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Horie Yui - Immoralist (TV-SIZE)

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Squigly
449 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Squigly
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, May 24, 2014 at 6:01:05 PM

Artist: Horie Yui
Title: Immoralist (TV-SIZE)
BPM: 185
Filesize: 2480kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Dragon Crisis! (5 stars, 308 notes)
  2. Normal (4.32 stars, 154 notes)
  3. Smug's Hard (4.94 stars, 217 notes)
Download: Horie Yui - Immoralist (TV-SIZE)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Finally i can upload it ;^;

im curious
Last edited by Squigly , edited 30 times in total.
1319
515 posts
Joined June 2013
1319
Someone will DT this.

what is this shit score.
Squigly
449 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Squigly
Oh yeah definetley, its already been done what am i saying
Teru21
746 posts
Joined September 2011
Teru21
hai :O just wondering around and found this map by someone XD

quick check ;; BPM should be all 185. there is no BPM change. and the offset should be at 2,408 (-5) ;; on this part 00:14:083 - you shouldn't follow the vocal because the vocal sing with unstable rhythm XD ;; if you try 3/2 slider ;; you'll find yourself following the piano on the background nicely.

idk if "(TV-SIZE)" should be like that ;; the correct one probably "(TV Size)" because everyone is using that .w.

and add the GD-ers to the tags on every difficulties

thats my real quick check ;; I don't know whether you need to kds this or not but well? I guess don't kds ;;
Squigly
449 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Squigly

Teru21 wrote:

hai :O just wondering around and found this map by someone XD

quick check ;; BPM should be all 185. there is no BPM change. and the offset should be at 2,408 (-5) ;; on this part 00:14:083 - you shouldn't follow the vocal because the vocal sing with unstable rhythm XD ;; if you try 3/2 slider ;; you'll find yourself following the piano on the background nicely.

idk if "(TV-SIZE)" should be like that ;; the correct one probably "(TV Size)" because everyone is using that .w.

and add the GD-ers to the tags on every difficulties

thats my real quick check ;; I don't know whether you need to kds this or not but well? I guess don't kds ;;
I understand what you mean about not going with the voice but its what i want to do, as for the bpm, im getting mixed messages for that, ill think about it though i am thinking you are probably right. thanks for the mod
DeletedUser_3044645
DeletedUser_3044645
timing check

offset 2424 much better for me.



What's this?

Edit: I think this song is 185 bpm all the way. no need to have unnecessary bpm change and same uninherited points..
Squigly
449 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Squigly

No Dap wrote:

timing check

offset 2424 much better for me.



What's this?

Edit: I think this song is 185 bpm all the way. no need to have unnecessary bpm change and same uninherited points..
no dap why are you so beautiful btw
DeletedUser_3044645
DeletedUser_3044645
Because I am so beautiful
pkk
1,821 posts
Joined November 2013
pkk
From my modding queue~
Sorry for late mod~

[Drago Crisis!]

  • Slider velocity feels a bit fast. It probably has something to do with the frequent gaps in the map where the vocal stops, like between these two notes 00:52:835 (1,2) - or 01:03:213 (1,2) - . Not sure what you can do about this, maybe you can find someone who can look over the flow of your map for you.
  1. 00:03:862 (7) - I feel that this slider's curve is too sharp, especially when you compare it to 00:02:403 (1,3) -
    I believe it will look better if you make the curve less sharp, something like this works and it doesn't disrupt the flow:
    SPOILER
  2. 00:13:430 (1) - according to ranking criteria, manipulating slider points to change the velocity of a slider is not allowed anymore, and I am pretty sure this applies to this slider. You can keep it for now and verify if you're allowed to do this or not, but otherwise you can make a straight/somewhat straight slider and lower slider velocity with a timing point here.
  3. 00:24:457 - the hitsound volume starting from this timing point is a bit loud, I think it would still sound good if you lowered the volume by ~20%
  4. 00:34:186 (2,3,4,5) - this pattern can be made more interesting, consider adding a note at 00:34:430 -
  5. 00:33:862 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - when it comes to map design/object placement, I find that it looks better when you avoid arranging multiple objects along a path/line. For example, here you can literally draw a curved line from the start to the end. I feel that it's better to map in segments rather in a line as mapping in a line gives the map a one-dimensional or 'flat' feeling to it.

    Below is one example of how I remapped the part I highlighted above. I've lowered the AR so you can see the placement of the notes.
    SPOILER
    Not the best example since I just whipped something up quickly, but I think you get the idea. Try to experiment with different slider shapes as well, and generally avoid placing a bunch of objects in a line.
  6. 00:43:916 (5) - , 00:44:889 (1) - If you want some nice anti-jumps/whatever they call it, you can ctrl+g each of these. The flow is still good afterwards and this makes the map more fun in my opinion
  7. 00:53:970 - it feels like there should be a note here to match the vocal, otherwise it sounds a little empty
  8. 01:09:051 (2) - consider ctrl+g to make it more interesting/fun
  9. 01:09:375 (3) - to match the vocal you should make this a slider and extend it to 01:09:538 - . If you apply this change and the one above, here is one fun way that you can arrange the objects:
    SPOILER
Anyways you need to work a bit on object placement (making the map look nice). Have fun mappnig~
Squigly
449 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Squigly

pkmnyab wrote:

From my modding queue~
Sorry for late mod~

[Drago Crisis!]

  • Slider velocity feels a bit fast. It probably has something to do with the frequent gaps in the map where the vocal stops, like between these two notes 00:52:835 (1,2) - or 01:03:213 (1,2) - . Not sure what you can do about this, maybe you can find someone who can look over the flow of your map for you.
  1. 00:03:862 (7) - I feel that this slider's curve is too sharp, especially when you compare it to 00:02:403 (1,3) -
    I believe it will look better if you make the curve less sharp, something like this works and it doesn't disrupt the flow:
    SPOILER
  2. 00:13:430 (1) - according to ranking criteria, manipulating slider points to change the velocity of a slider is not allowed anymore, and I am pretty sure this applies to this slider. You can keep it for now and verify if you're allowed to do this or not, but otherwise you can make a straight/somewhat straight slider and lower slider velocity with a timing point here.
  3. 00:24:457 - the hitsound volume starting from this timing point is a bit loud, I think it would still sound good if you lowered the volume by ~20%
  4. 00:34:186 (2,3,4,5) - this pattern can be made more interesting, consider adding a note at 00:34:430 -
  5. 00:33:862 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - when it comes to map design/object placement, I find that it looks better when you avoid arranging multiple objects along a path/line. For example, here you can literally draw a curved line from the start to the end. I feel that it's better to map in segments rather in a line as mapping in a line gives the map a one-dimensional or 'flat' feeling to it.

    Below is one example of how I remapped the part I highlighted above. I've lowered the AR so you can see the placement of the notes.
    SPOILER
    Not the best example since I just whipped something up quickly, but I think you get the idea. Try to experiment with different slider shapes as well, and generally avoid placing a bunch of objects in a line.
  6. 00:43:916 (5) - , 00:44:889 (1) - If you want some nice anti-jumps/whatever they call it, you can ctrl+g each of these. The flow is still good afterwards and this makes the map more fun in my opinion
  7. 00:53:970 - it feels like there should be a note here to match the vocal, otherwise it sounds a little empty
  8. 01:09:051 (2) - consider ctrl+g to make it more interesting/fun
  9. 01:09:375 (3) - to match the vocal you should make this a slider and extend it to 01:09:538 - . If you apply this change and the one above, here is one fun way that you can arrange the objects:
    SPOILER
Anyways you need to work a bit on object placement (making the map look nice). Have fun mappnig~
thank you for the beautiful mod, tis a shame i didnt have smug-'s diff uploaded at that time due to bpm changes, regardless thank you for the mod
DeletedUser_3044645
DeletedUser_3044645
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Squigly Pleaseeeeeeeee
ActionWords
9 posts
Joined November 2013
ActionWords
For Smug's Hard, why don't we make the stacks at 00:07:105 (1,2,3) - , 00:11:484 (1,2,3,4) - , 00:17:484 (2,3,4) - , 00:22:673 (2,3,4) - 01:22:348 (3,4,5) - , 01:23:643 (4,5,6) - , and 01:26:725 (1,2,3,4) - a bit more interesting or something. I was thinking like shape them into small triangles, squares, or something instead of keeping them as plain stacks.

Just a thought, I'm new to modding and stuffs.


please don't hate :?
Squigly
449 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Squigly

Vertigos1 wrote:

For Smug's Hard, why don't we make the stacks at 00:07:105 (1,2,3) - , 00:11:484 (1,2,3,4) - , 00:17:484 (2,3,4) - , 00:22:673 (2,3,4) - 01:22:348 (3,4,5) - , 01:23:643 (4,5,6) - , and 01:26:725 (1,2,3,4) - a bit more interesting or something. I was thinking like shape them into small triangles, squares, or something instead of keeping them as plain stacks.

Just a thought, I'm new to modding and stuffs.


please don't hate :?
thats fine i appreciate the mods even if i dont take them, but being as this is a hard diff i dont think we will apply that, sorry :/
ActionWords
9 posts
Joined November 2013
ActionWords
thats fine i appreciate the mods even if i dont take them, but being as this is a hard diff i dont think we will apply that, sorry :/
Oh, good point, just trying to help :oops:

EDIT: (because I don't want to spam post)

Can you add the soft hits from the Dragon Crisis! difficulty (the ones around 00:14:078 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) ) to the Hard mode? I like how they sound as opposed to the default sounds.
- Milhofo -
683 posts
Joined February 2014
- Milhofo -
[General]

- Really liked the song and the maps overall, I'm still not good enough to give a good opinion on more than Hard diff so I'm not gonna do it.
- Kiai Time is different in all diffs and non existent in Normal

[Normal]

- The slider at 00:27:538 (8) - seems a bit off timing, aswell as the one at 00:30:132 (2) - then most notes up until 00:33:538 (7) - follow that mistake I think.
- At 00:38:727 (1) - I'm assuming it's on purpose but why so many colors/combos? :lol:
- 00:53:808 (7) - this note is hard to notice at times, since is normal diff, not a big problem though

[Smug's Hard]

- Some combos end on top of others which is kinda strange for me (it's more of a personal taste thing), for example 00:15:051 (2) - and 00:16:348 (4) -
- The stacks at 00:17:484 (2) - , 00:22:673 (2) - , 01:22:346 (3) - and 01:23:643 (4) - could be on different positions, on the side for example. Because their from different sounds from what comes next (trying to explain this the best I can ._.)



This is my first mod so I don't expect everything to be good advice, just what I think of the map based on the rules I read. Got to start somewhere :) Good luck!
Squigly
449 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Squigly

Milhofo wrote:

[General]

- Really liked the song and the maps overall, I'm still not good enough to give a good opinion on more than Hard diff so I'm not gonna do it.
- Kiai Time is different in all diffs and non existent in Normal

[Normal]

- The slider at 00:27:538 (8) - seems a bit off timing, aswell as the one at 00:30:132 (2) - then most notes up until 00:33:538 (7) - follow that mistake I think.
- At 00:38:727 (1) - I'm assuming it's on purpose but why so many colors/combos? :lol:
- 00:53:808 (7) - this note is hard to notice at times, since is normal diff, not a big problem though

[Smug's Hard]

- Some combos end on top of others which is kinda strange for me (it's more of a personal taste thing), for example 00:15:051 (2) - and 00:16:348 (4) -
- The stacks at 00:17:484 (2) - , 00:22:673 (2) - , 01:22:346 (3) - and 01:23:643 (4) - could be on different positions, on the side for example. Because their from different sounds from what comes next (trying to explain this the best I can ._.)



This is my first mod so I don't expect everything to be good advice, just what I think of the map based on the rules I read. Got to start somewhere :) Good luck!
Hey man dont worry we all start somewhere, thanks for the mod, i forgot about kiai time in the normal, ill look into the rest of what you suggested. Even if its a personal taste its always nice to hear another opinion.
Fizz
275 posts
Joined September 2013
Fizz

Milhofo wrote:

[Smug's Hard]

- Some combos end on top of others which is kinda strange for me (it's more of a personal taste thing), for example 00:15:051 (2) - and 00:16:348 (4) - As you said, personal taste ^^ I like it how it is
- The stacks at 00:17:484 (2) - , 00:22:673 (2) - , 01:22:346 (3) - and 01:23:643 (4) - could be on different positions, on the side for example. Because their from different sounds from what comes next (trying to explain this the best I can ._.) I understand what you mean, so I decided to move them and up the volume of the quiet hitsounds



This is my first mod so I don't expect everything to be good advice, just what I think of the map based on the rules I read. Got to start somewhere :) Good luck!
Ty for mod :)

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[General]
AudioFilename: dragn crisis! opening.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: -1
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 2403,12781,14078,24457,34833,47808,50402,51700,69862,77646,88024
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.299999

[Metadata]
Title:Immoralist (TV-SIZE)
TitleUnicode:Immoralist (TV-SIZE)
Artist:Horie Yui
ArtistUnicode:Horie Yui
Creator:Squigly
Version:Smug's Hard
Source:
Tags:
BeatmapID:399984
BeatmapSetID:159640

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.3
SliderTickRate:1

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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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144,36,37267,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,96,37430,6,0,B|200:176|264:44|352:108,1,260,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
308,252,38402,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,304,38727,2,0,P|180:240|172:176,1,130
84,52,39375,2,0,P|116:88|204:96,1,130,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,116,40024,5,0,0:0:0:0:
348,116,40348,2,0,P|360:172|424:212,1,130,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
464,60,40997,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,44,41321,2,0,P|276:104|208:116,3,130,0|0|0|0,0:0|3:0|1:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
76,172,42619,5,0,0:0:0:0:
200,268,42943,1,0,0:0:0:0:
44,264,43267,1,0,1:0:0:0:
168,360,43592,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,360,43754,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,360,43916,6,0,P|244:340|272:280,1,130
320,152,44564,1,0,1:0:0:0:
176,88,44889,2,0,P|164:128|140:144,1,65
80,100,45213,6,0,P|92:200|180:212,2,195
236,88,46510,2,0,P|300:84|360:140,1,130
432,256,47159,1,0,1:0:0:0:
432,256,47483,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,332,47807,6,0,B|256:332|208:324,2,65
348,276,48294,2,0,B|388:276|436:268,2,65
288,224,48780,2,0,B|248:224|200:216,2,65
340,168,49267,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,156,49429,2,0,P|412:100|344:48,1,130
296,100,49916,6,0,L|248:136,6,32.5
116,268,51699,6,0,P|92:228|96:188,2,65,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
172,320,52186,1,0,1:0:0:0:
324,356,52510,1,2,1:0:0:0:
448,260,52834,1,2,1:0:0:0:
300,204,53159,2,0,P|300:140|328:76,2,130,0|0|0,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,280,53970,1,0,1:0:0:0:
268,340,54132,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,352,54294,6,0,P|164:312|172:272,1,65
204,232,54618,1,0,1:0:0:0:
148,176,54781,2,0,P|120:120|120:48,2,130,0|0|0,1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
204,232,55591,2,0,P|256:252|284:248,1,65,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,172,55916,2,0,P|204:152|176:156,1,65,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
136,204,56240,2,0,P|120:175|116:143,1,65,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
177,92,56564,2,0,P|192:120|196:152,1,65,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
204,232,56889,5,4,0:0:0:0:
248,296,57051,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,340,57213,1,0,1:0:0:0:
320,264,57375,2,0,P|256:216|196:236,2,130,0|2|2,1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
384,308,58186,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,268,58348,2,0,P|458:204|421:152,2,130,0|0|0,1:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
384,308,59159,2,0,P|352:336|308:340,1,65,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,276,59483,6,0,P|228:260|156:276,1,130,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
176,352,59970,2,0,P|224:308|224:228,2,130,0|0|0,0:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
116,304,60780,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,304,60943,2,0,L|72:232,2,65,0|0|0,0:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
172,252,61429,2,0,L|128:180,1,65,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
192,140,61753,2,0,L|225:195,1,65,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
280,252,62078,6,0,P|332:248|348:240,2,65,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
188,300,62564,1,0,1:0:0:0:
44,240,62889,1,2,1:0:0:0:
192,192,63213,1,2,1:0:0:0:
192,192,63375,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,63537,2,0,P|240:132|272:72,2,130,0|0|0,1:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
112,192,64348,2,0,P|128:244|156:264,1,65,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,300,64672,6,0,L|328:304,1,130,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
396,308,65159,1,0,1:0:0:0:
260,232,65483,1,0,1:0:0:0:
184,96,65808,2,0,P|220:136|304:136,2,130,0|0|0,1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
240,40,66618,2,0,P|272:56|316:48,1,65,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
372,24,66943,2,0,P|404:8|448:16,1,65,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
492,60,67267,6,0,L|476:144,1,65,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,200,67591,1,0,1:0:0:0:
408,256,67753,1,0,1:0:0:0:
408,256,68078,1,2,1:0:0:0:
408,256,68402,1,2,1:0:0:0:
408,256,68726,6,0,B|364:252|360:216|360:216|312:208|300:168,2,130,0|0|0,1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
484,280,69537,2,0,P|456:320|424:332,1,65,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,328,69862,5,0,1:0:0:0:
28,132,70672,2,0,P|52:72|120:32,1,130,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
484,124,71808,6,0,B|417:139|393:99|393:99|353:119|389:155|361:179|361:179|345:199|361:243,1,260,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
48,48,73267,2,0,B|48:88|48:88|64:112|96:120|96:120|96:168,1,130,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
444,328,74402,6,0,P|432:296|440:288,7,32.5
400,260,75051,6,0,P|388:228|380:184,5,65
368,57,77645,6,0,L|277:68,1,65,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
225,74,77970,1,0,1:0:0:0:
185,140,78132,2,0,P|170:186|180:229,1,65
158,280,78456,1,0,0:0:0:0:
113,346,78618,2,0,P|85:313|80:270,1,65,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,212,78943,6,0,P|128:228|176:228,1,65
228,240,79267,1,0,1:0:0:0:
228,240,79429,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,68,80078,1,0,0:0:0:0:
499,92,80240,6,0,L|490:176,1,65
415,168,80564,2,0,P|414:212|423:241,1,65,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
489,264,80889,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,315,81051,1,0,0:0:0:0:
357,339,81213,1,0,1:0:0:0:
281,331,81375,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,276,81537,6,0,P|196:240|196:200,1,65
248,160,81862,2,0,P|264:196|264:236,1,65,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
357,339,82348,1,0,0:0:0:0:
357,339,82510,1,0,1:0:0:0:
357,339,82672,1,0,0:0:0:0:
357,339,82834,6,0,P|384:300|384:264,1,65
356,212,83159,1,0,1:0:0:0:
308,148,83321,2,0,P|286:123|278:92,1,65
216,44,83645,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,44,83807,1,0,1:0:0:0:
216,44,83970,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,44,84132,6,0,L|128:56,2,65,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
292,32,84618,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,344,85267,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,344,85429,6,0,P|275:306|302:271,1,65
362,310,85754,2,0,P|390:280|411:241,1,65,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
347,209,86078,1,0,0:0:0:0:
347,209,86240,2,0,P|376:156|426:108,1,130
502,110,86727,5,0,0:0:0:0:
502,110,86889,1,0,0:0:0:0:
502,110,87051,1,0,1:0:0:0:
502,110,87213,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,96,88024,6,0,L|68:72,6,43.3333333333333
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Squigly Pleaseee
Squigly
449 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Squigly

No Dap wrote:

Squigly Pleaseee
no dap pls mod my map
Raiku
238 posts
Joined April 2012
Raiku
Raiku mod!

I'm going to post an intensive mod for the normal diff if you don't mind to start off with hopefully you get a better idea of how I would go about making a normal manageable for a newbie player. I felt this diff needs the most work as you said.

[General]

Add 'Kiyoshi Ryujin' and 'Takahashi Gou' to the tags on all diffs (Composer/Arrangers).


[Normal]

I recommend slider velocity 0.8-0.9 for a Normal diff. It will be more manageable for beginners since you have to take the high BPM in mind too, and this way you can avoid having the 1/4 sliders looking too short and stubby which comes with the circle size.

I suggest adjust the distance spacing by holding alt and dragging the peg to 1.5 where the beat snap divisor would be. I also suggest you use distance snap throughout the song perhaps.

Make sure that the spacing between all notes are even and that there are no large jumps if you do decide to make a 1/4 jump which I would personally recommend you don't in a normal.

Avoid any note overlaps as it can confuse the newer player into thinking they have to hit the overlapped note instead causing a frustrating miss.

00:03:700 (4) - I suggest a new combo for the start of the next big beat.

00:04:024 (5) - I recommend angling this slider towards the next note for enhanced flow and for continuous spacing (http://puu.sh/8jzrT.jpg).

00:04:997 (3,4,5) - I feel that you should make it so that slider 3 and 4 are equidistant from the body of slider 5 so that the pattern looks symmetrical and the spacing is consistant (http://puu.sh/8jAFF.jpg).

00:06:294 (5) - To fit the rhythm you were going for with this slider to match the syncopated beat, enable 1/4 beat snap divisor and then re-adjust the slider length so that it ends on the red tick (http://puu.sh/8jKqk.jpg).

00:09:213 (4,1,2) - I felt that this was too large of a jump for a normal, perhaps use the distance snap in conjunction with distance spacing 1.5?

00:10:186 (1,2) - When blanketing two sliders, it is important to take into account the symmetry of the blanket, making sure the curve of the sliders are equal and symmetrical and that the curve fits with the approach circle of the head of the slider. Another point to note is that the head and tail of each slider are directly in line with the center point of the curve of the sliders, you will see a perfect triangle form between the head of the first slider and the head and tail of the second slider and likewise. Here is an example of how I would construct the perfect blanket: (http://puu.sh/8jLwp.jpg).

00:14:078 (1) - Perhaps make the decrease in hitsound volume a little more subtle, perhaps make it slowly decrease from a few notes before so the player has a chance to deal with how to time his hits with lowered hitsounds.

Remember about the spacing throughout the song, no drastic jumps in normals. My rule for easy and normals is that if the jump has your cursor greatly exceed the slider velocity in order to succeed it, then reduce the jump size.

00:17:970 (1,2) - Same rule of blanketing applies to this (http://puu.sh/8jLXT.jpg).

00:23:646 (2,4,5) - Perhaps space these notes apart a little more to avoid this overlap.

00:24:943 (4,5,6) - Notice that you've mapped this part with the timing between 5 and 6 greater than 4 and 5 but the spacing remains the same? This will confuse the newer player into hitting 6 too early. Perhaps space out 6 from 5 a little more to avoid the anti-jump.

Another rule of mine to consider is to make the spacing between your slider blankets equal the spacing between notes in your map in general.

00:28:835 (10,1) - I recommend neatening this blanket for beauty and to coincide with the way you have created the other blankets in the map to uphold continuity (http://puu.sh/8jMnl.jpg).

I highly recommend fixing all your blankets so that they are all equal in spacing and curve to each other for symmetry and continuity.

00:40:997 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Quite a bit of cluster going on here, perhaps re-organize the pattern so it flows a little better within itself.

00:46:511 (4) - Extend this slider by one tick on 1/4 beat snap divisor so that it ends on the white tick to match the timing.

00:51:700 - KIAI HERE FOR IMPACT!

00:53:808 (7) - I suggest making this circle a slider that ends on the white tick just like the sliders before it to match the vocals, the sudden abruptness of the circle seems to leave out the last part of this particular vocal.

00:56:078 (5,1,2) - This overlap that goes back on itself can seriously confuse the player, especially when the overlap is very close to the note you are supposed to hit, perhaps realign it so that you avoid the overlap such as this (http://puu.sh/8jMMK.jpg).

01:13:267 (1) - With sliders such as these where they are more constricted by kinks, try to at least expose the head side of the body so that the newer player can judge the timing of the slider by its rough distance like so (http://puu.sh/8jN9m.jpg).


Using the ideas I've presented in this mod post, try and look for ways you can improve the diff whilst still keeping your style of mapping in mind because that is important, it IS your map after all. Also, its always important when mapping a normal to keep the demographic of players who actually PLAY the normal in mind, look through a normal players eyes and consider yourself what would be manageable or not.

PM me at any time if you need help with anything live and i'l invite you to mumble and talk through it with you. Best of luck!
Squigly
449 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Squigly

Raiku wrote:

Raiku mod!

I'm going to post an intensive mod for the normal diff if you don't mind to start off with hopefully you get a better idea of how I would go about making a normal manageable for a newbie player. I felt this diff needs the most work as you said.

[General]

Add 'Kiyoshi Ryujin' and 'Takahashi Gou' to the tags on all diffs (Composer/Arrangers).


[Normal]

I recommend slider velocity 0.8-0.9 for a Normal diff. It will be more manageable for beginners since you have to take the high BPM in mind too, and this way you can avoid having the 1/4 sliders looking too short and stubby which comes with the circle size.

I suggest adjust the distance spacing by holding alt and dragging the peg to 1.5 where the beat snap divisor would be. I also suggest you use distance snap throughout the song perhaps.

Make sure that the spacing between all notes are even and that there are no large jumps if you do decide to make a 1/4 jump which I would personally recommend you don't in a normal.

Avoid any note overlaps as it can confuse the newer player into thinking they have to hit the overlapped note instead causing a frustrating miss.

00:03:700 (4) - I suggest a new combo for the start of the next big beat.

00:04:024 (5) - I recommend angling this slider towards the next note for enhanced flow and for continuous spacing (http://puu.sh/8jzrT.jpg).

00:04:997 (3,4,5) - I feel that you should make it so that slider 3 and 4 are equidistant from the body of slider 5 so that the pattern looks symmetrical and the spacing is consistant (http://puu.sh/8jAFF.jpg).

00:06:294 (5) - To fit the rhythm you were going for with this slider to match the syncopated beat, enable 1/4 beat snap divisor and then re-adjust the slider length so that it ends on the red tick (http://puu.sh/8jKqk.jpg).

00:09:213 (4,1,2) - I felt that this was too large of a jump for a normal, perhaps use the distance snap in conjunction with distance spacing 1.5?

00:10:186 (1,2) - When blanketing two sliders, it is important to take into account the symmetry of the blanket, making sure the curve of the sliders are equal and symmetrical and that the curve fits with the approach circle of the head of the slider. Another point to note is that the head and tail of each slider are directly in line with the center point of the curve of the sliders, you will see a perfect triangle form between the head of the first slider and the head and tail of the second slider and likewise. Here is an example of how I would construct the perfect blanket: (http://puu.sh/8jLwp.jpg).

00:14:078 (1) - Perhaps make the decrease in hitsound volume a little more subtle, perhaps make it slowly decrease from a few notes before so the player has a chance to deal with how to time his hits with lowered hitsounds.

Remember about the spacing throughout the song, no drastic jumps in normals. My rule for easy and normals is that if the jump has your cursor greatly exceed the slider velocity in order to succeed it, then reduce the jump size.

00:17:970 (1,2) - Same rule of blanketing applies to this (http://puu.sh/8jLXT.jpg).

00:23:646 (2,4,5) - Perhaps space these notes apart a little more to avoid this overlap.

00:24:943 (4,5,6) - Notice that you've mapped this part with the timing between 5 and 6 greater than 4 and 5 but the spacing remains the same? This will confuse the newer player into hitting 6 too early. Perhaps space out 6 from 5 a little more to avoid the anti-jump.

Another rule of mine to consider is to make the spacing between your slider blankets equal the spacing between notes in your map in general.

00:28:835 (10,1) - I recommend neatening this blanket for beauty and to coincide with the way you have created the other blankets in the map to uphold continuity (http://puu.sh/8jMnl.jpg).

I highly recommend fixing all your blankets so that they are all equal in spacing and curve to each other for symmetry and continuity.

00:40:997 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Quite a bit of cluster going on here, perhaps re-organize the pattern so it flows a little better within itself.

00:46:511 (4) - Extend this slider by one tick on 1/4 beat snap divisor so that it ends on the white tick to match the timing.

00:51:700 - KIAI HERE FOR IMPACT!

00:53:808 (7) - I suggest making this circle a slider that ends on the white tick just like the sliders before it to match the vocals, the sudden abruptness of the circle seems to leave out the last part of this particular vocal.

00:56:078 (5,1,2) - This overlap that goes back on itself can seriously confuse the player, especially when the overlap is very close to the note you are supposed to hit, perhaps realign it so that you avoid the overlap such as this (http://puu.sh/8jMMK.jpg).

01:13:267 (1) - With sliders such as these where they are more constricted by kinks, try to at least expose the head side of the body so that the newer player can judge the timing of the slider by its rough distance like so (http://puu.sh/8jN9m.jpg).


Using the ideas I've presented in this mod post, try and look for ways you can improve the diff whilst still keeping your style of mapping in mind because that is important, it IS your map after all. Also, its always important when mapping a normal to keep the demographic of players who actually PLAY the normal in mind, look through a normal players eyes and consider yourself what would be manageable or not.

PM me at any time if you need help with anything live and i'l invite you to mumble and talk through it with you. Best of luck!
you are beautiful btw
NaxelCL
NaxelCL
GOGOGOGOGOGO! RANK
Kihhou
1,040 posts
Joined March 2013
Kihhou
M4M here~

[General]
  1. check aim mod. you have a bunch of inconsistent tags, sources, and some preview points not set.
[Normal]
  1. 00:04:997 (3) - NC! to follow the other nc things you have like at 00:07:105 (1) -
  2. 00:07:105 (1) - change to 2 hitcircle for consistency ><
  3. thats all im going to say about this diff because imo you should remap this. normal diff shouldnt be about blankets. theyre very nice blankets but the distance snap should be consistent all the way through :/ gameplay for them is more important than aesthetics
[Smug's Hard]
  1. 00:07:105 (1) - remove NC. theyre pick up notes but you dont put NC on your other pick up notes like on 00:04:835 (4) - 00:10:024 (5) -
  2. 00:38:727 (3) - make this face the other way so theres better flow?
    --
  3. 01:15:051 (1) - put one less reverse! maybe add a hitcircle at 01:16:673 - or something because its a bit strange having a different vocal be a part of the same slider
  4. nice diff!
[Dragon Crisis!]
  1. 00:09:700 (1,2) - i would change into a slider like 00:07:105 (1) - for consistency. i know its probably intentional but it's better to keep some things the same imo
  2. 00:14:078 - from here to 00:24:457 , theres very little objects. its not a problem for someone whos very good but if youre not so hot, the hp drain is cutting it close. i would put an NC at every section at 00:15:457 (3) - 00:16:754 (5) - 00:18:051 (8) - 00:20:646 (3) - 00:21:943 (5) - 00:23:159 (8) -
  3. 00:27:538 (5) - would change to slider for better followup
    --
  4. 00:30:132 (5) - same ^
  5. 00:32:240 (2) - ^
  6. 00:32:727 (4) - ^
  7. 00:33:862 (1) - rremove NC. its not a new section yet!
  8. 00:34:835 (6) - add NC. theres the new section!
  9. 00:44:889 (1) - remove NC. i think youre trying to follow what you did for the intro. its not the same here though. doesnt ahve the same effect :/
  10. 00:53:159 (2) - random slider o-o think a hitcircle would be more fitting
  11. 01:02:078 (5) - add NC. new vocal section
  12. 01:22:348 (1,2) - same as before! slider imo!
  13. 01:27:375 (1,1,1,1) - should ctrl J these so theres a jump between 01:27:051 (9,1)
Really love the Hard diff~ Nice song too!
Good Luck!~ c:
Squigly
449 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Squigly

Kihhou wrote:

M4M here~

SPOILER
[General]
  1. check aim mod. you have a bunch of inconsistent tags, sources, and some preview points not set.
[Normal]
  1. 00:04:997 (3) - NC! to follow the other nc things you have like at 00:07:105 (1) -
  2. 00:07:105 (1) - change to 2 hitcircle for consistency ><
  3. thats all im going to say about this diff because imo you should remap this. normal diff shouldnt be about blankets. theyre very nice blankets but the distance snap should be consistent all the way through :/ gameplay for them is more important than aesthetics
[Smug's Hard]
  1. 00:07:105 (1) - remove NC. theyre pick up notes but you dont put NC on your other pick up notes like on 00:04:835 (4) - 00:10:024 (5) -
  2. 00:38:727 (3) - make this face the other way so theres better flow?
    --
  3. 01:15:051 (1) - put one less reverse! maybe add a hitcircle at 01:16:673 - or something because its a bit strange having a different vocal be a part of the same slider
  4. nice diff!
[Dragon Crisis!]
  1. 00:09:700 (1,2) - i would change into a slider like 00:07:105 (1) - for consistency. i know its probably intentional but it's better to keep some things the same imo
  2. 00:14:078 - from here to 00:24:457 , theres very little objects. its not a problem for someone whos very good but if youre not so hot, the hp drain is cutting it close. i would put an NC at every section at 00:15:457 (3) - 00:16:754 (5) - 00:18:051 (8) - 00:20:646 (3) - 00:21:943 (5) - 00:23:159 (8) -
  3. 00:27:538 (5) - would change to slider for better followup
    --
  4. 00:30:132 (5) - same ^
  5. 00:32:240 (2) - ^
  6. 00:32:727 (4) - ^
  7. 00:33:862 (1) - rremove NC. its not a new section yet!
  8. 00:34:835 (6) - add NC. theres the new section!
  9. 00:44:889 (1) - remove NC. i think youre trying to follow what you did for the intro. its not the same here though. doesnt ahve the same effect :/
  10. 00:53:159 (2) - random slider o-o think a hitcircle would be more fitting
  11. 01:02:078 (5) - add NC. new vocal section
  12. 01:22:348 (1,2) - same as before! slider imo!
  13. 01:27:375 (1,1,1,1) - should ctrl J these so theres a jump between 01:27:051 (9,1)
Really love the Hard diff~ Nice song too!
Good Luck!~ c:
luv yu bae <3
Midge
475 posts
Joined December 2012
Midge
Hey, m4m

[Normal]
really needs to have ds on, spacing in this diff varies too much. 00:06:294 (5,1,1) is a good example

00:03:375 (3) - stack 3 right on top of the end of 1 if you're going to stack (which i don't recommend for normals, but you're doing it here, so :L) http://puu.sh/8O4sH.jpg
00:41:970 (5,6,7) - really hard overlap for normal imo
00:49:754 (1) - mmmm too hard again
00:51:700 - kiai should start here
00:56:078 (5,1,2) - veeeery confusing for normal. if i were new, i'd think the next note would be the 2. gotta use the mindset of a >100k rank person
00:59:321 (1,2,3) - confusing spacing. a lot of these issues would be fixed with ds on
01:09:700 - hitsounds need to be audible, if you're going to turn it down here, don't do it all the way
01:17:646 - everything after this is very oddly spaced. please please PLEASE use ds on normal and easy diffs

[Smug's Hard]
lot's of stacks. i personally find them kinda boring, but i'm in no place to say that since this is pretty good :L

00:14:078 (1) - try this: http://puu.sh/8O4UT.jpg
00:52:186 (2,3,4) - kinda confusing, especially if you don't know the song, i'd use a repeatign slider instead. in 01:02:564 (2,3,4), it would be ok, because they are expecting the same pattern. just my thoughts
01:15:051 (1) - again, try this: http://puu.sh/8O4Zo.jpg
01:19:592 - map this section to keep it consistent with 01:22:348 (3,4,5)
01:24:781 - ^
01:27:375 - ^

[Dragon Crisis!]
00:08:078 (4) - blanket w/in 2 http://puu.sh/8O5lm.jpg
00:09:700 (1,2,1) - confusing imo, move 2 down to the middle
00:24:457 - the problem with mapping exclusively vocals is that there's holes in the middle of each verse. you should fill those holes with the background music
00:39:213 (4) - nazi mod, move it up a little
00:48:294 (1) - nc
00:48:781 (4) - nc
00:49:267 (7) - nc
01:00:619 (1,1,1,1) - i understand that there's an sv change on each slider, but it's barely noticeable and you should use 1 combo
01:04:673 (7) - nc
01:09:051 (1,1,1) - remove ncs
01:15:051 - remove break here for consistency with the other diffs
01:22:348 (1,2,1) - mmm should use the triangle shape again :L

i like it

Good luck o/
Kihhou
1,040 posts
Joined March 2013
Kihhou
you should uh. tell me what you did and what you didnt do :D so i can learn and be a better modder c: ~
Fizz
275 posts
Joined September 2013
Fizz

Kihhou wrote:

[Smug's Hard]
  1. 00:07:105 (1) - remove NC. theyre pick up notes but you dont put NC on your other pick up notes like on 00:04:835 (4) - 00:10:024 (5) - done
  2. 00:38:727 (3) - make this face the other way so theres better flow? that would actually make the flow worse, as it is the slider points towards the next slider start
    --
  3. 01:15:051 (1) - put one less reverse! maybe add a hitcircle at 01:16:673 - or something because its a bit strange having a different vocal be a part of the same slider done, this one makes a lot of sense :3
  4. nice diff!

Midge wrote:

[Smug's Hard]
lot's of stacks. i personally find them kinda boring, but i'm in no place to say that since this is pretty good :L agreed I'll probably go and change it around a little, it's been a while since I've made this diff owo

00:14:078 (1) - try this: http://puu.sh/8O4UT.jpg done
00:52:186 (2,3,4) - kinda confusing, especially if you don't know the song, i'd use a repeatign slider instead. in 01:02:564 (2,3,4), it would be ok, because they are expecting the same pattern. just my thoughts normally I would agree with this but in this case I prefer how it is now
01:15:051 (1) - again, try this: http://puu.sh/8O4Zo.jpg applied with the other mod but still done ^w^
01:19:592 - map this section to keep it consistent with 01:22:348 (3,4,5) done
01:24:781 - ^ done
01:27:375 - ^ I'm gonna keep this one the same
Thanks for the mods! :)

updoot
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Squigly
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Squigly

Midge wrote:

Hey, m4m

[Normal]
really needs to have ds on, spacing in this diff varies too much. 00:06:294 (5,1,1) is a good example

00:03:375 (3) - stack 3 right on top of the end of 1 if you're going to stack (which i don't recommend for normals, but you're doing it here, so :L) http://puu.sh/8O4sH.jpg
00:41:970 (5,6,7) - really hard overlap for normal imo
00:49:754 (1) - mmmm too hard again
00:51:700 - kiai should start here
00:56:078 (5,1,2) - veeeery confusing for normal. if i were new, i'd think the next note would be the 2. gotta use the mindset of a >100k rank person
00:59:321 (1,2,3) - confusing spacing. a lot of these issues would be fixed with ds on
01:09:700 - hitsounds need to be audible, if you're going to turn it down here, don't do it all the way
01:17:646 - everything after this is very oddly spaced. please please PLEASE use ds on normal and easy diffs

[Smug's Hard]
lot's of stacks. i personally find them kinda boring, but i'm in no place to say that since this is pretty good :L

00:14:078 (1) - try this: http://puu.sh/8O4UT.jpg
00:52:186 (2,3,4) - kinda confusing, especially if you don't know the song, i'd use a repeatign slider instead. in 01:02:564 (2,3,4), it would be ok, because they are expecting the same pattern. just my thoughts
01:15:051 (1) - again, try this: http://puu.sh/8O4Zo.jpg
01:19:592 - map this section to keep it consistent with 01:22:348 (3,4,5)
01:24:781 - ^
01:27:375 - ^

[Dragon Crisis!]
00:08:078 (4) - blanket w/in 2 http://puu.sh/8O5lm.jpg
00:09:700 (1,2,1) - confusing imo, move 2 down to the middle
00:24:457 - the problem with mapping exclusively vocals is that there's holes in the middle of each verse. you should fill those holes with the background music
00:39:213 (4) - nazi mod, move it up a little
00:48:294 (1) - nc
00:48:781 (4) - nc
00:49:267 (7) - nc
01:00:619 (1,1,1,1) - i understand that there's an sv change on each slider, but it's barely noticeable and you should use 1 combo
01:04:673 (7) - nc
01:09:051 (1,1,1) - remove ncs
01:15:051 - remove break here for consistency with the other diffs
01:22:348 (1,2,1) - mmm should use the triangle shape again :L

i like it

Good luck o/
thanks for the mod bby gurl rest assured, even though i dont say how well a mod is, that usually means that i think its good.
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