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Darren Korb & Ashley Barrett - We All Become

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Don
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Joined December 2012
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Don
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, July 2, 2014 at 5:10:30 PM

Artist: Darren Korb & Ashley Barrett
Title: We All Become
Source: Transistor
Tags: donrolf
BPM: 170
Filesize: 5975kb
Play Time: 02:24
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.56 stars, 110 notes)
  2. Hard (3.16 stars, 228 notes)
  3. Insane (4.28 stars, 450 notes)
  4. Normal (2.23 stars, 183 notes)
Download: Darren Korb & Ashley Barrett - We All Become
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We're paper boats.
Last edited by Don , edited 5 times in total.
chaee
chaee
M4M from your q

[Easy]

00:17:445 (1) - I think this slider should be moved to 00:17:092 (1) -
00:39:327 (2,4) - You can stack 4 with 2. Keep 4 in the position it's in but just stack it neatly with 2.. If that makes sense
01:16:739 (2,3) - This blanket here looks off to me..
00:26:974 (3) - I think you should remove the kiai time here
00:35:798 (3) - Remove whistle maybe?
01:05:445 (2) - Curve a bit more?
01:16:739 (2,1) - 1 isn't perfectly stacked with 2. Fix
01:16:386 (1) - Try to make this stack perfectly with 01:13:562 (1) - 's end point
01:22:386 (2,3) - Adjust to stack with 01:22:033 (1) -
02:00:150 (2) - Isn't perfectly stacked with 01:57:327 (4) - 's end point

[Normal]

00:00:856 (2,4) - Stack neatly
00:33:327 (4) - I think you should rotate this a teansy bit to make a perfect blanket with 00:32:268 (3) -
00:32:268 (3,1) - Stack with 3 if you can
see?
00:59:445 (5) - New combo
01:20:621 (4) - Whistle
01:51:680 (1) - New combo












Nice song nice map
Yuthuil
476 posts
Joined April 2014
Yuthuil
Normal:

Normal mode generally doesn't have blue ticks. I also find that your normal mode is quite hard.
00:42:816 Use this opportunity for a spinner?
01:10:259 (5,6,7) - Make these easier.
01:16:436 (1,2,3) - arrange these in a neater pattern.
I find that your map has a VERY repetitious pattern.Think of some more.

Hard:

00:45:377 (1,1) - Using a very low slider velocity speed change followed by a fast one is not a good idea.

From queue.
Don
218 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Don

chaee wrote:

M4M from your q

[Easy]

00:17:445 (1) - I think this slider should be moved to 00:17:092 (1) -
00:39:327 (2,4) - You can stack 4 with 2. Keep 4 in the position it's in but just stack it neatly with 2.. If that makes sense
01:16:739 (2,3) - This blanket here looks off to me..
00:26:974 (3) - I think you should remove the kiai time here
00:35:798 (3) - Remove whistle maybe?
01:05:445 (2) - Curve a bit more?
01:16:739 (2,1) - 1 isn't perfectly stacked with 2. Fix
01:16:386 (1) - Try to make this stack perfectly with 01:13:562 (1) - 's end point
01:22:386 (2,3) - Adjust to stack with 01:22:033 (1) -
02:00:150 (2) - Isn't perfectly stacked with 01:57:327 (4) - 's end point

[Normal]

00:00:856 (2,4) - Stack neatly
00:33:327 (4) - I think you should rotate this a teansy bit to make a perfect blanket with 00:32:268 (3) -
00:32:268 (3,1) - Stack with 3 if you can
see?
00:59:445 (5) - New combo
01:20:621 (4) - Whistle
01:51:680 (1) - New combo












Nice song nice map
Fixed everything. Forgot to reply.
Famous
404 posts
Joined April 2011
Famous
M4M request from your queue.

Easy
  1. 00:39:730 (3,4) - Blanket.
  2. 02:07:259 (1,2,3) - I guess many beginners will be confused of the Slider Velocity changes.
  3. 02:12:906 (3,1) - ^

Normal
  1. AR 6? That's too fast for the most normal players. AR 5 is more playable and still "hard" enough. Also the OD is a little bit much. Try to use OD 3.
  2. 00:01:612 (3,4) - Too much spacing. Keep the spacing!
  3. 00:02:318 (4,1) - Looks a little bit weird.
  4. I guess 00:19:259 (4,6) and 00:21:024 (6,8) will confuse normal players a little bit.
  5. Stack the end of 00:34:083 (1) with the end of 00:32:318 (3).
  6. 00:42:553 - Spinner?
  7. 01:05:495 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - I guess the placement is hard to read for normal players.
  8. 01:07:789 (6) - Add NC and remove NC 01:07:965 (1). Then add NC 01:10:259 (6), remove NC 01:10:789 (1) and Add NC 01:11:671 (5) or 01:12:553 (6). That's better to read.
  9. 01:10:259 (5,6,7) - Replace it with a reversed slider.
  10. 01:15:906 (5,6) - Sounds wrong. Move 01:16:259 (6) to 01:16:083.
  11. 01:16:436 (1,2,3) - Looks strange. Blanket.
  12. 01:20:142 (3) - Sounds Wrong. Delete 01:19:965 (2) and move 01:20:142 (3,4) to 01:19:965. Then add a slider 01:21:024. Endpoint 01:21:200.
  13. 01:22:259 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Little bit too hard for normal and doesn't sound nice too. Try this:
    Picutre
  14. 01:42:730 (1,1) - Too hard for normal.
  15. 02:10:083 (1) - Remove NC.
  16. 02:14:318 (1) - ^?
  17. 02:17:848 (2,3,4,6,7,8) - Replace them with reversed slider.

Hard
  1. You can use a higher OD. Try 5 or 5,5. Same with the HP. Use 5.
  2. 00:29:848 (3,4,1) - You can space it more. That's a little bit easy for hard.
  3. 00:34:083 (1,2) - ^
  4. 00:40:436 (1,2,3) - ^
  5. 00:45:377 (1,1) - Space it more.
  6. Stack 01:10:259 (2) with 01:09:200 (10). Then move 01:10:436 (3,4).
  7. 01:16:436 (1) - Remove NC and add NC 01:17:142 (8).
  8. 01:17:848 (1) - Remove NC.
  9. 01:45:730 (4,5) - Blanket.
  10. 01:50:318 (1,2,3,4) - Move them so 01:51:377 (4) stack with 01:49:789 (4).
  11. 01:52:436 (7,8,9) - Stream sounds wrong there. Move 01:52:524 (8,9) one tick right. Don't forget to move the circles!
  12. 01:53:848 (3,4,5) - ^
  13. 02:06:377 (9,1) - Spacing too confusing.
  14. 02:13:612 (10,1) - ^
  15. 02:16:436 (9,10,11) - Same stream issue as above.
  16. Add NC 02:16:612 (10) and remove NC 02:17:142 (1).
  17. Funny that 02:18:730 (10,11,12) is different then the other streams. Anyway add 02:18:730 (10).

Insane
  1. Stack the end of 00:05:142 (1) with 00:04:436 (1).
  2. Stack 00:05:495 (2) with 00:04:789 (3).
  3. 00:17:142 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1) - No. This looks terrible. Change that.
  4. 00:22:965 (2) - Move that circle to x:96 ; y:216.
  5. 00:28:965 (2) - Move that circle to x:164 ; y:232.
  6. 00:39:289 - Add a circle.
  7. Add 00:41:936, 00:42:112 and 00:42:553 a circle.
  8. 00:45:377 (1,2) - Space it more?
  9. 00:50:848 (12,1) - Blanket.
  10. 00:51:553 (3,4) - ^
  11. Why not stack 00:53:848 (1) with the end of 00:53:142 (10)?
  12. 01:01:436 (9,1) - Blanket it better.
  13. 01:24:906 - Add a note?
  14. Add 01:46:877 and 01:47:053 a circle.

That's it. I love that song!
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