Sun Rainbow wrote:

NymNymNymph><~(Pia~
Panda Mod><
[Easy]
00:24:384 (1) - 开头考虑加个FINISH吗？哦 忘了
00:30:384 (1) - ^这里不用
00:58:134 (2) - 我觉得不要和1合在一起更好点吧。。。。万一新手慌张起来了连按的话就杯具了。。。。应该没事吧 挺常见的

[Normal]
01:00:384 (1,2,3) - 这样？
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/503834

[Hard]
这是hard+或者insane了吧。。。
00:15:196 (5,1,2) - 我个人认为hard出现这样的应该算是大跳了吧。。。这种slider跳米啥问题
00:18:384 (3) - NC？应该用不上
00:42:384 (1,2,3) - 拜托很容易混淆好不好！！！！！！！！没有吧我觉得很好读
00:48:759 (2,3) - 同第一条 这种间距没问题

[Insane]
00:14:634 (7) - 为什么不这样呢？
X:352 y:320
00:19:696 (4,5) - X:32 y:32?
00:25:134 (3,5) - 感觉有点不美观这个黏在一起._. 其实这几个还真是故意的 想看看稍微挡一点会怎么样所以先保留吧

我是不是听到中国这两个字了._.
妮妮的图果然让我悲催了._.
Papapapanda~
Nynynynymph!(Bong!)
无法保证质量的我真是对不起。。。加油吧妮妮大人！（炸
建议直接要泡

raririn wrote:

[dragonxcz's Normal]
00:36:384 (1,2) - 这两个不是对称点好看吗 英文要怎么说 不会=。=

00:57:384 (1) - add finish？

01:04:134 (2,3) - 第三个tick多余的

Nymph wrote:

raririn wrote:

[dragonxcz's Normal]

00:36:384 (1,2) - Symmetric may look beautiful on these 2? -okay, flows better

00:57:384 (1) - add finish？-okay

01:04:134 (2,3) - the 3rd tick feel useless -sorry, I think this isn't so useless

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Saten wrote:

[dragonxcz]
00:00:384 - 50% from here on. Same reason as the others above
00:00:384 (1) - finish on start
00:01:884 (3) - ^
00:02:821 (4) - whistle on both parts
00:03:384 (1) - finish on start
00:04:884 (3) - ^
00:05:821 (4) - whistle on both parts
00:06:384 (1) - finish on start
00:07:509 (2) - finish on end
00:08:821 (4) - whistle on both parts
00:09:384 (1) - finish on start
00:10:884 (3) - ^
00:11:821 (4) - whistle on these instead
00:11:821 (4) - also, this slider-shape is a bit weird imo. This seems to be the only odd slider in this map -sorry but no, it's rare slider in this map, because it's only one part like this - gradient between intro and song
00:12:384 (1) - finish on start
00:18:384 (1) - ^
00:22:509 (3) - finish on end
01:00:384 (1) - finish
01:06:384 (1) - finish on start
01:09:384 (1) - ^
01:12:384 (1) - ^
01:18:384 (1) - ^
01:19:134 (2) - ^
01:19:884 (1) - ^
01:20:634 (2) - ^
01:21:384 (1) - ^

1. current timing is fine, however it can be more accurate :3
   offset: 390 (+6)

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:07:884 (3) - i'd like to make a curve here just like 00:10:884 (2) - ,looks much better than the straight imo~
   2. 00:13:884 (3) - same as above?
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 01:07:134 (1) - remove the whistle on that tail? sounds a bit needless currently..:d
      01:11:634 (4) - why not put a whistle on that head as well as the previous one?

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. AR-1 is more amicable to beginners :3
   2. 00:11:821 (4) - looks not very good..maybe you can reduce the bending angle that or change to another pattern :3
   3. 00:57:384 - there has a beat(clap) so i feel that it well be better if you add a circle here(where is stacked with the tail of 00:55:884 (3) - or anywhere else you feel good) and delay the spinner 1/4 or 1/2 stick :p
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:22:509 (3) - since you have set a clap on the head of the next slider(00:23:259 (4) - ), i recommend that to put a clap also on the end of this one~
   2. 00:17:634 (5) - really sounds good if you set a whistle here either~

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 01:22:884 (1) - i recommend that to add a circle here(stack with (5) or anywhere you like) with finish, i feel that it's better to play and have a better flow.:p
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:00:384 (1) - i'd like to add a finish on that head~ since you have gave the clap to each note i feel you shouldn't to ignor that finishes~
   2. 00:01:509 (3) - finish on that tail?
   3. 00:02:446 (1) - ^
   4. 00:03:009 (2) - finish~
   5. 00:03:384 (1,3) - and 00:05:446 (1,2) - same as above~ (you can also adjust the volume of the finishes.)
   6. 00:06:384 (1,4) - and 00:08:446 (1,2) - ^
   7. 00:09:384 (1,4,6) - and 00:11:446 (1,2) - ^
   8. 00:16:884 (3) - how about add a whistle on that head? really sounds good for this pattern and reasonable to the voice :3
   9. 00:37:134 (2) - the whistle which on that head sounds a bit needless..
   10. 00:40:134 (2) - ^
   11. 00:43:134 (2) - ^
   12. 01:05:634 (3,4) - whistle on these tail? to be consistent with 01:02:634 (4,5) - :3

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. AR+1 or AR-1 on "Hard" :3
   2. 01:22:884 - same suggestion as "Hard"~
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:00:384 - ~00:12:009 - same finish suggestions as the "Hard"
   2. 00:32:259 (9) - you have lost a clap on that repeat :p
   3. 00:35:446 (7) - same lost as above
   4. 00:38:446 (7) - ^
   5. 00:41:446 (6) - ^..(idk..if you make them determined)
   6. 00:44:259 (7) - same repeat as above
   7. 00:47:259 (7) - that end also
   8. 01:02:634 (8) - sounds better if you add a whistle on that head~~
   9. 01:07:509 (5) - how about add finish here with the "HAI"~ from voice?
   10. 01:09:009 (5) - same as above~
   11. 01:15:009 (9) - if you followed above(the "HAI"'s suggestion), also set finish on that head either~
   12. 01:17:634 (8) - and that tail~
   13. 01:22:134 (3) - i'd like to add whistles on head and tail on this slider, then also put a whistle on 01:22:509 (4) - 's .:3

Saten wrote:

Hello!

I almost thought this was related to Shukufuku no Campanella

[General]
Title should be パパパパンダ en changed to this one
http://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E3%81%A1% ... E%E3%82%8F

Add iyuna to tags (Song writer & arranger) alrighty~

Also, I have no idea why it says "Chata no Wa". Is it a different artist from Chata? o.o yeah I think maybe o3o

01:09:384 - What does she say here? X-Panda? lol I have no idea..

[Insane]
00:00:384 - use 50% vol instead? kinda fits in with the background claps and it doesn't over-voice them either I guess this depends... at my place I think current is fine.
00:00:384 (1) - finish
00:01:884 (1) - ^
00:02:821 (1,2) - whistle
00:03:384 (1) - finish
00:04:884 (1) - ^
00:05:821 (1,2) - whistle
00:06:384 (1) - finsh
00:07:884 (1) - ^
00:08:821 (1,2) - whistle
00:09:384 (1) - finish
00:10:884 (1) - ^
00:11:259 (3) - whistle
00:11:821 (1,2) - ^
00:19:696 (4,5) - move this further up?

SPOILER

00:24:009 (9) - finish actually I used to use these hitsound like your said =3=.. but finally something made me changed to claps like current one, so I am sorry I don't wanna to change them back TAT
00:25:134 (3,5) - this kinda looks a bit odd. Move either of them so they doesn't touch each-other? I can't say why but this is on purpose =3=..sorry
00:28:509 (5,7) - same, but it has almost fade away
01:22:134 (3,4) - this is a really big gap. Kinda random to use it at the end imo. How about something like this?

SPOILER

yeah this is on purpose too..

[Kanon]
00:00:384 - use 50% from here to 00:12:384 - same reason as Insane
00:00:384 (1) - finish on start
00:01:509 (3) - finish on end
00:02:446 (1) - whistle on end
00:03:009 (2) - whistle
00:03:384 (1) - finish on start
00:04:509 (3) - finish on end
00:05:446 (1) - whistle on end
00:06:009 (2) - whistle
00:06:384 (1) - finish on start
00:07:509 (4) - finish on end
00:08:446 (1) - whistle on end
00:09:009 (2) - whistle
00:09:384 (1) - finish on start
00:10:509 (4) - finish on end
00:11:259 (6) - whistle
00:11:446 (1) - whistle on end
00:12:009 (2) - whistle instead?
00:12:384 (1) - finish on start
00:22:884 (1) - ^
00:23:446 (3) - finish
00:24:009 (5) - finish on end
00:44:446 (5,6) - unexpected jump I think this one is fine
01:18:759 (2) - mind doing the same what you did here? 01:20:259 (2,3) - fixed
01:21:384 (1) - finish added

[dragonxcz]
00:00:384 - 50% from here on. Same reason as the others above
00:00:384 (1) - finish on start
00:01:884 (3) - ^
00:02:821 (4) - whistle on both parts
00:03:384 (1) - finish on start
00:04:884 (3) - ^
00:05:821 (4) - whistle on both parts
00:06:384 (1) - finish on start
00:07:509 (2) - finish on end
00:08:821 (4) - whistle on both parts
00:09:384 (1) - finish on start
00:10:884 (3) - ^
00:11:821 (4) - whistle on these instead
00:11:821 (4) - also, this slider-shape is a bit weird imo. This seems to be the only odd slider in this map
00:12:384 (1) - finish on start
00:18:384 (1) - ^
00:22:509 (3) - finish on end
01:00:384 (1) - finish
01:06:384 (1) - finish on start
01:09:384 (1) - ^
01:12:384 (1) - ^
01:18:384 (1) - ^
01:19:134 (2) - ^
01:19:884 (1) - ^
01:20:634 (2) - ^
01:21:384 (1) - ^

[Easy]
00:00:384 - Same as the other diffs
00:00:384 (1) - finish on start
00:01:884 (2) - ^
00:03:009 (3) - finish on end
00:04:884 (2) - finish on start
00:06:384 (1) - finish
00:07:884 (3) - finish on start
00:07:884 (3) - and can you curve this a bit so it flows better together with (4)?

SPOILER

00:09:009 (4) - finish on end
00:10:884 (2) - finish on start
01:15:384 (1,2,3,4) - this looks a bit compressed imo yeah I think this is fine~
01:16:884 (4) - so close. but alright
01:18:759 (1) - finish on end
01:19:884 (2) - ^ ah forgot these 2.


Papapapa Panda~♪

Strawberry wrote:

NymNymNymNym
　　
[ General]
　

1. current timing is fine, however it can be more accurate :3
   offset: 390 (+6)

[/color]
　
[ Easy]
　

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:07:884 (3) - i'd like to make a curve here just like 00:10:884 (2) - ,looks much better than the straight imo~
   2. 00:13:884 (3) - same as above?
   actually I think this doesn't matter o3o
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 01:07:134 (1) - remove the whistle on that tail? sounds a bit needless currently..:d I kinda think this one is alright =3=
      01:11:634 (4) - why not put a whistle on that head as well as the previous one? sure

　
[ Normal]
　

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. AR-1 is more amicable to beginners :3
   2. 00:11:821 (4) - looks not very good..maybe you can reduce the bending angle that or change to another pattern :3
   3. 00:57:384 - there has a beat(clap) so i feel that it well be better if you add a circle here(where is stacked with the tail of 00:55:884 (3) - or anywhere else you feel good) and delay the spinner 1/4 or 1/2 stick :p
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:22:509 (3) - since you have set a clap on the head of the next slider(00:23:259 (4) - ), i recommend that to put a clap also on the end of this one~
   2. 00:17:634 (5) - really sounds good if you set a whistle here either~

　
[ Hard]
　

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 01:22:884 (1) - i recommend that to add a circle here(stack with (5) or anywhere you like) with finish, i feel that it's better to play and have a better flow.:p .this feel like feeling the vocal so I think it is fine.
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:00:384 (1) - i'd like to add a finish on that head~ since you have gave the clap to each note i feel you shouldn't to ignor that finishes~
   2. 00:01:509 (3) - finish on that tail?
   3. 00:02:446 (1) - ^
   4. 00:03:009 (2) - finish~
   5. 00:03:384 (1,3) - and 00:05:446 (1,2) - same as above~ (you can also adjust the volume of the finishes.)
   6. 00:06:384 (1,4) - and 00:08:446 (1,2) - ^
   7. 00:09:384 (1,4,6) - and 00:11:446 (1,2) - ^ lol like I already reply in satensan's post, sorry
   8. 00:16:884 (3) - how about add a whistle on that head? really sounds good for this pattern and reasonable to the voice :3 sure and add one on the slider after here
   9. 00:37:134 (2) - the whistle which on that head sounds a bit needless..
   10. 00:40:134 (2) - ^
   11. 00:43:134 (2) - ^ yeah I think it is fine.
   12. 01:05:634 (3,4) - whistle on these tail? to be consistent with 01:02:634 (4,5) - :3 sure

　
[ Insane]
　

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. AR+1 or AR-1 on "Hard" :3 I think AR8 fit these 2 diff just well, so I think no need to change them
   2. 01:22:884 - same suggestion as "Hard"~
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:00:384 - ~00:12:009 - same finish suggestions as the "Hard"
   2. 00:32:259 (9) - you have lost a clap on that repeat :p
   3. 00:35:446 (7) - same lost as above
   4. 00:38:446 (7) - ^
   5. 00:41:446 (6) - ^..(idk..if you make them determined)
   6. 00:44:259 (7) - same repeat as above
   7. 00:47:259 (7) - that end also actually i think it didn't make much difference but still added
   8. 01:02:634 (8) - sounds better if you add a whistle on that head~~sure
   9. 01:07:509 (5) - how about add finish here with the "HAI"~ from voice?
   10. 01:09:009 (5) - same as above~hmm
   11. 01:15:009 (9) - if you followed above(the "HAI"'s suggestion), also set finish on that head either~
   12. 01:17:634 (8) - and that tail~
   13. 01:22:134 (3) - i'd like to add whistles on head and tail on this slider, then also put a whistle on 01:22:509 (4) - 's .:3 en

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哇2kd耶~~anyway, Good Luck with Rank~

Notice

1. Please reply my mod and tell me which you fix which you don't fix , thanks ! It is such helpful for me~ :3
   

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ Nymph ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

1. Use japanese artist : 茶太 fixed

[Kanon's Hard]

1. AR-1 for better diff spread. sure
2. 00:34:134 (2,3,4) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics.
   
3. 00:43:134 (2,3,4) - Same as above. yeah fixed these 2
4. 00:50:634 (1) - Remove too short new combo,unneed to here.
5. 00:54:009 (1) - ^
6. 00:55:134 (1) - ^
7. 00:56:634 (1) - ^ sure
8. 01:21:009 (3) - Increase spacing likes 01:19:509 (3) - ? change the spaicng of the sliders before here a little bit, guess it is fine now

OK ~ That's all ~ Cute song and map ~

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