1. Darkness (4,99 stars, 1009 notes)

LeginFS wrote:

I love this song too.
Anyway, some stuff to note before you finish it (can't wait )
oh I can already imagine my hands hurting after playing through the entire finished thing

You seem to be having fun with those fast three overlapping circles. Perhaps try to vary it up using a short repeat slider?
02:12:520 (5) - obsolete; remove this
02:25:175 (4) - move this a grid down; it's not in a straight line
03:15:093 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - change these to three overlapping circles instead of two for each; it feels better and keeps in style with the rest of the map lol
03:18:608 (1,2,3) - these are too slow to overlap together because of the rest of the other overlapped notes in the beatmap
03:23:530 (3,4,5) - here too
03:22:358 (4) - you can move this below where 03:23:530 (3) - will appear
03:47:434 (3) - put one more repeat

Well, gonna be waiting for the finished product

THS wrote:

hi deadly :3
sorry for late mod ( 1st time modding )
okay lets begin~
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01:31:976 (3) - add claps
01:39:475 (2) - ^
01:44:162 (2) - ^
03:20:717 (4) - ^
03:20:952 (5) - ^
03:23:530 (3) - ^
03:23:764 (4) - ^
03:25:404 (5) - ^
03:39:466 (2) - add whistle ( just my opinion )
04:25:869 (2) - i think this note was not necessary needed ( it still fit to the map i think )
04:26:572 (3) - move this note to x :368 y : 112

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okay i think that's all ( sorry if i have done wrong )
*waiting for finished

THS wrote:

oh i forgot
Star~

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

Hey there!

[Darkness]
00:38:777 (2) - Maybe remove this circle? Sounds better to me~ #fixed
01:00:103 (1,2,3) - I think this is a very sudden increase in the spacing. :/ #fixed
01:50:021 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Fix this slider shape. The corner has bigger spacing than the rest circles. #fixed
02:31:034 (4,5) - Incease the slider length to end @ Blue line, sounds better with the circle right after. #fixed
03:18:491 (6) - Maybe put circle there? #fixed
03:54:230 (1,2,3) - Spacing is not nice here, it's unexpected in comparison with the previous stream at 03:53:527 (4,5,6) #fixed
04:09:698 (4,5,6) - Same unexpected jump here but I think this one's ok. Just mentioning in case next mods agree. I'll keep that, lets see what other modders say
04:28:212 (5) - NC. #fixed
04:28:681 (9) - NC. #fixed
04:29:150 (13) - NC. #fixed
04:29:618 (17) - NC. #fixed
This long yellow stream is ugly .-. I like it
05:23:520 (7,1,2,3,4) - Fix a bit the curve of that part of the stream. #fixed
05:26:098 (1,1,1,1) - Those 4 are UGLY sjagfashf. Have no Ideas atm for this part...Maybe I'll get some later
Replace with sliders instead D:< Long nice shaped sliders FTW.

06:15:079 - I got a nice idea for this part... MAP IT Later

My Mod:

[Darkness]
00:49:323 (2) - http://puu.sh/2fkVn verändere den slider so, dann steht er in einem besseren Verhältnid zur (2) der nächsten Cobo, und er befindet sich genau im Zwischenraum des (3) Sliders
01:22:133 (3) - http://puu.sh/2flka ^ damit sich der reversepoint im gleichen Verhältnis zu (2) befindet
02:07:598 (5) - benutzte vlt. lieber whistle
02:10:879 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/2fmun lass die Konstellation symetrischer wirken
02:12:285 (4) - whistle auf den anfang des sliders
02:25:409 (5) - http://puu.sh/2fmdB besseres Verhältnis zu (2),(3)
02:43:689 (7) - whistle auf das ende des sliders
02:45:095 (4) - ^
02:57:047 (2) - vlt. whistle auf das Ende des Sliders
02:57:985 (6) - ^
03:31:966 (4) - http://puu.sh/2fmJK Bewege den slider ein Kästchen nach unten, damit er wie gespiegelt wirkt
03:44:622 (6) - vlt. whistle
03:55:402 (3) - benutzte lieber am ende des sliders die whistle
03:59:621 (1) - Whistle auf den Spinner
04:14:619 (4) - whistle
04:22:119 (8) - whistle
04:40:633 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/2fn9e vlt. so
05:05:944 (3) - whistle, es gibt mehrere sliderpäarchen danach, die mit whistle beginnen
05:56:330 (2) - http://puu.sh/2fnt9 vlt. so, später wird es auch so gemacht

Ich hoffe ich konnte dir wenigstens ein bisschen helfen ^^

rezoons wrote:

Hi ,

I tried a M4M from your queue. Here is some suggestions:

Darkness
Near the end the notes sounds a little off beat. I think your BPM might be wrong. Try asking a timing check.
For map like this you should use a grid level of 4. A grid level of 3 or less are generally for easy and normal diff.
^I will let it check
00:40:886 (5) - Ctrl+g, seems better like this. Fixed
01:09:009 (5) - Why not like this:

I find it better like this. Fixed
01:10:415 (1,2,3) - It's weird. Generally when you have 3 notes separated by 1/4 beat in your map they are closer than that. (like at 03:52:473) Fixed
01:16:040 (3) - Seems better like this: Fixed

01:28:343 (2,3) - Why are they stacked? Even with AR9 it's nearly impossible to see that. Fixed
01:31:507 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - Why so much 1/2 beat-length sliders? It doesn't seem to follow the music.
I like them. Lets wait what other modders say.
02:12:754 (1,2) - I'm not sure if it's rankable. Fixed
02:20:253 (5,6) - The alignment isn't good. Hopefully Fixed
02:27:753 (5,6) - ^ ^
02:33:377 (2,3,4,5,6) - Use Ctrl+g on some of these sliders. I think it will be better. Fixed
02:38:064 (6) - Try making this slider symmetrical. Fixed
03:48:606 - Add a note. Fixed
04:11:104 - ^ Fixed
04:20:947 (5,6,7) - Looks better like this: Fixed

04:24:462 (1) - It's nearly symmetrical but not quite. Fixed
04:28:212 (1) - Remove NC. Fixed
04:29:150 (1) - One grid up and remove NC. Fixed
04:30:790 (3,4,5) - The Distance Snapping is very surprising. Fixed by adding another note
05:27:036 (1,1) - Unrankable. They dont reach 2000 in auto. replaced with sliders, thanks KiyoshiX101 for the help
06:09:454 (5) - Move the end point one grid up. Fixed
06:15:079 - Add a note. Fixed

I hope it was helpful enough. Good luck .