Number5 wrote:

From M4M Queue
Normal
The color is bad. Try to make the same like Hard diff.
00:19:038 (1,2,3) - Try to make a better flow. I think its fine
01:17:895 (6,1) - Try to make a better flow. Done
01:21:324 (5,6,7) - 1/4 here. It's normal, thats why i won't
01:30:466 (5,6) - 1/4 here. ^
01:45:895 (1) - Arch is too long. I dont think so, after all it fits with the music. But i will overthink it.
03:03:038 - Map the area after this point. Well, its normal, and that part would be too hard for it. But maybe i will.

Hard
00:23:609 (1,2) - Looks bad. I think it looks fine.
00:42:895 (3) - Delete this note. Why? It fits perfectly with the song.
03:03:038 - Map the area after this point.Done

SkyBearer245 wrote:

M4M Please!!

General

AIMod is Right I will change it someday

Normal

00:22:181 : stack to hit circle 2 from 00:19:895 I think its fine

00:23:324 : Same^^ ^

00:35:038 : more Sexier please I hope i did it right

00:37:324 : Remove NC Done

00:13:895 : Same^ ^

01:32:181 : same ^^ ^

02:05:038 : Center it for Blanket reasons [Nah, i think its okay

i know my PC is Broken becoz its not complete right? XD

Hard

00:42:752(2,3) : stack it to the slider Done

00:46:466 : Remove NC Done

01:13:895 : ^ same Done

Yauxo wrote:

Hi there, coming from your m4m q

[General]

1. Your mapset has no map that has either a- or a lower than 3 star difficulty. Your normal has a star rating of 1.2570 (or 1,19 website stars), so I think that this should still be fine. On the other hand, BATs might have a different opinion. I just thought I'd point this out.
2. Are you sure about that second combo colour? Brown doesnt really fit imo.
3. Reduce the audio quality (as Aimod states).
4. Uncheck Widescreen support. Youre not using a storyboard, so that is not really needed here.
5. You're missing a source and some tags. Example tags could be Elektronic/Dreampop, as taken from their Wikipedia page.

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  Blankets that can be improved

  00:30:466 (1,2,3) - I think they are ok. But i'll improve them.
  00:33:609 (2,3) -
  00:44:466 (4,5) -
  01:00:181 (1,3) -
  01:19:038 (1,2) -
  01:19:895 (3,4) -

1. 00:19:895 (2,2) - You could rearrange them so that they's overlap. If you play the map, you ouldn't see the overlap anyway
2. 00:47:038 (1) - To be all honest, I'd never use 2-repeat slider nowadays. They feel weird to play and you could basically achieve the same beat with 2 1/2 sliders. Changed
3. 01:23:609 (2) - ^ ^
4. 00:52:181 (2) - Curve this the opposite way as 00:51:609 (1) - for a better flow I think its fine. But i'll overthink it.
5. 01:00:181 (1) - Having 00:58:752 (2) - 's hitburst on the slider can be kinda confusing, but thats probably just me. There's so much space to the right, I think it'd be better for you to move towards the other way Its fine
6. 01:05:609 (2,1) - Let those two overlap If you play it, you couldn't see it anyway
7. 01:08:181 (3,3) - ^ or let it flow into the other direction
8. 03:00:752 (3,3) - ^
9. 02:05:038 (2) - Move this to the outside of the 2 sliders, not the inside. This will create more flow (136/192 if you want to keep the slider's position)
   
10. There's alot of song unmapped, you might want to consider mapping this one out, since ithe song's still pretty "strong" after the last slider you mapped

Well, it was supposed to be a part of Hard only. But when some more people say i should map that part, i'll do it then.

[Hard]

• 
  
  Blankets that can be improved

  00:38:752 (3,4) -
  03:14:752 (6,1) -

1. 00:34:752 (1) - Same 2-repeat thing as in normal It fits perfectly :3
2. 01:15:609 (3,4,5) - Maybe curve some of them? Having such sliders feels weird to me atleast That just wouldn't fit with the other one
3. 01:31:181 (10) - I feel like pointing this out, such a 2-repeat slider looks good imo since it actually fits to the beat and since it has a small break after it done
4. 01:59:609 (1,5) - Let those overlap If you play it, you won't see the overlap anyway
5. 02:03:324 (4) - ^ with those ^
6. 02:42:466 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - this part is preeeetty messy due to it being spread at first, going over to a small stack, then to a slider on the left of the stack and after it to the right of it. You could either completely space it out or change the combo in general for it to be more flowy, but having it like this feels just messy :< I'll defintely overthink it. Thank you
7. 03:07:181 (5) - 2-repeat slider
   
8. Same as in normal, there's a lot unmapped that can be mapped

Good luck with your map! :3

GrayKaiser82 wrote:

Hi, From my mod queue.
Nice song, sounds like a Car-Related theme!!

[General]

1. - Mp3's kbps is BIG! 320kbps... export it to 192kbps at least. Done
2. - If you're making the playtime's end on you own track, why not fade out the song's ending you're trying to point at?

[Normal]

1. 00:27:609 (3) - Add finish done
2. 00:41:324 (5) - I think this slider is under the health bar, which is unrankable. mind you change it's placement? I know you're trying to make a pattern there. done
3. 00:52:752 (3) - Might be better if you move this slider front of the previous one. > http://puu.sh/98Y7M/ad36ce4755.png I think its fine
4. 01:04:181 (3) - Add finish done
5. 01:59:038 (3) - ^ done
6. 02:33:324 (1,2,3,4,5) - Weird stackings... lazy? I thought it would fit
   
7. - Nice kind of Normal diff to play. But most sliders are sharp and "old" styled. At least the flowing looks great! -

[Hard]

1. 01:10:324 (3,4) - Grid it up a little for a smoother flow. > http://puu.sh/98Zaq/fb4916ef6e.png done
2. 01:19:038 (1) - Curve it like the slider on 01:19:609 (3) - .
3. 01:24:752 (5,6) - Not-so-great placement. I think its fine
4. 02:19:609 (1) - Straighten the slider for symmetry with 02:17:324 (1,2) - . done
5. 02:25:895 (4,1) - DS problem, or for flow? flow
6. 02:43:038 (4,5,6,7,8) - Confusing pattern, Change rhythm or pattern. done
7. The hitsound place of the Finishes(on Normal diff) is counted, but not mentioning it here. done
   
8. - Almost like Normal diff, but very sensitive with the background tracks of music. Nice mapping! -

That's all i can find in your beatmap, GL!

Tracreed wrote:

Here you go
video: http://puu.sh/99e6e/ccd1968e75.avi

-Famous- wrote:

Nice map. Here's my mod:

General

Check the AiMod.

Normal

Nothing to say except the New Combos.

00:19:038 (1) - Remove NC.

00:21:324 (1) - Remove NC.

00:25:895 (1) - Remove NC.

00:30:466 (4) - Remove NC.

00:35:038 (1) - Remove NC.

00:57:895 (1) - Remove NC.

01:02:466 (1) - Remove NC.

01:07:038 (1) - Remove NC.

01:11:609 (1) - Remove NC.

01:45:895 (1) - Remove NC.

01:52:752 (1) - Remove NC.

01:57:324 (1) - Remove NC.

02:01:895 (1) - Remove NC.

02:06:466 (1) - Remove NC.

02:47:609 (1) - Remove NC.

02:52:181 (1) - Remove NC.

02:56:752 (1) - Remove NC.

03:01:324 (1) - Remove NC.

Remove New Combo only, lol.

Hard

00:19:038 (1) - Remove NC.

00:21:038 (6) - Remove NC. 00:21:324 (1) - Add NC.

00:25:895 (1) - Remove NC.

00:30:466 (1) - Remove NC.

00:32:752 (1) - Remove NC. 00:33:181 (2) - Add NC.

00:34:752 (1) - Remove NC. 00:36:181 (4) - Add NC.

00:46:466 (6) - Remove NC.

00:47:038 (1) - Remove NC.

00:52:038 (3) - Move that circle a little bit more right, so it's a little bit curved.

00:52:181 (4) - Slider more like on the picture.

Picture

00:54:181 (1) - Remove NC.

01:03:609 (1) - Remove NC.

01:07:038 (1) - Remove NC.

01:09:038 (8) - Add NC. 01:09:324 (1) - Remove NC.

01:11:609 (7) - Remove NC.

01:13:895 (10) - Add NC. 01:14:466 (1) - Remove NC.

01:19:466 (2) - Move that circle more up, so it's curved.

01:23:038 (1) - Remove NC. 01:23:609 (1) - Add NC.

01:32:752 (1) - Remove NC.

01:45:895 (1) - Remove NC.

01:59:324 (8) - Add NC. 01:59:609 (1) - Remove NC.

02:06:466 (1) - Remove NC.

02:43:895 (7) - Add NC.

02:49:895 (1) - Remove NC.

03:09:752 (8) - Move that circle more up, so it's curved.

03:12:752 (7) - Remove NC and move that circle like on the picture.

Picture

03:13:038 (8) - Add NC.

I like the song. But in my opinion you should change the New Combos.

Gunsillie wrote:

Hello, from my mod queue
• = Important
• = Recommended
• = Suggestion

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Normal :

General :
• What are all those timing section for ? You use them just for the different sound samples,but there are so many different timing sections that you should use the Sampleset box instead imo.

Placements : OK.
Rhythms : OK.

Hitsounds :
• Here I really think you should put more hitsounds in the chorus than just the Whistle, because it makes your map rather flat.
Of course, they must be used sparingly, but here are some places you could use some HS :

SPOILER

00:36:181(6) , 01:03:609(6) , etc. — The music itself has a clap !
01:08:181(6) , etc. — ^
02:44:181(3) , etc. — ^
00:19:038(1,2,3) — You can do : clap on 1:Head, 2 and 3:Head for instance (but be careful, don't use this too often or it will get boring).
00:55:038(6) — A good ol' Finish.
02:44:752(4) — ^
Etc.

I didn't add claps on purpose.Thats why i have so many sections.

NC : OK.
Storyboard : —

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Hard :

General : See Normal.
Placements :
• 00:23:609(1) — This shape is not in adequacy with the rest of your sliders. Consider removing the gray dot, or shape it more frankly like 00:57:895(1) done
• 00:34:752(5,6,7) — Stacking everything here doesn't look nice imo I think thats a thing of opinion. I think it looks nice. But if more people are sugesting to change it, i'll do.
• 02:43:895(1,2,3,4,5,6) — Hard to read, mostly because of 2->3 changed

Rhythms : OK.
Hitsounds : See Normal.
NC :
• 00:32:752(9,1) — Switch NC. done
• 01:09:038(1,2) — Switch NC. done
• 01:23:038(7) — Add NC. done
• 01:59:324(1,2) — Switch NC. done

Storyboard : —

________

Your maps are already well polished, nice job, and good luck !

1. Has the video anything to do with the song or is it just a random video ... lol especially when there is an official music video for this song http://vimeo.com/30676670 but oh wait this is osu! and only anime shit stuff is allowed
2. Unusual Bitrate for the song but it is in the allowed range so ... wayne
3. "Hurry Up We're Dreaming" as tags? it is the album the song is on and also ... no tags always seems so sad ...
4. 03:39:609 - why don't you map until here ... the song is pretty much longer than you mapped it ... If you don't want to map more consider shortening the music to save some file size ... it is already huge due to the high quality video and osu! is made for the beatmaps not to get songs.
5. the brown combo color could need a tad more contrast.

1. Circle Size 3. There is no easier difficulty and that seems to make it overall better. The gap to hard wouldn't suffer either nor would it destroy the design as you used 1.2x distance spacing
2. No spinner but in Hard there are. I recommend at least one so the ranking would not end up all the same. (since it is a Normal there will be a lot of all 4 mod scores ...)
3. 00:30:466 (1) - remove NC ...You used until this point always 2 Downbeats as a measurement for NCs and here is no reason why this should be changed.
4. 00:33:895 (3,4) - flow isn't great, don't know what to suggest though without forcing remapping.
5. 00:41:324 (5) - spacing and design issue for me. Try X: 236 Y: 12. I know the HP Bar might interfer but that depends on your skin ... (for mine it would be no issue for example)
6. 00:45:609 (6,7) - flow is meh. (7) would be better on something around X: 180 Y: 112. but then would (7,1) suffer partially.
7. 00:52:752 (3) - for the sound I would actually suggest adding a reverse here but then stuff would need to be ramapped
8. 01:31:324 (6,7,1) - flow is meh. You would have to remapp stuff for changing that though
9. 01:42:466 (2,3) - swap them for better flow ... however 01:44:752 (4,5) - would feel a bit weirder, because the stack does not fit 100% here anyway.
10. 01:49:609 (4,5) - for a better flow I would suggest something like this here
    
    SPOILER

    
11. 02:05:038 (2) - feels better for me if placed X:136 Y: 192
12. 02:07:324 (5) - X: 292 X: 80 | 02:07:609 (6) - X: 256 Y: 156. Flows better imo.
13. 02:31:038 (1,2) - flow isn't great. (2) should be placed more above (1)
14. 02:35:609 (5) - placed it either more to the left or to the right ... I am overall not happy with this note due to rhythmic reasons that cannot be changed but at least the flow would be better by having this combo a / formation or more like < that kind of (the symbols represent how the combo would look like overall)
15. 02:59:038 (1,2) - the entire map no overlaps and suddenly here ... for design reasons I would prefer having no overlapps overall when there are no in the rest of the map

1. 00:26:752 (7,8) - don't like the flow here. Would suggest something like putting (8) higher than (7) on the y-axis. But you decide
2. 00:31:609 (7,8,1) - several things bother me here. The slider (7) could look nice. More like a spoon if you know what I mean and the flow of (7,8) isn't great either. I suggest putting (8) around X: 168 Y: 112. Overall (7,8,1) feels from the rhythm and spacing flow overall weird ... would change the rhythm
3. 00:34:752 (6,7,8) - very hard to read. It isn't so much fun this way :/
4. 00:42:752 (2,3,4) - due to the hitsounds I rather would see some movement here or at least only stack (3,4). It is confusing for me at them moment.
5. 00:44:466 (6,7,8) - move to X: 300 Y: 80 (mark all three before doing this ) This way the pattern feels stronger from the flow side
6. 00:47:038 (2) - move up to Y: 172 so the design improves of 00:45:895 (5,1,2) -
7. 00:53:324 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - that changing of the soft and normal hitsounds leads to a very confusing part to play :S
8. 01:41:324 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is simply HP-Draining for no reason. The music didn't change so there is nothing that calls for that in a Hard Diff.... I am aware it should make that "badaboom the beat is like before part" more heavy but it is just ... not good
9. 02:23:038 (2,3) - why is this part different than the rest before and after? Feels rather odd, because the music is exactly the same as for the other combos
10. 02:25:895 (4) - move to X: 160 Y: 332. This way there is a noticable pattern and not so ... off
11. 02:32:181 (2,3) - same as 02:23:038 (2,3) - ... it is all opinion and so but I consider that more meh then yeah
12. 02:35:609 (3) - instead of a stack I would rather go for the overall decreasing thing and use a DS of 0,8x for this one. Direction X: 468 Y: 216
13. 02:43:038 (4,5,6) - I would prefer this triple stream kind of pattern like (1,2,3) here.
14. 02:43:895 (7,1,2,3,4,5) - less confusing with a straight stream line.
15. 03:07:181 (5) - that one sounds off (there are no drums in the background calling for 1/4 here)

1. 00:18:467 (1,1) - why is this a new combo
2. 00:20:181 (3,4) - these can blanket
3. 00:23:609 (1,2) - these too
4. 00:27:038 (6) - 1/4 or repeating more than once sliders are discouraged in easy and normal
5. 00:30:466 (1) - remove NC because the rest of your map has new combo for longer periods of time
6. 01:29:324 (3,4) - you have beat snap divisor set on 1/2 and then pull this 3/4 slider
7. 02:59:038 (1,2) - overlap can be avoided
8. don't leave your easier difficulty ending before your harder one, map them so that they have the same beginning and endpoints.

1. 00:33:181 (2,3) - don't put a circle on a blue tick before a slider if it's not part of the beat, which i don't believe it is in this case
2. 00:34:752 (6,7,8) - same here, also 00:34:752 (6) - is too close to 00:35:466 (7,8) - even though there's time in between them
3. 00:48:181 (4,5,6) - overlaps like this can be avoided
4. 00:53:324 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this pattern is pretty hard compared to the rest of the map, consider making it easier
5. 01:05:895 (3) - drag the middle slider point outwards a bit to (164, 156) and also the bottom point to blanket better
6. 01:30:466 (9,10) - shorten (9) by a tick and extend (10) and move it to where (9) used to end so that a 1/4 repeating slider for 5 ticks is consistent with the rest of your map
7. 01:37:609 (2,3,4) - don't like this pattern; either keep everything stacked or space the middle circle evenly
8. 01:48:181 (4,5) - change it so that the slider hits 5 ticks
9. 03:03:895 (2,3,4) - same as i said here about spacing
10. 03:08:466 (3,4,5) - and here
11. 03:13:038 (1,2,3) - ^
12. 03:14:752 (5,1) - can blanket

Euny wrote:

lucas how about rebirth this map! i want to gd for this song