1. Famous Thirteen (5.62 stars, 490 notes)

1. 00:25:097 (5) - You should change this into a long slider
2. 01:15:523 (11,1) - Move it under 11
3. 01:28:927 (3,4,4,5,6) - move it closer : http://puu.sh/bHurY/173185c0ba.jpg
4. 01:39:140 (3,4,5,6) - move them closer
5. 01:49:352 (3,4,5,6) - move them closer
6. 01:57:012 (3) - move 3 closer to 4 , i feel like it broke the flow
7. 01:58:289 (3,4,1) - move 3 closer to 4 and change 1 to the left side of the screen
8. 00:16:799 (8,1,2,3) - change this please
   
   Over all you should fix the spacing just a bit
   
   Good Luck !

Aerous wrote:

Hi from my modding queue : p/3392815/

First off , I really like your mapping

1. 00:25:097 (5) - You should change this into a long slider changed hitsound to make it sounds better.
2. 01:15:523 (11,1) - Move it under 11 reduced the distance between the stream and changed the shape a bit.
3. 01:28:927 (3,4,4,5,6) - move it closer : http://puu.sh/bHurY/173185c0ba.jpg Nope.I think this pattern is unique and challenging and suits well with the rhythm.
4. 01:39:140 (3,4,5,6) - move them closer ^
5. 01:49:352 (3,4,5,6) - move them closer ^
6. 01:57:012 (3) - move 3 closer to 4 , i feel like it broke the flow Fixed
7. 01:58:289 (3,4,1) - move 3 closer to 4 and change 1 to the left side of the screen moved 3 closer but i dont know how to place 1.
8. 00:16:799 (8,1,2,3) - change this please moved a bit.
   
   Over all you should fix the spacing just a bit
   
   Good Luck !

Kibbleru wrote:

General

1. First of all, consider getting a better mp3, this one is REALLY quiet.Fixing.
2. also consider resizing ur background to 1366x768 this is the standard size for an osu background

Viraocha

1. why is this slider tickrate 0.5?? this should be tickrate 4 since alot of things are mapped onto the 1/4sChanged.
2. 00:14:246 (1,2) - not a good place for a rhythm like this, 00:14:565 (2) - isn't emphasized enough to deserve its own circle, just extend the slider to where (2) is right now.Fixed.
3. Resnap ur kiais
4. 00:00:204 - maybe u can decrease ur SV for the first sections here considerably since it's kinda calm. You can also be alot more creative when it comes to extra diffs with some good low sv stuff Remapped.
5. 01:04:033 - i'd like to see maybe some whistles or at least some hitsounds in this section, feels empty. same with the start here 00:00:204 - . You can just add in some soft whistles or something imo to at least have some hitsounds and not keep it plain.Added.
6. 00:16:001 - why not have a triplet here instead of 00:16:321 (5,6,7) - just for the sake of consistencyFixed.
7. 00:30:204 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - consider using the convert slider to stream function to make this curve look cleanerFixed.
8. 00:31:321 (3,4,5) - nazi stack properlyFixed.
9. 00:42:969 - i suggest u have the slider here instead, to express the drum better
   
   SPOILER

   
   Fixed this part and changed its counterparts following.
10. 00:56:055 (13) - adding NC here will help readabilityFixed.
11. 01:24:459 (1,1) - they're just barely overlapping which kinda makes it look bad. space them out?Fixed.
    oh wow nice addative hitsounding!
    it reminds me of natteke's map! https://osu.ppy.sh/s/37716
    although i do honestly think the placement could be a bit more refined, i really like your hitsounding!
    shooting a star at this for something creative!Wow! Thanks!!!!

DraQeu wrote:

Hi from my mod queue

[General]

Mp3 needs to be 192kpbs or less for rankOk.

[Virachocha]

00:29:565 (1,2,3,4) - This doesn't fir with the music imoNope,i think they fit with the sound track well.
00:36:746 (6,7) - put 6 on thee end of 7 like the one before it?Fixed.
00:42:810 (8) - Add new combo here?Fixed.
00:45:363 (9) - ^
01:24:459 (1,1) - These 2 overlap in a small point fix maybe?Fixed.



Nice map, good luck!

Thank you!

Narcissu wrote:

[Viracocha]

很想吐槽這diff名字这个我也不太懂，在wiki上找的

BG我建議用1366*768不会弄，接下来准备研究下或者干脆换张图

01:26:852 - 建議的preview pointFixed.

00:11:055 (5) - 這段的whistle間隔時間和下的位置都比較蹩腳……既然是按照雙倍BPM做的，那麼不妨直接換到00:10:735 - 00:11:374 - ，符合這個難度的速度感Fixed.

00:14:246 (1) - 這個滑條長度有問題……好像是下1/16線上了？我覺得不是特別必要的話乖乖的下1/4會好一點Fixed.

00:14:884 - 這裡是你whislte的音效位……24clap還是節奏位最好不要空掉……除非你按我說的改動了whislte的位置Fixed.

00:19:991 (3) - 這是連貫的一個長音我建議用一個噁心奇葩的滑條代替短折返我觉得这个音这样表达也不错。

00:25:097 (5) - 擋折返箭頭是unrank……Fixed.

麻痹這段音效炫酷的不行……

00:56:055 (1,2,3,4) - 建議用兩個1/8滑條跳代替不改，这个梗比较爽

01:04:033 - 音量太低的note可以被直接unrank……曲子音量也很低……建議把曲子音量修一下……另外雖然音效都很明顯，不過hitnormal都很沒存在感……Fixed.

01:25:815 (3,5,7,9) - 如果你鑔（clap）密度後面是前面一倍的話前面這四個建議去掉，比較符合速度……Fixed.之前音效的设定有点纰漏。

01:28:528 - 雙附點幾乎不存在於任何歌曲……節奏上是灰常奇葩的東西……如果用7/8滑條只是為了保證節奏連貫的話建議把滑條尾的samplesst換成soft達到偽消音的效果Fixed.

01:28:927 (3,4,5,6,7) - 至少對我來說這難過頭了……而且這個曲子不適合帶音效的5連……在24拍前面用三連會正規的多。玩起来的时候这个连打也是当做一个物件来看，这里放的间距比较大是想表现旋律的变化（同样也是因为爽）。

麻痹這段音效裝逼的不行……

01:38:182 (7,2) - 這種遮擋是風格相當明顯的梗，只用一次會很奇怪，建議換掉Fixed.

01:46:799 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 長白線前的串裏面不建議下打槍的音效，建議用和01:25:735 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 一樣的設置这里换了一下音效，主要是跟着歌曲的鼓点来。

02:09:938 (4,5,1) - 這種排列很難被判斷時值……我建議你把1/2全部疊尾或者擺的更近 or 遠，也可以採用很不順手的flow之類的……總之現在這種怎麼看都是1/4有點坑Fixed.

我覺得做的相當不錯……補上ENH去找bat要泡吧√懒得做全难度也懒得找bat，而且对这个图还不太满意。

lkx_Shore wrote:

如果可以的话，我还是希望等你换了mp3再来摸。

lkx_Shore wrote:

General

1. Let BG size change to 4:3 scales will be better.
2. Your mp3 file audio bitrate is higher than 192kbps. And i think it is so soft, So i make a qualified one for you. Don't forget turn up 10% volume at audio.
   
   Download

   http://puu.sh/c6FzH/cd2469fba5.mp3
3. Add a 2000 ms audio-leadin at all diff, Ensure players have 1.5 seconds of preparation time.

Viracocha

1. I saw you use default soft track at prelude, Why not add a empty sliderslide.wav at single track for silence?
2. 00:00:246 - At the prelude,Now sounds a bit empty (You didn't add any hitsound), Try to add some whistle, Such as you can add at this note 00:00:246 (1) - and slider head 00:00:724 (4) - . In a word, You can add whistle at downbeat.
3. 00:00:565 (3) - Bad flow, You have better make 1/8 slider face to next object. Now player easy to miss at slider end. The same of these part.
   
   object

   1. 00:01:841 (2) -
   2. 00:03:118 (3) -
   3. 00:05:671 (2) -
   4. 00:06:948 (2) -
   5. 00:08:224 (3) -
4. 00:02:480 (4) - Slider end at 00:02:639 - ，Your mp3 is so soft then it make you wrong.
5. 00:14:288 (1) - Looks werid, Try slider style like this?
   
   img

   
6. 00:20:033 (3) - This long sound end at 00:20:671 - ，So you can let slider end at 00:20:631 - (1/16), It will be have a better effect. But don't forget adjust this slider 00:20:671 (1) - .
7. 00:21:948 (1,3) - You add a downbeat hitsound at these object, but If you use slider to lengthen desperating feeling will have a better effect. So i suggest you change to 1/4 slider at these downbeat hitsound. Such as
   
   object

   1. 00:23:224 (1) -
   2. 00:27:373 (2) -
   3. 00:28:969 (5,7) - efc.
8. 00:25:139 (5) - Same as 00:20:033 (3) - point fo view.
9. 00:29:607 (1,2,3,4) - I hear the music, But these object is too jump imo, Try narrow DS? Or you can try this style.
   
   img

   
10. 00:35:352 (6) - Same as 00:20:033 (3) - .
11. 00:36:309 (4) - Make stack better.
12. 00:37:426 (2,3,4) - Emm...Why did you do that? It dosen't make sense imo. Use the same DS will be better.
13. 00:39:022 (3) - Hit the downbeat will be better.
14. 00:42:373 (1) - You can add default soft-finish on the slider head, For fit the music. You also can add some soft-whistle default to dotted music . Only have custom drum hitsound will have a bit boring.
15. 00:45:565 (5) - Weird rhythm, Try this?
    
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16. 00:48:118 (5) - Change to 1/4 slider will have a better effect.
17. 00:54:182 (2,2,3) - Looks werid, Why not use the same DS or stack them.
18. 00:59:208 (2,3) - Same as above.
19. 01:19:474 (2,4) - Remove, For prominent the music.
20. 01:20:113 (7,9) - Remove, Same as above.
21. 01:21:948 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Ornamental bigger than playability at now. Let every parts start at last parts end will be better, Sush as make 01:22:746 (2) - start on 01:22:586 - .
22. 01:31:203 (2) - Remove reverse ,Cuz reverse slider easy to broken flow. It will make a bad feeling at most of the time...
23. 01:41:416 (2) - Same as above.
24. 01:46:123 (4,5) - Stack or use the same DS?
25. 02:18:118 (5) - Add a default soft-finish.

Others

Your hitsound is amazing, But you need more work at arrangement.
Btw, I think bpm double is more easy to edit.
其实我是想锻炼我那堪忧的英语，而且用英语mod我觉得比中文mod有趣...