Satou Rina, Inoue Marina & Chihara Minori - Shiawase High Te · forum

N E K O

Joined September 2010

Topic Starter

N E K O 2013-02-13T10:05:02+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年5月9日 at 14:57:12

Artist: Satou Rina, Inoue Marina & Chihara Minori
Title: Shiawase High Tension (TV Size)
Source: Minami-ke Tadaima
Tags: opening haruka kana chiaki Strawberry Amamiya Yuko skystar
BPM: 170
Filesize: 9728kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:

Easy (2.34 stars, 85 notes)
Insane (4.87 stars, 334 notes)
Normal (4.18 stars, 134 notes)
Skystar's Insane (5 stars, 301 notes)
SRY's Hard (4.83 stars, 227 notes)

Download: Satou Rina, Inoue Marina & Chihara Minori - Shiawase High Tension (TV Size)
Download: Satou Rina, Inoue Marina & Chihara Minori - Shiawase High Tension (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
みなみけ　ただいま！
> </~~
Redownload if you download before Thur May 9, 2013.
SRY's Hard by Strawberry
Skystar's Insane by Amamiya Yuko
others by me.
Insane Hitsound by Amamiya Yuko

SPOILER

Thanks for all your help
----------------MOD help----------------
Strawberry
litoluna
Ar3sgice
lkx_Shore
Banana
Amamiya Yuko
Kirino Kousaka
Andrea
Entreal
smallboat
Makyu
Colin Hou
Xagrok
blackabyss
GGBY
elinia
kajiyatta
ampzz
LunarSakuya
LKs
popner
--------------------Test Play--------------------
LyWang
sherring
reflectioon
BRaveSong

Last edited by N E K O 2013-05-11T03:03:31+00:00, edited 92 times in total.

Strawberry

osu! Alumni

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Joined October 2010

Strawberry 2013-02-13T10:05:35+00:00

edit:
~Timing~
BPM: 170.00 Offset: 1204

call me recheck if you changed mp3 file.

fine

Last edited by Strawberry 2013-02-17T14:20:07+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

N E K O

159 posts

Joined September 2010

Topic Starter

N E K O 2013-02-13T13:40:12+00:00

Strawberry wrote:
;)

edit:
~Timing~
BPM: 170.00 Offset: 1204

call me recheck if you changed mp3 file.

MP3 file changed to TV Size

litoluna

1,074 posts

Joined April 2011

litoluna 2013-02-23T07:43:32+00:00

hello~
I play because it was a favorite song　:)

[General]

BGのサイズは4:3が好ましいです。こちらで用意してみましたので良ければお使いください。http://puu.sh/26T75
Audio lead-inを1500に統一しましょう。(all diff) You change all of the diff of AudioLeadIn is 1500
無音のsoft-sliderslideを追加することをおすすめします。ほとんどの譜面にはこれがはいっており、
　スライダーのときの”ｼｭｰ”という音が聞こえなくなります。http://puu.sh/1Q39g
EasyのEnable countdownのチェックを外しましょう

idea:
[Easy]

00:09:978 (1) - spinerの入りが早い気がします。00:09:978からでどうでしょうか
00:42:801 (1) - remove NC In Easy,Normal 1combo finish so not good.
EasyやNormalでは1comboで終わるのはあまり良くないとおもいます。
00:42:801 (1) - ^
01:00:448 (1) - ^
01:02:566 (1) - ^

全体的にDSを統一したほうが良いと思いました。

[Normal]

00:05:566 (3) - 00:05:919 (4) - 少し離れ過ぎだと思います。DSを気にして配置すると良いかもしれません。
全体的にDSを統一したほうが良いと思いました。

[Hardry]

I think fine.

[Insane]

00:12:096 (2) - 00:11:566 (1)のSliderの終端にしっかりStackさせましょう
00:25:331 (2) - ^
00:26:566 (3,4) - ^
00:32:125 (2,3) - ^
緑線をしっかりSnapしましょう

[Skystar's Insane]

I think fine.

Nice song!
gl

You can kudosu this post if you wish.

Last edited by litoluna 2013-02-23T17:03:07+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

N E K O

159 posts

Joined September 2010

Topic Starter

N E K O 2013-02-23T15:43:34+00:00

litoluna wrote:
hello~
I play because it was a favorite song　:)

----I like all the opening of Minamike :3,especially this one . Anyway, thanks a lot

[General]
BGのサイズは4:3が好ましいです。こちらで用意してみましたので良ければお使いください。http://puu.sh/26T75
----Thanks, it feels better now.
Audio lead-inを1500に統一しましょう。(all diff) You change all of the diff of AudioLeadIn is 1500
---fixed
無音のsoft-sliderslideを追加することをおすすめします。ほとんどの譜面にはこれがはいっており、
　スライダーのときの”ｼｭｰ”という音が聞こえなくなります。http://puu.sh/1Q39g
---added normal-sliderslide.wav
EasyのEnable countdownのチェックを外しましょう
---外しましだ ~

idea:
[Easy]
00:09:978 (1) - spinerの入りが早い気がします。00:09:978からでどうでしょうか ---i moved it to 00:10:331 (1) -
00:42:801 (1) - remove NC In Easy,Normal 1combo finish so not good. ---fixed
EasyやNormalでは1comboで終わるのはあまり良くないとおもいます。 ---I got it.
00:42:801 (1) - ^ ---fixed
01:00:448 (1) - ^ ---fixed
01:02:566 (1) - ^ ---fixed

全体的にDSを統一したほうが良いと思いました。
I rechecked and fixed them already;
[Normal]
00:05:566 (3) - 00:05:919 (4) - 少し離れ過ぎだと思います。DSを気にして配置すると良いかもしれません。 I rechecked and fixed them already;
全体的にDSを統一したほうが良いと思いました。
I rechecked and fixed them already;
[Hardry]
I think fine.
[Insane]
00:12:096 (2) - 00:11:566 (1)のSliderの終端にしっかりStackさせましょう ---fixed
00:25:331 (2) - ^ ---fixed;
00:26:566 (3,4) - ^ ---fixed;
00:32:125 (2,3) - ^ ---fixed;
緑線をしっかりSnapしましょう

---fixed;

[Skystar's Insane]
I think fine.
Nice song!
gl

Thanks a looooooooooot for your mod help

[CSGA]Ar3sgice

4,298 posts

Joined July 2011

[CSGA]Ar3sgice 2013-02-24T09:19:51+00:00

星神好wwwwww

General

source... rank的图好像都填的romaji 以后应该会出sourceunicode吧 233

Hardy

00:13:507 (2) - 这个往上一点 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/627431
00:21:625 (1) - 中间的空间太小了, 建议是这样包住 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/627432
00:50:566 (3) - 这地方打到kiai的时候刚好喷进去, 建议是把这里两个滑条转一下
01:04:331 (3,4) - 其实有点不好打, 不是很特别的地方所以还是原来的间距吧
01:13:154 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/627436

Skystar's Insane

new combo可以不放那么多..
00:10:860 (1) - 这个ctrl+G反过来比较好
00:18:448 (7) - 往外拉点看不清
00:27:625 - 这里可以多加几个note, 有点空...
01:03:978 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/627442
01:11:831 (5) - 5往外两格

Insane

00:02:213 (1) - 去new combo
00:05:566 (1,2,1,2) - 两边一个是1/2一个是1/1, 间距一样大, 容易读错断掉, 把后面的间距拉大点, 或者1/1的滑条
00:18:978 (2) - 去掉吧
00:41:037 (1) - 去掉new combo加到2
01:21:978 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这里不错233
01:08:566 (5,6) - 摆整齐点, 放成菱形吧0.0
不是变速的话最好不要一个note一组combo 0.0 滑条很多都有点太弯, 拉直一点比较好
还有就是1/2的那些地方可以多加些串ww

Normal

00:12:096 (2) - 间距呢
00:31:860 (1) - remove new combo
00:32:919 (4) - normal最好别这么放, 因为看不出是往哪边
00:44:743 (3) - 间距1.2
00:54:978 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/627477
01:13:684 (3) - 1.2
01:25:331 (4) - 到 01:25:860 停下

Easy

0,0 easy没啥能mod的
01:01:154 (1,2,3) -
01:12:448 (1,2,3) -
01:19:507 (3,1) - 这种两个slider的可以的话就做对称
有点太乱, combo别单放0,0

然后是别人mod之后点下左边绿色的的give kudosu

一般是改了东西的mod就给下, 嗯

N E K O

159 posts

Joined September 2010

Topic Starter

N E K O 2013-02-24T11:44:10+00:00

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:
星神好wwwwww

General

source... rank的图好像都填的romaji 以后应该会出sourceunicode吧 233
---改成罗马音了;w;

Insane

00:02:213 (1) - 去new combo ---fixed
00:05:566 (1,2,1,2) - 两边一个是1/2一个是1/1, 间距一样大, 容易读错断掉, 把后面的间距拉大点, 或者1/1的滑条 ---好的
00:18:978 (2) - 去掉吧 ---好
00:41:037 (1) - 去掉new combo加到2 ---fixed
01:21:978 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这里不错233 :3
01:08:566 (5,6) - 摆整齐点, 放成菱形吧0.0 ---fixed
不是变速的话最好不要一个note一组combo 0.0 滑条很多都有点太弯, 拉直一点比较好 ---暂时先保持这样看看.
还有就是1/2的那些地方可以多加些串ww
00:29:390 (1) -
00:57:625 (3) -
尝试着加了两处.

Normal

00:12:096 (2) - 间距呢 ---fixed
00:31:860 (1) - remove new combo ---fixed
00:32:919 (4) - normal最好别这么放, 因为看不出是往哪边 ---fixed
00:44:743 (3) - 间距1.2 ---fixed
00:54:978 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/627477 ---added
01:13:684 (3) - 1.2 ---fixed
01:25:331 (4) - 到 01:25:860 停下 ---fixed

Easy

0,0 easy没啥能mod的
01:01:154 (1,2,3) -
01:12:448 (1,2,3) -
01:19:507 (3,1) - 这种两个slider的可以的话就做对称 ---嗯
有点太乱, combo别单放0,0 ---好的

然后是别人mod之后点下左边绿色的的give kudosu

一般是改了东西的mod就给下, 嗯
---ok

多谢啦0w0

Strawberry

osu! Alumni

1,536 posts

Joined October 2010

Strawberry 2013-02-24T12:11:20+00:00

all fixed

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Shiawase Hightension (TV Size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 49095
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8

[Metadata]
Title:Shiawase Hai Tenshon(TV Size)
TitleUnicode:シアワセ☆ハイテンション↑↑(TV Size)
Artist:Satou Rina,Inoue Marina,Chihara Minori
ArtistUnicode:南春香(佐藤利奈),南夏奈(井上麻里奈),南千秋(茅原実里)
Creator:N E K O
Version:Hardy
Source:Minamike tadaima
Tags:minamike tadaima minami haruka minami kana minami chiaki Strawberry
BeatmapID:220514
BeatmapSetID:78822

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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173,246,38566,6,0,P|244:254|309:295,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
358,351,39096,1,0,0:0:0:0:
486,243,39448,1,0,0:0:0:0:
465,161,39625,1,8,0:0:0:0:
422,88,39801,2,0,P|349:58|288:22,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
279,110,40331,2,0,P|315:133|361:151,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
285,208,40684,1,2,0:0:0:0:
231,272,40860,1,0,0:0:0:0:
313,286,41037,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,351,41213,1,0,0:0:0:0:
231,272,41390,6,0,P|195:204|151:153,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
74,183,41919,2,0,P|124:239|161:301,1,140
81,329,42448,1,8,0:0:0:0:
244,288,42801,1,2,0:0:0:0:
324,313,42978,1,0,0:0:0:0:
394,358,43154,1,8,0:0:0:0:
455,300,43331,2,0,P|478:233|479:158,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
450,85,43860,2,0,P|405:107|368:113,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
302,121,44213,6,0,P|233:90|154:88,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,163,44743,2,0,P|128:171|58:208,1,140
81,281,45272,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,254,45448,2,0,P|233:239|310:248,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
377,273,45978,1,8,0:0:0:0:
447,318,46154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
485,243,46331,2,0,P|500:212|508:170,2,70,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
422,186,46860,2,0,P|443:118|446:45,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
366,78,47390,6,0,P|331:81|299:108,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
291,184,47743,2,0,P|313:208|351:221,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
423,186,48096,2,0,P|440:152|432:112,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
366,78,48448,5,4,0:0:0:0:
291,184,48625,1,4,0:0:0:0:
423,186,48801,1,4,0:0:0:0:
291,184,49154,5,2,0:0:0:0:
217,224,49331,1,0,0:0:0:0:
133,230,49507,1,2,0:0:0:0:
55,197,49684,1,0,0:0:0:0:
18,121,49860,6,0,P|12:85|-14:40,2,70,4|0|8,1:2|2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
55,197,50390,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,280,50566,2,0,P|69:317|92:353,2,70,0|0|8,0:0|2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
55,197,51096,2,0,P|129:167|212:150,2,140,0|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,280,51978,2,0,P|142:291|212:315,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
362,255,52684,6,0,P|392:232|410:203,1,70,0|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
328,179,53037,2,0,P|346:144|347:102,1,70,8|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
264,119,53390,2,0,P|268:83|258:45,2,70,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
243,200,53919,2,0,P|234:275|251:341,2,140,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,129,54801,1,0,0:0:0:0:
171,164,54978,1,2,2:0:0:0:
201,53,55154,1,10,0:0:0:0:
288,129,55331,1,2,2:0:0:0:
365,159,55507,6,0,P|403:153|430:138,1,70,0|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
358,15,55860,2,0,P|356:51|369:85,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
498,26,56213,2,0,P|460:32|433:47,1,70,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
373,107,56566,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,129,56743,1,0,0:0:0:0:
210,98,56919,2,0,P|170:81|149:57,2,70,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,129,57448,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,163,57625,2,0,P|404:180|425:204,2,70,2|0|8,2:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
199,201,58331,6,0,P|147:252|113:320,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
199,323,58860,1,0,0:0:0:0:
99,187,59213,1,0,0:0:0:0:
217,67,59566,2,0,P|287:53|366:61,1,140,4|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
431,94,60096,1,2,0:0:0:0:
361,140,60272,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,213,60448,2,0,P|303:247|290:299,1,70,4|2,0:2|2:0,0:0:0:0:
377,282,60801,2,0,P|379:326|385:358,1,70,8|2,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
455,306,61154,5,4,2:0:0:0:
311,353,61507,2,0,P|234:337|175:280,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
162,217,62037,2,0,L|90:234,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,253,62390,1,4,2:0:0:0:
137,141,62743,1,2,0:0:0:0:
298,185,63096,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,215,63272,2,0,P|417:227|468:223,1,70,0|2,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
425,145,63625,2,0,P|463:125|482:101,1,70,8|2,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
354,109,63978,5,0,0:0:0:0:
354,109,64154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
267,137,64331,1,8,0:0:0:0:
186,94,64507,1,0,0:0:0:0:
101,129,64684,2,0,L|24:104,2,70,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,179,65213,2,0,P|193:218|194:322,2,140,0|2|0,0:0|2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
102,129,66096,1,0,0:0:0:0:
162,70,66272,2,0,L|194:43,2,35,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
102,129,66625,1,0,0:0:0:0:
42,188,66801,6,0,P|19:261|61:333,1,140,4|8,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
117,276,67331,1,0,0:0:0:0:
187,230,67507,2,0,P|247:195|306:126,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
335,69,68037,1,0,0:0:0:0:
238,87,68213,2,0,P|200:94|152:93,1,70,4|2,0:2|2:0,0:0:0:0:
111,174,68566,2,0,P|67:173|25:157,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
23,69,68919,1,2,2:0:0:0:
111,174,69096,1,0,0:0:0:0:
246,175,69272,2,0,P|326:173|407:158,1,140,8|4,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
316,317,69978,5,0,0:0:0:0:
232,314,70154,2,0,P|161:319|83:288,1,140,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
85,128,70860,2,0,P|142:175|173:245,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,314,71390,2,0,P|261:288|276:261,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
290,178,71743,1,0,0:0:0:0:
366,144,71919,2,0,L|432:119,1,70,0|2,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
229,121,72448,6,0,P|194:125|161:142,1,70,4|0,0:2|2:0,0:0:0:0:
93,92,72801,2,0,P|74:138|79:172,1,70,8|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
132,221,73154,2,0,P|162:290|140:359,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
83,291,73684,2,0,L|231:277,2,140,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,302,74566,1,0,0:0:0:0:
158,358,74919,6,0,L|232:351,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
311,343,75272,2,0,P|359:284|376:202,1,140,4|8,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,266,75801,2,0,P|463:190|453:114,1,140
433,46,76331,1,8,0:0:0:0:
359,86,76507,2,0,P|297:123|221:136,2,140,4|2|0,0:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
194,47,77566,2,0,L|119:32,2,70,0|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
274,73,78096,5,0,0:0:0:0:
272,156,78272,1,2,0:0:0:0:
189,171,78448,1,8,0:0:0:0:
135,106,78625,1,2,0:0:0:0:
194,46,78801,1,0,0:0:0:0:
189,171,79154,6,0,L|187:258,1,70,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
185,325,79507,1,0,0:0:0:0:
266,305,79684,1,2,0:0:0:0:
349,314,79860,1,8,0:0:0:0:
426,346,80037,1,2,0:0:0:0:
440,263,80213,2,0,B|452:204|452:204|421:122,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,121,80743,2,0,L|363:195,1,70,0|4,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
234,298,81272,6,0,L|210:232,1,70,8|4,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
160,71,81801,1,0,0:0:0:0:
21,165,82154,2,0,P|66:217|136:239,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
199,187,82684,2,0,P|227:161|261:152,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
287,230,83037,2,0,P|325:228|370:248,1,70
326,317,83390,2,0,P|365:337|392:365,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,351,83743,5,0,0:0:0:0:
116,241,84096,2,0,P|90:168|105:103,1,140,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,44,84801,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,128,84978,2,0,L|256:276|256:276,1,140
256,352,85507,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,312,85684,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,292,85860,6,0,P|448:288|492:272,1,70
340,168,86213,2,0,P|352:204|352:240,1,70,2|6,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,86566,12,0,88684,0:0:0:0:

notice the spacing of some places in Easy diff: (必要的时候可以关掉grid snap.

00:36:801 (2) -
00:47:390 (2) -
00:48:448 (4) -
00:50:919 (2) -
01:00:448 (5) -
01:03:978 (2,3) -
01:07:507 (3) -
01:11:037 (3) -

N E K O

159 posts

Joined September 2010

Topic Starter

N E K O 2013-02-25T12:45:46+00:00

Strawberry wrote:
notice the spacing of some places in Easy diff: (必要的时候可以关掉grid snap.
00:36:801 (2) -
00:47:390 (2) -
00:48:448 (4) -
00:50:919 (2) -
01:00:448 (5) -
01:03:978 (2,3) -
01:07:507 (3) -
01:11:037 (3) -

---fixed

lkx_Shore

1,453 posts

Joined January 2010

lkx_Shore 2013-02-25T12:51:35+00:00

[General]
hi

[Star's insane]
不mod神图

[Insane]
感觉ar能+1
00:05:919 (1,2) - 间距和前面的一致了，可能会导致读图失误
00:17:037 (4,5) - ^
00:48:801 (3,1) - ^
01:03:625 (6) - ^
01:22:684 (6) - Newcombo
01:26:566 (1) - 音量减少处理

如果现在rank了的话，可能会因为图不美观而成为你自己的黑历史。
梗少了点，基本就是绕圈圈，但绕圈圈的花样要多，不然图会很单调

[Hardy]
不mod神图

[Normal]
HP-1
00:52:154 (7) - 头尾加whistle
00:54:978 (1) - 滑条尾巴的finish移动到00:55:507 (2) -
01:14:742 (5) - 头尾加whistle
01:26:390 (1) - 音量减少处理

音效方面有点空缺.试试2/4whistle和大起伏歌词处+finish

[Easy]
HP-1
ar-2
od-1

音效太乱了..finish一般用了以后要隔着一个大白线用，或者跟着音乐起伏连续用。
试试remove所有的whistle,然后变成1/3whistle?

Banana

794 posts

Joined October 2010

Banana 2013-02-26T06:39:13+00:00

From forum PM

[General]
Artist
佐藤利奈, 井上麻里奈 & 茅原実里（似乎是只要写cv名就可以这点不是很确定）
Romanised Artist
Satou Rina,_Inoue Marina_&_Chihara Minori 标点什么的下划线改空格
Title
シアワセ☆ハイテンション↑↑_(TV Size) 喵，罗马字的标题也少空格
Source
Minamike Tadaima
Tags
去掉minamike tadaima，Source里面的不用填了
minami什么的名字感觉不是很必要..

[Easy]
00:10:331 - 转盘这里开始？
00:25:860 (3) - 间距
00:27:978 (2) - 关gs修间距别的没啥
[Normal]
00:05:037 (2) - 这个节奏建议滑条同向不过排列目测得修一会...
00:09:272 (2) - 尾巴右边平衡整体排列
00:24:448 (1) - 弯的对应后面？
00:29:566 (1) - 排列还有提升空间建议自行check (00:31:331 (1,2) - 这两个放到左边可能会容易摆一点
00:33:801 (6) - vocal跟漏一个建议改两个圈原滑条尾巴对应节奏stack下一个滑条
00:42:625 - 大部分都是跟vocal这里为什么空着
00:51:096 - ^（也许并不是跟vocal？
00:52:154 (7) - 滑条头去whistle？01:03:448 (4) 就没加
01:01:154 (1) - 向左弯？
01:06:272 - （也许并不是跟vocal
01:19:154 (1) - 懒
01:25:331 (4) - 往返一次就够

[Hardy]
00:34:684 (7) - 考虑向上弯
00:38:037 (5) - whistle改开头？
00:42:978 (5) - (nazi) 往上一点x325 y310
01:18:448 (3,4,1,2) - 整体向下到x188 y186再微调别的（(4)和后面一串

[Insane]
00:10:507 (2) - 前一个跳是重音跳着挺合适于是这边就显得有点奇怪
00:15:978 (1) - 前面转换的时候是跳出去的这边不跳了也有点奇怪
00:24:096 - 转盘考虑这里结束？
00:27:096 - 后面一串都没空拍建议这边也加个note
00:51:096 (6,7) - 滑条？
01:05:213 (1,2) - ^
01:16:507 - 这边重音放在了红线上滑条重拍结尾个人感觉这边不太合适
01:22:860 (7) - 这边的跳姑且不说合不合适后面的1/1被弄得不好读后面间距大点
stack太多有点影响移动的感觉

[Skystar's Insane]
00:02:919 - 特意这么放了估计不太想动，姑且建议一下吧考虑用大概1.5的ds放右边和后面00:05:743 (2)对应
00:15:978 (1) - 尾巴和前面的滑条overlap了建议弧度放小点顺便和00:13:154 (1) 对应
00:33:625 (2) - overlap没问题我只是觉得右下角太空了不好看建议换个位置
01:21:801 (4) - 前面一个还好这个有点奇怪，建议滑条这边是个拖出去的音
01:26:566 (1) - 前一个红线已经停了，和insane一样这边开始转盘？另转盘考虑消音

gl

N E K O

159 posts

Joined September 2010

Topic Starter

N E K O 2013-02-27T12:47:25+00:00

lkx_Shore wrote:
[General]
hi

[Star's insane]
不mod神图

[Insane]
感觉ar能+1 ---changed
00:05:919 (1,2) - 间距和前面的一致了，可能会导致读图失误
00:17:037 (4,5) - ^
00:48:801 (3,1) - ^
01:03:625 (6) - ^ ---all fixed
01:22:684 (6) - Newcombo ---added
01:26:566 (1) - 音量减少处理 ---added

如果现在rank了的话，可能会因为图不美观而成为你自己的黑历史。
梗少了点，基本就是绕圈圈，但绕圈圈的花样要多，不然图会很单调

----明白
------稍微改了几处的排列，基本换成了规则的跳..

[Hardy]
不mod神图

[Normal]
HP-1
00:52:154 (7) - 头尾加whistle
00:54:978 (1) - 滑条尾巴的finish移动到00:55:507 (2) -
01:14:742 (5) - 头尾加whistle
01:26:390 (1) - 音量减少处理

音效方面有点空缺.试试2/4whistle和大起伏歌词处+finish
---all fixed

[Easy]
HP-1
ar-2
od-1

音效太乱了..finish一般用了以后要隔着一个大白线用，或者跟着音乐起伏连续用。
试试remove所有的whistle,然后变成1/3whistle?
---all fixed

多谢一直帮我的忙;w;

N E K O

159 posts

Joined September 2010

Topic Starter

N E K O 2013-03-01T01:13:19+00:00

Banana wrote:
From forum PM
General
[General]
Artist
佐藤利奈, 井上麻里奈 & 茅原実里（似乎是只要写cv名就可以这点不是很确定）
Romanised Artist
Satou Rina,_Inoue Marina_&_Chihara Minori 标点什么的下划线改空格
Title
シアワセ☆ハイテンション↑↑_(TV Size) 喵，罗马字的标题也少空格
Source
Minamike Tadaima
Tags
去掉minamike tadaima，Source里面的不用填了
minami什么的名字感觉不是很必要..
↑↑all fixed

EZ
[Easy]
00:10:331 - 转盘这里开始？ ---changed
00:25:860 (3) - 间距 ---fixed
00:27:978 (2) - 关gs修间距别的没啥 ---fixed

normal
[Normal]
00:05:037 (2) - 这个节奏建议滑条同向不过排列目测得修一会...
00:09:272 (2) - 尾巴右边平衡整体排列
00:24:448 (1) - 弯的对应后面？ ↑↑↑---fixed
00:29:566 (1) - 排列还有提升空间建议自行check (00:31:331 (1,2) - 这两个放到左边可能会容易摆一点 ---changed a lot
00:33:801 (6) - vocal跟漏一个建议改两个圈原滑条尾巴对应节奏stack下一个滑条
00:42:625 - 大部分都是跟vocal这里为什么空着
00:51:096 - ^（也许并不是跟vocal？
00:52:154 (7) - 滑条头去whistle？01:03:448 (4) 就没加
01:01:154 (1) - 向左弯？
01:06:272 - （也许并不是跟vocal
01:19:154 (1) - 懒
01:25:331 (4) - 往返一次就够
↑↑↑---all fixed

insane
[Insane]
00:10:507 (2) - 前一个跳是重音跳着挺合适于是这边就显得有点奇怪
00:15:978 (1) - 前面转换的时候是跳出去的这边不跳了也有点奇怪
00:24:096 - 转盘考虑这里结束？
00:27:096 - 后面一串都没空拍建议这边也加个note
00:51:096 (6,7) - 滑条？
01:05:213 (1,2) - ^
01:16:507 - 这边重音放在了红线上滑条重拍结尾个人感觉这边不太合适
01:22:860 (7) - 这边的跳姑且不说合不合适后面的1/1被弄得不好读后面间距大点
stack太多有点影响移动的感觉

↑↑↑---spacing prob and hitsound porb fixed;Changed some part of the stack.
gl

It's of great help,thx .

Skystar

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Joined May 2011

Skystar 2013-03-01T06:46:34+00:00

http://puu.sh/2a9Wc

Source:Minamike Tadaima (T要大寫)
tags裏N E K O跟creator重複了可以刪掉,還有草莓的ID打錯了.

lkx_Shore

1,453 posts

Joined January 2010

lkx_Shore 2013-03-02T05:03:08+00:00

多谢一直帮我的忙;w;

随叫随到.-.

Melt

353 posts

Joined May 2011

Melt 2013-03-07T07:51:46+00:00

;w; 纯支持

N E K O

159 posts

Joined September 2010

Topic Starter

N E K O 2013-03-07T07:53:19+00:00

Melt wrote:
;w; 纯支持

谢谢啦

Kirino Kousaka

655 posts

Joined November 2010

Kirino Kousaka 2013-03-10T09:38:04+00:00

Hello~ Modding from forum PM request. Sorry for being kinda late.

Things in Red must be fixed.
Things in Purple are highly suggested for a nice improvement.
Others are normal suggestions.

[General]
1. Please remove "N E K O" from tags, it's not needed because you are already the mapper.
2. Please add "opening" and "op" to the tags.
3. Please fix "straberry to "strawberry" in the tags.
4. Offset is kinda off, so here's a Timing Check: BPM: 170 (no change), Offset: 441 (-8) (Worked well to me http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/647518)
5. Please don't forget to adjust/snap your timing points with the latest offset.
6. Inconsistency in Preview Time. SRY's Hard has 49095, while others have 49066. Please make them all the same.
7. Use 45% as the maximum volume for your hitsounds, things higher than that sound bad, it covers the song and that's not nice.
[Easy]
00:04:684 (3) - Fix Spacing (Distance Snap). Please avoid having spacing infringements in an Easy and Normal diff. You can't have two notes neither too near nor too far from each other. They'll make your unrankable.
00:08:919 (3) - ^
00:25:860 (3) - ^
00:25:860 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
00:32:919 (1) - ^
00:32:919 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:38:566 (4) - ^
00:48:448 (4,1) - ^
00:51:272 (1) - Remove NC.
00:54:096 (1) - ^
00:55:507 (2) - Fix Spacing & Add NC.
00:56:919 (1) - Fix Spacing & Remove NC.
00:58:331 (2) - Add NC.
00:59:743 (3) - Fix Spacing.
01:02:566 (1) - Remove NC.
01:03:978 (2) - Add NC.
01:05:037 (3) - Move this one grid to the right. That would be better imo.
01:06:096 (1) - Remove NC.
01:06:801 (2) - Add NC.
01:13:860 (1) - Fix Spacing & Remove NC.
01:15:272 (2) - Add NC.
01:21:978 (1) - This spinner is hard to play for beginners, especially there's 01:23:743 (1) after it. Please change it into something else.
01:26:566 - Start a spinner here to be consistent with the other diffs.

[Normal]00:08:566 (1) - 00:24:978 (1) - Remove NC.00:29:566 (1) - Remove NC.00:30:096 (2) - Add NC.00:27:801 (2) - Fix Spacing.00:32:919 (4) - Add NC.00:34:507 (1) - Remove NC.00:36:272 (2) - Fix Spacing.00:36:978 (1) - Remove NC.00:37:507 (4,5,6) - Fix Spacing.00:38:037 (1) - Remove NC.00:38:566 (3) - Add NC.00:44:213 (6) - ^00:47:743 (4,5) - Fix Spacing.00:49:860 (4) - Add NC.00:52:684 (1) - Fix Spacing.00:55:860 (1) - Remove NC.00:56:566 (2) - Fix Spacing.00:57:272 (1) - Remove NC.00:57:978 (1) - ^00:58:331 (2) - Add NC.00:58:860 (3) - Fix Spacing.01:00:096 (5) - ^01:00:801 (7) - ^01:01:860 (1) - Remove NC.01:02:390 (2) - Fix Spacing.01:03:978 (1) - Please avoid having sliders such as this in an Easy or Normal diff because beginners will find it hard to read. Reduce 1 reversal. Then fix the spacing of the following note.01:06:272 (1) - Fix Spacing & Remove NC.01:06:448 (2) - Add NC.01:07:154 (1) - Remove NC.01:08:390 (1) - Why not break this into two sliders?01:09:625 (2,3) - Fix Spacing.01:17:566 (1) - Remove NC.01:17:743 (2) - Add NC.01:18:448 (1) - Remove NC.01:22:684 (2) - Same as 01:08:390 (1).01:23:743 (1,3) - Fix Spacing.01:26:213 (1) - Make it start on 01:26:566 and let it end on 01:29:390.

[SRY's Hard]00:13:507 (2) - Remove finish on start. Put a clap instead.00:17:037 (1) - Remove NC.00:18:801 (1,2) - Find a way to bring these notes lower, (1) is touching the HP bar and that's annoying

01:26:566 (1) - Let it end on 01:29:390.

[Insane]00:27:272 (1) - I don't like this slider's appearance. Remake and don't put that sharp end lol.00:52:684 (6) - Add NC.00:58:331 (9) - ^01:05:213 (1) - Remove NC.01:05:566 (1) - ^01:11:390 (1) - ^01:14:743 (1) - ^01:15:625 (1) - ^01:21:449 (1) - ^01:26:566 (1) - Let it end on 01:29:390.

[Skystar's Insane]00:05:037 (1,1) - These NC's are pointless imo. Please remove them.01:06:625 (11) - Break this into two circles.01:26:566 (1) - Delete this note.01:26:654 (1) - Make it start on 01:26:566 and let it end on 01:29:390.

That's all~

Maybe for now. lol

Zaio_old

1 post

Joined June 2011

Zaio_old 2013-03-10T14:35:23+00:00

加油! 感覺完成度很高

N E K O

159 posts

Joined September 2010

Topic Starter

N E K O 2013-03-11T02:51:42+00:00

Zaio wrote:
加油! 感覺完成度很高

我会努力的0w0

N E K O

159 posts

Joined September 2010

Topic Starter

N E K O 2013-03-11T08:39:30+00:00

Reply for kirino's mod

General

SPOILER

[list]

[General]
[*]Please remove "N E K O" from tags, it's not needed because you are already the mapper. ---erased[*]Please add "opening" and "op" to the tags. ---added
[*]Please fix "straberry to "strawberry" in the tags. ---fixed
[*]Offset is kinda off, so here's a Timing Check: BPM: 170 (no change), Offset: 441 (-8) (Worked well to me http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/647518) ~~I didn't find it obvious.Anyway ---changed~~ I kept them for now ,and wait for other mod to see if it's nessesary
[*]Please don't forget to adjust/snap your timing points with the latest offset.
[*]Inconsistency in Preview Time. SRY's Hard has 49095, while others have 49066. Please make them all the same. ---fixed
[*]Use 45% as the maximum volume for your hitsounds, things higher than that sound bad, it covers the song and that's not nice. ---Yes you're right,fixed.

Easy

SPOILER

[Easy]
[*]00:04:684 (3) - Fix Spacing (Distance Snap). Please avoid having spacing infringements in an Easy and Normal diff. You can't have two notes neither too near nor too far from each other. They'll make your unrankable.
[*]00:08:919 (3) - ^
[*]00:25:860 (3) - ^
[*]00:25:860 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
[*]00:32:919 (1) - ^
[*]00:32:919 (1,2,3,4) - ^
[*]00:38:566 (4) - ^
[*]00:48:448 (4,1) - ^
[*]00:51:272 (1) - Remove NC.
[*]00:54:096 (1) - ^
[*]00:55:507 (2) - Fix Spacing & Add NC.
[*]00:56:919 (1) - Fix Spacing & Remove NC.
[*]00:58:331 (2) - Add NC.
[*]00:59:743 (3) - Fix Spacing.
[*]01:02:566 (1) - Remove NC.
[*]01:03:978 (2) - Add NC.
[*]01:05:037 (3) - Move this one grid to the right. That would be better imo.
[*]01:06:096 (1) - Remove NC.
[*]01:06:801 (2) - Add NC.
[*]01:13:860 (1) - Fix Spacing & Remove NC.
[*]01:15:272 (2) - Add NC.
[*]01:21:978 (1) - This spinner is hard to play for beginners, especially there's 01:23:743 (1) after it. Please change it into something else.
[*]01:26:566 - Start a spinner here to be consistent with the other diffs.

I rechecked them all ,and fixed

Normal

SPOILER

[Normal]
[*]00:08:566 (1) - Fix Spacing.
[*]00:24:978 (1) - Remove NC.
[*]00:29:566 (1) - Remove NC.
[*]00:30:096 (2) - Add NC.
[*]00:27:801 (2) - Fix Spacing.
[*]00:32:919 (4) - Add NC.
[*]00:34:507 (1) - Remove NC.
[*]00:36:272 (2) - Fix Spacing.
[*]00:36:978 (1) - Remove NC.
[*]00:37:507 (4,5,6) - Fix Spacing.
[*]00:38:037 (1) - Remove NC.
[*]00:38:566 (3) - Add NC.
[*]00:44:213 (6) - ^
[*]00:47:743 (4,5) - Fix Spacing.
[*]00:49:860 (4) - Add NC.
[*]00:52:684 (1) - Fix Spacing.
[*]00:55:860 (1) - Remove NC.
[*]00:56:566 (2) - Fix Spacing.
[*]00:57:272 (1) - Remove NC.
[*]00:57:978 (1) - ^
[*]00:58:331 (2) - Add NC.
[*]00:58:860 (3) - Fix Spacing.
[*]01:00:096 (5) - ^
[*]01:00:801 (7) - ^
[*]01:01:860 (1) - Remove NC.
[*]01:02:390 (2) - Fix Spacing.
[*]01:03:978 (1) - Please avoid having sliders such as this in an Easy or Normal diff because beginners will find it hard to read. Reduce 1 reversal. Then fix the spacing of the following note.
[*]01:06:272 (1) - Fix Spacing & Remove NC.
[*]01:06:448 (2) - Add NC.
[*]01:07:154 (1) - Remove NC.
[*]01:08:390 (1) - Why not break this into two sliders?
[*]01:09:625 (2,3) - Fix Spacing.
[*]01:17:566 (1) - Remove NC.
[*]01:17:743 (2) - Add NC.
[*]01:18:448 (1) - Remove NC.
[*]01:22:684 (2) - Same as 01:08:390 (1).
[*]01:23:743 (1,3) - Fix Spacing.
[*]01:26:213 (1) - Make it start on 01:26:566 and let it end on 01:29:390.

umm, i changed all the NCs to fit the Vocal , that may be good? And spacing all fixed

Insane

SPOILER

[Insane]
[*]00:27:272 (1) - I don't like this slider's appearance. Remake and don't put that sharp end lol. --- shape changed
[*]00:52:684 (6) - Add NC.
[*]00:58:331 (9) - ^
[*]01:05:213 (1) - Remove NC.
[*]01:05:566 (1) - ^
[*]01:11:390 (1) - ^
[*]01:14:743 (1) - ^
[*]01:15:625 (1) - ^
[*]01:21:449 (1) - ^
[*]01:26:566 (1) - Let it end on 01:29:390. --- fixed

NCs all changed as i did in normal.

Thanks a lot for your mod

Last edited by N E K O 2013-03-13T01:04:22+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Kirino Kousaka

655 posts

Joined November 2010

Kirino Kousaka 2013-03-11T11:30:52+00:00

btw kindly fix this lol.

N E K O

159 posts

Joined September 2010

Topic Starter

N E K O 2013-03-11T12:04:18+00:00

Kirino Kousaka wrote:
btw kindly fix this lol.

umm it's the max length of the topic name = =
I've no idea how to fix it ....

Strawberry

osu! Alumni

1,536 posts

Joined October 2010

Strawberry 2013-03-11T12:33:41+00:00

@Kirino Kousaka: i think it should be disposed by dev! staff rather than the mappers~ and it's need not to be fixed for now~ like this.

:3

Kirino Kousaka

655 posts

Joined November 2010

Kirino Kousaka 2013-03-11T13:07:54+00:00

Strawberry wrote:
@Kirino Kousaka: i think it should be disposed by dev! staff rather than the mappers~ and it's need not to be fixed for now~ like this.

:3

oh lol sorry about that XD

btw, I like SRY's Hard better than Hardy :<
Also fix all the offsets, you only adjusted on Easy.

forgot to point these out/additional mod:

[Easy]
1. 00:04:676 (3) - This note is too near from the HP Bar, do something to bring it lower/away from it.
2. 00:38:558 (4) - Add NC.
3. 00:44:205 (3) - ^
4. 01:06:088 (1) - Unnecessary NC. Remove it.
5. 01:26:558 (1) - Why did you not let this end on 01:29:382? But you did on Normal and Insane? Please be consistent.

No KD for this post.

N E K O

159 posts

Joined September 2010

Topic Starter

N E K O 2013-03-11T14:13:39+00:00

Also fix all the offsets, you only adjusted on Easy.

forgot to point these out/additional mod:

[Easy]
1. 00:04:676 (3) - This note is too near from the HP Bar, do something to bring it lower/away from it.
2. 00:38:558 (4) - Add NC.
3. 00:44:205 (3) - ^
4. 01:06:088 (1) - Unnecessary NC. Remove it.
5. 01:26:558 (1) - Why did you not let this end on 01:29:382? But you did on Normal and Insane? Please be consistent.

---fixed
I was in a hurry in the afternoon , forgot to do it ,sry about that.

N E K O

159 posts

Joined September 2010

Topic Starter

N E K O 2013-03-13T13:49:45+00:00

i made several changes on it .maybe make it better ~~maybe not~~

Andrea

Beatmap Nominator

16,650 posts

Joined August 2008

Andrea 2013-03-13T19:18:39+00:00

Okay, modding only your own difficulties as requested.

~Easy~

00:04:684 (3) - New combo due to the new stanza change.
00:08:919 (3) - I'd try to avoid this overlap here, place it like this instead.
SPOILER
00:10:331 (1) - Add a finish at the end of the spinner to emphazise with the music BG.
00:24:448 (1) - Remove the whistle and add a finish on this circle, so you will emphasize the music change.
00:30:096 (1) - Add a finish as well for the same reason, you're missing many of them as I can see.
00:34:331 (3) - Remove the whistle and add a finish on this circle, so you will emphasize the music change.
00:35:037 (4) - Same for this slider end, add a finish instead.
00:49:860 - Kiai should start here like you did in the other difficulties of yours.
01:23:743 - Kiai should end here like you did in the other difficulties of yours.

~Normal~
Reduce the AR by 1 tick at least, it's too high for this kind of difficulty right now.

00:12:272 (3) - This slider repeat might be too confusing for beginners, try to do it like this instead.
SPOILER
00:13:154 (1) - I suggest you to end this spinner here, follows the lyrics and music much more.
SPOILER
00:34:154 (4,5) - I'd try to avoid this kind of stacks on Normal difficulty, try to make it this way.
SPOILER
00:59:566 (4,5,6) - The overlap on this pattern it's pretty ugly and bad to see, try something like this.
SPOILER
01:20:919 (1,2) - I'd try to avoid this kind of stacks on Normal difficulty, try to make it this way.
SPOILER
01:23:743 (1) - This slider is almost touching the HP Bar, move it down a bit.
01:26:037 (5) - You're missing a main beat here, here's what I suggest you to do to fix it.
SPOILER

~Insane~
Use soft hitsounds like you did on the other difficulties, they fit much more with this kind of song.

00:08:919 (6) - New combo should go there due to the music change.
00:10:331 (1,2,3) - This spacing change is really hard to read, here's what I suggest you to do to fix it.
SPOILER
00:20:566 (1) - Remove this new combo, it's not necessary to have it there.
00:21:272 (1) - ^ Same for this one.
00:27:272 (6) - New combo should go there due to the music change.
00:46:684 (7) - A new combo should go there due to the slider velocity change, this have to be fixed.
00:49:860 (1,2,3,4) - Inconsistent spacing, here's what I got to make it perfect.
SPOILER
00:52:154 (4,5,6) - Inconsistent spacing, again, do it this way.
SPOILER
00:56:919 (1) - Remove this new combo, it's not needed there actually.
00:58:331 (8) - A new combo is needed there instead, since the music actually changes here.
00:59:390 (10) - A new combo should go there due to the slider velocity change, this have to be fixed.
01:06:625 (3,4,5) - This sudden spacing change might confuse many players, do it this way so it's easier to read.
SPOILER
01:24:978 (6) - New combo due to the spacing and music change.
01:26:213 (1) - Remove this new combo then since it's not needed at all.

Hope this can help you ^^

Last edited by Andrea 2013-03-14T10:34:55+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

N E K O

159 posts

Joined September 2010

Topic Starter

N E K O 2013-03-14T02:36:25+00:00

Andrea wrote:
Okay, modding only your own difficulties as requested.

~Easy~
00:04:684 (3) - New combo due to the new stanza change.
00:08:919 (3) - I'd try to avoid this overlap here, place it like this instead.
SPOILER
00:10:331 (1) - Add a finish at the end of the spinner to emphazise with the music BG.
00:24:448 (1) - Remove the whistle and add a finish on this circle, so you will emphasize the music change.
00:30:096 (1) - Add a finish as well for the same reason, you're missing many of them as I can see.
00:34:331 (3) - Remove the whistle and add a finish on this circle, so you will emphasize the music change.
00:35:037 (4) - Same for this slider end, add a finish instead.
00:49:860 - Kiai should start here like you did in the other difficulties of yours.
01:23:743 - Kiai should end here like you did in the other difficulties of yours.
-----New combo all fixed and hitsound too.But the kiai do start at 49:860 and end at 1:23:743 in this diff,so i'm a little comfused.

~Normal~
Reduce the AR by 1 tick at least, it's too high for this kind of difficulty right now.
----fixed
00:12:272 (3) - This slider repeat might be too confusing for beginners, try to do it like this instead.
SPOILER
00:13:154 (1) - I suggest you to end this spinner here, follows the lyrics and music much more.
SPOILER
00:34:154 (4,5) - I'd try to avoid this kind of stacks on Normal difficulty, try to make it this way.
SPOILER
00:59:566 (4,5,6) - The overlap on this pattern it's pretty ugly and bad to see, try something like this.
SPOILER
01:20:919 (1,2) - I'd try to avoid this kind of stacks on Normal difficulty, try to make it this way.
SPOILER
01:23:743 (1) - This slider is almost touching the HP Bar, move it down a bit.
01:26:037 (5) - You're missing a main beat here, here's what I suggest you to do to fix it.
SPOILER
----changed the slider at 00:12:272 , fixed the spacing problem and add the beat at 1:26:037 , spinner end changed to 00:13:154 .
~Insane~
Use soft hitsounds like you did on the other difficulties, they fit much more with this kind of song.
Yeah, i found it a good suggestion , it's a bit loud and bother the origin beat.
00:08:919 (6) - New combo should go there due to the music change.
00:10:331 (1,2,3) - This spacing change is really hard to read, here's what I suggest you to do to fix it.
SPOILER
00:20:566 (1) - Remove this new combo, it's not necessary to have it there.
00:21:272 (1) - ^ Same for this one.
00:27:272 (6) - New combo should go there due to the music change.
00:46:684 (7) - A new combo should go there due to the slider velocity change, this have to be fixed.
00:49:860 (1,2,3,4) - Inconsistent spacing, here's what I got to make it perfect.
SPOILER
00:52:154 (4,5,6) - Inconsistent spacing, again, do it this way.
SPOILER
00:56:919 (1) - Remove this new combo, it's not needed there actually.
00:58:331 (8) - A new combo is needed there instead, since the music actually changes here.
00:59:390 (10) - A new combo should go there due to the slider velocity change, this have to be fixed.
01:06:625 (3,4,5) - This sudden spacing change might confuse many players, do it this way so it's easier to read.
SPOILER
01:24:978 (6) - New combo due to the spacing and music change.
01:26:213 (1) - Remove this new combo then since it's not needed at all.
----New combo fixed , spacing fixed, and 1:06:625 , i changed it in this way.

Hope this can help you ^^

It's very kind of you to give a mod to my first map and give such suggestions.It helps a lot.

Entreal

136 posts

Joined July 2011

Entreal 2013-03-14T05:59:05+00:00

Random mod from Popner, Hello there from the Velvet Room. The place I am from exists between dream and reality, mind and matter.

Mods coming soon... I just felt like modding yours but its late here, so tomorrow.

Edit: Lets do this! Hope this helps! >.<

General
Please toggle off Letterbox during breaks, no SB here!
Being a nitpicker here, but delete that other red color. No need for two reds...

Easy

00:01:860 - Here has a finish but rest of the diffs don't, maybe remove this or add it to the rest?
00:08:213 (2,3) - I think you should add finishes here, the music is surely asking for this in my opinion
00:29:390 - This should be symmetrical to slider (3) makes it look better
00:41:390 - Finish
00:42:801 - ^
00:47:037 (1) - For this part I'm assuming you're following the "Hi!" Part, if you are you need to move this to 00:46:860, more accurate.
00:48:096 - Add a circle here, assuming you're following the "Hi!" part.
00:48:801 - Finish? emphasis on the music.
00:55:507 - Finish, since you put a finish at 01:18:096 They sound similar so why not be similar?
00:56:919 - Replace finish with whistle.

Normal

00:10:331 - NC, vocals
00:24:448 - Finish
00:27:272 (1,2) - Should fix this, overlapping is baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad.
00:35:743 - ^
00:37:507 - Maybe change this direction of the slider somewhere else, i find it that it breaks the flow of the notes. Be careful of DS.
00:58:331 - Overlap.
01:09:625 - ^
01:26:037 - Move this down, Note (3) is blocking it.

SRY's Hard

00:18:801 (1,2) - Played it, suggest moving it down due to the die meter blocking some of it. My screen res. is 1024x768.
00:32:037 (6,7) - Should have this slider blanket the next one. Like:

Can probably make it better.
00:35:743 - Intro to a new tune? Finish?
00:38:037 - Not sure what you're following here, the woohoo or the music. Woohoo should have slider end in 00:38:213
00:41:213 - NC, since new lyric thingy.
00:41:390 - Remove NC if ^
00:42:625 - Note here, if vocals.
00:57:625 - Why a soft hit here when the previous slider has a normal hitsound?
01:01:331 - Should add note here if following vocals.
01:07:331 - Move this note to have the previous slider blanket it, makes it look nicer
01:26:213 - Can ignore this due to the diff being hard, but i feel as if the second slider should be Ctrl + G and having the first slider blanket it.

Insane

00:05:037 (3,1) - Should have note 3 be similar to the first note to have a beautiful square thing. Along with the first note of the new combo
00:33:625 (9) - Maybe me, but this note looks so weird looking... Maybe because that slider was in the way or something.
00:49:860 - Finish, new lyric thingy
01:07:507 - Finish on end.
01:08:919 - ^ (due to how the music steadily becomes higher, same thing with 1:07:507).
01:09:184 - I'd say add a note here.
01:18:096 - Finish
01:18:801 - ^
01:20:213 - ^ (From the start of 01:18:096 i noticed that the music steadily goes higher and thats why i recommend having these three finishes, i hope you can here this too).

Skystar's Insane

00:02:919 - Vocals, note.
00:53:919 - Played it, suggest moving it down due to the die meter blocking some of it. My screen res. is 1024x768.
01:06:448 - NC. New lyric thingy
01:06:801 - Soft finish (also for those three down, from to the others below this don't you hear the music slowly raising up? Perfect chance for a finish!)
01:07:507 - ^
01:08:213 - ^
01:08:919 - ^

01:18:096 - Same as 01:06:801
01:18:801 - ^
01:19:507 - ^
01:20:213 - ^

01:17:743 - NC.

Last edited by Entreal 2013-03-15T03:40:32+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

N E K O

159 posts

Joined September 2010

Topic Starter

N E K O 2013-03-14T06:04:16+00:00

Entreal wrote:
Random mod from Popner, Hello there from the Velvet Room. The place I am from exists between dream and reality, mind and matter.

Mods coming soon... I just felt like modding yours but its late here, so tomorrow.

okay, have a nice dream

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

smallboat 2013-03-15T02:43:54+00:00

嗨您好~來幫你MOD:D
我從我們的Queue接你的case：）

以下是mod:

整體
無錯誤之處

Easy
00:25:860 (3) - NC
但你的kiai timing 前後端的線有點偏移跟其他難度對照一下修正吧

Normal
沒什麼問題

SRY
00:10:331 timing線音量調50%比較適中

Insane
00:06:625 (3) - 末端+whistle?
00:07:066 (4) - +whistle?
00:07:154 (5) - 前端+whistle?
00:50:919 (5) - +finish?
01:14:743 (6) - 末端+whistle?
01:20:743 (8) - +whistle?

Skystar
00:46:154 (2,1,2,1) - 感覺音效不太搭..?
01:06:184 (9,11) - 要不要藍線各加個note?
01:14:919 (10) - +finish
01:26:566 (1) - 感覺很突出而且spinner你都放在大白線要不要改一下?

ok 先mod這些斟酌使用如有問題可PM給我謝謝:)

N E K O

159 posts

Joined September 2010

Topic Starter

N E K O 2013-03-15T04:22:50+00:00

smallboat wrote:
嗨您好~來幫你MOD:D
我從我們的Queue接你的case：）

以下是mod:

整體
無錯誤之處

Easy
00:25:860 (3) - NC
但你的kiai timing 前後端的線有點偏移跟其他難度對照一下修正吧
---fixed

Normal
沒什麼問題

Insane
00:06:625 (3) - 末端+whistle?
00:07:066 (4) - +whistle?
00:07:154 (5) - 前端+whistle?
00:50:919 (5) - +finish? ---嗯这个有些不明，暂时没加
01:14:743 (6) - 末端+whistle?
01:20:743 (8) - +whistle?

---added

ok 先mod這些斟酌使用如有問題可PM給我謝謝:)

谢谢:)

Makyu

424 posts

Joined April 2012

Makyu 2013-03-15T04:51:58+00:00

[Insane 2]
00:02:919 - Why do you cut the flow here? add a note please
00:15:625 (7,8) - please follow correctly the distance
00:35:478 (9,10,11) - the begin of the streamer was good, but, maube delethe this notes

[Insane]
AR+1
00:17:037 (4,5) - stack (4) in (5) maybe?
00:24:978 (1) - Why is this NC?
00:25:684 (4) - NC here and delete 00:26:037 (1) - that NC
00:56:919 (3,4) - maybe like this? http://puu.sh/2hWuS

[Hard]
00:02:919 - note here, maybe
00:06:801 (1) - this slider, is better a single circle here. because 00:06:978 - a note here makes no sense

[Normal]
00:12:096 - delete that note and finish the previous slider there.

[Easy]
Unsnaped green point, all of them

sorry this usless, I'm bad at modding D:

N E K O

159 posts

Joined September 2010

Topic Starter

N E K O 2013-03-15T06:59:50+00:00

General
Please toggle off Letterbox during breaks, no SB here!
Being a nitpicker here, but delete that other red color. No need for two reds...
umm,toggled off . I didn't change the note color before, it's default..ok maybe i misclicked,i' ll reupdate it.

Easy
00:01:860 - Here has a finish but rest of the diffs don't, maybe remove this or add it to the rest? emm,since i think this may emphasis the beginning of the song.
00:08:213 (2,3) - I think you should add finishes here, the music is surely asking for this in my opinion ---added
00:29:390 - This should be symmetrical to slider (3) makes it look better ---fixed
00:41:390 - Finish ---fixed
00:42:801 - ^ ---^
00:47:037 (1) - For this part I'm assuming you're following the "Hi!" Part, if you are you need to move this to 00:46:860, more accurate.
00:48:096 - Add a circle here, assuming you're following the "Hi!" part. ----these two fixed together
00:48:801 - Finish? emphasis on the music. ----I added in the head and the end of slider...
00:55:507 - Finish, since you put a finish at 01:18:096 They sound similar so why not be similar? ---added
00:56:919 - Replace finish with whistle.---fixed

Normal
00:10:331 - NC, vocals
00:24:448 - Finish
00:27:272 (1,2) - Should fix this, overlapping is baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad.
00:35:743 - ^
00:37:507 - Maybe change this direction of the slider somewhere else, i find it that it breaks the flow of the notes. Be careful of DS.
00:58:331 - Overlap.
01:09:625 - ^
01:26:037 - Move this down, Note (3) is blocking it.

Normal all fixed.
Insane
00:05:037 (3,1) - Should have note 3 be similar to the first note to have a beautiful square thing. Along with the first note of the new combo
00:33:625 (9) - Maybe me, but this note looks so weird looking... Maybe because that slider was in the way or something. ---umm,i made this intentionally
00:49:860 - Finish, new lyric thingy
01:07:507 - Finish on end.
01:08:919 - ^ (due to how the music steadily becomes higher, same thing with 1:07:507).
01:09:184 - I'd say add a note here.
01:18:096 - Finish
01:18:801 - ^
01:20:213 - ^ (From the start of 01:18:096 i noticed that the music steadily goes higher and thats why i recommend having these three finishes, i hope you can here this too).
---All fixed.

Thanks for your help

N E K O

159 posts

Joined September 2010

Topic Starter

N E K O 2013-03-15T07:24:06+00:00

Makyu wrote:
[Insane]
AR+1 i'd prefer to keep this
00:17:037 (4,5) - stack (4) in (5) maybe? --okay
00:24:978 (1) - Why is this NC?
00:25:684 (4) - NC here and delete 00:26:037 (1) - that NC ----fixed and above
00:56:919 (3,4) - maybe like this? http://puu.sh/2hWuS ---changed shape,similar to this

[Normal]
00:12:096 - delete that note and finish the previous slider there. okay

[Easy]
Unsnaped green point, all of them ohhhhh, i forgot to fix it the last day...thx

sorry this usless, I'm bad at modding D:

No,it's very useful indeed

Colin Hou

osu! Alumni

4,456 posts

Joined November 2009

Colin Hou 2013-03-15T07:31:51+00:00

Minami-ke Tadaima
Unicode Artist一栏用全角符号，多余空格删去
no kd

N E K O

159 posts

Joined September 2010

Topic Starter

N E K O 2013-03-15T08:39:41+00:00

Colin Hou wrote:
Minami-ke Tadaima
Unicode Artist一栏用全角符号，多余空格删去
no kd

改掉了,谢谢。

Xagrok

109 posts

Joined January 2012

Xagrok 2013-03-16T13:42:43+00:00

Hi. Mod from popner's queue.
Feel free to ignore my suggestions... And sorry If I repeat rejected ones.

[General]
I'd be happy about some custom combo colours.
I don't quite understand the use of the timing sections from 01:26:743 an on which lower the volume; at least I don't understand them in Normal and ongoing. If you want a consistency in TS, I don't understand it either because they mostly aren't the same; f. ex. Easy has way less TS than the others do. If the consistency wasn't wished, I still don't understand these, sorry ._.

Wow, and that's all I found, nothing wrong with the diffs imo. Good job and good luck with the rank.

blackabyss

494 posts

Joined November 2011

blackabyss 2013-03-17T07:12:09+00:00

hi from http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/77516

[General]
(AIBat check) Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
- [Easy] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:860, ends on 01:23:743
- [Insane] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:860, ends on 01:23:743
- [Normal] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:860, ends on 01:23:743
- [Skystar's Insane] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:860, ends on 01:12:360 Kiai #2: Starts on 01:12:448, ends on 01:23:743
- [SRY's Hard] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:860, ends on 01:23:743

[Easy]

just curious, why you use x1.2 distance snap on easy? normally ppl use =< x1.00

00:03:801 - a bit messed up with the next slider place, why not use this one? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/657618
but, it'll change the first one. you can arrange it by your self again if you didn't like

252,164,1860,2,0,P|324:164|388:204,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,252,3096,2,0,P|196:252|132:212,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,40,4684,6,0,P|212:96|228:168,1,140,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,224,5919,2,0,P|376:168|360:96,1,140

00:04:684 (1) - finish on head
00:10:331 - this spinner shoul start here 00:11:743

00:37:154 (3) - your slider pattern imo too plain, why not try to make like this one? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/657626

228,64,36801,1,0,0:0:0:0:
269,137,37154,2,0,P|242:198|173:241,1,140,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
321,333,38566,6,0,L|384:302,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

00:42:448 - like other pattern, add circle maybe nice here
00:46:860 (1,2) - spacing error
00:50:919 (2) - why not try to make blanket like this? it's more enjoyable http://puu.sh/2j46v
```
97,250,50919,1,2,0:0:0:0:
76,168,51272,2,0,P|92:104|156:80,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
```

00:53:743 (2) - i suggest you to do blanket on this note too http://puu.sh/2j4fX

298,95,53743,1,2,0:0:0:0:
306,11,54096,2,0,P|237:16|218:85,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

need more work on the pattern. you'll find it out yourself if there's pattern should use blanket like this one 01:12:448
01:09:625 (1) - change this slider t repeat slider like this, it's more fit with the vocal http://puu.sh/2j4qf
01:20:919 (1) - ^

01:22:684 - a bit overlap here, wanna try like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/657653

316,196,84096,2,0,P|260:244|196:244,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,200,85154,2,0,P|76:144|76:80,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

[Normal]

00:01:860 (3) - why you no use finish on the head?
00:04:684 (1) - it'll be crunchy if you add finish here too
00:05:037 (2) - larger the length of the slider to fit the music like this http://puu.sh/2j4TW
00:10:331 (1) - add finish on the head
00:10:860 (2,3) - add finish, imo it's catchy

00:27:272 (1,2) - a bit strange, felt better to change it like this http://puu.sh/2j5c7
or try this one if you like:

109,151,27272,6,0,P|62:166|38:221,1,100
45,269,27801,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,235,28154,2,0,P|202:223|233:162,1,100
331,110,28860,1,0,0:0:0:0:

00:35:743 - try to do same rhythm pattern like above ^
00:38:566 - ^
01:10:154 - ^
00:55:154 (1,2) - better flow like this http://puu.sh/2j5jY
00:58:860 (2) - remove this slider and place note here 00:58:860 - and 00:59:213
01:03:978 (1) - move the slider point to x:312 y:88 for better flow
01:15:801 (2) - make rhythm like this, is more better and it won't make overlap http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/657679

[SRY's Hard]
nice diff. btw

00:32:037 (2,3) - more wavy o.o https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/657688
00:38:566 (1) - for better flow, move to x:164 y:212
00:38:919 (2) - followed above, move this note to x:340 y:324
00:52:684 (1,2) - add clap on the tail, feels better
00:56:566 (4) - why no stack this under slider 00:55:507 (1)

[Insane]

(AIBat check) Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: 00:59:666 - snap to 00:59:654

00:04:684 (1,2,3) - make better flow like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/657714

68,160,4684,5,4,0:0:0:0:
172,160,4860,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,264,5037,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,160,5213,2,0,L|328:160,2,47.5
68,160,5566,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,160,5743,1,2,0:0:0:0:
172,264,5919,5,0,0:0:0:0:

00:05:566 (1) - remove NC
00:15:625 (8) - this tail of slider not stack properly with the head of this sliders 00:14:390 (5)
00:15:978 (1) - not stack properly with the slider before
00:19:507 - remove NC here to fit ha ha vocal and don't spent too much combo in short time
00:20:213 - remove this NC and put NC here 00:20:390 - cause it match with ha ha vocal imo
00:35:390 - ugly slider detect, change to normal slider like this 00:35:919
00:47:743 - remove NC, the reason was same as above
00:48:096 - ^
01:00:448 - ^
01:00:801 - ^
01:05:566 - remove one with slider point, so the slider doesn't have strange look
01:24:801 (5) - NC and remove NC here 01:24:978
this diff more nice then easiest level of yours.

[Skystar's Insane]

00:01:154 (1,2) - make these slider point straight
00:10:860 (1,1,1) - this overlap and spent too much NC
00:26:743 (7) - move to x:364 y:168, for more better flow
00:28:507 (4) - not stacked properly
00:33:625 (2) - stack this under first slider and rotate clock wise
00:34:154 (3) - move to x:248 y:164, followed above
00:34:948 (5) - stack this under slider 4 head
00:38:037 (7) - stack this upper the next slider, rotate anti-clockwise
00:44:213 (1) - make this slider wavy like this lol http://puu.sh/2j7e9
00:47:743 (1) , 00:48:096 (1) - remove NC because you spent too much
00:55:154 (10) - NC because follow the vocal instead
00:55:507 (1) - remove NC
00:56:566 - NC and remove the next NC
01:06:448 - NC here, follow the vocal
01:06:625 (11) - make like this? http://puu.sh/2j7tT
01:06:801 - remove NC
01:07:860 (7) - stack this head of slider with 01:06:272 (9)
01:10:154 - overlap and spent too much NC

maybe i just suggest to put more work on Easy, Normal and Skystar's Insane
but overall this was very good. GL~

N E K O

159 posts

Joined September 2010

Topic Starter

N E K O 2013-03-17T11:47:54+00:00

Xagrok wrote:
Hi. Mod from popner's queue.
Feel free to ignore my suggestions... And sorry If I repeat rejected ones.

[General]
I'd be happy about some custom combo colours.
I don't quite understand the use of the timing sections from 01:26:743 an on which lower the volume; at least I don't understand them in Normal and ongoing. If you want a consistency in TS, I don't understand it either because they mostly aren't the same; f. ex. Easy has way less TS than the others do. If the consistency wasn't wished, I still don't understand these, sorry ._.

Wow, and that's all I found, nothing wrong with the diffs imo. Good job and good luck with the rank.

I have to say it's a mistake made in previous time...it was intended only to low down the volume,and combo color is going to be changed on progress

Anyway,thanks for pointing it out

GGBY

24 posts

Joined January 2011

GGBY 2013-03-18T04:53:26+00:00

差点儿忘了这茬儿

insane
00:35:390 (9,1) - 9结尾到1之间的间隔容易读成整拍，可以试试把9变成一个单note

高端的不懂

就是感觉刚作图的人都容易有一个倾向就是排列的时候把所有梗的重心都围绕到屏幕中心，下不去往边角延伸的狠手，我也有这毛病并且不知道怎么改

N E K O

159 posts

Joined September 2010

Topic Starter

N E K O 2013-03-18T06:22:16+00:00

blackabyss wrote:
SPOILER
[General]
(AIBat check) Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
- [Easy] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:860, ends on 01:23:743
- [Insane] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:860, ends on 01:23:743
- [Normal] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:860, ends on 01:23:743
- [Skystar's Insane] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:860, ends on 01:12:360 Kiai #2: Starts on 01:12:448, ends on 01:23:743
- [SRY's Hard] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:860, ends on 01:23:743
---I'll try to contect him to talk about it.
SPOILER
[Easy]
just curious, why you use x1.2 distance snap on easy? normally ppl use =< x1.00 -----I didn't think about what distance shall i use when i begin to map this,and 1.2 feels better so i selected it.
00:03:801 - a bit messed up with the next slider place, why not use this one? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/657618
but, it'll change the first one. you can arrange it by your self again if you didn't like
252,164,1860,2,0,P|324:164|388:204,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,252,3096,2,0,P|196:252|132:212,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,40,4684,6,0,P|212:96|228:168,1,140,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,224,5919,2,0,P|376:168|360:96,1,140
00:04:684 (1) - finish on head
00:10:331 - this spinner shoul start here 00:11:743 ----keep mine.
00:37:154 (3) - your slider pattern imo too plain, why not try to make like this one? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/657626
228,64,36801,1,0,0:0:0:0:
269,137,37154,2,0,P|242:198|173:241,1,140,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
321,333,38566,6,0,L|384:302,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:42:448 - like other pattern, add circle maybe nice here
00:46:860 (1,2) - spacing error
00:50:919 (2) - why not try to make blanket like this? it's more enjoyable http://puu.sh/2j46v
97,250,50919,1,2,0:0:0:0:
76,168,51272,2,0,P|92:104|156:80,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:53:743 (2) - i suggest you to do blanket on this note too http://puu.sh/2j4fX
298,95,53743,1,2,0:0:0:0:
306,11,54096,2,0,P|237:16|218:85,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
need more work on the pattern. you'll find it out yourself if there's pattern should use blanket like this one 01:12:448
01:09:625 (1) - change this slider t repeat slider like this, it's more fit with the vocal http://puu.sh/2j4qf
01:20:919 (1) - ^
01:22:684 - a bit overlap here, wanna try like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/657653
316,196,84096,2,0,P|260:244|196:244,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,200,85154,2,0,P|76:144|76:80,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
umm,i fixed all the patterns like that,and that kind of blanket is better than mine in some part.Hitsounds added.
SPOILER
[Normal]
00:01:860 (3) - why you no use finish on the head?
00:04:684 (1) - it'll be crunchy if you add finish here too
00:05:037 (2) - larger the length of the slider to fit the music like this http://puu.sh/2j4TW ----keep mine.
00:10:331 (1) - add finish on the head
00:10:860 (2,3) - add finish, imo it's catchy
00:27:272 (1,2) - a bit strange, felt better to change it like this http://puu.sh/2j5c7 ---changed
or try this one if you like:
109,151,27272,6,0,P|62:166|38:221,1,100
45,269,27801,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,235,28154,2,0,P|202:223|233:162,1,100
331,110,28860,1,0,0:0:0:0:
00:35:743 - try to do same rhythm pattern like above ^
00:38:566 - ^
01:10:154 - ^ ---changed
00:55:154 (1,2) - better flow like this http://puu.sh/2j5jY
00:58:860 (2) - remove this slider and place note here 00:58:860 - and 00:59:213
01:03:978 (1) - move the slider point to x:312 y:88 for better flow
01:15:801 (2) - make rhythm like this, is more better and it won't make overlap http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/657679 --fixed
----Hitsound fixed.
SPOILER
[Insane]
(AIBat check) Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: 00:59:666 - snap to 00:59:654 ---fixed
00:04:684 (1,2,3) - make better flow like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/657714 umm,changed,but another style
68,160,4684,5,4,0:0:0:0:
172,160,4860,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,264,5037,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,160,5213,2,0,L|328:160,2,47.5
68,160,5566,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,160,5743,1,2,0:0:0:0:
172,264,5919,5,0,0:0:0:0:
00:05:566 (1) - remove NC
00:15:625 (8) - this tail of slider not stack properly with the head of this sliders 00:14:390 (5)
00:15:978 (1) - not stack properly with the slider before ---I don't really intend to hide them.
00:19:507 - remove NC here to fit ha ha vocal and don't spent too much combo in short time
00:20:213 - remove this NC and put NC here 00:20:390 - cause it match with ha ha vocal imo
00:35:390 - ugly slider detect, change to normal slider like this 00:35:919 --fixed
00:47:743 - remove NC, the reason was same as above
00:48:096 - ^
01:00:448 - ^
01:00:801 - ^
01:05:566 - remove one with slider point, so the slider doesn't have strange look --fixed
01:24:801 (5) - NC and remove NC here 01:24:978
this diff more nice then easiest level of yours.
---NC all fixed.
maybe i just suggest to put more work on Easy, Normal and Skystar's Insane
but overall this was very good. GL~

Thanks a lot for you mod . Really improved the map.

And another thing.Your map Masked bitcH was pretty nice,and i didn't fine serious things to mod , sorry for that ,you can call me when you submit new songs

Last edited by N E K O 2013-03-18T06:47:09+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

N E K O

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Topic Starter

N E K O 2013-03-18T06:29:30+00:00

GGBY wrote:
差点儿忘了这茬儿

insane
00:35:390 (9,1) - 9结尾到1之间的间隔容易读成整拍，可以试试把9变成一个单note --稍微把1贴近了一些...9因为压在鼓点上所以保留

高端的不懂

就是感觉刚作图的人都容易有一个倾向就是排列的时候把所有梗的重心都围绕到屏幕中心，下不去往边角延伸的狠手，我也有这毛病并且不知道怎么改

这个确实，改成现在这样还是经过了不少次改思路什么的..一开始真是单纯的绕着圈跑...边角这个对我来说现在还是掌握不太好，因为edit界面的网格超出多少是可接受范围还不太能很好掌握，所以先都放在格内了..

~~顺便基基夶这壶你拿走.~~

Skystar

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Joined May 2011

Skystar 2013-03-18T07:23:26+00:00

blackabyss wrote:
[Skystar's Insane]
00:01:154 (1,2) - make these slider point straight
00:10:860 (1,1,1) - this overlap and spent too much NC
00:26:743 (7) - move to x:364 y:168, for more better flow
00:28:507 (4) - not stacked properly
00:33:625 (2) - stack this under first slider and rotate clock wise
00:34:154 (3) - move to x:248 y:164, followed above
00:34:948 (5) - stack this under slider 4 head
00:38:037 (7) - stack this upper the next slider, rotate anti-clockwise
00:44:213 (1) - make this slider wavy like this lol http://puu.sh/2j7e9
00:47:743 (1) , 00:48:096 (1) - remove NC because you spent too much
00:55:154 (10) - NC because follow the vocal instead
00:55:507 (1) - remove NC
00:56:566 - NC and remove the next NC
01:06:448 - NC here, follow the vocal
01:06:625 (11) - make like this? http://puu.sh/2j7tT
01:06:801 - remove NC
01:07:860 (7) - stack this head of slider with 01:06:272 (9)
01:10:154 - overlap and spent too much NC

you should really go to realize that what is "modding" means and try to improve it.

GGBY wrote:
差点儿忘了这茬儿

insane
00:35:390 (9,1) - 9结尾到1之间的间隔容易读成整拍，可以试试把9变成一个单note

高端的不懂

就是感觉刚作图的人都容易有一个倾向就是排列的时候把所有梗的重心都围绕到屏幕中心，下不去往边角延伸的狠手，我也有这毛病并且不知道怎么改

感覺正好相反啊,我以前看過大多數新人的圖都很容易犯一個問題就是把note都堆在一個角落而繞不出來.
像阿蛋這樣能一下做到滿屏幕繞圈的真的很難得.

Melt

353 posts

Joined May 2011

Melt 2013-03-18T14:27:01+00:00

:3

[General]

感觉还是换一下combo colour会让图增色不少（黄绿组合真心给我感觉是很早的老图

[Easy]

00:08:919(3)一张图看下来这是唯一一个带红点的slider,虽然也没错但是还是感觉改圆滑好点，也比较符合这段音乐
00:28:331(3,4,1)试试4复制3放成这个样子
SPOILER
01:05:037(3,4)试试这个节奏
SPOILER
01:11:743(7)因为这是一个衔接,所以我感觉换成一个结束于01:12:096的滑条比较好

[Normal]

00:13:154(1)感觉这个spin最后可以降低点音量,或者直接消音
00:30:448(2)感觉可以和00:31:331(1,2)放平行
00:33:801(3)改成这样试试？
SPOILER
00:39:625(3)加一个note？
00:56:919(4)感觉这里没必要finish
01:07:154(1)缺了俩whistle？

[SRY's Hard]

00:02:919(x)总感觉少了点什么,不加个note么
00:07:860(3)感觉这个normal音效还是出来的太突然了,删掉或者减点音量？
01:13:684(4,5,1)只是个建议
SPOILER

[Insane]

00:09:184(2,3)把2上的whistle换到3上去
00:24:978(3,4,5)唔没叠好(逃
00:37:066(1,2)把1上的nc换到2上去
01:01:154(1,2,3,4,5)摆成正5边形好看点
另外就是感觉你3个难度都是图上4个角利用的很少,或者说基本上没放什么东西,可以ctrl+a看一看

大概就这么多加油:3

raririn

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Joined October 2011

raririn 2013-03-18T14:44:39+00:00

渣渣mod 而且晚了不好意思/.\

Red = unrankable stuff D:
Blue = strongly suggest you to do this :3
Normal = just suggestions for reference w

[General]

把tag里的op去掉 2个字母是搜不出来的

[Easy]

00:47:390 (2,3,4) - 稍微有点难啊能不能试着把34合成一个slider
01:15:978 (2) - 在x:216 y:144加一个tick？看起来好一点吧:3

[Normal]

00:05:037 (2) - 不加个折返么orz
00:10:860 (2) - 柑橘这里不用特意加一个finish啊 whistle就够了而且finish略吵orz
00:33:801 (3,4,5) - 感觉这里会被误读但是也不知道怎么样好╮(╯_╰)╭

[Insane]

00:31:331 (5) - 这个方向会舒服点吧ww
00:44:566 (2,3) - 突然减小间距好怪啊还是用1.5左右的距离放吧:/
00:57:625 (5,6,7,8,9) - 这种地方DS要一样的吧喂！有的0.76有的0.88 稍微调一下

加油咯~不错的图祝早日rank :3

N E K O

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Topic Starter

N E K O 2013-03-19T06:36:44+00:00

Melt wrote:
:3

[General]
感觉还是换一下combo colour会让图增色不少（黄绿组合真心给我感觉是很早的老图
[Easy]
00:08:919(3)一张图看下来这是唯一一个带红点的slider,虽然也没错但是还是感觉改圆滑好点，也比较符合这段音乐
00:28:331(3,4,1)试试4复制3放成这个样子
SPOILER
01:05:037(3,4)试试这个节奏
SPOILER
01:11:743(7)因为这是一个衔接,所以我感觉换成一个结束于01:12:096的滑条比较好
[Normal]
00:13:154(1)感觉这个spin最后可以降低点音量,或者直接消音
00:30:448(2)感觉可以和00:31:331(1,2)放平行
00:33:801(3)改成这样试试？
SPOILER
00:39:625(3)加一个note？
00:56:919(4)感觉这里没必要finish
01:07:154(1)缺了俩whistle？
[SRY's Hard]
00:02:919(x)总感觉少了点什么,不加个note么
00:07:860(3)感觉这个normal音效还是出来的太突然了,删掉或者减点音量？
01:13:684(4,5,1)只是个建议
SPOILER
[Insane]
00:09:184(2,3)把2上的whistle换到3上去
00:24:978(3,4,5)唔没叠好(逃
00:37:066(1,2)把1上的nc换到2上去
01:01:154(1,2,3,4,5)摆成正5边形好看点
另外就是感觉你3个难度都是图上4个角利用的很少,或者说基本上没放什么东西,可以ctrl+a看一看
大概就这么多加油:3

改了一些，谢谢

N E K O

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Topic Starter

N E K O 2013-03-19T11:29:05+00:00

raririn wrote:
渣渣mod 而且晚了不好意思/.\

---------能来就很感动了;w;

Red = unrankable stuff D:
Blue = strongly suggest you to do this :3
Normal = just suggestions for reference w

[General]
把tag里的op去掉 2个字母是搜不出来的 ----fixed

[Easy]
00:47:390 (2,3,4) - 稍微有点难啊能不能试着把34合成一个slider ---好的.不过easy的难度还真是不好掌握...
01:15:978 (2) - 在x:216 y:144加一个tick？看起来好一点吧:3 -----呃tick是什么...
[Normal]
00:05:037 (2) - 不加个折返么orz ----可以有w
00:10:860 (2) - 柑橘这里不用特意加一个finish啊 whistle就够了而且finish略吵orz ----fixed
00:33:801 (3,4,5) - 感觉这里会被误读但是也不知道怎么样好╮(╯_╰)╭ ----改回了之前的slider+note..

[Insane]
00:31:331 (5) - 这个方向会舒服点吧ww ---恩
00:44:566 (2,3) - 突然减小间距好怪啊还是用1.5左右的距离放吧:/ ----fixed
00:57:625 (5,6,7,8,9) - 这种地方DS要一样的吧喂！有的0.76有的0.88 稍微调一下
----fixed

加油咯~不错的图祝早日rank :3

谢谢拉链(.....

N E K O

159 posts

Joined September 2010

Topic Starter

N E K O 2013-03-19T14:12:13+00:00

Updated , and combo color changed

Elinia

97 posts

Joined February 2012

Elinia 2013-03-24T07:16:21+00:00

~~mod from my love XD~~

[Easy]
00:28:331 (3) - add whistle at the end of the slider
00:35:037 (4) - add whistle
00:37:154 (3) - ^
00:46:860 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/2mWC5 ~~and a little hard for easy players to read without ds I think~~
01:00:449 (4) - add finish
01:26:390 - start the spinner here to follow the music is better?

[Normal]
00:09:978 (3) - remove whistle
00:10:331 (1) - add whistle
00:10:860 (2) - ^
00:11:566 (4) - ^
00:15:625 - end the spinner here?
01:22:684 (2) - add whistle at the end of the slider
01:23:037 (3) - add whistle
01:26:390 - same with easy 0.0

[SRY's Hard]
神图都不敢说话了;_;
00:04:331 - add a circle?
00:06:625 (5) - 还是觉得加个whistle会比较好……
00:17:037 (1) - remove nc?
00:38:566 (1) - add finish
00:44:213 (1) - ^
00:46:860 (8) - ^
00:47:390 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 感觉这个三角形不正看着有点不舒服=-=

[Insane]
00:01:860 (1) - add finish
00:05:919 (1) - ^
00:06:625 (3) - ^
00:09:625 (7) - ^
00:10:860 (3) - ^
00:08:919 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 00:12:272 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I prefer to use Drum here
00:18:272 (8) - try this? http://puu.sh/2mXId
00:54:096 (3) - add finish at the end of the slider
00:54:625 (2) - add finish
01:00:449 (1) - ^
01:01:154 (1) - ^
01:01:860 (5) - ^
01:16:331 (5) - add whistle
01:16:860 (1) - ^
01:17:213 (2) - ^
01:17:743 (5) - ^

[Skystar's Insane]
00:11:213 (1) - 这个滑条总觉得有点违和，vocal声音很短但滑条却很长（虽然背景音确实变高了）。
01:10:507 (1) - ^，考虑把两个滑条的长度大小换一下？
01:26:566 (1) - 感觉多此一举了……上一个circle nc+finish效果就挺好的，这个note没必要吧……

N E K O

159 posts

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Topic Starter

N E K O 2013-03-24T13:30:52+00:00

elinia wrote:
~~mod from my love XD~~

[Easy]
00:28:331 (3) - add whistle at the end of the slider
00:35:037 (4) - add whistle
00:37:154 (3) - ^
00:46:860 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/2mWC5 ~~and a little hard for easy players to read without ds I think~~
01:00:449 (4) - add finish
01:26:390 - start the spinner here to follow the music is better?

----some hitsounds fixed but not all,and i prefer to have spinner start where it is now,cuz it do follow the muisic (without a turning); 46:860 is where i used to fix and i think it's okay now

[Normal]
00:09:978 (3) - remove whistle
00:10:331 (1) - add whistle
00:10:860 (2) - ^
00:11:566 (4) - ^
00:15:625 - end the spinner here?
01:22:684 (2) - add whistle at the end of the slider
01:23:037 (3) - add whistle
01:26:390 - same with easy 0.0

---fixed

[Insane]
00:01:860 (1) - add finish
00:05:919 (1) - ^
00:06:625 (3) - ^
00:09:625 (7) - ^
00:10:860 (3) - ^
00:08:919 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 00:12:272 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I prefer to use Drum here
00:18:272 (8) - try this? http://puu.sh/2mXId
00:54:096 (3) - add finish at the end of the slider
00:54:625 (2) - add finish
01:00:449 (1) - ^
01:01:154 (1) - ^
01:01:860 (5) - ^
01:16:331 (5) - add whistle
01:16:860 (1) - ^
01:17:213 (2) - ^
01:17:743 (5) - ^

I listened carefully for several times and do change some hitsounds as you said.

Thanks a lot

kajiyatta

1,421 posts

Joined April 2011

kajiyatta 2013-03-25T10:26:44+00:00

from this queue
General
put hitsounds more consistence better.
Easy
AR,OD,HP +1, it's more common in Ranked maps.
Placement
00:07:507(1,2,3) move to center like this?

SPOILER

00:30:396(1,2,3) to be consistence, like this?

SPOILER

00:46:860(1) this note has wrong spacing, please use Distant snap.
Rhythm
01:00:801 add a note better to follow the vocal.
Hit Sonud
00:01:860(1) delete finish at head, maybe add whistle better.
00:10:331(1) delete finish
00:28:331(3) add whistle at end
00:25:154(2) add whistle at head
00:35:037(4)^
00:37:154(3)^

Normal
I suppose some notes have bad flow, it means it's difficult to expect for newbie.
Placement
00:47:390(3,4) this flow seems difficult for newbie, so maybe replace better. e.g)

SPOILER

00:48:448(1) to be expected next note easily, you can change the shape a bit.

SPOILER

Rhythm
00:33:448(2,3,4) a bit weird for me, to follow the vocal as you did, maybe like this?

SPOILER

Hit Sonud
00:05:037(2) add whistle at head
00:08:566(1)^
00:10:331(1) add whistle at end
00:11:566(4)^
00:40:507(5)^
00:12:801(6) add whistle
01:02:390(3) add finish at head

SRY's Hard
Placement
00:17:307(1) remove NC.
00:23:390(3) Ctrl+G? I suppose it's more fun
01:06:272(8) make a triangle like this?

SPOILER

01:19:154(1) you can set this note with DS better than stacked.
01:26:213(2) to follow the flow on rotation from (1), curved this note like this?

SPOILER

Rhythm
00:03:096(6) a bit weird because of some blanks, so put like this?

SPOILER

00:38:037(5) to follow the vocal, use reverse slider better.

SPOILER

Hit Sonud
00:01:860(3) add whistle
00:13:507(2) delete finish at head, there is no cymbal here. if adds, maybe at 00:13:154 better
01:24:096(2) delete finish at head

Insane
Placement
00:53:390(4) Ctrl+G to make a tiny jump?
Rhythm
there are many unnecessary green lines, please check it.
00:59:566(2,1,1,1,) well, this slow part seems weird for me since the song has bumping.
01:03:801 add a note here.
Hit Sonud
00:01:860(1) add whistle at head
00:10:860(3) add finish better since already added (1)
00:24:448(1) add finish at head
00:52:684(1) add finish

Skystar's Insane
on Insane you shouldn't make blanks so much.You can easily change that by turning circles into sliders when you feel a second circle isn't appropriate
Placement
00:49:507(1) too faster, I don't think this change of velocity is needed.
01:23:390(1)^
Rhythm
00:02:919 blank breaks your pattern, please add a note
00:25:154(2) move at 00:24:978
00:36:448(2) ^
00:26:390 add a note here.
00:58:331~ it is poor only to put notes and not to deserve Insane. well, it is example.

SPOILER

01:26:566(1) delete this note,and start spinner here.
Hit Sonud
00:34:154(3) missing a clap?

good luck~

N E K O

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Topic Starter

N E K O 2013-03-25T15:01:38+00:00

I gonna fix it,but it's late and the students's department is going to cut the electricity :3
so tomorrow i'll work on it

Last edited by N E K O 2013-03-26T04:22:54+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

N E K O

159 posts

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Topic Starter

N E K O 2013-03-26T03:12:11+00:00

General
put hitsounds more consistence better.
----Yes,i'm not so good at hitsound , but practicing and improving it .

Easy
Easy
AR,OD,HP +1, it's more common in Ranked maps. ---fixed
Placement
00:07:507(1,2,3) move to center like this?
SPOILER
00:30:396(1,2,3) to be consistence, like this?
SPOILER
00:46:860(1) this note has wrong spacing, please use Distant snap.
----Placement problem all fixed.

Rhythm
01:00:801 add a note better to follow the vocal.
Hit Sonud
00:01:860(1) delete finish at head, maybe add whistle better.
00:10:331(1) delete finish
00:28:331(3) add whistle at end
00:25:154(2) add whistle at head
00:35:037(4)^
00:37:154(3)^
----all fixed

Normal
Normal
I suppose some notes have bad flow, it means it's difficult to expect for newbie.
Placement
00:47:390(3,4) this flow seems difficult for newbie, so maybe replace better. e.g)
SPOILER
00:48:448(1) to be expected next note easily, you can change the shape a bit.
SPOILER
----placement fixed

Rhythm
00:33:448(2,3,4) a bit weird for me, to follow the vocal as you did, maybe like this?
SPOILER
Hit Sonud
00:05:037(2) add whistle at head
00:08:566(1)^
00:10:331(1) add whistle at end
00:11:566(4)^
00:40:507(5)^
00:12:801(6) add whistle
01:02:390(3) add finish at head
---fixed

Insane
Insane
Placement
00:53:390(4) Ctrl+G to make a tiny jump? ----good idea
Rhythm
there are many unnecessary green lines, please check it. ----useless greenlines deleted.
00:59:566(2,1,1,1,) well, this slow part seems weird for me since the song has bumping. ---lol i intend to make this part..waiting for other mods.
01:03:801 add a note here. ----kept my origin designHit Sonud
00:01:860(1) add whistle at head
00:10:860(3) add finish better since already added (1)
00:24:448(1) add finish at head
00:52:684(1) add finish
----all dixed.

good luck~

Thanks for your mod

ampzz

ampzz 2013-03-28T03:53:34+00:00

Requested mod as given in my modding queue.

[General]
Offset was incorrect, change it to 446 which is -3 over what you had.

Keep the kiai times consistent as the fountain in the Insane was pointless.

Note: All of these mods are after the offset correction has been implemented.

[Skystar's Insane]

Really didn't like the hitsounding on this, nor did I like the use of the customs. It felt too loud and out of place as soft hitsounding could've worked a treat coupled with some drum sections.

00:01:860 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Why all this NC spam for? I would remove all of them and I would really like for some sort of pattern to be used here to make it interesting to play.
00:02:566 (1,2,1) - Wasn't really a fan of how this played. Recommendation would be to use a half length slider then a circle on the next white tick.
For this above section how about making it into a nice, cute flowing pattern like this -
SPOILER
00:05:037 (2,1,4) - The slightly messy overlapping that occurs here is a personal irk of mine, try to make each of these points all snap on top of each other - (2)'s start, (1)'s end and (4)'s placement .
00:08:213 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - More NC spam so here's a corrective fix -
SPOILER
00:08:210 - Remove NC.
00:09:625 - Remove NC.
00:24:448 (1,2) - Didn't like the small gap here, please place a circle on 00:24:975 -.
00:26:210 (5,6) - Same thing here, weird stop in playing feels offputting, suggestive fix for this would be -
SPOILER
00:26:210 - 1/2 length slider
00:26:475 - Circle.
00:26:563 - Circle.
00:27:269 (1,2,3) - Another weird spot, try this for a rhythm instead:
SPOILER
00:27:798 - Circle.
00:27:975 - 1/2 slider with a repeat.
00:40:328 (5,6,7,8,9) - This made no sense, I couldn't hear anything that necessitated the use of blue tick circles. For this section it should go:
SPOILER
00:40:328 - Circle.
00:40:504 - Circle.
00:40:681 (7,8) - Your two sliders to emphasise that higher vocal.
00:44:210 (1,2,3) - This was really awkward when playing considering how your rhythm went which confused me a little as it goes from vocals into something, then nothing at all and finally back to vocals after a skipped section. Try this out -
SPOILER
00:44:740 - 1/2 slider.
00:45:093 - 1/2 slider.
00:45:445 - Circle.
00:45:798 - Circle.
00:45:975 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,1) - More NC spam. Suggestive fix after applying above and removing all of the NC -
SPOILER
00:45:798 - NC
00:46:857 - NC
If you do the above I would highly recommend rearranging 00:47:387 (2,3,4) - so that it's not all cluttered.
00:48:446 (1,2,3) - This could do with some additional distance snap as it didn't feel as jumpy as I thought it might have been on a run through.
00:49:151 (1) - Remove NC.
00:49:504 (6) - Remove NC.
00:57:622 (3,4,5) - This flowed poorly and felt awkward to play. Even something as simple as placing (4) on previous 00:57:269 (2) - 's end would play nicely.
00:58:328 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1) - Was not intuitive to play in the least and felt rather lazy.
01:00:269 - Place a circle here.
01:03:975 (1) - Replace this with two circles instead.
01:06:622 (12) - Why? This made no sense, remove it and replace with a circle.
Another alternative is to remove that beat completely and use 01:06:445 (11) - as a snap jump which plays really fun, like so -
SPOILER
01:09:622 (1,2,1,1) - If you organise this better you'll only need the 1 combo here as it could work really well with slider jumping between the end two sliders.
01:12:093 (1) - Remove NC.
01:20:916 (1,2,3,4) - Oh my, where did this come from? Really confusing trying to play it and even more so in editor when I can hear it properly. I would change it to be something like:
SPOILER
01:21:445 - 1/1 slider ending on 01:21:798 -
01:22:151 - Circle here.
01:22:681 (1,2,1,2,1) - Remove NC from all of this and organise it so it's interesting to play.
01:26:563 (1) - Please don't make up beats which don't exist. Move the spinner start to here instead.

[Insane]

Remove all of the inherited points that do nothing at all.

The hitsounding in general really needs a lot of work.
For example; raise the intro soft hitsound volume up to at least - 65%

Over all, please rework on most of your 'patterns' so that they're enjoyable to look at and play. I'll point out the ones which need quite a bit of work but just make sure to give them a decent touch up.

Your combo'ing needs a bunch of work too but I'm loosing steam with this.

00:10:328 (1,2,3,4) - Didn't particularly make any sense. Either copy what you did later on with just single circles where needed or go for two 1/1 sliders.
00:13:151 (1,2,3,4,5) - Really boring to play
00:15:534 (9) - Remove.
00:15:622 (9,1,2,3,4,5) - This could have been such a nice star or sakura pattern instead with the (5) starting on previous (9)'s end.
00:18:357 (9) - Remove.
00:19:504 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This has a lot of potential to play nicely if you spend some time in making it into an interesting combo area.
00:27:269 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Was not enjoyable to play this as nothing felt like a natural flow or jump, please rearrange it to play better.
00:31:328 (5) - Use two circles instead.
00:32:563 (7,8,9,10,11,1,2) - Ugh, this was painful to look at and play; please rework this.
00:34:857 (5,6,7,8,9) - I understand you want to use patterns but try to make them actually fit as this just plays really off.
00:41:387 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Sort of boring just stacking these.
00:46:328 (6,1) - Swap this for a 1/1 slider.
00:51:446 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Unnatural flow.
00:45:093 (4,1,2) - This I would change to be a 1/2 slider with a repeat and a circle at 00:45:622 -.
00:45:622 - If you apply above, NC here.
00:50:387 (3,4,5,6) - Doesn't feel right to play.
00:54:710 (3) - Remove.
00:57:622 (5,6,7,8,9) - Would've preferred this to arc into the slider instead of the weird straight line.
01:02:122 (7) - Remove.
01:04:681 (5,6,7,8) - Really bad, was not enjoyable to play at all, please tidy this up and make it nice to play.
01:06:093 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Another unenjoyable section.
01:07:681 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^^

Going to stop here as you should get the general idea by now that a bunch of things need fixing.

[Hard]

The hitsounding needs work inclusive of lowering the volume for most; especially in the removal of the normal hitfinishes which don't fit.

00:18:798 (1,2) - These feel too high up, rearrange your previous combo end so that it can be placed lower.
00:37:151 (4,5) - Something about this just irked me but I can't put my finger on it.
00:48:093 (3,1,2,3,1) - This was slightly confusing. Would suggest changing the triangle to just be a nice flowing combo off the slider end.
00:54:798 (5,6,7,8) - Any reason why this randomly increases in distance snap? I don't feel the need for it at all.
01:08:916 (7,8,9) - Wasn't enjoyable to play and felt out of place.
01:20:740 (7) - Didn't like this, would suggest just changing it to be a circle placed on the big white tick instead.
01:25:857 (1,2) - Far too random.

Overall some nice flow happening here but some of the stuff needs to be touched up.

[Normal]

Same deal as with your Insane, patterns need a lot of attention to detail.

00:05:034 (2,3) - Swap this for two 1/1 sliders instead
00:26:210 (4) -
00:29:210 (5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Painful to look at and would be unenjoyable for players to play.
00:46:681 (1,2,3,4) - Fix this up.
The kiai until the end needs a ridiculous amount of remapping to occur and I'm not in the mood to type out all of it.

[Easy]
Nothing to note here as the difficulty only lasts for 8 seconds...

N E K O

159 posts

Joined September 2010

Topic Starter

N E K O 2013-03-28T14:05:41+00:00

Wow i was shocked by such long mod,but after i went it through,I felt sth that really stuck.
I don't think any of the part i made was "Didn't particularly make any sense".

I appreciate some of your advices and that are really helpful.I fixed some "patterns" in insane.BUT, i intend to make some part like that,that was my style.So i hope you can understand it.

[Insane]

Remove all of the inherited points that do nothing at all. ---removed

The hitsounding in general really needs a lot of work. I'll check it later
For example; raise the intro soft hitsound volume up to at least - 65%

Over all, please rework on most of your 'patterns' so that they're enjoyable to look at and play. I'll point out the ones which need quite a bit of work but just make sure to give them a decent touch up.
---actually i remake some in normal and ez,but kept some in insane.

Your combo'ing needs a bunch of work too but I'm loosing steam with this. ---oops,what you mean "combo'ing"?

SPOILER

00:10:328 (1,2,3,4) - Didn't particularly make any sense. Either copy what you did later on with just single circles where needed or go for two 1/1 sliders.
00:13:151 (1,2,3,4,5) - Really boring to play
00:15:534 (9) - Remove.
00:15:622 (9,1,2,3,4,5) - This could have been such a nice star or sakura pattern instead with the (5) starting on previous (9)'s end.
00:18:357 (9) - Remove.
00:19:504 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This has a lot of potential to play nicely if you spend some time in making it into an interesting combo area.
00:27:269 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Was not enjoyable to play this as nothing felt like a natural flow or jump, please rearrange it to play better.
00:31:328 (5) - Use two circles instead.
00:32:563 (7,8,9,10,11,1,2) - Ugh, this was painful to look at and play; please rework this.
00:34:857 (5,6,7,8,9) - I understand you want to use patterns but try to make them actually fit as this just plays really off.
00:41:387 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Sort of boring just stacking these.
00:46:328 (6,1) - Swap this for a 1/1 slider.
00:51:446 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Unnatural flow.
00:45:093 (4,1,2) - This I would change to be a 1/2 slider with a repeat and a circle at 00:45:622 -.
00:45:622 - If you apply above, NC here.
00:50:387 (3,4,5,6) - Doesn't feel right to play.
00:54:710 (3) - Remove.
00:57:622 (5,6,7,8,9) - Would've preferred this to arc into the slider instead of the weird straight line.
01:02:122 (7) - Remove.
01:04:681 (5,6,7,8) - Really bad, was not enjoyable to play at all, please tidy this up and make it nice to play.
01:06:093 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Another unenjoyable section.
01:07:681 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^^

Changed a lot ,thanks for your suggestions.

Going to stop here as you should get the general idea by now that a bunch of things need fixing.

Still, i nearly remaped the normal diff.
Easy diff was a mistake i made....8sec...oops.

Thanks for your mod

Last edited by N E K O 2013-04-04T04:07:56+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

N E K O

159 posts

Joined September 2010

Topic Starter

N E K O 2013-03-30T15:01:38+00:00

AR changed from 8 to 9

Last edited by N E K O 2013-03-31T12:33:55+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Strawberry

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Joined October 2010

Strawberry 2013-03-30T15:25:13+00:00

Banana wrote:
From forum PM
[Hardy]
00:34:684 (7) - 考虑向上弯 keep the blanket here
00:38:037 (5) - whistle改开头？ changed and romoved the whistle on the start of next slider.
00:42:978 (5) - (nazi) 往上一点x325 y310 um.
01:18:448 (3,4,1,2) - 整体向下到x188 y186再微调别的（(4)和后面一串 idk it's fine to me..

Kirino Kousaka wrote:
[SRY's Hard]
00:13:507 (2) - Remove finish on start. Put a clap instead. sure better. fixed a bit more.
00:17:037 (1) - Remove NC. okay
00:18:801 (1,2) - Find a way to bring these notes lower, (1) is touching the HP bar and that's annoying should be better now.
01:26:566 (1) - Let it end on 01:29:390. nah i won't make the spinner more longer..

Entreal wrote:
SRY's Hard
00:18:801 (1,2) - Played it, suggest moving it down due to the die meter blocking some of it. My screen res. is 1024x768. have changed.
00:32:037 (6,7) - Should have this slider blanket the next one. Like: i want to keep for now since the blanket broke the flow a bit..

Can probably make it better.
00:35:743 - Intro to a new tune? Finish? nice point.
00:38:037 - Not sure what you're following here, the woohoo or the music. Woohoo should have slider end in 00:38:213 yea, but i want the rhythm here more smooth.
00:41:213 - NC, since new lyric thingy. nice catch
00:41:390 - Remove NC if ^ ^
00:42:625 - Note here, if vocals. here for take a breath. no need to follow the vocal completely.
00:57:625 - Why a soft hit here when the previous slider has a normal hitsound? the soft-whistle fit here very much imo.
01:01:331 - Should add note here if following vocals. same as 00:42:625
01:07:331 - Move this note to have the previous slider blanket it, makes it look nicer would break the flow~ just keep for now.
01:26:213 - Can ignore this due to the diff being hard, but i feel as if the second slider should be Ctrl + G and having the first slider blanket it. nah~ i like it x3

smallboat wrote:
SRY
00:10:331 timing線音量調50%比較適中 for toning the stronger beat. :3

Makyu wrote:
[Hard]
00:02:919 - note here, maybe nah it's noisy.
00:06:801 (1) - this slider, is better a single circle here. because 00:06:978 - a note here makes no sense it is a better connection for the transition here.

blackabyss wrote:
[SRY's Hard]
nice diff. btw
00:32:037 (2,3) - more wavy o.o https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/657688 k. changed.
00:38:566 (1) - for better flow, move to x:164 y:212 the present is fine and i don't think it's necessary to be moved~
00:38:919 (2) - followed above, move this note to x:340 y:324 same^
00:52:684 (1,2) - add clap on the tail, feels better a bit noisy for me x.x
00:56:566 (4) - why no stack this under slider 00:55:507 (1) it's a bit hard to read and difficult to be arranged.. orz

Melt wrote:
[SRY's Hard]
00:02:919(x)总感觉少了点什么,不加个note么 same as above. it's not really suitable and i prefer my way. :3
00:07:860(3)感觉这个normal音效还是出来的太突然了,删掉或者减点音量？不觉得..
01:13:684(4,5,1)只是个建议
SPOILER
nah ;w;

elinia wrote:
[SRY's Hard]
神图都不敢说话了;_;
00:04:331 - add a circle? there should be a short break~
00:06:625 (5) - 还是觉得加个whistle会比较好…… right.
00:17:037 (1) - remove nc? done.
00:38:566 (1) - add finish a bit noisy..
00:44:213 (1) - ^ ^
00:46:860 (8) - ^ ^
00:47:390 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 感觉这个三角形不正看着有点不舒服=-= lol

kajiyatta wrote:
SRY's Hard
Placement
00:17:307(1) remove NC. done.
00:23:390(3) Ctrl+G? I suppose it's more fun nah. i don't like it.. ;w;
01:06:272(8) make a triangle like this? changed by my way~
SPOILER
01:19:154(1) you can set this note with DS better than stacked. um.. i want to keep now..
01:26:213(2) to follow the flow on rotation from (1), curved this note like this? nice catch.
SPOILER

Rhythm
00:03:096(6) a bit weird because of some blanks, so put like this? i just think there need some breath..
SPOILER
00:38:037(5) to follow the vocal, use reverse slider better. gotcha. fixed~!
SPOILER
Hit Sonud
00:01:860(3) add whistle k
00:13:507(2) delete finish at head, there is no cymbal here. if adds, maybe at 00:13:154 better done
01:24:096(2) delete finish at head ^

ampzz wrote:
[Hard]

The hitsounding needs work inclusive of lowering the volume for most; especially in the removal of the normal hitfinishes which don't fit. um.

00:18:798 (1,2) - These feel too high up, rearrange your previous combo end so that it can be placed lower. yea have done.
00:37:151 (4,5) - Something about this just irked me but I can't put my finger on it. wat..
00:48:093 (3,1,2,3,1) - This was slightly confusing. Would suggest changing the triangle to just be a nice flowing combo off the slider end. it's funny to play~ and that's why i want to keep it. no change for now. :3
00:54:798 (5,6,7,8) - Any reason why this randomly increases in distance snap? I don't feel the need for it at all. k. decreased some.
01:08:916 (7,8,9) - Wasn't enjoyable to play and felt out of place. so?
01:20:740 (7) - Didn't like this, would suggest just changing it to be a circle placed on the big white tick instead. just want to keep my way. it's more suitable for me.
01:25:857 (1,2) - Far too random. or bored
Overall some nice flow happening here but some of the stuff needs to be touched up.

thank you all guys~

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LunarSakuya

osu! Alumni

1,704 posts

Joined August 2011

LunarSakuya 2013-04-04T04:35:15+00:00

hi =v=

General
Add "skystar" to tags since that was Yuko's previous name

Easy
00:39:978 (4) - Finish (or some hitsound) at end would sound nice
00:46:860 (1,2) - Combine these into a slider https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/688724, might be easier for beginners to get the change of rhythm; also fits vocals imo
01:06:096 (5) - Move a bit so it's not touching (4)
01:09:625 (4) - NC
01:20:919 (4) - ^, shorter combos are preferred in easier diffs sometimes
01:26:566 (1) - i think you should move this spinner back to the red tick at 01:26:390; fits the bg music more

Normal
00:03:096 (1) - Delete NC
01:22:684 (5) - Avoid having so many repeats especially in easier diffs; I think a 1/1 slider with a reverse would work nicely~
01:26:566 (1) - Same as Easy, move back to red tick
Sometimes, I feel you're following the vocals too much, causing the use of many 1/2 rhythms which could be stressful for beginners and maybe a higher star rating. Maybe try simplifying some rhythms if you can

SRY's Hard
congrats on MAT!

00:13:154 (1) - Finish, to emphasize intro of a new stanza
00:24:448 (1) - ^
00:38:037 (5) - Move this further away from (4), it almost feels like an unnecessary antijump?
Nice

Insane
00:05:919 (7) - Pull this down somewhere like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/688749, keeps spacing more consistent and gives space for the next note
00:13:507 (2,3) - Ctrl + G, i felt that (1,2) needed more distance; you could even stack (3) on the end of (5) i guess lol http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/688753
00:39:801 (5,6) - Try this rhythm instead: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/688757
00:47:390 (1,1) - I feel like these should be speeding up instead of getting slower, but it's alright if you can't find a way

00:53:919 (6) - Finish
00:55:507 (6) - NC fits here better than the next note

Skystar's Insane
00:08:919 (1) - Delete NC, didn't really catch the point of the short combo
00:33:448 - Add a note like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/688763 I feel like there needs to be some emphasis on the vocals here
00:36:448 (2) - Move back to the red tick at 00:36:272, i find it more natural to the rhythm while playing
00:49:860 (1) - Add Finish on head
01:26:566 (1) - Sounded off, you should delete or rly lessen the emphasis on this note; the Finish should belong with 01:26:390 (8) -

Cute map!! Fight!

N E K O

159 posts

Joined September 2010

Topic Starter

N E K O 2013-04-04T09:08:36+00:00

LunarSakuya wrote:
hi =v=

General
Add "skystar" to tags since that was Yuko's previous name ----fixed

Easy
00:39:978 (4) - Finish (or some hitsound) at end would sound nice----fixed
00:46:860 (1,2) - Combine these into a slider https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/688724, might be easier for beginners to get the change of rhythm; also fits vocals imo ----kay,fixed
01:06:096 (5) - Move a bit so it's not touching (4) ----fixed
01:09:625 (4) - NC ----fixed
01:20:919 (4) - ^, shorter combos are preferred in easier diffs sometimes ----fixed
01:26:566 (1) - i think you should move this spinner back to the red tick at 01:26:390; fits the bg music more ----fixed

Normal
00:03:096 (1) - Delete NC ----fixed
01:22:684 (5) - Avoid having so many repeats especially in easier diffs; I think a 1/1 slider with a reverse would work nicely~ ----fixed
01:26:566 (1) - Same as Easy, move back to red tick----fixed
Sometimes, I feel you're following the vocals too much, causing the use of many 1/2 rhythms which could be stressful for beginners and maybe a higher star rating. Maybe try simplifying some rhythms if you can
Yeah,you're coming to the point,I followed the vocals too much.So, changed some.

Insane
00:05:919 (7) - Pull this down somewhere like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/688749, keeps spacing more consistent and gives space for the next note ----fixed
00:13:507 (2,3) - Ctrl + G, i felt that (1,2) needed more distance; you could even stack (3) on the end of (5) i guess lol http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/688753 goood idea,changed
00:39:801 (5,6) - Try this rhythm instead: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/688757 ---umm,ok but i can't see the differences.
00:47:390 (1,1) - I feel like these should be speeding up instead of getting slower, but it's alright if you can't find a way just keep it like that
00:53:919 (6) - Finish ----fixed
00:55:507 (6) - NC fits here better than the next note ----fixed

Cute map!! Fight!

Thanks a lot for your quick reply and nice mod :3:3:3:3:3:3

Skystar

1,628 posts

Joined May 2011

Skystar 2013-04-04T09:31:42+00:00

LunarSakuya wrote:
Skystar's Insane
00:36:448 (2) - Move back to the red tick at 00:36:272, i find it more natural to the rhythm while playing No, just made consistency with 00:25:154 (2) -

others all fixed, thanks.

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Strawberry

osu! Alumni

1,536 posts

Joined October 2010

Strawberry 2013-04-07T00:28:50+00:00

Fixed some tiny things.

osu file format v12

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 49066
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:Shiawase High Tension (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:シアワセ☆ハイテンション↑↑ (TV Size)
Artist:Satou Rina, Inoue Marina & Chihara Minori
ArtistUnicode:佐藤利奈，井上麻里奈&茅原実里
Creator:N E K O
Version:SRY's Hard
Source:Minami-ke Tadaima
Tags:opening haruka kana chiaki Strawberry Amamiya Yuko skystar
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N E K O

159 posts

Joined September 2010

Topic Starter

N E K O 2013-04-07T12:03:58+00:00

updated for SRY

2013/4/8 19:24

updated video.

LKs

3,119 posts

Joined August 2009

LKs 2013-05-01T10:18:00+00:00

hi

[General]

音质太差了以至于音效放上去都显得喧宾夺主南家完结这么久了还没有高音质mp3吗现在这个连网上的128都不如..
统一一下kiai

[hitsound]

sliderslide静音吧听着不那么好

[天空星]

00:02:390 (2) - whistle
00:07:507 (1) - 如果他换了好音源这个可以finish
00:12:448 (4,5,6,7,1) - 与其把弧形做的这么歪保持间距不如做个小跳把弧形做好或者整体拉大一些间距
00:30:625 (3) - 这可以放note
00:34:154 (4) - jump意义不明

[Insane]

00:39:625 (4,7) - stack
01:01:154 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 五角星形状有点太苦逼用工具做吧问星神他会告诉你

[normal]

00:04:684 (1) - 间距和blanket
00:10:331 (1,2,3,4,5) - 开头部分的音效加的有问题尤其这里加音效要统一点别想到什么放什么 00:48:448 (1) - 还有这种
01:00:801 (3,1) - stack
还有kiai段的那些空白线红线起的slider做的节奏 normal不用想那些东西本来音效就不够连贯弄了那个更让人觉得这diff 完成度有问题

[easy]

00:08:919 (3) - 不要害怕放finish 就算你真不想放4个也要放在后两个上
00:48:448 (6) - ^
00:24:448 (1) - 这break的结束时间不在节奏上

N E K O

159 posts

Joined September 2010

Topic Starter

N E K O 2013-05-01T13:47:20+00:00

LKs wrote:
hi

[General]

音质太差了以至于音效放上去都显得喧宾夺主南家完结这么久了还没有高音质mp3吗现在这个连网上的128都不如..
统一一下kiai ---fixed,我的ez nm和insane一致了。

---从别的图那扒了一个mp3...感觉好了一些（？）

[hitsound]

sliderslide静音吧听着不那么好 ------好

[Insane]

00:39:625 (4,7) - stack ----fixed
01:01:154 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 五角星形状有点太苦逼用工具做吧问星神他会告诉你 ----fixed

[normal]

00:04:684 (1) - 间距和blanket ----fixed
00:10:331 (1,2,3,4,5) - 开头部分的音效加的有问题尤其这里加音效要统一点别想到什么放什么 00:48:448 (1) - 还有这种
01:00:801 (3,1) - stack ---这部分因为改了一点节奏，稍微重做了一下.
还有kiai段的那些空白线红线起的slider做的节奏 normal不用想那些东西本来音效就不够连贯弄了那个更让人觉得这diff 完成度有问题

音效改好了..统一起来了.

[easy]

00:08:919 (3) - 不要害怕放finish 就算你真不想放4个也要放在后两个上 ----fixed
00:48:448 (6) - ^ ----fixed
00:24:448 (1) - 这break的结束时间不在节奏上 ---放在短白线了

Last edited by N E K O 2013-05-02T13:47:08+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Skystar

1,628 posts

Joined May 2011

Skystar 2013-05-02T13:22:50+00:00

LKs wrote:
[天空星]

00:02:390 (2) - whistle o
00:07:507 (1) - 如果他换了好音源这个可以finish o
00:12:448 (4,5,6,7,1) - 与其把弧形做的这么歪保持间距不如做个小跳把弧形做好或者整体拉大一些间距乾脆改成slider
00:30:625 (3) - 这可以放note o
00:34:154 (4) - jump意义不明我明明已經改了, 不知道為甚麼又

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N E K O

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N E K O 2013-05-02T13:28:24+00:00

Updated again.

LKs

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LKs 2013-05-02T14:16:19+00:00

offest 用404~406 以及我的意思是所有sliderslide都用静音的包括soft

N E K O

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N E K O 2013-05-02T14:37:53+00:00

LKs wrote:
offest 用404~406 以及我的意思是所有sliderslide都用静音的包括soft

改好了

LKs

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LKs 2013-05-02T15:07:42+00:00

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Strawberry 2013-05-04T14:15:50+00:00

Accel World

Accel World 2013-05-07T13:15:03+00:00

总柑橘是要rank了的节奏

popner

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popner 2013-05-07T14:51:48+00:00

The video quality seems bad because I see some mosaics:

[Skystar's Insane]
00:47:347 (1,1,1) - The hitsound of slider head is faded out with silence slider end, so there is a sharply decrease in volume. This is unnatural, because there is no such noticeable fade-out here. My suggestion is, you don't need to silence slider end where there are drums.
这里头音渐弱尾音消音，给人明显的淡出感觉，而事实上这里并没有明显淡出。我的建议，尾音消音没必要，因为那几个地方鼓是很明显的。
01:10:464 (1) -

SPOILER

静音滑条尾最好都改掉，这歌没有必须消尾音的地方吧。

Skystar

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Skystar 2013-05-07T15:14:14+00:00

popner wrote:
[Skystar's Insane]
00:47:347 (1,1,1) - The hitsound of slider head is faded out with silence slider end, so there is a sharply decrease in volume. This is unnatural, because there is no such noticeable fade-out here. My suggestion is, you don't need to silence slider end where there are drums.
这里头音渐弱尾音消音，给人明显的淡出感觉，而事实上这里并没有明显淡出。我的建议，尾音消音没必要，因为那几个地方鼓是很明显的。的確不是淡出, 改了.
01:10:464 (1) -
SPOILER
好
静音滑条尾最好都改掉，这歌没有必须消尾音的地方吧。

Also changed the rhythm here: 00:25:111 - and 00:36:405 -

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StackLeniency: 0.7
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TitleUnicode:シアワセ☆ハイテンション↑↑ (TV Size)
Artist:Satou Rina, Inoue Marina & Chihara Minori
ArtistUnicode:佐藤利奈，井上麻里奈&茅原実里
Creator:N E K O
Version:Skystar's Insane
Source:Minami-ke Tadaima
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Video changed according to popner's advice

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popner 2013-05-08T15:24:32+00:00

全角逗号后面不需要加空格。。

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N E K O 2013-05-09T06:47:13+00:00

popner wrote:
全角逗号后面不需要加空格。。

..有点紧张了..已改

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popner 2013-05-09T11:51:40+00:00

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