1. Hard (3,16 stars, 167 notes)
2. Normal (1,54 stars, 76 notes)

-Cloudchaser wrote:

NUGGETS ALL THE LIFE

1. The music is quiet at the start but gets louder and louder so why are your hitsounds always at the same volume? They should be louder and louder too.

1. If it's a Normal then i would say HD+1 and OD+1.... It's really weird to have an AR 5 but only HP drain 2 and OD 2.
2. 00:01:417 (2) - Move it 2 grid right for the blanket?
3. 00:04:698 (4) - If i follow the way you did your NC. There sould be one here.
4. 00:11:261 (3) - x=456 y=184 for a better blanket?
5. 00:15:011 (2) - Replace the slider by two notes? At 00:15:480 you have a very "powerful" sound and even a kiai here. So i find it weird that it's the end of the slider and not a note (or the start od a slider like in wolf's diff) you actually play.
6. 00:20:167 (4) - Move the end point 1 grid down for a better blanket?
7. 00:31:417 (2) - Add whistle?
8. 00:33:292 (1) - Whistle at the start? And following this logic add a whistle at 00:35:636 (4) and the start of 00:37:042 (2).
9. 00:37:042 (2) - Same remark as 00:15:011 (2).
10. 00:50:636 (2) - x=312 y=144 for a better blanket?
11. 00:52:980 (1) - Move the second slider point and the third one 1 grid up for a better blanket.

1. 00:03:527 (4,1) - Not very good looking overlap.
2. 00:06:340 (2,3,4,5,6) - Is it supposed to be a star? I think you can make a better one. Use Design>Create Polygon Circles maybe?
3. 00:12:198 (1) - CTRL+H then restack it on 5? I think the flow is better thid way.
4. 00:20:636 (6) - Move it to x=72 y=124 for a better square.
5. 00:33:292 (3) - If i follow the logic you used for your frst NC i would say NC here? And remove the one on 00:33:995 (1).
6. 00:34:230 (2) - NC here too.
7. 00:37:042 (2) - ^
8. 00:42:902 (3) - Stack it with 00:41:495 (1)?
9. 00:59:542 (3,4,5) - Center it since the end is symetrical?
10. 01:00:480 (1) - Whistle?

Sikei- wrote:

Acá está, vos sabés que soy noob asi que, toma mi mod solamente como una sugerencia.

[Goat]

Para mi está bastante bien, pero hay algunas cosas que se podrian mejorar para que se vea mejor.

00:07:980 (1) - Yo lo daria vuelta y le haria mejor la curva, que quede así: http://puu.sh/3Lqcj.jpg Tienes razón, fixed
00:09:855 (1,2,3) - Que tal hacer algo así? http://puu.sh/3Lqhz.jpg ^
01:00:480 (1) - Este spin debería extenderse hasta 01:02:355 - Nope, ya lo tenía antes así y no me gustaba, prefería terminarlo apenas termine la vocal osea en 01:02:120 -

Gracias por tus sugerencias aquí!

[Moe Wolf]

Lo que haria acá seria arreglar un par de sliders como 00:00:480 (1,2) - Y hacerlos más así: http://puu.sh/3LqAB.jpg Hum, no gracias. Yo puse los sliders así a propósito :<

00:03:527 (4,1) - Se ven feas esas notas una encima de la otra, trata de cambiarlo.Yo no le veo ningún problema o.o

En fin, espero que te sirva. Gracias por tu mod <3
Suerte con el mapa.

RikiH_ wrote:

Hola, m4m from your queue!

Goat

00:04:698 (1,1) - You can improve the blanket a bit imo
00:15:948 (1) - This NC is unnecessary
00:18:761 (2) - Maybe you can change this in order to make a blanket with the previous note
00:37:980 (3,1) - Swap NCs, when you start a kiai there MUST be a NC!

There isn't any other problem, but in my opinion you should improve a bit some blankets (I didn't point out everything because I don't want to be too nazi, lol) All fixed, ty

Moe Wolf

A lot of people will hate you for that "Moe" in the diff's name... Anyways:

00:11:730 (4,1) - This is really odd, swap the NCs, since usually the NCs are on the downbeat! okay
00:32:355 (1,2,1) - The sliders in this pattern are really ugly... Please, improve the curve :I i like those sliders but anyway i changed them a bit.
00:37:159 - Add a note here, you can clearly hear a drum in the song you're right.
00:37:980 (1) - Add a finish in the beginning? Sounds bad, because of 00:37:042 (1) - I don't know, I won't add this suggestion unless someone say the same :<
00:39:386 (1,2) - Swap NCs done
00:41:495 (1,2) - Swap NCs again ^
00:42:198 (4) - Please curve it better! It looks ugly... okay :I
00:52:745 - You should consider adding two notes here because of the drum in the song k
00:54:855 (1,2,3,4) - This is ugly... 1 and 2 are blanketted badly, while 3 and 4 are overlapping, remake the pattern, please Fixed, Imo
00:58:605 (2) - Move to 176|312, it's better, and fix the spacing if you want Fixed

Nothing else, just check out the bad blankets and fix them also in this diff!

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I hope my mod helps, good luck! Thanks :3

• A special spanish mod for -Cloud ~
  
  Goat

1. 00:11:730 (1) El whistle de este slider deberia estar al comienzo , para ser mas consistente con el resto del mapa
2. 00:13:605 (1) Nazi - Mueve este slider a x:136 y:200 para que el blanket con (3) este mejor . No olvides arreglar el spacing con las siguientes notas
3. 00:22:042 (3) Sé que realmente este slider luce muy bien , pero esta obviando mucho ese redoble que suena muy claramente en la musica . Te recomendaria usarun 1/2 slider con reverse y agregar un circle en 00:22:980
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:34:230 (2) Si estas siguiendo realmente los Finish que suena en la musica , Deberias poner uno aqui tambien , ya que claramente se logra oirlo
5. 00:39:386 (4) Remueve el Finish de este circle porfavor , realmente suena muy incomodo
6. 00:41:730 (3) Siguiendo tus patrones de Combos , necesitas poner un NewCombo aqui tambien , ya que cambias de combo cada dos downbeats
7. 00:51:105 (1) ^
8. 00:56:730 (3) ^
   
   Wolf
   
9. 00:10:323 (2) Mueve este circle a x:316 y:244 , para que fluya mucho mejor este blanket . Una cosa , usa grid snap 4 para que te salgan mejor
10. 00:13:605 (1) Deberias realizar este slider de manera curveada hacia abajo , para que fluya mejor con los circles que aparecen
    
    SPOILER

    
11. 00:19:230 (2) El final de este slider queda oculto por el cuerpo de 00:18:292 (4) , eso me incomoda , podrias intentar mover este slider , o crear algun otro blanket ?
12. 00:42:198 (3) That old slider xD
13. 00:57:433 (3,4) Este blanket luce como que muy "forzado" , intenta suavizar un poco la curvatura de (4) para que fluya mejor
14. 00:45:128 - 00:45:245 - 00:45:362 Viendo como sentiste el ritmo en 1/4 , siento que tambien deberias aplicarlo ahi , con un stream supongo para que seamas consistente con el resto del mapa
15. 01:02:120 En mi opinion seria mejor si aqui haces como en "Goat" , agregar un spinner , ya que ayudara a diferenciar en los puntajes . Porque si no tiene un spinner , todos los puntajes
    seran los mismos . Y bueno . . . ya sabes que dirán los jugadores

XinCrin wrote:

• A special spanish mod for -Cloud ~
  
  Goat

1. 00:11:730 (1) El whistle de este slider deberia estar al comienzo , para ser mas consistente con el resto del mapa tienes razón :3 fixed
2. 00:13:605 (1) Nazi - Mueve este slider a x:136 y:200 para que el blanket con (3) este mejor . No olvides arreglar el spacing con las siguientes notas listo
3. 00:22:042 (3) Sé que realmente este slider luce muy bien , pero esta obviando mucho ese redoble que suena muy claramente en la musica . Te recomendaria usarun 1/2 slider con reverse y agregar un circle en 00:22:980 bueno
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:34:230 (2) Si estas siguiendo realmente los Finish que suena en la musica , Deberias poner uno aqui tambien , ya que claramente se logra oirlo added
5. 00:39:386 (4) Remueve el Finish de este circle porfavor , realmente suena muy incomodo verdad D:
6. 00:41:730 (3) Siguiendo tus patrones de Combos , necesitas poner un NewCombo aqui tambien , ya que cambias de combo cada dos downbeatsfixed
7. 00:51:105 (1) ^ ^
8. 00:56:730 (3) ^ ^
   
   Wolf
   
9. 00:10:323 (2) Mueve este circle a x:316 y:244 , para que fluya mucho mejor este blanket . Una cosa , usa grid snap 4 para que te salgan mejor done
10. 00:13:605 (1) Deberias realizar este slider de manera curveada hacia abajo , para que fluya mejor con los circles que aparecen done
    
    SPOILER

    
11. 00:19:230 (2) El final de este slider queda oculto por el cuerpo de 00:18:292 (4) , eso me incomoda , podrias intentar mover este slider , o crear algun otro blanket ? En realidad me gusta este pattern, no le veo algo grave.
12. 00:42:198 (3) That old slider xD ya lo arreglé :c
13. 00:57:433 (3,4) Este blanket luce como que muy "forzado" , intenta suavizar un poco la curvatura de (4) para que fluya mejor listo
14. 00:45:128 - 00:45:245 - 00:45:362 Viendo como sentiste el ritmo en 1/4 , siento que tambien deberias aplicarlo ahi , con un stream supongo para que seamas consistente con el resto del mapa oks
15. 01:02:120 En mi opinion seria mejor si aqui haces como en "Goat" , agregar un spinner , ya que ayudara a diferenciar en los puntajes . Porque si no tiene un spinner , todos los puntajes
    seran los mismos . Y bueno . . . ya sabes que dirán los jugadores :I da lo mismo,

Bueno eso es todo de mi parte n.n
Suerte en este proyecto Cloud ! :3 ~ Gracias por tu mod muy útil y el kudosu <3

Text shown in red means unrankable stuff (you must fix it)

1. 00:31:417 (2) - Remove whistle
2. 00:33:292 ^
3. 00:33:292 ^
4. 00:30:948 Add whistle
5. 00:31:886 - ^
6. 00:32:823 ^
7. 00:34:698 ^
8. 00:35:636 ^

1. 00:31:417 - remove finish?
2. 00:30:948 - Add whistle?
3. 00:31:886 - ^
4. 00:32:823 ^
5. 00:34:698 ^
6. 00:35:636 ^

General

• Looks good.

Goat

1. 00:22:042 (3) - I'd love if this was curved a little bit to the left, mainly to increase the flow:
   
   Example

   

1. 00:22:980 (4) - Should have a NC here to follow your upcoming pattern at 00:24:855 (1,1,1,1) - . Just keep in mind those finishes, the NC gives also a better emphasis on that.

1. 00:30:480 (1,3) - Kinda nazi, but this kind of paralel works much better if both of sliders have the same node (shape). Just place them under each other or side by side a little more close to see that. So anyways, just ctrl+c at 00:30:480 (1) - (make sure to right-click on its ending node before copying it, because it's currently red, so it'll make it gray again) and replace it on the same position where 00:31:886 (3) - was (x:260 y:296):
   
   Example

   

1. 00:33:292 (1,2) - The finish at (1) doesn't sound right. I really think it doesn't match with the song, only the one at (2) is enough, since it matches with the song and your pattern. Also, it'd look more consistent if there was a NC at 00:34:230 (2) -, not only because of the finish, I can pretty much feel the vocals changing at that part anyways:
   
   Example

   
   

1. 00:39:855 (1,2) - Better add a finish at the start of (1), as you can still hear the drums cymbals. Also, consider doing a blanket, the slider up there at (2) looks unnecessary. Give it a check anyways, I personally like it since it'll also involve 00:39:386 (4) - at this:
   
   Example

   

1. 00:47:355 (1) - Nazi, but yeah, I think you should keep up with the 1,00x spacing just for consistency, since it's currently 0,95.

1. 00:48:292 (3) - Could've made it symmetric, you'll also be able to do the blanket with 00:49:230 (1) -, but the I'd change it just to improve the shape of it:
   
   Example

   

1. 01:00:011 (3) - Try placing a bit more to the left just for the sake of the flow, it'll also be nicer to play the spin since it'll be closer to the center of the grid:
   
   Example

   

Wolf

1. 00:01:652 (4) - Hmm, move down a bit more, it would look a lot better if the distance from 00:00:948 (2) - matches the other two circles, it'll make something more nicer to read. Just make sure to readjust the notes after that:
   
   Example

   

1. 00:03:761 (5) - The curve should have been made in relation to 00:02:823 (2) -, pretty much the same reason as above in terms of spacing, it should be more consistent:
   
   Example

   

1. 00:13:605 (1,2) - Note: Not sure if this was your mistake; This doesn't look nice. I mean, it's the only jump that uses a spacing of 3,80x on the diff. It's sudden, huge and unnecessary to me, breaking the consistency of the diff. If you still want a jump here, at least reduce the spacing, something around 2,3x, like in 00:06:105 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -.

1. 00:16:417 (3) - 00:16:417 (3) - Just move a bit down, it'll improve the blanket:
   
   Example

   

1. 00:16:417 (3,2) - Could've made a better blanket here. Just follow up the curve of 00:16:417 (3) - and that should look very smooth. Take a look:
   
   Example

   

1. 00:22:042 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Drums here are quite strong to leave without a hitsound. Just for reference, in Goat you've added a whistle, but since there is a stream here, I'd like to hear something strong as well. A clap somewhere would sound great.

1. 00:22:979 (5) - Suggesting the NC for what I said on Goat. Apply here only if you've changed there though.

1. 00:35:167 (1,2,1) - Better do symmetry with them. Move the circle aligned to the vertical line, ctrl+c 00:35:167 (1) -, do a ctrl+v to replace 00:36:105 (1) now both matching each other, ctrl+h to move the slider to the other side and ctrl+g to change the starting position. That should make things more neat:
   
   Example

   

1. 00:45:480 (5) - NC since kiai starts again.

1. 00:49:230 (1,2,3) - Another place where blanket would be nice. I mean, the shape of that slider pretty much feels like it should have something on that little curve it makes on the start of it. Just move down until that gap matches with 00:49:230 (1,2) - :
   
   Example

   

1. 00:51:105 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Same of what I said about the hitsounds on 00:22:042 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4) -. And again just for reference, there are claps on the same part in Goat, so also consider adding some here for consistency.

1. 01:00:011 (5) - Move to x:328 y:104, that way you can make them symmetric as well.

1. 01:00:480 (1) - This should end at 01:02:120 - like in the Goat, right? I mean, starting/ending spinners on the same place is recommended.

winber1 wrote:

Goat

1. imo the intro should be even quieter. Maybe use 15% volume until 00:07:980 - ?
2. 00:31:886 (3,4) - Perhaps switch these two around to match this rhythm 00:07:980 (1,2,3) - ? http://puu.sh/4cxRA.jpg (also add a new combo at 00:32:355 - ) tried to update the slider here http://puu.sh/4cYK7.jpg broke link, again D:
3. 00:34:230 (3) - New combo?
4. 00:37:042 (2) - I think this works better as a reverse slider. This will require some rearrangement of notes though.
5. 00:41:730 (3) - new combo and remove next combo
6. 00:58:136 (1) - Perhaps do something so that the main beat is not on the slider end?

In my opinion, you probably make the spacing for the kiai time at least larger, or do something with the spacing so that it's not complete evenly spaced throughout the entire song. It might add some color and variety to the map.

Just fixed a few puush files.

Sensualdango wrote:

Goat

01:00:480 (1) - quita ese, no queda

Y los dos les falta checar el AImod

1. 
   I prefer this pattern because long sliders don't fit here.

1. 
   I think the spacing is okay, I don't see anything wrong to move it.
   
2. 
   same as Normal :c
3. 
   I think it's okay o.o

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:

From my queue of Normal Mod

1. Black——My personal suggestions.
2. Bold——Highly recommended.
3. Red——Unrankable, you must fix it.

[General]

1. The song is fun =3=

[Goat]

1. 00:17:355 (4) - NC here and remove NC at 00:18:292 (1) - , also NC at 00:19:230 (3) -
2. 00:18:761 (2) - missing clap
3. 00:22:042 (3) - missing clap on the end

All fixed!

[Wolf]

1. 00:03:761 (5) - I highly recommend that to separate it into a slider at 00:03:761 - and a note at 00:04:230 - Nice catch, done!
2. 00:14:542 (3,4) - flow is not good, maybe like this http://puu.sh/5xwFE.jpg Nice idea, fixed ~
3. 00:19:933 (3,4,5) - weird placement It seems good o.o
4. 00:30:714 (2) - stack with (1) is better Yeah, you're right.
5. 00:22:511 (1) - clap I'm not sure if add or not the clap there, sounds a bit weird but I'll add it for now.
6. 00:32:355 (4) - NC Yeah, I forget it.
7. compare with the blanket between 00:40:089 (2,3) - and 00:41:964 (2,3) - ? why? I used another DS, that's why it looks 'different'. I will keep it.
8. 00:51:808 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - it's wrong. Please hear the music, it should be like http://puu.sh/5xwXJ.jpg Nice catch, fixed!!
9. 00:51:105 (1,2,3) - weird spacing Hmm, no. looks nice and i don't see the problem there.

good luck with this fun song =w=

Zero__wind wrote:

Hi, mod from popner's modding team

Unrankable issues
Highly recommend to fix
Common sugestions

General
seems fine. The diff names are fine to me

Wolf
00:04:230 (6,1) - I prefer to exchange NC here for consistency Indeed, fixed.
00:17:120 (1,2) - ^ ^
00:22:042 (4,5,6) - why not use normal sample for these? to follow the drums, also for 00:22:511 (1,2,3,4) - . look at the pic below. you should know that it's no use to only adjust the "additions", if you want the notes apply drum-hitnormal sounds, you should adjust the "sampleset" to drun, instead of the "additions". I recommend to adjust their sampleset to normal though, it's up to you, if you like drum sample better.I liked more Normal sampleset than Drum actually, nice catch.

SPOILER

00:28:605 (1) - do you really need the whistle? Removed
00:33:292 (3) - the finish at its end seems too sudden for me, I know there is cymbal sound in the music but as it breaks the hitsound pattern so I would suggest that you use a lower volume for this one, 40% would be preferred, also for the Goat diff, if you decided to do so
00:36:808 - I think you should add a beat here, because this is the part where the drums are gradually getting more and more intense, it feels really weird to have a balnk in here
00:37:159 (2) - try a normal sample for this and a drum clap for 00:37:277 (3) -
00:37:511 (4,5,6,7) - and also normal samples for these would be really nice, to fit the drum and to emphasise
00:45:128 (2,3,4) - same as above, adjust them to normal sample?
00:45:480 - and from this part on, I suggest that you use a normal sample for every white to match with the music, that's how I feel to use hitsounds to show the difference between different parts
00:46:417 (1) - this NC is really not neccessary, plz remove it
00:51:105 (1,2,3) - why so big distance for this point? I feel quite uncomfortable when playing, better use the same distance as 00:51:808 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Well, I pretty liked that distance but indeed, it has a big distance. I decided to changed it a bit (not the same with the stream, but you will notice of the change).
00:51:808 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and you need normal samples for the streams, as I've mentioned above
01:02:237 - and what's this green line, plz remove it as it's useless, also for that in Goat diff

Goat
hitsound suggestions are just the same as above, plz do the same in this diff iif you agreed to fix any of that for the Wolf diff
I would recommend AR4 and OD3 for this diff as it's the lowest one and the song is not a fast one
00:22:980 (1) - you used a soft finish for the Wolf diff and a normal one here, maybe make them consistent

That's all
Good luck

Inyuschan wrote:

We, vengo por el M4M~

General:

Creo que sonaría bien que desde 00:00:480 hasta 00:07:511 pusieras algunos whistles.

Also, donde hay whistles... pondría más; es decir: uno en 00:07:980, otro en 00:08:917, en 00:09:855, en 00:10:792, y así. Yo pienso que está bien como se escucha ahora, prefiero no hacer más cambios en los hitsounds.

Normal:

Todo bien o3o

Hard:

00:22:980 (5) - Si pusiste NC en Normal ponlo aquí también, baka o3o Muchos me dicen cosas por el estilo respecto de poner o no NC acá, me convencí y lo deje sin NC.

00:48:292 (1) - No es necesario el NC. Listo


Eso es todo, sé que te debía el M4M pero realmente no sé qué decir, me gusta así.

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152,188,47355,6,0,L|78:150,1,83.9999974365235
76,258,47823,2,0,L|152:296,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

200,324,54855,6,0,P|248:316|280:288,1,70
348,316,55323,2,0,P|340:268|312:236,1,70
340,168,55792,2,0,P|292:176|260:204,1,70
211,241,56261,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,272,56495,1,0,0:0:0:0:

1. Your BG is colourful, but your colours are still too bright. Try to fade them a bit, they should not hurt players' eyes.
2. I am really unsure about the diff names. Could you, please, explain how names of the diff are related to the song?
3. Your hitsounds during kiai-parts sound too loud to me. Try to reduce their volume by 10-15%?

1. New combos seem rather overused. Each combo is just 2-3 objcets long which is way too short and feels a bit too intense.
2. 00:04:230 (1) - the slider breaks your consistent rhythm and comboing and does not really fits here. Consider replacing it with some more regular patternns, or remove the repeat.
3. 00:15:948 (2,3,1) - minor - try to keep your flow/patterns a bit prettier? A triangle-pattern would look/flow here better. Example
4. 00:30:480 (1) - beginners may mistakenly hit tail of the slider just because it's so close to the previous hitobject. Moving tail of the slider away seems like a great idea to me. Try that!
   
   That's a rather simple diff, nothing really wrong with it, just a couple of patterns that I'd recommend to fix.

1. 00:06:105 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - jumps are used to emphasize stressful/epic monents of the song. This pattern looks and plays totally random to me, I have absolutely no idea why would you use it here. Please, try to keep the DS more consistent to make the diff understandable for players.
   Note: same applies for a few more jumpy patterns in your diff.
2. 00:36:105 (1) - the vocals gets faster at this part, so you shouldn't ignore the vocals at 00:36:339 - and 00:36:808 - try to go with an 1/2 pattern likethis to point out how the song gets faster here.
   
   Pretty nice diff.