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Ayumi Miyazaki - Brave Heart

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Mittwoch, 12. Juni 2013 at 05:14:33

Artist: Ayumi Miyazaki
Title: Brave Heart
Source: Digimon Adventure
Tags: Love Zeroarg Digivolve デジモン
BPM: 142,02
Filesize: 7450kb
Play Time: 03:54
Difficulties Available:
  1. Champion (3,07 stars, 263 notes)
  2. Mega (5 stars, 653 notes)
  3. Ultimate (4,77 stars, 485 notes)
  4. Zeroarg's Rookie (1,65 stars, 193 notes)
Download: Ayumi Miyazaki - Brave Heart
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Digimon Map :) I was shocked when I couldn't find a ranked one of this song. It is a piece of childhood and nobody should mess with it.
Zeroarg's Rookie -> Easy
Champion -> Normal
Ultimate -> Hard
Mega -> Insane
Background image from here
Thanks to Dashie for encouraging me while making this :3
Thanks to all the modders and testplayers
Easy GD will done by zeroarg :) THANK YOU <3
MFZ
My first mod
Nice song ^^


Rookie
Unrankable - stacks,overlaps,unreadable parts
Champion
Increase CS,HP,OD

  • 00:25:421 (5) - move to 00:25:527
    01:03:445 (7,8,1,2,3) - stack and change the positions a little, slider looks kinda awkward
    02:07:028 (1) - consider adding whistle
    02:07:873 (2) - move to 02:07:767
    02:14:210 (4) - remove reverse, put a note on white tick
    03:33:214 (4) - put something after the slider, don't just leave it empty

Ultimate
Increase HP,OD

  • Too many whistles starting from 01:00:910 (1), doesn't sound too good either.
    03:20:751 (1) - Consider moving this beat
Mega
Increase HP,OD
  • 01:01:332 (1) - Same as Ultimate, too many whistles
    01:24:357 (6) - Doesnt sound well, doesnt play well. Consider removing
Topic Starter
Hard

MFZ wrote:

My first mod
Nice song ^^


Rookie
Unrankable - stacks,overlaps,unreadable partsI'll think about something
Champion
Increase CS,HP,ODIncreased CS and OD, but not HP. I think it's okay this way. Will consider changing it if someone else suggests it too.

  • 00:25:421 (5) - move to 00:25:527 Done
    01:03:445 (7,8,1,2,3) - stack and change the positions a little, slider looks kinda awkward Done, well I tried to change something hope it's okay this way
    02:07:028 (1) - consider adding whistle Actually I completely forgot to add some sounds there. Thanks for reminding me. Will change it later
    02:07:873 (2) - move to 02:07:767 Done
    02:14:210 (4) - remove reverse, put a note on white tick Done
    03:33:214 (4) - put something after the slider, don't just leave it empty Done, hopte it sounds better.. At least a bit :D

Ultimate
Increase HP,OD Done

  • Too many whistles starting from 01:00:910 (1), doesn't sound too good either. Actually there aren't many whistles. Well I removed the ones I found.
    03:20:751 (1) - Consider moving this beat Done. Thanks.
Mega
Increase HP,OD Done
  • 01:01:332 (1) - Same as Ultimate, too many whistles Actually there aren't any whistles, only finish sounds
    01:24:357 (6) - Doesnt sound well, doesnt play well. Consider removing Removed it you're right.
Thank you very much!
Aurele
I love Patamon too, let's be best friends♥
Stefan
GUYS STOP THAT

I am already thinking about to rewatch Digimon ;A;
Topic Starter
Hard

Gabe wrote:

I love Patamon too, let's be best friends♥
Patamon is god. Let's make a Patamon-Fanclub, or let's build a shrine. I'll be the shrine maiden and you can be the ghost, haunting it!
Deni

Mapper Help Team



Just a little General Check ;)

General

  1. Title: Title should be "Ayumi Miyazaki - Brave Heart". "(Digimon Adventure's Evolution)" doesn't belong in the title.

  2. Tags: Don't use commas, just use spaces to seperate the different tags. Also, I don't think "Childhood" is needed.
Topic Starter
Hard

Deni wrote:

Mapper Help Team



Just a little General Check ;)

General

  1. Title: Title should be "Ayumi Miyazaki - Brave Heart". "(Digimon Adventure's Evolution)" doesn't belong in the title.

  2. Tags: Don't use commas, just use spaces to seperate the different tags. Also, I don't think "Childhood" is needed.

Thank you, I'll fix that :)
lupcha
Random mod here! ´-` You're from Germany so I guess I'll just mod in German.

Note

I'm a newbie mapper|modder so please don't expect too much. I'll try my hardest though. ヽ(*・ω・)ノ *needs more experience*

Rookie


General

Einige Stellen sind sehr unübersichtlich - vor allem für Anfänger. Ich hab gesehen, dass dein Distance Spacing auf 1,5 eingestellt ist (könnte man sogar auf 1,4 oder so runterschreiben), aber ... du benutzt ihn nicht? ;__; Würde ich dir dringend empfehlen, weil dadurch erst gar nicht diese unschönen Überlappungen entstehen und die Map deutlich lesbarer wird!

  • 01:54:836 (1) - vielleicht eher so was?Die kurzen Noten kann man nicht so schön einbauen (ohne DS wirkt's auch noch recht chaotisch)

    01:55:681 (4) - finish?
    02:19:551 (1) - die Stelle würde ich auch etwas vereinfachen 02:25:888 (1) - versteck die Kreise bei Easy lieber nicht unter dem Slider u,u
    02:26:733 (2) - 02:27:156 (4) diese Kreise würde ich eher nebeneinander aufstellen (oder viell. auch stacken). Sieht nicht so gequetscht aus. (bei den anderen auch)
    02:26:311 (1) - ich würd hier den NC entfernen und bei 02:27:578 (1) einfügen
    02:27:578 (1) - find ich auch etwas zu gequetscht. Würde die Noten bei 02:28:846 (2) setzen 02:30:113 (2) - 02:30:113 (2) statt den Noten hier vielleicht ein kurzer repetitive Slider?
    03:32:006 (1) - die Note kommt mir zu schnell nach dem Spinner. Hört sich zwar besser an, aber könnte schwer zu treffen sein. Würd's entfernen. ~
    03:36:865 (1) - 03:38:555 (4) - die Stelle würde ich auch etwas umbauen. Ich würde die schnelleren Noten ehrlichgesagt weglassen und hier 03:38:132 (4) - 03:38:555 (4) einen repetitive Slider reinmachen. 03:38:977 (5) dann 'nen Kreis setzen.03:47:005 - kenn mich mit den ganzen Regeln auch noch nicht so aus, aber die ganzen Stacks könnten vielleicht etwas "zu viel" für Anfänger sein? Würde paar davon vielleicht durch etwas anderes ersetzen. ~
    03:52:074 (1) - benutz lieber keine Slider in der Easy Diff, die mehr als eine Wiederholung haben (musste das bei meiner auch abändern :'D). Die Noten danach würde ich auch wieder etwas einfacher machen.
>> Sieht nach viel Gemecker aus, aber ich mag dein Mapping! ^q^ Das Problem ist eigentlich nur die Platzierung ... Distance Space ist dein Freund! ;p Ansonsten hört sich alles gut an!

Champion


General

Bei deiner Normal Diff würde ich auch wieder ein paar Stellen vereinfachen, weil sich einige Überlappungen ergeben. Hat ja auch über 4 Sterne, da könnte man ruhig paar Stellen etwas abändern, um es lesbarer zu machen.

  • 00:15:764 (5) - bei Normal sollte man auch lieber auf mehr Wiederholungen verzichten bzw. nur spärlich benutzen.
    00:24:636 (4) - Kreis durch Slider ersetzen? 00:39:000 (1) - siehe ersten Punkt
    00:40:479 (3) - 00:41:958 (1) - ist vielleicht ein bisschen zu viel des Guten x'D Würde das wieder umändern ... vielleicht in so was?
    Weiß nicht, ob das mit dem Stacken okay ist, aber es sieht etwas übersichtlicher aus. ~

    01:00:336 (1) - weiß nicht genau wie das bei Normal ist, aber könnte auch hier wieder ein bisschen zu schnell nach dem Spinner sein (?)
    01:15:545 (2) - 01:15:756 (3) - so überlappt sieht das unschön aus u,u
    01:19:136 (1) - lul, den Slider würde ich auf 'ne Diät setzen. Bisschen umändern, damit's hübscher aussieht. :p
    01:49:977 (1) - siehe ersten Punkt
    01:54:836 (1) - 01:56:314 (9) - uuh, it's too much! Sieht sehr eingeengt aus und könnte Anfänger verwirren. Würd's umändern.
    01:57:793 - 01:58:427 (4) - hier würd ich einen langen Slider hinsetzen
    02:06:454 (1) - eine Wiederholung reinmachen?
    01:58:638 (5), 02:05:187 (4), 02:07:933 (3) - die Stellen mit den Slidern würde ich auch etwas anders machen, hmm. Würd da paar Pausen reinmachen und ja. ´-`
    02:07:721 (2) - nicht unter dem Slider verstecken
    02:14:059 (5) - so gequetscht sieht's nicht schön aus. ;_; Die Stelle davor könnte auch etwas zu hart sein.
    02:25:254 (7) - siehe ersten Punkt
    02:26:311 (1) - bisschen verschönern?
    02:29:057 (5) - ^
    02:30:113 (6) - hier vielleicht Kreis und ab 02:30:324 (7) - 02:30:747 (7) Slider mit Wiederholung
    02:32:437 (1) - zu schnell nach dem Spinner (?)
    02:40:041 (3) - siehe ersten Punkt
    02:41:942 (3) - ^
    03:06:235 (1) - uh, würd das stacken oder ganz ändern
    03:11:516 (1) - verschönern ~
    03:23:135 (3) - wieder etwas unübersichtlich :|
>> Wie oben schon gesagt, hier solltest du die Lesbarkeit verbessern. Ich würde die ganze Map deutlich einfacher gestalten, damit nicht so viele Noten zusammen liegen. ;3

Okay, sorry, ich glaub, ich modde nur die zwei Diffs richtig. ;; /müde ist

Zu Hard vielleicht noch kurz was:
Bei den einzelnen Noten würde ich lieber Distance Snap benutzen bzw. sie nicht so oft so weit auseinander legen. Hier gibt's auch wieder paar Überlappungen, die mich etwas stören. 01:04:138 (2) - 01:06:250 (7) diese Stelle z.B.

Uhh ja, ich hoffe, der Mod hat dir etwas geholfen. v-v
Topic Starter
Hard

lupcha wrote:

Random mod here! ´-` You're from Germany so I guess I'll just mod in German.

Note

I'm a newbie mapper|modder so please don't expect too much. I'll try my hardest though. ヽ(*・ω・)ノ *needs more experience*

Rookie


General

Einige Stellen sind sehr unübersichtlich - vor allem für Anfänger. Ich hab gesehen, dass dein Distance Spacing auf 1,5 eingestellt ist (könnte man sogar auf 1,4 oder so runterschreiben), aber ... du benutzt ihn nicht? ;__; Würde ich dir dringend empfehlen, weil dadurch erst gar nicht diese unschönen Überlappungen entstehen und die Map deutlich lesbarer wird!

  • 01:54:836 (1) - vielleicht eher so was?Die kurzen Noten kann man nicht so schön einbauen okay. versteh ich. gefixed :) (ohne DS wirkt's auch noch recht chaotisch)

    01:55:681 (4) - finish? wie kommt das denn dahin D: danke
    02:19:551 (1) - die Stelle würde ich auch etwas vereinfachen 02:25:888 (1) - versteck die Kreise bei Easy lieber nicht unter dem Slider u,u gefixed
    02:26:733 (2) - 02:27:156 (4) diese Kreise würde ich eher nebeneinander aufstellen (oder viell. auch stacken). Sieht nicht so gequetscht aus. (bei den anderen auch) Hab sie gestackt
    02:26:311 (1) - ich würd hier den NC entfernen und bei 02:27:578 (1) einfügen fixed
    02:27:578 (1) - find ich auch etwas zu gequetscht. Würde die Noten bei 02:28:846 (2) setzen fixed, es klingt wirklich besser 02:30:113 (2) - 02:30:113 (2) statt den Noten hier vielleicht ein kurzer repetitive Slider? nein. ich möchte diese stelle als spiegel von den drei noten davor haben.
    03:32:006 (1) - die Note kommt mir zu schnell nach dem Spinner. Hört sich zwar besser an, aber könnte schwer zu treffen sein. Würd's entfernen. ~ Hab den Spinner kürzer gemacht und mit ner inheriting section auf leise gestellt. so müsste es gehen ^^
    03:36:865 (1) - 03:38:555 (4) - die Stelle würde ich auch etwas umbauen. Ich würde die schnelleren Noten ehrlichgesagt weglassen und hier 03:38:132 (4) - 03:38:555 (4) einen repetitive Slider reinmachen. 03:38:977 (5) dann 'nen Kreis setzen.Ich weiß noch nicht so genau. Wenn es nochmal bemerkt wird, änder ich es aber ich will diese töne nicht außen vor lassen...03:47:005 - kenn mich mit den ganzen Regeln auch noch nicht so aus, aber die ganzen Stacks könnten vielleicht etwas "zu viel" für Anfänger sein? Würde paar davon vielleicht durch etwas anderes ersetzen. ~ Hab mal was versucht ^^
    03:52:074 (1) - benutz lieber keine Slider in der Easy Diff, die mehr als eine Wiederholung haben (musste das bei meiner auch abändern :'D). Die Noten danach würde ich auch wieder etwas einfacher machen.gefixed
>> Sieht nach viel Gemecker aus, aber ich mag dein Mapping! ^q^ Das Problem ist eigentlich nur die Platzierung ... Distance Space ist dein Freund! ;p Ansonsten hört sich alles gut an!
danke ♥

Champion


General

Bei deiner Normal Diff würde ich auch wieder ein paar Stellen vereinfachen, weil sich einige Überlappungen ergeben. Hat ja auch über 4 Sterne, da könnte man ruhig paar Stellen etwas abändern, um es lesbarer zu machen. Mal schauen was ich machen kann :3

  • 00:15:764 (5) - bei Normal sollte man auch lieber auf mehr Wiederholungen verzichten bzw. nur spärlich benutzen. Ich weiß noch nicht genau ob ich das ändern möchte. Mal sehen, was noch andere modder sagen. Der Slider ist mir wichtig, weil ich mit der Melodie gehe
    00:24:636 (4) - Kreis durch Slider ersetzen?gemacht :D 00:39:000 (1) - siehe ersten Punkt Hab es durch 2 Slider ersetzt ^^ Danke
    00:40:479 (3) - 00:41:958 (1) - ist vielleicht ein bisschen zu viel des Guten x'D Würde das wieder umändern ... vielleicht in so was? Fixed. Ist besser
    Weiß nicht, ob das mit dem Stacken okay ist, aber es sieht etwas übersichtlicher aus. ~

    01:00:336 (1) - weiß nicht genau wie das bei Normal ist, aber könnte auch hier wieder ein bisschen zu schnell nach dem Spinner sein Änder ich falls es nochmal suggested wird (?)
    01:15:545 (2) - 01:15:756 (3) - so überlappt sieht das unschön aus u,u Ich finde das eigentlich okay so. Mag das.
    01:19:136 (1) - lul, den Slider würde ich auf 'ne Diät setzen. Bisschen umändern, damit's hübscher aussieht. :p Diät war erfolgreich
    01:49:977 (1) - siehe ersten Punkt Änder ich falls es erneut vorgeschlagen wird
    01:54:836 (1) - 01:56:314 (9) - uuh, it's too much! Sieht sehr eingeengt aus und könnte Anfänger verwirren. Würd's umändern. Nein, es gefällt mir so eigentlich ganz gut. Werde es aber ändern falls es nochmal vorgeschlagen wird oder falls mir was besseres einfällt :D
    01:57:793 - 01:58:427 (4) - hier würd ich einen langen Slider hinsetzen Nein, ich geh hier mit dem Schlagzeug mit
    02:06:454 (1) - eine Wiederholung reinmachen? ok
    01:58:638 (5), 02:05:187 (4), 02:07:933 (3) - die Stellen mit den Slidern würde ich auch etwas anders machen, hmm. Würd da paar Pausen reinmachen und ja. ´-` Hab nen langen slider reingemacht
    02:07:721 (2) - nicht unter dem Slider verstecken fixed
    02:14:059 (5) - so gequetscht sieht's nicht schön aus. ;_; Die Stelle davor könnte auch etwas zu hart sein. hab es bisschen geändert :D
    02:25:254 (7) - siehe ersten Punkt Falls es nochmal erwähnt wird
    02:26:311 (1) - bisschen verschönern? Nein, der Slider soll einer Schnecke ähneln weil ich Schnecken mag
    02:29:057 (5) - ^ Hoffe er ist jetzt bisschen schöner...
    02:30:113 (6) - hier vielleicht Kreis und ab 02:30:324 (7) - 02:30:747 (7) Slider mit Wiederholung zurzeit finde ich das noch gut, werde es aber ändern wenn es nochmal gesagt
    02:32:437 (1) - zu schnell nach dem Spinner (?) hab was geändert hoffe es ist okay so -^__^-
    02:40:041 (3) - siehe ersten Punkt zurzeit finde ich das noch gut, werde es aber ändern wenn es nochmal gesagt
    02:41:942 (3) - ^ zurzeit finde ich das noch gut, werde es aber ändern wenn es nochmal gesagt
    03:06:235 (1) - uh, würd das stacken oder ganz ändern gestackt
    03:11:516 (1) - verschönern ~ Der soll eiscreme ähneln. Den lass ich erstmal so
    03:23:135 (3) - wieder etwas unübersichtlich :|änder ich falls es erneut vorgeschlagen wird.
>> Wie oben schon gesagt, hier solltest du die Lesbarkeit verbessern. Ich würde die ganze Map deutlich einfacher gestalten, damit nicht so viele Noten zusammen liegen. ;3

Okay, sorry, ich glaub, ich modde nur die zwei Diffs richtig. ;; /müde ist

Zu Hard vielleicht noch kurz was:
Bei den einzelnen Noten würde ich lieber Distance Snap benutzen bzw. sie nicht so oft so weit auseinander legen. Hier gibt's auch wieder paar Überlappungen, die mich etwas stören. 01:04:138 (2) - 01:06:250 (7) diese Stelle z.B.

Uhh ja, ich hoffe, der Mod hat dir etwas geholfen. v-v Sehr sogar, danke


juhu ein wilder Mod erscheint und auch noch so ein hilfreicher :D

Danke sehr :3
AnimeStyle
~Star~

Ich werde die map vlt. auch noch modden mal sehen ;3 (Ich will helfen sie zu ranken)

apropos hier https://osu.ppy.sh/s/3253 , falls dus nicht wusstest ^^
Topic Starter
Hard
Woah danke <3
Uchiha_sorayuki
#modreqs
_____________________________________

Rookie

HP and OD -1

please use distance snap between 0,8x-1,0x distance spacing in easy diff plz :!: :!: (hold alt in case u dont know)

00:57:167 (1) - why dont you change to slider until 00:58:435 - becoz 2 spinner are confusing for newbie player,
same case in 02:14:059 (1) -
00:58:963 (1) - begin at 00:58:857 - same case in 02:16:382 (1) -
01:01:181 (2) - delete this note

Champion
This normal diff feels like hard diff to me

CS +1
AR -2
1.50 SV is too fast for normal diff

00:18:299 - until 00:21:256 - those overlap sliders are confusing for normal diff
01:15:545 - these overlap
01:42:584 - make a reverse slider from those 3 notes
01:54:836 - until 01:56:314 - too hard :?
02:06:454 (1) - the reverseslider ends at 02:07:299 -
02:23:776 - until 02:25:888 - overlap too
03:06:235 (1) - make reverse from these notes
03:11:516 (1) - ends at 03:12:784 -
03:16:375 (4) - change to reverse
03:20:177 (2) - overlap

Ultimate

AR -1

00:11:962 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - too jumpy
01:03:716 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - too confusing for a hard diff
01:03:716 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:29:698 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - too jumpy
03:23:135 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - too confusing

Nice song :)
Topic Starter
Hard

Uchiha_sorayuki wrote:

#modreqs
_____________________________________

Rookie

HP and OD -1 changed

please use distance snap between 0,8x-1,0x distance spacing in easy diff plz :!: :!: (hold alt in case u dont know) I'll resnap the whole map.

00:57:167 (1) - why dont you change to slider until 00:58:435 - becoz 2 spinner are confusing for newbie player,
same case in 02:14:059 (1) - fixed both
00:58:963 (1) - begin at 00:58:857 - same case in 02:16:382 (1) - did you mean the spinner? Well fixed it if you meant the spinner
01:01:181 (2) - delete this note deleted

Champion
This normal diff feels like hard diff to me

CS +1 changed
AR -2 changed
1.50 SV is too fast for normal diff Won't change it. I like this SV. But I'll think about it if someone else suggests it

00:18:299 - until 00:21:256 - those overlap sliders are confusing for normal diff Actually I like it this way. I don't think they are to hard or confusing since they are nice placed.
01:15:545 - these overlap changed
01:42:584 - make a reverse slider from those 3 notes changed
01:54:836 - until 01:56:314 - too hard :? tried to change something but i actually like this
02:06:454 (1) - the reverseslider ends at 02:07:299 - changed
02:23:776 - until 02:25:888 - overlap too changed
03:06:235 (1) - make reverse from these notes changed
03:11:516 (1) - ends at 03:12:784 - changed
03:16:375 (4) - change to reverse changed
03:20:177 (2) - overlap changed

Ultimate

AR -1 changed

00:11:962 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - too jumpy Actually I like it that way. Even if it's jumpy I think i can make it at least a bit jumpy since it's a hard diff.
01:03:716 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - too confusing for a hard diff changed
01:03:716 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ well... wait ... deja vue D:
01:29:698 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - too jumpy changed
03:23:135 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - too confusing I'll think about something

Nice song Thank you ♥ :)

Thanks for your mod. Really appreciated. Really helpful.
neonat
(my 400th post) orz
Unsubmitted stuff lol.

m4m

Mega

00:05:836 (1) - split this slider to 2 circles
00:06:258 (2) - I think this might be a better rhythm, this slider doesn't really end at anywhere special (with this suggest rhythm the slider ends on a piano note)
00:08:159 (1) - end slider at 00:09:427
00:09:955 (1) - spinner starts at 00:09:638 and ends at 00:11:539
00:54:738 (2,4) - continue with the 1/2 sliders at this portion, or remove these 2 notes. There's nothing much going on in the song that warrants a 1/4 stream
00:58:857 (1) - spinner starts 00:58:963 and ends at the same place 01:00:547 and add 3 notes in front. For example:
01:01:181 (2) - you could replace this with a repeat slider or 3 1/4 notes (basically something at 01:01:181 -, 01:01:286 and 01:01:392 -)
01:08:997 (5) - vocals are held here, replace this circle with a slider that ends at 01:09:208
01:10:475 - vocal here as well, nothing placed?
01:12:165 (1) - spinner end at 01:13:644 and place 3 circles at 01:13:855 -, 01:13:961 and 01:14:066
01:21:565 - add a note (listen to the guitar) (mix the vocals with the music)
01:23:255 - ^
01:24:417 - vocal here, anything placed for it?
01:24:840 - add a note
01:24:945 - ^
02:02:335 - ^
02:30:007 - ^
02:35:077 - ^
02:43:527 - ^
03:07:080 (1) - end slider at 03:07:291
03:16:586 (8) - end slider at 03:17:008 and add a circle at 03:17:220
03:26:725 (2,1,1,4) - remove the finish from the end (tail) of the slider, it doesn't blend well with the song
03:32:429 (3) - replace with a note at 03:32:429 and a slider from 03:32:640 to 03:32:851
03:33:380 - add a note
03:37:604 - ^
03:47:744 - ^
03:49:434 - ^
03:49:539 (2) - remove finish from the end of the slider
03:51:124 - add a note
03:51:229 (2) - remove finish from the end of the slider
03:52:814 - add a note

Ultimate

00:38:050 (2) - remove
00:38:155 (3) - shorten slider so that it ends at 00:38:367 and add circles at 00:38:472 and 00:38:578
00:49:351 - add a note
01:19:770 - ^
01:28:114 (3) - slider should start at 01:28:219 and end at 01:28:431
01:37:725 (3) - finish sound doesn't fir here, even so, the end of the slider definitely shouldn't have finish sound
01:39:415 (5) - ^ (slider end no finish)
01:41:528 (1) - ^ (slider end no finish)
01:50:400 (2) - finish sound doesn't fit, should remove
01:53:568 (2) - ^
01:55:469 (7) - ^
01:56:103 (9) - add finish only to the end of the slider (3rd portion of it)
01:57:793 (5) - finish sound doesn't fit, I suggest removing it
01:58:849 (7) - ^
02:00:539 (1) - ^
02:01:173 (3) - add finish sound on the start of the slider only
02:03:074 (1) - soft finish on start of slider
02:05:398 (2) - remove finish from the tail (end) part of the slider
02:13:002 (1) - only have finish on the middle part of the slider at 02:13:214 - remove the other 2 sounds
02:14:059 (4) - remove finish from end of slider
02:14:904 (1) - add finish
02:23:142 (4) - remove finish from the start of the slider
02:30:535 (3) - add finish on the end of the slider
02:36:661 (5) - only have finish on the middle of the slider, remove the other 2 sounds
02:39:408 (2) - add finish
02:41:097 (1) - remove finish from the end of the slider
02:42:787 (1) - add finish on the start of the slider
02:43:421 (2) - only have finish on the middle of the slider, remove the other 2 sounds
02:44:477 (1) - add finish
03:20:600 (3) - only have finish on the middle of the slider, remove the other 2 sounds
03:22:501 (3) - remove finish sound
03:23:135 (1) - add finish at the end of the slider only
03:23:980 (3) - remove finish from the start of the slider
03:26:725 (1) - add finish at the end of the slider only
03:27:570 (2) - remove finish from the end of the slider
03:28:415 (1) - finish on the start of the slider
03:29:894 (3) - soft finish sound in the middle portion of slider
03:39:400 (5) - remove finish from the end of the slider
03:40:245 (1) - add finish at the start of the slider
03:47:005 (1) - remove finish from the end of the slider
Topic Starter
Hard

neonat wrote:

(my 400th post) orz
Unsubmitted stuff lol.
wow nice D:

m4m

Mega

00:05:836 (1) - split this slider to 2 circles done
00:06:258 (2) - I think this might be a better rhythm, this slider doesn't really end at anywhere special (with this suggest rhythm the slider ends on a piano note) changed somehow. Nice idea
00:08:159 (1) - end slider at 00:09:427 changed
00:09:955 (1) - spinner starts at 00:09:638 and ends at 00:11:539 changed
00:54:738 (2,4) - continue with the 1/2 sliders at this portion, or remove these 2 notes. There's nothing much going on in the song that warrants a 1/4 stream changed, removed the notes. I want difference.
00:58:857 (1) - spinner starts 00:58:963 and ends at the same place 01:00:547 and add 3 notes in front. For example:
good idea. changed!
01:01:181 (2) - you could replace this with a repeat slider or 3 1/4 notes (basically something at 01:01:181 -, 01:01:286 and 01:01:392 -) changed, but in a different way
01:08:997 (5) - vocals are held here, replace this circle with a slider that ends at 01:09:208 No. I'm following the drumset there. And want to exaggerate that.
01:10:475 - vocal here as well, nothing placed? Same. I'm following the drums here
01:12:165 (1) - spinner end at 01:13:644 and place 3 circles at 01:13:855 -, 01:13:961 and 01:14:066 changed
01:21:565 - add a note (listen to the guitar) (mix the vocals with the music) changed
01:23:255 - ^ changed
01:24:417 - vocal here, anything placed for it? changed. Thanks I always thought something's missing there :D
01:24:840 - add a note changed
01:24:945 - ^ changed
02:02:335 - ^ changed
02:30:007 - ^ changed
02:35:077 - ^ changed
02:43:527 - ^ changed
03:07:080 (1) - end slider at 03:07:291 changed
03:16:586 (8) - end slider at 03:17:008 and add a circle at 03:17:220 changed
03:26:725 (2,1,1,4) - remove the finish from the end (tail) of the slider, it doesn't blend well with the song changed
03:32:429 (3) - replace with a note at 03:32:429 and a slider from 03:32:640 to 03:32:851 changed
03:33:380 - add a note changed
03:37:604 - ^ changed
03:47:744 - ^ changed
03:49:434 - ^ changed
03:49:539 (2) - remove finish from the end of the slider changed
03:51:124 - add a note changed
03:51:229 (2) - remove finish from the end of the slider changed
03:52:814 - add a note changed

Ultimate

00:38:050 (2) - remove changed
00:38:155 (3) - shorten slider so that it ends at 00:38:367 and add circles at 00:38:472 and 00:38:578 changed
00:49:351 - add a note changed
01:19:770 - ^ changed
01:28:114 (3) - slider should start at 01:28:219 and end at 01:28:431 changed
01:37:725 (3) - finish sound doesn't fir here, even so, the end of the slider definitely shouldn't have finish sound changed, I guess I just forgot to add "drum" to the additions
01:39:415 (5) - ^ (slider end no finish) changed
01:41:528 (1) - ^ (slider end no finish) changed
01:50:400 (2) - finish sound doesn't fit, should remove changed
01:53:568 (2) - ^ changed
01:55:469 (7) - ^ changed
01:56:103 (9) - add finish only to the end of the slider (3rd portion of it) changed
01:57:793 (5) - finish sound doesn't fit, I suggest removing it changed
01:58:849 (7) - ^ changed
02:00:539 (1) - ^ changed
02:01:173 (3) - add finish sound on the start of the slider only changed
02:03:074 (1) - soft finish on start of slider changed
02:05:398 (2) - remove finish from the tail (end) part of the slider changed
02:13:002 (1) - only have finish on the middle part of the slider at 02:13:214 - remove the other 2 sounds changed
02:14:059 (4) - remove finish from end of slider changed
02:14:904 (1) - add finish changed
02:23:142 (4) - remove finish from the start of the slider changed
02:30:535 (3) - add finish on the end of the slider changed
02:36:661 (5) - only have finish on the middle of the slider, remove the other 2 sounds changed
02:39:408 (2) - add finish changed
02:41:097 (1) - remove finish from the end of the slider changed
02:42:787 (1) - add finish on the start of the slider changed
02:43:421 (2) - only have finish on the middle of the slider, remove the other 2 sounds changed
02:44:477 (1) - add finish changed
03:20:600 (3) - only have finish on the middle of the slider, remove the other 2 sounds changed
03:22:501 (3) - remove finish sound changed
03:23:135 (1) - add finish at the end of the slider only changed
03:23:980 (3) - remove finish from the start of the slider changed
03:26:725 (1) - add finish at the end of the slider only changed
03:27:570 (2) - remove finish from the end of the slider changed
03:28:415 (1) - finish on the start of the slider changed
03:29:894 (3) - soft finish sound in the middle portion of slider changed
03:39:400 (5) - remove finish from the end of the slider changed
03:40:245 (1) - add finish at the start of the slider changed
03:47:005 (1) - remove finish from the end of the slider changed
Lolicakey
M4M from your queue

General

Artist: 宮崎歩
Title: デジモンアドベンチャー挿入歌
Source: es.digimon.wikia
---
• The background size is unrankeable o3o! ~ sizes allowed: 1366x768 (wide size, high recommend) 1024x768 (normal) and 800x600 (low recommend)
• MP3 sound quality isn't very good, Can you get another better? imo.
• add "デジモン" (dejimon/digimon) into tags
• There are some useless inherits points (green lines)
• Use a constant distance snap!
• Put a clap every 2 notes and add finish only in drums parts.

Rookie
  • stacks in a easy diff isn't recommended!
    Use the same distance snap for all the difficult.
    Try to do Easy patterns!
    • 00:32:241 (1) - try to do something like this http://puu.sh/2OelB.jpg
    • 00:48:506 (4) - why different spacing?
    • 00:50:196 (6) - ^
    • 00:52:097 (8) - ^
    • 00:58:857 (1) - unsnapped spinner
    • 01:02:659 (3) - weird flow~ I don't know if you understand the concept of "flow" , here is an example.• 01:21:671 (6,7,8) - don't stack here please!
    • 01:23:361 (3,4,5) - ^
    • 01:35:190 (3) - one grid up~ the circle is touching the slider
    • 01:36:880 (2) - Make it more symmetrical with 01:36:035 (1) -
    • 02:08:144 (4) - ctrl+g for more flow
    • 02:10:256 (5) - it's hard to see this circle, you must move it to another place.
    • 02:15:326 (4) - make it more symmetrical
    • 02:35:605 (3) - the slider hides 02:38:140 (5) - and it's hard to see with HD(hidden mod)
Champion
  • • Hitsounds are a bit random.
    • 00:18:721 - remove finish
    • 00:20:411 - - ^
    • 01:25:896 (1) - this end here 01:29:276 -
    • 01:49:977 (1) - replace it for another pattern
    • 01:49:977 (1) - at 01:49:977 (1) - fill this empty space for follow the rhythm of the song.
    • 01:56:103 (7) - remove finish
    • 01:58:638 (6) - this slider hides 01:59:483 (7,1,2,3) -
    • 02:28:212 (3) - distance~
    • 02:46:695 (1,2,3) - test with this http://puu.sh/2Oh5f.jpg
Ultimate
  • • 00:44:281 (5) - remove finish
    • 01:08:574 (2) - make this slider more beautiful
    • 01:37:725 (3) - remove finish from the tail
    • 01:41:528 (1) - remove finish
    • 01:53:568 (2) - ^
    • 01:56:209 - remove finish
    • 01:58:849 (7) - ^
    • 02:00:539 (1) - ^
    • 02:13:002 (1) - ^
    • 02:14:059 (4) - ^
it need more and more work~ don't give up and good luck :3/
KokoroStudiox3
m4m :) :) :)

[rokie]
I suggest that these difficulties do not stack the notes
not change the spacing

00:06:469 (3) - new combo
00:14:074 (5,6,1,2) I feel that these parts are confusing for novice players

[Mega]
00:03:089 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/2OhXA.jpg
confusas

Missing Skin Files
hitcircleoverlay.png
approachcircle.png
reversearrow.png
spinner-clear.png
spinner-spin.png
spinner-osu.png


comboburst.png's dimensions must not be larger than 500x767 (currently 640x400).
comboburst.png's dimensions must not be larger than 500x767 (currently 640x400).
comboburst.png's dimensions must not be larger than 500x767 (currently 640x400).
comboburst.png's dimensions must not be larger than 500x767 (currently 640x400).
comboburst.png's dimensions must not be larger than 500x767 (currently 640x400).

[Champion]

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:12:114 - snap to 00:12:067
00:45:912 - snap to 00:45:866
01:01:121 - snap to 01:01:075
01:29:850 - snap to 01:29:804
02:19:702 - snap to 02:19:657
02:49:276 - snap to 02:49:230
03:20:540 - snap to 03:20:494
03:38:284 - snap to 03:38:238



[Mega]

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
01:01:227 - snap to 01:01:181
03:19:272 - snap to 03:19:226


[Rookie]
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:12:114 - snap to 00:12:173
00:45:912 - snap to 00:45:971


[Ultimate]
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:12:113 - snap to 00:12:173
00:12:114 - snap to 00:12:173
00:32:709 - snap to 00:32:663
00:45:912 - snap to 00:45:971
01:01:227 - snap to 01:01:181
03:07:443 - snap to 03:07:503
03:19:272 - snap to 03:19:332
Topic Starter
Hard

Lolicakes wrote:

M4M from your queue

General

Artist: 宮崎歩 I think it's easier to read in roman letters.
Title: デジモンアドベンチャー挿入歌 ^
Source: es.digimon.wikia
---
• The background size is unrankeable o3o! ~ sizes allowed: 1366x768 (wide size, high recommend) 1024x768 (normal) and 800x600 (low recommend) changed
• MP3 sound quality isn't very good, Can you get another better? imo. that was the best i could find...
• add "デジモン" (dejimon/digimon) into tags changed
• There are some useless inherits points (green lines) changed
• Use a constant distance snap! changed
• Put a clap every 2 notes and add finish only in drums parts. no, I don't like that sound.

Rookie
  • stacks in a easy diff isn't recommended! will change that
    Use the same distance snap for all the difficult. will change that
    Try to do Easy patterns! will change that
    • 00:32:241 (1) - try to do something like this http://puu.sh/2OelB.jpg changed
    • 00:48:506 (4) - why different spacing? changed
    • 00:50:196 (6) - ^ changed
    • 00:52:097 (8) - ^ changed
    • 00:58:857 (1) - unsnapped spinner changed
    • 01:02:659 (3) - weird flow~ I don't know if you understand the concept of "flow" , here is an example.changed• 01:21:671 (6,7,8) - don't stack here please! changed
    • 01:23:361 (3,4,5) - ^ changed
    • 01:35:190 (3) - one grid up~ the circle is touching the slider changed, but in a different way :3
    • 01:36:880 (2) - Make it more symmetrical with 01:36:035 (1) - no, i wanted to be an extention
    • 02:08:144 (4) - ctrl+g for more flow changed
    • 02:10:256 (5) - it's hard to see this circle, you must move it to another place. changed
    • 02:15:326 (4) - make it more symmetrical changed
    • 02:35:605 (3) - the slider hides 02:38:140 (5) - and it's hard to see with HD(hidden mod) changed
I decided to remapp / remodd the whole map. I'm no good with easy diffs, sorry :(

Champion
  • • Hitsounds are a bit random. I'll change that.
    • 00:18:721 - remove finish changed to drum finish
    • 00:20:411 - - ^ changed to drum finish
    • 01:25:896 (1) - this end here 01:29:276 - changed
    • 01:49:977 (1) - replace it for another pattern changed
    • 01:49:977 (1) - at 01:49:977 (1) - fill this empty space for follow the rhythm of the song. where? :/
    • 01:56:103 (7) - remove finish changed
    • 01:58:638 (6) - this slider hides 01:59:483 (7,1,2,3) - changed
    • 02:28:212 (3) - distance~ changed. That's why I always thought this looks a bit ... odd
    • 02:46:695 (1,2,3) - test with this http://puu.sh/2Oh5f.jpg changed it looks much better. thanks!
Ultimate
  • • 00:44:281 (5) - remove finish changed
    • 01:08:574 (2) - make this slider more beautiful i think it's okay like this
    • 01:37:725 (3) - remove finish from the tail changed
    • 01:41:528 (1) - remove finish changed
    • 01:53:568 (2) - ^ changed
    • 01:56:209 - remove finish changed
    • 01:58:849 (7) - ^ changed
    • 02:00:539 (1) - ^ changed
    • 02:13:002 (1) - ^ changed
    • 02:14:059 (4) - ^ changed
it need more and more work~ don't give up and good luck :3/
Thank you. I'll work on it until This map gets ranked. Because Digimon. Because I need to show my grace to Patamon, the saviour of justice.
Lolicakey

ChivaCookie wrote:

Lolicakes wrote:

M4M from your queue

General

Artist: 宮崎歩 I think it's easier to read in roman letters.
Title: デジモンアドベンチャー挿入歌 ^
[size=85]Source: es.digimon.wikia
Topic Starter
Hard
oh.. yeah... that's embarassing... i changed it.
Topic Starter
Hard

eLtigreXXx wrote:

m4m :) :) :)

[rokie] I will remapp that diff since i dont like it anymore <.<

I suggest that these difficulties do not stack the notes
not change the spacing
00:06:469 (3) - new combo
00:14:074 (5,6,1,2) I feel that these parts are confusing for novice players

[Mega]
00:03:089 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/2OhXA.jpg
confusas

Missing Skin Files
hitcircleoverlay.png
approachcircle.png
reversearrow.png
spinner-clear.png
spinner-spin.png
spinner-osu.png


comboburst.png's dimensions must not be larger than 500x767 (currently 640x400).
comboburst.png's dimensions must not be larger than 500x767 (currently 640x400).
comboburst.png's dimensions must not be larger than 500x767 (currently 640x400).
comboburst.png's dimensions must not be larger than 500x767 (currently 640x400).
comboburst.png's dimensions must not be larger than 500x767 (currently 640x400).

[Champion]

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:12:114 - snap to 00:12:067
00:45:912 - snap to 00:45:866
01:01:121 - snap to 01:01:075
01:29:850 - snap to 01:29:804
02:19:702 - snap to 02:19:657
02:49:276 - snap to 02:49:230
03:20:540 - snap to 03:20:494
03:38:284 - snap to 03:38:238



[Mega]

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
01:01:227 - snap to 01:01:181
03:19:272 - snap to 03:19:226


[Rookie]
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:12:114 - snap to 00:12:173
00:45:912 - snap to 00:45:971


[Ultimate]
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:12:113 - snap to 00:12:173
00:12:114 - snap to 00:12:173
00:32:709 - snap to 00:32:663
00:45:912 - snap to 00:45:971
01:01:227 - snap to 01:01:181
03:07:443 - snap to 03:07:503
03:19:272 - snap to 03:19:332


Snapped all notes. Changed background. I dont want to change any more of the things. The skin doesn't need all those things, right? Or will it be unrankeable otherwise? ._.' dunno sorry
Mythiax
OMG My childhood is here.

I have to rewatch digimon soon (also might mod tha map when i stop being lazy probably never).

Fix this general details

[General]

AIBat v3.1 wrote:

Kiai
Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [Champion] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:00:336, ends on 01:29:276
Kiai #2: Starts on 02:19:128, ends on 02:47:857
Kiai #3: Starts on 03:19:966, ends on 03:37:710

- [Mega] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:00:547, ends on 01:29:170
Kiai #2: Starts on 02:19:128, ends on 02:47:857
Kiai #3: Starts on 03:20:388, ends on 03:33:485

- [Rookie] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:00:547, ends on 01:29:276
Kiai #2: Starts on 02:19:128, ends on 02:47:857
Kiai #3: Starts on 03:19:966, ends on 03:33:485

- [Ultimate] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:00:547, ends on 01:29:276
Kiai #2: Starts on 02:19:128, ends on 02:47:857
Kiai #3: Starts on 03:19:966, ends on 03:33:485

AIBat v3.1 wrote:

Combo Colours
Inconsistency in combo colours:

- [Champion] :
Combo1 : 255,165,74
Combo2 : 255,255,0
Combo3 : 255,128,64
Combo4 : 255,255,128
- [Mega] :
Combo1 : 255,165,74
Combo2 : 255,255,0
Combo3 : 255,128,64
Combo4 : 255,255,128
- [Rookie] :
Combo1 : 255,190,125
Combo2 : 255,255,128
Combo3 : 255,128,64
Combo4 : 255,255,0
- [Ultimate] :
Combo1 : 255,165,74
Combo2 : 255,255,0
Combo3 : 255,128,64
Combo4 : 255,255,128
Make sure to have the same order in colours for concistency.

Also, resnap all the green timing sections you have in all dificulties. A lot of them are unsnapped.

No kudosu please. all was AIBAT work.
Topic Starter
Hard
yay! thank you !
FrzR
Hi, from your M4M Queue :3

General
Spinner skin could be hard to play with since there is no small circle but a box in the middle as a precision guide. And the Color of the spinner as well, when a player spins the cursor blends with the color in the spinner making it a bit hard to spin properly.

Rookie
01:08:997 (4) - Drum Samples sounded a bit off. Suggest using Normal Samples instead.

Champion
Well Since it is Normal Difficulty, i really suggest having Distance Snap enabled. Ai Mod Displays a lot of Distance Warnings.
Finish Hitsounds on this beatmap didn't sound well on this map. Not overused but off-beat.
00:41:641 - Empty space here. Try adding more notes that follows the beat rather than focusing on the lyrics :)
01:06:462 (6) - The slider could be unrankable due to its form. Try replacing it with other notes or shape the slider in a better way.

Ultimate
00:25:270 - Add more notes but in a slower manner since it is a Hard Difficulty.

Mega
00:25:270 - Same with Ultimate.

Notes
No big problems at all, just some minor off-beats. Good job on your maps :D
I hope this gets ranked as well with my map :3
Topic Starter
Hard

Fr33z3R wrote:

Hi, from your M4M Queue :3

General
Spinner skin could be hard to play with since there is no small circle but a box in the middle as a precision guide. And the Color of the spinner as well, when a player spins the cursor blends with the color in the spinner making it a bit hard to spin properly. Minor changed: I put another cursor in the skin

Rookie
01:08:997 (4) - Drum Samples sounded a bit off. Suggest using Normal Samples instead.Changed in a different way.

Champion
Well Since it is Normal Difficulty, i really suggest having Distance Snap enabled. Ai Mod Displays a lot of Distance Warnings.
Finish Hitsounds on this beatmap didn't sound well on this map. Not overused but off-beat. I will think of something
00:41:641 - Empty space here. Try adding more notes that follows the beat rather than focusing on the lyrics changed
01:06:462 (6) - The slider could be unrankable due to its form. Try replacing it with other notes or shape the slider in a better way. I really like that shape. Maybe I'll change it, if someone else suggests it.

Ultimate
00:25:270 - Add more notes but in a slower manner since it is a Hard Difficulty.Added a slider.

Mega
00:25:270 - Same with Ultimate. me too

Notes
No big problems at all, just some minor off-beats. Good job on your maps :D
I hope this gets ranked as well with my map :3 ME TOO <3 Thank you very much.

Thanks for your mod.
zorefire
From meh queue thingy majig
  • [Rookie]
    1. 01:14:066 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - should reconsider this D:.
    2. 01:33:500 (1,2,1) - looks like someone threw a bunch of stuff on top of each other and you can't find the things that are at the bottom of that pile.
    3. Your map is consistent so 02:30:958 - do something with this.
Topic Starter
Hard

zorefire wrote:

From meh queue thingy majig
  • [Rookie]
    1. 01:14:066 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - should reconsider this D:. changed a bit.
    2. 01:33:500 (1,2,1) - looks like someone threw a bunch of stuff on top of each other and you can't find the things that are at the bottom of that pile. changed a bit.
    3. Your map is consistent so 02:30:958 - do something with this. no. i like it more my way. thanks, though. I don't want to have boring repeating beats. This wouldn't be fun at all, imo.
thanks for your mod. :3
OEvil
[Hey, From My ♫♪♫♪♫ "OEvil" ♫♪♫♪♫ Modding Queues ]
I Am Sorry If My Mod Sucks
[Skin]
Missing Skin Files
hitcircleoverlay.png
approachcircle.png
reversearrow.png
spinner-clear.png
spinner-spin.png
spinner-osu.png

Skin Dimensions
comboburst-0.png's dimensions must not be larger than 500x767 (currently 640x400).
comboburst-1.png's dimensions must not be larger than 500x767 (currently 640x400).
comboburst-2.png's dimensions must not be larger than 500x767 (currently 640x400).
comboburst-3.png's dimensions must not be larger than 500x767 (currently 640x400).
comboburst-4.png's dimensions must not be larger than 500x767 (currently 640x400).


[Mega]
Breaks
02:48:057 - The break here is 16944 ms long, which is longer than the recommended 15000 ms.

Snapping

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
01:01:227 - snap to 01:01:181
03:19:272 - snap to 03:19:226

[Ultimate]
Snapping

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:12:113 - snap to 00:12:173
00:12:114 - snap to 00:12:173
00:32:709 - snap to 00:32:663
00:45:912 - snap to 00:45:971
01:01:227 - snap to 01:01:181
03:07:443 - snap to 03:07:503
03:19:272 - snap to 03:19:332
Arrival
Hi ! From my queue.


Mega
00:18:299 (2) - This part "slider-only" is fun but i think you can replace some of these slids by circles - not many -, just one or two to spice a bit this moment, this is kind of boring.
00:38:472 (5) - What about something like this ? http://puu.sh/2RfAU.jpg
00:43:859 (2,3,4,5,6) - This isn't symmetric :(
00:47:450 (2) - Offscreen : On play mode, the sliders goes behind the HP bar
00:55:055 (3) - ^
00:58:963 (1) - I suggest to stop the spinner on the previous red tick and put a circle on 01:00:547 -
01:11:426 (5) - Put this a bit down
01:23:150 (3,4,5) - Keep the same distance between these three circles !
01:27:797 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not symmetrical
01:32:444 (1,2,3) - Chenge the spot of your slider ! Make a "reverse selection" on your slider
01:34:979 (2,3,4) - Keep the same distance
02:02:546 (4,5) - ^
02:19:340 (1,2) - Make these two sliders the same : Like this : http://puu.sh/2RfO2.jpg
02:22:720 (3) - Care of offscreens
02:26:627 (3) - A bit confusing
03:11:410 (1) - Put this on white tick i think
03:22:078 (2) - Stack it with 03:20:600 (2) -

Ultimate
00:08:159 (1,2,3,4) - Put this more near from 00:07:948 (8) - , to be consistent
00:17:031 (2,3) - Something like this ? http://puu.sh/2RfX4.jpg
01:07:729 (1,2) - What about.... http://puu.sh/2Rg1k.jpg
02:14:904 (1,2,3,4) - Not symmetrical
02:28:423 (4) - Stack it with the previous slider's end !
03:25:669 (7) - Make a better blanket on 03:24:824 (5) -
03:50:173 (2) - Stack it with 03:49:328 (6) -

Champion
00:03:934 (2) - This slider isn't the same as the others
00:07:314 (3,4,1,2,3) - Why don't you continue with your whistle ?
00:15:764 (5) - Put this down a bit
00:31:818 (1) - Distance spacing
00:39:423 (2) - Make it the same as 00:39:000 (1) -
01:58:638 (6,7) - Make a better blanket with the tail of your slider here
02:07:721 (2) - Stack it with the end of 02:06:454 (1) -
02:32:859 (2,3,4) - Don't you prefer something like this ? http://puu.sh/2RgqJ.jpg
03:22:923 (2,3) - Space it a bit...
03:41:090 (2) - Make the same slider as before

Rookie
Here i just advise you to respect strictly the distance snaping, avoid stack your beats, ans space as more as possible your patterns -like no overlaping sliders etc- In overall, the diff looks good !

Good luck for getting this ranked o/
Topic Starter
Hard

Arrival wrote:

Hi ! From my queue.


Mega
00:18:299 (2) - This part "slider-only" is fun but i think you can replace some of these slids by circles - not many -, just one or two to spice a bit this moment, this is kind of boring. fixed
00:38:472 (5) - What about something like this ? http://puu.sh/2RfAU.jpg fixed
00:43:859 (2,3,4,5,6) - This isn't symmetric :( fixed
00:47:450 (2) - Offscreen : On play mode, the sliders goes behind the HP bar fixed
00:55:055 (3) - ^ fixed
00:58:963 (1) - I suggest to stop the spinner on the previous red tick and put a circle on 01:00:547 - fixed
01:11:426 (5) - Put this a bit down fixed
01:23:150 (3,4,5) - Keep the same distance between these three circles ! fixed
01:27:797 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not symmetrical fixed
01:32:444 (1,2,3) - Chenge the spot of your slider ! Make a "reverse selection" on your slider No, I really like it that way. I wanted to make it a bit tricky there.
01:34:979 (2,3,4) - Keep the same distance fixed
02:02:546 (4,5) - ^ fixed
02:19:340 (1,2) - Make these two sliders the same : Like this : http://puu.sh/2RfO2.jpg 02:19:762 (1) - fixed
02:22:720 (3) - Care of offscreens fixed
02:26:627 (3) - A bit confusing fixed
03:11:410 (1) - Put this on white tick i think No, I'm following the guitar here
03:22:078 (2) - Stack it with 03:20:600 (2) - fixed

Ultimate
00:08:159 (1,2,3,4) - Put this more near from 00:07:948 (8) - , to be consistent fixed
00:17:031 (2,3) - Something like this ? http://puu.sh/2RfX4.jpg fixed
01:07:729 (1,2) - What about.... http://puu.sh/2Rg1k.jpg fixed
02:14:904 (1,2,3,4) - Not symmetrical i don't want them to be symmetrical. I kinda like it a bit.. untidy
02:28:423 (4) - Stack it with the previous slider's end ! fixed
03:25:669 (7) - Make a better blanket on 03:24:824 (5) - fixed... a bit
03:50:173 (2) - Stack it with 03:49:328 (6) -fixed

Champion
00:03:934 (2) - This slider isn't the same as the others fixed somehow...
00:07:314 (3,4,1,2,3) - Why don't you continue with your whistle ? fixed
00:15:764 (5) - Put this down a bit fixed
00:31:818 (1) - Distance spacing fixed
00:39:423 (2) - Make it the same as 00:39:000 (1) - fixed
01:58:638 (6,7) - Make a better blanket with the tail of your slider here fixed
02:07:721 (2) - Stack it with the end of 02:06:454 (1) - fixed in another way.
02:32:859 (2,3,4) - Don't you prefer something like this ? http://puu.sh/2RgqJ.jpg Yes I do. Fixed.
03:22:923 (2,3) - Space it a bit... fixed
03:41:090 (2) - Make the same slider as beforefixed

Rookie
Here i just advise you to respect strictly the distance snaping, avoid stack your beats, ans space as more as possible your patterns -like no overlaping sliders etc- In overall, the diff looks good !

Good luck for getting this ranked o/

Thanks for your great help!

:3
zorefire

ChivaCookie wrote:

zorefire wrote:

From meh queue thingy majig
  • [Rookie]
    1. 01:14:066 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - should reconsider this D:. changed a bit.
    2. 01:33:500 (1,2,1) - looks like someone threw a bunch of stuff on top of each other and you can't find the things that are at the bottom of that pile. changed a bit.
    3. Your map is consistent so 02:30:958 - do something with this. no. i like it more my way. thanks, though. I don't want to have boring repeating beats. This wouldn't be fun at all, imo.
thanks for your mod. :3
np :3
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General

03:20:388 - move this kiai time to 03:19:966 - here
00:25:481 - why breaktime suddenly appeared? awkward imo
01:42:795 - you may know here
00:58:118 - i think you need to change mp3 file because of this part

Rookie

skip this

Champion

  1. i think this diff is really overmapped :/
00:08:793 (2) - delete this, this isn't need
00:33:931 (2,3,4) - this can cuase confusing for beginners
00:57:378 (1,1) - too close, try to avoid this
01:30:121 (2) - touching HP bar
01:37:725 (3) - ^
03:52:074 (1,2,3,4) - same as 00:33:931 (2,3,4) -

Ultimate

00:06:892 (3,7) - add whistle
00:17:665 (3) - need Normal sample set
00:32:663 (3) - repeat arrow should not be hidden
00:32:663 (3) - normal sample set on end
01:09:419 (2) - NC
01:35:613 (5) - touching HP bar
01:56:103 (9) - repeat arrow is hidden
02:13:002 (1) - ^
02:34:338 (5) - touching HP bar
03:25:669 (7) - ^

Mega

00:04:779 (4,5) - delete whistle that ins't fit well with song
00:22:418 (3,4) - i highly recommned to change this notes to 1/4 slider, VERY hard to hit them
00:24:002 (2,3) - ^
00:37:627 (3) - add note here
00:47:767 (3) - well i don't like such as these things ( but that exist all over the map ) try to keep DS lower :/ but it's up to you
00:51:252 (2) - split to two 1/2 sliders? much better
00:54:632 (1,2) - add drum finish
00:58:646 (5,6) - same as 00:22:418 (3,4) -
00:58:857 (1,1) - this is TOO HARD, i know this diff is highest diff, but that is really hard to catch that, plz fix those
01:23:783 (7) - Normal sameple set
01:32:656 (3) - use 1.5x DS
02:20:818 (1) - spinnder is really awkawrd, plz use notes and sliders
02:39:408 (2) - touching HP bar
03:27:993 (2,2) - stack them perfectly?

Good luck~
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ROOKIE

01:06:462 (4) - Ich glaube das kann nicht gerankt werden, der reverse-Pfeil ist unter dem sliderende davor , außerdem ist ist das für Anfänger ziemlich verwirrend :/

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