00:37:030 (4) – distance
00:47:748 (1) - blanket
00:52:945 - Quoting a QAT“too soon after a spinner for a Normal. It'll usually be halved recovery time from the Easy, so 2-3 beats would be preferable for this level of difficulty”
01:04:312 (2) – blanket
01:05:936 (4) - ^
01:07:885 (6) – angle like this for better flow and to fix overlap http://puu.sh/bLHSp/bb427accc7.jpg
01:09:834 (4) – don’t blanket the approach circle, blanket the slider in this case http://puu.sh/bLHX0/5815528c67.jpg 01:27:698 (2) - move to x396 y:128 for better flow
01:28:672 (3) – ctrl+g for better flow
01:29:322 (1) – use a different slider why? :3
01:31:595 (1) – NC
01:31:920 (2,3,4,1) – overlap
01:37:929 (2) – I would avoid using double repeat slider
01:39:715 (1) - distance
01:41:014 (3) – blanket
01:51:733 (5) – avoid overlap and do this http://puu.sh/bLIkE/040e24c3fe.jpg
01:52:707 (1) – Now you can stack head on slider tail of 01:50:759 (3) –
01:56:279 (2) – blanket
01:57:903 (4) – blanket
01:57:903 (4,5,6,1) - Better flow? http://puu.sh/bLInZ/be167147e2.jpg

good luck! here's a star

thanks, fixed anything else

Gaia wrote:
heyyya from my giving back queue~

why do u two time me like this ;w; jk xD XD

[Normal]
00:01:952 (3,1) - doesnt look good cuz u didnt stack it properly
00:04:875 (3,4) - double blanket? i'll keep this one
00:07:311 (2,4) - overlap looks bad, 00:07:311 (2,3) - flows poorly too
00:10:721 (6) - dont stack these
00:24:038 (4) - 00:26:311 (4,5,6) - ^ really weird use of stacks imo is quite common to see a triplet stack imo
00:30:534 (2) - use 2 sliders instead
00:32:158 (1) - spacing.
00:37:355 (1) - does not flow well and looks bad.
00:41:902 (4) - doesnt flow well
00:43:850 (2) - the last anchor at the end is really unneccessary
00:47:748 (1) - blanket
00:50:346 (1) - weird use of spinner, and doesnt have enough space after it to be rankable anyways
00:59:765 (5) - dont overlap it looks bad
01:04:312 (2) - blanket
01:05:936 (4) - ^
01:07:885 (6) - point it down instead, flow better
01:09:834 (4) - blankett
01:11:133 (1) - another weird use of spinner
01:27:698 (2) - 01:28:672 (3) - bad flow
01:31:920 (1,2,3) - doenst look very good, avoid the overlapping.. something u might like? http://puu.sh/bQJKr/a2b8bd2085.jpg
01:34:518 (1) - doesnt look very good, if u followed ^ then this can be blanketed by 01:33:219 (3) - kinda
01:39:715 (1) - spacing and blanket are both wrong
01:37:117 (1,2) - change the rhythm of (2) to that of (1)'s
01:42:313 (1) - another odd spinner imo
01:51:733 (5) - overlap
01:54:656 (3) - open it up more it flows better http://puu.sh/bQJYg/95f998b45a.jpg ~~need code please~~
01:56:279 (2) - spacing and blanket both wrong
01:57:903 (4) - blanket
01:59:527 (5,6) - flow is bad, overlap is unappealing
02:03:100 (1) - really awkward as well.

i think u should go back and fix your blankets flow and spacing cuz i didnt point everything out alright, thanks 4 the mod!

good luck and have fun!

streeteelf wrote:
SEE's Modding Queue

Sry for delay, had my own work to do, but finally found some time.

[General]

-Kiai on big white ticks (beginning and ending). not really, it is suppose at the right place right now

[Normal]

-00:30:534 (2) - Make this 2 circles and slider w/o reverse, it's better I think.
-00:37:030 (4,1) - Place them in different way.
-01:32:570 (2,3) - Don't cover reverse, even a little.

-Maintain the same DS.

Nice mapset, good luck~

thanks for the mod!

luxoDeh

1,497 posts

Joined February 2012

luxoDeh 2014-10-10T14:27:07+00:00

streeteelf wrote:
[Luxo's Insane]

-Nice map, but you can use lower SV in slower parts, there are 2 for me: 00:42:551 - 00:45:150 and 01:29:322 - 01:31:595.

Nice mapset, good luck~

sorry but not fixed.

Minao

219 posts

Joined November 2013

Minao 2014-10-12T11:46:37+00:00

Sorry for late post.

streeteelf wrote:
[Minao's Easy]
-01:50:109 (1) - Don't place points out of play field. Changed
-Maintain the same DS, not eg. 0.9 and later 1.2. My bad, I didn't verify the DS after previous mods. Fixed.

Thank you!

New vers.

http://puu.sh/c9lbv/d6d77b1d41.rar

Verlaren

Verlaren 2014-10-12T16:26:26+00:00

streeteelf wrote:
[Verlaren's Hard]
-00:36:055 (5) - Try 1 reverse and circle, not 2 reverse arrows. - fixed
-01:00:253 - Parts like this - Circle - sry, no
-You can use lower SV in slower parts, there are 2 for me: 00:42:551 - 00:45:150 and 01:29:322 - 01:31:595. - I know, but I don't want

Gaia wrote:
[Verlaren's Hard]
CS3 Hard? CS 4 or atleast CS3.5 please - no changes

00:04:713 (3,4,5) - uneven spacing - fixed
00:08:285 (7,8,9,1) - pretty challenging spacing for a hard.
00:36:055 (5) - use 2 sliders instead - fixed in streeteelf mod
00:38:654 (7) - u stacked the triple earlier so this antijump is unneccessary
00:40:927 (4) - another odd use of antijumps
01:03:338 (1) - (and after ) spacing
01:09:184 (2) - spacing.
01:23:475 (7) - no need for the 2nd reverse - i think about it
01:55:305 (1) - dont overlap

a big issue here is your spacing. look at 01:08:535 (1,2) - 02:00:502 (1,2) - then look at 01:07:885 (7,8) - they're the same spacing yet they're spaced differently in the timeline.
i also think you have some really random use of antijumps.

thx for mod

changes

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208,344,123100,5,4,0:0:0:0:
171,221,123425,1,8,0:0:0:0:
40,224,123750,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,112,124075,5,0,0:0:0:0:
104,112,124237,2,0,P|152:64|240:80,1,160.000000596046
272,136,124724,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,184,124887,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,200,125049,2,0,P|448:200|504:120,1,160.000000596046,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Celizavia

568 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Celizavia 2014-10-14T09:07:45+00:00

Updated

Kyouren

5,657 posts

Joined October 2012

Kyouren 2014-10-16T09:42:14+00:00

Re-check, no kds~

[General]

Artist is correct: SHOKUBAI PHANTOM GIRL feat. Megpoid Gumi change to ---->>> SHOKUBAI PHANTOM GIRL feat. Megpoid GUMI (GUMI is big font not small font)
Disbale "Letterbox during breaks"

[Easy]

You don't need easy diff, you just need Beginner diff (if want, plz don't ask me for make GD)
HP +1, CS +1, and AR +2

[Normal]

AR +1

I can't mod your diff, you diff is have a many trouble about note, prettern, and rhythm~ (PLZ REMAP AGAIN~)
Sorry if my mod is bad~

Good Luck~

Celizavia

568 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Celizavia 2014-10-16T10:26:47+00:00

gokugohan12468 wrote:
Re-check, no kds~

[General]

Artist is correct: SHOKUBAI PHANTOM GIRL feat. Megpoid Gumi change to ---->>> SHOKUBAI PHANTOM GIRL feat. Megpoid GUMI (GUMI is big font not small font) alright, fixed on all diffs
Disbale "Letterbox during breaks"
[Easy]

You don't need easy diff, you just need Beginner diff (if want, plz don't ask me for make GD) beginner diff is used for sound voltex mapset, so i'll guess an 2 easy diff is okay
HP +1, CS +1, and AR +2
no change

[Normal]

AR +1 fixed
I can't mod your diff, you diff is have a many trouble about note, prettern, and rhythm~ (PLZ REMAP AGAIN~)
Sorry if my mod is bad~

Good Luck~

eironeia

88 posts

Joined June 2013

eironeia 2014-10-17T15:17:25+00:00

will initiate M4M on this map. first point I should make is the all-caps English title--I think it shouldn't be there, please de-capitalize. correct me if I'm wrong though.

Easy

Do you really need 2 easy maps?
00:07:311 (2) - try to keep your mapping on the white ticks for easy diffs. this is on the red
00:23:064 (2) - blanketing. the outside kinda sticks out so make this more bent like so:

00:24:363 (1) - keep DS consistent
00:26:961 (1,2,3) - DS. from now on I won't state DS issues because there are a lot on this diff. Decide whether you want 1.1x or 1.2x and stick with it. don't do 00:39:953 (3,1) - this for example.
00:55:543 (1) - the overlap isn't pretty, maybe flip this slider vertically
01:06:911 (4) - again with the overlap
01:08:535 (1) - head is completely underneath the slider path of slider 5. i'm pretty sure this is unrankable, especially since this is Easy.
01:09:509 (2) - slider too long since there are music happening all over it and it doesn't get mapped, please consider variety
01:24:450 (2) - overlap with 1
01:25:424 (3) - the flow is better if you put it at x:31y:226
01:33:219 (3) - blanket
01:39:715 (1) - blanket (move the white tick a little bit to the left)
01:41:014 (2) - blanket (move the white tick a little bit down)
01:44:912 (1) - you probably need a finish sound at the head of this slider
01:47:510 (1) - length of slider, and unneccessary finish sound
01:50:109 (1) - put finish here instead
01:55:305 (1) - and here
01:57:904 (1) - slider length
02:00:502 (1) - unrankable overlap as before
02:01:476 (2) - slider length. please play with the music more as it all seems monotonous and boring to play for me at the moment

Minao's Easy

00:28:260 (3,1,2) - inconsistent blanketing here
00:54:244 (3) - blanket
Not much else. Good map imo.

Normal

Someone has pointed this out prior that this is a 4/4 song. Change your meter from 3/4.
00:08:773 (4) - improve blanketing from slider 3
00:22:739 (3) - I don't see musical reasoning behind why this slider is 3 beats long. If any it should be something more like this:

00:24:850 (2) - this one too. in this case, there's no standout music property where the slider turns around. please change this pattern
00:26:311 (4,5,6) - because normal diff, consider having the notes as a repeat slider instead
00:30:534 (2) - this is not straight against slider 1, please straighten. furthermore i think this rhythm is better mapped as:

00:34:756 (1) - stick to DS in a normal map
00:36:055 (3) - improve red tick placement
00:37:030 (4) - overlap and DS
00:41:902 (4) - overlap and blanket
00:42:551 (1) - put more white slider anchors in there so that it blankets circle 2 well, something like this:

00:43:850 (3) - blanket well with 2
00:45:150 (1) - use the same white anchor tip I gave you earlier
00:57:817 (4) - there should be a note here, feels empty
01:04:312 (2) - blanket
01:05:936 (4) - blanket (problem with slider 3 end and next circle)
01:07:885 (6) - put at x:232y:268 for better straight flow
01:27:698 (2) - not straight against slider 1, please straighten
01:28:672 (3) - blanket
01:31:920 (1) - that overlap isn't pretty
01:39:715 (1) - major spacing problem from the previous slider. either stack it, or put this further away so it's consistent at 0.8x
01:39:715 (1,2,3) - blanket
01:55:305 (1,2) - you need to be consistent with the blanketing gap as well. head 2 to body 1 is a wider blanketing gap than tail 1 to body 2 and this does not look pretty
02:00:177 (2) - note here

Verlaren's Hard

I have nothing against CS3, but for a Hard diff, it feels a tad too big. Move up to 3.5-4 I recommend.
Spice up your map with changes in slider speed from time to time.
00:11:371 - start your break here. see pic for details:

00:24:363 (1) - the spacing here from the previous slider is a bit problematic as I don't see any musical indicator of why it has to be small (0.60x) only.
00:31:508 (4) - blanket
00:58:791 (3,4) - blanket the slider tails properly.
01:12:432 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this progression progresses in and out of kiai, so please differentiate either ends instead of just putting sliders throughout, which makes it play monotonously.
01:50:758 (3,4) - again with the slider tail blanketing

Luxo's Insane

00:08:123 (3) - for flow/beauty purposes, move this to x:286y:130, a bit Nazi this. make sure circle 4 is moved as well so as to keep the blanket
00:09:097 (2,3) - blanket issue; refer to pic:

00:55:381 (7) - I think the single greatest issue I had with this map for some reason, since the slider tail is on a strong beat. Very strongly recommend you to turn the slider head into a circle, and the tail into a new silder head, or another circle.
01:09:672 (1,2) - slight blanket error
01:10:484 (3) - I don't see why this has a finish on.
01:53:844 (1) - weird minimal spacing here from the previous slider, especially with gumi singing a notably higher tone than at the previous slider tail.

Shiranai

2,186 posts

Joined August 2012

Shiranai 2014-10-17T16:38:02+00:00

Halloo kak, M4M aja yah. Soalnya aku tau cari mod itu susah

[General]
Itu judulnya memang kapital semua yah? aku engga ngerti vocaloid atau komposernya

[Easy]
Ini masih wip yah?
00:08:773 (1) - Kak kayanya lebih cocok kalo ritme nya kaya gini http://puu.sh/cfTaf/8ff719e4f5.jpg
Ih yang ini bentuknya aneh 00:21:764 (1) - Itu kan bisa dibagusin curve nya
00:29:559 (1) - Menurut aku ritme nya kaya gini kak http://puu.sh/cfTnR/a7080899b5.jpg , memang agak susah sih tapi cocok kok
Ih bentuk slidernya tuh aneh-aneh XD 00:36:055 (5,2) -
00:39:953 (3) - Yang itu juga bisa pake ritme yang sama kak http://puu.sh/cfTnR/a7080899b5.jpg
00:45:150 (1) - Yang itu lebih baik slidernya dipendekin aja kak berakhir di sini 00:46:124 - Terus 00:46:774 (2) - Yang itu geser ke big tick deh http://puu.sh/cfTI8/3a7e6b8d55.jpg
00:57:167 (2) - Kalo yang itu didelete bagaimana kak? terus yang ini 00:57:492 (3) - coba digeser ke 00:57:167 -
00:55:543 (1,2,3) - Untuk yang itu kayanya terlalu tajam kak beloknya, coba diperhalus lagi flownya deh, kaya gini mungkin kak http://puu.sh/cfTXL/6165f91cad.jpg atau bisa coba yang lain
01:07:236 (5,1) - Dulu aku pernah dibilangin kak pas map aku yang sebelumnya kalo buat easy jangan ada note yang tersembunyi di balik slider body, coba kakak cek siapa tau ada lagi selain itu
01:09:509 (2) - Untuk yang itu coba mulai slidernya di big tick terus berakhir di 01:10:484 -
01:11:133 (1) - Slidernya lebih baik berhenti di sini kak 01:13:082 - Terus green line nya jangan lupa dipindahin juga
01:33:219 (3) - Yang itu kayanya slidernya bagus berhenti di 01:33:869 -
01:37:117 (3) - Itu pake ritme ini aja kak http://puu.sh/cfTnR/a7080899b5.jpg
01:57:904 (1) - Bentuknya kurang cantiiik, terus ga boleh nutupin note selanjutnya kak sama kaya ini 01:07:236 (5,1) -
02:03:100 (1) - Slidernya bagus berhenti di sini kak 02:05:374 -

Karena masih wip bisa dikembangin kak hitsoundnya, mungkin kalo udah jadi aku bisa periksa lagi nanti, dan berhubung easy nya ada dua punya minao aku lewat ya kak

[Normal]
00:10:397 (5,6) - Kak menurut aku (5) baiknya jangan distack buat bingung, kecuali kalo itu nada terakhir sebelum break time aku rasa masih bisa buat stack
00:22:739 (3) - Ih yang itu kurang pas sama nadanyaa, coba ritme ini deh http://puu.sh/cfUJC/9f93eb9b94.jpg atau ini http://puu.sh/cfUMy/bee7a53048.jpg terserah selera
00:24:363 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Part itu ritmenya kurang cocok kaaaak,
00:50:346 (1) - Kalo spinner nya berhenti di sini 00:52:295 - Bagaimana kak? kedengarannya lebih bagus loh terus untuk note berikutnya engga buru-buru buat klik soalnya ada jeda sedikit
01:11:133 (1) - Kalo spinner yang itu berhentinya di big tick kak 01:13:082 - Green line nya jangan lupa dipindahin juga
02:03:100 (1) - Spinner itu berhentinya di sini kak 02:05:374 -

Yang ini lumayan bagus kak, cuma aku masih janggal aja sama ritme bagian pertama rasanya masih ada yang kurang pas

[]
Sebnernya lagu ini pernah dibuat sama blue dragon kak yang full ver. tapi udah didelete XD
Semangat kaaak, kalo ada yang bingung tanya aja yah

Ps: eironeia minta skin nya doong XD

kamikin_old

286 posts

Joined June 2014

kamikin_old 2014-10-17T17:20:19+00:00

Hello! From my queue! Sorry for the wait!

General:

SPOILER

I love this song and GUMI! And also, isn't there a video for this?

Also, I think the title is Ki ni Naru Aitsu wa Kaijuu Shounen . Also, you need to have the Japanese which is 気になるあいつは怪獣少年 . I think the artist in Japanese is 触媒ファントムガール

Normal:

SPOILER

00:21:764 I think this area should be a bit more like this

00:32:158 I think this area should be more like this

00:41:902 (4) - Maybe change this into a hitcircle, with a finish on it, starting at the beginning of the slider
00:53:919 (3) - Whistle at the end
00:54:893 (4) - Whistle at the beginning
00:56:842 (3) - Clap and finish at the end?
01:00:740 In this area, how about this instead

01:11:133 (1) - Move the end to the next white tick imo
01:52:707 (1) - I think this should be shortened a bit
01:57:904 (1) - I would do

Overall, love it!

Hard:

SPOILER

00:00:978 The start sounds really split up and doesn't flow well
00:38:004 (4,5,6) - I don't think you should have this stacked on a slider as there isn't an even interval between all the circles
01:28:023 (3,4) - These sound off, they don't fit the music imo
01:39:715 This combo feels split up as well and is not flowy

00:10:721 (7) - A finish at the end would be nice
00:23:713 (5) - Whistle on both ends? (It says you have a clap but I can't hear anything)
00:34:431 (8) - Finish
00:43:201 (5) - Finish at the end
02:04:724 (3,4,5) - Finshes on the circles and the start of the slider

Good luck on being ranked! Great beatmap btw!

Gave you a star

Celizavia

568 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Celizavia 2014-10-18T09:20:54+00:00

eironeia wrote:
will initiate M4M on this map. first point I should make is the all-caps English title--I think it shouldn't be there, please de-capitalize. correct me if I'm wrong though. well, i dont know, if u see the other mod, it was say that all the names is capital
Easy
Do you really need 2 easy maps?
00:07:311 (2) - try to keep your mapping on the white ticks for easy diffs. this is on the red the guitar begins at red ticks tho
00:23:064 (2) - blanketing. the outside kinda sticks out so make this more bent like so:
fixed
00:24:363 (1) - keep DS consistent
00:26:961 (1,2,3) - DS. from now on I won't state DS issues because there are a lot on this diff. Decide whether you want 1.1x or 1.2x and stick with it. don't do 00:39:953 (3,1) - this for example.
00:55:543 (1) - the overlap isn't pretty, maybe flip this slider vertically
01:06:911 (4) - again with the overlap fixed
01:08:535 (1) - head is completely underneath the slider path of slider 5. i'm pretty sure this is unrankable, especially since this is Easy. i've seen this pattern alot of times, mostly at easy tbh on other people's mapset
01:09:509 (2) - slider too long since there are music happening all over it and it doesn't get mapped, please consider variety
01:24:450 (2) - overlap with 1 fixed
01:25:424 (3) - the flow is better if you put it at x:31y:226 fixed
01:33:219 (3) - blanket fixed
01:39:715 (1) - blanket (move the white tick a little bit to the left) fixed
01:41:014 (2) - blanket (move the white tick a little bit down)
01:44:912 (1) - you probably need a finish sound at the head of this slider added
01:47:510 (1) - length of slider, and unneccessary finish sound
01:50:109 (1) - put finish here instead fixed
01:55:305 (1) - and here fixed
01:57:904 (1) - slider length
02:00:502 (1) - unrankable overlap as before
02:01:476 (2) - slider length. please play with the music more as it all seems monotonous and boring to play for me at the moment ~~its easy, what can u asked for?~~

Normal
Someone has pointed this out prior that this is a 4/4 song. Change your meter from 3/4. no change
00:08:773 (4) - improve blanketing from slider 3 fixed
00:22:739 (3) - I don't see musical reasoning behind why this slider is 3 beats long. If any it should be something more like this:
fixed
00:24:850 (2) - this one too. in this case, there's no standout music property where the slider turns around. please change this pattern fixed
00:26:311 (4,5,6) - because normal diff, consider having the notes as a repeat slider instead fixed
00:30:534 (2) - this is not straight against slider 1, please straighten. furthermore i think this rhythm is better mapped as:
fixed
00:34:756 (1) - stick to DS in a normal map fixed
00:36:055 (3) - improve red tick placement
00:37:030 (4) - overlap and DS
00:41:902 (4) - overlap and blanket fixed
00:42:551 (1) - put more white slider anchors in there so that it blankets circle 2 well, something like this:

00:43:850 (3) - blanket well with 2fixed
00:45:150 (1) - use the same white anchor tip I gave you earlier
00:57:817 (4) - there should be a note here, feels empty
01:04:312 (2) - blanket fixed
01:05:936 (4) - blanket (problem with slider 3 end and next circle) fixed
01:07:885 (6) - put at x:232y:268 for better straight flow fixed
01:27:698 (2) - not straight against slider 1, please straighten fixed
01:28:672 (3) - blanket
01:31:920 (1) - that overlap isn't pretty fixed
01:39:715 (1) - major spacing problem from the previous slider. either stack it, or put this further away so it's consistent at 0.8x fixed
01:39:715 (1,2,3) - blanket
01:55:305 (1,2) - you need to be consistent with the blanketing gap as well. head 2 to body 1 is a wider blanketing gap than tail 1 to body 2 and this does not look pretty code?
02:00:177 (2) - note here nope

thanks for the mods!

Mako Sakata wrote:
Halloo kak, M4M aja yah. Soalnya aku tau cari mod itu susah

[General]
Itu judulnya memang kapital semua yah? aku engga ngerti vocaloid atau komposernya liat mod sebelumnya ya

[Easy]
Ini masih wip yah?
00:08:773 (1) - Kak kayanya lebih cocok kalo ritme nya kaya gini http://puu.sh/cfTaf/8ff719e4f5.jpg fixed
Ih yang ini bentuknya aneh 00:21:764 (1) - Itu kan bisa dibagusin curve nya
00:29:559 (1) - Menurut aku ritme nya kaya gini kak http://puu.sh/cfTnR/a7080899b5.jpg , memang agak susah sih tapi cocok kok ngga mau terlalu mempersulit lagu sih menurutku
Ih bentuk slidernya tuh aneh-aneh XD 00:36:055 (5,2) -
00:39:953 (3) - Yang itu juga bisa pake ritme yang sama kak http://puu.sh/cfTnR/a7080899b5.jpg
00:45:150 (1) - Yang itu lebih baik slidernya dipendekin aja kak berakhir di sini 00:46:124 - Terus 00:46:774 (2) - Yang itu geser ke big tick deh http://puu.sh/cfTI8/3a7e6b8d55.jpg fixed
00:57:167 (2) - Kalo yang itu didelete bagaimana kak? terus yang ini 00:57:492 (3) - coba digeser ke 00:57:167 -
00:55:543 (1,2,3) - Untuk yang itu kayanya terlalu tajam kak beloknya, coba diperhalus lagi flownya deh, kaya gini mungkin kak http://puu.sh/cfTXL/6165f91cad.jpg atau bisa coba yang lain
01:07:236 (5,1) - Dulu aku pernah dibilangin kak pas map aku yang sebelumnya kalo buat easy jangan ada note yang tersembunyi di balik slider body, coba kakak cek siapa tau ada lagi selain itu malahan dulu aku sering liat ada map easy yg begitu
01:09:509 (2) - Untuk yang itu coba mulai slidernya di big tick terus berakhir di 01:10:484 -
01:11:133 (1) - Slidernya lebih baik berhenti di sini kak 01:13:082 - Terus green line nya jangan lupa dipindahin juga fixed
01:33:219 (3) - Yang itu kayanya slidernya bagus berhenti di 01:33:869 - fixed
01:37:117 (3) - Itu pake ritme ini aja kak http://puu.sh/cfTnR/a7080899b5.jpg
01:57:904 (1) - Bentuknya kurang cantiiik, terus ga boleh nutupin note selanjutnya kak sama kaya ini 01:07:236 (5,1) -
02:03:100 (1) - Slidernya bagus berhenti di sini kak 02:05:374 - fixed

[Normal]
00:10:397 (5,6) - Kak menurut aku (5) baiknya jangan distack buat bingung, kecuali kalo itu nada terakhir sebelum break time aku rasa masih bisa buat stack fixed
00:22:739 (3) - Ih yang itu kurang pas sama nadanyaa, coba ritme ini deh http://puu.sh/cfUJC/9f93eb9b94.jpg atau ini http://puu.sh/cfUMy/bee7a53048.jpg terserah selera
00:24:363 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Part itu ritmenya kurang cocok kaaaak,
00:50:346 (1) - Kalo spinner nya berhenti di sini 00:52:295 - Bagaimana kak? kedengarannya lebih bagus loh terus untuk note berikutnya engga buru-buru buat klik soalnya ada jeda sedikit fixed
01:11:133 (1) - Kalo spinner yang itu berhentinya di big tick kak 01:13:082 - Green line nya jangan lupa dipindahin juga fixed
02:03:100 (1) - Spinner itu berhentinya di sini kak 02:05:374 -

Yang ini lumayan bagus kak, cuma aku masih janggal aja sama ritme bagian pertama rasanya masih ada yang kurang pas

[]
Sebnernya lagu ini pernah dibuat sama blue dragon kak yang full ver. tapi udah didelete XD omg senpai *-* /?
Semangat kaaak, kalo ada yang bingung tanya aja yah

Ps: eironeia minta skin nya doong XD

makasih modmya!!

kamikin wrote:
Hello! From my queue! Sorry for the wait!

General:
SPOILER
I love this song and GUMI! And also, isn't there a video for this? YESH!!
Also, I think the title is Ki ni Naru Aitsu wa Kaijuu Shounen . Also, you need to have the Japanese which is 気になるあいつは怪獣少年 . I think the artist in Japanese is 触媒ファントムガール

Normal:
SPOILER
00:21:764 I think this area should be a bit more like this changed during the prev mods

00:32:158 I think this area should be more like this ^

00:41:902 (4) - Maybe change this into a hitcircle, with a finish on it, starting at the beginning of the slider fixed
00:53:919 (3) - Whistle at the end nope
00:54:893 (4) - Whistle at the beginning ^
00:56:842 (3) - Clap and finish at the end?
01:00:740 In this area, how about this instead

01:11:133 (1) - Move the end to the next white tick imo
01:52:707 (1) - I think this should be shortened a bit
01:57:904 (1) - I would do

Overall, love it!

[/quote] thanks for the mods!

Kalxie

Kalxie 2014-10-19T03:14:10+00:00

Normal:

SPOILER

Very good blanketing and aesthetics.
00:28:585 (4) - Move to x:280 y:164. Spacing looks a lot better here than before.
00:30:534 (2,3) - Move slightly over to the right? Seems a bit close to the previous slider.
00:38:654 (3) - Move to x:148 y:56? Spacing with both the slider before and after it looks a lot better.
00:41:902 (4) - Blanketing here could use a bit of work. Moving the right box up 1 pixel makes it look a lot better.

Verlarne's Hard:

SPOILER

00:38:004 (4,5,6) - Unstack from slider here? I don't really see a purpose in stacking it with the slider since there's a small break between the two.
00:56:680 (3) - I feel like moving this to x:192 y:128 looks better and feels better to play. Same thing would apply to this: 01:48:647 (3)

Luxo's Insane:

SPOILER

01:33:706 (1,2,3) - Maybe unstack and lead into the quint?
01:36:305 (2,3,4) - ^
02:04:156 (1) - Maybe end the spinner when the lyrics end?

Sorry for the short mod. I don't have a lot to say as the map set seems to have been modded pretty extensively.

Sky Trias

Sky Trias 2014-10-19T03:42:25+00:00

Hi! From Endless Modding Queue

[Verlaren's Hard]

00:09:260 - 00:11:046 - weird ..
SPOILER
00:09:909 (4) - this making weird (remove) , move 00:10:072 (5) to 00:09:909 .. then 00:10:397 add note
SPOILER
00:31:346 (3) - remove , no beat here
00:39:466 - add note
00:43:038 (4) - remove , then 00:43:201 (5) move to 00:43:038 and 00:43:526 add note
SPOILER
00:44:337 (9) - same ^ (remove) , then 00:44:500 (10) move to 00:44:338 and 00:44:825 add note
SPOILER
01:12:270 (3) - remove , then move 01:12:432 (3,4,5) to 01:12:270 , then 01:13:244 - add note , 01:13:407 (6) change to a note
SPOILER
01:36:792 (4) - change to a note , sound weird if you using slider here

[Luxo's Insane]

00:08:042 (2) - remove , no beat here
00:10:721 (3,4) - change to slider till 00:11:046 ?
00:38:978 (3,4) - Ctrl+G ?
00:56:111 (3) - remove ?
01:27:941 (5) - ^
01:52:382 (4,5) - Ctrl+G ?
01:54:980 (7,8) - ^

OK .. that's all ..
GoodLuck!

Celizavia

568 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Celizavia 2014-10-20T12:57:27+00:00

Omg No Pls wrote:
Normal:
SPOILER
Very good blanketing and aesthetics.
00:28:585 (4) - Move to x:280 y:164. Spacing looks a lot better here than before. fixed
00:30:534 (2,3) - Move slightly over to the right? Seems a bit close to the previous slider. fixed
00:38:654 (3) - Move to x:148 y:56? Spacing with both the slider before and after it looks a lot better. fixed
00:41:902 (4) - Blanketing here could use a bit of work. Moving the right box up 1 pixel makes it look a lot better.which box tho?

thanks for the mods!

Minao

219 posts

Joined November 2013

Minao 2014-10-21T17:03:36+00:00

eironeia wrote:
Minao's Easy
00:28:260 (3,1,2) - inconsistent blanketing here Fixed
00:54:244 (3) - blanket Fixed
Not much else. Good map imo. Thanks!

Thank you for the mod!

New version

http://puu.sh/ckVMP/787444f164.rar

luxoDeh

1,497 posts

Joined February 2012

luxoDeh 2014-10-23T10:57:10+00:00

eironeia wrote:
Luxo's Insane
00:08:123 (3) - for flow/beauty purposes, move this to x:286y:130, a bit Nazi this. make sure circle 4 is moved as well so as to keep the blanket ok xD
00:09:097 (2,3) - blanket issue; refer to pic: fixed

00:55:381 (7) - I think the single greatest issue I had with this map for some reason, since the slider tail is on a strong beat. Very strongly recommend you to turn the slider head into a circle, and the tail into a new silder head, or another circle. fixed
01:09:672 (1,2) - slight blanket error ok
01:10:484 (3) - I don't see why this has a finish on. yes, removed
01:53:844 (1) - weird minimal spacing here from the previous slider, especially with gumi singing a notably higher tone than at the previous slider tail. fixed

Omg No Pls wrote:
Luxo's Insane:
SPOILER
01:33:706 (1,2,3) - Maybe unstack and lead into the quint? no, it's ok this way
01:36:305 (2,3,4) - ^ ^
02:04:156 (1) - Maybe end the spinner when the lyrics end? no, I like how it is

Sorry for the short mod. I don't have a lot to say as the map set seems to have been modded pretty extensively.

Sky Trias wrote:
[Luxo's Insane]
00:08:042 (2) - remove , no beat here hm... no
00:10:721 (3,4) - change to slider till 00:11:046 ? no, it's ok as it is
00:38:978 (3,4) - Ctrl+G ? good idea
00:56:111 (3) - remove ? yes this time
01:27:941 (5) - ^ not here
01:52:382 (4,5) - Ctrl+G ? ok
01:54:980 (7,8) - ^ ok
OK .. that's all ..
GoodLuck!

Thanks for mods

code

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Gumi - My Crush Was A Monster Boy short version.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 52620
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.8
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
SkinPreference:User
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 58054
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1.6

[Metadata]
Title:KININARU AITSU-WA KAIZYU SHONEN
TitleUnicode:気になるあいつは怪獣少年
Artist:SHOKUBAI PHANTOM GIRL feat. Megpoid GUMI
ArtistUnicode:SHOKUBAI PHANTOM GIRL feat. Megpoid GUMI
Creator:Celizavia
Version:Luxo's Insane
Source:
Tags:vocaloid My Crush Was a Monster Boy Rock Minao verlaren luxodeh
BeatmapID:469544
BeatmapSetID:190428

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.60000000596046
SliderTickRate:2

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//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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pieguyn

2,020 posts

Joined May 2009

pieguyn 2014-10-25T09:55:04+00:00

[Timing]
offset 970, BPM 184.75. remember to set it to 4/4 (normal/insane currently have 3/4)

[Easy]
00:25:337 (2) - don't understand why clap here, feels out of place
00:39:953 (3) - ^
01:07:236 (5,1) - imo, too hard for new players to read. formation like this should work better http://puu.sh/cpJBQ/7450ede095.jpg
01:25:424 (3,1) - spacing
01:37:117 (3) - spacing
01:39:715 (1) - better blanket? http://puu.sh/cpJJR/72600a4f53.jpg
01:41:014 (2) - better blanket? http://puu.sh/cpJON/9a66fb53ea.jpg (use grid 4)
- 2nd kiai has a lot of spacing issues, plz check this
01:47:510 (1) - remove NC? no reason to put a combo with 1 note imo
01:52:707 (1) - ^
01:57:904 (1) - this slider feels really out of place.... imo, making overlap with 01:56:604 (2) - is not a good idea, 02:00:502 (1) - is also hard for new players to catch. I suggest just remap this slider with a different rhythm and placement

[Minao's Easy]
01:24:125 - ~ 01:33:869 - don't understand what claps here are following. imo makes more sense to either remove clap at 01:27:373 - , or add clap at 01:32:570 - to keep consistency

[Normal]
-would recommend a silent soft-slidertick for the 1st part, since the song is quiet
00:02:926 (4) - don't understand why claps stop after here, recommend continuing them
00:39:953 (1) - move down a bit? looks better
00:42:551 (1) - try finish on every 4 beats starting from here? fits cymbals better. up to you
00:42:551 (1,2,3) - consistent spacing here would be better - move 00:43:526 (2,3) - down and CTRL+SHIFT+R on (3) should work. don't forget to fix spacing after
00:42:551 - use the whistles in the slow part here? also, imo soft finish fits this part really well (also applies to the other soft part), up to you
01:38:091 (2) - add whistle, fits with others
02:03:100 (1) - end at 02:05:374 -

[Verlaren's Hard]
-AR + 0.5, current is too slow imo
-this diff has a lot of spacing errors. plz go through and fix the spacing
-I don't understand what the hitsounds here are following... the normal finish fits the song well, but the placement of it doesn't match anything - generally it sounds better to make the finish match the cymbals in the song, or a strong part of the song. it is recommended to go back through the map and check the placement of the hitsounds, current placement is really random imo 0.0
00:38:654 (7) - not a good idea to stack here imo, it's confusing to play
00:51:645 (5) - plz try to avoid sliders like this, it's kind of confusing most of the time - split into 2 sliders generally works better here
01:23:475 (7) - remove 1 repeat here? more natural rhythm imo and less confusing

there's a lot of problems with this diff..... I suggest fixing the spacing and putting the hitsounds in a less random way, it would make this play a lot better.... other things are mostly ok

[Luxo's Insane]
-imo putting a typical snare-drum custom hitsound could be a good idea. there don't seem to be many hitsounds here, so it might give a nice effect. just suggestion, up to you
01:10:159 (2,3,4) - remove finish on 3, add on 2 and 4? fits song better imo
02:01:964 (2) - finish on end
mostly fine

hard could be improved a lot, imo. hope this helps. good luck :3

Celizavia

568 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Celizavia 2014-10-26T00:37:59+00:00

Thanks for your mod, pieguy1372.
But due to some problem (laptop broken)i'll halt the update for awhile

neonat

Beatmap Nominator

3,535 posts

Joined April 2012

neonat 2014-10-26T08:37:39+00:00

Easy

Spacing keeps fluctuating around 1.05~1.3x Keep it constant throughout, use either 1.2 or 1.3x only

The spacing also affects pretty much all the blankets as well, like 00:02:277 (3,4,1,1)

00:21:764 (1,2) - like this one, you should blanket them
00:28:260 (3,1) - another example of the inconsistent spacing, 1.07x is also too close to look good, since they touch
01:07:236 (5,1) - do not have the start of 01:08:535 (1) be completely covered by the previous slider
01:29:322 (1,1) - try to give at least a second of rest after the spinner
01:57:904 (1,1) - don't cover the start of 02:00:502 (1) it doesn't look good or move well, and shouldn't be too hidden

The sliders need touching up, the blankets are quite bad and the spacing needs to be constant throughout the song, make them flow better. There is a complete lack of hitsounds too, please put them in.

Minao's Easy

00:20:465 (5) - the finish fits better at the start of the slider instead of at the end
00:32:158 (1) - add a finish
00:42:551 (1,2,3) - finish on the start of these sliders
00:47:748 (1,2,3) - ^
01:25:424 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - this pattern is long and non-stop, try and break it into smaller groups, like removing 01:31:595 (4) for example
01:34:518 (1) - finish on start of slider
01:39:715 (1) - ^
02:04:075 (1) - ^

Normal

00:08:123 (3,4) - blanket them
00:23:713 (4,5) - do not stack them on 00:22:739 (3) - separate them
00:24:363 (1,3) - blanket
00:28:910 (5,1) - spacing error
00:34:756 (1,2,3,4) - the stacking at the end of the slider is not good, it doesn't flow well and not suited for Normal
00:39:953 (1,2) - spacing error
00:42:551 (1,3) - finish at the start of sldier
00:45:150 (1) - finish on the end of slider as well
00:47:748 (1,3) - finish on start of slider
01:03:338 (1,2) - blanket
01:05:287 (3,4) - ^
01:05:936 (4,5) - ^
01:09:184 (3,4) - ^
01:10:808 (5) - place it more in front of the path of the previous slider, which is around x: 232 y: 212
01:31:595 (1) - too early after a spinner, remove the notes too close to the spinner
01:44:912 (1) - ^
01:52:707 (1,2) - not stacked

Spacing needs to be checked again, to ensure there aren't any errors. Stacking is ill-advised in Normal, and should not be used casually. Make sure the patterns are neater

Verlaren's Hard

00:22:414 (4,5) - there should not be a huge jump for this part in the middle part of the section when there is no difference in the song here, remove the jump and change the position
00:57:167 (4,5) - this is just really bad flow and movement. 00:57:492 (5) doesn't even face the right direction of flow, it plays bad and looks bad, even Ctrl + G would be better. If 00:57:492 (5) wasn't so underneath the previous slider having it face that way would still be fine, but as of right now the line of direction is moving the way it should naturally. 00:57:167 (4) curves to the left, 00:57:492 (5) -'s head is definitely not to it's left
00:58:304 (2,4) - not stacked
01:17:954 (6,7) - flow just doesn't work this way, you can't expect shifting down and then going back up and down again to be good movement. Like I said earlier, even Ctrl + G 01:18:279 (7) would be better
01:49:459 (5,1) - this cut in direction is too extreme. Either shift the way they angle or make them closer
01:50:271 (2,4) - not stacked

The spacings are just too random, spacings need to be fixed and adjusted to be less confusing and random. It also causes flow issues in the map. Hitsounds can be better as well.

luxo's Insane

00:23:064 (1,3) - make the spacing equal to 00:23:226 (2,4)
00:55:381 (7,1) - both sliders end on strong beats, it just feels totally wrong in that sense that we play on the weak beat
01:04:475 (1) - I would strongly encourage the direction this slider goes is not the same as 01:03:988 (3) because the feel of play is so forced right now, any other direction would be better

Good Luck

Minao

219 posts

Joined November 2013

Minao 2014-10-26T15:27:28+00:00

pieguy1372 wrote:
[Minao's Easy]
01:24:125 - ~ 01:33:869 - don't understand what claps here are following. imo makes more sense to either remove clap at 01:27:373 - , or add clap at 01:32:570 - to keep consistency I added a clap at 01:32:570

Thank you for the mod!!

neonat wrote:
Minao's Easy
00:20:465 (5) - the finish fits better at the start of the slider instead of at the end Changed
00:32:158 (1) - add a finish Added
00:42:551 (1,2,3) - finish on the start of these sliders Added
00:47:748 (1,2,3) - ^ Added
01:25:424 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - this pattern is long and non-stop, try and break it into smaller groups, like removing 01:31:595 (4) for example I keep it because I really feel that all the notes here are important, I can't find any circle less important than the others
01:34:518 (1) - finish on start of slider Added
01:39:715 (1) - ^ Added
02:04:075 (1) - ^ I don't because the sound becomes lower at the end, so I think a finisher is not really needed. I prefer to keep the "sudden silence" effect.

Thank you for your mod!!

My diff

http://puu.sh/crmCY/6aa5c57f82.rar

Verlaren

Verlaren 2014-10-26T20:42:05+00:00

Sorry for so long delay.

eironeia

I have nothing against CS3, but for a Hard diff, it feels a tad too big. Move up to 3.5-4 I recommend. - fixed
Spice up your map with changes in slider speed from time to time.
00:11:371 - start your break here. see pic for details: - fixed
00:24:363 (1) - the spacing here from the previous slider is a bit problematic as I don't see any musical indicator of why it has to be small (0.60x) only.
00:31:508 (4) - blanket - fixed
00:58:791 (3,4) - blanket the slider tails properly.
01:12:432 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this progression progresses in and out of kiai, so please differentiate either ends instead of just putting sliders throughout, which makes it play monotonously.
01:50:758 (3,4) - again with the slider tail blanketing

kamikin

00:00:978 The start sounds really split up and doesn't flow well - fixed
00:38:004 (4,5,6) - I don't think you should have this stacked on a slider as there isn't an even interval between all the circles
01:28:023 (3,4) - These sound off, they don't fit the music imo
01:39:715 This combo feels split up as well and is not flowy

00:10:721 (7) - A finish at the end would be nice - fixed
00:23:713 (5) - Whistle on both ends? (It says you have a clap but I can't hear anything)
00:34:431 (8) - Finish
00:43:201 (5) - Finish at the end - fixed
02:04:724 (3,4,5) - Finshes on the circles and the start of the slider - some fixed

Omg No Pls

00:38:004 (4,5,6) - Unstack from slider here? I don't really see a purpose in stacking it with the slider since there's a small break between the two.
00:56:680 (3) - I feel like moving this to x:192 y:128 looks better and feels better to play. Same thing would apply to this: 01:48:647 (3) - fixed

Sky Trias

00:09:260 - 00:11:046 - weird ..
00:09:909 (4) - this making weird (remove) , move 00:10:072 (5) to 00:09:909 .. then 00:10:397 add note - some fixed
00:31:346 (3) - remove , no beat here - fixed
00:39:466 - add note - fixed
00:43:038 (4) - remove , then 00:43:201 (5) move to 00:43:038 and 00:43:526 add note
00:44:337 (9) - same ^ (remove) , then 00:44:500 (10) move to 00:44:338 and 00:44:825 add note
01:12:270 (3) - remove , then move 01:12:432 (3,4,5) to 01:12:270 , then 01:13:244 - add note , 01:13:407 (6) change to a note
01:36:792 (4) - change to a note , sound weird if you using slider here

pieguy1372

-AR + 0.5, current is too slow imo
-this diff has a lot of spacing errors. plz go through and fix the spacing
-I don't understand what the hitsounds here are following... the normal finish fits the song well, but the placement of it doesn't match anything - generally it sounds better to make the finish match the cymbals in the song, or a strong part of the song. it is recommended to go back through the map and check the placement of the hitsounds, current placement is really random imo 0.0
00:38:654 (7) - not a good idea to stack here imo, it's confusing to play
00:51:645 (5) - plz try to avoid sliders like this, it's kind of confusing most of the time - split into 2 sliders generally works better here
01:23:475 (7) - remove 1 repeat here? more natural rhythm imo and less confusing
there's a lot of problems with this diff..... I suggest fixing the spacing and putting the hitsounds in a less random way, it would make this play a lot better.... other things are mostly ok

neonat

00:22:414 (4,5) - there should not be a huge jump for this part in the middle part of the section when there is no difference in the song here, remove the jump and change the position - fixed
00:57:167 (4,5) - this is just really bad flow and movement. 00:57:492 (5) doesn't even face the right direction of flow, it plays bad and looks bad, even Ctrl + G would be better. If 00:57:492 (5) wasn't so underneath the previous slider having it face that way would still be fine, but as of right now the line of direction is moving the way it should naturally. 00:57:167 (4) curves to the left, 00:57:492 (5) -'s head is definitely not to it's left - fixed
00:58:304 (2,4) - not stacked - fixed
01:17:954 (6,7) - flow just doesn't work this way, you can't expect shifting down and then going back up and down again to be good movement. Like I said earlier, even Ctrl + G 01:18:279 (7) would be better - fixed
01:49:459 (5,1) - this cut in direction is too extreme. Either shift the way they angle or make them closer
01:50:271 (2,4) - not stacked - fixed

The spacings are just too random, spacings need to be fixed and adjusted to be less confusing and random. It also causes flow issues in the map. Hitsounds can be better as well.

Thanks all for modding

changes

osu file format v13

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Chaoslitz

Elite Mapper / Elite Storyboarder

2,325 posts

Joined November 2013

Chaoslitz 2014-10-27T09:44:21+00:00

Testplay :3/

Fun map ;D, but I got slider break ;w;

Btw

What is that User Skin? o.o

luxoDeh

1,497 posts

Joined February 2012

luxoDeh 2014-11-05T21:05:42+00:00

pieguy1372 wrote:
[Luxo's Insane]
-imo putting a typical snare-drum custom hitsound could be a good idea. there don't seem to be many hitsounds here, so it might give a nice effect. just suggestion, up to you yes added hitsounds
01:10:159 (2,3,4) - remove finish on 3, add on 2 and 4? fits song better imo no
02:01:964 (2) - finish on end no
mostly fine

good luck :3

neonat wrote:
luxo's Insane

00:23:064 (1,3) - make the spacing equal to 00:23:226 (2,4) ok
00:55:381 (7,1) - both sliders end on strong beats, it just feels totally wrong in that sense that we play on the weak beat nah, it's fine
01:04:475 (1) - I would strongly encourage the direction this slider goes is not the same as 01:03:988 (3) because the feel of play is so forced right now, any other direction would be better fixed

Good Luck

Thanks for modding. And here's the code:

code

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Gumi - My Crush Was A Monster Boy short version.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 52620
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.8
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
SkinPreference:User
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 58054
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1.6

[Metadata]
Title:KININARU AITSU-WA KAIZYU SHONEN
TitleUnicode:気になるあいつは怪獣少年
Artist:SHOKUBAI PHANTOM GIRL feat. Megpoid GUMI
ArtistUnicode:SHOKUBAI PHANTOM GIRL feat. Megpoid GUMI
Creator:Celizavia
Version:Luxo's Insane
Source:
Tags:vocaloid My Crush Was a Monster Boy Rock Minao verlaren luxodeh
BeatmapID:469544
BeatmapSetID:190428

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.60000000596046
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"just rename it.png",0,0
//Break Periods
2,73932,83525
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
978,324.794837927376,3,1,1,45,1,0
52945,-100,3,1,1,55,0,1
60902,-100,3,1,1,55,0,1
63013,-100,3,1,1,55,0,1
73407,-100,3,1,1,35,0,0
89240,-100,3,1,1,15,0,0
91270,-100,3,1,1,55,0,0
94518,-83.3333333333333,3,1,1,55,0,0
104912,-100,3,1,1,65,0,1
115305,-83.3333333333333,3,1,1,65,0,1
124075,-100,3,1,1,15,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 69,50,60
Combo2 : 128,128,128
Combo3 : 255,128,128
Combo4 : 242,24,57

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Celizavia

568 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Celizavia 2014-11-07T07:41:46+00:00

finally ==

pieguy1372 wrote:
[Timing]
offset 970, BPM 184.75. remember to set it to 4/4 (normal/insane currently have 3/4) im not sure about the bpm and the offset, i'll ask someone else first

[Easy]
00:25:337 (2) - don't understand why clap here, feels out of place
00:39:953 (3) - ^ no claps here
01:07:236 (5,1) - imo, too hard for new players to read. formation like this should work better http://puu.sh/cpJBQ/7450ede095.jpg
01:25:424 (3,1) - spacing
01:37:117 (3) - spacing
01:39:715 (1) - better blanket? http://puu.sh/cpJJR/72600a4f53.jpg
01:41:014 (2) - better blanket? http://puu.sh/cpJON/9a66fb53ea.jpg (use grid 4)
- 2nd kiai has a lot of spacing issues, plz check this
01:47:510 (1) - remove NC? no reason to put a combo with 1 note imo i'll remove it if other mods told me to do so
01:52:707 (1) - ^ ^
01:57:904 (1) - this slider feels really out of place.... imo, making overlap with 01:56:604 (2) - is not a good idea, 02:00:502 (1) - is also hard for new players to catch. I suggest just remap this slider with a different rhythm and placement suggestion?

[Normal]
-would recommend a silent soft-slidertick for the 1st part, since the song is quiet
00:02:926 (4) - don't understand why claps stop after here, recommend continuing them
00:39:953 (1) - move down a bit? looks better
00:42:551 (1) - try finish on every 4 beats starting from here? fits cymbals better. up to you
00:42:551 (1,2,3) - consistent spacing here would be better - move 00:43:526 (2,3) - down and CTRL+SHIFT+R on (3) should work. don't forget to fix spacing after
00:42:551 - use the whistles in the slow part here? also, imo soft finish fits this part really well (also applies to the other soft part), up to you i'll rather not
01:38:091 (2) - add whistle, fits with others
02:03:100 (1) - end at 02:05:374 -

neonat wrote:
Easy

Spacing keeps fluctuating around 1.05~1.3x Keep it constant throughout, use either 1.2 or 1.3x only

The spacing also affects pretty much all the blankets as well, like 00:02:277 (3,4,1,1)

00:21:764 (1,2) - like this one, you should blanket them
00:28:260 (3,1) - another example of the inconsistent spacing, 1.07x is also too close to look good, since they touch
01:07:236 (5,1) - do not have the start of 01:08:535 (1) be completely covered by the previous slider fixed at prev mod
01:29:322 (1,1) - try to give at least a second of rest after the spinner i believe this is acceptable
01:57:904 (1,1) - don't cover the start of 02:00:502 (1) it doesn't look good or move well, and shouldn't be too hidden

The sliders need touching up, the blankets are quite bad and the spacing needs to be constant throughout the song, make them flow better. There is a complete lack of hitsounds too, please put them in.

Normal

00:08:123 (3,4) - blanket them
00:23:713 (4,5) - do not stack them on 00:22:739 (3) - separate them i prefer this
00:24:363 (1,3) - blanket
00:28:910 (5,1) - spacing error
00:34:756 (1,2,3,4) - the stacking at the end of the slider is not good, it doesn't flow well and not suited for Normal
00:39:953 (1,2) - spacing error
00:42:551 (1,3) - finish at the start of sldier fixed at prev mods
00:45:150 (1) - finish on the end of slider as well ^
00:47:748 (1,3) - finish on start of slider ^
01:03:338 (1,2) - blanket
01:05:287 (3,4) - ^
01:05:936 (4,5) - ^
01:09:184 (3,4) - ^
01:10:808 (5) - place it more in front of the path of the previous slider, which is around x: 232 y: 212
01:31:595 (1) - too early after a spinner, remove the notes too close to the spinner
01:44:912 (1) - ^
01:52:707 (1,2) - not stacked

Spacing needs to be checked again, to ensure there aren't any errors. Stacking is ill-advised in Normal, and should not be used casually. Make sure the patterns are neater

Good Luck

thanks for the mods!
updated~

Sieg

3,981 posts

Joined February 2012

Sieg 2014-11-15T05:11:15+00:00

current timing is totally fine

just note that song is 4/4 indeed
also I have funny bug that metronome wont change after green lines in kiai after setting 4/4 for uninherit (red line) timing point, you can fix that by using

SPOILER

[TimingPoints]
978,324.794837927376,4,1,1,45,1,0
52945,-100,4,1,1,55,0,1
60902,-100,4,1,1,55,0,1
63013,-100,4,1,1,55,0,1
73407,-100,4,1,1,35,0,0
89240,-100,4,1,1,15,0,0
91270,-100,4,1,1,55,0,0
94518,-83.3333333333333,4,1,1,55,0,0
104912,-100,4,1,1,65,0,1
115305,-83.3333333333333,4,1,1,65,0,1
124075,-100,4,1,1,15,0,0

or changing third value from 3 to 4 manually for inherit (green lines) by yourself

Celizavia

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Celizavia 2014-11-16T08:24:32+00:00

Sieg wrote:
current timing is totally fine

just note that song is 4/4 indeed
also I have funny bug that metronome wont change after green lines in kiai after setting 4/4 for uninherit (red line) timing point, you can fix that by using
SPOILER
[TimingPoints]
978,324.794837927376,4,1,1,45,1,0
52945,-100,4,1,1,55,0,1
60902,-100,4,1,1,55,0,1
63013,-100,4,1,1,55,0,1
73407,-100,4,1,1,35,0,0
89240,-100,4,1,1,15,0,0
91270,-100,4,1,1,55,0,0
94518,-83.3333333333333,4,1,1,55,0,0
104912,-100,4,1,1,65,0,1
115305,-83.3333333333333,4,1,1,65,0,1
124075,-100,4,1,1,15,0,0
or changing third value from 3 to 4 manually for inherit (green lines) by yourself

i manually changed it so it wont make any weird errors. thanks and updated!

Erina

114 posts

Joined August 2012

Erina 2014-11-26T04:35:38+00:00

Hey~ From my Mod for Voice queue~

[Luxo's Insane]
00:17:217 (3,4) - Consider increasing the jump between these two notes, it would emphasize the music more/play better imo
Not much else to say here...

[Hard]
00:09:909 (4) - I believe this rhythm works better: http://puu.sh/d5G6y/1810b2579a.jpg
00:23:713 (5,1) - Use distance snap here - this distance is too low compared to the rest of the map. I prefer having distance snap used often for Hard difficulties.
00:42:551 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I believe this rhythm works better: http://puu.sh/d5Ge5/45e1f2a845.jpg
00:43:850 (6) - I would recommend NC here to avoid having long combos.
00:49:047 (6) - ^^
00:47:098 (8) - Consider deleting ninth note and extend the 8th slider to the white tick - give the player more recovery time here.
00:49:047 (6) - Consider adding NC
00:58:304 (2,4,5) - These sliders aren't properly stacked.
01:12:432 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - This gets a bit repetitive...try changing up the rhythm/slider curve a bit?
01:19:253 (2,3) - I personally don't like these sliders - they have too much curve on them

01:37:117 (5) - Add NC to keep consistent with 01:35:818 (1) -
01:41:014 (4) - ^^
01:42:313 (7) - ^^
01:50:271 (2,4,5) - These sliders aren't properly stacked.

[Normal]
Nazi position-modding incomingggg~~~ Move what you see fit. Most of these are just my personal tastes/preferences

00:22:739 (3) - Move to x:348 y:236, looks better this way.
00:25:987 (4) - Move to x:364 y:128
00:26:311 (5) - Move to x:444 y:176
00:33:457 (2,3,4,1) - Loosen the curve on the slider here and make it look like this: http://puu.sh/d5Hay/f09d3078f1.jpg, this looks cleaner imo.
00:40:927 (3,4) - These two sliders are somewhat overlapping, looks kinda ugly

Consider making the pattern like this: http://puu.sh/d5GWq/6a9b83f17a.jpg
01:05:936 (4) - Add NC to keep consistent with 00:55:543 (1) -
01:09:184 (3,4,5) - This looks better imo: http://puu.sh/d5Hqv/9ac67aeb26.jpg
01:28:672 (3) - Move to x:344 y:280
01:52:707 (1,2) - These sliders aren't stacked properly.

[Minao's Easy]
00:13:969 (3) - Consider adding NC
00:19:166 (4) - ^^
00:33:457 (3) - Consider moving to x:408 y:104
01:07:236 (2,3) - Consider stacking these two sliders, looks cleaner.

[Easy]
00:21:764 (1,2) - I don't understand the gap between these two sliders. This rhythm seems better: http://puu.sh/d5Ovf/364dce8c01.jpg
00:28:260 (3) - Shorten this slider by one white tick. You should give the player some small breaks between playing on easy, so that the note density isn't too high.
00:50:346 (3,4,1) - Distance snapping is not consistent.
00:55:218 (4) - Consider removing.
01:07:236 (5) - Consider shortening to the last white tick.
01:29:322 (1,1) - For easy, try avoiding having note appear so close to the end of a slider. That's what I believe should be the case, but I may be wrong.
01:42:313 (1,2,3) - Rhythm would be better like this - its also more intuitive and easier to play: http://puu.sh/d5OGJ/93a29d4d15.jpg
01:57:904 (1,1) - Don't put a slider's beginning under another one - it looks bad, and is also hard to read.

Good luck with rank!~

I'll contact you later for more information about what to sing, and how to sing!

mekamekacity

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Joined December 2014

mekamekacity 2015-02-03T02:21:27+00:00

I really like the timing on the map! All difficulties are really as they are titled with a very challenging hard mode, just right normal modes and easy modes, are, well, easy! Keep up the great work!

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