This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, 24 May 2014 at 7:50:20 PM

Artist: Orihime Yozora
Title: Niji no Kanata
Source: 神採りアルケミーマイスター
Tags: Kamidori Alchemy Meister The God Catching Captor Collecting Alchemist Eushully エウシュリー Wilfred Dion ウィルフレド ディオン Yuela ユエラ 月爛 Visual Novel VN SRPG Eroge Ending ED
BPM: 125
Filesize: 7902kb
Play Time: 04:46
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (1.58 stars, 221 notes)
2. Hard (4.64 stars, 570 notes)
3. Normal (3.19 stars, 339 notes)

Download: Orihime Yozora - Niji no Kanata
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Orihime Yozora \:D/

omg im first haha xD
hello from modreqs

modding normal
00:25:060 (4) - start a new combo there
00:28:660 (2) - try keeping all objects within the grid
at 00:31:180 add a break there
00:32:980 (2) - make it a new combo, and try making it a slider
take out 00:33:700 (3) - and put 00:33:940 (4) - on its spot, something like this http://puu.sh/8ZXlB/9b828ff2d4.jpg
also starting 00:34:900 make it look something like http://puu.sh/8ZXqx/8214cc0140.jpg
move 00:40:900 (3) - away from the 2 circle
00:54:100 (3) - the 3,4,5 are late
01:07:540 (2) - is also late
insert break after 01:09:940 (5) -
01:33:940 (1) - 2,3 are late
01:35:380 (4) - is also late
try not to have sliders and circles off the grid
have 01:57 like this http://puu.sh/8ZXJR/6c60b6b882.jpg
insert break at 02:09
02:22:180 (3) - looks awkward xD
insert break after 02:47:860 (5) -
for 03:12 try something like this http://puu.sh/8ZXV4/541886409d.jpg
after 03:23:860 (1) - there are alot of empty spaces that you should add in breaks to prevent hp drain
03:51:460 (2) - another awkward looking slider ;w;"
move 04:05:860 (3) - 2 ticks ahead

hope that helped ! overall your beatmap is really good, GL
for m4m would you mind modding my map http://osu.ppy.sh/s/177064 thank you !

Hard
00:43:300 (5,6) - ketika gw denger lagunya , entah kenapa slider 5 agak feel off ~ , kalo ane bikin circle 5 dulu baru slider 6.
02:21:940 (5,6) - NC here?
02:37:060 (1,2,3,4,5) - suggestion ~ , make 1-3 circle like paused, than slider 4 beginning point coincide with slider 5 beginning point, you may copy pasted slider 4 from slider 5 though ~
02:57:460 (2,3,4,1,2) - flip slider 3 sama 4 , terus kan itu jadinya slider 2 ke 3 agak aneh, coba edit" dikit deh slider 2 nya
Bisa juga digeser circle 1 warna ijo ke endpoint slider 6 sebelumnya biar lebih pas (mungkin) lol
03:14:260 (6) - Flip slider 6 horizontally and make it curve like slider 5? What I am trying to do here is just doing some slider jump here owo
03:19:300 (1) - Suggest a slider from 3:19:060 - 3:19:300
03:59:500 (4,5) - 4 to (252,232) , 5 to (244,276) (trying to make circle 4 and 5 in curve with slider 3)
04:22:420 (1,2,3) -
Consider this pattern? o.o , dibikin slider 7 sama slider 1 agak linier kalo bisa o.o , ini cuma diubah" secara kasar, coba dipikirin yang bener lagi deh ~

Normal
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1650623 this one seems better imo , but I don't know how to keep the DS same

Easy
Nothing wrong in my opinion thanks, ask other modder *I might go back to this map again*

yoo.. found this on #modreqs





well such a poor mod .. hope it'll help you.. goodluck~


EDIT in General.. sorry

00:32:380 (2) -
00:32:980 (3) -

I don't know if this fixes it but the pause felt awkward after 00:30:820 (1) -
Everything looks fine except for a few notes which i think is probably on my end(i'm bad )
I would reduce that circle slider's size a bit, apart from that it's good imo

sorry for late and I'm sorry to said that I can't mod the map because of final
Shoot star.
hope you can accepted my apologize

Hi kak ^^

M4M ya

Easy

1. 00:32:500(2) make a reversed slider?
2. a spinner at 00:44:500
3. 00:48:820(1) a reversed slider doesnt fit the sound imo
4. 01:56:500(3) make a reversed slider instead?
5. 02:16:420 a note
6. 02:33:220 the vocal stated here, i suggest put 02:33:460(1,2) forward to the red line
7. 02:35:140 a 1/2 slider

Normal

1. 00:24:820 a note
2. a 1/2 slider sound nice at 02:48:580 tho, thats where the chorus kicks in

thats all my mods ^^
sori ngga banyak, masih newbie heheh

Hi!

M4M! > my map Hanatan - Aitai

[General]
Nice
Flow improved >.o)b

[Timing]
01:11:380 - KIAI? until 01:49:780 -
02:49:300 - KIAI too? until 03:23:860 -

[Easy]
Suggest to use just a little red tick, fits vocal more
Can use slidertick for clap on KIAI time (or more)
00:42:100 - Prefer clap same as 00:41:140 -
00:43:060 (4) - NC should be here instead of 00:43:540 (1) -
00:43:060 (4) - Clap
00:44:020 - ^
00:44:500 - Add a hit here
^ OR spinner 00:44:500 - until 00:46:420 -
01:00:820 (2) - Hmm try to rotate a little for better blanket on tail of 00:59:380 (1) - ? This one looks ok too
01:32:020 (3) - Strange rhythm hmm...coz vocal at 01:31:780 - and 01:32:260 - , but for Easy maybe acceptable
02:22:420 (4) - NC?
03:54:580 (1) - Spacing is a bit off 1.0x

[Normal]
Hmm...SV is a bit fast, for soft song I'll use just a little slower than 1.35
For me I'll use a bit slower SV and something like 1.4x DS to avoid circles kissing each other :d 00:17:140 (2,3) -
00:30:580 (6,1) - Prefer to swap place, making 00:31:060 - a hit
00:32:500 (2,3) - Change to slider with reverse? Flow stopped for a while, might be hard to catch
00:42:100 - Clap is better
00:59:620 (3,4) - Swap place
01:45:460 (1) - It's a diff above Easy, but I prefer to remove this one 01:45:460 (1) - (hate x100)
02:10:900 (2) - If can make it like 00:32:500 (2,3) -
03:23:860 - Give a rest here, drain time is a bit tired for Normal (include HP drain), then start here 03:38:740 -

[Hard]
00:43:060 - Clap
00:50:500 (6) - Unstack this to not confuse players, you're leading them to triplets 00:51:100 (2,3) -
01:34:660 - Note here
01:41:140 - ^
01:57:700 - The hit on red tick looks extra, could move to white tick at 01:57:460 - or 01:57:940 -
02:14:500 - Note
02:25:540 (6) - NC is needed for break or long time interval
02:26:500 (8) - NC here instead of 02:26:980 (1) -

[Easy]
00:33:940 (1) - improve blanket, it looks weird. make it more symmetrical
00:33:940 (1) - don't make spinners too long in easy maps
04:42:820 (1) - ^

[Normal]
00:32:500 (2,3) - wouldn't stack here, keep them distant
00:50:500 (4,1) - ^
02:18:340 (2,3) - ^
02:22:180 (3) - well that's some weird slider for the map, any symbolic meaning behind it?
03:09:460 (2) - care, this is going offscreen, try to keep in on the grid
03:48:340 (3) - i think it better you move the whole combo a bit to the right


[Hard]
Plays fine, there are flow breaks at some points. Needed to play this with DT. xD
I feel this map could need some smaller jumps here and there to make it play more interesting.
AR+1 for a better game feeling.

00:00:340 (1) - i'd make this a slider, it accentuates the resonance better
00:05:140 - add circle, feels empty
00:12:820 - ^
00:22:180 (3) - ^, is more optional but it would keep flow constant
00:23:140 - add circle, there's clearly a soudn here
00:23:380 (7) - NC
00:27:220 - the gap's too big, it make a big slider and 2 circles http://puu.sh/akFMj/d897557ff5.jpg
00:32:020 - and 00:32:260 - , add circle here maybe for flow improvement
00:34:180 - add circle
00:36:100 - and 00:36:580 - ^
00:49:060 - should be fine if you add circle here
01:03:700 (7,1) - bigger distance so they dont overlap
01:26:740 - inc. volume of finisher, sounds a bit quiet
01:36:340 (5,1) - i don't recommend stacking here, partly because of the vocal change
01:49:300 - set vol. down to 20%
01:58:660 (2,3) - feels as if you chopped of the flow, try this out http://puu.sh/akGog/37e8e888b3.jpg
02:09:700 - add circle
02:10:420 (4) - improve blanket (slider shape) to fit 5-approachcircle
02:22:180 - huuge, you could fill it with a spinner or at least insert a break time
03:16:420 (3) - improve blanket

Like the song, beatmaps are good too!

Greetings,
paseli

form modreqs

Easy
00:44:500 (3) - move to 00:44:260 -
00:49:780 (2) - move to 00:49:540 - or delete it
00:50:020 - add a note ,not if 2 delete
00:53:620 (2) - same
00:55:540 (4) - delete


Normal
00:44:260 (3) - a spinner maybe good
04:34:420 (1,2) - delete


Hard
00:22:660 (3) - move to 00:23:140 -
01:03:700 (7) - change this 01:03:580 (7) - to 01:04:180 -
01:58:660 (2) - NC this ,not 1
02:33:580 (3) - 2 notes maybe good

hope it can help you

[Hard]

Sorry for such a short mod, it's because i couldn't find any weird parts.
But that's a good thing, i means your map is good
It's fun to play with DT too Good Job!

[Easy]
Not sure what's happening here LOL...there like no note, probably you might want to NC this 00:47:620 (4) , since is pretty far away from 00:44:500 (3)
00:44:500 (3) - finish + note should be here 00:44:260, so might want to modify this slider 00:43:540 (2) , if you want to keep 1/2 note distance for easy ^^
02:16:660 (2) - should be having note here 02:16:420 and add finish
02:17:140 (3) - add finish
03:04:660 (2) - NC here instead of 03:04:180 (1)

[Normal]
00:40:900 (3) - NC, to get rid of the distance spacing error
00:49:780 (3,4,1) - I don't think I really see that kind of stacking in normal, might want stack off
00:52:180 (5) - remove finish in the begining of the slider, and might want to start the slider here 00:51:940 (4)
00:55:780 (3) - finish in the begining of slider
01:01:540 (2) - ^
01:11:380 (1,2,3) - same reason as 00:49:780 (3,4,1)
02:16:420 (3) - add finish
02:22:180 (3) - add finish begining of the slider
02:33:700 (3) - ^
04:00:340 (1) - ^

[Hard]
00:27:220 (3) - slider + shouldn't be having a huge empty space, try adding note after :3
00:58:660 - add note, losing rythmn
01:03:460 - ^
01:05:380 - add note to match voice, like you did previously :3
01:13:060 - ^
01:15:940 - ^
01:17:140 (5) - move this to 01:16:900 and add a note here 01:17:380
01:23:140 - add note, losing rythmn
01:27:940 (3,4) - ctrl+g, and add a note here 01:28:540
02:11:860 (6) - blanket with 02:11:620 (5)
02:08:740 (1) - remove NC, NC here instead 02:08:980 (2)
02:25:540 (6) - NC
02:30:100 (2) - slider should be here 02:29:860 , since I'm guessing your putting a slider for the piano sound
02:33:700 (4) - add finish hitsound
02:38:260 (5) - NC
02:39:460 (2) - NC here instead of 02:38:980 (1)
02:55:300 (2) - NC here instead of 02:55:060 (1)
02:56:260 (5) - don't stack it in the end of the slider
04:06:580 (1) - end of slider, remove finish, for some reason even if you put finish here I don't know why I can't hear the hitsound...so you might have miss it, not sure if is a bug or not, anyway shouldn't be having finish here ^^
04:16:420 - add note, losing rythmn
04:27:700 (6,7,8,9,1) - better pendagron
04:27:700 (6) - x:163 y:128
04:27:940 (7) - x:116 y:56
04:28:180 (8) - x:34 y:78
04:28:420 (9) - x:30 y:163
04:28:660 (1) - x:109 y:194
04:30:100 - 1/4 slider here?
I didn't point out much blanket just 1 out of nowhere \o/, but I suggest you recheck them xD, might have some mod that will bother you with blanket :3

GL with the map

yuela

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