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Yuizuki Sora - Kimidake no Canvas (Short Ver.)

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Darksonic
2,805 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Darksonic
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on jueves, 13 de junio de 2013 at 03:32:25 a.m.

Artist: Yuizuki Sora
Title: Kimidake no Canvas (Short Ver.)
Source: Canvas 4 ~Achrome Etude~
Tags: mythol opening visual novel F&C GN Software
BPM: 122
Filesize: 4669kb
Play Time: 01:51
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,85 stars, 104 notes)
  2. Hard (4,77 stars, 253 notes)
  3. Mythol's Normal (3,18 stars, 139 notes)
Download: Yuizuki Sora - Kimidake no Canvas (Short Ver.)
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I'm enjoying to map relax songs <3~

Mythol's Normal by Mythol
Last edited by Darksonic , edited 10 times in total.
Mythol
1,420 posts
Joined March 2011
Mythol
http://puu.sh/1O3zc finish~
Sekai
6,376 posts
Joined February 2011
Sekai
Hi Baka Bruno :3 Mod request from my Queue~

General:
  1. Add "Mythol" to the tag~
  2. The artist is wrong it's "Yuizuki Sora" not "Yuiziki Sora"
  3. And Here uncoded stuff :3
    SPOILER
    TitleUnicode:君だけのキャンバス (Short Ver.)
    ArtistUnicode:結月そら

Easy:
AR and HP +1 will be good for easy~
  1. 00:08:202 (1) - i think finish here will sound really to the song and you can keep the whistle if you want :3
  2. 00:15:579 (1,2) - switch this nc because the the vocal started there~
  3. 00:16:562 (1) - and i think Normal finish sounds better here and i dont think soft one fit much~
  4. 00:18:530 (3) - whistle here will sound good imo~ :3
  5. 00:28:366 (1) - (nazi) Move last slider point to x:136 y:180 so it'll blanket the other circle better ~
  6. 00:30:333 (3) - move this 1 grid down so it'll be in the same line as the (2) ~
  7. 00:52:956 (2) - I think this will be better if you use ctrl+j and move it up like this http://puu.sh/1RZPn
  8. 01:10:661 (2) - this slidertick sounds weird do something about them ><
  9. 01:13:612 (3,4) - i actually dont like this and it sounds off to me~ do it like this will be better http://puu.sh/1RZT0
  10. 01:29:841 (3) - (nazi) move the last point to x:316 y:224 so it make nice blanket with the other slider~
  11. 01:50:005 (1) - this slider will be sound better if it end on 01:50:743


Bakathol's Normal:
  1. 00:24:431 (1) - Just like i said in easy diff~
  2. 01:03:530 (x) - it will sound nice if you added a note here and it really fit the song~
  3. 01:05:497 (1,2) - switch the nc because the vocal started there not on the (1) >.<

Hard:
  1. 00:05:497 (1) - (nazi) move the last slider point to x:224 y:100 to make nice blanket with 00:05:005 (4,2,3) - just like this~
    SPOILER


Good work on the hard :3 but i just dont like the hitsounds~ and it's up to you if you dont want to change them~


Nice map good luck~
Darksonic
2,805 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Darksonic

Sekai-nyan wrote:

General:
  1. Add "Mythol" to the tag~ I Forget lol, added.
  2. The artist is wrong it's "Yuizuki Sora" not "Yuiziki Sora" Fixed.
  3. And Here uncoded stuff :3 Added both, thanks.
    SPOILER
    TitleUnicode:君だけのキャンバス (Short Ver.)
    ArtistUnicode:結月そら
    [/color]

Easy:
AR and HP +1 will be good for easy~ Ok.
  1. 00:08:202 (1) - i think finish here will sound really to the song and you can keep the whistle if you want :3 Finish sounds too loud here, Whistle is ok.
  2. 00:15:579 (1,2) - switch this nc because the the vocal started there~ Vocal starts after (2), so is ok.
  3. 00:16:562 (1) - and i think Normal finish sounds better here and i dont think soft one fit much~ Yeah, sounds nice.
  4. 00:18:530 (3) - whistle here will sound good imo~ :3 I can't hear a sound here, so Whistle would be a little useless imo.
  5. 00:28:366 (1) - (nazi) Move last slider point to x:136 y:180 so it'll blanket the other circle better ~ Improved blanket in a different way.
  6. 00:30:333 (3) - move this 1 grid down so it'll be in the same line as the (2) ~ They already are in the same line lol.
  7. 00:52:956 (2) - I think this will be better if you use ctrl+j and move it up like this http://puu.sh/1RZPn That way it would be touching hp bar, so no.
  8. 01:10:661 (2) - this slidertick sounds weird do something about them >< If you mean about these two claps, they fit with the music :P, I did the same on Insane.
  9. 01:13:612 (3,4) - i actually dont like this and it sounds off to me~ do it like this will be better http://puu.sh/1RZT0 Ok.
  10. 01:29:841 (3) - (nazi) move the last point to x:316 y:224 so it make nice blanket with the other slider~ Ok.
  11. 01:50:005 (1) - this slider will be sound better if it end on 01:50:743 No, I'm following piano here.
Hard:
  1. 00:05:497 (1) - (nazi) move the last slider point to x:224 y:100 to make nice blanket with 00:05:005 (4,2,3) - just like this~ x:224 y:92 is better imo, so improved that way.
    SPOILER


Thanks for modding Moekai :3
xChippy
1,941 posts
Joined August 2011
xChippy
Hihi~ M4M from your queue

Im new to modding/mapping so don't m4m if my mod is useless :3
No major thing to change here =w=
Easy
All suggestions :3
00:12:628 (1) - End point to 356|228 to make it prettier
00:37:710 (2) - End point to 353|293 to make it prettier
00:40:661 (1) - End point to 212|220 and move 00:41:644 (2) - to 162|147 like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/799885
01:03:776 (1) - End point to 99|282 to make it prettier
01:15:579 (1) - 320|272
01:25:415 (3) - Add clap to the end
01:29:841 (3) - end to 306|235
01:34:267 (3) - end to 174|28
01:50:005 (1) - Remove whistle at the end?

Normal
00:11:153 (2) - 252|143
00:55:907 (1,2) - Like this maybe? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/799906
01:05:497 (3,1) - Switch the Nc's?

Hard
00:05:497 (1) - end point to 217|100
00:08:202 (1) - end point to 178|337
00:53:694 (1) - Like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/799924
00:55:661 (3,4,5) - If you follow above stack these again with the end of (1)
01:30:333 Listen really good :3 there should be another repeat here I think

Sorry for the short mod =.=
Really good map imo~!!
CrystilonZ
1,559 posts
Joined January 2013
CrystilonZ
Hi
M4M from your queue

[Easy]
01:20:005 (1) - This is almost offscreen.

[Mythol's Normal]
Slidertick rate 2
Kiai time should be same with other diffs.
00:23:694 (5) - delete reverse
00:39:431 (3) - ^

[Hard]
00:14:841 00:15:087 00:15:333 - Add note
01:10:415 (1) - whistle end
01:14:349 - Change to


Really good map~
GL + star
Last edited by CrystilonZ , edited 3 times in total.
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,466 posts
Joined July 2011
Flask
Hey Bruno, M4M from your Queue!

[General]
  1. I prefer to end the last kiai at 01:35:251 - which Mythol's diff does. Yeah that's more fit I bet. lol
  2. No video? ;__;
[Hard]
  1. 00:03:284 (3) - -nazi- Put this note at x:284, y:248? It'll be an equilateral triangle with 00:02:546 (1,2) - afterwards.
  2. 00:15:087 - Add a note here? I can here a strong piano sound in the background music, and the rhythm here is kinda empty. Add a note may solve these problem imo. (Yeah w/o a note is boring ;;)
  3. 00:15:579 (1,2) - Oh my god, what's wrong here? (2) starts at blue tick, but it really acts like it starts at red tick (00:15:825 - ), which players will get a miss at all. Highly suggest you to use a slider to connect these two objects, that would be more easy to read imo.
    Oh yes here's the example!
  4. 00:23:939 (4) - I know you're following the clap sound and the whistle sound in the music at the same time, but add a clap and a whistle at the same time is... kinda weird? Or inconsistent with others I'll say. Since the clap sound is louder than the whistle sound, I'll suggest you to remove whistle instead add both of them at the same time.
  5. 00:33:776 (4) - / 00:37:710 (4) - / 00:39:677 (3) - / 00:47:546 (4) - ^
  6. 00:35:989 - Add a whistle here? Sounds really empty to emphasize the vocal here ;_; And yes, there's a piano sound.
    I have nothing to say with the parts of kiai time, nice job <3
[erothol]
  1. 00:06:480 - Whistle here? ;__;
  2. 01:40:907 - ^ you're so copy paste
  3. 00:31:808 - Do you miss a clap here? If yes, remove da whistle and add clap instead.
[Easy]
  1. HP-1? Well, this is a soft song, so we shouldn't do something hard at easier diff, right?
  2. 00:23:939 - k clap you know
  3. 00:56:398 (1) - That blanket ._.
    SPOILER

    260,328,56398,6,0,P|364:324|388:224,1,220,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  4. 01:25:907 - clap ;__; baka
Good luck Bruno!
Darksonic
2,805 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Darksonic
Thanks for modding guys, applied useful stuff on my diffs.
10crystalmask01
10crystalmask01
Your beatmap looks really good so far! :) That's great!

I recommend you add a break time or two on Easy and normal mode, since players may get exhausted. (Only if you want)

Hope this helped~! :)
Darksonic
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Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Darksonic

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Your beatmap looks really good so far! :) That's great!

I recommend you add a break time or two on Easy and normal mode, since players may get exhausted. (Only if you want)

Hope this helped~! :)
Nah, is a Short Ver. after all, a break is not needed.
Mythol
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Joined March 2011
Mythol
http://puu.sh/3esVk.osu
thx~
Darksonic
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Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Darksonic
Updated.
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
IRC Modded.

SPOILER
07:43 Andrea: oh right
07:43 Andrea: wanna irc mod?
07:44 Darksonic: o3o
07:44 Andrea: link me your mappu
07:44 *Darksonic is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/208508 Yuizuki Sora - Kimidake no Canvas (Short Ver.) [Hard]]
07:44 Darksonic: <3
07:44 Andrea: <3
07:45 Andrea: I think 1 sec lead-in would be enough
07:46 Darksonic: hm
07:46 Darksonic: 1500 maybe?
07:47 Andrea: yeah that works
07:47 Andrea: 01:13:612 (3,4,1) - these stacks doesn't seem to be perfect
07:47 Darksonic: easyt?
07:47 Andrea: yeah
07:47 Andrea: 01:23:448 (1,2) - I'd prefer the NC on (2) actually
07:48 Andrea: 01:33:530 - You're missing a note here! would be nice to add one
07:49 Darksonic: I'm afraid some beginners may confuse with it
07:49 Andrea: 01:34:267 (3,1) - Improve this blanket by making (3) more curve
07:49 Darksonic: fixed
07:50 Andrea: once you're done I go to Normal
07:50 Darksonic: gogo normal
07:50 Andrea: artist and title unicode are messed up
07:51 Darksonic: a
07:51 Darksonic: stupid puush
07:51 Andrea: hehe
07:52 Andrea: 00:08:694 (3,4) - such an ugly overlap
07:52 Darksonic: agree
07:52 Andrea: 00:27:874 (1,2,1) - wrong spacing
07:52 Darksonic: fixed
07:53 Andrea: 00:43:612 (3,1) - NC should go on (3)
07:53 Darksonic: maybe he was following music instead
07:53 Andrea: 00:47:300 (3,1) - ^
07:53 Andrea: no idea
07:53 Andrea: I still dislike single combos
07:54 Andrea: 00:56:153 (2) - please don't overlap this slider with the previous one... make it going to the left <.<
07:55 Darksonic: hmm
07:55 Andrea: 01:43:120 (3,4) - ugly overlap once again
07:55 Andrea: that's it for Normal
07:57 Darksonic: I'm not sure in which way should I fix these, it will be better if Mythol takes a look on them instead
07:57 Andrea: I guess so
07:57 Darksonic: Gogo hard
07:58 Andrea: 00:11:398 (5) - 1 grid left, you know why
07:58 Darksonic: yeah
07:58 Darksonic: just fixed it
07:59 Andrea: 01:18:776 (1) - not necessary NC imo
08:00 Darksonic: I added that one because I was following vocal before, then music
08:00 Andrea: 01:29:841 (3) - add 1 more repeat to this slider?
08:01 Andrea: feels weird to play
08:01 Darksonic: sure
08:01 Darksonic: now I have to fix spacing
08:01 Andrea: yeah
08:01 Andrea: that's all, cute map <3
Darksonic
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Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Darksonic
Thanks Andrea :3
moonlightleaf
2,157 posts
Joined September 2011
moonlightleaf
General
offset->584，i'm not sure if it is right

i think you should fit Distance Spacing (use
Easy
HP->1
CS->5
AR->2
OD->1

fix Distance Spacing

for example:

00:01:321(2) x|168 y|236

00:03:288(4) x|348 y|60

00:04:764(1) x|316 y|340

others you will check them

00:34:764(3) No Hidden

01:15:579(1) ^

01:23:939(2) No Overlap

01:37:710(3) ^

Mythol's Normal
Distance Spacing->1.2 also need to fix some

00:20:005 note

00:34:759 try this
SPOILER

01:06:972(4) remove then 2notes instead of it

01:13:366 note

01:22:464(4) try this
SPOILER

01:30:825 note

01:36:726 ^

01:43:858(4) try this
SPOILER
Hard
00:24:677 try this
SPOILER

356,192,24677,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,104,24923,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,12,25169,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,12,25415,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,104,25661,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,192,25907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
01:13:366(5) remove then 2notes instead of it

01:29:841(3) reduce a return

01:30:579(2) remove then 2notes instead maybe better

01:51:726(1) remove ? here not so fit

nice song Good Luck for Ranked >w<
Raose
698 posts
Joined July 2012
Raose
trying for m4m~ hope my mod is helpful :)

[Hard]

00:01:071 (2) - i know you're blanketing 1, but the slider looks cramped D: spread it out a bit?
00:08:202 (1) - I think the strong beat (white tick) should be emphasized more instead of being on the end of the repeating slide; maybe take out the repeat and put a note instead?
00:37:218 (3) - not perfectly stacked on top of tail of 1
01:09:185 (2) - bring it closer? the different spacing makes this note stand out from the rest of the map, which uses 1.0x spacing

[Mythol's Normal]
00:11:153 (2) - move it to the right for better curve imo:
SPOILER
00:20:005 - add a note? :O I hear a beat in the background
00:29:349 (1,2) - try this rhythm instead?
SPOILER
00:39:431 (3) - clap on repeat?
01:12:628 (2) - move to x:144 y:168 so it blankets 1, you'll have to adjust spacing if you do this D:

[Easy]
00:30:333 (3,4) - I think you should switch these two on the timeline, cause then the individual notes would match and emphasize the "ding" sounds in the background (00:31:808)
00:41:644 (3) - move to x:164 y:148 so it's blanketed better
01:19:021 (4,1) - i feel like doing this would match vocals better D: and i think strong beat should be emphasized at the start of a slider, not at the end~ might disrupt your symmetry though
SPOILER

goodluck! :D
Nyukai
2,431 posts
Joined July 2012
Nyukai
[Hard]

00:13:980 - I would change slider 5 for this.
SPOILER

01:23:525 - Just move note 2 a bit, between note 1 and slider 3 ><
SPOILER

Nothing else, I think Easy and Normal are good c__:

SPOILER
Siento si hablo mal inglés, Bruno, pero ya que hay gente que no habla español pues posteo así :_D
sheela
2,651 posts
Joined October 2011
sheela
Hi!
Here's my suggestions. I'm not sure if it's useless but I'll try.
[Easy]
01:32:792 (1) - Stop the slider at 01:33:284
01:42:628 (1) - Maybe curve the slider
[Hard]
01:22:956 (2) - Prev: 1.01x Next 1.01x
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