Nomizu Iori - SAVE MY HEART · forum

hoLysoup

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hoLysoup 2013-05-14T05:54:32+00:00

Rotte wrote:
Hi~ From m4m queue.
hihi Rotte!
[General]

Tick 1 is a good choice.

[Normal]
fixed

Useless Green line
00:18:623 - fixed
00:42:832 - fixed

Rhythm

None~

Sound Effect
Fine.

[Hard]

Useless Green line
00:18:623 - fixed
01:31:724 - fixed

Rhythm

00:07:231 (2) - ncfixed
01:09:319 (7) - Using a 1/1 slider in this place can fit this music.fixed

Sound Effect

00:12:357 - Add a clap in the slider end?fixed

[Insane]

Useless Green line
00:18:623 - fixed
00:42:832 - fixed
01:31:724 - fixed

Rhythm

01:58:307 (1) - I recommend that this circle should be moved to 01:58:117 - ,it can fit this music.fixed
recommend01:57:737 (7,8) - 7 & 8 use a jump like this,and 01:58:307 - better block a beat

Sound Effect

00:20:712 (8) - This slider start can add s2-clap?And like this rhythm can add this sound effect.Like 01:33:623 (6) maybe not this one

Nice mapset!
:3
謝謝你啦!! !

Zero__wind

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Zero__wind 2013-05-15T05:55:12+00:00

Hi m4m here

Insane
00:10:838 (1) - 对称
00:11:218 - 00:11:598 - 00:11:977 - 这些地方为什么没whistle
00:17:484 - 或许给stream加上一些default whistle
00:54:034 - ^ 后面还有类似的
00:30:585 (6) - clap感觉有点怪
00:41:598 (8) - 确定whistle在折返处而不是在end？
01:43:496 (6) - whistle
02:11:218 (2) - 或许前后等距
02:27:547 (2,4) - 或许避免overlap好看些
03:24:889 (2,3) - 同样是遮挡我觉得这样会好很多吧现在的这个位置太刻意而为之了藏得不舒服

Hard
00:41:028 (3) - 倾向于用clap而不是whistle
00:41:788 (5) - 建议去掉尾巴上的clap 后面那2个clap听起来就不错了 3个感觉多了
00:43:117 - 这里音乐没有变弱啊怎么突然开始什么音效都没了？有的地方明明应该加响指的 00:43:686 - 00:47:294 - 其他的音效也应该配套加一些吧
00:47:864 (5) - 头尾都default whistle 00:48:623 (6) - 还有这个也加
01:22:515 - 80%音量莫名这会导致这个01:30:015 (1) - spinner最开始的时候音量很大感觉应该改掉
02:35:142 - 这里怎么这么多绿线
03:34:383 (4,5,6) - 感觉clap有点多建议删减

Normal
00:25:458 (2) - 头上clap
00:31:534 (2) - ^
00:34:572 (2) - 类似的地方……
02:35:142 - 依然是绿线……诶那个估计Insane里也有刚才没看出来

就这些吧
good luck

cRyo[iceeicee]

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cRyo[iceeicee] 2013-05-16T06:22:31+00:00

Iori kawaiiiiii

hoLysoup

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hoLysoup 2013-05-16T06:26:26+00:00

Mythol wrote:
nomizu iori <3

cRyo[iceeicee] wrote:
Iori kawaiiiiii

Thank you for star moecRyo :>!

nomizu iori is so cute in this song.. <3
Nomizu Iori + Meis Clauson =

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- Miomio Chii -

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- Miomio Chii - 2013-05-16T10:37:32+00:00

Hi, MmC's mod. From PM.
-------------------------------------------------
-General-
✔ Okay.
-------------------------------------------------
-Normal-

00:07:610 (2,3) - 對齊1(slider)的尾端 ? y 280

00:20:142 (2,2) - 對齊2(slider)的尾端 ? y 220

00:22:421 (2,3,1) - 這樣擺 ?

SPOILER

自帶xy座標 (?)

00:22:421 (1) - 起點 x 260 y 364

01:22:515 - 這邊這條綠線沒什麼用, 可以砍掉.

03:42:167 - 03:43:692 - 聽起來似乎這兩個地方才算完全結束, 也許可以改換為這兩個時間點作end.

-finish-
-------------------------------------------------
-Hard-

03:29:066 (6,7,8,1) -slider尾端與7,8,1的曲線可以更圓滑一些.

00:16:914 (4) - 這個紅點是..?

SPOILER

01:56:408 (3) - 同上
02:00:205 (2,4) - 同上
00:12:167 (7) - 同上
00:12:547 (1,2) - 同上

01:22:515 - 這邊這條綠線沒什麼用, 可以砍掉.

01:35:902 (4) - 這個似乎沒放到clap

-finish-
-------------------------------------------------
-Insane-

01:22:515 - 這邊這條綠線沒什麼用, 可以砍掉.

01:49:762 (1,2,3,4) - 這樣擺 ?

SPOILER

自帶xy座標 (?)

01:49:762 (2) - x 140 y 224
01:50:332 (3) - x 68 y 320
01:50:522 (4) - x 168 y 316

02:22:610 (4,5,6) - 這樣擺 ?

SPOILER

自帶xy座標 (?)

02:22:610 (4,5,6) - x 196 y 336

02:23:180 (1,2,3,4) - 這樣擺 ?

SPOILER

自帶xy座標 (?)

02:23:370 (2) - x 400 y 120

-finish-
-------------------------------------------------
Mod就到此結束
good song!

(現在沒星改天補射一顆>.<)

祝你好運 ♥

hoLysoup

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hoLysoup 2013-05-16T11:12:36+00:00

- Miomio Chii -

- Miomio Chii - wrote:
Hi, MmC's mod. From PM.
hihi!
哇! 好快啊!
-Normal-

00:07:610 (2,3) - 對齊1(slider)的尾端 ? y 280 ok

00:20:142 (2,2) - 對齊2(slider)的尾端 ? y 220 ok

00:22:421 (2,3,1) - 這樣擺 ? ok

01:22:515 - 這邊這條綠線沒什麼用, 可以砍掉. ok

03:42:167 - 03:43:692 - 聽起來似乎這兩個地方才算完全結束, 也許可以改換為這兩個時間點作end. 喔這我是故意的因為我不想要spinner拉得太長

-finish-
-------------------------------------------------
-Hard-

03:29:066 (6,7,8,1) -slider尾端與7,8,1的曲線可以更圓滑一些. ok

00:16:914 (4) - 這個紅點是..? 恩有時候做slider我會用紅點因為比較直一點
01:56:408 (3) - 同上
02:00:205 (2,4) - 同上
00:12:167 (7) - 同上
00:12:547 (1,2) - 同上

01:22:515 - 這邊這條綠線沒什麼用, 可以砍掉. ok

01:35:902 (4) - 這個似乎沒放到clapfixed

-finish-
-------------------------------------------------
-Insane-

01:22:515 - 這邊這條綠線沒什麼用, 可以砍掉.ok

01:49:762 (1,2,3,4) - 這樣擺 ?ok

02:22:610 (4,5,6) - 這樣擺 ? ok

02:23:180 (1,2,3,4) - 這樣擺 ? 這裡我重新擺了一下

-finish-
-------------------------------------------------
Mod就到此結束
good song! (現在沒星改天補射一顆>.<)
祝你好運 ♥

哇真好! 不過沒事的留著自己用吧! 不用刻意射星的

這麼快幫我mod.. 比我M4M的一些還不了債的還要快真是神啊!
謝謝~!!

_Azusa_

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_Azusa_ 2013-05-17T21:40:29+00:00

You asked for m4m in my queue, but i really can't find anything...flow, hitsounds and pattern are great, i love mapping styles like yours <3

Good Luck! Favourited! ~~because i already spend my last kd ;-----;~~

eldnl

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eldnl 2013-05-17T23:29:06+00:00

You have a perfect map here, there's nothing technically wrong and I really enjoyed every single difficulty

You got a ticket for a free mod from me when you want ;D

xChippy

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xChippy 2013-05-18T08:20:53+00:00

Yaah~ Can't find anything wrong :/ If you want you can get a ticket :3
Star~~ Gogo :3

Azails

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Azails 2013-05-19T11:55:55+00:00

best map♥

Quilt

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Quilt 2013-05-22T03:44:14+00:00

MoEsoup ^-^/

NoHitter

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NoHitter 2013-05-23T11:27:23+00:00

/me claps. Great map.

[General]
- Add rekiai on the choruses at 01:07:231, 02:20:142, and 03:11:788?
- 02:57:927 () - Add a break here on all diffs then move the ending part of the break to 02:58:117. Like this.

[Insane]
- 01:43:307 (5,6,1) - Pretty large spacing here. The shift of spacing may also be confusing given the spacing on combos like 01:41:218 (2,3,4) is similar. Tone down your spacing like what you did on 03:10:648 (2,3,4).

That's all. Contact me afterwards.

hoLysoup

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hoLysoup 2013-05-23T13:00:08+00:00

NoHitter wrote:
/me claps. Great map.
wow thank you~!
[General]
- Add rekiai on the choruses at 01:07:231, 02:20:142, and 03:11:788? ok
- 02:57:927 () - Add a break here on all diffs then move the ending part of the break to 02:58:117. Like this. actually for this part, I kinda like the suspension created from having no break here. It makes players think when the next beat is going to hit and it conveys the echo of her voice better than having a break I think

[Insane]
- 01:43:307 (5,6,1) - Pretty large spacing here. The shift of spacing may also be confusing given the spacing on combos like 01:41:218 (2,3,4) is similar. Tone down your spacing like what you did on 03:10:648 (2,3,4). ok fixed

That's all. Contact me afterwards.thanks!!

@azu-nyan14, eldnl, xChippy:
thanks for starring !!

!

@Azathozkula:
Very nice!
I can't even FC this
haha

@SakiK!
arigatou!!!

:D

@Quilt:
萌Quilt! :>

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NoHitter

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NoHitter 2013-05-23T13:05:58+00:00

Bubbled!

Kawayi Rika

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Kawayi Rika 2013-05-23T17:34:33+00:00

Hi ~ hoLysoup ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions

[Insane]

01:31:534 - Add finish,sound much better.
02:34:952 - You are forgot add clap to here.

[Hard]

01:02:673 (2) - Unsnapped slider.
01:31:534 - Add finish,sound much better.

[Normal]

02:44:446 - Remove clap,same as other diff.

Always nice map ~ but sorry i have popped ~ because of unsnapped ~

I'll back later ~

hoLysoup

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hoLysoup 2013-05-23T19:11:55+00:00

Rika all fixed desu :>!
<3

NoHitter

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NoHitter 2013-05-23T19:55:45+00:00

Odd. I checked for the unsnapped sliders with AIBat but it didn't show up.
Oh well, good luck either way!

LunarSakuya

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LunarSakuya 2013-05-23T21:35:12+00:00

hi ^^

General
cool

Normal
01:33:053 (3) - the clap of the tail seems a bit loud? You had the previous part 00:20:142 (2) - set to 60% volume, while here is set to 80%. If this isn't intentional, make sure the volumes are consistent in each section. (same for other diffs if you fix)
02:32:484 (1) - Whistle sounds nice here
02:43:876 (4) - try Drum Finish on the tail =v=
03:28:496 (3) - Finish on tail, like 00:12:547 (1) - ?

Hard
01:03:433 (4) - NC, like 01:15:585 (1) -
02:44:066 (5) - same as Normal, i thought Drum finish sounded kinda nice
03:30:015 (1) - same as Normal, Finish on head maybe

Insane
00:52:041 (1) - Finish sounds nice imo
02:04:952 (1) - ^
02:27:547 (2,4) - pretty sure you can avoid the unnecessary touch here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/772147 or something
02:44:446 (1) - Drum finish

great lovely map <3
call me back

hoLysoup

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hoLysoup 2013-05-23T22:05:36+00:00

LunarSakuya~
hihi~! so fast omg
all fixed desu :>

LunarSakuya

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LunarSakuya 2013-05-24T00:28:53+00:00

Good luck!!

reb

Kawayi Rika

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Kawayi Rika 2013-05-24T01:42:12+00:00

OK ~ Much better now ~

Here you go <3

NewRulerNA

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NewRulerNA 2013-05-24T01:59:48+00:00

gratz~ :3

Umi

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Umi 2013-05-24T02:00:49+00:00

wow gratz ! it was fast :3

Oyatsu

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Oyatsu 2013-05-24T02:08:38+00:00

Congratz!~~ Time to mod is too short!! Great!!

LunarSakuya

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LunarSakuya 2013-05-24T02:41:43+00:00

<3

Quilt

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Quilt 2013-05-24T03:10:23+00:00

ome萌soup ^-^

Laurier

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Laurier 2013-05-24T03:25:35+00:00

おめ～！

wring

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wring 2013-05-24T04:11:53+00:00

yey <3

meiikyuu

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meiikyuu 2013-05-24T04:33:47+00:00

grats ~~

Mythol

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Mythol 2013-05-24T04:40:48+00:00

so fast o:

hoLysoup

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hoLysoup 2013-05-24T06:31:34+00:00

LunarSakuya:
<3 thanks so much for fast mod!!

Rika:
/me eats
<3

NewRulerNA:
thank you so much!!

-Umi-:
thanks!!

Oyatsu:
thanks!!

Quilt:
arigatou~!!

Laurier:
sankyuu!!

wringu!:
arigatou arigatou!!

美酒:
謝謝!

MythoL:
:>! capitaL L!

y u c a

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y u c a 2013-05-24T06:37:14+00:00

ooo omesoup w

cRyo[iceeicee]

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