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Sadohara Kaori - To Be Continued? (TV Size)

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Rizia
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Rizia
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, October 11, 2013 at 下午 06:06:12

Artist: Sadohara Kaori
Title: To Be Continued? (TV Size)
Source: Mondaiji tachi ga Isekai kara Kuru soudesuyo?
Tags: happy623 Studio Barcelona Diomedea
BPM: 125
Filesize: 12304kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. 623's Easy (1.63 stars, 82 notes)
  2. Hard (4.75 stars, 198 notes)
  3. Normal (2.43 stars, 84 notes)
  4. wkyik (4.98 stars, 268 notes)
Download: Sadohara Kaori - To Be Continued? (TV Size)
Download: Sadohara Kaori - To Be Continued? (TV Size) (no video)
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#10
問題児たちが異世界から来るそうですよ？
-問題児 Ending
mp3 form Rika map
For rank
Easy - by happy623 (100%)
Normal - by me (100%)
Hard - by me (100%)
wkyik - by me (100%)
Last edited by Rizia , edited 50 times in total.
happy623
1,436 posts
Joined April 2010
happy623
:D

edit : offset should be 555 (-20)? if yes, no kd

btw me 個diff 00:43:275漏左個whistle._.
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Rizia

happy623 wrote:

:D

edit : offset should be 555 (-20)? if yes, no kd

btw me 個diff 00:43:275漏左個whistle._.
fix
Last edited by Rizia , edited 1 time in total.
happy623
1,436 posts
Joined April 2010
happy623

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

d mp3 + timing 跟rika張map

ok~
IamKwaN
osu! Alumni
3,905 posts
Joined August 2012
IamKwaN
等我整下啦 :D
我好得閒D:
happy623
1,436 posts
Joined April 2010
happy623

IamKwaN wrote:

等我整下啦 :D
我好得閒D:
:)
ohhh yea 有呀姨
Pipse Cola
204 posts
Joined August 2012
Pipse Cola
Mod Request

GENERAL:
You got no SB, so you can deactivate the letterboxes during breaks.


Easy

I am so f*king in love with that Easy Diff <3

Two things:
00:50:475 (1) - Shorten this to 00:50:955 - and make it reversal, and make it sound like 00:44:715 (3) -.
01:09:675 (1,2) - remove 2 and make 1 reversal.


Hard

Another great Diff!

00:05:375 (3,4) - Add an additional reverse to both.
00:07:655 - Add a Note here.
00:13:295 - ^
00:13:415 (6) - Add a reverse.
01:15:935 (5) - Put this a bit more down.
Change the positions from 01:25:535 (1) - on, so that you can make it like this:
Click Me

wkyik

I think you should lower the AR, the chance to get a 125 bpm map ranked with AR9 is not very high.
I'd suggest to lower distance between Buttons building Doubletts, for playable reasons.

00:49:535 (1,2,3,4) - I know, you can fasttap this, but, I suggest to lower the Distance here.
01:25:535 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - You miss so many sounds here >_> Please map this more!

If you are a fan of this Fasttap - 125 Bpm streaming, You could make an extra Difficulty, maybe called Hell?
(Yep that is related to Rainbow Tylenol) But this will need lots of work, but also be kinda.... uhhh... Awesome! :D
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Rizia

InC0nceNtrateD wrote:

Mod Request

GENERAL:
You got no SB, so you can deactivate the letterboxes during breaks.

fixed^


Hard

Another great Diff!

00:05:375 (3,4) - Add an additional reverse to both. fixed
00:07:655 - Add a Note here. fixed
00:13:295 - ^ ^
00:13:415 (6) - Add a reverse. fixed
01:15:935 (5) - Put this a bit more down. fixed
Change the positions from 01:25:535 (1) - on, so that you can make it like this:
Click Me

wkyik

I think you should lower the AR, the chance to get a 125 bpm map ranked with AR9 is not very high.
I'd suggest to lower distance between Buttons building Doubletts, for playable reasons.

ar9 change to ar8 :D

00:49:535 (1,2,3,4) - I know, you can fasttap this, but, I suggest to lower the Distance here. fixed , i follow the ds with 1.4
01:25:535 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - You miss so many sounds here >_> Please map this more! fixed

If you are a fan of this Fasttap - 125 Bpm streaming, You could make an extra Difficulty, maybe called Hell?
(Yep that is related to Rainbow Tylenol) But this will need lots of work, but also be kinda.... uhhh... Awesome! :D
thank you for your modding :D
and thank you for your suggestion
and i'm try the hell diff hehe~~
happy623
1,436 posts
Joined April 2010
happy623

InC0nceNtrateD wrote:

Easy

I am so f*king in love with that Easy Diff <3

Two things:
00:50:475 (1) - Shorten this to 00:50:955 - and make it reversal, and make it sound like 00:44:715 (3) -. fixed
01:09:675 (1,2) - remove 2 and make 1 reversal. fixed
thanks for modding!! :)
Last edited by happy623 , edited 1 time in total.
Ulysses
1,911 posts
Joined September 2010
Ulysses
Requested in IRC.



[wkyik]

Patterns and flow need more work.Slider stream jumps in this slow song seem a bit harsh.Moreover,big spacing 1/4 is annoying in this diff.Also,your hitsounding isn't exquisite enough.I am going to mention the places which obtains the problems above in mod post below.

00:05:735 (5,6,7) - I don't think overlapping here is a good idea since I find it's hard to read.Esepcially this map isn't that hard,it's for a standard insane player.Also,your triplet cruve is ugly in my mind.If I were you,I would put 00:05:375 (3,4,5,6,7) - like this:

SPOILER



00:06:335 (1,2) - You use 1.73x in 1/4 on 00:05:975 (7,1) while you use 0.99x in 1/2 for 00:06:335 (1,2).They're very similar and hard to be determined if it is a 1/2 or a 1/4 while playing.Put 00:06:815 (2) away is the only soultion.

00:17:375 (6) - Ahhh...This slider cruve with that triplet cruve is ugly enough.
Change it like this:
SPOILER


00:00:575 (1,2) - Listen carefully and you'll find the BG music plays drums on 00:00:575 and 00:00:815 so I think you have better to add normap sample set which is your SC1:clap on these two notes.

00:01:535 (5,7) - And these two as well.

00:02:735 -This slider end on a hard drum too so add clap if you want.

00:04:415 (1) - I dunno why but I think adding a clap plus a finish on this slider head sounds better.Try it.

00:10:175 (1,2) - Add clap on both sliders' heads and ends for the same reason please.

00:17:855 (1,2,3,4) - Same as above.

00:22:655 (3,4,5,6) - Your cruve fits better this time lol

00:25:535 (1,2,3,4) - Add clap pleasssse.

00:30:215 (3,4) - In fact I don't get why you use slider plus note 1/4 here.They're really confusing in this usage and players like me will click z/x randomly makes joy goes that I think you are not williing to happen.
Make them like this:
SPOILER
You may change the cruve but no slider mixing note please,beg you.

00:30:695 (6,7) - non-sense placement too.WHY DO YOU USE SLIDER PLUS NOTE HERE?

00:33:215 (1,2,3,4) - Add clap since the BG music plays drum here.

00:37:055 (1) - Add clap on head for the same reason.

00:40:895 (4) - Add clap on its head and add clap on 00:41:375 (5) 's end.

00:41:855 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Fucking sudden spacing.
SPOILER

00:45:695 (3,4) - How can I realize that they're 1/4 jumps while you use it as simply 1/2 spacing like 00:46:655 (1,2,3)?

I hate that kiai part so I won't mod it,random spacing everywhere and full of random triplets without any sense plus unfit slider speed.
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Rizia

nold_1702 wrote:

Requested in IRC.



[wkyik]

Patterns and flow need more work.Slider stream jumps in this slow song seem a bit harsh.Moreover,big spacing 1/4 is annoying in this diff.Also,your hitsounding isn't exquisite enough.I am going to mention the places which obtains the problems above in mod post below.

00:05:735 (5,6,7) - I don't think overlapping here is a good idea since I find it's hard to read.Esepcially this map isn't that hard,it's for a standard insane player.Also,your triplet cruve is ugly in my mind.If I were you,I would put 00:05:375 (3,4,5,6,7) - like this:

SPOILER



00:06:335 (1,2) - You use 1.73x in 1/4 on 00:05:975 (7,1) while you use 0.99x in 1/2 for 00:06:335 (1,2).They're very similar and hard to be determined if it is a 1/2 or a 1/4 while playing.Put 00:06:815 (2) away is the only soultion.

00:17:375 (6) - Ahhh...This slider cruve with that triplet cruve is ugly enough.
Change it like this:
SPOILER


00:00:575 (1,2) - Listen carefully and you'll find the BG music plays drums on 00:00:575 and 00:00:815 so I think you have better to add normap sample set which is your SC1:clap on these two notes.

00:01:535 (5,7) - And these two as well.

00:02:735 -This slider end on a hard drum too so add clap if you want.

00:04:415 (1) - I dunno why but I think adding a clap plus a finish on this slider head sounds better.Try it.

00:10:175 (1,2) - Add clap on both sliders' heads and ends for the same reason please.

00:17:855 (1,2,3,4) - Same as above.

00:22:655 (3,4,5,6) - Your cruve fits better this time lol

00:25:535 (1,2,3,4) - Add clap pleasssse.

00:30:215 (3,4) - In fact I don't get why you use slider plus note 1/4 here.They're really confusing in this usage and players like me will click z/x randomly makes joy goes that I think you are not williing to happen.
Make them like this:
SPOILER
You may change the cruve but no slider mixing note please,beg you.

00:30:695 (6,7) - non-sense placement too.WHY DO YOU USE SLIDER PLUS NOTE HERE?

00:33:215 (1,2,3,4) - Add clap since the BG music plays drum here.

00:37:055 (1) - Add clap on head for the same reason.

00:40:895 (4) - Add clap on its head and add clap on 00:41:375 (5) 's end.

00:41:855 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Fucking sudden spacing.
SPOILER

00:45:695 (3,4) - How can I realize that they're 1/4 jumps while you use it as simply 1/2 spacing like 00:46:655 (1,2,3)?

I hate that kiai part so I won't mod it,random spacing everywhere and full of random triplets without any sense plus unfit slider speed.
Thank you for your modding
all fixed
thx~
happy623
1,436 posts
Joined April 2010
happy623
http://puu.sh/3hwbj.osu
:D update for neater sliders
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Rizia

happy623 wrote:

http://puu.sh/3hwbj.osu
:D update for neater sliders
Done
quantum-rose
quantum-rose
[Easy]
可以用slidertick.wav给滑条中间加上clap
谱面不错

[Hard]
OD觉得有点低 261的unstable rate都SS
00:10:175 (1) - 换成两个滑条？
01:26:975 (3) - 头加个clap

[Kawaiwkyik]
FC不能不多做评论……
柑橘排列有点乱
00:01:775 (6,7,8) - 移到368,100
00:02:255 (9) - 移到264,168
00:03:455 (3,4,5,6,1) - 考虑画个规则图形？
00:05:735 (5,6,7) - 和34叠起来
00:17:855 (1,2,3,4) - 建议1,2中心对称，3,4中心对称
00:33:215 (1,2,3,4) - 尽量让1和2以34为轴对称
00:50:015 (5,6) - 突然加速不好反应
00:55:055 (6) - 离5远一点，同样的间距有时是1/4有时是1/2太难读图
01:07:775 (1) - 其实可以放到上边，放这有点挤
01:16:895 (6) - 移到348,252
01:17:135 (7) - 可以考虑叠到4下面
01:17:855 (3,4,5,6) - random jump
01:26:975 (1,2,3,4,5) - 摆成六边形的五个顶点？
happy623
1,436 posts
Joined April 2010
happy623

quantum-rose wrote:

[Easy]
可以用slidertick.wav给滑条中间加上clap fixed
谱面不错
http://puu.sh/3oGCJ.rar
mod感謝w 8-)
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Rizia

quantum-rose wrote:

[Easy]
可以用slidertick.wav给滑条中间加上clap
谱面不错

[Hard]
OD觉得有点低 261的unstable rate都SS Fix
00:10:175 (1) - 换成两个滑条？Fix
01:26:975 (3) - 头加个clap Fix

[Kawaiwkyik]
FC不能不多做评论……
柑橘排列有点乱
00:01:775 (6,7,8) - 移到368,100 Fix
00:02:255 (9) - 移到264,168 Fix
00:03:455 (3,4,5,6,1) - 考虑画个规则图形？ Fix
00:05:735 (5,6,7) - 和34叠起来
00:17:855 (1,2,3,4) - 建议1,2中心对称，3,4中心对称 Fix
00:33:215 (1,2,3,4) - 尽量让1和2以34为轴对称 Fix
00:50:015 (5,6) - 突然加速不好反应 Fix
00:55:055 (6) - 离5远一点，同样的间距有时是1/4有时是1/2太难读图 Fix
01:07:775 (1) - 其实可以放到上边，放这有点挤
01:16:895 (6) - 移到348,252
01:17:135 (7) - 可以考虑叠到4下面
01:17:855 (3,4,5,6) - random jump Fix
01:26:975 (1,2,3,4,5) - 摆成六边形的五个顶点？ Fix
Thanks for your modddinggggggggggg :D
ts8zs
2,123 posts
Joined May 2011
ts8zs
来骗
少个N
[wyika大概也许差不多是这样吧]
我错了
00:06:815 (2) - Ctrl+G
00:11:135 (2) - Ctrl+G
00:17:855 (1,2,3,4) - 上好的旋转梗啊._. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/920842
00:53:375 (3) - 不想包2就算了._.
01:21:215 (5) - 在4的下面能表示加重
[Hard]
跟鼓声还是跟vocal还是都跟你倒是选一个啊._.
[623's Easy]
00:02:475 (3) - 没包好2尾
00:06:315 (3) - Easy 就blanket能看还不做好._.
00:35:115 (1) - 包3偏了._.
00:46:635 (1) - 提前1/2结束
01:26:955 (1) - ._.提前1/1结束
感觉需要mod更多
Girl Love~
是不是哪里不对劲……算了不管了._.
happy623
1,436 posts
Joined April 2010
happy623

ts8zs wrote:

来骗
少个N

[623's Easy]
00:02:475 (3) - 没包好2尾
00:06:315 (3) - Easy 就blanket能看还不做好._.
00:35:115 (1) - 包3偏了._.
00:46:635 (1) - 提前1/2结束
01:26:955 (1) - ._.提前1/1结束
感觉需要mod更多
Girl Love~
是不是哪里不对劲……算了不管了._.
all fixed

thanks for modding

http://puu.sh/3ZfYc.osu
Momochikun
1,944 posts
Joined October 2012
Momochikun
This song <3
lkx_Shore
1,453 posts
Joined January 2010
lkx_Shore
[wkyik]
  1. 00:14:975 (5,6,7,8) - 这里的clap加得好奇怪
  2. 00:32:975 - 加note?
  3. 01:17:135 (7,1) - 前面的梗接到后面的梗感觉不是很自然
[Hard]
  1. 00:07:295 (3,4,5) - 这个放hard里是不是难了点?...
[623's Easy]
  1. 01:03:915 (2) - 这个感觉怪了点
[Other]
凑数mod
Goodluck,star
happy623
1,436 posts
Joined April 2010
happy623

lkx_Shore wrote:

[wkyik]


  • [623's Easy]
  1. 01:03:915 (2) - 这个感觉怪了点 換過1個滑條~
[Other]
凑数mod
Goodluck,star
thanks! o/

http://puu.sh/43zWc.osu
Princess God
135 posts
Joined June 2010
Princess God
问题儿什么时候出ed10的专辑啊啊啊！我要买十张！！
623`s Easy
综述：看得出来是想通过滑条来表现节奏
不过我觉得前半部分的的滑条完全能做的更卡节拍一些的
00:38:955 (1) - 比如这里
我觉得做成这样就能比较好

这样能更加清晰的表现节奏，虽然处理不好滑条的美观程度确实会打一点折扣就是了
00:54:315 (1) - 这里还真是挺神的
Hard
00:05:375 (3) - 其实这里可以考虑用六分拍下个节奏，完全可以对得上

比如像上图……这首曲子很多地方都可以用这个节奏，take♂it♂ boy~
00:42:815 感觉之后的地方滑条的速度可以再加快一些，因为0.8到1.0加速的感觉确实不够明显
wkyik
00:04:415 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 还是关于六分拍下节奏的建议

我觉得这个曲子作为一个节奏图的潜力非常大，如果就此用四分拍一概而过的确可惜
望慎重考虑 :D
00:04:415 (1) - 这个双音效大丈夫？
00:12:095 (1) - 是否漏了音效？
01:04:895 (4) - nc
01:05:375 (5) - nc
00:52:415 (1) - nc
01:27:935 (3,4,5) - 目测你最后想做一个对号的样式，我觉得尝试放宽一些或许会更好哦~
happy623
1,436 posts
Joined April 2010
happy623

Nightcore Princess G wrote:

问题儿什么时候出ed10的专辑啊啊啊！我要买十张！！

623`s Easy

综述：看得出来是想通过滑条来表现节奏
不过我觉得前半部分的的滑条完全能做的更卡节拍一些的
00:38:955 (1) - 比如这里 嘛ww 改了~
我觉得做成这样就能比较好

这样能更加清晰的表现节奏，虽然处理不好滑条的美观程度确实会打一点折扣就是了
00:54:315 (1) - 这里还真是挺神的
感謝 :)
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Rizia
懶quote~~~
Thanks lkx_Shore and all fixed
Nightcore Princess G thanks your mod and all fixed
節奏方面我研究研究
Jycool
397 posts
Joined April 2012
Jycool
[insane]
00:05:735 (5) - 我觉的加了这个note异常的卡手，感觉应该去掉，一般都是二连接二连的节奏
00:07:655 (5) - 同上
00:13:055 (3) - 改成到红线的滑条
00:30:695 (6) - 去掉note比较好
kial开始之后节奏没什么特别别扭的地方
01:28:415 (5) - 这个有点远
[hard]
质量很高，挑不出什么毛病
[normal]
00:54:315 (1) - 有些难看
[easy]
nothing，就是有些滑条有些丑。。。


poor mod~加油 :)
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Rizia

jyc-Binggan wrote:

[insane]
00:05:735 (5) - 我觉的加了这个note异常的卡手，感觉应该去掉，一般都是二连接二连的节奏
00:07:655 (5) - 同上
00:13:055 (3) - 改成到红线的滑条
00:30:695 (6) - 去掉note比较好
kial开始之后节奏没什么特别别扭的地方
01:28:415 (5) - 这个有点远
[hard]
质量很高，挑不出什么毛病
[normal]
00:54:315 (1) - 有些难看
[easy]
nothing，就是有些滑条有些丑。。。


poor mod~加油 :)
thanks for mod and all fixed
Regou
1,927 posts
Joined July 2010
Regou
柚子好
[Insane]
我觉得这个曲子作为一个节奏图的潜力非常大，如果就此用四分拍一概而过的确可惜
00:13:055 (3) - 這是跟鼓點可好像有點空白
00:17:855 (1,2,3,4) - 這排列顯得太random...
00:26:015 (2,4) - 考慮在頭加上Clap
00:41:855 (1,2,3,4) - 建議拉遠距離,不然不太好讀
00:54:335 (5) - NC?
01:01:055 (1,2,3,4) - 不整齊
01:01:775 (4) - 用Normal sampleset, 仔細聽會有分別來做出層次
01:27:935 (3,5) - Ctrl+G

[Hard]
00:17:855 (1,2) - 同Insane
00:41:855 (1,2) - 合拼?
00:58:175 (1) - NC?

[Normal]
00:05:355 (2) - Remove Finish
01:08:715 (4) - 頭remove clap
01:15:195 (1) - Remove custom slidertick

[Easy]
好像沒啥

Gl~
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Rizia

Regou wrote:

柚子好
[Insane]
我觉得这个曲子作为一个节奏图的潜力非常大，如果就此用四分拍一概而过的确可惜
00:13:055 (3) - 這是跟鼓點可好像有點空白
00:17:855 (1,2,3,4) - 這排列顯得太random...
00:26:015 (2,4) - 考慮在頭加上Clap
00:41:855 (1,2,3,4) - 建議拉遠距離,不然不太好讀
00:54:335 (5) - NC?
01:01:055 (1,2,3,4) - 不整齊
01:01:775 (4) - 用Normal sampleset, 仔細聽會有分別來做出層次
01:27:935 (3,5) - Ctrl+G

[Hard]
00:17:855 (1,2) - 同Insane
00:41:855 (1,2) - 合拼?
00:58:175 (1) - NC?

[Normal]
00:05:355 (2) - Remove Finish
01:08:715 (4) - 頭remove clap
01:15:195 (1) - Remove custom slidertick

[Easy]
好像沒啥

Gl~
all fixed and thank for mod >3<
pw384
2,288 posts
Joined January 2012
pw384
lol

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

  1. 623's Easy (1.58000004291534 stars, 82 notes)
  2. Hard (4.75 stars, 194 notes)
  3. Normal (2.28999996185303 stars, 84 notes)
  4. wkyik (4.98000001907349 stars, 267 notes)


还债 ;w;

[General]
* Unrankable Stuff:
Uninherit Timing Points
Normal和Easy的offset是555
Hard和Insane的offset是575
* Unrankable Stuff:
Letterbox & Widescreen
Easy 开启了letterbox
Normal 开启了letterbox 和 widescreen
Hard 没有开这两项
Insane 开启了letterbox
所以不一致


[wkyik]
这个insane好善良我1pc就FC了 感动

* 00:27:455 (1) - 滑条头 和00:26:495 (3) - 的滑条头叠起来？
* 00:42:335 (2,3) - 建议ctrl+G

* (nazi) 00:55:295 (3,4) - 试试把00:55:775 (4) - 的滑条头移动到00:54:335 (1) - 的滑条尾上，然后向下移动00:55:295 (3) - ，像这样：
Click me

* (nazi) 01:05:375 (1) - 这里有一个很重的音 感觉用anti-jump带过有点可惜了，Hard难度也是._.

* (nazi)01:08:015 (2,3,4) - 我觉得可以移动到01:07:295 (6) - 上，这样是转一个三角形，打起来估计会比折返跳一次要顺一点（只是建议，当前的也没问题）

* (nazi) 01:16:175 (3,4,5,6,7) - 做一个正三角形？

* 01:17:375 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
这是你原来的节奏：

我更喜欢这样的节奏：
Click me


[Hard]
* 01:18:335 (3) - 折返减少两次 然后01:18:815 - 这里加上一个和01:19:055 (4) - 叠在一起的note?

* (nazi) 01:26:975 (3) - 和01:25:535 (1) - 开头blanket起来？
Click me


[Normal]
* 滑条音效有点厉害啊

* OD+1?

* (nazi)00:33:195 (1,2,3,4,1) - 做成一个缺一个角的正六边形？
Click me

* 01:15:675 - 这里取消掉滑条得分点产生的clap音效吧，现在的听起来挺奇怪


[Easy]
* 01:05:355 (3) - 移动到x=302 y=145吧，这样(3)前后的spacing就一样了


就这些;w; :)
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Rizia

384059043 wrote:

lol

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

  1. 623's Easy (1.58000004291534 stars, 82 notes)
  2. Hard (4.75 stars, 194 notes)
  3. Normal (2.28999996185303 stars, 84 notes)
  4. wkyik (4.98000001907349 stars, 267 notes)


还债 ;w;

[General]
* Unrankable Stuff:
Uninherit Timing Points
Normal和Easy的offset是555
Hard和Insane的offset是575
* Unrankable Stuff:
Letterbox & Widescreen
Easy 开启了letterbox
Normal 开启了letterbox 和 widescreen
Hard 没有开这两项
Insane 开启了letterbox
所以不一致


[wkyik]
这个insane好善良我1pc就FC了 感动

* 00:27:455 (1) - 滑条头 和00:26:495 (3) - 的滑条头叠起来？
* 00:42:335 (2,3) - 建议ctrl+G

* (nazi) 00:55:295 (3,4) - 试试把00:55:775 (4) - 的滑条头移动到00:54:335 (1) - 的滑条尾上，然后向下移动00:55:295 (3) - ，像这样：
Click me

* (nazi) 01:05:375 (1) - 这里有一个很重的音 感觉用anti-jump带过有点可惜了，Hard难度也是._.

* (nazi)01:08:015 (2,3,4) - 我觉得可以移动到01:07:295 (6) - 上，这样是转一个三角形，打起来估计会比折返跳一次要顺一点（只是建议，当前的也没问题）

* (nazi) 01:16:175 (3,4,5,6,7) - 做一个正三角形？

* 01:17:375 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
这是你原来的节奏：

我更喜欢这样的节奏：
Click me


[Hard]
* 01:18:335 (3) - 折返减少两次 然后01:18:815 - 这里加上一个和01:19:055 (4) - 叠在一起的note?

* (nazi) 01:26:975 (3) - 和01:25:535 (1) - 开头blanket起来？
Click me


[Normal]
* 滑条音效有点厉害啊

* OD+1?

* (nazi)00:33:195 (1,2,3,4,1) - 做成一个缺一个角的正六边形？
Click me

* 01:15:675 - 这里取消掉滑条得分点产生的clap音效吧，现在的听起来挺奇怪


[Easy]
* 01:05:355 (3) - 移动到x=302 y=145吧，这样(3)前后的spacing就一样了


就这些;w; :)
thanks for mod and all fixedddddddddddddddddddddddddd
Kodora
Kodora
As requested

[General]

  1. Add Studio Barcelona Diomedea to tags as yanlu did in her mapset
[wkyik]

*Rename to just "Insane" maybe?
*You uses tickrate 2 for some "tickclaps" - its good, but please dont forget to silence useless ticks what not replaced with slaps using blanket sample - they doesnt fit at all.
*One of biggest problems what i found is a bit plain hitsounds - lack of whistles and some misplaced claps. I'll try to help you with it, if you have more questins feel free to catch me in-game about it.

  1. 00:05:355 (3,4) - This double feels a bit weird since you focused on lyrics before. Try to replace it like this to cover rhytm better:

    SPOILER
  2. 00:07:275 (3,4,5) - Same as above, try to replace in same way
  3. 00:10:155 (1,2) - Add whistle to the beginning and to the end of slider
  4. 00:13:035 (3,4,5) - Same as at 00:05:355
  5. 00:17:235 (5,6) - Remove (5), replace with a slider to cover lyrics better (dont forget to add clap to slider):

    SPOILER
  6. 00:31:155 (1) - why slider starts at 00:31:155?
  7. 00:37:035 (1) - forgotten clap at the end
  8. 00:42:795 (1) - add finish to the beginning of slider to emphazire vocals
  9. 00:49:515 (1,2,3,4) - Not consistent spacing between notes in stream. Also, i suggest decrease spacing to 1.00-1.20 to make it more playable
  10. 00:50:955 (2,3,4) - Spacing error
  11. 00:52:395 (1,2) - Add whistles to the beginning of sliders
  12. 00:54:315 (1) - Add finish to emphazire vocals here
  13. 01:21:195 (5) - Add a little kiai fountain here?
[Hard]

  1. 00:01:995 (6) - Add whistle to the end of slider too
  2. 00:17:835 (1,2) - Add whistles to the beginning of sliders
  3. 00:19:755 (1) - Add finish to the beginning of sliders to emphazire vocals here
  4. 00:25:515 (1,3) - Add whistles here too
  5. 00:35:115 (1) - forgotten whistle at the beginning of slider
  6. 01:04:875 (3,4) - Add new combos here like you did on insane
  7. 01:05:835 (1) - add finish to the beginning of slider
  8. 01:07:755 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try to change flow a bit to make it less linear? Like this:
    SPOILER
  9. 01:09:675 (1) - 2-reverse-sliders usually not welcomed because of bad playability, suggest you replace it with two sliders instead
[Normal]

*Use CS4 please

  1. 00:23:595 (1) - Silence slidertick at 00:24:555
  2. 00:54:315 (1) - same (00:55:275 - )
  3. 00:56:235 (2) - same (00:57:195 - )
  4. 00:59:115 (4) - Suggestion: Curve it a bit maybe? Like this:

    SPOILER
  5. 01:01:995 (1) - I personally suggest you use linear curving instead of oval one to make it flows better (just remove first achor point)
  6. 01:03:915 (3) - silence useless slidertick
  7. 01:07:755 (3,1) - Aww such a bad overlap due to low AR, its a serious problem because it may confuse beginners as well. To prevent it, try to replace 01:08:715 (4) - with circles and rework this pattern.
  8. 01:13:515 (5) - silence useless slidertick
[623's Easy]

  1. 00:06:315 (3) - Replace tick at 00:06:795 - with clap as you did on previous slider
  2. 00:15:915 (3) - add clap to the end of slider
  3. 00:19:755 (1) - Clap at tick should be at 00:20:235 - to make it consistent with previous rhytm
  4. 00:23:595 (1) - Replace slidertick sound with clap
  5. 00:46:635 (1) - Silence end of spinner
  6. 00:56:235 (2) - Remove clap from the beginning of slider, add clap to the end of slider
  7. 00:57:195 (3) - ^
Good luck!
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Rizia

Kodora wrote:

As requested

[General]

  1. Add Studio Barcelona Diomedea to tags as yanlu did in her mapset
[wkyik]

*Rename to just "Insane" maybe?
*You uses tickrate 2 for some "tickclaps" - its good, but please dont forget to silence useless ticks what not replaced with slaps using blanket sample - they doesnt fit at all.
*One of biggest problems what i found is a bit plain hitsounds - lack of whistles and some misplaced claps. I'll try to help you with it, if you have more questins feel free to catch me in-game about it.

  1. 00:05:355 (3,4) - This double feels a bit weird since you focused on lyrics before. Try to replace it like this to cover rhytm better:

    SPOILER
  2. 00:07:275 (3,4,5) - Same as above, try to replace in same way
  3. 00:10:155 (1,2) - Add whistle to the beginning and to the end of slider
  4. 00:13:035 (3,4,5) - Same as at 00:05:355
  5. 00:17:235 (5,6) - Remove (5), replace with a slider to cover lyrics better (dont forget to add clap to slider):

    SPOILER
  6. 00:31:155 (1) - why slider starts at 00:31:155?
  7. 00:37:035 (1) - forgotten clap at the end
  8. 00:42:795 (1) - add finish to the beginning of slider to emphazire vocals
  9. 00:49:515 (1,2,3,4) - Not consistent spacing between notes in stream. Also, i suggest decrease spacing to 1.00-1.20 to make it more playable
  10. 00:50:955 (2,3,4) - Spacing error
  11. 00:52:395 (1,2) - Add whistles to the beginning of sliders
  12. 00:54:315 (1) - Add finish to emphazire vocals here
  13. 01:21:195 (5) - Add a little kiai fountain here?
[Hard]

  1. 00:01:995 (6) - Add whistle to the end of slider too
  2. 00:17:835 (1,2) - Add whistles to the beginning of sliders
  3. 00:19:755 (1) - Add finish to the beginning of sliders to emphazire vocals here
  4. 00:25:515 (1,3) - Add whistles here too
  5. 00:35:115 (1) - forgotten whistle at the beginning of slider
  6. 01:04:875 (3,4) - Add new combos here like you did on insane
  7. 01:05:835 (1) - add finish to the beginning of slider
  8. 01:07:755 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try to change flow a bit to make it less linear? Like this:
    SPOILER
  9. 01:09:675 (1) - 2-reverse-sliders usually not welcomed because of bad playability, suggest you replace it with two sliders instead
[Normal]

*Use CS4 please

  1. 00:23:595 (1) - Silence slidertick at 00:24:555
  2. 00:54:315 (1) - same (00:55:275 - )
  3. 00:56:235 (2) - same (00:57:195 - )
  4. 00:59:115 (4) - Suggestion: Curve it a bit maybe? Like this:

    SPOILER
  5. 01:01:995 (1) - I personally suggest you use linear curving instead of oval one to make it flows better (just remove first achor point)
  6. 01:03:915 (3) - silence useless slidertick
  7. 01:07:755 (3,1) - Aww such a bad overlap due to low AR, its a serious problem because it may confuse beginners as well. To prevent it, try to replace 01:08:715 (4) - with circles and rework this pattern.
  8. 01:13:515 (5) - silence useless slidertick
[623's Easy]

  1. 00:06:315 (3) - Replace tick at 00:06:795 - with clap as you did on previous slider
  2. 00:15:915 (3) - add clap to the end of slider
  3. 00:19:755 (1) - Clap at tick should be at 00:20:235 - to make it consistent with previous rhytm
  4. 00:23:595 (1) - Replace slidertick sound with clap No fix since it seems to be ruined the pervious rhythm
  5. 00:46:635 (1) - Silence end of spinner
  6. 00:56:235 (2) - Remove clap from the beginning of slider, add clap to the end of slider
  7. 00:57:195 (3) - ^
Good luck!
Thanks you for your modding~

All fixed instead diff name(i)
10crystalmask01
10crystalmask01
Hi, random mod o3o

[Normal]
00:12:075 (1) - Add finish on the head of slider.
00:17:835 (1) - ^
00:25:515 (1) - ^
00:33:195 (1) - ^
01:07:755 (3) - Try flipping this slider horizontally, something like this:
better flow imo.
01:13:515 (5) - Add finish to the head of slider
01:15:675 - I hear an extra custom hitsound tick here, on the red tickmark. Remove it.

[Hard]
00:50:475 (1) - Add finish to the head of the slider.
01:01:995 (1) - ^
01:03:915 (1) - ^
01:19:275 (1) - ^
01:11:595 (6) - NC

[wkyik]
00:02:955 - Adding 3 hit circles here would sound better instead of 00:02:955 (2), because if you listen closely, you'll hear the 3 loud separate beats in the music.
01:01:995 (1) - Add finish on head of the slider
01:19:275 (1) - ^

Honestly, this map looks almost perfect, just some really small missing hitsounds here and there imo.
Hope this helps! :)
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Rizia

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Hi, random mod o3o

[Normal]
00:12:075 (1) - Add finish on the head of slider.
00:17:835 (1) - ^
00:25:515 (1) - ^
00:33:195 (1) - ^
01:07:755 (3) - Try flipping this slider horizontally, something like this:
better flow imo.
01:13:515 (5) - Add finish to the head of slider
01:15:675 - I hear an extra custom hitsound tick here, on the red tickmark. Remove it.

[Hard]
00:50:475 (1) - Add finish to the head of the slider.
01:01:995 (1) - ^
01:03:915 (1) - ^
01:19:275 (1) - ^
01:11:595 (6) - NC

[wkyik]
00:02:955 - Adding 3 hit circles here would sound better instead of 00:02:955 (2), because if you listen closely, you'll hear the 3 loud separate beats in the music.
01:01:995 (1) - Add finish on head of the slider
01:19:275 (1) - ^

Honestly, this map looks almost perfect, just some really small missing hitsounds here and there imo.
Hope this helps! :)
thanks you for your modding and all fixed :)
kajiyatta
1,421 posts
Joined April 2011
kajiyatta
M4M
[General]
Uncheck Letterbox since there is no Break Time.
[Easy]
Placement
00:08:235(1,2,1) make beautiful triangle like this
SPOILER
00:19:755(1) to be nice flow, down the head of slider better
SPOILER

01:21:195(1,2) swap NC since KIAI ends.
[Normal]
Placement
00:34:155(3) x:480 y:112. to be consistence with (1). also you should move (4,1)
01:08:715(4) looks ugly imo, so move like this?
SPOILER
Rhythm
00:17:835(1) a slider with double reverses looks difficult for newbie, so I suppose separate it to slider and note better
SPOILER
Hit Sonud
01:15:675 remove this sound at tick
[Hard]
Placement
00:03:435(3,4,5,6) it isn't easy to hit, move these notes like this? it would be nice flow
SPOILER
00:05:715(4) Ctrl+G would be fine
00:13:395(4)^
00:59:115(5) nazi, move direction like this? I suppose it would be niceflow
SPOILER
01:21:195(4) stack better
Rhythm
00:07:275(3,4) to follow the vocal properly, maybe like this?
SPOILER
Hit Sonud
00:12:075(1) add finish at head
00:27:435(1)^
[wkyik]
Placement
00:02:475(1) move it at x:392 y:224, this mean is stacked.
00:05:715(4) I can't see this note clearly because of most of them overlapped, so move away a bit better like 00:07:635
00:17:835(1) move more away? it looks narrow I suppose
Rhythm
00:14:955(5,6) to follow the vocal properly, it would be fine.
SPOILER
00:43:755(4,5,6,7) to follow the vocal properly, maybe this rhythm would be fine
SPOILER
01:18:315(5,6,7,8,9) to be consistence, you should put these notes like this
SPOILER
Hit Sonud
00:31:155(1) add clap at head
00:48:555(5)^

maybe you need more work, but overall fine. good luck and support star.
happy623
1,436 posts
Joined April 2010
happy623

kajiyatta wrote:

M4M

[General]
Uncheck Letterbox since there is no Break Time.

[Easy]
Placement
00:08:235(1,2,1) make beautiful triangle like this
SPOILER
00:19:755(1) to be nice flow, down the head of slider better
SPOILER

01:21:195(1,2) swap NC since KIAI ends.

maybe you need more work, but overall fine. good luck and support star.
thanks <3
applied everything mentioned above

code~
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: To Be Continued (TV Size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 50495
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:To Be Continued? (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:To Be Continued? (TV Size)
Artist:Sadohara Kaori
ArtistUnicode:Sadohara Kaori
Creator:Kawaiwkyik
Version:623's Easy
Source:Mondaiji tachi ga Isekai kara Kuru soudesuyo?
Tags:happy623 Studio Barcelona Diomedea
BeatmapID:256341
BeatmapSetID:95423

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:1
ApproachRate:2
SliderMultiplier:0.9
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
Video,0,"to be cont.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
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2715,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
3195,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
6795,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
7035,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
7515,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
7755,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
12795,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
13275,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
14715,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
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41115,-100,4,2,0,40,0,0
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55515,-100,4,2,1,75,0,1
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75675,-100,4,2,0,75,0,1
76155,-100,4,2,1,75,0,1
81195,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,0,0
Combo2 : 0,128,255
Combo3 : 255,128,192
Combo4 : 221,221,0

[HitObjects]
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Boncho
91 posts
Joined October 2011
Boncho
EASY

can't find anything, good job

NORMAL

make 00:05:355 (2) shorter (until 00:05:835)
00:13:035 (2) - ^
00:36:555 (2) - add a note
00:38:475 - ^
00:40:395 - ^
00:46:155 (1) - New Combo
00:52:395 (3) - move it to 00:52:155
01:07:755 (3) - move it to 01:07:515

HARD

00:15:795 (5) - New Combo
00:16:155 (1) - remove New Combo


WKYIK

00:39:675 add a note
00:59:835 (1) - New Combo
01:01:035 (1) - remove New Combo

sorry, thats everything I found because your map is well-done :o
Good Luck!~
Princess God
135 posts
Joined June 2010
Princess God
好的，说好的mod……诶？貌似我已经摸过了？
好的吧……我看看还能找出什么问题
……
好的吧，以我个人目前的摸图水准确实是找不出什么毛病了……
sorry……
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Rizia

Bonch0 wrote:

EASY

can't find anything, good job

NORMAL

make 00:05:355 (2) shorter (until 00:05:835)
00:13:035 (2) - ^
00:36:555 (2) - add a note
00:38:475 - ^
00:40:395 - ^
00:46:155 (1) - New Combo
00:52:395 (3) - move it to 00:52:155
01:07:755 (3) - move it to 01:07:515

HARD

00:15:795 (5) - New Combo
00:16:155 (1) - remove New Combo


WKYIK

00:39:675 add a note
00:59:835 (1) - New Combo
01:01:035 (1) - remove New Combo

sorry, thats everything I found because your map is well-done :o
Good Luck!~
thanks for modding :D
Zero__wind
osu! Alumni
3,314 posts
Joined August 2012
Zero__wind
2kd走起
Insane
00:01:035 (3,4) - drum clap然后00:01:875 (7,9) - drum finish
00:02:955 (2,4) - 差不多 2 drum clap 4 drum finish，00:03:435 (5) - 也drum finish
00:04:155 (8,1) - 稍微挪一点别碰到？
00:15:435 (7) - 这为啥不挪到前面的蓝线
00:25:515 (1,3) - 我觉得它们两个也像2和4一样头上加上w比较好
00:43:995 (5) - 这个挪到前面蓝线好些？
00:52:635 - 和00:52:875 - 两声响 如果是一个circle叠在一个slider头上的话会非常合适，所以我建议把00:52:395 (1) - 拆掉然后重新排一下版
00:56:235 (1) - 头上可finish
00:59:835 (1) - 同 正好也都是跳
01:14:235 (6) - 这个移到后面的蓝线比较好 另外01:13:755 (2,3,4,5) - 考虑加一些whistle
01:25:515 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 我怎么觉得后面那几个应该比前面几个间距大才合曲一些？

Hard
开头的音效请自行参照上面解决
00:43:755 (3) - 删掉这个在它两边的蓝线分别加一个circle？
00:52:635 (2,4) - 没whistle了？
kiai部分那几个重音finish

Normal
怎么星这么低
没啥说的 NC频率可以降一倍 每个NC持续00:27:435 (1,2) - 这么长时间比较好
做Normal的话00:52:395 (3) - 这种地方还是应该从红线起的 现在的节奏完全是Easy或者说是3星N 不过你应该需要个4星的
01:19:035 - 这种地方 都是应该加circle的 多用一些红线

Easy
给623神麻婆跪了
00:49:275 - 这里不用音量这么小 没了
happy623
1,436 posts
Joined April 2010
happy623

Zero__wind wrote:

Easy
给623神麻婆跪了
00:49:275 - 这里不用音量这么小 没了 換成40%
感謝!

J
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180,108,78315,2,0,L|276:108,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,192,79275,2,0,L|344:208,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,224,80235,5,10,0:0:0:0:
400,312,80715,1,2,0:0:0:0:
312,304,81195,5,14,0:0:0:0:
224,300,81675,2,0,B|172:264|132:280|108:264|108:264|104:232|48:212,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,136,83115,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,96,83595,1,2,0:0:0:0:
172,176,84075,2,0,P|220:180|268:208,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,228,85035,6,0,P|388:224|436:196,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,120,85995,1,8,0:0:0:0:
396,56,86475,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,86955,12,4,88395,0:0:0:0:
Rizia
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Rizia

Zero__wind wrote:

2kd走起
Insane
00:01:035 (3,4) - drum clap然后00:01:875 (7,9) - drum finish
00:02:955 (2,4) - 差不多 2 drum clap 4 drum finish，00:03:435 (5) - 也drum finish
00:04:155 (8,1) - 稍微挪一点别碰到？
00:15:435 (7) - 这为啥不挪到前面的蓝线
00:25:515 (1,3) - 我觉得它们两个也像2和4一样头上加上w比较好
00:43:995 (5) - 这个挪到前面蓝线好些？
00:52:635 - 和00:52:875 - 两声响 如果是一个circle叠在一个slider头上的话会非常合适，所以我建议把00:52:395 (1) - 拆掉然后重新排一下版
00:56:235 (1) - 头上可finish
00:59:835 (1) - 同 正好也都是跳
01:14:235 (6) - 这个移到后面的蓝线比较好 另外01:13:755 (2,3,4,5) - 考虑加一些whistle
01:25:515 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 我怎么觉得后面那几个应该比前面几个间距大才合曲一些？

Hard
开头的音效请自行参照上面解决
00:43:755 (3) - 删掉这个在它两边的蓝线分别加一个circle？
00:52:635 (2,4) - 没whistle了？
kiai部分那几个重音finish

Normal
怎么星这么低
没啥说的 NC频率可以降一倍 每个NC持续00:27:435 (1,2) - 这么长时间比较好
做Normal的话00:52:395 (3) - 这种地方还是应该从红线起的 现在的节奏完全是Easy或者说是3星N 不过你应该需要个4星的
01:19:035 - 这种地方 都是应该加circle的 多用一些红线

Easy
给623神麻婆跪了
00:49:275 - 这里不用音量这么小 没了
Thanks for moddig adn all fixed :D
smallboat
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[General]

Nothing 都正確


[623"Easy]

Nothing

[Normal]

00:22:635 (4) - 往上一點成1.0x


[Hard]

SPOILER
00:01:755 (4) - +個w比較有感覺
00:09:315 (5) - 尾端+w
00:41:835 - 音量30?
00:43:755 (3,7) - +w 應該不錯
00:45:435 (2) - 前端或尾端w
00:46:395 (4) - +w
00:48:555 (4,5) - 尾端+w 看你斟酌
00:53:115 (5) - +w
00:53:835 (7) - 尾端+w
00:58:395 (2,3) - +w
01:02:235 (2,4) - +w 4+前端
01:03:195 (5) - 前後+w
01:12:555 (4,8) - +w 也可不加
01:16:635 (7) - +w
01:17:355 (1,2) - 尾端+w
01:18:315 (3,4,5) - +w 4前後尾+


[wkyik]

SPOILER
00:12:555 (2) - 改成弧形?
00:30:915 (7) - 移到 X 400 Y 120左右位置比較美觀 或 6 7成個直線
00:43:995 (5,8) - +w
00:51:435 (3,7) - +w
00:53:355 (4) - 前端+w
00:55:035 (2,3) - +w 3+前端 可選擇都不加
00:58:155 (1) - 前端用finish加強
01:04:395 (2) - 跟前面01:03:315 (7) 疊住?
01:13:515 (1) - +w

[Otherl]
希望有些對你有用 :idea: 快RK了加油。
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