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Broccoly

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Broccoly 2013-02-24T21:12:28+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, June 30, 2013 at 7:35:28 PM

Artist: 40mP
Title: Jenga
Tags: Vocaloid Hatsune Miku megpoid GUMI Natsu Gero EXIT TUNES
BPM: 122
Filesize: 8394kb
Play Time: 04:24
Difficulties Available:

Gero's Easy (1.34 stars, 196 notes)
Insane (4.98 stars, 578 notes)
Natsu's Hard (4.79 stars, 543 notes)
Normal (3.32 stars, 300 notes)

Download: 40mP - Jenga
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
Dedicated to: _Roring (로링)
Storyboard by: Vainslay
Relax miku song~ Very first map for rank!
-
The feelings of doubt, a love filled with guilt
A strategy game all about things you took away
Fumbling, I searched for the future we should choose
When I pulled something out from that gap, I thought I saw your tears
What stood before us has easily collapsed down
It was in vain.
Let's gather our pieces together once again
-
Gero's Easy - 100%
Normal - 100%
Natsu's Hard - 100%
Insane - 100%
------

Mapper's note (Thanks to all the modders!!)

2/26/13 - Finished Insane diff - by me.
2/27/13 - Started Normal diff. Applied HabiHolic's modding for insane diff
2/27/13 - Applied Star Stream's timing. Changed mp3 and Background IMG. plz redownload.
2/28/13 - Finished hitsounds for Insane
3/1/13 - Finished Normal diff - by me.
3/2/13 - Finished hitsounds for Normal/ made it more difficult (3 stars -> 3.5 stars)
3/2/13 - Started Easy diff / Insane: AR -1, OD-1
3/3/13 - Applied qkenan's mod
3/4/13 - Applied Gero's mod
3/5/13 - Applied Slow-ru's mod
3/6/13 - Canceled my easy diff. Gero starts Easy diff. Yay~
3/7/13 - Added Vainslay's Storyboard <3
3/7/13 - Applied Zhengster's mod
3/9/13 - Fixed a bug (thanks to Slow-ru)
3/11/13 - Updated Storyboard
3/12/13 - Updated Storyboard - (fading in and out to grey miku) AWESOME JOB
3/14/13 - Applied newtoniorock8's mod
3/22/13 - Applied Captin1's mod
3/24/13 - Applied Saten's mod
3/25/13 - Gero's Easy 100% done. Moving to pending.
3/26/13 - Applied Norman's mod
3/27/13 - Updated Storyboard (fixed BG disappearing bug + better blur)
3/27/13 - Applied Yuki-Kun, Pisces, cFiszpan's mod.
3/30/13 - Updated SB!
4/1/13 - Applied xxheroxx's mod.
4/5/13 - Udated SB! Applied PortalLife's mod.
4/8/13 - Applied Wolf's mod.
4/12/13 - Applied Laurier's mod.
4/13/13 - Applied goodbye's mod.
4/15/13 - Applied Clique's mod.
4/16/13 - Applied -iCo-'s mod.
4/17/13 - Fixed some error Tari pointed out.
4/22/13 - Applied CDFA's mod.
4/23/13 - Applied Teara's mod.
5/5/13 - Applied ampzz's mod.
5/15/13 - Applied LunarSakuya's mod.
5/19/13 - Fixed SB problems. Resized imgs to 640x480
5/28/13 - Applied HeatKai's mod.
6/9/13 - Bubbled by Teara <3333333
6/10/13 - Bubble popped/applied the mod by Frostmourne
6/11/13 - Rebubbled by Frostmourne
6/12/13 - Bubble self-popped/applied the mod by Faust in-game.
6/13/13 - Applied the mod by Faust.
6/28/13 - Rebubbled by Faust.
6/29/13 - Applied the mod by Sapphireghost
6/30/13 - Applied the recheck mod by Sapphireghost
6/30/13 - Applied the mod and then rebubbled by LunarSakuya

Last edited by Broccoly 2013-07-01T00:28:45+00:00, edited 181 times in total.

HelloSCV

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HelloSCV 2013-02-26T07:00:06+00:00

arist : 40mP
arist unicode : 40㍍P

title : Jenga
title unicode : ジェンガ

delete 40mP on source , and since you added GUMI on tag so you don't need to write Feat. GUMI , so delete that plz

Natsu

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Natsu 2013-02-26T08:13:11+00:00

Can i make hard? :3

Broccoly

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Broccoly 2013-02-26T08:21:06+00:00

Natsu wrote:
Can i make hard? :3

:0 Natsu!! Sure~ you're welcomed

HabiHolic

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HabiHolic 2013-02-27T01:00:45+00:00

Hi M4M Modding~
[General]
Your background is UNRANKABLE ! !
That means you map will not get ranked if you don't change it.
Get a new picture with 800 x 600 or 1024 x 768 !

Your music bitrate is too high! -> UNRANKABLE ! !
That means you map will not get ranked if you don't change it.
Convert your mp3 so that it's at least 128 kbit/s.

Any difficulty in applying the hit sound

01:22:047 - Please specify the preview time

[Easy]

1. Easy Why Stars 3.5?Normal difficulty is the difficulty of collision ...
Not change the difficulty to Normal now to re-create what is recommended ..

00:31:646 (1) - Spinner delete
00:29:679 (1) - Spinner 00:31:646 - here Finish plz...
00:48:364 (4,5,6) - Replaced by the slide Because this pattern is a pattern that is seen mainly on the Normal difficulty.
00:54:757 (4,5) - Remove plz..
01:04:099 (6,7,8) - Replaced by the slide Because this pattern is a pattern that is seen mainly on the Normal difficulty.

[Insane]
00:33:981 (3) - Distance is too wide, I think I narrowed down your
00:39:513 (9) - NC?
01:21:310 (1) - Remove NC?
01:46:879 (2,3,4,5) - Placement looks weird ...
01:48:846 (3,4,5,6) - ^
02:17:366 (1) - I think the pattern does not fit ..

Good Luck~

Broccoly

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Broccoly 2013-02-27T02:56:33+00:00

HabiHolic wrote:
Hi M4M Modding~
[General]
Your background is UNRANKABLE ! !
That means you map will not get ranked if you don't change it.
Get a new picture with 800 x 600 or 1024 x 768 ! Got it, I'll fix it.

Your music bitrate is too high! -> UNRANKABLE ! !
That means you map will not get ranked if you don't change it.
Convert your mp3 so that it's at least 128 kbit/s. Thank you, didn't know that.

Any difficulty in applying the hit sound

01:22:047 - Please specify the preview time ok

[Easy]

1. Easy Why Stars 3.5?Normal difficulty is the difficulty of collision ...
Not change the difficulty to Normal now to re-create what is recommended ..

00:31:646 (1) - Spinner delete
00:29:679 (1) - Spinner 00:31:646 - here Finish plz...
00:48:364 (4,5,6) - Replaced by the slide Because this pattern is a pattern that is seen mainly on the Normal difficulty.
00:54:757 (4,5) - Remove plz..
01:04:099 (6,7,8) - Replaced by the slide Because this pattern is a pattern that is seen mainly on the Normal difficulty.

--- I asked to mod only insane ---

[Insane]
00:33:981 (3) - Distance is too wide, I think I narrowed down your Fixed
00:39:513 (9) - NC? Fixed
01:21:310 (1) - Remove NC? Fixed
01:46:879 (2,3,4,5) - Placement looks weird ...I'll try fixing it if someone else says the same thing. Looks good to me.
01:48:846 (3,4,5,6) - ^
02:17:366 (1) - I think the pattern does not fit .. Same.. I'll prolly fix it.

Good Luck~

Thank you for the mod. Please read rules carefully next time!

Star Stream

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Star Stream 2013-02-27T06:56:21+00:00

Timing check for my queue
1. Offset: 180ms BPM: 122.00

Good luck then~

Broccoly

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Broccoly 2013-02-27T07:28:22+00:00

Star Stream wrote:
Timing check for my queue
1. Offset: 180ms BPM: 122.00

Good luck then~

Thank you very much!

qkenan

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qkenan 2013-03-03T04:21:52+00:00

Red = Unrankable
Blue = It should be modified
Black = My suggestion

Random mod here _(:з」∠)_

General

About combo color.1 and 2 seems a little similar

Insane

00:58:335 (4,5) - A little difficult to read the pattern.Place them at the end of③ and stack ⑥ at the head ?
01:11:983 (1,2,3) - suggest to put them closer. not only easier to play and seems beautiful
01:22:802 (7) - kind of overly overlap
02:58:335 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - add some hitsounds to let the stream sound better ?
03:01:409 (2,3,4,5) - not so wise to put 1/8 stream. unexpected.Even it fits the music but kind of not suitbable for the whole diff
03:30:671 (1) - It's out of the playfield.
03:34:605 (1) - ^
03:36:573 (1) - ^
04:12:843 (6,7) - kind of overly overlap

Hope this help

HabiHolic

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HabiHolic 2013-03-03T13:44:32+00:00

죄송하지만 한국분이신가요?ㄷㄷㄷㄷ

Broccoly

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Broccoly 2013-03-03T14:02:22+00:00

qkenan wrote:
Red = Unrankable
Blue = It should be modified
Black = My suggestion
Random mod here _(:з」∠)_

General
About combo color.1 and 2 seems a little similar
Changed to a yellowish one.

Insane
00:58:335 (4,5) - A little difficult to read the pattern.Place them at the end of③ and stack ⑥ at the head ? Fixed it, but a bit differently; I wanted to keep the symmetry.
01:11:983 (1,2,3) - suggest to put them closer. not only easier to play and seems beautiful Fixed
01:22:802 (7) - kind of overly overlap Fixed; decresed the slope of the slider.
02:58:335 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - add some hitsounds to let the stream sound better ? I'm really bad at hitsounds.. so I don't know which sound what pattern would suit nicely..
03:01:409 (2,3,4,5) - not so wise to put 1/8 stream. unexpected.Even it fits the music but kind of not suitbable for the whole diff I think that unexpectedness is fun, and somewhat creative in a way imo.. I'll consider it if others criticize it, but i really want to keep those.
03:30:671 (1) - It's out of the playfield. Hmm. Does it still matter if players can follow and hit them without any distraction? The sliders' paths are obvious and not like, cut off, you know.. I'll ask XAT about it in the near future. Thanks for pointing out.
03:34:605 (1) - ^
03:36:573 (1) - ^
04:12:843 (6,7) - kind of overly overlap
I'll consider fixing it.

Hope this help

Thanks a lot. I'll fix it and edit this post ASAP
EDIT: Thanks. you brought out good points.

Last edited by Broccoly 2013-03-04T01:46:25+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Broccoly

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Broccoly 2013-03-03T14:02:47+00:00

HabiHolic wrote:
죄송하지만 한국분이신가요?ㄷㄷㄷㄷ

네 맞습니다.

HabiHolic

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HabiHolic 2013-03-03T14:25:30+00:00

Broccoly wrote:
HabiHolic wrote:
죄송하지만 한국분이신가요?ㄷㄷㄷㄷ
네 맞습니다.

오오밐ㅋㅋ 친추할게요 ㅋㅋㅋ

Broccoly

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Broccoly 2013-03-03T14:41:22+00:00

넵ㅎㅎ
근데 포럼에선 영어를 선호해서 왠만해선 다 영어로 합니다..

Gero

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Gero 2013-03-05T06:21:20+00:00

YO! Hi M4M >//<

[General]

Hitler \:3/! XD

I see you have different breaks in difficulties, this makes inconsistent the map please check this D:

[Easy]

W.I.P

[Normal]

(*) 00:20:343 (5) - where the clap D:? add clap here please ><
(*) 00:24:278 (5) - ^
(*) 00:28:212 (5) - ^
(*) 00:25:753 (1) - add clap at the end of the slider
(*) 00:35:589 (6) - ^
(*) 00:37:557 (1) - ^
(*) 00:39:524 (1) - ^
(*) 00:41:491 (1) - ^
Note* Please broccoly >//< Check the hitsonds >< ignoring these claps in the instrumental

Please listen carefully and place your hitsounds intrumental to be consistent
(*) 00:33:622 (2) - add finish on head and add clap at the end of the slider please

(*) 00:35:589 (1) - NC
(*) 00:39:524 (1) - ^
(*) 00:43:950 (5) - add clap on head
(*) 00:55:261 (1) - NC Here
(*) 01:38:540 (1) - NO NOOO NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! This is confusing for new players, otherwise try to accommodate please

(*) 01:38:540 (1) - add finish on head
(*) 01:54:278 - this kiai time, should end here, This applies in all difficulties

[Insane]

*Note*
this diff needs many hitsounds u.u
(*) 01:39:278 (5,7,9) - Randoms Sliders please change this u.u is a very ugly, try this:

SPOILER

(*) 00:19:852 (1) - NC
(*) 00:23:786 (6) - NC
(*) 00:27:720 (1) - ^
(*) 02:11:983 (1) - ^
(*) 00:27:720 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - where is the hitsounds? U_U
(*) 02:15:917 (1) - NC
(*) 02:19:851 (6) - NC
(*) 04:10:507 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - because no other patterns do here? actually playing it is very confusing Change this please

Okay \:3/ I hope you serve something of mod, Good lucky broccoly >//<!

Broccoly

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Broccoly 2013-03-05T09:10:59+00:00

Gero wrote:
YO! Hi M4M >//<

[General]

Hitler \:3/! XD

I see you have different breaks in difficulties, this makes inconsistent the map please check this D:
I asked in #modhelp, and they said i can put different breaks. I wasn't sure, but now we both know
[Easy]

W.I.P

[Normal]

(*) 00:20:343 (5) - where the clap D:? add clap here please ><
(*) 00:24:278 (5) - ^
(*) 00:28:212 (5) - ^
(*) 00:25:753 (1) - add clap at the end of the slider
(*) 00:35:589 (6) - ^
(*) 00:37:557 (1) - ^
(*) 00:39:524 (1) - ^
(*) 00:41:491 (1) - ^
Note* Please broccoly >//< Check the hitsonds >< ignoring these claps in the instrumental Please listen carefully and place your hitsounds intrumental to be consistent
(*) 00:33:622 (2) - add finish on head and add clap at the end of the slider please
(*) 00:35:589 (1) - NC
(*) 00:39:524 (1) - ^
(*) 00:43:950 (5) - add clap on head
(*) 00:55:261 (1) - NC Here
(*) 01:38:540 (1) - NO NOOO NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! This is confusing for new players, otherwise try to accommodate please
(*) 01:38:540 (1) - add finish on head
(*) 01:54:278 - this kiai time, should end here, This applies in all difficulties I also asked this, and a BAT said it doesn't matter

----Fixed all------

[Insane]

*Note*
this diff needs many hitsounds u.u I know :c I need help
(*) 01:39:278 (5,7,9) - Randoms Sliders please change this u.u is a very ugly, try this: I like it.. it's nicely shaped like a snail!!
SPOILER
SPOILER
Though I like the second suggestion. I'll consider changing into that if other modders criticize
(*) 00:19:852 (1) - NC
(*) 00:23:786 (6) - NC
(*) 00:27:720 (1) - ^
(*) 02:11:983 (1) - ^
(*) 00:27:720 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - where is the hitsounds? U_U Fixed
(*) 02:15:917 (1) - NC
(*) 02:19:851 (6) - NC
(*) 04:10:507 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - because no other patterns do here? actually playing it is very confusing Change this please Is it? ok, I'll also fix them if others criticize that.
About NCs, I don't feel the need..

Okay \:3/ I hope you serve something of mod, Good lucky broccoly >//<!

Thank you very much Gero!

Slow-ru

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Slow-ru 2013-03-05T21:34:58+00:00

Nice map

Normal
I think, you can set that kind of circles (01:04:114 (6,7,8) like these) more varied, don't you think? c:
Example:

to

(but not for everyone, cuz it's still not bad

)

Insane
More than three unique slider speeds are used in this map - you must fix it, so, maybe, you will be need some re-mapping.

03:30:671 (1) and 03:36:573 (1) - I think, it's not good, when slider is located behind the HP-bar, try to move it a little (I don't know about the rule for that, so, it's will be my opinion c:)

Easy is not ready, so, I don't mod it c:
update for easy: Circle Size: 3 or 4 https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Easy
because the "2" - a rare type of circles, but, who knows, maybe, it's will be ok.

Broccoly

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Broccoly 2013-03-06T00:23:10+00:00

Slow-ru wrote:
Nice map Thanks

Normal
I think, you can set that kind of circles (01:04:114 (6,7,8) like these) more varied, don't you think? c: Fixed
Example:

to

(but not for everyone, cuz it's still not bad )

Insane
More than three unique slider speeds are used in this map - you must fix it, so, maybe, you will be need some re-mapping. Yeah.. I read that wiki.. but i did that only on a specific part (03:12:105 (1) and 04:21:573 to 04:23:540/ ), so i don't think it's a big problem.. I'll fix them on second dmenad

03:30:671 (1) and 03:36:573 (1) - I think, it's not good, when slider is located behind the HP-bar, try to move it a little (I don't know about the rule for that, so, it's will be my opinion c:) Yeah,, I'm trying to figure that out too. I can't seem to find a clear criteria about that.. I'll edit this post when i become aware of the rules

Easy is not ready, so, I don't mod it c:
update for easy: Circle Size: 3 or 4 https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Easy Fixed
because the "2" - a rare type of circles, but, who knows, maybe, it's will be ok.

Thank you very much Slow-ru. Come to think about it, you're in my mutual friends list lol We should talk more

Slow-ru

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Slow-ru 2013-03-06T05:37:30+00:00

Broccoly wrote:
Slow-ru wrote:
Nice map Thanks

Normal
I think, you can set that kind of circles (01:04:114 (6,7,8) like these) more varied, don't you think? c: Fixed
Example:

to

(but not for everyone, cuz it's still not bad )

Insane
More than three unique slider speeds are used in this map - you must fix it, so, maybe, you will be need some re-mapping. Yeah.. I read that wiki.. but i did that only on a specific part (03:12:105 (1) and 04:21:573 to 04:23:540/ ), so i don't think it's a big problem.. I'll fix them on second dmenad

03:30:671 (1) and 03:36:573 (1) - I think, it's not good, when slider is located behind the HP-bar, try to move it a little (I don't know about the rule for that, so, it's will be my opinion c:) Yeah,, I'm trying to figure that out too. I can't seem to find a clear criteria about that.. I'll edit this post when i become aware of the rules

Easy is not ready, so, I don't mod it c:
update for easy: Circle Size: 3 or 4 https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Easy Fixed
because the "2" - a rare type of circles, but, who knows, maybe, it's will be ok.
Thank you very much Slow-ru. Come to think about it, you're in my mutual friends list lol We should talk more

Yeah, you right

Btw, check it out too, I hope, it will be useful p/2160946#p2160946

Raose

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Raose 2013-03-08T02:26:21+00:00

M4M! I'm a newbie modder, sorry if my mod isn't the best ><

[Normal]
00:49:114 - add a note to fit with the drums?
01:02:147 (3) - distance error, perhaps you messed up the order of the circles on the timeline?
01:06:819 (3) - extend the slider to 01:07:547
01:07:802 (4) - extend the slider to 01:08:533
01:12:720 (4) - NC
01:22:802 (4) - NC at the start of kiai time
01:28:458 (4,5,6,7) - I personally prefer this pattern as it fits the vocals a bit better:

SPOILER

01:36:081 - add a note
01:40:261 - ^
02:24:769 (1) - move NC to 4 to signal the BPM & slider velocity change
03:46:409 (1,2) - I prefer this:

SPOILER

03:50:097 (5) - NC
04:00:917 (2) - distance error
04:02:884 (4) - ^

[Insane]
00:41:491 (4,5,6) - not sure if this is intentional, but the spacing is different from 00:43:458 (1,2,3). Maybe keep the spacing consistent
02:44:687 - 02:44:933 - I prefer this pattern also with the spinner moved a bit (end it at the original spot):

SPOILER

03:09:769 - add a note to fit the beat
03:10:261 - ^
03:22:802 (1,2,3,4) - add notes in the blue ticks to fit the vocal

Broccoly

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Topic Starter

Broccoly 2013-03-08T04:12:00+00:00

Zhengster wrote:
M4M! I'm a newbie modder, sorry if my mod isn't the best ><

[Normal]
00:49:114 - add a note to fit with the drums? Done
01:02:147 (3) - distance error, perhaps you messed up the order of the circles on the timeline? Fixed
01:06:819 (3) - extend the slider to 01:07:547 Done
01:07:802 (4) - extend the slider to 01:08:533 Done
01:12:720 (4) - NC Done
01:22:802 (4) - NC at the start of kiai time Done
01:28:458 (4,5,6,7) - I personally prefer this pattern as it fits the vocals a bit better: Fixed

SPOILER

01:36:081 - add a note Done
01:40:261 - ^ I don't know what you mean.. there's a spinner ..
02:24:769 (1) - move NC to 4 to signal the BPM & slider velocity change Done
03:46:409 (1,2) - I prefer this: Fixed

SPOILER

03:50:097 (5) - NC Done
04:00:917 (2) - distance errorDone
04:02:884 (4) - ^Done

[Insane]
00:41:491 (4,5,6) - not sure if this is intentional, but the spacing is different from 00:43:458 (1,2,3). Maybe keep the spacing consistent yeah it was intentional.. but it's still in the reachable distance range, and not hard to read. so i'll leave it like now.
02:44:687 - 02:44:933 - I prefer this pattern also with the spinner moved a bit (end it at the original spot): fixed

SPOILER

03:09:769 - add a note to fit the beat Done
03:10:261 - ^ Done
03:22:802 (1,2,3,4) - add notes in the blue ticks to fit the vocal it's the calm part of the song, so i'll just leave it like that.

Thanks a lot Zhengster. very nice mod

StickyPicky

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Joined October 2012

StickyPicky 2013-03-12T08:41:04+00:00

hi

#modreqs

NORMAL

from 04:02:146 up to the end of the beatmap Bg disappeared -,- dont know why.. you need to fix this one ~

SPOILER

00:17:884 add finish ~
00:23:294 clap ~
00:32:147 add hitobject + clap ~
00:32:638 add hitobject
00:33:130 add hitobject + clap ~
00:33:622 / 00:48:622 (5) / 00:49:114 (7) / 01:04:360 (7) / 01:12:229 (2) - add clap ~
01:14:196 / 01:15:179 / 01:16:163 add whistle ~
01:22:802 (1) - add finish + clap ~
01:53:048 hmmm add hitobject here + a Drum finish ~
02:25:015 (2) - / 02:32:884 (6) - add clap ~
02:33:868 / 02:34:851 / 02:35:835 / 03:14:196 (4) - / 03:14:687 (6) - add whistle ~
03:28:704 add clap ~
04:00:179 (1) - add finish + clap ~

00:53:786 (2) - change your slider rhythm like this one if you like, much better >.<

SPOILER

03:50:097 (1) - extend this slider here 03:50:343
02:49:483 your break i think is too long, kindly shortening it >.<

Use Distance Snap while mapping >.<

SPOILER

Thats all I've got >.<

captin1

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captin1 2013-03-13T22:07:47+00:00

*sneeze*
Oh look...there goes a star. Ah well

Good luck man

Broccoly

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Broccoly 2013-03-14T03:09:56+00:00

captin1 wrote:
*sneeze*
Oh look...there goes a star. Ah well

Good luck man

lol first i didn't get what you were saying haha
Thanks for the star!!

Broccoly

1,359 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Broccoly 2013-03-15T00:19:33+00:00

newtoniorock8 wrote:
hi #modreqs

NORMAL

from 04:02:146 up to the end of the beatmap Bg disappeared -,- dont know why.. you need to fix this one ~ Really? cuz it doesn't happen to me... i'll check with other people.

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00:17:884 add finish ~
00:23:294 clap ~
00:32:147 add hitobject + clap ~
00:32:638 add hitobject
00:33:130 add hitobject + clap ~
00:33:622 / 00:48:622 (5) / 00:49:114 (7) / 01:04:360 (7) / 01:12:229 (2) - add clap ~
01:14:196 / 01:15:179 / 01:16:163 add whistle ~
01:22:802 (1) - add finish + clap ~
01:53:048 hmmm add hitobject here + a Drum finish ~
02:25:015 (2) - / 02:32:884 (6) - add clap ~
02:33:868 / 02:34:851 / 02:35:835 / 03:14:196 (4) - / 03:14:687 (6) - add whistle ~
03:28:704 add clap ~
04:00:179 (1) - add finish + clap ~

---Most of them fixed---

00:53:786 (2) - change your slider rhythm like this one if you like, much better >.< Sorry but i like the current slider.

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03:50:097 (1) - extend this slider here 03:50:343 This was on purpose. If u listen closely, the vocal's stopping abruptly, and i did that in insane too.
02:49:483 your break i think is too long, kindly shortening it >.< Too lazy to add.. :c well i mapped here in the insane diff and will be in hard diff so.. i'll kindly give normal players a big break.

Use Distance Snap while mapping >.<

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Thats all I've got >.<

Thanks a lot! hitsounds helped~

captin1

osu! Alumni

2,595 posts

Joined February 2011

captin1 2013-03-22T03:56:44+00:00

Hitsound check requested in game :3

Insane

First off, I would have slider tick rate at 2 unless you're desperate to keep the combos from being that high (and 991 isn't horrible)

generally, having a clap on the snare hits fits pretty well, and they're generally on 2 and 4
I'd also use the soft whistles to accent the melodic notes, it sounds rather pretty

00:18:376 (2) - clap
00:19:852 (6) - whistle on just start
00:20:343 (8) - clap and whistle on start
00:20:835 (9) - whistle
00:21:819 (1) - whisle on start
00:22:311 (2) - clap
00:23:786 (6) - whistle on start
00:24:278 (7) - clap and whistle
00:24:524 (8) - whistle on start
00:25:016 (9) - whistle
00:25:507 (11) - whistle
00:25:753 (1) - whistle on start
00:26:245 (2) - clap
00:27:720 (7) - whistle on start
00:28:212 (9) - clap and whistle on start
00:28:704 (10) - whistle
00:29:196 (11) - whistle on start
00:29:688 (1) - whistle on start
00:30:671 (4) - whistle
00:33:622 (2) - whistle and finish on start
00:33:991 (3) - whistle on start
00:34:360 (4) - whistle on start

00:35:589 (8) - is this supposed to be nc?

00:35:589 (8) - whistle on start
00:35:958 (9) - whistle on start
00:36:327 (10) - whistle on start
00:37:557 (3) - whistle on start
00:37:925 (4) - whistle on start
00:38:294 (5) - whistle on start
00:39:524 (1) - whistle
00:39:893 (2) - whistle on end
and etc like that

00:49:360 (5) - finish on start
01:04:852 (4) - finish on start
From here on out you should probably go back to clap on 2 and 4, not just 4, cause you consistently have notes on 2 again where you didn't before

01:12:720 (4) - finish on start

01:21:942 (2,3,4,5) - claps on these, only starts, to go with snare
01:22:802 (1) - finish! it's the kiai!
claps on 2 and 4 through this

01:31:778 (5,6) - claps on these, although bring them down in volume, like 50-60%
01:33:745 (6,7) - ^
01:38:540 (4) - finish

01:45:917 (7) - uh oh, a clap on slider! quick, take this! http://puu.sh/2lKZ7
put inherited timing points before and after the tick, so 01:45:794 and 01:46:040, set the first to custom # (whichever you want to make the tick be, right now that one's at 4) and lower the volume by about 15-20%. Set the second back to default. abracadabra! instant clap on tick

01:47:515 (5) - clap at 50-60%, on last hit of (5)
01:49:483 (5) - clap at 50-60%
02:25:015 (2) - clap
02:25:507 (4) - finish
claps on 2 and 4
02:33:376 (4) - finish
02:44:933 (3) - clap
02:58:335 (3) - clap
3:13:458 (2) - you can still have claps on 2 and 4 throughout this section, you brought the volume down enough that they blend well. careful of the sliderticks

Much better hitsounding at the last kiai
03:53:417 (6,7) - claps at 50-60%
03:55:384 (6,7) - ^
04:09:155 (6) - clap
04:11:122 (6) - clap

whew. that took a while. Hope this helps!

Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2013-03-22T07:54:10+00:00

Sorry for take so long finish ._./

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osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 82802
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 1
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GridSize: 4

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Artist:40mP
ArtistUnicode:40?P
Creator:Broccoly
Version:Natsu's Hard
Source:
Tags:Vocaloid Hatsune Miku GUMI
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Broccoly

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Topic Starter

Broccoly 2013-03-22T21:11:30+00:00

Natsu wrote:

Sorry for take so long finish ._./

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256,192,263663,12,4,267720,0:0:0:0:

it's ok :3
now we wait for gero~

Saten

Global Moderator

3,863 posts

Joined August 2010

Saten 2013-03-24T03:41:23+00:00

Hi there~

[Insane]
00:29:688 (1) - clap on end (did you miss it?)
00:48:622 (1) - a clap fit well here
00:49:114 (3) - I suggest a NC here to make it easier to read this stack
00:51:327 (1,2,3) - the way you've arranged this makes the last object look like a 1/2 slider imo
01:12:720 (4) - is this 1/4 slider really necessary? This goes well as a regular hit-circle.
01:21:819 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -this type of pattern is confusing, especially when it's 1/4. try a more solid pattern, such as half sliders or just sliders.
01:33:868 (7) - stack this with (6) rather than having it elsewhere
01:38:540 (4) - stack this with the (2). The slider-tail is way to close the next object
01:45:671 (7,1) - this overlap doesn't look so good. Move it further up so it doesn't touch the slider
01:46:901 (3,4,5,6) - confusing overlaps
01:48:868 (3,4,5,6) - same here. The 2ns repeat was unexpected
01:54:278 (1) - add whistle on this spinner?
02:10:015 (2,3,4) - confusing spacing with a combo
02:31:655 (6,7) - goes better as hit-circles imo
02:33:376 (4) - ^
02:39:524 (6) - NC
03:28:212 (4) - perhaps place this where the tail of 03:26:737 (2) - is
03:01:409 (2,3,4,5,6) - You do know that this is just like 1/4 @ 244 BPM?
03:04:114 (5,6,7) - Pick a better pattern perhaps, such as circle-circle-slider or slider-slider. the current one is kinda confusing imo
03:06:696 (7,8,9,10,1) - too fast. I know it's in the song, but this doesn't play so good
03:08:663 (7,8,9,10,11) - ^
03:11:860 (10,1) - Connect these two objects in a way or another

SPOILER

03:15:917 (3,4,5) - I'm not sure if this is such a good idea
03:40:261 (1) - end this spinner at 03:41:983 - instead. It would be more consistent with the previous spinner.
03:44:196 - it feels empty here. Adding a note here would be nice
03:50:097 (4) - add a repeat here
04:00:179 (4,5,6,7,8) - Isn't the spacing a bit too harsh here? I know it's symmetry, but still..
04:23:786 (1) - put a finish as a finale?

[Natsu's Hard]
00:17:884 (1,2,3) - did you purposely add higher spacing on (1,2) ? I think it would be better if you had it equally spaced here
00:21:819 (1,2,3) - same as above
00:34:852 (4,5) - ok, this is really weird lol
01:04:852 (1) - add a finish on start
01:12:720 (7) - add a finish here
01:21:942 (2) - clap
01:22:065 (3) - clap on start
01:22:556 (4,5) - clap on these two
02:33:376 (7) - finish
02:41:368 (1) - this is better off if it's start at 02:41:368 (1) - . I see no point in having it start too early
02:45:302 (1) - same as above
03:11:737 (3,1) - 1/4 jump? this is not really friendly at all D:
03:12:105 (1) - This is a bit overkill imo. 1,5x would be sufficient
03:42:966 (1) - add a finish to give a better effect
03:43:581 (3,4) - clap on these
04:13:704 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - flip all these horizontally. It would flow better imo.
04:14:441 (4) - Reverse this perhaps (Ctrl+G). Unless you are against the jump that will be created if you do this.
04:15:794 (1) - like I mention before. It starts kinda early imo, it should start at 04:15:917 - . Also, End the spinner at 04:17:884 - so it doesn't end so awkwardly.
04:18:376 (1,1) - stack the slider with the hit-circle properly

[Normal]
00:33:376 (1) - this note isn't really needed, it just makes it harder adapting to that
00:41:245 (3) - I'm not really fond of objects that gets overlapped by the previous slider. There are more like this, but this is just a comment
00:48:376 (4,5,6,7) - a stack with this many object not recommended. Try something different than stacking here. Something like 01:04:114 (6,7,8,1) - maybe
01:03:130 (5) - add a clap on end
01:11:983 (1,2,3,1) - stacks are really hard to read for most beginner players. Having stacks with just 3 object or less are more acceptable imo
01:22:065 (1,2,3,1) - ^same here but a little worse because the stack starts on an offbeat (red tick)
01:28:212 (3,4,5,6) - This pattern plays better imo

SPOILER

01:30:425 (7,1) - Even with a New Combo here, it's still unexpected. Move it further down so the spacing becomes more clear
03:13:950 (3,4,5,6,7) - this stack is way too big imo
03:40:507 (1,1) - not so nice for just having a single hit-circle after a spinner so sudden. I'd prefer the spinner to end where the hit-circle is instead
03:49:360 (2,3,4,1) - this is not a friendly stack either, especially with the 1/4 slider at the end
04:05:097 (1,2,3,4) - unstack these in a friendly way
04:21:327 - Something is missing here. You should definitely add something here

That's all I guess
Insane and Normal could use a bit more trimming though. Otherwise a nice mapset (Didn't mod the easy like you mentioned because it's not fully mapped yet).
Make sure to fix the tags, so that they stay consistent (I know it's a wip, just a little reminder :p).

Good luck!

Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2013-03-24T04:07:10+00:00

Saten wrote:
Hi there~

[Natsu's Hard]
00:17:884 (1,2,3) - did you purposely add higher spacing on (1,2) ? I think it would be better if you had it equally spaced here hahahha i forget t lock notes it got moved when i was putting hitsounds fixed
00:21:819 (1,2,3) - same as above ^
00:34:852 (4,5) - ok, this is really weird lolsame reason im baka xD fixed
01:04:852 (1) - add a finish on start
01:12:720 (7) - add a finish here
01:21:942 (2) - clap
01:22:065 (3) - clap on start
01:22:556 (4,5) - clap on these two
02:33:376 (7) - finish done all hitsounds
02:41:368 (1) - this is better off if it's start at 02:41:368 (1) - . I see no point in having it start too early im following voice in that point i did spinner cause of that maybe im wrong o.o
02:45:302 (1) - same as above ^
03:11:737 (3,1) - 1/4 jump? this is not really friendly at all D: fixed since i dont have jumps they got moved T-T When i put hitsounds
03:12:105 (1) - This is a bit overkill imo. 1,5x would be sufficient is ok i keep it for now
03:42:966 (1) - add a finish to give a better effect done
03:43:581 (3,4) - clap on these yup
04:13:704 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - flip all these horizontally. It would flow better imo. GJ thats great added
04:14:441 (4) - Reverse this perhaps (Ctrl+G). Unless you are against the jump that will be created if you do this. nah i dont want jump is a relax song
04:15:794 (1) - like I mention before. It starts kinda early imo, it should start at 04:15:917 - . Also, End the spinner at 04:17:884 - so it doesn't end so awkwardly. same reason i explain in the other
04:18:376 (1,1) - stack the slider with the hit-circle properly done

Good luck!

thanks for mod really help

Here my diff brocololi

SPOILER

osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 82802
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 1
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

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Artist:40mP
ArtistUnicode:40?P
Creator:Broccoly
Version:Natsu's Hard
Source:
Tags:Vocaloid Hatsune Miku GUMI
BeatmapID:228972
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
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Broccoly

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Broccoly 2013-03-24T05:16:49+00:00

Saten wrote:
Hi there~

[Insane]
00:29:688 (1) - clap on end (did you miss it?) ah missed it
00:48:622 (1) - a clap fit well here added
00:49:114 (3) - I suggest a NC here to make it easier to read this stack good idea
00:51:327 (1,2,3) - the way you've arranged this makes the last object look like a 1/2 slider imo hmm since there's an approach circle coming under right after, i think it should be readable..
01:12:720 (4) - is this 1/4 slider really necessary? This goes well as a regular hit-circle. yeah,, i really want to keep it. It stresses the part than using the same circle imo.
01:21:819 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -this type of pattern is confusing, especially when it's 1/4. try a more solid pattern, such as half sliders or just sliders.tried fixing it by changing the last two circles into a slider
01:33:868 (7) - stack this with (6) rather than having it elsewhere good idea
01:38:540 (4) - stack this with the (2). The slider-tail is way to close the next object good point
01:45:671 (7,1) - this overlap doesn't look so good. Move it further up so it doesn't touch the slider fixed
01:46:901 (3,4,5,6) - confusing overlaps fixed (slider + a circle -> triplet)
01:48:868 (3,4,5,6) - same here. The 2ns repeat was unexpected i'll fix this in second demand
01:54:278 (1) - add whistle on this spinner? added
02:10:015 (2,3,4) - confusing spacing with a combo don't quite get what you mean.. sorry
02:31:655 (6,7) - goes better as hit-circles imo same as previous. musical stress
02:33:376 (4) - ^ ^same
02:39:524 (6) - NC
03:28:212 (4) - perhaps place this where the tail of 03:26:737 (2) - is that was supposed to be ctrl+h,j of 1, but realized your suggestion flows better fixed
03:01:409 (2,3,4,5,6) - You do know that this is just like 1/4 @ 244 BPM? yes. I'm well aware of it.
03:04:114 (5,6,7) - Pick a better pattern perhaps, such as circle-circle-slider or slider-slider. the current one is kinda confusing imo good point, but did slider-circle-circle instead.
03:06:696 (7,8,9,10,1) - too fast. I know it's in the song, but this doesn't play so good i think it's pretty fun xD a little bit of surprise doesn't hurt imo.
03:08:663 (7,8,9,10,11) - ^
03:11:860 (10,1) - Connect these two objects in a way or anotherfixed
SPOILER

03:15:917 (3,4,5) - I'm not sure if this is such a good idea yeah.. i thought so too. deleted the circle.
03:40:261 (1) - end this spinner at 03:41:983 - instead. It would be more consistent with the previous spinner. fixed
03:44:196 - it feels empty here. Adding a note here would be nice ah, that was intentionally done, to stress the 1, the very first note of the kiai
03:50:097 (4) - add a repeat here :o very good idea. really nice
04:00:179 (4,5,6,7,8) - Isn't the spacing a bit too harsh here? I know it's symmetry, but still.. agreed. deleted two circles
04:23:786 (1) - put a finish as a finale? added with lowered volume (65%)

[Normal]
00:33:376 (1) - this note isn't really needed, it just makes it harder adapting to that deleted
00:41:245 (3) - I'm not really fond of objects that gets overlapped by the previous slider. There are more like this, but this is just a comment i'll keep it xD
00:48:376 (4,5,6,7) - a stack with this many object not recommended. Try something different than stacking here. Something like 01:04:114 (6,7,8,1) - maybe tried
01:03:130 (5) - add a clap on end added
01:11:983 (1,2,3,1) - stacks are really hard to read for most beginner players. Having stacks with just 3 object or less are more acceptable imo divided them to two piles.
01:22:065 (1,2,3,1) - ^same here but a little worse because the stack starts on an offbeat (red tick) fixed
01:28:212 (3,4,5,6) - This pattern plays better fixed imo
SPOILER
01:30:425 (7,1) - Even with a New Combo here, it's still unexpected. Move it further down so the spacing becomes more clear oops. my bad
03:13:950 (3,4,5,6,7) - this stack is way too big imo divided
03:40:507 (1,1) - not so nice for just having a single hit-circle after a spinner so sudden. I'd prefer the spinner to end where the hit-circle is instead fixed
03:49:360 (2,3,4,1) - this is not a friendly stack either, especially with the 1/4 slider at the end fixed. also changed 1/4 slider into a circle
04:05:097 (1,2,3,4) - unstack these in a friendly way fixed
04:21:327 - Something is missing here. You should definitely add something here

That's all I guess
Insane and Normal could use a bit more trimming though. Otherwise a nice mapset (Didn't mod the easy like you mentioned because it's not fully mapped yet).
Make sure to fix the tags, so that they stay consistent (I know it's a wip, just a little reminder :p).

Good luck!

Thanks a lot! It was really helpful, and also learned much xD

Norman

Norman 2013-03-25T12:11:12+00:00

#modreqs 에서 왔습니다.

시간이 별로 없어서 노멀만 간단하게 잡아주고 갑니다.

한 난이도 모딩이라 쿠도수 받기가 왠지 부끄럽군요

도움이 되시지 않으셨다면 쿠도수를 저에게 주시지 않으셔도 됩니다.
[General]

SPOILER

아마 겟난을 제외한 자신의 맵의 콤보색갈은 같아야 된다고 들어는 봤지만 확실하지는 않네요

만약 언랭요소가 아니라면 한가지 의견 덧 붙이겠습니다.

노멀 난이도의 1번째 2번째 색이 비슷하기 때문에 2번째 색을 바꿔줘야 된다고 생각합니다.

[Normal]
00:27:229 (3,4,5,6,7) - 이런 서클 배치는 어떠세요?

SPOILER

01:31:163 (1) - 여기에 Clap 넣으시는거 잊으신거 같습니다
02:25:507 (1) - 시작 슬라이더에 피니쉬 넣어주세요
04:00:179 (1) - 슬라이더 꼬리부분에 클랩 지워주시고 피니쉬 추가해주세요

Broccoly

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Broccoly 2013-03-25T18:49:59+00:00

Norman wrote:
#modreqs 에서 왔습니다.

시간이 별로 없어서 노멀만 간단하게 잡아주고 갑니다.

한 난이도 모딩이라 쿠도수 받기가 왠지 부끄럽군요

도움이 되시지 않으셨다면 쿠도수를 저에게 주시지 않으셔도 됩니다. 큰 도움 됬습니다
[General]
SPOILER
아마 겟난을 제외한 자신의 맵의 콤보색갈은 같아야 된다고 들어는 봤지만 확실하지는 않네요

만약 언랭요소가 아니라면 한가지 의견 덧 붙이겠습니다.

노멀 난이도의 1번째 2번째 색이 비슷하기 때문에 2번째 색을 바꿔줘야 된다고 생각합니다. 다른분 모딩에서 지적받아서 인세인 콤보색은 고쳤는데 노멀은 고치는걸 깜빡했네요.. ㅎㅎ; 감사합니다

[Normal]
00:27:229 (3,4,5,6,7) - 이런 서클 배치는 어떠세요? Fixed
SPOILER
01:31:163 (1) - 여기에 Clap 넣으시는거 잊으신거 같습니다 잊었군요 ㄷㄷ 감사!
02:25:507 (1) - 시작 슬라이더에 피니쉬 넣어주세요 added
04:00:179 (1) - 슬라이더 꼬리부분에 클랩 지워주시고 피니쉬 추가해주세요 실수...

짧고 굵은 모딩 감사합니다.. 이런 실수를 하다니..

Norman

Norman 2013-03-26T12:11:25+00:00

lol

도움이 되셨다니 다행이네요!

열심히 하셔서 랭크되길 희망하겠습니다

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