1. Hard (4.39 stars, 319 notes)
2. Insane (4.96 stars, 545 notes)
3. Normal (2.48 stars, 234 notes)

ThoomyyxD wrote:

I can make normal?

mintong89 wrote:

2ha太神了

Lan wings wrote:

"[KwaiMay]二度落花暮様如"

也许你需要加点tags

另外好像见到一点东西 不知道哪个对
Tiara - 时をとめて（feat. WISE）

另外再附一个作者感言里的东东

1. ...Why is the BG's resolution 1280x917? The height exceeds the maximum height that is enforced by the rules. Also, I think you should find a BG with 4:3 or 16:9 aspect ratio so it won't look weird while playing (because it's going to be stretched either way). Just change this into something that's actually rankable.
2. The song is sung by Tiara and WISE (I think you can hear a guy rapping throughout the song, too, right?), so change the artist to Tiara. feat WISE (or maybe add "feat. WISE" to the title, since it looks like most websites place "feat. WISE" in the title). Also, change the title to Toki wo Tomete? No matter how do you look at it, the current romaji doesn't feel correct at all...

1. 00:27:786 (2) - Not a must, but maybe make this slider curved like this so the overall pattern will look neater here? It also improves the flow a bit.
2. 00:49:260 (1) - I prefer to see this moved to (136,300) to mirror 00:46:733 (1,2,3)'s position, and (again) it will make the flow better. Still, this is not that necessary.
3. 00:56:838 (1) - You may want to move this to (132,48) so the pattern here will look a little tidier.
4. 02:01:260 (3,4,5) - Is it intentional to use ~1,4x (1,38x) here, instead of your usual ~1,3x?
5. 03:15:786 (1) - Move the node on the tail of the slider to (56,92) (or just make sure that the tail of this slider isn't close to 03:17:049 (2)'s head) so the overall design will be less messy here?
6. 03:32:207 (2) - Similar to 00:27:786 (2), but bend it to the right instead of left.
7. 03:48:628 - I don't know if this is intentional or not, but either way, add a whistle to follow the instrument? Feels empty right now...

1. 00:40:733 (4,5,1) - Make a jump between (5,1) instead of between (4,5)? Feels more natural and follows the song's instruments more accurately, especially to emphasize the cymbal at 00:41:681 (1).
2. 01:01:891 (1,2) - The flow is kinda weird due to how they were positioned. I don't know if this is, again, intentional or not, but I still recommend to make them look like this.
3. 01:25:575 - Remove the whistle here and add one at 01:25:891 (3) instead, because the piano is stronger at 01:25:891?
4. 01:28:417 - Also add a whistle here to follow the piano?
5. 02:00:944 (2,3,4,5) - IMO, this pattern is too linear, and it makes the flow very rigid and awkward here. I recommend to make a less linear flow, maybe like this for example.
6. 02:20:207 (5) - This is very minor, I know, but maybe move this so it's higher than 02:19:891 (4)? For example, move it to (260,188)? This helps in emphasizing the increase of the music's power.
7. 02:37:891 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why are (2,3) stacked here? The music has nothing that can be represented well with the stack. Maybe make a pentagon out of these five objects, instead?
8. 02:47:365 (3,1) - Make a jump between them to emphasize the cymbal at 02:47:996 (1)?
9. 02:52:417 (3,1) - ^
10. 03:01:260 (2,3) - ^ (This seems to happen a lot. Sometimes, you made a jump when a cymbal's sound is heard, but sometimes you don't. I recommend to make jumps out of them to accentuate the strong points in the song.)
11. 03:29:681 (3,4,5,6) - I also think this pattern is a little too linear, like 02:00:944 (2,3,4,5). Make it more curved so the flow here will be better?
12. 03:34:575 (4,5,6) - ^

1. ...I don't know why, but despite this being a 95 BPM song, the intensity is pretty high to the point where I can consider this a 190 BPM Insane with a lower velocity. And I actually feel more comfortable with AR9 instead of AR8, because of the map's pace. Maybe try it? I know this will conflict with how relaxing is the song, though, so it's okay to keep the AR to 8. For me, though, it just feels a little slow with AR8.
2. 02:16:417 - Add a whistle here to follow the piano?
3. 02:16:733 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - Uh, the current rhythm and placement isn't comfortable, at least for me... Try changing (2,3) to a 1/4 slider, unstack (4,5), and make a jump between (1,2)? The reason is too hard to be explained, so I guess you should try this by yourself~ (Essentially, I want you to use a pattern like 02:56:838 (2,3,4,5,1,2), except with a jump between (1,2).)
4. 02:57:944 (1,2) - Also make a jump between them to emphasize the cymbal at 02:58:102?
5. 03:23:365 (1,2,3,4) - The flow is awkward here, don't you think? You should invert the direction of the curve on all the sliders here to make a nicer flow, but then again, it's not that big of a deal, so feel free to leave it as is.

Nymph wrote:

irc mod a little bit but my wifi unconnected for like 5 or 6 times so I can't save the chatlog.
anyway bubbled.

1. Slider tick rate 2?

YGOkid8 wrote:

map is solid, mainly just visual suggestions. also video is so random lol, not sure what to think

Insane:

1. Slider tick rate 2?

00:20:222 (1,2,3) - The (1) doesn't really flow into the shape of (3) properly, so adjust one of the two so that it flows better? Also delete the (2), since 1. there's nothing in the music to warrant it being there, 2. to be consistent with 00:25:275 (2,3) - .
00:27:959 (2,3) - Change the shape of (3) to be (2) rotated 180 degrees?
00:32:696 (2) - Move to x:244 y:64? I think it flows better here. At least move it up and left a bit.
00:34:748 (3,1) - Change the shape of (1) to be (3) rotated 180 degrees? Then ctrl+g afterwards.
00:39:327 (2) - Similar to 00:32:696 (2) - , I think this would be better if more to the right, at x:332 y:64.
01:17:064 (1,2) - Make slider shapes the same, only rotated? Would look a bit neater imo, and it'd still play the same-ish.
01:35:380 (4,1) - ^
02:05:696 (3,1) - ^
02:19:590 (1,2) - ^
02:48:011 - Add a kiai fountain here until 02:50:380 - ?
02:53:064 - ^ until 02:55:275 - ?
03:37:117 (2) - Move up and left a little bit?
03:41:064 (1,2,3) - Adjust so (1,2) flow into (3) better?

Have to sleep now, so I'll get to the other diffs. later.

YGOkid8 wrote:

Hard:
00:25:275 (2,3) - Make slider shapes the same but rotated? More eye appealing.fix
00:27:011 (2,4) - ^ rotated 180 degrees.fix
00:45:485 (5,6) - ^fix
00:46:748 (1,2) - ^fix
00:55:590 (4,5) - ^ but then maybe ctrl+g this.fix
00:56:853 (1,2) - ^ rotated 180 degrees (no ctrl+g).fix
01:01:906 (1,2) - Same slider shape, but flip the (2) horizontally.fix
01:08:222 (3,4,1) - Imo would flow better if the formation went down instead, e.g. moving (1) to x:112 y:304.fix
01:12:011 (1,3) - Same shape but rotated.fix
01:14:538 (1,3) - Blanket could be better.fix
01:19:275 (4,5) - Since you just came from the right side of the screen, why not have the formation move left instead, e.g. moving these to x:312 y:136.fix
01:19:748 (1) - Imo would be better if you ended the spinner at the previous white tick, then have a slider at the beginning of the kiai section, preferably with the same rhythm as the first kiai section.fix
01:27:169 (1,2) - Imo would flow better if the formation went down instead, e.g. moving (2) to x:412 y:352......too far /-\,,,,,
02:00:959 (2,3,4,5) - Don't really like this straight line formation here, maybe have them zig-zag up and down a bit?fix
02:02:222 - Beat here would also be nice.fix
02:08:853 (2,3) - Same slider shape thingo.fix
02:15:801 (3,4) - ^fix
02:20:222 (5) - x:396 y:344?fix
02:20:380 (1) - Same thing as previous kiai section.fix
02:32:853 (1) - Ctrl+g slider, flip horizontally then move to x:136 y:372? Flows better this way imo.fix
02:40:590 (1) - Shorten spinner to previous white tick. Then...this one I think is ok /v\so....v youkonw v
02:42:959 - Add a 3/2 slider here, and a 02:44:222 - 1/1 slider here. The gap in the map feels a bit awkward, though I can see why you did it.
02:48:011 - Same thing here.
02:53:064 - Yeah.
03:18:327 (1,2) - Thing with same slider shape.fix

Normal:
00:25:275 (2) - Move to x:423 y:64 so that it kinda continues the flow from the previous slider.fix
00:30:011 (2) - x:380 y:176 for better continuation of flow.fix
00:37:275 (3) - Would play better if positioned at x:448 y:72 imo.fix
00:40:432 (3) - x:180 y:72?try to make it stright with note so..
00:49:275 (1,2,3) - Continuation of flow here could be better; (2,3) don't really follow the path of (1) that well, so looks and feels a bit awkward.hmm this one I will keep my idea
00:55:590 (3,4,1) - Same thing here, though not as bad. ^
01:02:853 (2) - x:208 y:68?fix
01:10:117 (2) - x:464 y:112 for better continuation of flow?fix
01:36:643 (2,3,4) - A smaller angle (sharper angle?) with the end of (2) and (3,4) would be better imo.fix
02:42:959 (1,2) - Replacing with a long 2/1 slider would suit it more I reckon.I guess use note will be better to use slider so ._. ...
02:48:011 - ^
02:53:064 - ^

Hm with the map overall, choices of hitcircle / slider usage is generally pretty good, though you could've put in more effort to make it more visually appealing as well.

YGOkid8 wrote:

map is solid, mainly just visual suggestions. also video is so random lol, not sure what to think

Insane:

1. Slider tick rate 2?

I dont really like use str2 in my map so...
00:20:222 (1,2,3) - The (1) doesn't really flow into the shape of (3) properly, so adjust one of the two so that it flows better? Also delete the (2), since 1. there's nothing in the music to warrant it being there, 2. to be consistent with 00:25:275 (2,3) - .OK but I think there has の follow the music so dont plan to delete 2
00:27:959 (2,3) - Change the shape of (3) to be (2) rotated 180 degrees? In this part I plan more random ^_^
00:32:696 (2) - Move to x:244 y:64? I think it flows better here. At least move it up and left a bit.fix
00:34:748 (3,1) - Change the shape of (1) to be (3) rotated 180 degrees? Then ctrl+g afterwards. try something new
00:39:327 (2) - Similar to 00:32:696 (2) - , I think this would be better if more to the right, at x:332 y:64.fix
01:17:064 (1,2) - Make slider shapes the same, only rotated? Would look a bit neater imo, and it'd still play the same-ish.fix
01:35:380 (4,1) - ^fix
02:05:696 (3,1) - ^fix
02:19:590 (1,2) - ^fix
02:48:011 - Add a kiai fountain here until 02:50:380 - ?not plan to add kiai on here sorry...
02:53:064 - ^ until 02:55:275 - ? not plan to add kiai on here sorry...
03:37:117 (2) - Move up and left a little bit?fix
03:41:064 (1,2,3) - Adjust so (1,2) flow into (3) better?fix


Have to sleep now, so I'll get to the other diffs. later.

Scorpiour wrote:

Ranked~~!!

xChippy wrote:

omg ye~~~ tutuhaha is back ^^ love your maps *w*
Gratz :3

gokugohan12468 wrote:

Gratzz!! tutuhaha!!^^

Autumn wrote:

很抱歉我的图坑了太久
当时对自己的倒数第二个版本依然很不满意，狠下心换SV重做，rank时和之前已经是两张图了
最后还算是有始有终吧，能坚持下来连我自己也有点惊讶，大概还是不想糟蹋这首歌

总之恭喜rank，希望以后也能有所合作～（我依然很拖，diff完成后一改再改，改几个月也乐此不彼 lol