This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年6月13日 at 17:57:09

Artist: JerryC
Title: Dear Mozart
Source: Canon Rock
BPM: 210
Filesize: 7474kb
Play Time: 04:39
Difficulties Available:

1. Amateur (4.94 stars, 736 notes)
2. Beginner (1.84 stars, 244 notes)
3. Expert (4.9 stars, 1131 notes)

Download: JerryC - Dear Mozart
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8th..still suck.really need a teacher
求指导，求指引，求鞭策，求求求啊
Beginner : fin
Amateur : fin
Expert : fin
don't know anything about sound eff..help

mark

angelfix wrote:

mark

.. 怀疑继续坑

Pretty good beatmap so far!

However, I've found jsut a few small errors:

Insane mode
-All your slider's ends are not snapped at:

00:24:814
00:30:528
00:33:671
00:39:385
00:39:671
03:53:108
04:15:108

Amateur mode
-Slider's ends are not snapped at 01:03:679 and 01:04:108 (keep an eye out fro those offsets, as they often confuse mappers a lot when placed in a small tight range).
-Many of your slider's ends are not snapped, from 03:01:965 to 03:04:250, and 03:53:108 - 03:59:108

As for sound effects, you can try doing a rhythm pattern (eg. normal, clap, normal, clap, normal, whistle, normal clap...and so on)
Hope this helps~!

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Pretty good beatmap so far!

However, I've found jsut a few small errors:

Insane mode
-All your slider's ends are not snapped at:

00:24:814
00:30:528
00:33:671
00:39:385
00:39:671
03:53:108
04:15:108

Amateur mode
-Slider's ends are not snapped at 01:03:679 and 01:04:108 (keep an eye out fro those offsets, as they often confuse mappers a lot when placed in a small tight range).
-Many of your slider's ends are not snapped, from 03:01:965 to 03:04:250, and 03:53:108 - 03:59:108

As for sound effects, you can try doing a rhythm pattern (eg. normal, clap, normal, clap, normal, whistle, normal clap...and so on)
Hope this helps~!

thx .. really need to check aimod every time...K i will try the rhythm pattern as you said

That's great! Good luck~!

貌似可以用中文？俺是渣modder+渣mapper，所以很多以player角度出发的意见，见谅

哎，总体来说，有个问题大概就是，一个弯的滑条虽然有包着某个note或者滑条头/尾的意思，但是包的不好看，很多地方都是这样，再看看吧


好长的曲子QVQ
good luck

Hollow Wings wrote:

貌似可以用中文？俺是渣modder+渣mapper，所以很多以player角度出发的意见，见谅

哎，总体来说，有个问题大概就是，一个弯的滑条虽然有包着某个note或者滑条头/尾的意思，但是包的不好看，很多地方都是这样，再看看吧

General

没tags？加几个吧

Beginner

好多的overlap，具体不说了，easy我也没怎么打过，不知道新手什么感觉。。。偶去，现在才知道overlap的问题，怀疑要吃电视
00:38:681 (2) - 这个。。。叠的太明显了吧 K
02:18:110 (2) - 挡住了，估计unrankbleK
02:20:395 (4) - 和02:51:252 (2) - 虽然碰到一点尾巴但还是改了吧后面的间距限制怎么样都会overlap。。
02:42:681 (2,3) - ...orzK
03:16:967 (2) - 头被挡住了一点K
03:24:395 (2) - ...K
03:30:681 (4) - ...K
03:37:538 (4) - ...K
03:45:538 (4) - ...K
04:05:538 (4) - ...K。。其他有overlap的地方能改都改了。。ezsy还真是不懂做

Expert

00:04:407 (4) - 如果这里是跟着主旋律的话，这个滑条违和感十足，仔细听的话提琴音是蓝线开奏，所以改一下 这小提琴音我判断为抢拍了。插了两根红线，换成一单点加一滑条了
00:06:692 (1,2) - 这里怎么又变音轨。。。换成滑条，圈，滑条
00:39:538 (2,3,4,5,6) - 调整一下排列？要不就在3上NC换成flow好点的
00:57:538 (7) - NC K
01:07:967 (9) - ^ K
01:13:395 (10) - 空一拍？就像01:12:110 (5,6) - 一样？(just suggestion del 圈
01:15:252 (9,1) - 太近 K
01:29:537 (6) - NC K
01:33:681 (4) - 改一下位置，叠的不好看(just suggestion K
01:36:395 (5,6) - 这两个太近了。。。最好改一下 K
01:52:538 (6,7) - overlap K
02:02:681 (10) - NC K
02:46:110 (8) - ^ K
02:50:681 (7) - ^ K
03:24:681 (8,1) - 太近，改一下8的位置 K
03:42:110 (8) - NC K
03:54:681 (6) - ^ K
03:59:252 (1) - ^ K
04:02:681 (11) - ^ K
04:04:967 (14) - ^ K
04:23:538 (6,7) - 太近 K

Amateur

00:19:856 (3) - 突然3/4滑条，最好NC一下，00:18:396 (1,2) - 这两个remove K，N.remove会很空。
00:25:110 (3,1) - 距离大一点，统一一下 K
00:32:681 (2,3) - overlap？改一下3的形状吧，和4接的也不是很好看 K
00:35:538 (4,5,6,7) - 这几个。。。重新摆一下吧。。。 K
00:39:252 (1,2,3) - K
00:43:824 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^+2,4叠在一起，1,3,5做个圈什么的。还是就这样
00:52:967 (1,2,3,4) - ^K
01:09:681 (2,3,4,1) - DS和样子都不好。。。诡异的滑条没改，4,1改了
01:57:824 (8) - 这个的位置。。。K
01:59:824 (1,2) - 叠叠好orzK
02:43:252 (1,2) - 这个应该是unrankble遮挡？ K
03:44:110 (4,5) - 这里感觉有点别手，换个梗？(just suggestion 换了个折返滑条
03:55:395 (9) - 遮挡 K
04:11:252 (3,4,5) - 叠得太乱 K
04:20:967 (5,6) - 你看这里你就包的很好，参照这个把这种地方都改一下吧 咳咳咳
04:23:824 (3,1) - overlap。。。 K
04:31:252 (1,2) - ^ K

节奏倒是还好，当然可能我insane打的多读图没问题，貌似有些地方稍微有点违和，看看别人怎么说吧

好长的曲子QVQ
good luck

谢谢你的mod

hi~form your modding queue
[Ama]
00:04:407 (1) - remove
00:04:407 - add circle
00:04:549 - ^
00:04:692 - ^ and add whistle in statt
总感觉你这个slider到后面 小提琴就拉起来了 感觉好不舒服 改成circle会好点
00:04:978 (1) - NC and add whistle in start
00:06:978 (5) - add whistle
00:08:938 (1) - 在中间的折返加whistle 然后这个和后面的note 距离原了 你后面的note的距离都比较密的
00:11:539 (1) - add whistle in start
00:13:824 (1) - ^
00:16:110 (5) - ^并NC
00:18:396 (1) - add whistle in start
00:23:252 (1,2,3,4) - 抬得太夸张了 建议这样
00:25:110 (3,1) - 间距
00:25:824 (2,3) - ^
00:32:681 (2,3) - 不要贴太紧
00:33:395 (4,5) - x404 y248
00:36:395 (6,7) - 不要贴在一起T_T
00:39:538 (2) - 这个1.2Ds http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/807018
00:38:395 (7,8,9,1) - 为什么这些突然就贴的这么近的？ 建议和前面的间距一致
00:46:967 (3,4) - 这两个circle 和2号slider左右两边的宽度不一致
01:00:681 (3,4) - 不要贴在一起
01:04:395 (1,2) - 没对称
01:06:967 (2) - x324 y304 01:07:110 (3) - x232 y296 这样我感觉上会流畅点
01:09:681 (2,3) - 又贴在一起啦 你把这个slider的头靠近点01:08:967 (1)
01:11:538 (2,3) - 没包好
01:14:681 (5,6) - 你上面的slider都贴在一起 怎么这个突然分开了?
01:17:252 (2,3) - ^
01:19:252 (1) - add whistle 在结尾加条绿线20%音量
01:25:252 (7,2) - overlap
01:26:395 (2,3,4,5) - 有几个间距有问题 仿照你旁边那些< < 01:28:110 (1,2,3,4)
01:31:538 (1,3) - 没包好
01:33:538 (3,4) - 前后间距(我之后不说这个了 这样估计好多字 你后面自己检查吧)
01:38:681 (3) - 左边有右边的凸起高度不一致
01:59:824 (1,2) - 没叠好
02:12:110 (4) - ctrl+g
02:12:681 (6) - ^
02:12:967 (7) - ^ and NC
02:13:538 (9) - ^
02:22:252 - 到02:22:824 - 这里换了种乐器？ 貌似 个人建议这里用减速slider 效果会好很多
02:33:395 (3) - 这样包不好看 往下移一点
02:52:967 (1) - x216 y164
03:10:395 (2,3) - 在时间顺序上调换下 这样接得更流畅
03:44:395 (5) - 也可以用绿线减速下
03:46:681 (1) - ^
04:11:252 (3,5) - overlap

[Ex]
00:04:407 (4) - 尾巴夹whistle
00:04:978 (1) - 头加whistle
00:07:264 (2) - ^
00:09:509 (3) - whistle
00:11:539 (1) - 头whistle
00:13:824 (8) - ^
00:16:110 (2) - ^
00:35:538 (4,5,6,7) - 7好和前面的间距明显不同了 建议开Ds排 然后排得可以更圆滑点
00:38:395 (7) - 没包好 往上移点
00:39:824 (3) - 和4号间距 你看4号和5号的间距 这个明显短了
01:21:538 (3,6,9) - 这三个故意没叠好的？
02:50:538 (6) - NC
02:48:395 (1) - 头加whistle (上面那难度我都忘记了没说 = = 我这里就不再说了)
02:50:681 (7) - ^
02:52:967 (1) - ^
03:12:395 (1) - 结尾加绿线降音 20%
03:33:824 (8,1) - 没叠好

[beg]
开头音效和上面一样
嗯~一看就知道这难度No problem

Hi ^^,

M4M:

[General]

1. Your difficulty spread is Easy/Hard/Insane. It's not good. Turn your Easy into a Normal or add a Normal.
2. You need a preview point. Timing>Set Curent point as prview point.
3. When you're a beginner at mapping it's never a really good idea to map long song. Try asking some GD.
4. All your diff have a lot of overlapping issues. It's when a little bit of different note/slider touch each others when it could be avoided. It looks better without them and are easily removable.
   
   Good

   
   Bad everytime

   
   Accepted when you don't have the choice

   

[Beginner]

1. From the start until 00:21:00 - You have a SV of 0.70*0.75=0.55 and a DS of 0.6. It's too small imo. The notes overlap even when they are two beats apart. Maybe you could use a hiher DS but you would have to remap all the diff....
2. 00:27:824 (1) - Move it to x=352 y=344: better blanket.
3. 00:36:967 (1) - Move the second point to x=172 y=192 and the end point to x=212 y=256 then move 2 to x=260 y=188 then change 3 the same way as 1.
4. 00:48:395 (1) - Move the second point to x=384 y=216 for a better blanket.
5. 01:03:252 (2,4) - They should be at the same high.
6. 01:06:681 (1,1) - Not correctly stacked.
7. 01:08:967 (1,1) - Try avoiding this little overlapping. Move the second slider to x=344 y=252 for example.
8. 01:23:824 (3,4) - ^
9. 01:24:967 (4,1) - ^
10. 01:38:681 (2) - Move the end point to x=180 y=284 then the following note to x=248 y=332 for a better blanket.
11. 02:03:824 (2) - Move the end point to x=340 y=200 for a better blanket.
12. 02:07:824 (1) - Move it to x=252 y=260 for a better blanket.
13. 02:08:395 (2,2) - Stack them for the blanket.
14. 02:16:395 (1,2,3,4) - Overlapping.
15. 02:31:252 (3,1) - ^
16. 03:15:824 (1,2) - ^
17. 03:22:681 (1,2) - ^
18. 03:27:252 (1,2,3,4) - ^
19. 03:33:538 (6,1) - ^
20. 03:36:395 (3,4) - ^
21. 03:42:110 (1,3) - ^
22. 03:44:395 (3,4) - ^
23. 03:49:538 (2,3) - The blanket doesn't look good.
24. 03:53:538 (2) - Move it to x=368 y=164 for a better blanket.
25. 04:03:824 (3,4) - ^
26. 04:25:538 (2,1) - ^
27. 04:38:824 (1) - Maybe use

[Amateur]

1. 00:09:824 (2) - I think it should be at x=332 y=256.
2. 00:19:856 (3,4,5) - Overlapping. And remember that you're not constarined by the DS in a Hard/Insane the same way as in an Easy/Normal diff. You have a lot more liberties.
3. 00:24:681 (2,1) - They should be at the same high like 00:24:395 (1,3)
4. 00:26:681 (1,2,3,4) - Overlapping
5. 00:31:824 (3,1) - ^
6. 00:32:681 (2,3) - ^
7. 00:35:252 (3,5) - ^
8. 00:36:395 (6,7) - ^
9. 00:39:252 (1,2,3) - The distance between 1 and 2 should be the same as the one between 2 and 3.
10. 00:43:824 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try this:
    
    The sliders are 120° rotations of each others and the notes are at the center.
11. 00:46:967 (3,4) - Stack them on 00:47:252 (5)?
12. 00:52:252 (2,3) - Maybe make a blanket?
13. 00:54:967 (4,6) - Doesn't look good.
14. 00:57:538 (1,2) - Overlapping.
15. 01:00:681 (3,4) - ^
16. 01:00:967 (4,6,7) - ^
17. 01:04:824 - Add a note?
18. 01:09:967 (3,1) - Overlapping.
19. 01:13:538 (1,2,3) - ^
20. 01:16:967 (1,2) - ^ (but there isn't one between 2 and 3.....)
21. 01:18:110 (1,2,3,4) - Your slider must not hide the arrow of the others!!!!!!!!! Try this:
    
22. 01:25:252 (7,2) - Stack them.
23. 01:30:967 (2,1) - Overlapping.
24. 01:33:395 (2,3,4,5) - ^
25. 01:34:396 (6) - Move it to x=44 y=184 for a better blanket.
26. 01:35:252 (1,2,3,4) - Overlapping.
27. 01:36:967 (4,5) - Arrow hidden.
28. 01:38:110 (2,3) - Overlapping.
29. 01:48:967 (1,5) - ^
30. 01:54:395 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - ^
31. 01:56:252 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Arrow hidden.
32. 01:59:824 (1,2) - Not stacked properly.
33. 02:00:967 (4,5) - Overlapping.
34. 02:02:681 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
35. 02:05:395 (2,3,4) - Use this:
    
    You avoid all the overlapping and it looks way better.
36. 02:07:252 (1,2,3,4,1) - Overlapping.
37. 02:08:681 (2,4) - ^
38. 02:11:824 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Even with AR8 it's not really easy to read especially for Hard-player. Make them further away from each other.
39. 02:14:110 (1,2,3,4) - This time you make them right ^^
40. 02:26:110 (3,5) - Overlapping.
41. 02:26:681 (5,1) - ^
42. 02:27:538 (1,2,3,4) - ^
43. 02:32:967 (2,3) - ^
44. 02:33:395 (3,5) - Stack them properly.
45. 02:43:252 (1,2) - Overlapping.
46. 02:52:967 (1) - Move it one grid left for a better blanket.
47. 02:54:110 (4,5) - No overlapping. Very good!
48. 02:54:538 (5,6) - Overlapping. Very bad!
49. 02:59:824 (1,2,3,4) - ^
50. 03:08:967 (1,2,3,4) - ^ (but not between 2 and 3)
51. 03:10:966 (4,5) - ^
52. 03:15:824 (2,2) - Not properly stacked. Use CTRL+C, CTRL+V and CTRL+G for that.
53. 03:20:681 (3,5) - Overlapping.
54. 03:22:681 (1,4,5) - ^
55. 03:31:824 (1,2,3,4) - Arrow hidden.
56. 03:31:824 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Overlapping.
57. 03:34:110 (1,2,3,4) - ^
58. 03:43:824 (3,4,5) - ^
59. 03:52:110 (1,2,3,4) - ^
60. 03:54:110 (7,8) - ^
61. 03:57:823 (5,3) - Not stacked properly.
62. 03:59:252 (5,7,1) - Overlapping.
63. 04:11:252 (3,5) - Not stakced properly.
64. 04:13:538 (3,5) - Overlapping.
65. 04:16:395 (1,2,3,4) - ^
66. 04:23:824 (3,1) - ^
67. 04:37:252 (2,3) - Not stakced properly.
68. 04:38:824 (1,1,1) - I don't this this usually in ranked beatmap.

[Expert]

1. I won't point out the overlapping this time.......
2. 00:06:692 (1,2) - It doesn't follow the music very well. Shorten the first slider by 1/4 beat.
3. 00:35:752 (7) - Move it to x=412 y=208.
4. 01:18:110 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - Too many claps. Remove half of them.
5. 01:21:538 (3,6,9) - Not properly stacked.
6. 01:51:681 (2,3,4) - It's 1/4! These jumps are nearly impossible to play.
7. 02:10:681 (8,9) - ^
8. 02:14:395 (5,1) - ^
9. 02:28:681 - Add a note.
10. 02:55:252 (7,8,9) - The claps sounds weird.
11. 03:09:967 (7,3) - Not properly stacked.
12. 03:16:967 (9,10,11) - You know you're supposed to be able to play your map, right?
13. 03:19:538 (15,1) - ......
14. 03:23:252 (3,5) - Nearly hidden.
15. 03:33:538 (7,8,1) - Arrow hidden.
16. 03:55:252 (7) - NC.
17. 04:06:681 (6) - ^
18. 04:07:252 (11) - ^
19. 04:38:824 (1,1,1) - Same as before.

Longest mod...... Ever........

bokito wrote:

hi~form your modding queue
[Ama]
00:04:407 (1) - remove K
00:04:407 - add circleK
00:04:549 - ^做了相应修改，毕竟小提琴音是从蓝线出来的
00:04:692 - ^ and add whistle in statt K
总感觉你这个slider到后面 小提琴就拉起来了 感觉好不舒服 改成circle会好点
00:04:978 (1) - NC and add whistle in start 在后面点的位置NC了
00:06:978 (5) - add whistleK
00:08:938 (1) - 在中间的折返加whistle 然后这个和后面的note 距离原了 你后面的note的距离都比较密的K
00:11:539 (1) - add whistle in startK
00:13:824 (1) - ^K
00:16:110 (5) - ^并NCK
00:18:396 (1) - add whistle in startK
00:23:252 (1,2,3,4) - 抬得太夸张了 建议这样K

SOPILER

00:25:110 (3,1) - 间距K
00:25:824 (2,3) - ^K
00:32:681 (2,3) - 不要贴太紧K
00:33:395 (4,5) - x404 y248K
00:36:395 (6,7) - 不要贴在一起T_TK
00:39:538 (2) - 这个1.2Ds http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/807018K
00:38:395 (7,8,9,1) - 为什么这些突然就贴的这么近的？ 建议和前面的间距一致K
00:46:967 (3,4) - 这两个circle 和2号slider左右两边的宽度不一致K
01:00:681 (3,4) - 不要贴在一起K
01:04:395 (1,2) - 没对称K
01:06:967 (2) - x324 y304 01:07:110 (3) - x232 y296 这样我感觉上会流畅点。。这是故意间距不同？暂时没采用
01:09:681 (2,3) - 又贴在一起啦 你把这个slider的头靠近点01:08:967 (1) K
01:11:538 (2,3) - 没包好K
01:14:681 (5,6) - 你上面的slider都贴在一起 怎么这个突然分开了?上面分开了
01:17:252 (2,3) - ^ ^
01:19:252 (1) - add whistle 在结尾加条绿线20%音量K
01:25:252 (7,2) - overlap K
01:26:395 (2,3,4,5) - 有几个间距有问题 仿照你旁边那些< < 01:28:110 (1,2,3,4) ..间距都是1.2
01:31:538 (1,3) - 没包好K
01:33:538 (3,4) - 前后间距(我之后不说这个了 这样估计好多字 你后面自己检查吧)K
01:38:681 (3) - 左边有右边的凸起高度不一致K
01:59:824 (1,2) - 没叠好K
02:12:110 (4) - ctrl+g我再想想其他排列
02:12:681 (6) - ^
02:12:967 (7) - ^ and NC
02:13:538 (9) - ^
02:22:252 - 到02:22:824 - 这里换了种乐器？ 貌似 个人建议这里用减速slider 效果会好很多。。没额，还是吉他
02:33:395 (3) - 这样包不好看 往下移一点K
02:52:967 (1) - x216 y164K
03:10:395 (2,3) - 在时间顺序上调换下 这样接得更流畅K
03:44:395 (5) - 也可以用绿线减速下换成折返滑条
03:46:681 (1) - ^无变化。
04:11:252 (3,5) - overlapK

[Ex]
00:04:407 (4) - 尾巴夹whistleK
00:04:978 (1) - 头加whistleK
00:07:264 (2) - ^K
00:09:509 (3) - whistleK
00:11:539 (1) - 头whistleK
00:13:824 (8) - ^K
00:16:110 (2) - ^K
00:35:538 (4,5,6,7) - 7好和前面的间距明显不同了 建议开Ds排 然后排得可以更圆滑点。。可能不小心移动了下
00:38:395 (7) - 没包好 往上移点K
00:39:824 (3) - 和4号间距 你看4号和5号的间距 这个明显短了K
01:21:538 (3,6,9) - 这三个故意没叠好的？。。修正了
02:50:538 (6) - NCK
02:48:395 (1) - 头加whistle (上面那难度我都忘记了没说 = = 我这里就不再说了)K
02:50:681 (7) - ^K
02:52:967 (1) - ^K
03:12:395 (1) - 结尾加绿线降音 20%K
03:33:824 (8,1) - 没叠好K

[beg]
开头音效和上面一样
嗯~一看就知道这难度No problem

十分感谢

rezoons wrote:

Hi ^^,

M4M:

[General]

1. Your difficulty spread is Easy/Hard/Insane. It's not good. Turn your Easy into a Normal or add a Normal.
2. You need a preview point. Timing>Set Curent point as prview point. K
3. When you're a beginner at mapping it's never a really good idea to map long song. Try asking some GD...yap,,easier to mod or remap..
4. All your diff have a lot of overlapping issues. It's when a little bit of different note/slider touch each others when it could be avoided. It looks better without them and are easily removable.i will keep eyes on it
   
   Good

   
   Bad everytime

   
   Accepted when you don't have the choice

   

[Beginner]

1. From the start until 00:21:00 - You have a SV of 0.70*0.75=0.55 and a DS of 0.6. It's too small imo. The notes overlap even when they are two beats apart. Maybe you could use a hiher DS but you would have to remap all the diff.... thanks your mod.. but i decide to Del this diff and create a normal diff
2. 00:27:824 (1) - Move it to x=352 y=344: better blanket.
3. 00:36:967 (1) - Move the second point to x=172 y=192 and the end point to x=212 y=256 then move 2 to x=260 y=188 then change 3 the same way as 1.
4. 00:48:395 (1) - Move the second point to x=384 y=216 for a better blanket.
5. 01:03:252 (2,4) - They should be at the same high.
6. 01:06:681 (1,1) - Not correctly stacked.
7. 01:08:967 (1,1) - Try avoiding this little overlapping. Move the second slider to x=344 y=252 for example.
8. 01:23:824 (3,4) - ^
9. 01:24:967 (4,1) - ^
10. 01:38:681 (2) - Move the end point to x=180 y=284 then the following note to x=248 y=332 for a better blanket.
11. 02:03:824 (2) - Move the end point to x=340 y=200 for a better blanket.
12. 02:07:824 (1) - Move it to x=252 y=260 for a better blanket.
13. 02:08:395 (2,2) - Stack them for the blanket.
14. 02:16:395 (1,2,3,4) - Overlapping.
15. 02:31:252 (3,1) - ^
16. 03:15:824 (1,2) - ^
17. 03:22:681 (1,2) - ^
18. 03:27:252 (1,2,3,4) - ^
19. 03:33:538 (6,1) - ^
20. 03:36:395 (3,4) - ^
21. 03:42:110 (1,3) - ^
22. 03:44:395 (3,4) - ^
23. 03:49:538 (2,3) - The blanket doesn't look good.
24. 03:53:538 (2) - Move it to x=368 y=164 for a better blanket.
25. 04:03:824 (3,4) - ^
26. 04:25:538 (2,1) - ^
27. 04:38:824 (1) - Maybe use

[Amateur]

1. 00:09:824 (2) - I think it should be at x=332 y=256. K
2. 00:19:856 (3,4,5) - Overlapping. And remember that you're not constarined by the DS in a Hard/Insane the same way as in an Easy/Normal diff. You have a lot more liberties. K
3. 00:24:681 (2,1) - They should be at the same high like 00:24:395 (1,3) K
4. 00:26:681 (1,2,3,4) - Overlapping K
5. 00:31:824 (3,1) - ^ K
6. 00:32:681 (2,3) - ^ K
7. 00:35:252 (3,5) - ^ K
8. 00:36:395 (6,7) - ^ K
9. 00:39:252 (1,2,3) - The distance between 1 and 2 should be the same as the one between 2 and 3. K
10. 00:43:824 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try this:
    
    The sliders are 120° rotations of each others and the notes are at the center. K
11. 00:46:967 (3,4) - Stack them on 00:47:252 (5)? K
12. 00:52:252 (2,3) - Maybe make a blanket? K
13. 00:54:967 (4,6) - Doesn't look good. change the position of 5.6
14. 00:57:538 (1,2) - Overlapping. K
15. 01:00:681 (3,4) - ^ K
16. 01:00:967 (4,6,7) - ^ K
17. 01:04:824 - Add a note? K
18. 01:09:967 (3,1) - Overlapping. K
19. 01:13:538 (1,2,3) - ^ K
20. 01:16:967 (1,2) - ^ (but there isn't one between 2 and 3.....) K
21. 01:18:110 (1,2,3,4) - Your slider must not hide the arrow of the others!!!!!!!!! Try this:
    K
22. 01:25:252 (7,2) - Stack them. K
23. 01:30:967 (2,1) - Overlapping. K
24. 01:33:395 (2,3,4,5) - ^ K
25. 01:34:396 (6) - Move it to x=44 y=184 for a better blanket. did it in other way
26. 01:35:252 (1,2,3,4) - Overlapping. K
27. 01:36:967 (4,5) - Arrow hidden. K
28. 01:38:110 (2,3) - Overlapping. K
29. 01:48:967 (1,5) - ^ K
30. 01:54:395 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - ^ K
31. 01:56:252 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Arrow hidden. K
32. 01:59:824 (1,2) - Not stacked properly. K
33. 02:00:967 (4,5) - Overlapping. K
34. 02:02:681 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ K
35. 02:05:395 (2,3,4) - Use this:
    K
    You avoid all the overlapping and it looks way better.
36. 02:07:252 (1,2,3,4,1) - Overlapping. K
37. 02:08:681 (2,4) - ^ K
38. 02:11:824 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Even with AR8 it's not really easy to read especially for Hard-player. Make them further away from each other. K
39. 02:14:110 (1,2,3,4) - This time you make them right ^^ K
40. 02:26:110 (3,5) - Overlapping. K
41. 02:26:681 (5,1) - ^ K
42. 02:27:538 (1,2,3,4) - ^ K
43. 02:32:967 (2,3) - ^ K
44. 02:33:395 (3,5) - Stack them properly. K
45. 02:43:252 (1,2) - Overlapping. K
46. 02:52:967 (1) - Move it one grid left for a better blanket. K
47. 02:54:110 (4,5) - No overlapping. Very good! ...
48. 02:54:538 (5,6) - Overlapping. Very bad! K
49. 02:59:824 (1,2,3,4) - ^ K
50. 03:08:967 (1,2,3,4) - ^ (but not between 2 and 3) K
51. 03:10:966 (4,5) - ^ K
52. 03:15:824 (2,2) - Not properly stacked. Use CTRL+C, CTRL+V and CTRL+G for that. K
53. 03:20:681 (3,5) - Overlapping. K
54. 03:22:681 (1,4,5) - ^ K
55. 03:31:824 (1,2,3,4) - Arrow hidden. K
56. 03:31:824 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Overlapping. K
57. 03:34:110 (1,2,3,4) - ^ K
58. 03:43:824 (3,4,5) - ^ K
59. 03:52:110 (1,2,3,4) - ^ K
60. 03:54:110 (7,8) - ^ K
61. 03:57:823 (5,3) - Not stacked properly. K
62. 03:59:252 (5,7,1) - Overlapping. K
63. 04:11:252 (3,5) - Not stakced properly. K
64. 04:13:538 (3,5) - Overlapping. K
65. 04:16:395 (1,2,3,4) - ^ K
66. 04:23:824 (3,1) - ^ K
67. 04:37:252 (2,3) - Not stakced properly. K
68. 04:38:824 (1,1,1) - I don't this this usually in ranked beatmap.

Del NC

[Expert]

1. I won't point out the overlapping this time.......
2. 00:06:692 (1,2) - It doesn't follow the music very well. Shorten the first slider by 1/4 beat. K
3. 00:35:752 (7) - Move it to x=412 y=208. K
4. 01:18:110 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - Too many claps. Remove half of them. K
5. 01:21:538 (3,6,9) - Not properly stacked. K
6. 01:51:681 (2,3,4) - It's 1/4! These jumps are nearly impossible to play. ...i think its ok
7. 02:10:681 (8,9) - ^ closer
8. 02:14:395 (5,1) - ^ ^
9. 02:28:681 - Add a note. ...not good
10. 02:55:252 (7,8,9) - The claps sounds weird. ..change to whistle
11. 03:09:967 (7,3) - Not properly stacked. K
12. 03:16:967 (9,10,11) - You know you're supposed to be able to play your map, right? ....i think many maps are using this arrangement
13. 03:19:538 (15,1) - ...... ......
14. 03:23:252 (3,5) - Nearly hidden. K
15. 03:33:538 (7,8,1) - Arrow hidden. K
16. 03:55:252 (7) - NC. K
17. 04:06:681 (6) - ^ K
18. 04:07:252 (11) - ^ K
19. 04:38:824 (1,1,1) - Same as before.

K

Longest mod...... Ever........

really thank you

Here is my promised M4M. Sorry for the delay ^-^'

Expert

I'll continue this tomorrow, not enough motivation q.q

Amateur

Good Luck with this map!

Hi, m4m service. Sorry took you a long time
good luck with the map!

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