yanaginagi - Tokohana (TV Size) · forum

Muya

Joined August 2009

Topic Starter

Muya 2014-04-16T05:12:45+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年5月13日 at 20:00:11

Artist: yanaginagi
Title: Tokohana (TV Size)
Source: ブラック・ブレット
Tags: Black Bullet wring Amamiya Yuko Skystar
BPM: 150
Filesize: 18234kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:

Easy (2.23 stars, 85 notes)
Hard (4.8 stars, 209 notes)
Insane (5 stars, 297 notes)
Normal (4.37 stars, 150 notes)
Skystar's Extra (5 stars, 321 notes)
wring's Hard (4.9 stars, 213 notes)

Download: yanaginagi - Tokohana (TV Size)
Download: yanaginagi - Tokohana (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Last edited by Muya 2014-05-13T11:02:15+00:00, edited 4 times in total.

MasterCraft_old_1

MasterCraft_old_1 2014-04-22T15:13:12+00:00

[ General ]

• You should find an mp3 with higher volume
• Remove useless greenlines in every diff

[ Normal ]

• 00:08:091 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - This 1/2 pattern looks quite ugly
• 00:11:891 (1) - This spinner is too short

Since it's a WIP diff, there isn't too much to say

Sorry for short mod, but that map is short and already good-mapped. Good luck~
I hope it's helpful

-MasterCraft-

wring

596 posts

Joined February 2010

wring 2014-05-08T16:37:01+00:00

ものすごく遅くなってすみません。
http://puu.sh/8Ee89.osu

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Tokohana.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 63359
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.799999

[Metadata]
Title:Tokohana (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:繝医さ繝上リ
Artist:yanaginagi
ArtistUnicode:繧・↑縺弱↑縺�
Creator:Muya
Version:wring's Hard
Source:繝悶Λ繝・け繝ｻ繝悶Ξ繝・ヨ
Tags:Black Bullet wring
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"Tokohana.flv"
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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waxman 2014-05-08T16:54:40+00:00

　

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DeletedUser_1574070 2014-05-09T01:51:21+00:00

誰もモッドしないように見えるけどなぜなのかは分からんが俺時間ちょっと残ってこの譜面見てたからモッドまでしようっという感じになって
自分勝手のモッドだけどよろ

(500posts自祝)

General

Wring's Hard のタッグ見ててね~

Insane

00:56:269 (1) - Finish要らなさそう
01:14:730 - これは良く分からんが俺ならここにもサークル入れたと思います
01:26:269 - ここも俺ならボーカル終わるまでノート入れたと思う(が、全譜面同じく終わってるからこれでもいいと思う）

リングハード

00:02:491 (1,2,3) - これちょっと遠いんじゃないかね
00:04:091 (1,2) - 同じく
00:10:491 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - これはパタンがしょうがないな。。でもやっぱ遠いよ
00:30:351 (4,1) - 今までのパタン通りならここStackした方が良さそう
00:32:127 (5) - ヘッドにFinish要らなさそう
00:37:807 (5) - 同じ
もしかしてこのFinish置きたままにしたいなら00:39:227 (1,3,7) - これらの頭にもFinish入れてみて
00:49:168 (6,7) - 両方Ctrl+Gしてみよ
01:13:310 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - ここに適当にFinishで音飾りした方がいいと思う！
01:25:381 (3) - 頭にFinish

Hard

00:26:091 (5) - これがちょっといきなり出てきちゃって。。。俺なら00:26:091 (5) - までにして　00:26:446 - にサークル置く
00:47:393 (3) - にも入れたように　00:36:387 (4) - ここにも小さなFinishでも入れるのはどうかな

Normal

00:36:387 (1) - 00:47:748 (8) - 前diffと同じくfinish

Easy

00:28:931 (2) - ここにあるFinishを外して、00:29:286 (3,4) - こいつらの頭にFinish入れてみよ
00:41:357 (4) - 15度まわしてBlanketしましょ
00:52:008 (1) - 足よりは頭にFinish入れた方が

グッドジョブゴッドマップグッドラック

Muya

2,355 posts

Joined August 2009

Topic Starter

Muya 2014-05-09T10:11:55+00:00

>Kloyd
ありがとう～ tagだけ修正しました

-Yuzuriha

574 posts

Joined March 2012

-Yuzuriha 2014-05-09T17:14:04+00:00

00:38:872 ここから音あげるのではなく　00:42:422　ここからあげたほうがいいです

(easy)

01:07:452　ここからスライダー

01:16:150　ここから２つ目の赤で折り返しのスライダー

01:17:570　NC

(Nomal)

全体的にサークル同士が近すぎるので、DSをもっとあげましょう

01:17:748　NC

01:20:766　NC

01:23:251　NC

(hard)

00:26:091　やめたほうがいいです

00:32:127 次の白まで普通にスライダーで伸ばしてください

(wrigs hard)

00:32:837 clap delete
00:44:198 ^

00:35:322 clap in

01:14:908 DSが厳しい

以上modでしたー

参考になれば幸いです(´∀｀)

Xiaolin

1,857 posts

Joined April 2013

Xiaolin 2014-05-09T19:12:02+00:00

From Q
[General]
-Preview point should start from here ----> 01:03:724
-You must write in the tags if it was an ED or OP
[Easy]
00:53:428 (1) - Remove NC

Muya

2,355 posts

Joined August 2009

Topic Starter

Muya 2014-05-11T17:52:19+00:00

> -Yuzuriha-inori- , Lapis Aoki
sorry, no changed

Neta

536 posts

Joined May 2011

Neta 2014-05-12T08:32:29+00:00

Hi muya~

Here's some mod from your queue

[General]

Only insane diff you didn't check WideScreen Support. check this please
I think Easy and Normal has too big gap on this song. decrease normal's difficulty or make one more diff will be fine

[Easy]

01:07:630 (1) - add Finish on start of slider
01:11:890 (3) - put whistle on start of slider

[Normal]

00:11:691 (3) - move to 460, 316 looks nice
00:22:186 (1) - Add finish on start of slider
00:36:387 (1) - add Finish
01:06:032 (4) - I think locate this note one tick down looks better to 332, 128
01:23:251 (5) - how about put finish on the start of slider? i think it sounds good

[Hard]

00:22:186 (1) - Add finish on start of slider
00:26:091 (5) - Isn't this beat more fit on here? Instrument goes reverse just once not third
SPOILER
00:44:553 (3) - Add finish on end of slider
01:11:890 (1) - Add finish on start of slider

[Insane]

00:44:908 (1) - Add finish on start of slider
01:11:890 (1) - ^
00:52:718 (4,5,6) - i think Clap on 4,6 sounds better

really nice map....★

good luck~

Muya

2,355 posts

Joined August 2009

Topic Starter

Muya 2014-05-12T11:39:26+00:00

Neta wrote:
[General]
Only insane diff you didn't check WideScreen Support. check this please
[Normal]
01:06:032 (4) - I think locate this note one tick down looks better to 332, 128

fixed these, thanks!

wring

596 posts

Joined February 2010

wring 2014-05-12T14:07:21+00:00

Kloyd wrote:
リングハード

00:02:491 (1,2,3) - これちょっと遠いんじゃないかね
00:04:091 (1,2) - 同じく
00:10:491 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - これはパタンがしょうがないな。。でもやっぱ遠いよ
00:30:351 (4,1) - 今までのパタン通りならここStackした方が良さそう
00:32:127 (5) - ヘッドにFinish要らなさそう ok
00:37:807 (5) - 同じ ok
もしかしてこのFinish置きたままにしたいなら00:39:227 (1,3,7) - これらの頭にもFinish入れてみて
00:49:168 (6,7) - 両方Ctrl+Gしてみよ
01:13:310 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - ここに適当にFinishで音飾りした方がいいと思う！
01:25:381 (3) - 頭にFinish ok

感覚的にはそこまで遠いと感じないと思うのでkeepで
Thanks modding

-Yuzuriha-inori- wrote:
(wrigs hard)

00:32:837 clap delete
00:44:198 ^

00:35:322 clap in ok

01:14:908 DSが厳しい

Thanks modding

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Tokohana.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 63359
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.799999

[Metadata]
Title:Tokohana (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:トコハナ
Artist:yanaginagi
ArtistUnicode:やなぎなぎ
Creator:Muya
Version:wring's Hard
Source:ブラック・ブレット
Tags:Black Bullet wring
BeatmapID:418713
BeatmapSetID:166442

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:1

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Video,0,"Tokohana.flv"
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
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Skystar

1,628 posts

Joined May 2011

Skystar 2014-05-20T15:17:54+00:00

http://puu.sh/8TVjm.osu
some update

Come[Back]Home

1,790 posts

Joined October 2011

Come[Back]Home 2014-05-31T14:50:18+00:00

Easy
00:02:091 (2) Why not something curvy too?
00:08:491 (2) ^
00:11:891 (1) Delete spinner?
00:42:422 (1,2,3,4) Why didn't you map to the voice? It was really cool
00:47:748 (1,2,3,4,5) ^

Normal
00:37:630 Add HC or add new Slider here 00:37:452
01:13:132 Add HC

Hard
00:04:491 (3) Blank this one better
00:26:091 (5) In my opinion this one really doesn't fit

wring's Hard
I couldn't find anything...

Insane
Maybe at the soft part. Add some Whistles like in wings's Hard. That would fit perfectly
00:06:491 Why normal hitsounds here? I think soft hitsounds would be better

Skystar's Extra
00:47:748 (1,2) Add whistle
I think its a little bit overmapped ^^"

A very nice Beatmap :3 I am looking forward to see it ranked