1. Easy (1.37 stars, 72 notes)
2. Hard (3.58 stars, 272 notes)
3. Insane (5.02 stars, 400 notes)
4. Normal (1.63 stars, 103 notes)

1. This is the short version wouldn't it be good if you added a video to it?
2. There's no need to write your name in the tags since you're the creator of the beatmap
3. Turn off the widescreen support (Song Setup > Design) You're not making a storyboard.

1. OD -1
2. 00:11:782 (3) - X: 312 Y: 188
3. 00:15:818 (1,2) - Please try not to give this kind of slider shape to the sliders it doesn't look so beatiful.
4. 01:00:730 (1) - sliders swhich makes you go back and forth isn't that intresting to play. The slider is ablso pretty long which makes it even worse.

1. AR -1
2. 00:28:449 (1) - This is too hard for Newbies to read
3. 01:28:098 (1) - Delete a "reverse" (or whatever you want to call the XD) and put a circle on 01:28:625

1. HP -1
2. AR -2
3. Slider velocity: 1,40

nadapan wrote:

[General]

1. This is the short version wouldn't it be good if you added a video to it?
2. There's no need to write your name in the tags since you're the creator of the beatmap
   fix
3. Turn off the widescreen support (Song Setup > Design) You're not making a storyboard.
   fix

[Easy]

1. OD -1 ok
2. 00:11:782 (3) - X: 312 Y: 188
   fix
3. 00:15:818 (1,2) - Please try not to give this kind of slider shape to the sliders it doesn't look so beatiful.
   change00:15:818 (1) - only
4. 01:00:730 (1) - sliders swhich makes you go back and forth isn't that intresting to play. The slider is ablso pretty long which makes it even worse.

no change

[Normal]

1. AR -1
   change 4.5
2. 00:28:449 (1) - This is too hard for Newbies to read
   keep
3. 01:28:098 (1) - Delete a "reverse" (or whatever you want to call the XD) and put a circle on 01:28:625

^

[Hard]

1. HP -1
2. AR -2
3. Slider velocity: 1,40
   All no change

I can't mod further than this since I'm not skilled at modding 3,50 stars .__.

Good Luck

• 
  [Insane]

1. 00:10:730 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - maybe the jumps too big, u may want to make it closer cause the music is not high
2. 00:20:379 (3,4,5,6) - the square jumps flows really bad,random jumps better flow
3. 00:53:888 (1) - you can't use 1/8 because the music has no 1/8 in it
4. 01:09:677 (3,4) - don't let 3 hit 4

Alex Li wrote:

Hi, for m4m

• 
  [general]

1. The hit sound looks not fine,how about use some drum hit sound for clap?
2. The hard and insane diff didnt have many sv changes, maybe add some sv changes to make the map better?
3. maybe too much over map in this map,don't put the beat if you didn't hear them
4. map's quality looks not fine,you will need a lot of mods if you want rank it

• 
  [Easy]

1. 00:13:011 (1) - sv changes is not allowed in easy diff
   keep
2. 00:17:046 (2) - ^
   keep
3. 00:22:835 (2) - looks not good
   fix
4. 00:25:642 (2) - maybe ctrl g flow better
   fix

1. 00:13:011 (1) - same as ez, fix the green line
   keep
2. you may use more 1/2 in nm diff

• 
  [Hard]

1. 00:11:432 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - jumps like that are maybe too hard for a hard diff
   no change
2. 01:06:344 (1,2,3) - looks not good
   fix
3. 01:28:098 (1,2,3,4) - maybe really hard to read
   no change

[notice]

• 
  [Insane]

1. 00:10:730 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - maybe the jumps too big, u may want to make it closer cause the music is not high
   no change
2. 00:20:379 (3,4,5,6) - the square jumps flows really bad,random jumps better flow
   there is not jump
3. 00:53:888 (1) - you can't use 1/8 because the music has no 1/8 in it
   keep
4. 01:09:677 (3,4) - don't let 3 hit 4
   no change

[notice]

hanyuu_nanodesu wrote:

Hi~ from my modding Q~
Sorry for the wait >.<
Now, let's go~

[General]

1. It doesn't seem really right to use Normal sample set for the entire song because there are some slow part too. I suggest to use Soft sample set here 00:01:782 change it to Normal again here 00:12:309 then change to Soft again here 00:18:625 and change to Normal again 00:29:853 until the end.
   OK fix

[Easy]

1. You sure have weird slider style... I like it~! ^^
2. 00:03:186 (2) - Is this supposed to be wave slider? Actually its shape is kinda weird, maybe you have to remake it... Maybe like this : http://puu.sh/bOj0K/b92685c071.jpg
   fix
3. 00:11:081 (2,3) - I think you better follow the vocal at this part because the sound is bigger than the background music, 00:11:432 is a good place to start a slider. So you better change (2) to a circle, move (3) 1 tick forward and then extend it. http://puu.sh/bOj9I/fdbedc30f3.jpg
   OK! fix
4. 00:17:046 (2) - This slider don't look so good with (1) because it almost look like a bad overlap. Better move it kinda downward, the flow also would feel smoother. Like this : http://puu.sh/bOjg9/be39ce346f.jpg
   change other slider
5. 00:17:046 (2) - Also, you better NC here because you change the SV. Players can use it as a sign so the SV change wouldn't be too sudden and went too fast.
   ok
6. 00:17:046 (2) - Still here, you better end this slider here 00:17:923 because the music ends there. Follow the background music at this part. It also good to add a Finish at the slider's end :3
   this idea is good.but I think this end good
7. 00:22:835 (2) - This slider wave could be better, like this --> ~
   ~
8. 00:38:274 (1) - End this slider here 00:38:800 the music ends there.
   no change now
9. 00:39:326 (2) - Same reason as above, end this one here 00:39:853
   ^
10. 00:53:537 (1) - I would prefer to put two circles here 00:53:537 and here 00:54:765 Because it feels kinda weird to slide with no sound.
    keep
11. 01:04:940 (2) - Better move this 1 tick backward, remove 1 reverse, and add a circle here 01:04:940 http://puu.sh/bOjIV/858f369a0b.jpg It seems to follow the music better.
    fix
12. 01:27:397 (2) - You seem lack of circle at this diff... maybe you can change this to two circles? :3
    OK, change circle

[Normal]

1. 00:02:835 (2,1) - Just stack maybe...
   fix
2. 00:11:081 (2,3) - Just do what I say on Easy maybe, change (2) to circle and so on...
   fix
3. 00:28:449 (1) - This is not really fitting for Normal, but I think still acceptable...
   OK,change other
4. 00:32:309 (4) - I think this note needs hitsound like drum sound or something? I dunno, but maybe not whistle...
   I remove whistle
5. 00:36:870 (3,1) - Overlap T_T you have good slider style, but I think this overlap is kinda bad... Maybe you have to change the slider shape a bit...
   I think this is OK,but few change slider
6. 00:40:379 (3,1) - Actually it's better to make them parallel. Or at least just tilt a little, not as much as the current...
   00:40:379 (3) - little change
7. 00:58:625 (2,3) - Maybe would be better if you blanket them...
   fix
8. Okay, that's all~

[Hard]

1. This actually looks like Insane o-o you sure use high SV for Hard...
   I think little Hard
2. Check AiMod, there's one unsnapped object end. (I'm not talking about DS)
   fix
3. 00:07:747 (2) - I kinda get your point, but I think it's better to DS this...
   ok
4. 00:08:448 (4) - ^
5. 00:13:011 (1) - Actually it's not bad to add finish at head.
   keep
6. 00:29:853 (1) - ^
   ^
7. 00:17:046 (1) - End the spinner here 00:17:923
   same reason Easy
8. 00:40:905 Add a note here to complete the previous triplet sound.
   add
9. 00:43:712 Add a note, it's follow the music.
   add
10. 00:52:309 (1) - Move this 1/2 tick backward, remove 2 reverses and add a note here 00:52:835 http://puu.sh/bOl7e/11b916bc36.jpg
    change
11. 00:53:712 (1) - No, the spinner end is too close to the next object. Better end it at the red tick instead.
    fix
12. The rest are fine~

[Insane]

1. 00:21:958 (3,4) - Swap this two in timeline. http://puu.sh/bOliZ/9899f8256a.jpg
   keep
2. 00:29:853 (1) - Add finish at slider's head
   ^
3. 00:34:765 (1,2) - Maybe blanketing their body would be better...
   fix
4. 00:38:625 (2,3) - The placing is kinda tricky, I think... Some people (like me) will think it's as a triplets and end up missing the second note....
   fix
5. 00:39:677 (6,7) - ^
6. Done~ seems a bit too hard for me ^.^

Okay done, that's all
Good luck~! ^^