Hi~
General
The combo colours don't really fit very well. Maybe consider changing the grey combo colour into a light green? Grey combo colours are best to be avoided because of Multiplayer TAG games, and grey colour doesnt really fit this map, right?
Insane.
00:33:554 (3,4) - Better to remove (4) and extend (3) by 1/4 if you listen to the music.
00:34:436 (6,7) - Delete (6) and move (7) forwards to it's place so the slider stats at 00:34:436 - and ends at 00:34:814 -
00:38:470 (6,7) - Same as above, 00:38:470 (6) - delete, 00:38:596 (7) - starts at 00:38:470 - and ends at 00:38:848 -
01:04:562 (3) - Better to stream through this slider if you listen to the music.
01:24:100 (5,7) - Add claps to there notes?
01:26:369 - A note can be added here with custom clap/normal hitsample set.
01:29:016 (1,2,3) - judging by how you place combos at 01:12:882 (7,8,1) - they should be the same pattern.
01:32:419 (4) - New combo here to match with pattern at 01:15:907 (3,1) -
CakiP's Hard
00:30:403 (7) - Add clap.
00:37:966 (10) - You can delete this note.
00:45:151 (2,3,4) - Spacing is a little too strange...
00:46:537 - 00:46:663 - You can add notes here to match the music better.
00:48:302 (6,7) - Best to increase the spacing here to avoid confusion during play.
00:50:949 (1,2) - Better to make the rhythm like:
00:55:109 (2) - Start this slider at 00:55:235 - and end at 00:55:487 -
01:19:184 (1) - Better to map through this spinner. (it's a little too short for a Hard, right? Also, it really dosen't have a very definitive ending, so it's best to remove it.)
alacat's Hard
00:26:747 (1) - Add whistle here to match piano.
01:17:167 (1,2,3,4) - You arrange this a little better?
Good difficulty.
BeatofIke's Normal
01:28:008 (2,3,4) - Just wanna say I think you can make a better rhythm and design here...
01:37:335 - This break... lol Maybe just remove?
Also good difficulty.
Sekai's Easy
01:05:067 (1,2) - You can improve the blanket here.
01:13:134 - Add finish?
Good luck~
General
The combo colours don't really fit very well. Maybe consider changing the grey combo colour into a light green? Grey combo colours are best to be avoided because of Multiplayer TAG games, and grey colour doesnt really fit this map, right?
Insane.
00:33:554 (3,4) - Better to remove (4) and extend (3) by 1/4 if you listen to the music.
00:34:436 (6,7) - Delete (6) and move (7) forwards to it's place so the slider stats at 00:34:436 - and ends at 00:34:814 -
00:38:470 (6,7) - Same as above, 00:38:470 (6) - delete, 00:38:596 (7) - starts at 00:38:470 - and ends at 00:38:848 -
01:04:562 (3) - Better to stream through this slider if you listen to the music.
01:24:100 (5,7) - Add claps to there notes?
01:26:369 - A note can be added here with custom clap/normal hitsample set.
01:29:016 (1,2,3) - judging by how you place combos at 01:12:882 (7,8,1) - they should be the same pattern.
01:32:419 (4) - New combo here to match with pattern at 01:15:907 (3,1) -
CakiP's Hard
00:30:403 (7) - Add clap.
00:37:966 (10) - You can delete this note.
00:45:151 (2,3,4) - Spacing is a little too strange...
00:46:537 - 00:46:663 - You can add notes here to match the music better.
00:48:302 (6,7) - Best to increase the spacing here to avoid confusion during play.
00:50:949 (1,2) - Better to make the rhythm like:
SPOILER
or 
00:54:604 (11) - Really awkward to play around here, maybe extend this slider by 1/4 and delete the next note with finish.00:55:109 (2) - Start this slider at 00:55:235 - and end at 00:55:487 -
01:19:184 (1) - Better to map through this spinner. (it's a little too short for a Hard, right? Also, it really dosen't have a very definitive ending, so it's best to remove it.)
alacat's Hard
00:26:747 (1) - Add whistle here to match piano.
01:17:167 (1,2,3,4) - You arrange this a little better?
Good difficulty.
BeatofIke's Normal
01:28:008 (2,3,4) - Just wanna say I think you can make a better rhythm and design here...
01:37:335 - This break... lol Maybe just remove?
Also good difficulty.
Sekai's Easy
01:05:067 (1,2) - You can improve the blanket here.
01:13:134 - Add finish?
Good luck~