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aurthohin - Chaite Paro 2(008)

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Arf
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Arf
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, June 1, 2018 at 12:13:56 PM

Artist: aurthohin
Title: Chaite Paro 2(008)
Tags: rfandomization bengali bangla বাংলা অসমাপ্ত ১ ২০০৮ aushomapto 1 2008 hard rock you can want
BPM: 160
Filesize: 4557kb
Play Time: 02:59
Difficulties Available:
  1. Insane (4.78 stars, 639 notes)
Download: aurthohin - Chaite Paro 2(008)
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It's been a long time. Remapped circa 2017-18
Style is still somewhat old, please keep that in mind. There's no trace of the way it used to be in 2014, so it's not nostalgia that makes the map style old, that's just how I tend to map, sorry :c

Bangla modern rock, enjoy. Started with classic folk but every now and then we should look forward as well as back.

Metadata: https://arf.s-ul.eu/SdinSymR
Last edited by Arf , edited 8 times in total.
Arf
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Arf
Ugh unnecessary double post- sorry about that.
idodgebull3ts
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Joined January 2013
idodgebull3ts
From my queue (also M4M)

[Easy]
  1. SV 1.4 at 160bpm feels really fast on an Easy (probably not enough to warrant a remap though)
  2. Also I think you're supposed to keep the same DS everywhere in an Easy
  3. A lot of your long sliders either go out of the mapping area midway through or have start-/end- points offscreen
  4. 00:12:306 (1,2,3,4) - The overlaps here look messy and it feels repetitive. Consider changing the second two sliders so they either align with or blanket the previous sliders or have a different pattern.
  5. 00:48:324 (1) - I'd recommend moving the start point up a bit so it flows better from the previous slider.
  6. 00:58:079 (4) - This would flow better if you moved it to the left some so it lines up with the curve of the slider. (and adjust 5 accordingly)
  7. 01:14:962 (4) - This is very awkward to play. Try splitting it into two sliders and rearranging them so they flow from the previous slider. Maybe something like this:
    SPOILER
  8. 01:27:344 (3) - Extend this so it ends at 01:27:719
  9. 01:39:350 (1) - ^ end at 01:39:725 Also would flow better if you angled it instead of having it horizontal
  10. 02:14:992 (2) - This jump feels really hard for an Easy. Also consider splitting it into two sliders like at 01:14:962
  11. 02:18:369 (1) - Maybe end this at 02:20:620 and then have another slider start at 02:21:371
  12. 02:22:871 No reason to keep Kiai going through the break, might as well end it here
  13. 02:57:311 (2) - Try lining this up better with the previous slider, the overlap looks messy as it is
  14. 03:12:311 (1,2) - Having right angles in the sliders at this SV/bpm might be a bit too hard for an Easy
There's a lot you could improve with your map's flow. The horizontal sliders especially just seem lazy and rarely fit in with the flow of the map.

[Normal]
  1. 00:11:556 (8,9) - The music is the same here as it was throughout the pattern, no reason to change the DS (or have 9 at all)
  2. 00:26:563 (3,4,5) - and 00:28:064 (2,3,4) - It looks like you lined them up vertically/horizontally on purpose, but I really think it would play better if you had them flow between the sliders
  3. 00:43:259 (4,5) - Try changing these so that they don't overlap, it looks messy
  4. 01:02:956 (4,5,6) - Would look better if these were all at x180 so they line up
  5. 01:10:460 (3,4) - Consider stacking these to be consistent
  6. 01:37:474 (2) - Changing the DS here makes it seem like you're supposed to hit it immediately after the slider end.
  7. 01:45:353 (2,3,4) - Again the DS change here feels off. There's no change in the music to indicate anything.
  8. 01:55:483 (2) - Consider splitting this into two sliders
  9. 01:57:734 (3,4,5) - DS
  10. 03:26:186 (6,1) - DS
I'm not really a fan of all the horizontal/vertical line patterns. Most of the time you change DS it seems like it's to fit your patterns rather than to fit the music, you should try to do it the other way around.

[Hard]
  1. 02:21:371 (5,6,7,8,9) - The stacks having different timing is a bit confusing
  2. 02:42:311 (1) - This stream feels awkward to play. Consider changing it so it flows from the previous stream and curves smoothly into the slider. Also it would look cleaner if you made it so the slider either doesn't overlap or overlaps cleanly with the stream.
  3. 02:57:311 (3) - Try making the curves on this smoother. It looks a bit off as it is.
  4. 04:00:311 (1) - These spaced singles feel weird. I think it would be better if you just used the same DS as usual and made it a stream instead.

Good luck with your map
Arf
901 posts
Joined December 2013
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Arf
From my queue (also M4M)

[Easy]
SV 1.4 at 160bpm feels really fast on an Easy (probably not enough to warrant a remap though)Hmm, I dunno about this, may change.
Also I think you're supposed to keep the same DS everywhere in an Easy I will fix this for sure.
A lot of your long sliders either go out of the mapping area midway through or have start-/end- points offscreen Fixed all that I found, though AIMod didn't say anything...
00:12:306 (1,2,3,4) - The overlaps here look messy and it feels repetitive. Consider changing the second two sliders so they either align with or blanket the previous sliders or have a different pattern. Changed pattern to repeat sliders. Also adjusted next few notes.
00:48:324 (1) - I'd recommend moving the start point up a bit so it flows better from the previous slider.Done- adjusted next few sliders too.
00:58:079 (4) - This would flow better if you moved it to the left some so it lines up with the curve of the slider. (and adjust 5 accordingly) Done.
01:14:962 (4) - This is very awkward to play. Try splitting it into two sliders and rearranging them so they flow from the previous slider. Maybe something like this: Done.
collapsed text
01:27:344 (3) - Extend this so it ends at 01:27:719 I didn't change this because the word he says here is really short and I tried to emphasize that.
01:39:350 (1) - ^ end at 01:39:725 Also would flow better if you angled it instead of having it horizontal Done.
02:14:992 (2) - This jump feels really hard for an Easy. Also consider splitting it into two sliders like at 01:14:962 Made into two sliders. Distance Snap won't let me put the start point any closer though D:
02:18:369 (1) - Maybe end this at 02:20:620 and then have another slider start at 02:21:371 Done.
02:22:871 No reason to keep Kiai going through the break, might as well end it here Fixed.
02:57:311 (2) - Try lining this up better with the previous slider, the overlap looks messy as it is
03:12:311 (1,2) - Having right angles in the sliders at this SV/bpm might be a bit too hard for an Easy

There's a lot you could improve with your map's flow. The horizontal sliders especially just seem lazy and rarely fit in with the flow of the map.I think I'm going to remap Easy completely actually. :D It's really not ready.

[Normal]
00:11:556 (8,9) - The music is the same here as it was throughout the pattern, no reason to change the DS (or have 9 at all) Eh, I tried to emphasize the drums and the fact that the music was about to get a little louder. May change.
00:26:563 (3,4,5) - and 00:28:064 (2,3,4) - It looks like you lined them up vertically/horizontally on purpose, but I really think it would play better if you had them flow between the sliders
00:43:259 (4,5) - Try changing these so that they don't overlap, it looks messy
01:02:956 (4,5,6) - Would look better if these were all at x180 so they line up
01:10:460 (3,4) - Consider stacking these to be consistent
01:37:474 (2) - Changing the DS here makes it seem like you're supposed to hit it immediately after the slider end.
01:45:353 (2,3,4) - Again the DS change here feels off. There's no change in the music to indicate anything.
01:55:483 (2) - Consider splitting this into two sliders
01:57:734 (3,4,5) - DS
03:26:186 (6,1) - DS
I'm going to change most of Normal too, cause the DS is all wrong- thanks for pointing it out.
I'm not really a fan of all the horizontal/vertical line patterns. Most of the time you change DS it seems like it's to fit your patterns rather than to fit the music, you should try to do it the other way around.

[Hard]
02:21:371 (5,6,7,8,9) - The stacks having different timing is a bit confusing Fixed.
02:42:311 (1) - This stream feels awkward to play. Consider changing it so it flows from the previous stream and curves smoothly into the slider. Also it would look cleaner if you made it so the slider either doesn't overlap or overlaps cleanly with the stream. Fixed
02:57:311 (3) - Try making the curves on this smoother. It looks a bit off as it is.Fixed
04:00:311 (1) - These spaced singles feel weird. I think it would be better if you just used the same DS as usual and made it a stream instead. Fixed.


Good luck with your map Thank you very much- I really need to work on this map and make it better. Thanks for your help!
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