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Horie Yui - Coloring (TV Size)

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alacat
@Nich

yes, M4M :) I will mod soon !

and fix all my diff >w<

Thank you for modding ;)

~update~

Easy , Hard , Insane :!:
Mikkuri

Nichiyouki wrote:

Mickey's Easy

  1. 00:25:267 (2,3,4) - เรารู้สึกว่าเราไม่ชอบทำพวกนี้เป็นสามเหลี่ยม มันไม่ค่อยเป็นธรรมชาติเมื่อลองเล่นน่ะ ถ้าเป็นไปได้ พยายามแก้ไขให้มันสามารถเล่นได้อย่างเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น ไม่ได้ๆ นี่แหละ style เรา 55 3 เหลี่ยม 4 เหลี่ยม 5 เหลี่ยม มีหมด แต่จะทำให้มัน flow มันก็ติดขอบล่างจริงมั้ย
  2. 00:33:472 (2,3,4,1) - ระยะห่างของ 00:35:523 (4,1) โน๊ตสั้นเกินไป แต่เราเห็นว่ามิกแก้ไขจากม็อดที่แล้วน่ะ TwT นี่เลยไม่ค่อยสำคัญ แต่ถ้าต้องการทำให้ 00:37:062 (1,2,3,4) อยู่กึ่งกลาง ลองทำตามสิ่งที่เราให้มา และเราหวังว่ามันจะดูดีเหมือนกับที่มิกทำนะ แก้ครับแก้ เจ๋งเลย xD ก็อบโค้ดมาแล้วไปวางให้มันสวยอีกทีนึงคงไม่ว่ากันนะ lolol
    480,92,33472,2,0,B|420:64|372:96|372:96|344:76|308:72,1,180,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    220,80,35010,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    204,168,35523,2,0,P|132:112|144:32,1,180,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    220,80,37062,6,0,P|264:92|312:88,1,89.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  3. 00:43:215 (2) - รู้สึกลักษณะของ slider แปลกไปหน่อยน่ะ ลองย้ายไปทางซ้ายและขึ้นอย่างละ 1 ช่อง น่าจะทำให้ (1,2) ดูดีมากขึ้น ซ้ายทีเดียวพอ ขึ้นด้วยมันไม่กลมเท่าไหร่ จากสายตาผมอะนะ
thx mod :3

http://puu.sh/2npxD
Satellite
hi cat~ :3

おもったことをそのままかいていきます・・・

[Insane]
00:03:728 (8) - みづらい位置にあるので? ここの 00:04:241 - 1の上にスタックしてみては?
00:05:780 (7) - ctrl+G?
00:12:959 (3) - 次の 00:13:472 (4) - ここと同じように少し曲げてあげると綺麗に見えました
00:16:805 (1,2,3,4,5) - このあたりの音取りについてこんな感じとか・・・?

00:18:856 (1,2,3) - こんな音とりのほうがあってるようなきがしました

00:37:574 (2,3) - 位置を逆にしたほうが流れが綺麗なような?

[wring's Hard]
00:38:087 - add note?
00:57:574 (1) - nazi x136 y192あたりどうですか?

[-kevincela-'s Normal]
00:17:574 (2) - try this here

and Placement my idea

01:30:139 - forget add note?

[Mickey's Easy]
looks fine~

good mapset and awesome diff <3

Good luck~
-kevincela-
Thank you guys, most of the mods have been fixed! I forgot what I have changed though, so I can't give a proper response :P

SPOILER
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Title:Coloring (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Coloring (TV Size)
Artist:Horie Yui
ArtistUnicode:堀江由衣
Creator:alacat
Version:-kevincela-'s Normal
Source:Papa no Iukoto wo Kikinasai!
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Topic Starter
alacat
@Satellite

Thank you for modding ;)

Easy ~ Normal ~ Insane

update :!:
mochi
うー
Topic Starter
alacat
Thanks! super mochi :D
IRC log
04:19 *alacat is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/231311 Horie Yui - Coloring (TV Size)]
04:20 mochi: kuru kuru mawaru
04:20 alacat: mochi kuru kuru
04:24 alacat: :o
04:24 mochi: gomen
04:24 mochi: dc sita
04:25 alacat: okaeri :3
04:25 mochi: good map gozaru
04:25 alacat: sessya uresii de gozaru
04:25 alacat: offset ha no problem ?
04:26 mochi: daijyoubu
04:26 mochi: mondainai
04:32 alacat: a, situmon ga arimasu
04:32 *alacat is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/210161 Horie Yui - Coloring (TV Size) [Insane]]
04:32 mochi: naniii~?
04:32 alacat: 01:05:010 (1,2,3) - koko yarinikui kana ?
04:33 mochi: daijyoubu to omou
04:33 alacat: yokatta :D
04:36 alacat: mochi san
04:36 alacat: sukosi IRC mod hosii desu :3
04:37 alacat: Insane dake
04:37 mochi: syouganai naaa
04:37 mochi: insane dake dayoo
04:37 alacat: waaaaaaai
04:40 mochi: aa modding muzukasii :(
04:40 alacat: ww
04:41 alacat: IRC ha muzukasii ne :3
04:42 mochi: 00:49:369 - koko kiai fountain iinjyanai?
04:43 alacat: a
04:43 alacat: wasure teta ww
04:43 alacat: arigatou !
04:44 alacat: ok desu
04:45 mochi: kiai fountain to kiai no tigai sitteru?
04:45 alacat: cyotto kiai
04:45 mochi: un tyotto kiai w
04:45 alacat: ww
04:45 alacat: pika☆
04:49 mochi: 01:07:831 (2,3) - tikai to omou
04:50 alacat: ok :D
04:51 mochi: gomennasaiiii
04:51 mochi: modding wakannai
04:51 alacat: ww
04:51 alacat: 2tu fix simasita
04:51 alacat: :D
04:52 alacat: mod arigatooooo :3
04:52 mochi: ;w;
lolcubes
SPOILER
22:58 alacat: I ask you to test play >.<
22:59 lolcubes: sure
22:59 alacat: :D Thanks
22:59 alacat: it is TV Size :3!
22:59 *alacat is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/210161 Horie Yui - Coloring (TV Size)]
23:01 lolcubes: i can't see anything with video
23:01 lolcubes: :D
23:01 lolcubes: haha
23:02 alacat: xD
23:03 lolcubes: it's pretty nice but the later part is really hard to read
23:04 lolcubes: you used the same spacing for 1/2 and 1/4 at times hehe
23:04 alacat: offset >.<
23:05 alacat: hmhm , I will add new combo at 1/4 part :D
23:05 lolcubes: nah
23:05 lolcubes: combo is fine
23:05 lolcubes: sec ill show you
23:05 lolcubes: 00:05:267 (6) -
23:06 lolcubes: if you make this shorter
23:06 lolcubes: it sounds better
23:06 lolcubes: 00:05:523 - good rhythm sound here
23:07 lolcubes: 00:26:164 - missing a note for the vocals, i think it's nice to have
23:07 lolcubes: (you have it here 00:30:267 (6) - )
23:07 lolcubes: 00:34:369 - this one too, this one should be a jump too imo
23:07 alacat: emm.. I like this part ;w; 00:05:267 (6) -
23:07 lolcubes: i am just telling you what i think
23:08 alacat: ok :D
23:08 lolcubes: 00:52:959 (3) - this is really hard to read and it doesn't fit imo
23:08 lolcubes: you should make a jump
23:08 lolcubes: ehh sorr
23:08 lolcubes: y
23:08 lolcubes: 00:52:446 (1) - this note
23:09 lolcubes: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/672724 this position would be best in my opinion
23:09 lolcubes: you just need to reposition 00:52:703 (2,3) - a little then so it looks better
23:09 lolcubes: 00:53:985 (4) - this should have bigger spacing
23:10 lolcubes: 1.6~1.7 from both next and previous i think
23:10 alacat: yes I think so too ! stack on here 00:53:215 (1) - !
23:10 lolcubes: 00:55:139 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i think this can be better
23:10 lolcubes: let me explain why
23:11 lolcubes: 00:55:139 (1,2,3,4) - i don't like this spacing, it's misleading, you should make it bigger between each note
23:11 lolcubes: the reason is
23:11 lolcubes: those notes confuse people about 00:55:908 (5) - and all other similar circles
23:11 lolcubes: i would probably do something like increments
23:12 lolcubes: 1->2 ok spacing, 2->3 bigger, 3->4 bigger, etc
23:12 lolcubes: because the slider 4 has a lot of intensity on it
23:12 lolcubes: just something to consider
23:12 lolcubes: else just make different spacing imo :D
23:12 alacat: oh :o fix !
23:12 lolcubes: 00:56:933 - you should really map this here, the whole combo follows the vocals
23:12 lolcubes: and you miss it here
23:12 lolcubes: that's really hard to notice
23:12 lolcubes: and can be confusing
23:13 lolcubes: 00:57:062 (9) - maybe just move this to 00:56:933 -
23:13 lolcubes: it would play best
23:13 lolcubes: having a long stream would kill the rhythm here hehe
23:14 lolcubes: 01:05:010 (1,2,3) - maybe use lower spacing?
23:14 lolcubes: for these
23:14 lolcubes: just so they are not mistaken for 1/4
23:14 alacat: follow clap here ;w; hmm...
23:14 alacat: ok !
23:14 lolcubes: yeah but it's bad to stop following the vocals mid way
23:14 lolcubes: :<
23:15 alacat: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/672731
23:15 alacat: :D
23:15 lolcubes: yeah that's much better :D
23:15 lolcubes: 01:13:472 (7) - same thing here, it's not nice to stop following the vocals just like that
23:16 lolcubes: if you really want to express those claps you will have to map 01:13:087 - this here
23:16 lolcubes: cause rhythm happens here
23:16 alacat: Thanks ! I was worried about it ><
23:16 lolcubes: however that also makes it different
23:16 lolcubes: you need to split the vocals and rhythm then
23:16 lolcubes: so the player can understand what you follow
23:16 lolcubes: i would still think it's probably best to just follow the vocals
23:16 lolcubes: since they are most interesting here :>
23:17 lolcubes: 01:17:062 (1) - this should have a lot bigger spacing compared to the previous note
23:17 lolcubes: the vocal changes pitch drastically
23:17 lolcubes: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/672732 something like this looks nice
23:18 alacat: 01:17:062 (1) - ok :D
23:18 lolcubes: rest is good!
23:18 lolcubes: :3
23:18 alacat: Thank you so much !! :3
23:18 lolcubes: no problem :3
23:20 alacat: a, I'm very worried about offset ;w;
23:20 lolcubes: oh
23:20 lolcubes: yeah i can check
23:20 lolcubes: one moment
23:20 alacat: Thanks !!
23:22 lolcubes: +7
23:22 alacat: ok :D
23:23 lolcubes: let me just double check
23:24 alacat: :o roger :3
23:25 lolcubes: yeah +7
23:25 lolcubes: 146 :3
23:26 alacat: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/672751
23:26 alacat: perfect :D
23:26 lolcubes: :D
23:26 alacat: Thanks :3
23:27 lolcubes: np :3
23:27 alacat: I want to give you kudosu ><
23:27 alacat: many many help :D
23:27 lolcubes: i can post a log if you wish

:3
Topic Starter
alacat
Thank you so much about timing help , modding and star :)

/o/ lol \o\ cubes :3
UnitedWeSin
Hi hi
Modding as request. Maybe M4M? :>

Why you no map full version? ;_;

Ignore my mod, it's bad.

[先生's Insane]

  1. 00:23:222 (2,3) - I feel that the two mini sliders don't play that great here. They are hard to read because they don't really fit anything in the music. I think it would be better to add a repeat to the 2 and have a circle at 00:23:735 instead to start the jumping pattern earlier.

  2. 00:41:171 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Some of the biggest jumping in the map, but this is supposed to be the slow section. Also at 00:44:248 (5,6,7,8). It's not a huge problem or anything, it just takes away from the chorus when it starts at 00:49:376 because we have lesser spacing there. You could consider trying to make the slow section a little bit more "slow" so that the chorus is more intense. :>

  3. 00:50:402 (3) - It's probably just me, but I think a jump to this slider follows the vocals better. Try placing it farther away and having flow reverse.

  4. 00:54:504 (5) - ^ More of a jump would be better imo.

  5. 01:00:915 - I really don't like this gap because the music is still so active, it's not calling for such a large gap. Consider having the 00:59:889 (3,4) flow upwards and then making a rhythm like this:

  6. 01:21:171 - This part is the end of the kiai and should be epic as it is in the music imo. Why do you reduce SV here and not at 01:22:197 when the music slows down? I think you could make this section more intense to build up to the downbeat at 01:22:197.
[Wring's Hard]

  1. 00:30:915 (1) - The normal finish here is way too much. I suggest a drum finish, or nothing at all.

  2. 00:51:428 (1) - The rhythm was a bit strange imo. Consider something like this:

    Hits nicely with the vocals and can continue your pattern there.

  3. 00:54:504 (3,4,1,2) - Try and make a rhythm that plays along with the vocals nicely like you do later in the song also.

    I think the mini sliders work well with the vocals. And I moved the NC back to where the vocals switch from soft to loud again.

  4. 00:59:248 (7) - I'd prefer for it not to be curved at all, and to be at the same angle as the 01:00:017 (2).

  5. 01:03:735 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - It would be nicer if we could have a more smooth flow from the 01:04:761 01:04:761 (5) to the 01:05:017 (1). Try giving the 01:03:735 (1,2,3,4,5) more of a curve so that we could have that.

  6. 01:20:915 (4,5) - I think it might be better if the 5 shared the same spacing as the 01:20:145 (1,2,3,4). It feels strange becase the 1-4 are building up to it but it has lesser spacing.

  7. 01:07:453 (5,1) - Same point as 00:51:428 (1). It's not fitting very well to the vocals, it would be better if the repeating slider were at 01:07:453. If you change the rhythm before, consider the same rhythm here.
[Kevin's Normal]

  1. 00:17:581 (2) - The rhythm for this slider feels strange imo because it's not specifically following a vocal phrase that hits in 1/4 like the 00:19:633 (2,3) are. Maybe expend it so that it ends at 00:18:607.

  2. 00:29:889 (3) - Consider ctrl-G here. It makes for a nicer flowing pattern, and it makes it a different pattern from the 00:26:812 (1,2,3) that we just played so it adds some spice. You would have to rearrange the next combo a bit.

  3. 00:37:581 (2) - Since the mapset has an easy diff you, you could consider making the rhythm here more complicated. The 2/1 slider might be a bit "meh" for normal players, especially with how active the vocals are in this section.
It's good but it feels more like an easy diff to me. ._. Maybe adding the easy so late wasn't such a great a idea.

[Mickey's Easy]

  1. 00:17:069 (2) - Do you have to do that? -.- I'd say either make a more interesting rhythm or make the slider more interesting. Here's a possible rhythm:

  2. 01:22:710 (2) - I'd move it to the left slightly so that it's not touching the 01:20:145 (3) at all as it appears.

  3. 01:29:376 (4) - Consider making it two circles instead. Fits the music better imo and makes for a nicer ending to the map when we click something at 01:29:889.
Ok, awesome mapset. :>
Sorry my mod is bad, I can't find anything wrong and I love your insane diffs.
Star*
Mikkuri

UnitedWeSin wrote:

[Mickey's Easy]

  1. 00:17:069 (2) - Do you have to do that? -.- I'd say either make a more interesting rhythm or make the slider more interesting. Here's a possible rhythm: I'm lazy to do that lol

  2. 01:22:710 (2) - I'd move it to the left slightly so that it's not touching the 01:20:145 (3) at all as it appears. It's okay :3

  3. 01:29:376 (4) - Consider making it two circles instead. Fits the music better imo and makes for a nicer ending to the map when we click something at 01:29:889. It's ok because I'm lazy :3
Diasios
Mod Infos:

Suggestion.
You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

General

  • Wow, so many combo colors, are they really necessary? I know that the title of this song is "Coloring" but if I were you I'd use only 3/4.

Mickey's Easy

  • HP Drain Rate: 2
    Overall Difficulty: 2
    There's no video in this diff, add it.
    00:17:069 (2) - Why 2 repeats here? Remove 1 then start a slider at 00:19:633 and end it at 00:20:146. (or just add two circles)
    01:05:274 (4) - Move this circle at x:336 y:208 for a better flow.
    01:29:376 (4) - Try this pattern:

-kevincela-'s Normal

  • I'm going to write in italian, if you want a translation just ask.
    Aumenta HP Drain Rate e Overall Difficulty di uno, trovo che mettendoli a 4 si crei uno spread migliore con la easy e la hard, inoltre si adattano meglio alla diff.
    00:21:684 (3) - Questi slider che finiscono nei tick blu diventano noiosi dopo un pò, prova a variare ritmo usando questa pattern:
    00:23:735 (3) - Stessa cosa qui.
    00:28:863 (1,2,3) - Dovresti usare la stessa pattern (ergo cerchio, 1/2 slider e 1/1 slider) che hai usato a 00:24:761 per tenere una consistenza.
    00:49:376 (1) - Evita l'overlap, magari prova a modificare questo slider rendendolo simile a quello precedente. (se vuoi tenerlo così allora fai in modo che il cerchio si trovi a metà slider)
    01:25:274 (2) - Capovolgilo verticalmente per migliorare il flow.

wring's Hard

  • Why HP Drain Rate 4? Increase it to 6.
    Approach Rate 7 fits this diff better imo.
    Overall Difficulty: 6
    00:23:735 (1) - I don't like this slider, try to make it like this:
    00:51:043 (5,1) - Try this pattern:
    01:07:453 (5,1) - Same thing here.
    01:11:299 (4) - End this slider 1/4 earlier and add a circle at 01:11:684.
    01:22:453 (1) - Try this spacing:

Insane

  • HP Drain Rate: 7
    00:20:915 (1,2,3) - Try this pattern:

Really nice beatmap, make sure everyone checked every mod and call me back for a recheck.
Mikkuri

xxheroxx wrote:

Mickey's Easy

  • HP Drain Rate: 2 fixed
    Overall Difficulty: 2 fixed
    There's no video in this diff, add it. fixed
    00:17:069 (2) - Why 2 repeats here? Remove 1 then start a slider at 00:19:633 and end it at 00:20:146. (or just add two circles) no change
    01:05:274 (4) - Move this circle at x:336 y:208 for a better flow. no change
    01:29:376 (4) - Try this pattern: no change
because I'M LAZY LOLOLOLOL

http://puu.sh/2pf2h
UnitedWeSin
Lol I love you Mickey. <3
Mikkuri

UnitedWeSin wrote:

Lol I love you Mickey. <3
me?
Topic Starter
alacat
>UnitedWeSin

Thank you for modding ;)

xxheroxx wrote:

Mod Infos:

Suggestion.
You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

General

  • Wow, so many combo colors, are they really necessary? I know that the title of this song is "Coloring" but if I were you I'd use only 3/4. yes, This is Colorong :D and I use all color my diff so keep on now about it :3
Insane

  • HP Drain Rate: 7 ok
    00:20:915 (1,2,3) - Try this pattern: no change.
Really nice beatmap, make sure everyone checked every mod and call me back for a recheck. ok :3 waiting for Normal and Hard :)
Thank you for modding !
-kevincela-

xxheroxx wrote:

-kevincela-'s Normal

  • I'm going to write in italian, if you want a translation just ask.
    Aumenta HP Drain Rate e Overall Difficulty di uno, trovo che mettendoli a 4 si crei uno spread migliore con la easy e la hard, inoltre si adattano meglio alla diff. Hai ragione,prima avevo ridotto visto che in teoria questa doveva essere la diff più facile del mapset.
    00:21:684 (3) - Questi slider che finiscono nei tick blu diventano noiosi dopo un pò, prova a variare ritmo usando questa pattern:
    00:23:735 (3) - Stessa cosa qui. Sorry,ma preferisco entrambi così... Non li trovo così noiosi come li trovi tu :U
    00:28:863 (1,2,3) - Dovresti usare la stessa pattern (ergo cerchio, 1/2 slider e 1/1 slider) che hai usato a 00:24:761 per tenere una consistenza. Qui non volevo tenere la consistenza, preferivo piuttosto usare questo pattern in quanto secondo me flowwa piuttosto bene con il resto dei pattern
    00:49:376 (1) - Evita l'overlap, magari prova a modificare questo slider rendendolo simile a quello precedente. (se vuoi tenerlo così allora fai in modo che il cerchio si trovi a metà slider) Messo il cerchio a metà slider
    01:25:274 (2) - Capovolgilo verticalmente per migliorare il flow.Fatto
I fixed part of UnitedWeSin's mod as well, thank you both! :D

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wring

Nichiyouki wrote:

wring's Hard

  1. 00:03:215 (3) - I prefer move 2nd to left by this picture which it will be more smoothly to play imo. fix a little
  2. 00:30:908 (1) - Hitsound you put on this note is normal-finish. Please change addition is drum to change hitsound is drum-finish. turn down lower
  3. 00:41:164 (1) - I hear the cymbals in rhythm here. So add finish on slider begin, or you can remove clap on that. k
  4. 00:50:780 (4,1) - I know that you made these by the rhythm, but I really feel weird. I think make by this will be better imo. already have changed
  5. 01:03:728 (1,2,3,4,5) - The playing on (5,1) may not to play smoothly imo, but I think that move (1) to x:144 y:88. Then make by these picture and code. It will be more smoothly. changed a little
    144,88,63728,5,8,0:0:0:0:
    132,172,63985,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    156,252,64241,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    224,304,64497,1,0,3:0:0:0:
    308,312,64754,1,8,0:0:0:0:
  6. 01:07:466 (5,1) - This, too. Maybe make by the picture above.no

Satellite wrote:

[wring's Hard]
00:38:087 - add note? no
00:57:574 (1) - nazi x136 y192あたりどうですか? k

UnitedWeSin wrote:

[Wring's Hard]

  1. 00:30:915 (1) - The normal finish here is way too much. I suggest a drum finish, or nothing at all. turn down lower

  2. 00:51:428 (1) - The rhythm was a bit strange imo. Consider something like this:

    Hits nicely with the vocals and can continue your pattern there.

  3. 00:54:504 (3,4,1,2) - Try and make a rhythm that plays along with the vocals nicely like you do later in the song also. I know you mentioned, but it's not my intention so no-change

    I think the mini sliders work well with the vocals. And I moved the NC back to where the vocals switch from soft to loud again.

  4. 00:59:248 (7) - I'd prefer for it not to be curved at all, and to be at the same angle as the 01:00:017 (2). change a little


  5. 01:03:735 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - It would be nicer if we could have a more smooth flow from the 01:04:761 01:04:761 (5) to the 01:05:017 (1). Try giving the 01:03:735 (1,2,3,4,5) more of a curve so that we could have that. already have changed another type


  6. 01:20:915 (4,5) - I think it might be better if the 5 shared the same spacing as the 01:20:145 (1,2,3,4). It feels strange becase the 1-4 are building up to it but it has lesser spacing. sorry it's weird for me


  7. 01:07:453 (5,1) - Same point as 00:51:428 (1). It's not fitting very well to the vocals, it would be better if the repeating slider were at 01:07:453. If you change the rhythm before, consider the same rhythm here.^

xxheroxx wrote:

wring's Hard

  • Why HP Drain Rate 4? Increase it to 6. to 5
    Approach Rate 7 fits this diff better imo. k
    Overall Difficulty: 6 k
    00:23:735 (1) - I don't like this slider, try to make it like this: sorry no changed
    00:51:043 (5,1) - Try this pattern: no change. I said the reason in previous modding.
    01:07:453 (5,1) - Same thing here. ^
    01:11:299 (4) - End this slider 1/4 earlier and add a circle at 01:11:684. ok
    01:22:453 (1) - Try this spacing: no, I like this form sorry

thanks mod

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Topic Starter
alacat
update all diff :)
Diasios

0OoMickeyoO0 wrote:

because I'M LAZY LOLOLOLOL



Anyway, checked again this mapset and everything's fine, good job!
Kawayi Rika
Checked and nothing to say ~ Really awesome map ~

Horie Yui moe <3 here you go <3


Topic Starter
alacat
Thanks Rika chan and xxheroxx :oops: :oops: :oops:
Andrea
Omedetou alacat~
maaagic
おめでとうございます!
YTYuyu
uwaaaa Sugoi~ <3

omedeto ala-chan :D
Rare
おっぱい
wring
8-)
Fumika
Gratz :D !
Flask
\u/!
Frostmourne
congratz alacat \^^/
Guy
gratz :)
Dark_Ai
omedeto ~
P o M u T a
gratz~
Nichiyouki
yay~ congrats alacat :)
BeatofIke
omedeto ~ moecat :3
CXu
Omedetou ><
UnitedWeSin
Too pro :D
-kevincela-
\:D/
Flanster
hoLysoup
congrats desu! :>
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