ani feat. moco - Light up My Love · forum

popner

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Joined March 2011

Topic Starter

popner 2013-03-17T16:04:48+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年9月10日星期二 at 22:21:33

Artist: ani feat. moco
Title: Light up My Love
Source: Cytus
Tags: Flower onoken -kevincela-
BPM: 171
Filesize: 3424kb
Play Time: 01:57
Difficulties Available:

Another (4.81 stars, 506 notes)
Flower's Standard (4.52 stars, 214 notes)
Hyper (5 stars, 427 notes)
kevin's Beginner (2.87 stars, 141 notes)
Light (4.99 stars, 320 notes)

Download: ani feat. moco - Light up My Love
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#22 1st Cytus song, my 1st Cytus song, 1st of my favorite Cytus songs

Beginner by -kevincela-

Standard by Flower

Origin of Light by Auto Map v1.04

Hyper by me

Another by me

Last edited by popner 2013-09-10T14:21:45+00:00, edited 38 times in total.

popner

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Topic Starter

popner 2013-03-18T05:49:59+00:00

When I feel your LOVE. @ every every day.
When it's feel so good. I will KISS for you.
Please don't let go. @ every every night.
If you want me to hold on.

When I feel your LOVE. @ every every day.
When it's feel so good. I will KISS for you.
Please don't let go. @ every every night.
If you want me to hold on.

When you feel my LOVE. @ every every day.
When it's feel so cute. I will KISS for you.
Please don't let go. @ every every night.
If you want me to hold on.

Light up my LOVE!!
Light up my LOVE!!

メイクもOK！ネイルもOK！完璧（かんぺき）なコーディネート
髪（かみ）の毛（げ）OK！笑颜（えがお）もOK！どこでも飞（と）んで行（ゆ）ける
言叶（ことば）はいらないよ　君（きみ）の事（こと）が好（す）きそれだけで満（み）たされるから
もう少（すこ）し待（ま）ってて　今（いま）君（きみ）の胸（むね）に热（あつ）い思（おも）いとどけに行（ゆ）くから

When I feel your LOVE. @ every every day.
When it's feel so good. I will KISS for you.
Please don't let go. @ every every night.
If you want me to hold on.

When you feel my LOVE. @ every every day.
When it's feel so cute. I will KISS for you.
Please don't let go. @ every every night.
If you want me to hold on.

Light up my LOVE!!
Light up my LOVE!!

Zero__wind

osu! Alumni

3,314 posts

Joined August 2012

Zero__wind 2013-03-18T14:45:06+00:00

泡泡苦逼没人捧场啊
一定是自占沙发的关系【嗯嗯

Megurine Luka

2,580 posts

Joined November 2010

Megurine Luka 2013-03-18T15:39:17+00:00

火钳刘翔

Elinia

97 posts

Joined February 2012

Elinia 2013-03-23T18:10:02+00:00

[General]
the combo color should be changed a little, blue notes are too hard to be read with this background especially in the upper right.

[Hyper]
I think ar9 is better to read and jump, most of the players are able to read ar9 if they can deal with the jumps in this map.
00:15:867 - end the spinner here?
00:24:463 (2) - nc
00:33:762 (1) - remove nc
00:53:937 (3,5) - add whistle
01:01:656 (5) - add whistle
01:01:832 (7) - nc
01:02:358 (1) - remove nc
01:18:674 (3) - 01:18:849 - add whistle at the end
01:29:551 (4) - reverse the slider?
01:33:937 (4) - nc
01:34:288 (1) - remove nc
01:34:814 (4) - nc
01:40:604 (5,6) - reverse the two circles
01:43:586 (6) - overlap the circle with 01:43:235 (4) - seems flowing well
01:50:604 (5) - please try not to let the circle be so corner especially the lower right corner, it's hard to read and reach ;_;

[Another]
00:16:569 (6) - nc?
00:19:025 (3,4,5,6) - the shape isn't good both for viewing or playing... try to change it?
00:23:586 (9,10) - put them like this? http://puu.sh/2mxsw
00:45:516 (3,4,5,6) - map them more beautiful? such as http://puu.sh/2mzqy
00:54:639 (1,2,3,4) - divide them a little more?
01:00:253 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:48:849 (4) - add whistle
01:50:253 (4) - ^
01:53:060 (3) - ^

just some advice anyway~ good luck~
~~泡泡神麻婆摆图好漂亮QAQ~~

Curisu

2,241 posts

Joined January 2010

Curisu 2013-03-23T18:18:53+00:00

tag +onoken(=ani) refer to cytus live show

[General]

~~Use this pic as your bg and I will give you 100 stars~~

[Another]
00:04:551 (2) - 不知道是不是玩cytus原谱的既成印象感觉这个自创比较违和是和后面的kiai节奏对比这样放其实也可以
00:07:358 (2) 00:10:165 (2) - ^
00:16:569 (6) - imo whis+clap
00:24:463 (2) - +whis ; 00:35:692 (2) - < 后几个kiai同
00:44:814 (1) - ...没看懂这blanket 感觉00:44:288 (3,4,5,1)可以平行放置
00:46:744 (2,3,4,5,6) - 略违和感觉00:47:446 (6)要换个位
00:54:639 (1,2,3,4) - 3/4感觉还要移进来一点这里不只做遮挡加spacing变化会好些 ; 01:00:253 (1,2,3,4) - <
01:14:463 - 感觉这里空拍会比01:14:814效果好 ( 01:16:920 (4,5,6,7) )
01:18:674 (3) - +nc
01:34:814 - remove kiai mode ; 01:35:516 - +kiai mode
01:49:025 - vol-10 ; 01:54:639 - <

[Hyper]
00:27:534 (5) - delete
01:12:007 (6,7,8) - 做成两个折返slider更合hitsounds
01:34:814 - remove kiai mode ; 01:35:516 - +kiai mode
01:49:025 - vol-10 ; 01:54:639 - <

火前留名

-kevincela-

Elite Mapper

2,795 posts

Joined February 2010

-kevincela- 2013-04-09T15:30:14+00:00

\o/

osu file format v12

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 83762
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:Light up My Love
TitleUnicode:Light up My Love
Artist:ani feat. moco
ArtistUnicode:ani feat. moco
Creator:popner
Version:Beginner
Source:Cytus
Tags:
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216,364,116393,6,0,P|291:346|320:270,1,165,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,184,117270,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,96,117621,2,8,L|288:20,1,55,8|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

yanlu

749 posts

Joined November 2010

yanlu 2013-04-17T11:52:10+00:00

Hi~ popner >w</

Mod via my queue~

以下都是建議僅參考~

[Another]

00:04:551 (2) - x296/y348..?我覺得間距再大一點比較能凸顯><(像00:07:095 (1,2,3) - )
00:09:200 (4) - hmm...ctrl+j 平行3跟5?
00:09:902 (1,2,3) - 跟00:04:551 (2) - 一樣的建議
00:10:604 (1,2) - 這感覺有點遠...(2)放x175/y206? (尾巴疊00:10:428 (3) - )
00:13:235 (3,4) - ctrl+g換位置比較順;w;
00:17:446 (5,6,7,8) - 平均00:17:095 (2,3,4) - 與00:17:972 (9,10) - 的距離..放x152/y144如何?>.<
00:18:849 (2,3) - 跟00:19:200 (4,5) -差距好大...有點嚇人 OAO
00:20:955 (10) - x328/y336?
00:24:639 (3,4,5,6,1) - eh...做個星星呢!? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/708649 (我沒擺好x3x
00:27:446 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 如果是我會綠色排弧的..藍色直的>A<
00:30:779 (7) - 要不要放別的地方D: 有點遮...(像x472/y84)
00:43:937 (2,3,4,5,1) - 做大星星的跳!? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/708660 (星星控.-.
00:50:428 - 到 01:01:481 - 中間的三連我覺得可以變2個單note...當作前面那段和後面那段的過度>_<
(ex:00:51:481 (4,5,6) - 刪(5),00:52:885 (4,5,6) - 刪(5),00:57:095 (4,5,6) - 刪(5)..etc)
01:14:288 (5,6,7) - 節奏有點怪怪的..
01:57:621 (5) - x256/y184?
01:32:358 (6) - x352/y120?
01:44:113 (2,3,4,5,6) - 大五邊形>-<? (..又來欸你#

[Hyper]

01:49:200 (6) - 很遮><..做跳也許還好點... (x444/y168_
nothing to say~ perfact =A=

[Flower's Standard]

哇4.5星的normal_
00:06:393 (2) - 尾巴的點往下點..包覆(3)?
00:22:183 (2) - 上移一格
00:40:077 (3,1) - 交換NC(同00:42:183 (1,2) - )
00:43:586 (1,2) - 交換NC
00:55:867 (4) - 感覺可以刪掉-
01:13:411 - 感覺這裡應該是個note不是slider ;w;可能因為01:11:306 (1,2,3,4) - 的關西吧..
01:37:972 (3) - 左移一格
01:39:727 (3) - 右移一格
01:49:376 - 這裡有重音;w;
01:54:990 - ^

[kevin's Beginner]

00:08:499 (1) - slider's end point move to x256/y68
(and 00:09:551 (2) - move to x168/y84 if you fix that~)
01:01:832 (1) - move to x176/y148 to avg 01:00:604 (3,2) -
01:03:586 - add a note here?
01:55:867 (4,1) - make the rhythm like 01:50:253 (4) - ?
omg I love this diff ;w; so pretty~~

Mod水平不夠;w;
感覺mod不出啥-不好的話請無視~

神曲神圖神SB! 我射個星再走-

Fycho

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Fycho 2013-05-24T12:51:37+00:00

Hello,I receive your mod request from queue[PMT]
面对神麻婆咱水平有限，只能尽力而为

[kevin's Beginner]

STR建议改为1
00:17:270 - 加Note
00:41:481 (1) - 跟叠0:39:200 (1)叠好
00:42:884 (2) - 同上
00:45:692 (2,3) - 距离中线距离相等?

[Flower's Standard]

01:02:183 - 加note
01:46:393 (1) - 滑条尾加Finish
01:46:920 (2) - 滑条尾加whistle
01:48:147 (1) - 滑条尾加whistle

[Hyper]

00:23:937 (1) -与 00:23:235 (5) 尾叠一起
00:27:621 (5,6,7) - 跟00:26:920 (1)叠一起
00:30:955 (1) - Finish
00:33:762 (1) - 起始Finish
00:36:569 (1) - 同上
01:43:937 (1) - 同上，Insane也一样。或许和前两个难度一样四
句起始一三放finish，总觉得三句放finish这样奇数好别扭
01:51:656 (3,4,5) - 我觉得顺时针好点

[Another]
略鬼畜的难度，不过小CS连打好带感

00:04:288 (1,2,3) - 我感觉这种梗略不合适，后同
00:46:218 (1) - 改成下凹
01:14:639 (6) - 去掉Note
01:14:463 - 增加Note
01:14:814 - 增加Note
01:43:937 (1) - Finish

OK,Light up my LOVE!!!

S e e U

32 posts

Joined April 2013

S e e U 2013-05-28T19:27:57+00:00

[Begginer]
01:57:972 - add spiner
[Standard]
00:07:621 - add circle
00:21:656 - ^
[Genaral]
Please add more variety to the look of the slider

Verlaren

Verlaren 2013-06-01T09:31:30+00:00

Random mod.......

[General]
resolution yours background - 960x640; Change your BG on 1024x768(4:3) or 1366x768(16:9)

[kevin's beginner]
00:08:499 (1) - must be ended in x:248 y:68 (for perfect symmetry with 00:07:797(4))
00:21481 - add clap, sounds is really good
00:24:288 - ^
00:29:902 - ^
00:32:709 - ^
00:35:516 - ^
01:16:920 - ^
01:28:849 - ^
01:31:656 - ^
01:37:270 - ^
01:40:077 - ^
01:42:885 - ^

[Flower's standard]
00:37:445 (3) - unsnapped tail (slider's end)
01:24:990 (2) - ^
01:30:603 (2) - ^
01:39:024 (2) - ^
01:41:831 (2) - ^
01:42:533 (3) - ^
01:44:813 (3) - ^
01:47:445 (3) - ^
01:48:147 (1) - ^
01:50:955 (1) - ^
00:47:797 (1,2,1) - I believe that these patterns must be placed differently, more beautiful

[Another]
CS -1? IMO too small
00:48:148 (2,6) - mayb stack this?
01:11:481 (6) - maybe change this pattern on three circles? IMO sounds is really good on this timepoints - 01:11:481, 01:11:656, 01:11:832
01:40:604 (4,5) - maybe swap? IMO it's fun

[Hyper]
gj

gl

Birdy

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Joined April 2011

Birdy 2013-06-01T09:34:19+00:00

[Beginner]
00:23:235 (2) - This would work better reversed.
00:58:849 (1) - Not prefectly in center of (2)'s track.
A great Easy diff that's creative enough to not be boring. Excellent work.

[Standard]
My only big problem with this is that all 1/2 objects slightly overlap the next one/slider ends overlap own start, but that's quite tough to fix now so I'll let it slide this time.
00:23:937 (3) - Move middlepoint one square down.
00:30:077 (1) - x:12 y:152
00:36:569 (1,3) - This collision doesn't really work IMO.
01:00:253 (1,3) - Awkward overlap
01:04:639 (1) - Shape could be more round
01:09:902 (2) - x:100 y:224 to keep consistency with the previous part like this
01:35:516 (1) - x:424 y:72 for less awkward overlapping
01:54:990 (1) - Could start 1/2 earlier

[Hyper]
Besides this 01:16:569 (3,4) awkward overlap that's impossible to fix (and is honestly not too bad overlap error), it's a perfect diff.

[Another]
00:08:148 (2) - Reverse please
00:40:253 (5,6) - Change order (or use the classic jump pattern for whole star)
00:41:306 (3,4) - Change order
Aside from slight overmapping in some 1/4 parts, quite cool.

Gloria Guard

2,274 posts

Joined May 2011

Gloria Guard 2013-06-01T09:45:37+00:00

Hi popner (:3 」_)=3

From your modding queue m4m

[General]

Letterbox during breaks uncheck please

[Kevin's Begginer]

00:04:990 (4,1) hmm.. i think this slider unbalance blanket

Code

208,324,4990,2,0,P|256:348|304:324,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,256,5692,6,0,B|312:220|256:252|256:252|200:220|152:256,1,220

00:16:920 (1) This is spinner difficult for beginners and note.
i think remove note and spinner move 00:16:920
01:31:306 (1,4) hmm.. i think this note stack is better shape
01:57:270 (2,3) I suggest this pattern beat (2) note remove and (3) 1/2 slider two add repeat?

SPOILER

[Flower's Standard]

00:21:130 (2,3) oh.. i don't understand this slider pattern shape.. why you this slider not blanket?
i recommend (3) slider (2) slider head blanket is better shape
00:36:920 (2,3) hmm.. i don't understand why this pattern is overlap?..
i think this pattern (1) slider symmetry is better shape

SPOILER

01:00:604 (1,2,3) why this (3) slider overlap? i recommend this pattern

SPOILER

01:23:937 (1) Remove NC
01:53:499 (1,2) i think this two slider stack is better

Code

272,268,112534,6,0,L|336:268,1,60,0|2,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
400,140,113060,2,0,P|336:124|276:144,1,120,0|2,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
152,80,113762,6,0,P|136:144|156:204,1,120,0|2,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
272,268,114463,2,0,P|314:272|349:266,2,60,0|2|2,0:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:

[Hyper]

00:13:060 (3,4,5) i think this 3 note remove and add 1/4 slider is beat better
00:27:270 (1,5,6,7) hmm.. stack? i think this pattern note stack is better shape
00:32:709 (1,2,3,4) i suggest this pattern is blanket?

SPOILER

01:16:920 (3,4) Look a little more smoothly?

SPOILER

[Another]

00:04:551 (1,2,3) hmm.. i think really awkward this note beat... why you this note here?
you use this note beat don't hear anything.

SPOILER

00:07:357 (1,2,3) ^
00:10:253 (1,2,3) ^
01:37:972 (4) Ctrl+G?
00:40:253 (4,5,6) hmm.. I'm confused about the flow, Ctrl+G is better flow

This is nice map :3 rank gogo~!

popner

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Topic Starter

popner 2013-06-01T09:46:39+00:00

Oh, thank you very much! I will check later.

HelloSCV

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Joined April 2011

HelloSCV 2013-06-01T10:20:37+00:00

am i too late?

General

how about add tag Rayark? since Cytus was developed by Rayark gamems

960x640 is fine for BG size?? ( it isnt 4x3 or 16x9 :/ )

kevin's Beginner

00:13:586 (1,1) - isn't these too close?
00:29:551 (3) - delete whistle on slider body
01:56:393 (1) - delete NC?

Flower's Standard

Check AIMod

00:10:604 (2) - add whistle on stard and 00:10:955 (3) - delete whistle
01:23:235 (2) - how about 1/2 slider wiht 1 repeat?
01:43:937 (1) - whistle on start

Hyper

00:26:042 (2) - isn't it better if this slider have repeat arrow?
00:59:814 (6) - well i don't think this stream is really needed, try deletingthis?
01:57:797 (6) - try finish?

Another

00:30:779 (7) - need whistle?
00:40:253 (5) - you didn't add whislte on this note, but i'm not sure is this purposed :/ ( 00:41:656 (5) - some parts like here too )
00:51:306 (3,4,5,6) - well i think these rhythm should be reverse if you fit with backgound drums ( delete notes and listen carefully )
and all parts like here, like 00:52:709 (3,4,5,6) - here and 00:56:920 (3,4,5,6) - here and so on

if my mod is helpful enough and worth for m4m, please let me know :3

Good luck~

Zero__wind

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Zero__wind 2013-06-01T11:42:43+00:00

m4m 走起

Another
00:04:551 (2) - 应该往后四分拍才在拍子上位置相应调整后面类似的不提了
00:08:674 (2) - 建议删掉前面这一段干嘛填这么满和后面形成反差效果才好
00:13:499 (1) - 建议控制spinner 音量你自己test听一下我觉得有点违和
00:15:692 (1) - 删掉吧这里真的没东西而且我觉得敲5下也比敲6下舒服原地敲6下…嘛个人感觉真心挺奇怪的
00:22:183 (4) - 尾巴上的whistle not needed
00:30:779 (7) - whistle
00:35:692 (2) - remove whistle
00:38:499 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - #3 #5 #6 #8 的位置都应该有whistle 另外在#6和8的位置也可以尝试用Normal hitnormal + default soft hitwhistle的组合毕竟这段曲子后面的旋律音的比较明显
00:40:077 (4,5,6) - 我觉得改成 5 -->6 -->4的顺序flow很好
00:39:200 (1) - 尾巴上也有whistle 后面几个类似节奏的长滑条也一样
00:40:253 (5) - whistle
00:41:656 (5) - ^
00:43:060 (5) - ^ 好吧位置都一样也不说了后面的#5 都应该有whistle
00:50:428 (1) - 尾巴whistle
00:51:832 (1) - ^ 后面各种类似的不说了
00:51:481 (4) - whistle
00:52:885 (4) - ^ 后面同样节奏型的都是
00:54:990 (2,3,4) - 头上whistle ？不过这些地方如果加的话需要绿线降音量效果比较好
01:00:253 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:59:376 (3) - 或许CTRL+G
01:01:656 (5) - whistle
01:03:762 (5) - whistle
01:05:165 (2) - 头尾都whistle
01:05:867 (4) - 太远了建议这一块儿的结构一起往左边挪一些
01:13:586 (2) - whistle
01:15:165 (8) - 头上whistle
01:18:674 (3) - finish没了
01:19:902 (1) - ^
01:21:306 (1) - ^
01:26:920 (7) - whistle
01:26:920 (7) - 你6和7是用4和5复制的？但是我感觉这个7的位置太拘谨了建议放到(148,24)这一带
01:34:814 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - 这里不保持你的直线构型了？
01:35:692 (2) - remove whistle
01:36:920 (1) - 尾巴上remove whistle
01:40:077 (2) - 头上除了加clap以外也加个whistle吧
01:40:779 (5) - 这里虽然不太像有clap 不过放在这里 3 4 5 6 连起来效果还不错 ~
01:42:885 (2) - 建议扔到滑条1的起点的右上方比如(456,72)
01:46:569 (1) - 这一段开始漏了N个whistle 和00:39:200 (1) - 这一段是一样的我就不重复了对照着前一段加吧
01:47:972 (1) - 这个滑条的形状或许考虑右上往左下弯？当然不是指弧度很大的弯就和现在弧度差不多就行我这么说是因为和01:50:253 (4,5,6,1) - 这种地方对比的话显得没那么舒服
01:54:463 (3) - 这个note的位置是根据前面的1和2定的么？不是的话建议放在更靠一些的地方比如(268,368)

Hyper
我非常喜欢这个diff 真心不想多说什么
00:39:200 (1) - 和01:46:569 (1) - 这两段把那些whistle按上面说的补一补就好了
00:50:428 (1) - 尾巴whistle
00:56:042 (1) - ^
00:51:306 (3) - 折返处whsitle
00:52:709 (3) - ^
00:51:832 (1) - 尾巴whistle
00:54:288 (6) - 头上whistle
重复的节奏型音效应该比较好补才对
01:57:797 (6) - finish漏了

Standard
00:19:727 (1) - 头上whistle
00:22:534 (1) - ^ 后面同样位置的不说了
00:17:621 (2) - 折返处whistle
00:21:130 (3) - 头上whistle
00:23:937 (3) - ^
00:25:341 (1) - 头上whistle
00:29:200 (3) - 折返处whsitle
00:32:358 (3) - whistle
00:47:095 (2) - 折返处用SC1的whistle？还是说有意这样的
01:04:639 (1) - 0.0 有点厉害
01:23:235 (2) - 头上需要clap，哦我是指normal hitnormal
01:34:463 (5) - 折返锚点拉到(412,112) ？
01:46:393 (1) - 尾巴finish没了
01:46:920 (2) - 和 01:48:147 (1) - 尾巴不whistle ？
01:46:393 (1) - 这一段开始有可能被吐槽NC spam 我只是这样提个醒我是无所谓啦
第二段kiai开始之后的whistle意见同前一段

Beginner
00:16:920 (1) - this is too far from the center, as this is the easiest diff with 171 BPM, just simply stack at center would be better as I suppose
00:29:551 (3) - the whistle on body is added on purpose ?
didn't found other things to say
nice blanckets

That's all
Good luck

Niko-nyan

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Niko-nyan 2013-06-06T07:33:04+00:00

hi
seems the artist must be Ani not ani
no kd

popner

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Topic Starter

popner 2013-06-07T16:41:08+00:00

It is the background in Cytus.

And wiki:

Niko-nyan

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Joined June 2011

Niko-nyan 2013-06-14T00:43:56+00:00

maybe you can ask Niva about it

i search it from Cytus and here it is

click here

Ani feat. Moco

Niva

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Niva 2013-06-14T06:49:33+00:00

Well, from my findings - the naming itself is inconsistent through various official releases ._.

-> The official YouTube song preview link used the title 'Light up my LOVE' - I don't see this variation used often though:

SPOILER

-> vgmdb listed this song's artist as 'Ani' in the album Cytus-Prologue- (http://vgmdb.net/album/32987) - here's the screenshot from the album's metadata btw:

SPOILER

-> In Selfish Gene the artist is written as 'Ani'

SPOILER

-> In this song (and Biotonic as well) it's written as 'ani'

SPOILER

-> In Ververg it's written as 'ANI'

SPOILER

Well, in my Ververg map I used the format as the Cytus-Prologue- (Ani - Ververg (feat.B)) instead because I got the song file from the album... Also the most common naming I've seen (on YouTube etc) is 'Ani' xD

(I think the best solution for this is to refer from where the .mp3 file is taken, for example if it's from the album I'd use Ani - Light Up My Love!! (feat. Moco)) - hope this helps~

tsuka

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tsuka 2013-06-17T05:28:12+00:00

mark mark

ts8zs

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ts8zs 2013-06-17T07:09:03+00:00

轻微强迫症患者
BEGIN
00:58:323 (4) - 放在中间的梗不用了么？
01:27:797 (3) - 没太对准……尾部60,272后面的貌似到 01:30:253 (1) - 就能掰回来所以对准比较好
01:57:621 (3) - 也是没对准
STAND
好多尾部unsnap……改过SV？
00:13:060 (5) - 中间的点放在140,172
00:21:130 (3) - 不是很好看……尝试把第二个点放在180,164 ?
01:04:639 (1) - Doubt！如果是Normal这么干没问题么？
01:11:306 (1) - 尾部372,268
ANOTH
感觉CS-1之后连我都能FC……pretty well www
LIGHT
00:11:306 (1) - 我认为移到 00:10:604 (2) - 的头部才是正确姿势
HYPER
00:36:042 (5,6) - 换一下
01:36:217 (3,4) - 认为可以换一下
01:49:025 (5) - +Whistle Additions:Normal
01:49:200 (6) - +Finish
01:52:183 (1) - Additions:Normal
01:54:639 (5) - +Whistle Additions:Normal
01:54:814 (6) - +Finish
01:54:990 (1) - +Whistle Additions:Normal
01:57:797 (6) - +Finish
01:57:797 (6) - +All Additions:Normal
其实我觉得用绿线更好
有做Extra的冲动，你信么=w=
顺便求Auto Map v1.04下载 Ts8zs@qq.com 楼主一生平安

tsuka

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tsuka 2013-07-02T02:48:18+00:00

卡酱太菜了做不出啊 star一发 (逃

popner

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popner 2013-07-03T05:46:57+00:00

dont worry

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2013-07-05T16:52:24+00:00

popner wrote:
dont worry

From dkun's queue.

Insane:
00:04:288 (1,2) - Like where is this in the music
00:07:095 (1,2,3) - ^
00:09:902 (1,2,3) - ^
00:24:814 (4) - If (5) is going away from the center of the pattern, it might be a good idea to have (4) do that too.
00:39:727 (2,3,4,5,6) - Idunno, make this a regular star-pattern jump rather than what it is now?
00:51:481 (4,5,6) - Weird overlap this creates
00:52:885 (4,5,6) - ^
01:57:270 (3,4) - Why is this spacing so big while (5) and (6) are relatively close to (4)?

Hard that's listed higher than the insane diff:
Tick Rate 2?
00:27:621 (5,6,7) - Nazi, but stack this on (1)
01:57:797 (6) - Especially since it's the end of the song and all, it'd be nicer to have this make a triangle pattern with (4) and (5) rather than having slightly decreased spacing.

Light hard?:
Tick Rate 2?
01:23:937 (4) - The end of this slider sounds really awkward. Consider changing this to just a note?

Normal:
For this beginning section, I'd like it if you kept consistent whistle hitsounds. Weather they're on 2 and 4 to emulate drums if they existed, or if they're on 1 and 3 to match piano, it doesn't matter. Right now they're very inconsistent.
00:13:586 (1) - It might be advisable to have more room in between this and the next note
00:19:376 (3) - Would it be possible to have this not overlap?
00:22:183 (2) - ^
01:02:534 - Consider adding hitsounds similar to the other diffs in this diff.

Easy:
AR +1?
I love it. The creativity is there, which is something missing from a lot of easies :3.

Mya.

popner

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popner 2013-07-09T08:00:58+00:00

Ok, checked all the mods.

Another: remove the additional 1/3 beats. Changed the rhythm and placement at 00:51:306 and similar parts. Added some missing whistles.

Thanks again for all of you!

I'm still not sure whether CS4 or CS5 is better for Another diff.

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Nymph 2013-09-10T13:35:28+00:00

[Light Hyper]
00:04:990 (2) - 唯一一个多次回转直接100了

[Flower's Standard]
01:46:920 (2) - miss the whistle here.

EDIT:Bubbled.

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popner 2013-09-10T13:53:24+00:00