Hi Nichiyouki,

The reason why i haven't recheck your beatmap yet is I'm waiting for Sekai to look at the mod for Easy. So just pm me when Easy is updated and I'll come recheck this.

ty for modding ~ Kiiwa:3

fix all.

http://puu.sh/1SNJt

BeatofIke wrote:

This map should be ready for MAT now!

I will try to find MAT after merchat come recheck this map, and I'm ready >.<

merchat7 wrote:

Hi Nichiyouki,

The reason why i haven't recheck your beatmap yet is I'm waiting for Sekai to look at the mod for Easy. So just pm me when Easy is updated and I'll come recheck this.

Okay, I will pm you when Sekai checked her diff.

Updated~

Waiting Sekai to check Sekai's Easy diff

ok Fixed everything on my diff~

Thanks everyone for modding :3

http://puu.sh/1ToUa

Recheck, prioritizing this request due to it being recheck

[Easy]

00:35:319 (2,4) - Hmm listening to drum here, I think clap/normal sampleset instead of whistle would be better
00:43:386 (1) - Sorry for nazi, one grid down (grid 4), I think blanket looks better
00:47:419 (1) - Nazi, one grid right, same reason
01:05:067 (1) - Nazi again but I think 1 grid right makes blanket look better to me.
01:19:184 (3) - Finish instead of whistle?
01:19:688 (4) - Hmm, shouldn't it be finish at end? Pretty sure I would have caught this on my first check, so maybe you misunderstood what I mean with my hitsound suggestion. Keep the finish with cymbal, but where there is no cymbal, to put whistle in this section.
01:43:386 (1) - Recommend finish instead at begin.

Hmm, a couple more hitsounding stuff, but after that, it should be perfect. I notice some blanketing is not too perfect, but they are easily fix by moving stuff one grid.

[Normal]

00:48:932 (3,1,4) - Whistle at begin for piano and emphasis of music on stanza. The main reason I mention this is because it sound like you're missing a couple whistles here.
00:56:999 (3,1) - Same as above
01:23:218 (1,3) - I don't understand why no whistle at begin here when you did it on 01:07:083 (1,3) -
01:27:251 (1,3) - Whistle at begin, same reason as above
01:30:277 (3) - ^
01:45:403 (1) - Really think finish at begin fit better with music.

A couple more hitsound suggestions, also notice some whistle inconsistency at kiai time, don't really a reason why so I highly recommend fixing them.

[CakiP's Hard]

00:47:293 (3) - I feel clap on red tick sound horrible, I think only whistle at end is better
00:51:327 (3) - ^
00:53:722 (10) - No drum sound at begin of this slider, so I don't think there should be clap at begin
01:33:302 (2) - Every other diff used finish here, I highly recommend doing it here.

I really hope you remove those claps I mentioned

[Insane]

00:21:705 (3,4,5) - The spacing inconsistency seem a bit odd to me, why not keep everything snap to 1.0x/1.1x/1.2x etc. spacing? For example, move 00:21:957 (4) - two grid down.
00:27:756 (4,5,6,7) - I really prefer if you space the stream out, make it easier to read for me http://puu.sh/1TBmN. Applies to part like 01:07:840 (4,5,6,7) - 01:23:974 (4,5,6,7) - etc.
01:01:033 (1) - Sorry for bad wording, I write it like this since I think you've made a mistake. I actually mean you should add whistle here since you add on the other big white tick here in this section.
01:03:302 (1) - Hmm stack on 01:03:050 (14) - ?
01:06:327 (6) - x:24 y:204, I don't understand why spacing is inconsistent here.
01:12:125 - I really think you need something here, to be honest, I prefer a pattern like this to keep the slider > hit circle pattern going http://puu.sh/1TBAD. But if not, try adding a hit circle there or add 1/4 slider and end it on 01:12:251.
01:28:260 - ^
01:30:529 (4) - Similar to 01:06:327, why not keep spacing more consistent? Try x:44 y:184

I try my best modding this, streamy maps are the maps I can't mod well. But overall, I can't find any problem, diff looks good to me. Everything is just suggestion.

Star, good luck! Recheck took a while so if you feel this post also deserve a kudosu, you can kudosu it.

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue.
OK, Recheck time?

1. Red - Important or Issue
   
2. Blue - You'd better fix them
   
3. Black - Normal Suggestions
   

[General]
Fine!
[Sekai's Easy]

1. 01:15:151 - I guess finish here is more suitable for the music, so why not use finish instead of the whistle? It could make more sense.
2. 01:17:167 (1) - Also, finish here could make more sense too, since the vocal "ki" is a downbeat.
3. 01:19:184 (3) - ^^^, music has downbeat here, why not use finish? (ok I admit I'm keen on adding finish :p)
4. 01:19:940 - Background music has a downbeat here too... Why you do not put anything here :<

[BeatofIke's Normal]

1. 00:28:512 (3) - Overlap it on 00:28:764 (4) please, you put this behind (3) may confuse some beginners.
2. 01:28:764 (4) - Since the long white tick on 01:29:268, so I think it is a not good choice to make this slider return to the long white tick. My suggestion is to remove the return and start
3. 01:29:520 (1) this slider at 01:29:268 instead.
4. 01:47:167 (3) - Overlap it on 01:47:420 (1) please, you put this behind (3) may confuse some beginners.

[alacat's Hard]

1. 00:25:739 (4,5) - What about exchanging their position on timing? Then it could sound better in my view.
2. 01:21:201 (1) - Needless whistle on this note, finish here is enough, also whistle here sounds not good to me

[CakiP's Hard]

1. 00:31:159 (3) - It can be reduced by 1/4, and put it on 00:31:159, then add a note on 00:31:033.
2. 00:38:092 (10) - Highly recommend putting it to free space like x:168 y:152, where you put is so crowded and it may confuse ppl.
3. 01:31:537 (11) - This combo is too long.. Add newcombo to this note.
   

[Insane]
Fine!
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Thanks for MOD.
Update my diff plz~
http://puu.sh/1TTn1

merchat7 wrote:

Recheck, prioritizing this request due to it being recheck

[Insane]

01:03:302 (1) - Hmm stack on 01:03:050 (14) - ? no, I prefer the original more.

I try my best modding this, streamy maps are the maps I can't mod well. But overall, I can't find any problem, diff looks good to me. Everything is just suggestion.

Star, good luck! Recheck took a while so if you feel this post also deserve a kudosu, you can kudosu it.

In addition to what I mentioned, I fixed.

Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue.
OK, Recheck time? \:D/

Thank you both for your recheck and thank you merchat for star

I think that both post also deserve to get kudosu.

I decided to change the soft-whistle behavior. It should be a lot more consistent now! Updated!
http://puu.sh/1TUHD

Thank you for modding Snowy~ :3

both fix ~

http://puu.sh/1TVOO

Thanks everyone for modding

Fixed everything: http://puu.sh/1TVVM

:3

hi !

take it from #modreqs

General
I still think the first part is mappable. I would be more comfortable to bubble this if you chose to map this part..
as the song is really great, I think everyone,who plays this,should enjoy this amazing first part too (at least, I feel sad that you didn't map the first part)
not that trouble , it's just about 18 second
others seem fine

Sekai's Easy
01:04:562 (3) - clap here ? it fits here imo
01:13:134 (1) - remove clap at the end , I feel this sounds bad with 01:14:646 (2) - (it doubles themselves)
01:40:865 (2) - miss clap here as I believe

BeatofIke's Normal
01:47:420 (4) - remove NC here according to 00:28:512 (3,4) - , I find it a bit odd for this couple of notes

alacat's Hard
AR-1 , it's quite too fast for this diff , it's not jumpy so it's better on AR6
00:26:747 (1) - as this sliders start on piano sound , players may expect to hear piano sound on the end of slider too. I will do like this
about distance , you can change whatever you want~
(don't forget to add clap on the new note and whistle on the tail of slider if you choose to fix)
01:15:907 (3) - clap on the tail ? sounds really better imo
01:32:041 (3) - add clap on the tail too ^ if you fixed this already

CakiP's Hard
AR-1 ? , same reason as alacat's Hard ~ and if you chose to fix it , you should do HP-1 too for more balance
00:32:924 (2) - this note should be removed, it plays strangely because this triplet is started on the white tick and the song doesn't have sound here
00:34:940 (2) - ^
as you hear , you may want to add it because of vocal .. but if you remove this note and shorten this slider 00:35:067 (3) - to end at 00:35:193
it will sound perfectly
00:44:394 (8) - clap on the head of this slider ? , feel empty .. I guess you may miss it
00:48:932 (7) - this one is a bit unintuitive. as the sound from 00:48:176 (5,6) - , it should end at 00:49:184 for this slider and 00:49:436 (9) - should be on
00:49:310 , don't forget to fix spacing if you already fixed it
00:52:966 (8,9) - same as above. the way to fix it is to shorten this slider end at 00:53:218 (9) - and move 00:53:470 (10) - to 00:53:344
01:09:226 (3) - remove it for better sound. the reason is alike. the triplet starts on the white tick
01:13:260 (3) - ^
01:14:772 (8) - ^
01:17:293 (8) - ^
01:23:344 (8) - ^
01:30:907 (9) - ^
01:33:428 (3) - ^
01:33:554 (4) - add clap at the tail here
01:47:167 (2) - spacing error , I can't find why you let the gap between this and next note so move it to x:424 y:180

Insane
OD+1 plzz, it's too easy I think (at least, it shouldn't be different between AR and OD by 2)
00:29:898 (5) - clap ? sounds better imo
add clap there? according to the music !
01:01:915 (5) -
01:02:041 (6) -
01:02:545 (10) -
01:02:672 (11) -
01:02:798 (12) -
01:07:966 (5,6) - clap both ?
01:11:999 (4) - clap both head and tail
01:16:285 (1,2) - clap both note (slider's head included)
01:19:562 (1) - ^
01:20:319 (3) - ^
01:24:100 (5,6) - clap both?
01:28:134 (4) - ^ both head and tail
01:32:419 (1,2) - ^
01:35:697 (2) - ^
01:36:201 (4) - ^ both head and tail
01:37:083 (7,8) - ^
01:44:268 (5,6) - ^
01:46:285 (7,8) - ^

this mapset looks pretty nice, CakiP's Hard still needs a bit work but I think it's good enough
call me back once you are done for a recheck

Frostmourne wrote:

hi ! Hi

take it from #modreqs

General
I still think the first part is mappable. I would be more comfortable to bubble this if you chose to map this part..
as the song is really great, I think everyone,who plays this,should enjoy this amazing first part too (at least, I feel sad that you didn't map the first part)
not that trouble , it's just about 18 second I have no idea to map first part >< but thanks for your suggestion. Okay, it's interesting.
others seem fine

Insane
01:16:285 (1,2) - clap both note (slider's head included)
01:32:419 (1,2) - ^
01:35:697 (2) - ^
I feel sounds weird when I put clap on notes these. So I will not add it on notes, but I will add it on slider's head (01:16:285 (1,2) & 01:32:419 (1,2)).
However, aside from what I mentioned those, I added clap all & fixed OD.

this mapset looks pretty nice, CakiP's Hard still needs a bit work but I think it's good enough
call me back once you are done for a recheck

Thanks for your mod Then I will call you for recheck when this map's ready =w=

ok fixed and mapped the first part~

http://puu.sh/20Tub

Thanks for modding Frost ww

EDIT: Nich if you wont going to map the first part, then just delete on my diff.

It's up to you.

I knew that someone is going to mention that combo XD. Anyways, Updated!
http://puu.sh/20Tw1

Updated~

@Sekai-nyan: I tried to think again. It's interesting for map first part. So I will update it.

Thank you for modding ,frost ^^// http://puu.sh/20XDn

Hi~
Thanks for MOD~ xD
update my diff plz~
http://puu.sh/21fra

Updated again~

Note: Now I think I will remove first part on Sekai's Easy diff and my diff ><
because it may cause confusion for mapping of each one.

Hi ~ Nichiyouki ~

Mod time for my Random Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions






OK ~ That's all ~ I see frost will recheck this ~

Good luck with rank ~

Moe~ Rika! /hugs Rika :3
Fixed Everything! Updated!
http://puu.sh/22iYE

Thank you Rika chan :3

fix one point

http://puu.sh/22rkm

Hi~ Thanks for MOD~
Update my diff plz~
http://puu.sh/22Lpg

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ Nichiyouki ~ Hi \:D/

Mod time for my Random Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

1. Please remove AudioLeadIn for easy diff. I forget change AudioLeadIn. So I change to 0ms.
2. I agree with Frost 00:02:545 ~ is mappable. It really interesting, but it may have the problem. Particular CakiP was a newbie mapper. If he/she made it himself/herself, It may have to more mod than this certainly. However, I may consider it again, if guest everyone on my map are agree.
3. 01:57:503 - For last spinner,how about end to here? it's really suitable. I don't like very long spinner.

OK ~ That's all ~ I see frost will recheck this ~

Good luck with rank ~

Thanks for your mod Rika-chan

Updated~

Thanks for MOD.
update my diff plz~
http://puu.sh/23IPm

Request -Gamu-
CakiP's Hard only~~

久々にmodしたら糞すぎて提案にすらなってませんごめんなさい;^;

Thanks for MOD and Gamu~
update my diff plz~
http://puu.sh/24yfd

久々にmodしたら糞すぎて提案にすらなってませんごめんなさい;^;　いえいえ、すごく助かりました!ありがとうございます！＞＜[/box]

Hi~ Nichiyouki :3

request from CakiP

here my mod~

[General]

1. Song Setup - Audio Lead-in - only Insane diff is different from AIBat. (Insane:500ms, other diff:0ms. ) The beginning of this map is slow in all diff, therefore it does not have a meaning to set it. so plz change to 500⇒0ms for insane diff.

[CakiP's Hard]

1. 00:21:957 (5,6) - 流れの提案: http://puu.sh/252J7
2. 00:22:461 (6,1) - whistle 3連続で置くよりも、6のwhistle消して1にwhistle追加でアクセントとして使ったほうが私的にはいい感じに聞こえます。
3. 00:23:470 (3,4,5,6,7) - リズムの提案: http://puu.sh/2534a 00:23:848の青線にも音があるので、ここで音を空けるよりもスライダーで繋げちゃったほうが音がスムーズになるかな？と思ったのと、 1/2リズムでのスライダーが多いなと感じましたのでここで1/1スライダーを使うのもありかなと。 変更する場合は00:23:722のとこにもwhistle置いても良いかも。
4. 00:24:730~ ここの緑線から音量70⇒50%の変更はいらないかなと思います。 そこまで歌の音量が下がってるような気はしませんので。
5. 00:26:747 (1) - スライダーend 00:27:125の方が合うかと。 + endにwhistle
6. 00:28:512 (7) - add NC(New combo) 長いです。 あと多分リピートとend部にclap?
7. 00:30:781~00:46:915 - whistleが00:31:159 (3) - のendにしか無く、寂しい音に感じます。 歌に合うような感じで穏やかな一定のwhistleを置いてみては？
   for ex:
   
   SPOILER

   ・00:31:159 (3) - endのwhistle削除
   ・00:31:789 (4) - startにwhistle
   ・00:32:798 (1) - whistle
   ・00:34:814 (1) - ^
   ・00:35:571 (3) - endにwhistle
   ・00:36:831 (6) - startにwhistle
   ・00:38:848 (1) - ^
   ・00:39:856 (4) - whistle
   ・00:40:613 (6) - endにwhistle
   ・00:42:882 (3) - whistle
   ・00:43:890 (6) - startにwhistle
   ・00:44:898 (1) - whistle
8. 00:32:798 (1,2) - リズムの提案: http://puu.sh/253yK 変えない場合でもvocalはどちらかというと伸びている感じなので、スタックはあまり合わない気がします。　vocalに合わせない様なリズムでいきたいのなら00:33:050 (2) - もサークルに変えて、00:32:798 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ここで少しのジャンプパターンを使うようにしてみては？
9. 00:36:831 (6) - add NC
10. 00:36:831 (6,7,8,9,10) - リズムの提案: http://puu.sh/253HT 00:38:092 (9,10) - 特にここのリズム、一定にするよりもギター音に合わせたほうが良いかと。 00:34:310 (6) - と同じようなリズムで統一性も出るかと。
11. 00:41:117 (7) - add NC & 次のnote 8との間隔が窮屈に見えます。 http://puu.sh/253N9 このような形で十分かと。
12. 00:42:377 (1,2) - リズムの使い方を00:38:092 (9,10)の提案、00:34:310 (6)と同じようにしてみては。 ( 変更する場合はコンボカラーも同じように。）
13. 00:48:932 (7) - add NC
14. 00:49:310 (8) - startのwhistle削除。 endにwhistle追加。
15. 00:49:688 (9) - endにwhistle
16. 00:52:966 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:52:966 (1,2) - ここはvocalと合っている、00:53:722 (3,4,5) - ここは合っていないというようなリズムになってるので私の提案としては、00:52:966 (1,2) - ここを無理してvocalに沿わせないリズム 2を消して1のスライダーを00:53:470に延長。
    ヒットサウンド: 00:53:470の位置にclap, 00:53:722 (3) - repeatとend部にclap, 00:54:226 (4) - startにclap追加, 00:54:604 (5) - startにclap追加。
17. 00:55:739 (2,3,4,5) - リズムの提案: http://puu.sh/254mY 3連打をドラムに合わせるようなリズム
18. 00:56:999 (6) - add NC 長いです。
19. 00:57:251 (7) - 流れ http://puu.sh/254xj のような流れにしたほうがスムーズかと。
20. 00:57:756 (8) - repeatのwhistle削除。
21. 00:58:512 - 緑線の音量変更は無くて良いと思います。
22. 00:59:016 - ^
23. 00:59:016 (1) - 00:56:999 (6) - でfinishを使ってるのであれば、ここもwhistleではなくfinishの方が合うと思います。
24. 01:00:024 (4) - startにwhistle追加
25. 01:03:050 (1) - 音がないところにnoteを置くよりも、01:01:033 (1) - スピナーを伸ばしたほうがvocalにも合うしリズムが良いんじゃないかと。 http://puu.sh/254H2 BPMが遅い&ハードなのでスピナー後で特に問題になるようなことは無いと思います。
26. 01:07:083 (7) - add NC
27. 01:08:596 (1,2,3) - リズムとデザイン&流れの提案: http://puu.sh/254Xj イメージです。 2,3のスタックはあまり合わない感じがあったので ><; リズムは2,3のサークルとスライダーの入れ替えだけです。
28. 01:12:125~ ここから音量80%⇒60% 01:19:184までというのはちょっと突然すぎると思います。私は音量低下不要だと思います。 もし残すのであれば01:12:630に音量70%、　01:13:134に音量80%と通常のkiai timeで使う音量にすぐ戻してあげたほうがベターかと
29. 01:16:663 (6) - add NC
30. 01:17:167 (7,8) - リズムの提案: スライダー、サークルのリズムを逆に。
31. 01:18:176 (10) - endのwhistle削除
32. 01:19:184 (1) - リズムの提案: http://puu.sh/255jU endがあまり音をフォローできていないのと短いので、このような感じで良いのではないかと。
33. 01:22:714 (6) - add NC & 流れ、リズムの提案: http://puu.sh/255tD http://puu.sh/255u8 形はあくまでイメージです。 変更する際は後のnoteのフォローも忘れずに。
34. 01:26:747 (7) - 01:25:739 (3,4,5,6) - と同様の形でジャンプさせたほうがよいかも。 http://puu.sh/255BK
35. 01:27:251 (8) - add NC
36. 01:34:310 (5,6) - 同じ形のスライダーを使ったほうがきれいかと。 http://puu.sh/255Fa
37. 01:34:814 (6) - endのwhistle削除。 startにwhistle追加。
38. 01:35:319 (1) - add clap
39. 01:37:335 (1) - startをclapに変更。 endのclap削除
40. 01:38:092 (2) - startをclapに変更。
41. 01:40:361 (3) - endのwhistle削除。 白線だけで十分かと。
42. 01:41:117 (5) - whistle削除
43. 01:42:377 (4) - add whistle
44. 01:42:630 (5) - endのwhistle削除
45. 01:42:125 (2,3,4,5) - リズムの提案: http://puu.sh/255Sv ( 理由は00:23:470 (3,4,5,6,7)と同じです)
46. 01:44:646 (5) - startにwhistle
47. 01:45:403 (7) - add NC and 01:46:915 (1) - remove and 01:47:419 (3) - add NC. & endを01:45:781に。 + endにwhistle
48. 01:47:419 (3,4,5) - リズムの提案: http://puu.sh/2562V 01:47:419 (3,4,5) - これがオーバーに感じましたので ><
    
    とても長くごちゃごちゃしてます↑ 申し訳ない..orz
    全てを直す必要はありません。 同意できる部分だけでも見直してみてください。
    所々NCが長い部分が見受けられるので、そこは直したほうが良いと思います。
    スライダーについて、上にも書いてますが1/2でのスライダー等が主となっており、リズムが単調になりがちかなという印象を受けます。vocalで伸びがある部分等では1/1でのスライダーを使ったりしてバランスよく作るともっと良くなると思います。次回のご参考に>_<!

Good luck~

kosiga wrote:

Hi~ Nichiyouki :3 Hi kosiga \:D/

request from CakiP

here my mod~

[General]

1. Song Setup - Audio Lead-in - only Insane diff is different from AIBat. (Insane:500ms, other diff:0ms. ) The beginning of this map is slow in all diff, therefore it does not have a meaning to set it. so plz change to 500⇒0ms for insane diff. I forget change AudioLeadIn XD So I change to 0ms.

Good luck~

Thanks for your mod, kosiga

Waiting CakiP to check his/her diff.

Thanks for MOD kosiga san~
Update my diff plz~
http://puu.sh/25stk

Recheck

BeatofIke's Normal
00:28:764 (1) - remove NC here to make it consistent with 01:47:420 (4) -

Cakip's Hard
01:03:302 (1) - new combo here

fix these and I will bubble

Frostmourne wrote:

Recheck

BeatofIke's Normal
00:28:764 (1) - remove NC here to make it consistent with 01:47:420 (4) -

Cakip's Hard
01:03:302 (1) - new combo here

fix these and I will bubble

@Nichiyouki - Feel free to fix this for me and CakiP's.
It's only a minor fix, so it's not a big deal.

Nevermind XD

Thanks for recheck Frost~
Update my diff plz~
http://puu.sh/25zn7

Thanks Nichiyouki :3
Good luck for Rank!

BeatofIke wrote:

Frostmourne wrote:

Recheck

BeatofIke's Normal
00:28:764 (1) - remove NC here to make it consistent with 01:47:420 (4) -

Cakip's Hard
01:03:302 (1) - new combo here

fix these and I will bubble

@Nichiyouki - Feel free to fix this for me and CakiP's.
It's only a minor fix, so it's not a big deal.

Okay, I already fix it for you, and update CakiP's Hard diff.

CakiP diff is good enough


so here you go

Thank you Frost

Yay!

Thanks Frost~
I am glad to have you say so. xD

finally, congrats!

Yay!

Congrats Nichiyouki :3

gratz

congraz~

(o'д')ノ☆ﾟ*｡Congratu★lations｡*ﾟ☆ヽ('д'o)

finally grats~!

Thank you Rika-chan

and thank you everyone, too

congraz \o/

เยี่ยม

Congratz :3

Thank you everyone\:D/

Nice