BURTON - Shinonomegiku · forum

Lally

Joined December 2011

Lally 2013-04-15T23:44:33+00:00

- t e n n y a - wrote:
Tari wrote:
[General]

You should add t_e_n_n_y_a and tennya to tags I don't think people will be able to search your names with that kind of lettering, doing this will make it easier and more searchable. no need to wrote my own username on my own map right? =v= let's see other people thinks~

since is the mapper name is not neded to be in tags imo

00:28:891 (3) - Add a whistle to the start? goes well with the harp sound o3o it don't follow my hitsound pattern
00:35:891 (2) - This part has so many silent and quiet beats , I think notes on red ticks feel unfitting for such parts , You should just remove it and add more complex rhythms or more beats on more strong points of the music i prefer to keep it
00:49:558 (1,2) - Please find a more fitting way to do this , the two notes don't exactly follow the beats in the song as initially intended , yet those two notes can be "isolated" by making this whole thing a separate combo altogether. i prefer to use s simple way as adding circles here
00:51:558 (3) - Symmetry patterns and patterns changes in generally should be a different combo , thus adding a new combo here would be a good idea (New symmetry pattern from previous) oh I almost forget , its similar to combo's like these 01:02:891 (1) - i don't think a new combo is missing there i follow a bit the music change with my combos and there i think is not neded to add one.
01:11:558 (2) - Since this is a strong instrumental point , adding a whistle to the end of the slider is best , the following hitsounds changes should be only applied if you apply this one >.< i don't like it so much here
01:13:558 (4) - Same as above, to the end of slider-^
01:15:558 (2) - ^ -^
01:18:225 (1) - ^ you can possible switch back and forth from these.-^
01:26:225 (1) - I'd rather you just reverse this to make the rhythm more simply , this is the easiest diff in the mapset , so doing so will not hurt the map and spread much :< i don't think is neded here o.o
01:39:891 - Yeah , note feels really good here , or did you want a break from adding notes to red ticks because it seems to fit pretty well with the flow if you add the note here i wanna keep it simpler here
01:50:558 - Ahhh , only do this if you change the above suggestion. same about here
02:02:891 (1) - Yet when there places you can actually put notes in the red ticks and they fit really good with the beats you don't do so :< i prefer to have simpler rhythm here don't wanna mahe it harder
02:17:558 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Add at least one whistle in this part i don't think they fit in this part >.<

sorry for refusing everything but the hitsound change imo are not neded and in some part i don't wanna make rhythm harder >u<

Gloria Guard

2,273 posts

Joined May 2011

Gloria Guard 2013-04-16T05:51:04+00:00

Hi - t e n n y a - (:3 」_)=3

From In-game PM

Sorry.. i'm late modding this map here.. ._.

[General]

Fine

[Lally's Normal]

00:32:225 (2,3,4) hmm.. i think this beat awkward... your change this beat? -> http://puu.sh/2B2NA
01:13:558 (3,4) hmm.. this is pattern shape blanket here
01:20:225 (3,4) My personal opinion, This beat in front of 01:18:225 (1,2) to be the same as that about?. http://puu.sh/2B2St
I think it should be the same.
01:33:225 (3) I think moving this slider 01:33:891 Sound can be heard here and here move the tempo can be better ..
01:53:891 add note? In this section, you will hear a sound.
02:02:891 (1) hmm.. Are willing to change your beats differently? I think it is awkward beat.
-> http://puu.sh/2B322 change?
02:19:891 (3) remove 1/2 slider.. this beat really awkward... and 02:20:225 add note
02:25:225 (1) This is spin move 02:25:058 here

[10nya]

00:22:992 (1,2,3) hmm... 2 note move x:256 y:64 and this pattern change please -> http://puu.sh/2B387
00:26:891 (1,2,3) I think this pattern blanket please -> http://puu.sh/2B39L
00:39:891 (2,3,4,5,6) hmm... i think this pattern really awkward... really change please -> http://puu.sh/2B3cr
01:30:558 (3,4,5,6) hmm.. I think this is pattern shape here -> http://puu.sh/2B3ig < this recommend
01:55:891 (4,1,2) This change to the smooth flow -> http://puu.sh/2B3kN

Really nice song ;w;
i'm really like song !! GO GO Rank !!!

10nya

2,746 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

10nya 2013-04-16T09:11:59+00:00

Gloria Guard wrote:
Hi - t e n n y a - (:3 」_)=3

From In-game PM

Sorry.. i'm late modding this map here.. ._.

not a big problem~ thanks for modding <3

[General]

Fine

[10nya]

00:22:992 (1,2,3) hmm... 2 note move x:256 y:64 and this pattern change please -> http://puu.sh/2B387 ok
00:26:891 (1,2,3) I think this pattern blanket please -> http://puu.sh/2B39L stacked
00:39:891 (2,3,4,5,6) hmm... i think this pattern really awkward... really change please -> http://puu.sh/2B3cr i heard sound at 00:40:558 so no change >_<
01:30:558 (3,4,5,6) hmm.. I think this is pattern shape here -> http://puu.sh/2B3ig < this recommend yeah i feel awkward here too, changed
01:55:891 (4,1,2) This change to the smooth flow -> http://puu.sh/2B3kN

Really nice song ;w;
i'm really like song !! GO GO Rank !!!

thanks for the mod <3

Lally

3,177 posts

Joined December 2011

Lally 2013-04-16T14:30:43+00:00

Gloria Guard wrote:
[Lally's Normal]

00:32:225 (2,3,4) hmm.. i think this beat awkward... your change this beat? -> http://puu.sh/2B2NA i follow the piano in this part so no changes here
01:13:558 (3,4) hmm.. this is pattern shape blanket here it was not supposed to be a blanket there but if you can see is a blanket between 01:13:558 (2,4) -
01:20:225 (3,4) My personal opinion, This beat in front of 01:18:225 (1,2) to be the same as that about?. http://puu.sh/2B2St
I think it should be the same.from 01:18:225 (1) - i follow the fioline so if you listen good you will that at every violin change i start a slider
01:33:225 (3) I think moving this slider 01:33:891 Sound can be heard here and here move the tempo can be better .. i agree here
01:53:891 add note? In this section, you will hear a sound. yap i can hear thet there is bass sound but atm unsure of adding or not because it will make the patten more harder :/
02:02:891 (1) hmm.. Are willing to change your beats differently? I think it is awkward beat.
-> http://puu.sh/2B322 change? changed a bit here
02:19:891 (3) remove 1/2 slider.. this beat really awkward... and 02:20:225 add note i prefer to having a slider here
02:25:225 (1) This is spin move 02:25:058 here no since is a easier diff and it will be to difficulto for beginners to catch all the spinn good after the circle, even if the spinner is long

Ty for modding

le fix :3

osu file format v12

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 86225
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Shinonomegiku
TitleUnicode:東雲菊
Artist:BURTON
ArtistUnicode:BURTON
Creator:- t e n n y a -
Version:Lally
Source:Mashiro-iro Symphony -Love is pure white-
Tags:palette Lally original soundtrack ost visual novel eroge ましろ色シンフォニー mashifoni
BeatmapID:226861
BeatmapSetID:79207

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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10nya

2,746 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

10nya 2013-04-17T06:33:50+00:00

updated, also added clap on 01:33:558 at lally onechan's diff xD sorry for the change but i think you forgot clap there owo;

Konei

2,959 posts

Joined March 2012

Konei 2013-04-26T20:04:09+00:00

Hey hey.

[General]

I don't understand the purpose of the KIAI on 01:47:558 - . In my opinion, a KIAI flash is enough to emphasize the soft music.

[Lally]

00:58:224 (1) - Flows a bit unclean and could be working better as a neat blanket for 3, so basically draw this more to the right.
01:07:558 (3) - Missing a whistle on the end to keep consistency.
01:08:891 (4) - Looks strange, moving the wave point a bit back and curving it more would give a more pleasing look.
01:13:558 (4) - Try to make this blanketing 3, in the moment this looks a bit random.
01:11:558 (2) - Missing a whistle on the end, since this is a downbeat.
01:15:558 (2) - Same as above here.
01:18:225 (1) - And on the start here.
01:20:225 (3) - And here.
Well, I quite don't understand why your whistle pattern dissapears all of the sudden, in the earlier part you had them on the downbeats and now there is nothing, which doesn't only make it weird but sounding empty. Look at your whistle pattern and consider to add them on the downbeats accordingly.
01:57:891 (4) - Adding a clap will follow the drums, you should add it.
02:08:225 (1) - Removing NC here and adding it on 2 instead will look much more pleasing, since the heavy beat start there.
02:23:558 (2) - Looks very random while you could actually just move it a bit up to make it a somewhat blanket.
SPOILER

[10nya]

00:27:558 (3) - Really not exactlly stacked, fix it please my disabling grid snap.
00:28:891 (6) - You could change this to a 1/8 kick Slider with 2 repeats to follow the piano better.
00:29:391 (7) - This note can be removed, since it doesnt support anything, so if you do a kick Slider, you'll have a big enough break.
01:00:892 (5) - Consider to add a whistle on the start as you did on 2, sounds nice and would be more consistent.
02:06:891 (2) - Could you make a neater blanket to 4 with this?
02:15:558 (3) - Flows a bit dull, try to move it more up so the cursor makes a zic zac movement, if you see what I mean.
02:24:891 (5) - Hmm, firstly an NC to emphasize the end and then I'd like this jump to be smoother like upgoing, look below to see an example.
SPOILER

Calm calm map.

Good work, although I think flow on Lally's diff can be improved, also the end of her diff sounds empty due to that whistle thingy.

Well done, good luck c:

10nya

2,746 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

10nya 2013-04-27T05:04:54+00:00

Konei wrote:
Hey hey. thanks for accepting Konei! ^q^

[General]

I don't understand the purpose of the KIAI on 01:47:558 - . In my opinion, a KIAI flash is enough to emphasize the soft music.
it's ok I suppose, the music changed there >_< I'll see other opinions about kiai part here
[10nya]

00:27:558 (3) - Really not exactlly stacked, fix it please my disabling grid snap.
ok
00:28:891 (6) - You could change this to a 1/8 kick Slider with 2 repeats to follow the piano better.
no, I want to keep this part calm and it fit the piano sound I suppose o.o
00:29:391 (7) - This note can be removed, since it doesnt support anything, so if you do a kick Slider, you'll have a big enough break.
the music continue here, I suppose I heard bass at here
01:00:892 (5) - Consider to add a whistle on the start as you did on 2, sounds nice and would be more consistent.
the pitch doesn't high at here so I don't add whistle here. while pitch at 2's is more high so I used whistle there :3
02:06:891 (2) - Could you make a neater blanket to 4 with this?
ah ok~
02:15:558 (3) - Flows a bit dull, try to move it more up so the cursor makes a zic zac movement, if you see what I mean.
hmm somehow changed
02:24:891 (5) - Hmm, firstly an NC to emphasize the end and then I'd like this jump to be smoother like upgoing, look below to see an example.
SPOILER

ok!

Calm calm map.

Good work, although I think flow on Lally's diff can be improved, also the end of her diff sounds empty due to that whistle thingy.

Well done, good luck c:

thanks for modding :3

Lally

3,177 posts

Joined December 2011

Lally 2013-04-30T15:47:50+00:00

Konei wrote:
[Lally]

00:58:224 (1) - Flows a bit unclean and could be working better as a neat blanket for 3, so basically draw this more to the right. what is so wrong with this blanket http://puu.sh/2K7kX.jpg ? ò.ò
01:07:558 (3) - Missing a whistle on the end to keep consistency. yap true fixed
01:08:891 (4) - Looks strange, moving the wave point a bit back and curving it more would give a more pleasing look. yo ok
01:13:558 (4) - Try to make this blanketing 3, in the moment this looks a bit random. how i explained in other mods tha mentioned it 01:11:558 (2,4)makes a blanket not (2,3) :V
01:11:558 (2) - Missing a whistle on the end, since this is a downbeat. not here, from here i start a another hitsund pattern because they sound so bad here the reason why i did this is because music start to change and whistle seems a bit wrongplaced imo
01:15:558 (2) - Same as above here.
01:18:225 (1) - And on the start here.
01:20:225 (3) - And here.
Well, I quite don't understand why your whistle pattern dissapears all of the sudden, in the earlier part you had them on the downbeats and now there is nothing, which doesn't only make it weird but sounding empty. Look at your whistle pattern and consider to add them on the downbeats accordingly. already explainded look up ^ o3o
01:57:891 (4) - Adding a clap will follow the drums, you should add it. i like it added
02:08:225 (1) - Removing NC here and adding it on 2 instead will look much more pleasing, since the heavy beat start there. i prefer to keep it how it is
02:23:558 (2) - Looks very random while you could actually just move it a bit up to make it a somewhat blanket. fixed
SPOILER

ty for modding

fixed ver

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10nya

2,746 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

10nya 2013-05-01T07:40:16+00:00

updated!

Setsurei

1,149 posts

Joined May 2012

Setsurei 2013-05-11T10:32:28+00:00

Hi

just a few suggestions - you may not change them
for the flow of sliders, because timing & circle placements are flawless!
I can't find anything wrong there. nice

[Lally]

00:55:558 (2) - center point, move up 2 squares (the slider is too curve - idk what should I name this)
01:26:225 (1) - center point, move down 1-2 squares (depends which style you prefer)
01:52:891 (2) - tail point, move up 3 squares
02:03:558 (2) - tail point, move down 3 squares

[10nya]
00:22:225 (1) - a bit curve? if you change this, you might need to move the slider a bit to the right (so it will snap distance with this 00:23:225 (2) -)
00:51:558 (3) - center point, curve a bit too (center point move up, and a bit to the left)

SPOILER

01:42:225 (3) - center point, move up 3 squares
01:44:891 (1) - center point, move down 2 squares, left 3 squares
01:48:891 (3) - center point, move down 3 squares
01:51:225 (2) - tail point, move left 2 squares
01:51:891 (3) - head point, move down 2 squares
02:04:558 (3) - tail point, move right 1-2 squares
02:06:891 (2) - tail point, move up 2 squares

request M4M for this or this map,
you may choose
thank you

Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

3,789 posts

Joined December 2011

Hinsvar 2013-05-12T09:20:51+00:00

Umm, mod here.

>General

Actually, according to the song, the BPM is 45... I'm still not too sure about that though.

>Lally

...TBH, I'm confused about how you place NCs at the beginning. Make them consistent?
Not sure if only using the mapper's name on a diff is okay, especially since this is the easier diff. Just use "Lally's Normal", I guess?
00:22:225 - Add a whistle here to complement the finish? Whistle + finish follows the instrument more accurately here, IMO.

>10nya

I'd prefer to simply use Hard here and will only use my name (or anything related to the song) for an Insane/Extra difficulty, but since this is the harder diff on this 2-diff mapset, I'll let it pass.
00:22:225 - Same as Lally's diff: Add a whistle here?
00:28:225 - Remove the whistle here and add one at 00:28:558 to emphasize the instrument there? Feels better that way.

...Yeah, sorry for this short mod. I'm more on the fixing department and not improvement, and I don't find anything big enough here, so that's it I think

Good luck on the way

Last edited by Hinsvar 2013-05-13T13:12:58+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Lally

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Joined December 2011

Lally 2013-05-13T06:42:29+00:00

Setsurei wrote:
[Lally]

00:55:558 (2) - center point, move up 2 squares (the slider is too curve - idk what should I name this) moved just one
01:26:225 (1) - center point, move down 1-2 squares (depends which style you prefer) is not really neded here it will ruin the spacing
01:52:891 (2) - tail point, move up 3 squaressame^
02:03:558 (2) - tail point, move down 3 squares it will ruin the blanket :O

Hinsvar wrote:
Umm, mod here.

>Lally
...TBH, I'm confused about how you place NCs at the beginning. Make them consistent? actualy i don't see any problems withthey o3o if you can be more specific maybe
Not sure if only using the mapper's name on a diff is okay, especially since this is the easier diff. Just use "Lally's Normal", I guess?About this,the actual diffs names is not really a problem if you look at : http://osu.ppy.sh/s/80617 this mapset (ranked) we used just our names as diff same about : http://osu.ppy.sh/s/74624 (ranked) and don't remember where else atm. This is totaly not a problem so we can keep it like it is now :V
00:22:225 - Add a whistle here to complement the finish? Whistle + finish follows the instrument more accurately here, IMO. uh o3o ok approved

my fixes o3o

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Tags:palette Lally original soundtrack ost visual novel eroge ましろ色シンフォニー mashifoni
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BeatmapSetID:79207

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BGi.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
225,666.666666666667,3,2,1,50,1,0
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148225,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
148891,-100,4,2,1,10,0,0


[Colours]
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Combo2 : 241,174,249
Combo3 : 180,129,248

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Ty for modding C:

10nya

2,746 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

10nya 2013-05-13T12:57:25+00:00

all has been applied thanks, updated!

waiting for few mod then call popner back o3o;;;;;

HabiHolic

5,372 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2013-05-15T13:14:51+00:00

Hello~ From #Modreqs
M4M~~
[Lally]

00:31:225 - Add Note
00:59:558 (2) - Hmm... 00:58:225 (1) - What about the slider to copy and reverse?
01:09:558 (5) - his also 01:08:891 (4) - similarly like this.
01:18:225 (1) - Add a finish head
02:12:891 (2) - 02:11:558 (1) - With similar to reverse this.

[10nya]
01:31:558 (1) - Spacing?
01:55:225 (4) - Try This?

02:03:558 (1) - Finish?

Good Luck~

10nya

2,746 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

10nya 2013-05-15T13:58:41+00:00

all fixd except last, thanks!

scanter

2,385 posts

Joined July 2012

scanter 2013-05-16T12:12:53+00:00

Hi Lally & 10nya ~

Lally

00:48:224 (4) - Add clap on slider's end
00:53:558 (5) - Change 1/2 repeat slider. I think, this is suitable about sounds well. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/758718
02:19:891 (3) - maybe Easy players might confuse this. I recommend change to put circle 1 02:20:225 this point.
02:24:891 (3) - NC. sound was changed.
02:28:891 - A little big volume. I recommend set to 5%

10nya

00:27:558 (3) - Add clap on slider's first.
00:28:225 (4) - Add whistle.
00:51:558 (3,4) - How about this? players might confuse stack on number 4. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/758854
02:12:891 (3,4) - Try to move better place. How about this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/758849
This is code.
SPOILER
```
224,128,132891,2,0,P|300:108|370:157,1,170,2|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,200,133891,1,2,0:1:0:0:
```
02:18:891 (5,6,1) - Jump is not suitable this sound. how about reduce it? like x1.1

That's all xD maybe this map is ready for bubble ~

10nya

2,746 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

10nya 2013-05-16T14:07:54+00:00

scanter wrote:
Hi Lally & 10nya ~
hi

10nya
00:27:558 (3) - Add clap on slider's first. wtf lol how can i forget this
00:28:225 (4) - Add whistle. ah ok
00:51:558 (3,4) - How about this? players might confuse stack on number 4. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/758854 nah I don't want to make jump here, it wont fit imo x.x
02:12:891 (3,4) - Try to move better place. How about this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/758849
This is code.
SPOILER
224,128,132891,2,0,P|300:108|370:157,1,170,2|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,200,133891,1,2,0:1:0:0:
great, thanks!
02:18:891 (5,6,1) - Jump is not suitable this sound. how about reduce it? like x1.1 hmm somehow changed
That's all xD maybe this map is ready for bubble ~

thanks for modding

Lally

3,177 posts

Joined December 2011

Lally 2013-05-17T00:18:46+00:00

scanter wrote:
Hi Lally & 10nya ~
hi o3o

Lally
00:48:224 (4) - Add clap on slider's end it will ruin a bit with the next hitsound
00:53:558 (5) - Change 1/2 repeat slider. I think, this is suitable about sounds well. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/758718 i prefer to keep my symmetrie here
02:19:891 (3) - maybe Easy players might confuse this. I recommend change to put circle 1 02:20:225 this point. is enought time to see this slider and i used in other of mymaps this king of patter so i don't see a problem here o3o
02:24:891 (3) - NC. sound was changed.this will be just an extra NC and imo is not neded
02:28:891 - A little big volume. I recommend set to 5% here is a whistle this is because of 10% volume here o3o
That's all xD maybe this map is ready for bubble ~ i think that too o3o

(/ w \ ) ty for modding