Hinsvar wrote:

Hi there.

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems.

>General

1. The background's resolution is 1024x576... It's rankable, IIRC, but the letterboxing effect it causes is jarring, IMO. // It doesn't have letterbox. o.o

>Easy

1. 00:50:727 (3) - Do we need this slider to have a hard curve on the middle like 00:51:728 (4)? I don't really think so. Just make the curve soft, like this. And anyway, I'm sure enough the song demands a finish on the head, not a clap, so replace the clap with finish? // I leave its shape as it is for variety of sliders. And added finish.
   

   188,312,50727,2,0,B|208:344|256:364|304:344|324:312,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

2. 00:55:730 - Whistle to emphasize the vocal? // Nope
3. 00:59:733 - ^
4. 01:03:735 - ^
5. 01:07:737 - ^
6. 01:08:738 - ^ (If you actually apply these suggestions, do them on similar parts on this and other diffs.)

>Normal

1. 00:50:727 - Same as Easy.

>Hard

1. Err, don't you think AR8 is too fast? AR7 is already good enough for this. // I think so too.
2. 00:50:727 - Yes, same as Easy and Normal.
3. 01:07:737 (1,2) - The stacking of these two sliders' tails looks a bit jarring... Move (1)'s middle anchor point to (375,372) and (2)'s to (137,372)? (Yes, it's literally ONE osu!pixel of difference, but still...) // Hmm... just fixed anchor point of them.

...I'm sure enough that this can be ranked now in its current state. It's almost perfect, but might need a few more optimizations here and there. Well, that's my opinion. // Of course I'll ask more people to mod this.

Good luck on the way

1. Red - Important or Issue
   
2. Blue - You'd better fix them
   
3. Black - Normal Suggestions
   

Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue

1. Red - Important or Issue
   
2. Blue - You'd better fix them
   
3. Black - Normal Suggestions

[General]
I will feel more comfortable if BGM x2. // Read previous posts if you feel free, there was a discussion about the BPM.

[Easy]
00:46:725 (3) - Why not make the effect like this? It could be more gorgeous. // Because of spacing ;_;

01:36:755 - I guess clap is more suitable here. Why not try this? :3 // Added

[Normal]
00:55:063 (3,4,5) - It is an excellent map, so I cant even tolerate these tiny mess // Flow goes bad >_<

00:59:733 (5) - Just as above since it is the symmetrical part.


[Hard]
01:36:254 (2) - ppl may click this 1/4 earlier spontaneously. What about changing (1) into a slider and end it at this timing? // Changed formation.

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(´・ω ・`) Good Job , what a beautiful Clannad Song.
Excellent Mapset!

hii, follow whatever you like

1. 00:25:712 (2) - that curve at the bottom half.. it can go around (1) more neatly xD. you can use the code in the spoiler to fix
   
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   264,368,25712,2,0,B|240:324|256:292|276:268|276:268|304:228|296:184|256:152,2,240,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

1. 01:33:753 (2,3) - don't make them touch (4)? none of the other sections of sliders really touch each other like this, just a random thought

meiikyuu wrote:

hii, follow whatever you like

Easy

1. 00:25:712 (2) - that curve at the bottom half.. it can go around (1) more neatly xD. you can use the code in the spoiler to fix // The code you gave is same to mine. Btw it seems there is not big difference.
   
   SPOILER

   
   264,368,25712,2,0,B|240:324|256:292|276:268|276:268|304:228|296:184|256:152,2,240,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

Normal

1. 01:33:753 (2,3) - don't make them touch (4)? none of the other sections of sliders really touch each other like this, just a random thought // Fixed

Hard
looks fine to me ~

sorry i really couldn't find much this time x_x..all these diffs. are neat <3 good luck

ykcarrot wrote:

I'm waiting for further moddings! >w<


EDIT : Alright, ready to get bubble now! Oh wait, I got only 3 mods so far... ;_;

Sonnyc wrote:

ㅋㅋ 손닉의 랜덤 모딩 받을 준비 하세요

Sonnyc wrote:

모든 맵 첫째 노트가 언스냅입니다. 확인해 주세요. // 에디터 버그 o3o

Easy:

00:25:378 (1) - (332,324) 가 슬라이더 굽은거에 더 잘 들어올듯요. 솔직히 말하자면 이것도 완벽하진 않지만요 ㅋ,, // Moved up by one pixel
02:17:009 (1) - 모든 난이도에 이거 1/4 뒤로 미는게 음악에 잘 맞는거 같아요. // 볼륨 크게 해서 들어보세요. 현재 포인트가 맞답니다.

Normal:

00:22:710 (3) - 1칸 위로 올려서 대칭? // Fixed

Hard:

01:45:093 (6,7) - 이것들도 직각 슬라이더로 만들어보는건 어떠세요? // 그쪽이 일관성 있긴 하네요. Fixed

SEXY SLIDERS

wcx19911123 wrote:

hihi 0.0

[General]
timing is a bit wrong imo, the BPM is halved, it should be 179.89. the reason is that with the current BPM, there're many downbeat(such as 00:06:700 - , 00:10:703 - , 00:12:704 - ) not on the white line(they're now on the red lines, that place is not for downbeat). also I'm not sure the offset is accurate or not, for me I'd like -4 ~ -10 on the current one. and I noticed that there're 3 red timing sections with same BPM, I don't see any reason to do this(downbeat didn't change in the whole song) // According to the music sheet, the points you mentioned are not downbeat actually. I've explained why I choose BPM 89.945 in this page. And two red line same BPM were put for counting again stanza. Measures on 01:29:751 and 01:57:768 should be mutiple of 4. If you run nightcore mode, you will get it. Crashing cymbal doesn't fit the music with only one offset. Btw I've tested this map many times, offset is quite good imo.

[Hard]
00:33:717 (1) - this slider blanket not well here imo, how about make it like this: http://puu.sh/1XPVe // Great one. Fixed

SPOILER

176,68,33717,6,0,P|176:120|176:120|176:172|176:224|256:260|336:224|336:172|336:120|336:120|336:68,1,400

this one looks better imo

really nice map, I like those sliders :3