Haruna Luna - Startear -TV size ver.- · forum

[ Setsuna ]

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

[ Setsuna ] 2014-07-16T19:23:49+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on September 16, 2014 at 4:30:28 PM

Artist: Haruna Luna
Title: Startear -TV size ver.-
Source: ソードアート・オンラインⅡ
Tags: Ending Sword Art Online II kakifly gokugohan12468 [Vincent]
BPM: 134
Filesize: 23605kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:

Easy (1.6 stars, 107 notes)
Goku's Normal (2.21 stars, 160 notes)
Hard (2.95 stars, 207 notes)
kakifly's Hard (2.91 stars, 198 notes)
Vincent's Insane (3.55 stars, 270 notes)

Download: Haruna Luna - Startear -TV size ver.-
Download: Haruna Luna - Startear -TV size ver.- (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
SAO II ED - Startear
Insane: 100% By: Vincent
Hard: 100% By: Me
Hard: 100% By: kakifly
Normal: 100% By: gokugohan12468
Easy: 100% By: Me
Modders
kakifly
Mana
Chaoslitz
SoGa
fm4a93au04

Last edited by [ Setsuna ] 2014-09-16T23:32:56+00:00, edited 36 times in total.

Mana

19 posts

Joined January 2012

Mana 2014-07-17T19:47:08+00:00

[*] 00:01:427 (1,2,3,4) - This can be slightly enhanced if you make them zigzagged. :3

http://puu.sh/afGqC/68c108d2cc.jpg TO http://puu.sh/afGwT/50d86d23d5.jpg

[*] 00:05:009 (1) - Out of bound. Slight out of bound is all right, but almost whole circle is out. This will be covered by scoreboard while playing.

[*] 00:08:815 (4) - Same as above.

[*] 00:21:128 (4) - Same as above.

[*] 00:26:501 (5) - Same as above.

http://puu.sh/afGS9/3b9851e331.jpg

[*] 00:58:516 (4) - Oh no...

http://puu.sh/afGWG/9a3ab5c557.jpg

[*] 00:59:412 (5) - This might be all right. But check with other modders since we have different standards between others.

[*] 01:01:650 (3) - Playable, but risky and not recommended.

[*] 01:14:188 (2) - Fix.

http://puu.sh/afHaK/464aba273a.jpg

Seems like this is really easy for insane difficulty unless you are actually making a DT map (with those AR8 and stuff)

[ Setsuna ]

422 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

[ Setsuna ] 2014-07-18T00:24:36+00:00

Mana wrote:
[*] 00:01:427 (1,2,3,4) - This can be slightly enhanced if you make them zigzagged. :3

http://puu.sh/afGqC/68c108d2cc.jpg TO http://puu.sh/afGwT/50d86d23d5.jpg

[*] 00:05:009 (1) - Out of bound. Slight out of bound is all right, but almost whole circle is out. This will be covered by scoreboard while playing.

[*] 00:08:815 (4) - Same as above.

[*] 00:21:128 (4) - Same as above.

[*] 00:26:501 (5) - Same as above.

http://puu.sh/afGS9/3b9851e331.jpg

[*] 00:58:516 (4) - Oh no...

http://puu.sh/afGWG/9a3ab5c557.jpg

[*] 00:59:412 (5) - This might be all right. But check with other modders since we have different standards between others.

[*] 01:01:650 (3) - Playable, but risky and not recommended.

[*] 01:14:188 (2) - Fix.

http://puu.sh/afHaK/464aba273a.jpg

Seems like this is really easy for insane difficulty unless you are actually making a DT map (with those AR8 and stuff)

Thanks for mod

Kyouren

5,657 posts

Joined October 2012

Kyouren 2014-07-18T05:02:12+00:00

You can ask me for make GD~

You need Normal and Easy diff~

kakifly

940 posts

Joined April 2014

kakifly 2014-07-18T19:06:12+00:00

ok modding your insane

General

- Avoid ending sliders on largest white ticks, why? cuz their the strongest beat and should be emphasized with the start of a note (also avoid going through one,)
-NC's start on largest white ticks (also after breaks and spinners)
-proper blanketing : when you blanket around approach circles like this

----

00:06:128 (2) - too far from the prev slider, move closer
00:10:158 (3) - try this pattern

00:13:516 (2) - move to x152 y184
00:15:083 (6) - move somewhere around x344 y240
00:19:337 (1,2,3) - starting and ending sliders on red ticks are awkward to play try this

00:33:665 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - flow is bad, arrange these so it feels smoother to play
00:35:904 (6) - if you listen to the music; this is a potential place for a stream
00:51:352 - add note
01:02:770 (5) - start at 01:02:546 instead
01:04:113 (1) - try this

01:17:210 (2,3) - what are the purpose of these??
01:23:815 (7) - end at 01:25:158

[ Setsuna ]

422 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

[ Setsuna ] 2014-07-19T23:57:21+00:00

gokugohan12468 wrote:
You can ask me for make GD~

You need Normal and Easy diff~

Yeah please do

Micka

349 posts

Joined June 2013

Micka 2014-07-26T04:03:45+00:00

[ Setsuna ] wrote:
gokugohan12468 wrote:
You can ask me for make GD~

You need Normal and Easy diff~

Yeah please do

no plss.. im not offending gokugohan . but pls no

Chaoslitz

Elite Mapper / Elite Storyboarder

2,325 posts

Joined November 2013

Chaoslitz 2014-09-07T08:47:50+00:00

Insane

00:08:591 (3) - Move this a little bit upper
00:27:173 (1,2) - Switch the place of the note and slider for a stronger rhythm
00:53:143 (4) - Change to this http://puu.sh/bp3Nv/53a03aaa5e.jpg
00:57:844 (2) - Try reverse the dircetion
01:03:665 (8,9,1) - May be like this? http://puu.sh/bp3Sj/fab73d9c6c.jpg
01:23:815 (7) - Long slider overlap previous notes

Not a really long mod...but I hope it helps ;3

[ Setsuna ]

422 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

[ Setsuna ] 2014-09-08T04:10:59+00:00

Chaoslitz wrote:
Insane

00:08:591 (3) - Move this a little bit upper Done
00:27:173 (1,2) - Switch the place of the note and slider for a stronger rhythm Done
00:53:143 (4) - Change to this http://puu.sh/bp3Nv/53a03aaa5e.jpg Done
00:57:844 (2) - Try reverse the dircetion Done
01:03:665 (8,9,1) - May be like this? http://puu.sh/bp3Sj/fab73d9c6c.jpgerrr done?
01:23:815 (7) - Long slider overlap previous notes nah

Not a really long mod...but I hope it helps ;3

ty for mod brah

SoGa

236 posts

Joined June 2013

SoGa 2014-09-09T02:47:51+00:00

Hi Hi ^^ since im a newby modder , this mod might be helpless ._. From SoGa's Modding Queue

[General]
Goku's Normal ,Kakifly's Hard, No hittsound .You must use hitsounds. Without these, things get way too monotonous as you are throwing away one of the main elements of variation present in mapping. You don't need to place them on every note (and are discouraged from doing so), but they must at least be frequently heard when playing.
eventho u guys r in WIP ~~
[Goku's Normal]

00:02:994 (2) - how about this ?
Iyaa
00:04:785 (4,5) - U can try this but w/e if u want to keep it .
Iyaa
00:07:919 (2) - 3 Notes like the pic or a reverse Slider sound better tho
00:08:591 (5) - Change this , nott really fit there
00:09:934 (6) - this Overmap sound bad
00:17:322 (4) - Finish
00:18:218 (2,3,4) - How about this ?
Iyaa
00:20:680 (3) - Clap at the head
00:37:247 (4) - This one move to here 00:36:576 -
00:40:829 (1,2,3) - Change something like this ? (u can ignore this)
Iyaa
00:45:979 (1) - This Slider end here , Normal's spinner needs a gap of one beat with post notes
00:54:038 (2) - not really recommend here ,but if u want ~
00:58:740 (1,2) - Try to not overlap here (not beauty xd
01:15:979 (2) - ^
01:10:606 (2) - Change to 2 notes ?
[Kakifly's Hard]

Overview is good but add something to those blank , sound strange
00:54:934 - Actually u can move 00:55:158 (1) - to here, since the vocal is a little more downbeat than it.(Ignore this)
01:01:203 This blank add something
[Hard]

00:02:322 (4) - Don't Overmap here
00:05:009 (1) - Maybe Change this one , not fit here
00:28:292 (2,3,4) - Ds
00:36:464 Don't set 100% , too noisy
00:42:844 (1) - seems weird
01:00:979 (2) - X:284 Y:252
01:04:561 (4,5,6) - DS
01:13:516 (7) - Add A note here ? or just change the slider end to the red line
01:21:800 Add a note here
Ins is good ~

Sry for this poor english

End ! GL

[ Setsuna ]

422 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

[ Setsuna ] 2014-09-10T01:14:59+00:00

SoGa wrote:
Hi Hi ^^ since im a newby modder , this mod might be helpless ._. From SoGa's Modding Queue

[General]
Goku's Normal ,Kakifly's Hard, No hittsound .You must use hitsounds. Without these, things get way too monotonous as you are throwing away one of the main elements of variation present in mapping. You don't need to place them on every note (and are discouraged from doing so), but they must at least be frequently heard when playing. Noted, thanks!
eventho u guys r in WIP ~~
[Goku's Normal] can't give you reply on this since I'm not goku, I'll tell him to look at this when he gets on

00:02:994 (2) - how about this ?
Iyaa
00:04:785 (4,5) - U can try this but w/e if u want to keep it .
Iyaa
00:07:919 (2) - 3 Notes like the pic or a reverse Slider sound better tho
00:08:591 (5) - Change this , nott really fit there
00:09:934 (6) - this Overmap sound bad
00:17:322 (4) - Finish
00:18:218 (2,3,4) - How about this ?
Iyaa
00:20:680 (3) - Clap at the head
00:37:247 (4) - This one move to here 00:36:576 -
00:40:829 (1,2,3) - Change something like this ? (u can ignore this)
Iyaa
00:45:979 (1) - This Slider end here , Normal's spinner needs a gap of one beat with post notes
00:54:038 (2) - not really recommend here ,but if u want ~
00:58:740 (1,2) - Try to not overlap here (not beauty xd
01:15:979 (2) - ^
01:10:606 (2) - Change to 2 notes ?
[Kakifly's Hard]Same thing with Goku, shes on alrdy, so I notified her

Overview is good but add something to those blank , sound strange
00:54:934 - Actually u can move 00:55:158 (1) - to here, since the vocal is a little more downbeat than it.(Ignore this)
01:01:203 This blank add something
[Hard]

00:02:322 (4) - Don't Overmap here fixed
00:05:009 (1) - Maybe Change this one , not fit here kkk
00:28:292 (2,3,4) - Ds okayyy
00:36:464 Don't set 100% , too noisy changed to 60%
00:42:844 (1) - seems weird changed
01:00:979 (2) - X:284 Y:252 Don't see the problem here.... Nothing changed
01:04:561 (4,5,6) - DS Fixed
01:13:516 (7) - Add A note here ? or just change the slider end to the red line Thanks for pointing out this mistake!
01:21:800 Add a note here
Ins is good ~

Sry for this poor english

End ! GL

Thanks for mod!

kakifly

940 posts

Joined April 2014

kakifly 2014-09-11T03:44:56+00:00

SoGa wrote:
[Kakifly's Hard]

Overview is good but add something to those blank , sound strange
00:54:934 - Actually u can move 00:55:158 (1) - to here, since the vocal is a little more downbeat than it.(Ignore this) actually i was following the instruementals; i dont see a point in mapping that part and covering up a downbeat emphasized by both a vocal and instrumental; sorry
01:01:203 This blank add something ok added circle

finished with hitsounds so heres the update

SPOILER

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: SAOIIStartear.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 48329
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 18889
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Startear -TV size ver.-
TitleUnicode:Startear –TV size ver.-
Artist:Haruna Luna
ArtistUnicode:春奈るな
Creator:[ Setsuna ]
Version:kakifly's Hard
Source:ソードアート・オンラインⅡ
Tags:Ending Sword Art Online II konoshin69 gokugohan12468 [Vincent]
BeatmapID:459441
BeatmapSetID:193354

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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256,192,85606,12,0,89188,0:0:0:0:

Kyouren

5,657 posts

Joined October 2012

Kyouren 2014-09-13T08:57:01+00:00

Thanks for mod, but i remap my normal diff~

Remap (I remapp because not same with music and rhythm, so remap)
Add Hitsounds~

Here my diff!
Enjoy playing it~

Goku's Normal

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: SAOIIStartear.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 48329
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 18889,45979,47994,48218,48329,49561,49785,64113,78329,81912,85606,87844
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 3.999998

[Metadata]
Title:Startear -TV size ver.-
TitleUnicode:Startear –TV size ver.-
Artist:Haruna Luna
ArtistUnicode:春奈るな
Creator:[ Setsuna ]
Version:Goku's Normal
Source:ソードアート・オンラインⅡ
Tags:Ending Sword Art Online II kakifly gokugohan12468 [Vincent]
BeatmapID:464600
BeatmapSetID:193354

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"687474703a2f2f7075752e73682f61713758792f343733326431306233352e6a7067.jpg",0,0
Video,0,"SAOIIEnding.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
1427,447.761194029851,4,2,0,40,1,0
4897,-100,4,2,0,45,0,0
11273,-100,4,2,0,50,0,0
12173,-100,4,2,0,50,0,0
40837,-100,4,2,0,50,0,0
49785,-100,4,2,0,60,0,1
64113,-100,4,2,0,60,0,1
78329,-100,4,2,0,40,0,1
81800,-100,4,2,0,55,0,1
85606,-100,4,2,0,40,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 28,227,153
Combo2 : 132,247,194
Combo3 : 159,203,255
Combo4 : 128,128,255

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80,124,76427,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,92,76650,6,0,P|224:56|292:80,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,112,77322,2,0,L|452:112,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,196,77770,2,0,L|520:196,2,70,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,220,78441,5,4,0:0:0:0:
208,304,78889,1,4,0:0:0:0:
52,244,79337,1,4,0:0:0:0:
160,116,79785,1,8,0:0:0:0:
244,108,80009,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,52,80232,5,4,0:0:0:0:
436,156,80680,1,4,0:0:0:0:
332,288,81128,1,4,0:0:0:0:
164,300,81576,1,8,0:0:0:0:
108,240,81800,1,8,0:0:0:0:
136,160,82024,5,4,0:0:0:0:
220,160,82247,2,0,P|248:116|252:68,1,70
336,112,82695,2,0,P|348:60|344:24,2,70,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,188,83367,2,0,L|392:264,2,70,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,200,84038,5,0,0:0:0:0:
204,216,84262,2,0,P|152:208|120:108,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,80,84934,2,0,L|240:36,2,70,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,85606,12,0,87844,0:0:0:0:

[ Setsuna ]

422 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

[ Setsuna ] 2014-09-14T05:45:44+00:00

uploaded!

-ScarIet

9 posts

Joined January 2014

-ScarIet 2014-09-15T23:10:02+00:00

Good Beatmap is well synchronized but out of sync in some parts.

fm4a93au04

129 posts

Joined March 2012

fm4a93au04 2014-09-16T09:39:30+00:00

Hello , from my queue .

fm4a93au04's standard modding and GD ( ? ) queue

As my rule , E / N / H modding .

Wait … Why there’s 2 H diff in it ? I prefer to choose 1 of them …

Oh just kidding ~ let’s start ~

Modding

[General]

1. You can just make your red line as S:C7 … No need to add a green line on red line =..= .

2. Remove letterbox , since there is no break time in your map .

[Easy]

00:01:427 – Turn down this green line’s vol. ?

00:06:352 (1,2) – Let them a little apart . Maybe blanket or something .

Example :

00:05:009 ~ 00:07:471 – Try this rhythm maybe ?

1 : 00:05:009 ~ 00:05:680 .

2 : 00:06:576 ~ 00:07:471 .

----------------------------------------------

00:19:337 – Add a gerrn line here to turn down vol. and add some N-H ( Normal Hit ) or other sound at 00:19:337 ~ 00:48:441 . Like your kiai time . If necessary , add green line to Defult Soft to gain S-F .

00:31:874 (1) – Scale it to 00:33:218 . Remove NC .

00:33:665 (2) – If you follow previous suggestion , then NC here .

I prefer to change pattern to follow 01:11:277 . 01:11:949 . 01:12:844 . and 01:14:859 . 01:15:531 . 01:16:427 . I don’t like always follow 1/2 beat .

Example :

In this pic ,

2’s head : 01:10:382 .

3’s end : 01:11:949 .

----------------------------------

01:20:680 (2) – Prefer to reverse it and change following patterns .

01:23:815 (4,5) – Prefer to :

01:25:606 (1) – Add a green line at end to turn down the vol. . Suggest , 5% vol.

[Goku's Normal]

Try to add some Defult N ( normal ) or D ( drum ) sound in your map , since S-C not very fit this song .

00:01:427 ~ 00:07:024 - Remove sliderslide sound =..= . Better imo .

00:07:919 (4,5,6) – C ( clap ) is very rude here . Imo for sure .

00:22:919 (1,3) – Avoid this overlap . Not pretty imo .

00:28:292 (1) – Try this ?

00:31:203 – Add a note here ?

00:31:427 (7) – If you follow previous suggestion , reverse it and delete 00:31:874 (1) . Example :

00:33:665 (1) – I prefer to remove W on sliderbody =..= .

00:40:382 (4,5) – C not very fit this part . Try more possibility .

00:44:412 (1,2,3) – Reference .

00:47:994 – Prefer to delete it .

00:49:337 (2,1,2,3) – ^.

1’s head : 00:49:785 .

3 : 00:51:128 .

-------------------------------------

^ , Same rhythm copy to 00:51:576 . and other correspond area ( match vocal )

--------------------------------------

01:04:113 (1,2,3,4,5,6) – Prefer to match vocal as previous .

01:07:695 (1,2) – Why @@ ? It doesn’t match anything ~~~~~~~~~~~ !!!!!!

01:08:815 (3,4,1) - ^ . <- Reference =..= .

01:09:934 (2) - …… There is no any sustain …… So why use long slider ?

Do something to more emphasize 01:11:277 . 01:11:949 . 01:12:844 . and 01:14:859 . 01:15:531 . 01:16:427 ~~~~~ WHY NOT @W@” ?

If you have no idea then PM me . I will make a example for you by giving code .

01:24:038 (1,2) – Delete ~~~ ! If you follow this , then you can also consider change 01:24:934 (3) . ‘s pattern to make it harder .

[kakifly's Hard]

Try to add some Defult N ( normal ) or D ( drum ) sound in your map , since there is almost only S-H ( Soft Hitnormal ) in your map .

Try more possibility on this map .

00:01:427 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,2) – Remove W on sliderbody ?

00:21:128 (1) - ^ .

00:26:501 (1) – Add W on sliderbody ?

00:30:755 (3) – Change it to 00:29:859 (5) ?

00:43:740 (5) – Reference :

00:45:755 – Add a note ?

00:55:158 (1,2) – Try this ?

01:00:531 (1,2,3,4) - ^ .

01:08:367 (2,3,4,1) - ^ .

01:20:232 (1,2,3,4) – Make jumps ? Like :

[Hard]

Sound suggestion as E

00:05:009 (1,2,3,4,5) – Reference .

00:07:695 – Delete .

… Sorry , I tired … So , can I end here ?

Sorry . ( and there is not something really bad in your map , but you can still improve it a lot ~ )

Special on sound .Try more possibility ~

That's all . Goog luck ~

[ Setsuna ]

422 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

[ Setsuna ] 2014-09-16T21:26:45+00:00

fm4a93au04 wrote:
Hello , from my queue . Hi lol

fm4a93au04's standard modding and GD ( ? ) queue

As my rule , E / N / H modding .

Wait … Why there’s 2 H diff in it ? I prefer to choose 1 of them … xD

Oh just kidding ~ let’s start ~

Modding
[General]

1. You can just make your red line as S:C7 … No need to add a green line on red line =..= . Actually, I wanna keep it like this

2. Remove letterbox , since there is no break time in your map . I don't understand lol

[Easy]

00:01:427 – Turn down this green line’s vol. ? changed to 30%

00:06:352 (1,2) – Let them a little apart . Maybe blanket or something . ok

Example :

00:05:009 ~ 00:07:471 – Try this rhythm maybe ? doesn't sound right so no D:

1 : 00:05:009 ~ 00:05:680 .

2 : 00:06:576 ~ 00:07:471 .

----------------------------------------------

00:19:337 – Add a gerrn line here to turn down vol. and add some N-H ( Normal Hit ) or other sound at 00:19:337 ~ 00:48:441 . Like your kiai time . If necessary , add green line to Defult Soft to gain S-F . Changed sound to 50%

00:31:874 (1) – Scale it to 00:33:218 . Remove NC . changed the slider, so ok

00:33:665 (2) – If you follow previous suggestion , then NC here .

I prefer to change pattern to follow 01:11:277 . 01:11:949 . 01:12:844 . and 01:14:859 . 01:15:531 . 01:16:427 . I don’t like always follow 1/2 beat .

Example :

In this pic ,

2’s head : 01:10:382 .

3’s end : 01:11:949 .

----------------------------------

01:20:680 (2) – Prefer to reverse it and change following patterns . no thanks

01:23:815 (4,5) – Prefer to : nope D:

01:25:606 (1) – Add a green line at end to turn down the vol. . Suggest , 5% vol. ok

[Goku's Normal] Not goku, cant mod this

Try to add some Defult N ( normal ) or D ( drum ) sound in your map , since S-C not very fit this song .

00:01:427 ~ 00:07:024 - Remove sliderslide sound =..= . Better imo .

00:07:919 (4,5,6) – C ( clap ) is very rude here . Imo for sure .

00:22:919 (1,3) – Avoid this overlap . Not pretty imo .

00:28:292 (1) – Try this ?

00:31:203 – Add a note here ?

00:31:427 (7) – If you follow previous suggestion , reverse it and delete 00:31:874 (1) . Example :

00:33:665 (1) – I prefer to remove W on sliderbody =..= .

00:40:382 (4,5) – C not very fit this part . Try more possibility .

00:44:412 (1,2,3) – Reference .

00:47:994 – Prefer to delete it .

00:49:337 (2,1,2,3) – ^.

1’s head : 00:49:785 .

3 : 00:51:128 .

-------------------------------------

^ , Same rhythm copy to 00:51:576 . and other correspond area ( match vocal )

--------------------------------------

01:04:113 (1,2,3,4,5,6) – Prefer to match vocal as previous .

01:07:695 (1,2) – Why @@ ? It doesn’t match anything ~~~~~~~~~~~ !!!!!!

01:08:815 (3,4,1) - ^ . <- Reference =..= .

01:09:934 (2) - …… There is no any sustain …… So why use long slider ?

Do something to more emphasize 01:11:277 . 01:11:949 . 01:12:844 . and 01:14:859 . 01:15:531 . 01:16:427 ~~~~~ WHY NOT @W@” ?

If you have no idea then PM me . I will make a example for you by giving code .

01:24:038 (1,2) – Delete ~~~ ! If you follow this , then you can also consider change 01:24:934 (3) . ‘s pattern to make it harder .

[kakifly's Hard] same thing as goku

Try to add some Defult N ( normal ) or D ( drum ) sound in your map , since there is almost only S-H ( Soft Hitnormal ) in your map .

Try more possibility on this map .

00:01:427 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,2) – Remove W on sliderbody ?

00:21:128 (1) - ^ .

00:26:501 (1) – Add W on sliderbody ?

00:30:755 (3) – Change it to 00:29:859 (5) ?

00:43:740 (5) – Reference :

00:45:755 – Add a note ?

00:55:158 (1,2) – Try this ?

01:00:531 (1,2,3,4) - ^ .

01:08:367 (2,3,4,1) - ^ .

01:20:232 (1,2,3,4) – Make jumps ? Like :

[Hard]

Sound suggestion as E

00:05:009 (1,2,3,4,5) – Reference .

00:07:695 – Delete .

… Sorry , I tired … So , can I end here ? ok

Sorry . ( and there is not something really bad in your map , but you can still improve it a lot ~ )

Special on sound .Try more possibility ~

That's all . Goog luck ~

Thanks for mod!

Pho

1,785 posts

Joined November 2013

Pho 2014-09-21T23:09:55+00:00

From my modding queue~ Sry for the late reply >.<

Trifle: Just small things you might want to consider. Blanket's are trifle for me as well.
Preference: Just my humble opinion on stuff.
Written in bold: Fix this up as soon as possible.

Please don't feel sad that I don't mod hitsounds and NC as these would make my mod explode and I don't feel it's ready to talk about those yet (I usually mod these when i think the map is more or less ready for rank).

[General]

Toggle off widescreen support - as you have no storyboard implemented - as well as letterboxes - since there are no breaks in your maps.
I saw through all your diffs and noticed that all different starting points for kiai times. Not sure what happened here, but the kiai time should start at 00:51:128 (4) - and end at 01:23:815 - , don't mix it up too much.
The SV through all your maps (in upgoing difficulty): 0.9 -> 1.4 -> 1.8 -> 1.2 -> 2.0 ... I can't see a reason for the jump in SV increasement between easy and normal as well the 0.6 SV difference between the hard maps. It's ruining the whole diff spread. Please inform your GDers (Goku & kakifly) about this.
Set cooldown off in all your maps, why did Goku and Vincent want this in their maps anyway?
Tags conflicts with kakifly's HD. Please fix this.

[Easy]

I'll mod this map as if it were an easy diff, just to make sure
Make sure that you use consistent DS throughout the whole map (only 1 DS multiplier, for example 1.1xDS) and do not switch between DS (not even small jumps should be done here, even in normal maps). You seem to have a pretty low grid level on, which I'd never suggest since it causes so many DS issues, e.g. at 00:35:456 (3) - http://puu.sh/bIsl7/d65ace084d.jpg
Make sure the DS between previous and next is kept very close to each other (a difference of 0.03 in DS is optimal)
Check NC through the whole map, it looks like you put it randomly here. For this type of song, I suggest putting a NC after every 2 measures (at every 2nd long tick).
00:13:516 (3) - Put the tail of the backslider downwards so newer players don't tend to click the upcoming circle.
00:18:665 (5,1) - Polarity issue (red to white tick polarity) which is pretty hard for newer players to understand. You should change this into a 1/2 beat slider to fix the issue.
00:27:844 (3,1) - Please no stacking in easy maps, it's hard to read for newer players. Also check that slider shape, the hook looks somewhat cripled.
00:30:531 (4,5) - Same as 00:13:516 (3) -
00:31:874 (6) - Please, don't use such hard-readable sliders (really sharp angle at the anchor) and make it smoother to play: http://puu.sh/bIs6F/a1b4db8972.jpg
00:36:352 (4,5) - I recommend you just change this into a backslider. Not only will it be more comfortable to play, but it will also solve that offbeat slider problem here (slider 5 starts at red tick and ends on white tick, causing a pretty unnatural rhythm).
00:39:934 (2,3) -
00:49:337 (1) - Small break and then 3 upcoming 1/2 beats feels a bit too much for newer players for me, as you can easily simplify it: http://puu.sh/bItu3/8996ae3577.jpg
00:49:785 (2) - NC, since the kiai time should actually start here.
00:55:158 (1) - Trifle: make a smoother hook here.
01:00:083 (4,1) - Unstack.
01:07:247 (7) - Set a circle at this position and move slider up to 01:07:695 (7) - . Otherwise, you are missing important hard beats here.
01:10:829 (3) - Slider ends on a hard beat, please avoid that by just ctrl+g'ing the following notes 01:10:382 (2,3) - and reposition them (DS please)
01:13:516 (1,2) - Switch to a backslider here and add a circle at 01:13:964 (2) - to keep flow constant while still being manageable to play.
01:16:650 (1,2) - Do neither jump nor stack in easy maps.
01:20:680 (2,3,4) - Offbeat-sliders, you should better go with: http://puu.sh/bIuj0/374a1ffd34.jpg
Please work hard on this if you want this to make it through the ranking process. YOu should first of all fix all the DS issues.

[Normal]

Easy SV: 0.9. Normal SV: 1.4. There is like 0.5 difference in here, which will probably cause issues. The second reason is that it collides with kakifly's generous SV decision.
I suggest you go down to 1.10 / 1.20xSV to overcome this problem.
00:17:546 (1) - Start the slider at 00:16:427 (2,2) - , sounds more appealing to the song.
00:18:889 (4) - Offbeat-slider (it ends on a long white tick). I suggest Ctrl+g'ing these 00:18:665 (3,4) - .
00:19:561 (1,2) - This sounds like it was made just to make the flow keep going and doesn't really complement the music at all. Try this rhythm pattern: http://puu.sh/bIwi4/24f0546664.jpg
00:22:919 (1) - You miss an important hard beat with this long slider, so please split it up: http://puu.sh/bIws5/1b4cca0a8a.jpg
00:24:710 (1) - ^
00:30:307 (3) - I suggest you delete this note and place one at 00:29:412 (2) - , seems more fitting to the music to me.
00:36:800 (5) - Make this into a circle, the slider is ending at a place where there's no real sound to support actually.
00:37:247 (1) - Make this into a 1/2 beat slider for consistent flow (voice is singing, so i don't really understand the meaning of this single circle here).
00:40:606 (5) - Delete circle here, there is no beat to support here and I can't see a need for this circle here to happen.
00:47:994 (3) - Delete circle here for better emphasis on drums
00:49:785 (1,2) - Ctrl+g and reposition these. Please don't sacrifice rhythm for symmetry.
00:51:800 (2,3,4,5,6) - Preference: Personally, I don't really like the rhythm here, but actually start a 1/1 beat slider at 00:51:576 - and one at 00:52:247 - to fit more to the vocals.
I recommend to check your rhythm patterns again, they don't feel like they fit to the music, especially in kiai times. It's good to keep a constant flow in your maps, but keep in mind to make small breaks when the music is indicating it (as this song is not made for constant pressure).

[Hard]

Irregular NC issues here as well, go a similar way like the Easy diff.
00:01:427 (1,2,3,1,2) - You have 1/2 beats here to support the vocals, but leave the ones out before the green combo and at 00:02:994 - . And if you want to go with the piano, I recommend to fuse 00:01:427 (1,2) - into a slider for a softer introduction to the song.
00:05:009 (1,2) - Not sure, are you trying a blanket or an overlap here (or maybe both)? Anyway, it looks ugly, so please fix this (just an example): http://puu.sh/bIyGq/121a759e78.jpg
00:06:576 (4,7) - You're doing the stack wrong.
00:11:053 (4) - Triple here, or else the beats end too fast before the strings are even finished.
00:11:949 (8) - Delete and position the end of the previous backslider here as the strings actually start on the white beat first. DOn't forget NC.
00:25:382 (2,3) - These look unsnapped to me, what BS divisor did you used here?
01:03:665 (4) - Players will probably tend to click the triple at 01:04:113 (1,2,3) - Since you make inappropriate DS changes here. Please fix this.
01:23:815 (7) - Bad overlapping here with 01:23:143 (4,5,6) - . It should also end on 01:25:158 - already.
Same as Easy, this map needs a lot of work on flow and patterns structure. Learn to set jumps appropriately and not random (like some even experienced mappers do from time to time lol) and look for more appealing patterns. This map needs more shape.

[kakifly's Hard]

00:04:785 - Leaving this beat out just to follow the piano perfectly doesn't fit here as this 3/2 beat gap feels really weird at this place. Please add a circle here or, what would probably be better for you, end the 00:03:889 (2) - slider hereinstead of the white tick (That also makes the stack at this place inappropriate).
00:05:009 (1,2,1) - Distances within the violet combo are okay, but Why is it so much lower to the next combo? Please increase it.
00:10:270 (1) - Preference: End this on the white tick already to give a little bit preparation time on the upcoming backslider.
00:18:218 (3,4,5) - Stopping the flow here doesn't work out better than if you'd add a distance between these circles. I recommend to position 4 at 197,220.
00:29:859 (5) - Change to a circle here and stack it on 00:29:859 (5,1) - . Feels more appealing to play as the vocal is pretty strong in this part.
00:39:038 (1,2) - Blanket check again.
00:45:307 (8) - Again, replace this 1/6 triplet again for a small jumping section here: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2060192 . The problem with yours is that there needs to be a sound at the red tick at 00:45:531 - and the 1/6 backslider doesn't reach this far (and would feel very inappropriate if you would enlarge it to this place).
00:50:456 (2) - Why is this still a 1/6 slider, the drums are 1/4 beats now if I'm not deaf. Also rearrange DS here.
01:02:322 - Add a 1/2 beat circle here, this is an unnatural long gap here and I don't like these kind of gaps if they music is still playing on.
01:17:098 (2,3,4,5) - Why the sudden DS increase at 3->4? The music doesn't really indicate a small triple jump here, so please tone it down.
01:25:158 (3) - Circle instead of slider here please, the beats coming with this slider feel very additive and don't add anything significant to the music.
Otherwise pretty solid map. Some flow and patterns improvable still.

If Vincent wants a mod from me for his Insane diff, tell him to PM me.
Putting the harder GD diffs aside, this mapset still needs a lot of work, mostly due to the creator of the map (sorry if that sounds too harsh, but that's its current state). I still hope and give many wishes that you can rank this map one day.

Well then, I'm out! o/

[ Setsuna ]

422 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

[ Setsuna ] 2014-09-22T02:04:07+00:00

paseli wrote:
From my modding queue~ Sry for the late reply >.<

Trifle: Just small things you might want to consider. Blanket's are trifle for me as well.
Preference: Just my humble opinion on stuff.
Written in bold: Fix this up as soon as possible.

Please don't feel sad that I don't mod hitsounds and NC as these would make my mod explode and I don't feel it's ready to talk about those yet (I usually mod these when i think the map is more or less ready for rank).

[General]
Toggle off widescreen support - as you have no storyboard implemented - as well as letterboxes - since there are no breaks in your maps.
I saw through all your diffs and noticed that all different starting points for kiai times. Not sure what happened here, but the kiai time should start at 00:51:128 (4) - and end at 01:23:815 - , don't mix it up too much.
The SV through all your maps (in upgoing difficulty): 0.9 -> 1.4 -> 1.8 -> 1.2 -> 2.0 ... I can't see a reason for the jump in SV increasement between easy and normal as well the 0.6 SV difference between the hard maps. It's ruining the whole diff spread. Please inform your GDers (Goku & kakifly) about this.
Set cooldown off in all your maps, why did Goku and Vincent want this in their maps anyway?
Tags conflicts with kakifly's HD. Please fix this.
[Easy]
I'll mod this map as if it were an easy diff, just to make sure
Make sure that you use consistent DS throughout the whole map (only 1 DS multiplier, for example 1.1xDS) and do not switch between DS (not even small jumps should be done here, even in normal maps). You seem to have a pretty low grid level on, which I'd never suggest since it causes so many DS issues, e.g. at 00:35:456 (3) - http://puu.sh/bIsl7/d65ace084d.jpg
Make sure the DS between previous and next is kept very close to each other (a difference of 0.03 in DS is optimal)
Check NC through the whole map, it looks like you put it randomly here. For this type of song, I suggest putting a NC after every 2 measures (at every 2nd long tick).
00:13:516 (3) - Put the tail of the backslider downwards so newer players don't tend to click the upcoming circle.
00:18:665 (5,1) - Polarity issue (red to white tick polarity) which is pretty hard for newer players to understand. You should change this into a 1/2 beat slider to fix the issue.
00:27:844 (3,1) - Please no stacking in easy maps, it's hard to read for newer players. Also check that slider shape, the hook looks somewhat cripled.
00:30:531 (4,5) - Same as 00:13:516 (3) -
00:31:874 (6) - Please, don't use such hard-readable sliders (really sharp angle at the anchor) and make it smoother to play: http://puu.sh/bIs6F/a1b4db8972.jpg
00:36:352 (4,5) - I recommend you just change this into a backslider. Not only will it be more comfortable to play, but it will also solve that offbeat slider problem here (slider 5 starts at red tick and ends on white tick, causing a pretty unnatural rhythm).
00:39:934 (2,3) -
00:49:337 (1) - Small break and then 3 upcoming 1/2 beats feels a bit too much for newer players for me, as you can easily simplify it: http://puu.sh/bItu3/8996ae3577.jpg
00:49:785 (2) - NC, since the kiai time should actually start here.
00:55:158 (1) - Trifle: make a smoother hook here.
01:00:083 (4,1) - Unstack.
01:07:247 (7) - Set a circle at this position and move slider up to 01:07:695 (7) - . Otherwise, you are missing important hard beats here.
01:10:829 (3) - Slider ends on a hard beat, please avoid that by just ctrl+g'ing the following notes 01:10:382 (2,3) - and reposition them (DS please)
01:13:516 (1,2) - Switch to a backslider here and add a circle at 01:13:964 (2) - to keep flow constant while still being manageable to play.
01:16:650 (1,2) - Do neither jump nor stack in easy maps.
01:20:680 (2,3,4) - Offbeat-sliders, you should better go with: http://puu.sh/bIuj0/374a1ffd34.jpg
Please work hard on this if you want this to make it through the ranking process. YOu should first of all fix all the DS issues.
[Normal]
Easy SV: 0.9. Normal SV: 1.4. There is like 0.5 difference in here, which will probably cause issues. The second reason is that it collides with kakifly's generous SV decision.
I suggest you go down to 1.10 / 1.20xSV to overcome this problem.
00:17:546 (1) - Start the slider at 00:16:427 (2,2) - , sounds more appealing to the song.
00:18:889 (4) - Offbeat-slider (it ends on a long white tick). I suggest Ctrl+g'ing these 00:18:665 (3,4) - .
00:19:561 (1,2) - This sounds like it was made just to make the flow keep going and doesn't really complement the music at all. Try this rhythm pattern: http://puu.sh/bIwi4/24f0546664.jpg
00:22:919 (1) - You miss an important hard beat with this long slider, so please split it up: http://puu.sh/bIws5/1b4cca0a8a.jpg
00:24:710 (1) - ^
00:30:307 (3) - I suggest you delete this note and place one at 00:29:412 (2) - , seems more fitting to the music to me.
00:36:800 (5) - Make this into a circle, the slider is ending at a place where there's no real sound to support actually.
00:37:247 (1) - Make this into a 1/2 beat slider for consistent flow (voice is singing, so i don't really understand the meaning of this single circle here).
00:40:606 (5) - Delete circle here, there is no beat to support here and I can't see a need for this circle here to happen.
00:47:994 (3) - Delete circle here for better emphasis on drums
00:49:785 (1,2) - Ctrl+g and reposition these. Please don't sacrifice rhythm for symmetry.
00:51:800 (2,3,4,5,6) - Preference: Personally, I don't really like the rhythm here, but actually start a 1/1 beat slider at 00:51:576 - and one at 00:52:247 - to fit more to the vocals.
I recommend to check your rhythm patterns again, they don't feel like they fit to the music, especially in kiai times. It's good to keep a constant flow in your maps, but keep in mind to make small breaks when the music is indicating it (as this song is not made for constant pressure).
[Hard]
Irregular NC issues here as well, go a similar way like the Easy diff.
00:01:427 (1,2,3,1,2) - You have 1/2 beats here to support the vocals, but leave the ones out before the green combo and at 00:02:994 - . And if you want to go with the piano, I recommend to fuse 00:01:427 (1,2) - into a slider for a softer introduction to the song.
00:05:009 (1,2) - Not sure, are you trying a blanket or an overlap here (or maybe both)? Anyway, it looks ugly, so please fix this (just an example): http://puu.sh/bIyGq/121a759e78.jpg
00:06:576 (4,7) - You're doing the stack wrong.
00:11:053 (4) - Triple here, or else the beats end too fast before the strings are even finished.
00:11:949 (8) - Delete and position the end of the previous backslider here as the strings actually start on the white beat first. DOn't forget NC.
00:25:382 (2,3) - These look unsnapped to me, what BS divisor did you used here?
01:03:665 (4) - Players will probably tend to click the triple at 01:04:113 (1,2,3) - Since you make inappropriate DS changes here. Please fix this.
01:23:815 (7) - Bad overlapping here with 01:23:143 (4,5,6) - . It should also end on 01:25:158 - already.
Same as Easy, this map needs a lot of work on flow and patterns structure. Learn to set jumps appropriately and not random (like some even experienced mappers do from time to time lol) and look for more appealing patterns. This map needs more shape.
[kakifly's Hard]
00:04:785 - Leaving this beat out just to follow the piano perfectly doesn't fit here as this 3/2 beat gap feels really weird at this place. Please add a circle here or, what would probably be better for you, end the 00:03:889 (2) - slider hereinstead of the white tick (That also makes the stack at this place inappropriate).
00:05:009 (1,2,1) - Distances within the violet combo are okay, but Why is it so much lower to the next combo? Please increase it.
00:10:270 (1) - Preference: End this on the white tick already to give a little bit preparation time on the upcoming backslider.
00:18:218 (3,4,5) - Stopping the flow here doesn't work out better than if you'd add a distance between these circles. I recommend to position 4 at 197,220.
00:29:859 (5) - Change to a circle here and stack it on 00:29:859 (5,1) - . Feels more appealing to play as the vocal is pretty strong in this part.
00:39:038 (1,2) - Blanket check again.
00:45:307 (8) - Again, replace this 1/6 triplet again for a small jumping section here: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2060192 . The problem with yours is that there needs to be a sound at the red tick at 00:45:531 - and the 1/6 backslider doesn't reach this far (and would feel very inappropriate if you would enlarge it to this place).
00:50:456 (2) - Why is this still a 1/6 slider, the drums are 1/4 beats now if I'm not deaf. Also rearrange DS here.
01:02:322 - Add a 1/2 beat circle here, this is an unnatural long gap here and I don't like these kind of gaps if they music is still playing on.
01:17:098 (2,3,4,5) - Why the sudden DS increase at 3->4? The music doesn't really indicate a small triple jump here, so please tone it down.
01:25:158 (3) - Circle instead of slider here please, the beats coming with this slider feel very additive and don't add anything significant to the music.
Otherwise pretty solid map. Some flow and patterns improvable still.
If Vincent wants a mod from me for his Insane diff, tell him to PM me.
Putting the harder GD diffs aside, this mapset still needs a lot of work, mostly due to the creator of the map (sorry if that sounds too harsh, but that's its current state). I still hope and give many wishes that you can rank this map one day.
Well then, I'm out! o/

going to apply tmr~

kakifly

940 posts

Joined April 2014

kakifly 2014-09-22T21:38:55+00:00

time to check mods uguguguguhuguhghughuguhguhuhguhguhuhguhuhguhug

fm4a93au04

fm4a93au04 wrote:
[kakifly's Hard]

Try to add some Defult N ( normal ) or D ( drum ) sound in your map , since there is almost only S-H ( Soft Hitnormal ) in your map .
ok ill keep this in mind

Try more possibility on this map .

00:01:427 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,2) – Remove W on sliderbody ? no then it would lack hitsounds; and a W fits

00:21:128 (1) - ^ . ^

00:26:501 (1) – Add W on sliderbody ? already has one

00:30:755 (3) – Change it to 00:29:859 (5) ? what do you mean?

00:43:740 (5) – Reference :

nah since both sounds are dominant so 2 circles work better than a slider

00:45:755 – Add a note ? whats there to emphasize?

00:55:158 (1,2) – Try this ?

^

01:00:531 (1,2,3,4) - ^ . fixed

01:08:367 (2,3,4,1) - ^ . even tho it follows the vocals it covers the downbeat which is unnecessary

01:20:232 (1,2,3,4) – Make jumps ? Like : fixed

paseli

paseli wrote:
[kakifly's Hard]
00:04:785 - Leaving this beat out just to follow the piano perfectly doesn't fit here as this 3/2 beat gap feels really weird at this place. Please add a circle here or, what would probably be better for you, end the 00:03:889 (2) - slider hereinstead of the white tick (That also makes the stack at this place inappropriate). i dont think theres a way out of the pause; if i put a circle there i would be mapping nothing which sounds even weirder
00:05:009 (1,2,1) - Distances within the violet combo are okay, but Why is it so much lower to the next combo? Please increase it. its just a thing its fine since its stacked
00:10:270 (1) - Preference: End this on the white tick already to give a little bit preparation time on the upcoming backslider. then the spinner would be very short; i tested it out a few times and its fine imo
00:18:218 (3,4,5) - Stopping the flow here doesn't work out better than if you'd add a distance between these circles. I recommend to position 4 at 197,220. again its a thing ppl do lol; i personally like it like this
00:29:859 (5) - Change to a circle here and stack it on 00:29:859 (5,1) - . Feels more appealing to play as the vocal is pretty strong in this part. did something similar
00:39:038 (1,2) - Blanket check again. fixed
00:45:307 (8) - Again, replace this 1/6 triplet again for a small jumping section here: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2060192 . The problem with yours is that there needs to be a sound at the red tick at 00:45:531 - and the 1/6 backslider doesn't reach this far (and would feel very inappropriate if you would enlarge it to this place). fixed
00:50:456 (2) - Why is this still a 1/6 slider, the drums are 1/4 beats now if I'm not deaf. Also rearrange DS here. fixed
01:02:322 - Add a 1/2 beat circle here, this is an unnatural long gap here and I don't like these kind of gaps if they music is still playing on.fixed
01:17:098 (2,3,4,5) - Why the sudden DS increase at 3->4? The music doesn't really indicate a small triple jump here, so please tone it down. i think its fine; im creating a 'momentum' to start the sliders with the finishes
01:25:158 (3) - Circle instead of slider here please, the beats coming with this slider feel very additive and don't add anything significant to the music. following the maraca-like sounds in the music
Otherwise pretty solid map. Some flow and patterns improvable still.
thanks :3

UPDATE
i changed the kiai in mine; im 90% sure your kiai was wrong since it was so long but idk if mine is right either so check on like

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Kyouren

5,657 posts

Joined October 2012

Kyouren 2014-09-23T04:14:10+00:00

I will check at Saturday

EDIT: Heremydiff!Enjoyplayingit~

Goku's Normal

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Title:Startear -TV size ver.-
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Artist:Haruna Luna
ArtistUnicode:春奈るな
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Source:ソードアート・オンラインⅡ
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352,220,78441,5,4,0:0:0:0:
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144,260,84486,2,0,B|128:200|128:200|64:124,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,85606,12,0,87844,0:0:0:0:

neonat

Beatmap Nominator

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neonat 2014-10-02T11:19:10+00:00

General

Tags on kakifly's Hard: Ending Sword Art Online II konoshin69 gokugohan12468 [Vincent]
Tags on the rest: Ending Sword Art Online II kakifly gokugohan12468 [Vincent]
Fix the tags
Objects start at 00:01:427 which means there isn't the required 2000ms before the first object from the start. add 1000 to AudioLeadIn for all difficulties on .osu in Notepad

Easy

Uncheck countdown
Uncheck widescreen support
Uncheck Letterbox during breaks
You don't need these without a SB
The Combos are inconsistent, please use them in a more order and regular fashion

00:08:591 (1,2) - you used non-regular (1/1 2/1 3/1 etc) beats here, but you didn't at 00:01:427 (1,2) which don't fit the song because end after the words in the music. You might as well end those sliders 1/2 beat earlier at 00:02:098 and 00:03:889
00:26:501 (1,2) - merge to just one slider to be like 00:22:919 (1) - this rhythm is much better than splitting it up because in the end the beat is in the gap in between these 2 objects
00:28:292 (1) - this shape isn't nice, the curve is not a curve at all
00:29:635 (2,3) - placing them in a straight line would be better
00:31:874 (6) - make the inner curve an actual curve, that v-shape jagged part is ugly, you might as well change it to this shape

SPOILER

00:36:352 (4,5) - place them in a straight line, as well as swap positions so slider before circle. 00:36:800 should be the main beat and not 00:36:576 which has no impact there, so don't start a slider at 00:36:576 where there no impact
00:39:934 (2,3) - ^
00:40:829 (1) - soft hitsound finish on start of slider
01:02:322 (1) - remove NC
01:04:113 (3) - NC
01:07:247 (7) - this doesn't fit the song at all, the rhythm has no relation to the song. Furthermore the beat at 01:07:695 is important as the vocals start there and is a new phrase, hence have an object start there
01:10:829 (3) - don't have the slider end at 01:11:277 because it feels weird. 01:11:277 is the start of a new phrase in the song, yet you end something there. Start something there, be it a slider or circle
01:14:412 - makes no sense in leaving this out and being empty, this should be mapped

I find the rhythm really poor, full of sliders that don't fit the song because they are usually not in sync with the music, be it being too long or otherwise.

Goku's Normal

00:19:785 (2) - this doesn't fit the song. Move 00:20:456 (3) to start at 00:19:785 and shift the slider 00:19:785 (2) to start at 00:20:009 to start with the vocals
00:30:531 (4) - doesn't fit the rhythm of the song either, too much additional action here. Remove the repeat and add a circle at 00:31:203 - this is more appropriately fitting to the song
00:50:009 (2) - again not fitting to the song as it overlooks the beat at 00:50:232 - you should split the slider into a circle and a 1/2 slider
00:53:367 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - not consistent with the rest of the chorus for combo
00:58:292 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:04:113 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:07:919 (2) - this slider doesn't fit the song, the rhythm this gives does not make sense in the song. Please change what you used here
01:09:934 (2) - the second curve is too concave, it doesn't move nicely with the song
01:14:859 (1,2,3) - doesn't fit the rhythm of the song, please use a different rhythm here like this (slider slider circle instead of circle slider slider)

SPOILER

01:16:427 (4,1) - swap places to fit the song (slider starts before circle)
01:24:262 (2,3) - Please be more aware of what is in the song and use a more appropriate rhythm that actually fits and can be related to the music instead of just being your own made up rhythm

SPOILER

Rhythm doesn't seem very good, doesn't fit the song

kakifly's Hard

Remove widescreen support and Letterbox during breaks

00:03:889 (2) - end the slider at 00:04:561 - she might have had a change of pitch over at where you are currently ending your slider which might have indicated an end, but she holds it all the way till 00:04:561 where she breathes in
You didn't finish your hitsounds. There is nothing from 00:22:919 onwards
00:25:382 (6,7,8) - any form of slowdown in the song over here isn't obvious and strong enough to have this anti-jump, and 00:26:277 (8,9,1) clearly sounds like it shouldn't be touching 00:25:829 (7) or be anywhere as near as that
00:28:740 (2) - this slider doesn't fit the song, in this case it's used poorly. You overlook the beat at 00:28:964 which should be mapped to instead
00:44:412 (6) - NC
00:56:501 (5) - it's more fitting to end it at 00:56:725 with the vocals. 00:56:837 should be empty and not be mapped to as there is nothing in the song to have it end here, neither did the vocal hold all the way here, it stopped before this, being separate words
01:01:203 (2,3) - this doesn't flow well, 01:01:427 (3) should be more to the right side of 01:01:203 (2) or the flow becomes too stiff and hard

Hard

Remove Countdown
Remove Letterbox during Breaks

00:05:009 (1,2) - bad flow and they touch each other, looking ugly. Change the shapes and positions
00:06:576 (4,7) - stack properly
00:12:173 (9) - NC here not 00:12:844 (1)
00:17:770 (2) - use a better shape
00:19:337 (1,2) - place them better so they flow better from each other, place 00:20:232 (2) higher
00:26:501 (5) - NC
00:28:292 (2) - NC not 00:28:068 (1)
00:29:188 (4,5) - swap places, circle before slider
00:43:068 (1) - shouldn't hold a slider here, 00:43:292 is important and should be mapped
00:49:785 (5) - NC
00:44:188 (4) - overlooks the beat at 00:44:412 which is more important. Shouldn't be holding the music this way either
00:51:576 (1,3) - ugly shapes, please use better looking ones
00:56:949 (8) - NC not 00:57:621 (1)
00:58:740 (4) - use a better proper shape
01:00:307 (1,2) - swap places and NC on the slider
01:01:874 (5,1,2) - this doesn't flow. To make things worse, 01:02:546 (2) ends on an important beat where something should start instead
01:14:859 (3) - NC here instead
01:16:427 (1) - the curve is poor

New combos are inconsistent. The rhythm frequently doesn't match the song. Sliders go over important rhythm in the song while making no sense of holding what they are trying to hold right now. Flow is lacking and movement is weird, it feels like an old map with placement everywhere

Vincent's Insane

Uncheck Countdown
Uncheck Widescreen Support
Uncheck Letterbox during Breaks

00:22:919 (1) - the finish is too loud, please remove it
00:26:501 (1) - ^
00:29:859 (1) - ^
00:53:815 (2,3,4) - blanket better
01:10:606 (7) - NC for better segmentation and phrasing

Please do something about the rhythm, especially for the easier difficulties. I can only wish you good luck in making this more decent

Leorda

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Leorda 2014-10-02T15:52:09+00:00

Apa kabar

[Easy]
* AR +1 or +2? Your current one was slow to me
* 1st and 4th combo color looks pretty similar. Cany you change to another color?

00:25:382 (2,3) - Seems hard to read for beginners because this 1/2 slider was too close together. Mind to change the pattern for this?
00:42:621 (1) - Remove new combo
00:55:158 (1) - Spacing too far from previous one, also remove new combo
01:07:247 (7,1) - Swap new combo for shorten the long combo
01:10:829 (3) - If you apply above, add new combo here

[Goku's Normal]
* Your clap pattern was completely random, this could uncomfortable for players to hear the hitsound. Consider to add clap where the object was snap at 2nd and 4th white tick
* Some sliderbody contains whistle sound inside of them. If you think it's useless, mind to remove it?
* 1st and 4th combo color looks pretty similar. Cany you change to another color?

00:24:262 (3) - Placing behind sliders could unreadable for players since it's tottaly covered with previous one. Consider to move further away
01:05:009 (3) - I suggest you to shorten this slider to previous white tick and add circle at the next one. I think you just ignore the vocal of song, IMO
01:15:083 (2,3) - I felt that you just ignore the vocal sound for this slider. How about this slider is matched with vocals?

[kakifly's Hard]
* Inconsistent tags from all diff. Check what something missing inside of tags

00:45:307 (8) - 1/8 repeating slider isn't fit here. How about snap the repeating slider to red tick to match the vocal?
00:49:785 - The kiai part is lack of hitsounds. Please add them if possible
01:02:770 (1,2,3) - I don't think 1/4 sliders fits well here because there's no instruments match with repeating slider. How about remove the repeating slider and extend it to red tick for each slider?

[Hard]
* 1st and 4th combo color looks pretty similar. Cany you change to another color?

Good luck~

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