1. Alone (4,59 stars, 172 notes)
2. With You (2,02 stars, 77 notes)

AnimeStyle wrote:

(Just a suggestion)

00:01:485 - Delete the offsetpoint, it's useless
00:01:693 (1) - Delete this circle Following vocals
01:15:443 - Maybe add a timing section, to short the kiai mode

I hope , I can help you Yeah thanks!

Cherry Blossom wrote:

Hi from #modreqs
My noob mod

[General]
Don't use black as combo color. If more people talk about this i will change
Lead in : 2 or 3s changed to 1500

[Alone]

00:02:110 (1) - Remove NC Piano starts here
00:03:568 (2) - Add NC if you follow the piano Not, but if i have to add nc to follow the piano, i should start the nc in 00:03:776 (3).
00:10:651 (1) - Remove this note and extend 00:09:401 (2) to 00:10:651 I think is more fun like this.
00:12:109 (1,2) - Overlap If more persons complain about this will change
00:32:943 (4) - Too far from the previous circle. made intentionally
01:14:609 (1) - Remove NC I think put a nc here make the map more interesting
01:15:234 (1) - ^ ok


Suggestions :
01:03:776 (1) - Why whistle ? i prefer clap. added clap but not here
01:14:193 (2) - i prefer to remove this slider and add 2 notes i think slider here fits more



Good Luck !

kajiyatta wrote:

M4M from your queue
General
Inconsistence Tags, please fix it. Okay
I suppose you can set Audio-Lead-In better, maybe 1000 or 1500 seems fine. Okay set to 1500
With You
Placement
00:35:443(1,2) make beautiful blanket? Ok

SPOILER

00:40:026(2,1) stack better Ok
01:18:776(1,2,3,1,2) this seems a bit crowded imo, so you can set apart like this? Ok

SPOILER

Rhythm
00:01:693(1) this note seems a bit weird, I suppose to follow the vocal better Ok

SPOILER

00:08:151(3) same suggestion like above Ok

SPOILER

Hit Sonud
01:10:026(2) add clap at end? Ok

Alone
Placement
00:40:401(5,1) this jump seems overmapped I suppose. it's calm song so basaically you can put notes with DS better. I feel a jump is better here and makes a good flow so i will keep.
00:12:734(2) this slider at the beginning isn't visible clearly. Made visible now
00:43:776(3,4,5,6) make beautiful diamond Ok

SPOILER

Rhythm
00:54:609(2) add a reverse to follow the rest of vocal. Ok
Hit Sonud
00:20:234(1) add whistle at end Ok
00:20:859(2) add whistle Ok
00:21:068(3) add whistle at head Ok
00:46:276(4)^ Ok

nice hit sounds pattern. good luck & star~

Zhengster wrote:

m4m from your queue~ Hope my mod is helpful

[With You]
00:37:109 (2) - consider extending the slider to the white tick, so the arrow coincides with the piano in the background, and fix the next slider accordingly I wasn't following the piano here
01:04:609 (3) - slider looks a bit odd Looks fine
01:21:901 (2) - place somewhere else, it doesn't follow anything ? I added nothing here

[Alone]
00:29:818 (3,4,5) - I think this is overmapped, triple doesn't follow anything the music Follows instrumental here so isn't overmapped.
00:36:276 (4) - extend the slider to the red tick to follow the piano music I wasn't following the piano here
00:45:443 (1) - the slider looks out of place No no this is fine
00:54:193 (1) - center this? I think is fine like this
01:14:818 (2) - remove finish Seems empty withouth a one here
01:16:901 (9) - stack on the tail of 01:15:443 (1) Made another thing
01:18:776 (1) - clap on head? Lol no o_o obviously sounds bad here
01:21:693 (2,3) - doiesn't follow music accurately, place somewhere else Yes follow

1. Try to avoid sliders like this 01:04:609 (3) - because it's hard to read for newbie players
2. Put nc here 01:07:109 (6) - for better consistent
3. there is no need to put nc here 01:14:609 (1) -
4. Also try to add a green section here 01:28:568 (1) - with 5% vol. at the end of the spinner. Sounds good, imo.

1. Remove nc 00:15:443 (1) -
2. I think it isn't good idea to place slider like this 00:25:859 (1) -

Tsumetaku wrote:

M4M from your queue~
hope i could help something .w.

[With You]
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00:11:693 (6) - Part Overlap Looks fine to me


[Alone]
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00:20:443 - Maybe use as a reverse to place clap Actual is fine
00:24:401 (6) - Seems like..overlap? No
00:32:734 (3) - Blanket too.? Is intentional
01:16:276 (3) - Perfectly Overlap Already perfect...?

Sorry about just these. i have watched for many times EDIT: wrong word-w-

HabiHolic wrote:

Hi~ from your M4M queue~

[With You]

1. OD-1
2. 00:11:693 (6) - Why Overlap? because I can not think of anywhere else to put this note.
3. 00:40:443 (3) - Try This? Good! fixed
   
   
4. 00:42:109 (1) - Remove Nc NC representing the vocal
5. 00:42:109 (1) - Add Note? There is already a note here
   
   Nice Dff~

[Alone]

1. 00:39:609 (3) - spacing (1.9) yes

Good Luck~
Star +1~

Rotten yellow wrote:

With you

1. Try to avoid sliders like this 01:04:609 (3) - because it's hard to read for newbie players Ok
2. Put nc here 01:07:109 (6) - for better consistent Representing vocals
3. there is no need to put nc here 01:14:609 (1) - ^
4. Also try to add a green section here 01:28:568 (1) - with 5% vol. at the end of the spinner. Sounds good, imo. Fits the bgm so it's fine

Alone

1. Remove nc 00:15:443 (1) - Intentional
2. I think it isn't good idea to place slider like this 00:25:859 (1) - It's fine for me and plays good

Good luck.

Saten wrote:

Hello, sorry for delaying this..

This mod will use the current offset you have

[General]
there's an "r" missing in the tags on the word "ryo" in the difficulty With You

[Alone]
00:19:609 (3,1) - can you somehow reduce the spacing a bit here? The way these sliders are heading at makes the jump really uncomfortable imo. You could make the slider go horizontally instead okay

SPOILER

00:21:484 (4,1) - kinda extreme don't you think? looks fine for me
00:36:276 (4) - why is this snapped to 1/8? It so much better with 1/2 here. It should end at 00:36:693 - i'm following the bgm so it's fine
00:38:568 (3,1) - harsh spacing here as well imo. Try to reduce it to 3,5x or something close to that ok
00:44:609 (6,7) - I don't think you need a jump here. Try something like this instead i like the way of jump works here

SPOILER

00:55:443 (1) - a finish here would fit. perhaps without the clap yes but clap is better
01:01:068 (7,8) - a clap on the tail instead of the start sounds much better imo. Also remove the clap on (8) if you do this effect of the clap here sounds good for me
01:08:047 (3) - I don't think you need this hitcircle here. It's kinda messes with the current flow I don't agree, that stream fits with the song and flow looks good.
01:15:234 (3,1) - can you make the spacing around 1,5x instead? it would feel more natural ok

[With You]
00:17:526 (3,4) - avoid stacking objects if possible. Sometimes it can be hard to judge for a player. It also seems like this is the only stacked object you have in this difficulty
00:55:443 (1) - same as mentioned in Alone Same reason
00:55:443 (1) - also, the overlap with 00:54:609 (2) - looks kinda dull imo. Try to rotate it a bit and then move it up further Okay

SPOILER

01:04:609 (3) - clap on start. did you miss it? Okay



That's all from me
I find it really strange with those jumps you have on Alone, but that might just be me These jumps are fine to me
anyways, good luck with this o/

Andrea wrote:

Timing check as requested from my timing queue.

BPM: 72,00 - Offset: 2.100 (Remember to resnap all notes, green lines, etc.)

Good luck ^^