Xinely wrote:

Hi Lally ~ :3
try m4m in ur queque >_<

[Easy]
CS 3? :3 nuuuh i love my CS u.u
00:10:355 (2) - delete this? why? it follows vocal
00:12:116 (1) - try to make same with 00:14:581 (3) -, and stack them for beautiful? i don't stack objeks in easy diffs :3
00:26:908 (3) - x:124 y:152 for stacked with 00:29:022 (2) - ? if yes, fix 00:26:556 (2) - (52,208) :3 same about ^
01:14:808 (2) - x: 320 y:200? yap
01:15:160 (3,1) - spacing? 1,73x desu fixed

[Normal]
00:06:304 (1) - delete and change with circle?ok :3
00:17:927 (1,2) - swap NC? i follow the vocal for nc so no changes
00:25:499 (1) - try this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/621562 personally i don't like very regular pattern so no changes
01:00:720 (1,2,3,4) - aaa, i just want give suggestion to make this slider curved? more beautiful imo in all diff this pattern have a straight form so wanna keep my costency :3
01:20:444 (2) - x:220 y:168? naah o3o

[Hard]
00:29:550 (1) - little spacing? fixed
00:40:644 (5) - delete one repeat and add 1/2 slider in 00:41:525 - ? no i like they ;_;
01:26:079 (1) - x:256 y:296? i like this little jupm in the way so no changes

Nice map! ~
star for you ~
ty :3

HelloSCV wrote:

From your queue
M4M!
[General]

1. 00:36:770 - hmm i think kiai time start here is better because excited song part is start on here ( oh god i have bad english D: ) i follow vocal for start kiai so no changes
2. using audio lead-in 1000ms?will think about

[Easy]

• 
  - 00:39:940 (2) - delete finish on end?done

[Normal]

• 
  - 00:06:833 (2) - try this? http://puu.sh/25BzT -nazi i changed this pattern
  - 00:11:059 (5,6) - is this purposed? 1.1x DS? ups no changed
  - 00:36:066 (1) - finish on start? yappi
  - 00:45:223 (3) - ^-^
  - 01:45:450 (4) - ^ on repeat here not o3o

[Hard]

• 
  - 00:06:128 (1) - try whistle on start? even if this don't follow my whistle pattern i add it because it fits with the music
  - 00:07:713 (2) - ^ just like 00:02:078 (2) - this? ok :3
  - 00:20:921 (1) - why not finish here? hears good ok o3o
  - 00:22:682 (4) - NC here? ok o3o
  - 00:36:770 (3) - finish on start ok o3o
  - 00:29:550 (1) - delete NC and 00:30:078 (2) - add NC here is better imo true fixed
  - 00:45:047 (2) - finish on repeat i don't like how it sounds :X
  - 01:20:444 (3) - missed finish on start? maybe

sorry for bad english = =..
another well made map haha, good luck for rank!
ty >u<

CXu wrote:

Well, why not. m4m

Everything I say is a suggestion as long as you provide a valid reason to reject it~

[General]

1. Looks fine.

[Easy]

1. AR -1? Currently looks a wee bit fast for my tastes. Especially combined with the circle size here. uuh true ar -1 <3
2. 01:17:626 (1) - Not that it matters much, but wrongly spaced I guess. It's not that big of a deal imo, but some people might find it a big deal fixed
3. 01:36:293 (1) - Consider removing this new combo. It's weird to have 01:34:532 (1) - standing alone by itself.fail fixed

[Normal]

1. Uhm, you have a lot of notes that are dangerously close to the sides of the screen. They're not offscreen, so they're not unrankable or anything, but I'd still consider moving them a bit closer to the middle. well i'll look is something is wrong but how it's atm i don't see any problems will relook better
2. 00:08:065 (2) - Delete this, it's the only 1/2 in the beginning. This section of the song isn't very intense or anything, so 1/2 feels too much for Normal. You also don't have this earlier on at 00:02:606, so it was also a bit awkward to read, as I didn't expect 1/2 at all. yap true fixed
3. 01:23:261 (3) - Especially consider moving this somewhere else, as if you play in window mode with keyboard overlays always displaying, this ends up underneath that. You can fix this with a swift rearrange: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/621617 true fixed with some cute blanket chan :3
4. Not really much to poke at here~

[Hard]

1. 00:06:656 (3) - Personally I prefer a flow where this is ctrl+g'd, as you'd keep a zig-zag motion throughout the pattern. fixed like it
2. 00:15:638 (3,1,2) - The fact that these aren't lined up makes me sad ;_; fixed >u<
3. 00:18:103 (2) - I'm not sure if it's caused by the widescreen resolution I'm using, but this ends up outside the storyboard, and looks kinda ugly because of that. Might want to move it a bit to the left, as it's far out the grid anyway. It's not offscreen or anything though, so yeah. i fixed it u.u
4. 00:29:550 (1,2) - Swap new combo so the symmetry 00:29:022 (8,1) is in the same combo?done
5. 01:02:129 (1,3) - Swap new combo here so the straight 1/2 sliders all become one combo. You'll also end up with the new combo on a downbeat 01:03:538. done
6. 01:25:022 (3) - Move startpoint to 324;164 to make a straight line with 01:24:318 (1,2) changed in a other way
7. 01:26:079 (1) - Remove new combo here, and add new combo at 01:27:488 (4) - to keep consistent with previous combos.no because the music change at 01:24:670 - so the nc change a bit in this part
8. 01:28:897 (1,3) - Swap new combo. Same reason as above.-^
9. 01:31:714 (1) - Remove new combo. Also, might as well make a symmetrical pattern here with 01:30:658 (2) and 01:32:066 (2).no changes here because this pattern is not made to be simmetrical o3o
10. 01:40:872 (2) - ctrl+g? You'd get a small jump between every slider instead of just the last one, so the last jump doesn't "stand out".uuuh i like it done

Uhh, that's all. Good luck! /end badmod.

mintong89 wrote:

m4m~

[Hard]

00:14:405 (4) - (Head) this should be have whistle because you put slider at red line and it sound weird imo.changed the wistles
00:33:248 (3) - this slider really ugly, need remake.:X fixed
00:42:053 (1) - i think this NC remove and NC at 00:41:877 (6) - is better~changed a bit o3o
01:46:155 (5) - remove NC? i think it's not used after last part is better~no changes here

[Normal]

00:15:990 (3) - this slider 2nd's point need to make it down grid just like this moved somehow o3o

SPOILER

00:20:216 (5,1) - make it something like this? no changes here because i don't think is something wrong with it

SPOILER

[Easy]

00:12:820 (2) - (Head) finish? (i see you use finish at Normal, Hard imo)uuuh fixed

your maps is really good, good luck~
ty :3

Verlaren wrote:

Hi~
Easy:
01:03:185(1) - move NC to 01:03:538 i follow the vocal no changes
01:34:532(1) - maybe delete NC? fixed in the other
01:37:702(1) - move NC to 01:38:054 no changes here :3


Normal:
Very good. ty :3


Hard:
00:28:317(6) - NC? yap >u<


Sorry for small mod.ty for trying atleast
Map is very good, good luck~

kiddly wrote:

here for m4m~

[General]

1. Timing:offset+10 imo.i'll not change timing atm will discuss it later with Andrea

[Easy]

1. 00:10:707 (3) - Cancel the finish hitsound cause there is no one in BGM. it sound fine for me here
2. 00:23:386 (timing point) - It makes no sence to change volume here,so delete it. i like spinner getting silenced so no changes
3. Others fine.

[Normal]

1. 00:14:933 (1) - Move this NC to 00:15:638 (2)?i think is ok here no changes
2. 00:23:386 (timing point) - The same as the Easy diff.same as easy diff ^
3. 01:11:638 (1) - Better start at 01:11:991. i like long spinners :3
4. Others fine.

[Hard]

1. 00:23:474 (1) - Better start at 00:24:883. i like long spinners \o3o/
2. 00:28:845 (7) - New combo.i changed totaly this nc pattern
3. 00:29:550 (1) - Cancel new combo.-^
4. Cause they are symmetric.
5. 01:40:872 (2) - Ctrl+G feels more funny.how mention it CXu i changed it \:D/
6. Others fine.

Andrea wrote:

~Easy~

00:43:814 (4) - New combo.no because it don't follow much my nc (vacal) pattern
01:34:532 (1) - Add a Finish at the end of this slider.ok
01:41:576 (1) - Remove new combo.ok
01:43:337 (2) - New combo.ok o3o

~Normal~

00:07:537 (1) - Remove new combo.yup true o3o

~Hard~

00:06:656 (3) - CTRL+G flows much better here.rechange since is your part u.u

xxheroxx wrote:

Questa canzone... *giggles* he he he ikr



Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
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General

• • Non vedo il motivo di usare così tanti colori per le combo, prova ad usare solo questi 3:
  datoo che non c'è una ragola riguardo ai colori che tilimita ad usarli,e dato che sono impostati in base ai colori che ci sono nel bg non vedo il motivo di cambiarli :3
  
  SPOILER

  [Colours]
  Combo1 : 215,83,215
  Combo2 : 83,185,215
  Combo3 : 83,215,122

  • 00:35:361 (kiai) - Fai finire il kiai a 00:36:682 per poi farlo ripartire a 00:36:770. (volendo puoi anche farlo finire a 00:36:066, scegli tu insomma)
  riguardo al kiai in tutte le diff dove l'ho stoppato c'è una piccola pausa e dove mi hai consigliato tu non centra molto

Easy

• • HP Drain Rate: 3 ok
  • Approach Rate: 3 ok
  • Overall Difficulty: 3 ok
  • 00:34:657 (4) - Prova queste pattern:sistemata un po'
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 01:00:720 (1,2,3,1,2) - Troppi finish qui! Aggiungine uno solo all'inizio del primo slider e sostituisci gli altri con dei whistle.ho lasciato solo i primi 2
  • 01:09:173 (1) - Fai finire questo slider a 01:09:877 e aggiungi un cerchio a 01:10:230.ok
  • 01:46:155 (1) - Fai iniziare questo spinner a 01:47:211 come nelle altre due diff e aggiungi un cerchio a 01:46:507.qui l'ho fatto di proposito perche mi piacciono gli spinner lunghi nelle easy o3o

Normal

• • HP Drain Rate: 5 ok
  • Overall Difficulty: 5 ok
  • 00:02:958 (3) - Questo slider non è perfettamente simmetrico con lo slider precedente, prova ad aggiustarlo un pò in modo che siano uguali.non lo cambio per 2 motivi : 1 non ci riesco a sistemarlo e 2 perchè è impossibile sistemarlo con gli slider che ha fatto pepsy adesso
  • 00:07:537 (3,4,1) - Prova questa pattern:modificato uno slider solo mi piace la ppatern com'è atm
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 01:00:720 (1,2,3,4) - Stessa cosa della Easy.ok
  • 01:03:538 (2) - Aggiungi un finish a inizio slider per mantenere una consistenza con le altre diff.ok
  • 01:11:638 (1) - Fai iniziare questo spinner a 01:11:991 e aggiungi un cerchio a 01:11:638.suona malissimo quel circle se lo metto quindi no changes :X

Hard

• • HP Drain Rate: 7ok
  • Overall Difficulty: 7ok
  • 00:23:474 (1) - Fai iniziare questo spinner a 00:24:179 e prova a fare qualcosa del genere prima:mi piace com'è atm ;_;
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 01:00:720 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Stessa cosa della Easy e della Normal.done
  • 01:08:469 (1) - Leva il finish da inizio slider e aggiungilo a 01:09:173 (3) (sempre inizio slider).ok
  • 01:10:582 (7) - Togli il finish da inizio slider.ok
  • 01:11:110 (1,1) - Prova questa pattern:mi piaccionno quei 2 spinner o3o quindi no changes
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 01:42:104 (1,2) - Sostituisci la posizione di questo cerchio con quella dello slider, cioè sposta il (2) 1/2 indietro e il (1) a 01:42:633, suona molto meglio così.ok done o3o

Richiamami dopo aver fixato.

21:20 Gabe: Are you going to sleep soon?
21:20 Lally: uhm not so soon why? :3
21:20 Gabe: okay good
21:20 Lally: uuh i see o3o
21:20 *Gabe is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/220394 Rakshan - Electronic Bitch (Nightcore Mix) [Hard]]
21:20 Lally: irc? o3o
21:20 Gabe: Yeah
21:20 Gabe: Hard
21:20 Gabe: 00:06:128 - This clap isn't making sense
21:20 Gabe: It's placed on a soft part
21:21 Gabe: and it's the only place on every difficulties that has it
21:21 Lally: fail o3o
21:21 Gabe: (when we're going to be done, don't update. I will pop the bubble before)
21:21 Lally: it should be a whistle there D:
21:21 Gabe: a whistle? make sure to add it on Normal troo
21:21 Gabe: too*
21:22 Lally: ok o3o
21:22 Gabe: wait..
21:22 Gabe: impossible
21:22 Gabe: the hitsounds consistency on Normal is on downbeats
21:22 Gabe: not upbeats
21:24 Lally: hmm
21:24 Gabe: just delete the clap, LOL
21:24 Lally: yappy
21:24 Gabe: and keep the consistency like that
21:24 Gabe: xD
21:24 Gabe: back to Hard
21:24 Lally: yap o3o
21:24 Gabe: 00:09:298 - Delete this whistle and add it to the previous object
21:25 Lally: ok done
21:25 Gabe: and add one here 00:09:650 - 
21:25 Lally: ok
21:27 Gabe: 00:33:952 - It should have a finish here to keep the consistency
21:28 Lally: ok
21:28 Lally: 00:45:223 - here too then
21:29 Gabe: indeed
21:29 Gabe: 00:36:066 (2,3) - 
21:29 Gabe: what's wrong with these sliders?
21:29 Lally: uh? what do you mean?
21:30 Gabe: you know, that bug we got with Babs Seed?
21:30 Lally: gabe did you update ? http://puu.sh/26oa8
21:30 Gabe: yes
21:30 Gabe: It's updated
21:30 Gabe: I've even redownloaded before talking to you
21:30 Lally: hmm lemme see one thing brb
21:31 Gabe: It's not affecting the gameplay
21:31 Gabe: it's only on the editor
21:32 Lally: link me again that part
21:32 Lally: i updated osu yet
21:32 Gabe: oh
21:32 Gabe: it repaired
21:32 Gabe: LOL
21:32 Gabe: that's alright now
21:32 Lally: btw same after update
21:32 Lally: nothing changed the sliders are ok
21:35 Gabe: Easy
21:35 Gabe: 01:11:991 - Is this needed?
21:36 Lally: yap i like it how it sounds o3o
21:36 Gabe: that's a spinner..
21:36 Gabe: lemem see
21:36 Gabe: lemme*
21:37 Lally: uh w8
21:37 Lally: not in easy and normal wtf
21:37 Lally: >.<
21:37 Gabe: _o
21:38 Lally: because in hard are 2 spinnerd and 1 is silenced
21:38 Lally: == baka me
21:38 Gabe: I see
21:38 Gabe: well, delete it
21:38 Lally: done
21:40 Gabe: The hitsounds on Easy looks good
21:40 Lally: \o3o/ ik
21:40 Gabe: lol ^
21:41 Lally: :3
21:41 Gabe: that may sound nazi but...
21:41 Gabe: 00:21:977 (3) - This circle should be aligned perfectly with the previous slider
21:41 Gabe: move it to x:48 y:40
21:41 Lally: easy?
21:41 Gabe: yeah
21:41 Lally: ok o3o
21:42 Lally: done
21:42 Gabe: 00:29:022 (2) - Shouldn't you stack this note with the previous note before the slider?
21:42 Gabe: (the previous note 3)
21:43 Lally: meh why? i did it on propose to give a another line to the flow
21:43 Gabe: Okay
21:43 Gabe: that's alright
21:43 Gabe: (I'm only giving you suggestion)
21:44 Lally: sure u.u
21:44 Gabe: what
21:44 Lally: nya? D:
21:46 Gabe: Back to Hard again
21:46 Lally: ok i'm there
21:46 Gabe: 00:16:694 (2) - This slider is close from out of the window,
21:47 Gabe: let's try to avoid this and move it a grid up
21:47 Lally: yap true
21:47 Gabe: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/623875
21:47 Gabe: hue
21:47 Lally: ok fixed
21:48 Lally: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/623879
21:49 Gabe: Normal
21:49 Gabe: 01:03:538 (2) - With the distance snap, move this slider a bit
21:50 Lally: ok i'm there
21:50 Gabe: If not, it's going to have a bad spacing with the previous circle
21:50 Lally: yap i see e.e grrr spacing

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ Lally ~ hiii :3



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

1. Please setting a AudioLeadIn to 1000. done
2. 01:48:620 - Please don't silence spinner end,change to 40% volume is better.ok and i added a finish

[Hard]

1. 01:08:292 (7,4) - You'd better to make the circle here symmetrical.done :X

[Normal]

1. 01:11:638 - Add a note to here,and spinner start on 01:11:991 - is much better.i don't really like how it sounds here with a circle :/ so i keep it

[Easy]

1. 00:01:550 (1,2,3,4) - You'd better to make these sliders symmetrical.fixed :3
2. 00:46:632 (1) - Remove finish,same as other diff.fixed
3. 01:46:155 (1) - The spinner start on 01:46:507 - follow with drum.ok

OK ~ That's all ~ Pretty neat mapset ~

Call me back ~

ty very much ^-^