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Shiro Amano - Twister [OsuMania]

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Topic Starter
mike91lau
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, 2 January, 2014 at 4:26:30 PM

Artist: Shiro Amano
Title: Twister
Source: すばらしきこのせかい Subarashiki Kono Sekai/ The World End With You
Tags: mania Subarashiki Kono Sekai The World End With You its a wonderful world twister shiro amano
BPM: 240
Filesize: 6194kb
Play Time: 01:14
Difficulties Available:
  1. 4K EZ - 4Key (1.78 stars, 280 notes)
  2. 4K HARD - 4Key (2.82 stars, 448 notes)
  3. 4K INFINITY - 4Key (4.51 stars, 699 notes)
  4. 4K MAX - 4Key (3.8 stars, 582 notes)
  5. 7K EZ - 7Key (2.05 stars, 287 notes)
  6. 7K HARD - 7Key (3.45 stars, 490 notes)
  7. 7K MAX - 7Key (4.84 stars, 655 notes)
Download: Shiro Amano - Twister
Download: Shiro Amano - Twister (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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7k infinity deleted cause too overmoding xD
too sad >.<
who can give suggestion please give
don' be shy shy xD
JUST GIVE!!
TQ \^_^/

last update: 2/1/2014 <minor video offset timing fixed>
UnitedWeSin
Yo, I took a look at the map as you requested.

  1. Your timing is a bit off. Try this timing instead:
    BPM: 120
    Offset : 535
    Make sure to resnap all notes and timing sections after you change the timing!
  2. Tags are conflicting in the diffs, make sure tags are the exact same in each diff.
  3. Open AIMod under the File menu and check all the errors that it lists. Make sure to fix unsnapped notes/timing sections and conflicting metadata.
  4. You cannot use an all black combo color, so you need to change the combo color 3 to something else. The reason is that the approach circle is completely invisible against a black background.
As for the mapping, I couldn't play the diff. 00:00:500 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This pattern is incredibly difficult compared to the rest of the map. 00:01:750 (10,11,12) - This is incorrect spacing. Please use distance snap in this situation. You have more spacing between the 11 and 12 than you do the 10 and 11, but the 11-12 is 1/4 while the 10-11 is 1/2. Just an example there.

00:14:500 (1,2,3) - Do not use major slider velocity changes like this unless they can correspond with specific tempo changes or ideas in the music. Check out the ranking guidelines for more info.

Anyways, I think you need to work a lot more on this. My best suggestion is for you to open up maps from your favorite mappers in the editor and study what they are doing to make it work.

Good luck!
Topic Starter
mike91lau
Okay~~ Done fixed it~
riffy
Yo, you asked me to take a look at this.

Well, first of all, you didn't apply what UWS told you to do. (Timing cchanges). That's why the timing is still off. Secondly, you didn't use Distance Snap, it makes the map unreadabe. You'll find some links to our osu!wiki below, don't worry!

[A couple of suggestions]
  1. 00:18:785 (1,2) - REDUCTION 02 - This reverse-arrow is invisible. It's IMPOSSIBLE to notice it in time, threfore it's unrankable. See?
  2. 00:57:035 (4,1) - REDUCTION 02 - this is a relaxing diff, don't use jumps here! Jumps are mostly for [Hard]/[Insane] diffs.
  3. Velocity changes in the easiest diff. C'mon, beginneras are UNABLE to read your velocity changes. Try to avoid them here. - REDUCTION 01
Links:
http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Osu!mania_Ranking_Criteria
http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Beat_Snap_Divisor
http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria
https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Mapping_Techniques
Yes, there's a lot of things to read, but rules are really simple and it's not really hard to understand them. So, please, take your time and read them!

Once you're done with changes and updates feel free to ask me again!
Topic Starter
mike91lau
OK , understand :oops:
Fixed ~~ ;)
[Shi-Ra]
Hi there (from SRMQ) :3/

Shi-Ra's Patterns Review:

(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 4 5 6)
7K EZ
Inside :3
There's many notes in this diff which goes one after the other, it's hard to play for novice player, so there's my suggestion about note spreading in this diff, try to follow it:

00:03:535 (3535|4) - move to 6th column, it's more comfortable to play

00:04:285 (4285|6) - move to 3rd column, don't leave center column empty

00:05:535 (5535|5) - move to another column, I recommend to 1st or 6th, this note is distinguished by its sound

00:11:535 (11535|0) - move this note to 2nd column, same reason ^

00:15:535 (15535|6) - move to 3rd or 4th column, same reason ^

00:24:035 (24035|4) - move to 2nd column, more comfortable conversion from previous note to next

00:29:285 (29285|2,29785|2) - move these notes to 3rd column, it'll be more comfortable pattern

00:34:285 (34285|4) - move to 3rd column again, same reason ^

00:36:035 (36035|2,36035|4) - move to 1st and 5th columns accordingly, it's hard to catch two notes in a row for novice

00:50:285 (50285|2) - move to 1st column, this pattern more comfortable

00:59:035 (59035|4) - move to 6th column maybe, it's playable anyway

01:13:285 (73285|6,73285|0) - delete, four notes simultaneously so hard for EZ

7K HD
Inside :3
Same problem, many notes in this diff are going one after another. It's good that you follow rhythm, but the patterns are look boring, you can follow rhythm with placing notes into different columns, there's some pattern suggestions:

From 00:03:535 to 00:05:535 - I suggest you to use this pattern

00:06:535 (6535|2) - move to 1st column, this triplet more comfortable

00:07:285 (7285|4) - move to 2nd column and 00:07:410 (7410|4) - move to 3rd column, same reason ^

00:15:410 (15410|4) - move to 2ns column again then 00:15:535 (15535|4) - move to 6th column, continue making triplets like this and previous

From 00:18:535 to 00:26:535 - you should add more notes, this part looks empty for HD

00:54:410 (54410|6) - delete this, there's no need in second note

7K MX
Inside :3
Only some suggestions, this diff is good:

00:02:535 (2535|5) - move it to 4th column and I suggest you to avoid such situations, when note are going after LN in same column

00:04:410 (4410|6) - move to 5th column, same reason ^

00:13:035 (13035|1) - move this to 2nd column, same ^

00:13:285 (13285|1) - move to 3rd column, good ending for this pattern I think

00:16:410 (16410|0) - move to 2nd column again, make a transition between previous note and LN after it

00:27:535 (27535|0) - move to 2nd or 6th column, it's better to end this LN in this way

00:30:035 (30035|4) - move to 3rd column, more comfortable pattern

00:37:785 (37785|2) - move to 1st column and try to avoid such situation like in the beginning and try to continue in this way

00:47:785 (47785|2) - move to 3rd column, it'll looks better and more playable

01:02:535 (62535|2) - delete this, there's no need in second note

7K INFINITY
Inside :3
Wow...this diff look overmapped for its length. There's many unnecessary notes, but I can't write here all of them, sorry. I suggest you to use more different patterns in this diff and trying to follow music roads. There's no need to spend two columns on one vocal or rhythm, you can get high difficulty in this map without overmapping it.

Good luck :3/
Spy
Hello,mod by request !

[General]
Letterbox during breaks →Please close it.

[4K EZ]
00:08:285 - Add a note
00:39:285 (39285|2) - Remove
00:39:910 - Add a note
00:40:035 (40035|1) - Remove
00:40:910 (40910|3) - Remove
00:41:910 (41910|0) - Remove
00:41:910 (41910|0) - Add a note
00:44:035 (44035|2) - Remove
00:44:910 (44910|1) - Remove
00:45:910 (45910|0) - Remove
00:47:910 - Add a note
00:48:035 (48035|3) - Remove
00:50:910 (50910|1) - Remove
00:51:410 (51410|3) - Remove

[4K HARD]
00:18:410 - Add a note
00:19:410 (19410|3,19660|3) - Remove
00:23:910 - Add a note
00:39:910 - Add a note
00:40:035 (40035|1) - ?
00:40:910 (40910|3,40910|0) - Remove
00:41:410 (41410|3,41410|0) - Remove
00:41:910 (41910|3,41910|0) - Remove
00:42:410 (42410|2,42410|1) - Remove
00:43:910 - Add a note
00:44:035 (44035|2) - ?
00:44:910 (44910|3,44910|1) - Remove
00:45:410 (45410|2,45410|1) - Remove
00:45:910 (45910|2,45910|0) - Remove
00:46:410 (46410|0,46410|2) - Remove
00:47:910 - Add a note
00:48:035 (48035|3) - Remove
00:48:035 (48035|3) - Add a note
00:50:910 (50910|0) - Remove
00:51:410 (51410|3) - Remove
00:55:910 - Add a note
01:03:910 - Add a note
01:06:535 (66535|3,66910|0,67035|0,67410|3,67535|3) - Strange
01:10:035 (70035|0,70035|3) - Remove
01:12:910 - Add a note
Rumia-
[7k hard]
00:00:535 (535|0,660|1,785|2,910|3,1035|4,1160|5,1285|6,1410|5) - try this? http://puu.sh/5giAm.png
the pitch isnt suitable for stairs
00:01:785 - add a note
00:26:535 (26535|1) - move to 7th
00:27:410 (27410|5,27410|6) - move to 3rd and 5th . better pattern
00:29:910 (29910|1,29910|0) - ^
00:29:035 (29035|5) - to 1st
00:31:535 (31535|0,31660|1,31785|2,31910|3,32035|4,32160|5,32285|6) - ctrl +j
00:33:160 (33160|4,33285|5,33410|6) - like this? http://puu.sh/5giMH.jpg
00:49:285 - add a note
00:55:097 (55097|3,55347|1,55347|5,55597|0,55597|6,55847|4,55847|2,56097|3,56347|6,56347|0) - unsnapped?

[7k Max]
00:00:535 (535|6,535|0,660|3,660|2,785|4,910|5,910|2,1035|1,1035|5,1160|2,1160|6,1160|0,1285|5,1285|3,1410|2,1410|5) - try like this? http://puu.sh/5giYw.png
00:01:535 (1535|4) - move to 4th collumn
00:01:910 (1910|3) - move to 2nd collumn
00:03:410 (3410|4) - move left
00:04:785 (4785|2) - move here? 00:04:910
00:07:785 - add here
00:17:910 - add a hold as the trumpet sound presents here
00:34:910 (34910|4,34910|3) - move to right
00:35:035 (35035|3,35035|2) - to left
00:35:410 (35410|3) - move to 1st collumn
00:35:535 (35535|3) - to 7th collumn
move to 7th collumn
00:36:160 (36160|1,36160|3,36160|2) - move to right
00:36:785 (36785|6,36785|0,37035|4,37035|2,37285|2,37285|4,37535|0,37535|6) - like this? http://puu.sh/5gjiP.png

[7k INF]
change the timing points to inherited points = 120 bpm = x0.5
Akasha-
Mod by request
Column: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 |
[4K EZ]
OD 6 HP 6
00:03:035 - 00:07:035 - | 1 | empty
00:08:535 (8535|2) - end at 00:10:535
00:30:035 (30035|1,30035|2) - move to | 1 | and | 4 |
00:36:160 (36160|2,36160|1) - ↑
01:13:285 (73285|2,73285|3,73285|0,73285|1) - remove 2
[7K EZ]
OD 6 HP 6 [hope so]
00:03:035 - 00:07:035 - | 1 | empty
00:08:535 (8535|3) - end at 00:10:535
00:14:785 - 00:20:785 - | 2 | empty
00:23:535 (23535|6) - move to | 1 |
00:40:910 (40910|6) - move to | 5 |
00:41:910 (41910|0) - move to | 3 |
01:05:535 (65535|6) - move to | 6 |
01:06:035 (66035|0,66285|0) - move to | 4 |
[4K Hard]
OD 8
00:10:285 (10285|2,10285|1) - move to | 1 | and | 4 |
00:16:035 (16035|1,16035|2) - ↑
00:28:785 - 00:30:285 - | 1 | and | 4 | empty
00:32:410 (32410|2) - move to | 2 |
00:35:910 (35910|1,35910|2) - move to | 1 | and | 4 |
00:54:410 (54410|3) - move to | 2 |
00:58:410 (58410|2) - ↑
01:05:535 (65535|3,65535|0) - move to | 2 | and | 4 |
01:10:035 (70035|0) - remove
[7K Hard]
00:26:535 (26535|1) - move to | 4 |
00:27:410 (27410|5,27410|6) - remove one
00:29:035 (29035|5) - move to | 4 |
00:29:910 (29910|0,29910|1) - remove one
00:32:410 (32410|5,32410|6) - ↑
01:13:285 - add a slider, end like 01:13:285 (73285|0)
[4K MAX]
Too hard for me! Can't mod
[4K INFINITY]
Too hard for me! Can't mod
[7K MAX]
00:00:785 - add a note
00:01:160 (1160|2,1160|0,1160|6) - remove one
00:59:285 (59285|1) - remove
01:13:285 (73285|1,73410|4,73410|2,73535|5,73660|2,73660|4,73785|1,73910|4,73910|2,74035|5,74160|4,74160|2,74285|1,74285|5,74410|1,74410|2,74410|5,74410|4) - should remove, no sound in here!
01:13:347 (73347|6) - begin at 01:13:285
01:13:285 (73285|0,73285|3,73347|6) - end at 01:14:535
[7K INFINITY]
Can't mod! Too Hard!

Too Hard!
Topic Starter
mike91lau

- R u m i a - wrote:

[7k hard]
00:00:535 (535|0,660|1,785|2,910|3,1035|4,1160|5,1285|6,1410|5) - try this? http://puu.sh/5giAm.png
the pitch isnt suitable for stairs
00:33:160 (33160|4,33285|5,33410|6) - like this? http://puu.sh/5giMH.jpg

[7k Max]
00:00:535 (535|6,535|0,660|3,660|2,785|4,910|5,910|2,1035|1,1035|5,1160|2,1160|6,1160|0,1285|5,1285|3,1410|2,1410|5) - try like this? http://puu.sh/5giYw.png
00:36:785 (36785|6,36785|0,37035|4,37035|2,37285|2,37285|4,37535|0,37535|6) - like this? http://puu.sh/5gjiP.png
these link i cannot open T^T
sad
hope u can fix soon ^^
Topic Starter
mike91lau

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Mod by request
Column: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 |
[4K EZ]
OD 6 HP 6
00:03:035 - 00:07:035 - | 1 | empty
00:08:535 (8535|2) - end at 00:10:535
00:30:035 (30035|1,30035|2) - move to | 1 | and | 4 |
00:36:160 (36160|2,36160|1) - ↑
01:13:285 (73285|2,73285|3,73285|0,73285|1) - remove 2
[7K EZ]
OD 6 HP 6 [hope so]
00:03:035 - 00:07:035 - | 1 | empty
00:08:535 (8535|3) - end at 00:10:535
00:14:785 - 00:20:785 - | 2 | empty
00:23:535 (23535|6) - move to | 1 |
00:40:910 (40910|6) - move to | 5 |
00:41:910 (41910|0) - move to | 3 |
01:05:535 (65535|6) - move to | 6 |
01:06:035 (66035|0,66285|0) - move to | 4 |
[4K Hard]
OD 8
00:10:285 (10285|2,10285|1) - move to | 1 | and | 4 |
00:16:035 (16035|1,16035|2) - ↑
00:28:785 - 00:30:285 - | 1 | and | 4 | empty
00:32:410 (32410|2) - move to | 2 |
00:35:910 (35910|1,35910|2) - move to | 1 | and | 4 |
00:54:410 (54410|3) - move to | 2 |
00:58:410 (58410|2) - ↑
01:05:535 (65535|3,65535|0) - move to | 2 | and | 4 |
01:10:035 (70035|0) - remove
[7K Hard]
00:26:535 (26535|1) - move to | 4 |
00:27:410 (27410|5,27410|6) - remove one
00:29:035 (29035|5) - move to | 4 |
00:29:910 (29910|0,29910|1) - remove one
00:32:410 (32410|5,32410|6) - ↑
01:13:285 - add a slider, end like 01:13:285 (73285|0)
[4K MAX]
Too hard for me! Can't mod
[4K INFINITY]
Too hard for me! Can't mod
[7K MAX]
00:00:785 - add a note
00:01:160 (1160|2,1160|0,1160|6) - remove one
00:59:285 (59285|1) - remove
01:13:285 (73285|1,73410|4,73410|2,73535|5,73660|2,73660|4,73785|1,73910|4,73910|2,74035|5,74160|4,74160|2,74285|1,74285|5,74410|1,74410|2,74410|5,74410|4) - should remove, no sound in here!
01:13:347 (73347|6) - begin at 01:13:285
01:13:285 (73285|0,73285|3,73347|6) - end at 01:14:535
[7K INFINITY]
Can't mod! Too Hard!

Too Hard!
thank q
u help me alot ^^
Sorarei
from my queue, my apologize being late

[General]
Take a look for metadata

you need to fix 3 following error thread , then your tempo must be set to 120 BPM in every difficult. unherited timing must be same place and timed..
about the source title you need to put one of them, i suggest change source to Subarashiki Kono Sekai
- Preview time suggest in 00:54:535 -
- recommended to use this inherited and unherited timing
535,500,4,1,1,40,1,0
535,-66.6666666666667,4,1,1,40,0,0
54535,-66.6666666666667,4,1,1,40,0,1
68535,-66.6666666666667,4,1,1,40,0,0

[4K Easy]
hitsound position mostly wrong place, and unnecessary inherited timing point, too many rapid style like this 00:11:285 (11285|1,11535|1,11785|1,12035|2,12285|2) - better change some to stream/stairs pattern

[7K Easy]
00:08:035 (8035|1) - move this to 1st, it's more comfortable to play
00:20:535 - try this http://puu.sh/6765A.png
00:34:910 - add double note, following this pattern and sound 00:36:035 (36035|5,36035|1,36160|2,36160|4) -
00:35:410 - ^
00:35:910 - ^
00:49:535 - avoid this style http://puu.sh/676kO.png, it's make boring to play. better use this following pattern style http://puu.sh/676xh.png all column be filled in this section
00:52:535 (52535|4,52535|2,53035|6,53035|0,53535|1,53535|5) - change LN style more better

[4K Hard]
you need change some rapid style to stream/stairs pattern
00:08:535 - not recommended to use this because can't enjoyable http://puu.sh/676Z5.png, use this following pattern than enjoyable to play http://puu.sh/6779W.png
00:17:785 (17785|2,17910|1,17910|0,18035|0,18035|3,18160|0,18160|3,18410|1) - make them more easy by removing 2 LN
00:26:035 (26035|3,26160|0,26285|3) - remove this, jackhammer doesn't need for this music style

[7K Hard]
00:09:035 (9035|1,9285|5) - move to 1st and 7th, spread it
00:10:160 (10160|3,10160|5,10160|1) - change LN column position that didn't behind 00:08:535 (8535|3,9785|5) -
00:34:910 (34910|5,35035|1) - remove them for reducing jackhammer volume
00:55:097 (55097|3,55347|1,55347|5,55597|0,55597|6,55847|2,55847|4,56097|3,56347|6,56347|0) - didn't place right beat, so move to 1/2 snap that can be placed red and white line

[4K Maximum]
this difficult may be not enjoyable to play, too much jackhammer pattern that boring to play, remove them
reduce note/LN volume, this is too high for 4K
00:30:535 (30535|1,30535|2,30660|3,30660|0) - change this LN style like this http://puu.sh/678aA.png, do same things but different pattern for same issue
00:56:535 (56535|2,56785|1,56910|2,57035|3,57285|2,57410|3,57535|2,57785|1) - unbalance pattern, move some to the left
01:00:535 (60535|0,60785|1,60910|0,61035|1,61285|2,61410|1,61535|0,61785|1) - same as above but move to right
01:13:285 (73285|0,73285|3,73285|1,73285|2) - remove 1 LN

[4K Infinity]
what is difficult for ? you already have 7K Maximum

[7K Maximum]
00:00:660 (660|3,785|1,910|2,1035|5,1160|0,1285|5,1410|2) - delete this
00:40:785 (40785|4,40785|2,41285|0,41285|2) - really make confuse for this note placement, delete or move to end LN do this for same issue
00:41:785 (41785|3,41785|4,42285|2,42285|3,42785|1) - ^
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