Teara wrote:

Second recheck.

No kd's

[Easy]

New slider starting at 00:29:807 - and ending at 00:30:703 - (Whistle on Start and End) fix

Start the spinner here 00:31:151 - and end on 00:32:942 - (Finish on spinner) fix

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^ follows the music a bit better IMO.

00:37:419 (1) - Give this slider a slight curve, at the moment its very linear and doesn't look to good. fix
00:39:210 (3) - ^ fix

00:55:330 (2) - Whistle on the last repeat (00:56:673 - ) fix
01:01:151 (1) - Whistle on all the repeats, the reason for this is to empathize the vocal parts. fix

01:02:942 (3) - Remove the whistle on the start and make it a clap instead, with the change of music the claps are more suited fix

01:07:419 (2,3) - Please dont hide a hit circle in a Easy diff. All notes should be visible at all times. fix

01:14:136 (7,8) - This should be avoided too in a Easy diff. fix

01:23:986 (5) - I dont like it when you have to silence a beat that doesn't exist. Please remap this part so that you dont have to use 5% hitsound volume.
Remove 5%

[Normal]

Keeping hitsounds consistent is important

00:49:957 (3) - Please put a whistle here to keep with current hitsound usage. fix

There is also a lot of plain looking sliders which can be made to look nicer, but thats just me being nazi again.

[Insane]

01:15:479 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - While this does play ok, I feel the stream doesn't really emphasize the "da-em-ma" part of the vocals. Just a suggestion you can ignore.. As you say, very good. But removing the stream do not think T^T

Is something like this...

SPOILER

Teara wrote:

Regarding (TV Ver.) in title.

lil_yumika_lil wrote:

Go Go~♪

lil_yumika_lil wrote:

Go Go~♪

HabiHolic wrote:

lil_yumika_lil wrote:

Go Go~♪

go!!!

sksmwkd125 wrote:

카렌님 화이팅 입니다! ><

W h i t e wrote:

축하드립니다 ^_^

[ Yuki ] wrote:

ㅋㄹㄴㄷ 나한테 감사하셈 나 아니었으면 님 난이도 하나 만들어야했음ㅋㅋㅋmaybe?

[ Karen ] wrote:

[ Yuki ] wrote:

ㅋㄹㄴㄷ 나한테 감사하셈 나 아니었으면 님 난이도 하나 만들어야했음ㅋㅋㅋmaybe?

아니 ㅋㅋ 이분은 왜자꼬 나타나는거야
미국갓으면 공부나 하세여 ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ

[ Yuki ] wrote:

ㅋㄹㄴㄷ 나한테 감사하셈 나 아니었으면 님 난이도 하나 만들어야했음ㅋㅋㅋmaybe?

[Kanbe Kotori] wrote:

[ Yuki ] wrote:

ㅋㄹㄴㄷ 나한테 감사하셈 나 아니었으면 님 난이도 하나 만들어야했음ㅋㅋㅋmaybe?

하드캐리라 주장하는 유키님(?)

p3n wrote:

[Zzz's Hard]
great hitsounding~ ( Thanks. p3n )

p3n wrote:

[Easy]
There are so many stacks in this map. Stacks are very hard and confusing for most beginners. If you remove all the stacks by placing notes seperately this will be a good beginner's map.
01:23:986 (5) - turning point doesn't fit on the blue tick. Try to use something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1323237 and don't forget the finish hitsound on the last slider ending. < fix

01:02:942 (3) - 01:15:479 (2) - <<Complete the rest of the fix, except < Change seems to be a strange

[Normal]
The calm part before the KIAI with the 1/4 beats in the song feels really off for me. I know it is easier for beginners to play a more steady beat and the mapped beat could be considered "still okay". I'm conflicted here but I will let it pass for this diff because the gameplay benefits for the target group outweigh the benefits of closely mapping the beat.




[Zzz's Hard]
great hitsounding~



[Insane]
good~



[Habi's Insane]
Same difficulty settings as 'Insane'. I recommend to increase OD+1 here. You could also lower the HP drain on 'Insane' by 1 but I prefer higher OD on Habi's map.

OD + 1 HP - 1




If you fix the stacks and the wrong slider in 'Easy' and adjust the difficulty settings for the highest difficulty we are good to go

Norman wrote:

첫랭 축하합니다

[ Yuki ] wrote:

좋아!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 드뎌 랭크다!!!!!!!!!!!오오 테러다~~~야어우야뉴녀노내노노너너너야우냐모냐뉴야도댜노냐너내어우앶 랭크다!!!!!!!!
랭크 파괴하자!!!~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~카레 랭크다~~~~~~~~~~~오오오오오ㅗ오오오오오오오오오ㅗ오오오오오오오오오오오오오오오오오오오오오오오오오에에에에에에에에에에에애애애애애애ㅐ오아오아오아와오아
추카추카추카추카추카추카추카추타투패쿠채누처 ;랭크추카추카추키추카추카하하하하라하하하하하하하하하하하하하하하하하라하 )

Sonnyc wrote:

첫랭 축하합니다~

HabiHolic wrote:

My Insane diff?

HabiHolic wrote:

My Insane diff?

Leader wrote:

Can't we have a bg with better quality than the current one, please? .w.

p3n wrote:

Stack Leniency in Hard is fine (value set in editor) and the desired effect works fine for the triplets.

Melophobia wrote:

Stack Leniency 0 on Hard difficulty is unrankable. Please set it back to 7.

Charles445 wrote:

Melophobia wrote:

Stack Leniency 0 on Hard difficulty is unrankable. Please set it back to 7.

Stack leniency hasn't been a rule for 8 months, so it's not a reason to unrank this.

Thread discussing stack leniency

Ranking Criteria wrote:

Do not manually edit anything in an .osu file that cannot be changed through the Editor. The only exceptions are .osu-specific storyboards and skin-related options such as SliderBorder and SliderTrackOverride.

Charles445 wrote:

Melophobia wrote:

Stack Leniency 0 on Hard difficulty is unrankable. Please set it back to 7.

Stack leniency hasn't been a rule for 8 months, so it's not a reason to unrank this.

Thread discussing stack leniency

[ Yuki ] wrote:

ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ진짜 랭크 파괴됨ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ계획대로군 후훗

__M A S__ wrote:

랭곡 하나 만들기 참 힘듬..
뱃 비위도 맞춰줘야하고..

Zero__wind wrote:

I've just seen this map and now I'm thinking that,
it would be good if some basic hitsounds could be added before reranking again
the points below are so basic that no reason is needed to be given imo
but still, I'm not forcing anything cause these are of course not unrankable issue

Easy
00:19:509 - finish
00:48:166 - ^
00:55:330 - ^

Normal
00:18:613 - finish
00:55:330 - ^
01:00:703 - ^
01:26:673 - ^
01:09:210 - clap
01:23:539 - ^

Zzz's Hard
00:12:345 - whistle
00:22:419 - ^
00:18:613 - finish
01:00:031 - ^
01:21:748 - remove whistle

Insane
00:18:613 - finish
00:47:046 - ^
01:23:986 - ^
01:26:673 - ^
00:53:875 - clap (?)

Habi's Insane
00:32:942 - finish
00:47:046 - ^
00:46:151 - move finish to 00:46:598 - (?)

That's all
Good luck

grumd wrote:

habis insane

01:03:837 (1) - make a proper triangle here
01:18:166 (3) - move it to 436;204

hard

00:19:061 (4,1) - this is quite hard to read because you dont know how much repeats this has. http://puu.sh/6UBFJ.jpg this is better
01:27:345 - this is very bad because the spinner start is not tactile at all and the 5th note doesn't make sense. you have two choices http://puu.sh/6UBPQ.jpg or http://puu.sh/6UBR5.jpg

normal

00:48:166 (1) - too close note after a spinner. you'll need more time to recover, this is a normal diff (00:47:270 - move spinner end here?)
01:01:151 (1) - same (you can remove the first slider after spinner, will help)

easy

00:19:509 (1) - same stuff, too close after spinner. (00:18:613 - move end here?)
00:33:837 (1) - try to place this closer to the screen center to make it easier to play it after spinner <<There is a time after a spinner, so it will be ok...
00:47:046 - finish sound is here, place spinner end here?
01:01:151 (1) - same as normal, remove this slider to make it easier to play after spinner

W h i t e wrote:

리랭 축하드려요~

OverPower wrote:

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1333375


랭크하시겠다니 진짜로 랭크하셨네요!!

축하드려요~

Fast wrote:

또다시 언랭으로.. ..

lil_yumika_lil wrote:

카렌수고해요...참으로 힘드네요

Sonnyc wrote:

__M A S__ wrote:

랭곡 하나 만들기 참 힘듬..
뱃 비위도 맞춰줘야하고..

비위 문제는 아니고 명백한 언랭 사유 때문입니다. :3