KiyoshiX101 wrote:

Hello~ :3

[Normal]
03:58:564 (3,4,5) - Those three needs to be placed into 1/12 I think.
For some strange reason it sounds much better to me at least :/


[Hard]
03:58:565 (3,4,5) - Same as at Normal

[Overall]
Awesome beatmap, nothing else to be modded by me

/ (╯° 3°）╯︵

Zer0Sh1n1gam1 wrote:

beatiful words! and beatiful map and you are beatiful too >.<

Pereira006 wrote:

Hello !! request in-game here my mod

imo -> my opinion
Also when you read " ? " that mean just suggestion you can ignore if you not like but if without " ? " that really high suggestion pleasse use you mind is important fix or not but is for you decission

[Normal]

hitsound:

1. 00:44:155 (3) - the repeat slider, I don't feel this the clap don't sense because don't have drum here, will fit if the clap change to whistle that sense as follow melody, so is fit for me, like you did patterns hitsound because hard have it. so better remove clap in repeat slider and add whistle IMO
2. 00:46:882 (2) - missing add whistle in repeat slider because hard have it, so will fix you patterns hitsound
3. 00:52:882 (3) - change whistle to clap in start slider, there drums like you did before example: 00:45:791 (1), and many more. Also in repeat slider add whistle is sense because follow melody. IMO
4. 00:54:519 at 01:01:337 - should add clap in 1/2 and 1/4 because the drums are spam that would sense lot like hard have it. if you do that would good you patterns hitsound and consistency like other diff. example : 00:54:519 (1) - missing add clap in end slider because should be consistency as hard have it also the drums there too so is fit lot
5. 00:54:519 at 01:09:246 - again, should add clap in 1/2 and 1/4 is same happened before like 00:54:519 at 01:01:337
6. 01:12:519 (2) - remove whistle in start slider and add whistle in repeat slider and remove whistle in end slider like you did patterns
7. 01:15:791 (5) - the whistle remove in start and add end slider is sense lot
8. 01:16:882 (7) - ^ same
9. 01:17:973 (1) - ^ same
10. 01:19:064 (3) - same happened at 01:12:519 (2) just remove whistle in start slider and add whistle in repeat slider and remove whistle in end slider
11. 01:31:610 (2) - the end slider, change whistle to clap is sense lot because the drums is strong than melody so that better lot imo
12. 02:21:246 (T) - can you increassing volume to 40% ? because 20% i can't very well the clap because song is strong than hitsound so is bad hear, if increassing to 40% volume the hitsound same song volume is good hear IMO so increassing volume to 40% IMO IMO
13. 02:58:337 (1) - the whistle need change to finish is really sense lot because the drums,melody and lyrics are really strong here when i listen
14. 03:04:883 (1) - I like more if the clap change to whistle is sense lot with lyrics and melody IMO
15. 03:41:973 (T) - increassing volume to 30%? i know this part is really relax but would really good if increassing 30% volume because the whistle like you did would listen good IMO
16. 03:48:519 (6) - the end slider I feel the melody is still here add whistle in end slider is good IMO
17. 04:09:246 (6) - missing add clap in end slider because the drums here and you patterns missing

stuff cool but i wanna see more improve because patterns and consistency are missing lot and bad consistency with hard. The hard hitsound is good than this. pls if you do same patterns and consistency with hard, would be good IMO

Gameplay:

1. 01:10:064 (2,3) - inconsistency spacing the (3) need grid 1 up to fix spacing
2. 01:15:791 (5) - Really need new combo because the lyrics is change and melody too imo
3. 02:38:428 (7) - move to x:304 , y:80 would be good flow with 02:38:700 (8)
4. 03:43:064 (3,4) - try more blanket like this http://puu.sh/1XrCg would be nice to gameplay IMO
5. 03:44:155 (4,1) - inconsistency spacing the (1) need move to x:104 , y: 92 to fix spacing
6. 04:24:519 (4,5) - try more blanket like this http://puu.sh/1XrIr just be nice to gameplay IMO

stuff cool, i like this when i play

[Hard]

hitsound:

1. 00:52:882 (8) - the end slider, the clap don't sense because don't have drum herem only melody and lyrics so try change clap to whistle is sense IMO
2. 01:43:064 (3) - missing add whistle in start slider because missing you patterns also fit too becayse melody and lyrics
3. 01:43:610 (4) - missing add whistle in end slider ^ same explain
4. 02:21:246 (T) - increassing volume to 40% like what happened in normal at 02:21:246 (T)
5. 03:41:973 (T) - really need add timing and try same happened in normal at 03:41:973 (T)
6. 03:48:519 (7) - really need add whistle in end slider because the lyrics and melody still there when i feel and listen that would be good if add whistle in end slider

stuff cool

Gameplay:

1. 00:45:791 (2) - i don't like move this flow try move to x:480 , y:184 would be good flow IMO
2. 00:46:064 (3) - the end point need grid 1 down to be nice flow and align with 00:46:610 (4,5,6)
3. 01:45:519 (1) - i don't like much flow with 01:44:700 (6) try move to x:80 , y:140 would be good IMO if you fix this carefully spacing at 01:45:791 (2,3,4)
4. 02:40:882 (4) - the end point need grid 1 left to be nice blanket with 02:40:064 (2) if you fix this be carefully stack with 02:41:973 (6) in start slider and spacing at 02:41:973 (6,7,8)

nice

[]
the gameplay are really good, i like this map but my problem is hitsound better you recheck hitsound to patterns and consistency like what happened normal, anyway
that all i think pleasse some mod you can't understand because my eng is suck so pleasse ask me in-game i will try explain better
Good luck ! and bye bye!

HeatKai wrote:

Hello Dark_Ai! :3
Please give me feedback which one you fix and which one you're not.

[General]

1. I don't know why you choose a dying girl as your background but this song is more like a broken heart girl.I would say that it's better to change to a sad girl or something rather then dying.dying seems more extreme for this song.

I couldn't find an another image ;w;

1. AIBat says this:
   Unused Image Files
   sb\chorus2-1.png
   sb\chorus2-2.png
   sb\chorus2-3.png
   sb\chorus2-4.png
   sb\chorus2-5.png
   sb\chorus2-6.png
   sb\chorus2-7.png
   sb\chorus2-8.png
   sb\lyrverse3-10.png
   sb\lyrverse3-11.png
   sb\lyrverse3-12.png

deleted

1. the lyrics kinda hard to read because it's kinda dark.I know it takes a long time to make lyrics but i would recommend you to make a new one with font or edit it so it easier to read .but it's your choice to do it or not. I will see what I can do >.<

[Normal]

1. That's a long un-map starting.do something about it? nuuuuh I like it like now ><
2. 00:52:882 (3,1) - why don't you make this two mirror itself? like this. changed
   
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3. 01:03:791 (3) - the end of the slider change to clap? to keep it constant.because the music still sounds the same.if the music sounds like this 01:07:064 (3) then it is fine to make a bit changes of hitsounds. okay :3
4. 01:09:246 (1) - switch the hitsounds,to keep it constant. okay :3
5. 01:20:700 (2) - add whistle. okay :3
6. 01:21:246 (4) - add whistle at the end.it sounds better.since it's following the vocal. okay :3
7. 01:45:791 (2) - to keep the consistancy,the starting put clap,the end put whistle.this slider having a sudden change of hitsound. okay :3
8. 01:56:155 (3) - i would add finish at the starting,because there's a finish hitsound that you put got the same beat at the music. okay :3
9. 02:03:246 (1) - at the starting,put clap instead of whistle? okay :3
10. 02:35:428 (2,3) - don't make overlap like this on the easiest diff,may cause confusion to a newbie player.try to change it. changed ><
11. 02:37:610 (6) - switch the hitsounds. okay :3
12. 02:48:519 (1) - i would recommend you to change this,the stack is kinda confusing.*easiest diff* maybe you should put it beside,the slider or something. okay :3
    
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13. 02:52:882 (7) - newcombo? because it's a new beat for piano. okay :3
14. 03:49:610 (1) - I would not recommend this for the easiest diff because most of the beat that you mapped is 1/2 and suddenly there's a 1/4 will cause a confusion. no change. I like it like now ><
15. 03:59:428 (1) - better remove the hitsound and silenced the end? because there's not even a single beat there. okay :3

[Hard]

1. That's a long un-map starting.do something about it? same as normal ><
2. 00:44:155 (5) - the starting change to clap to keep constant with your hitsound pattern. okay :3
3. 00:44:973 (7) - If I were you, I won't leave this as a straight slider.Maybe you should try to make it as a blanket.like this. chanded. (I guess ;A;)
   
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4. 01:00:791 (4,5,6) - make it like this.to follow the flow of the sliders going. okay ><
   
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5. 01:08:155 (5) - I know you're making a changes of hitsounds here,but I think the end of this slider still need a clap.Next part is the changes of hitsounds happen. okay :3
6. 01:17:973 (5) - bring this to x:292 y:288 to make the slider end at the middle of the slider (6) changed
   
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7. 01:25:610 (3) - this overlap looks ugly,how bout change the slider shape. Changed
   
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   or whatever you want to do,because this part is before a spinner,pretty much you can think of something to get rid of that overlap.
8. 01:36:246 (6,7) - why don't you put the (6) at the blanket? and (7) just put based on the distance snap.It's kinda waste that you made a blanket but there's nothing to fill at there. okay :3
   
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9. 01:45:519 (1,2,3,4) - make it curver higher.looks like this.to make it looks smooth. okay :3
   
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10. 02:22:609 (1,2,3) - this overlap is not looking good.do it like this maybe looks better.and if you change this,make sure to check spacing on the next circle. okay :3
    
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11. 02:37:610 (6) - switch the hitsounds,starting whistle,end clap.to keep the hitsound pattern constant,and the next part is the hitsound changes happen. okay :3
12. 02:52:882 (7) - newcombo? because it's a new beat for piano. okay :3
13. 03:14:155 (2) - this circle still need hitsound to make it sounds good,because if you stop putting hitsounds here its kinda break the hitsound pattern. okay :3
14. 03:59:428 (1) - better remove the hitsound and silenced the end? because there's not even a single beat there. okay :3
15. 04:07:882 (6,7) - Same as 01:36:246 (6,7) okay :3
16. 04:17:155 (1,2,3,4) - same as 01:45:519 (1,2,3,4) okay :3

Copy-paste mapping =w= I see.well it's a solid map.enjoyable because of the nice blanket. :3!

It's a good beatmap! need some more changes and you'll good to go.

Roxas wrote:

Map perfect :c

[General]

Nothing

[Normal]

00:59:155 (4,5) - move them a bit right no :c
01:20:973 (3,4) - unstack it's better ;w; changed on preview mod
01:50:155 (4) - make this curve? okay :3
03:15:519 (1) - Remove NC and put NC in next slider? okay :3
04:03:791 (3) - spacing o3o aah fixed >A<

[Hard]

00:46:064 (3) - A bit down cause of 1.07x distance :p aah no ><
00:53:700 (9) - I don't like this stacked ;A; changed ;A;
01:46:064 (3) - Move a bit down changed on the preview mod


For the rest it's okay >< Starred~ good luck :3 Thank youuuuu really much ;A;

Kodora wrote:

[Normal]

01:20:973 (3,4) - unstack? changed
02:48:519 (1) - this note will confuse beginners i think, propose change placement changed from the preview mod

[Hard]

OD +1? 6 looks VERY easy. okay ><

02:02:973 (1) - unused green line? what? OAO
02:49:064 (3,4,5) - its personally but i dont like placement like here, maybe change? no change ;A;

Very nice song, good luck to get it ranked! Thank you >A<

B2IN wrote:

o/ Hi Dark_Ai ~
m4m

• [General]

1. some scared BG.. ; w ; can you change it ? I will see what I can do ><
2. add red timing point. to 01:29:973 / 02:58:337 / 04:01:610 http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/2090254 no sorry :c
3. consider my sugesstion about kiai time.
   #1 Kiai : 01:29:973 ~ 02:04:882 okay
   #2 Kiai : 02:58:337 ~ 03:33:246 okay
   #3 Kiai : fine. but you can end till 04:36:519 okay
   [Hard]
4. 02:02:973 (1) - end the spinner till 02:04:882 better. no change ><
5. 03:29:973 (5) - i felt kinda odd clap on slider end ( 03:31:064 ). change from whistle to clap. sounds better to me. O.O ?
6. 03:31:337 (1) - same as 02:02:973 (1) . end till 03:33:246 . No change ;A;
7. 03:42:110 (2) - remove this? okay ><
8. 03:44:155 (7) - try you could do this instead? for better beat. :3 I dont like it OAO
9. 03:59:428 (1) - sholud remove finish will better. and add whistle on 04:01:064 (1) . okay ><
   
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   01:38:700 (3) / 01:47:428 (3) / 01:56:155 (3) / 03:07:064 (3) / 03:15:791 (3) / 03:24:519 (3) / 04:10:337 (3) / 04:19:064 (3) / 04:27:791 (3) - i recommand you to add finish like this 01:29:973 (3) / 02:58:337 (3) / 04:01:610 (3) . sounds much better. (also apply to normal diff.) okay changed >.</
10. 04:34:610 (1) - same as 02:02:973 (1) . end till 04:36:519 . nuuuuh I don't like it ;A;
    
    [Normal]
11. 02:03:246 (1) - 03:31:610 (1) - 04:34:610 (1) - same as Hard diff. same no change >.< sorry
12. 01:26:428 (1) - start at 01:26:700 . okay owo

gl ~

Sonnyc wrote:

BG is scary >o<

General:

-- Unsnapped timeline, (-1) to each. What? ;A;
-- Imo, 04:34:610 (1) - ending at 04:36:519 will be the best ><

Normal:

00:44:155 (3) - Clap at the start instead of Whistle? okay ><
01:03:519 (2) - Uhh.. 1 Grid left okay ._.
01:20:700 (2) - Whistle? ><
01:21:246 (4) - Imo, stacking with (3) doesn't seems well changed from the preview mod ><
02:03:246 (1) - More symmetry? ;A; ??
02:37:610 (6) - Whistle - Clap sounds better okay ><
02:52:882 (4) - NC? changed from the preview mod
03:59:428 (1) - Delete Finish ^
04:05:973 (3) - 2 Grid left okay
04:31:882 (2) - 1 Grid left? okay
04:34:610 (1) - Start at 04:34:882 okay ><

Hard:

00:45:791 (2) - 1 Grid up okay :3
01:08:155 (5) - Clap at the end? okay><
01:54:246 (2,3,4) - This rhythm fits the song best, imo uuuh ;A; I dont like it ><
03:22:610 (2,3,4) - ^ ^
04:25:882 (2,3,4) - ^ ^

SPOILER

02:02:973 (1) - Start at 02:03:246 okay
02:37:610 (6) - Same as normal ><
03:31:337 (1) - Start at 03:31:610 okay
03:59:428 (1) - Delete Finish already changed from the preview mod ><
04:34:610 (1) - Start at 04:34:882 okay ;A;

Evil_Twilight wrote:

[Hard]
00:39:246 (4) - move to 00:39:110
00:50:700 (1) - remove NC, 00:51:791 (3) - add NC ok
01:01:610 (1) - remove NC done
01:20:700 (3) - add whistle done ><
01:26:428 (4) - add triple hits here, spinner move to 01:26:837 no change :C
01:29:973 ~ 02:02:700 change clap to normal hitsound I don't like it ;A;
01:38:700 (3) - add finish already done before ><
01:47:155 (1,2) - add normal hitsound I don't like it ><
01:47:155 (1) - remove NC, 01:47:428 (3) - add NC okay
01:47:428 (3) - add finish already done before ><
01:56:155 (3) - ^ already done before ><
02:37:610 (6) - remove clap, add whistle already done before ><
02:38:155 (6) - remove whistle, add clap already done before ><
02:53:973 (9) - add reverse arrow, spinner move to 02:55:200 nuuuuh :c
02:58:337 ~ 03:31:064 change clap to normal hitsound I don't like it D:
03:07:064 (3) - add finish already done before ></
03:15:519 (1) - remove NC, 03:15:791 (3) - add NC okay ><
03:15:791 (3) - add finsh already done before ><
03:15:519 (1,2) - add normal hitsound no :c
03:24:519 (3) - add finsh already done before ><
03:59:428 (1) - remove finish ok
04:01:610 ~ 04:34:337 change clap to normal hitsound no :c
04:10:337 (3) - add finshalready done before ><
04:16:882 (6) - add clap kk
04:17:428 (2,4) - ^ kk
04:18:519 (4) - add whistle kk
04:18:791 (1,2) - remove NC, 04:19:064 (3) - add NC okay
04:19:064 (3) - add finsh already done before ><
04:27:791 (3) - ^ already done before >.</

[Normal]
01:03:791 (3) - change to clap ? okay ><
01:29:973 ~ 02:02:700 change clap to normal hitsound nuuuuh ><
01:36:519 (1) - remove NC, 01:38:700 (3) - add NC okay ><
01:38:700 (3) - add finish done ><
01:40:882 (1) - remove NC okay ><
01:56:155 (3) - add finish done ><
01:47:155 (1) - remove NC, 01:47:428 (2) - add NC okay ><
02:58:337 ~ 03:31:064 change clap to normal hitsound no :c
03:04:883 (1) - remove NC, 03:07:064 (3) - add NC okay >.<
03:07:064 (3) - add finish done ><
03:09:246 (1) - remvoe NC okay :c
03:15:519 (1) - remvoe NC, 03:15:792 (2) - add NC done
03:15:792 (2) - add finish okay ><
03:24:519 (3) - ^ ^
04:01:610 ~ 04:34:337 change clap to normal hitsound nope :c
04:04:337 (3) - add clap, 04:04:610 remove clap done
04:10:337 (1) - add finish done before
04:19:064 (2) - ^ ^

[SB]
LyrVerse1-3 - no fade in ?
LyrVerse2-2 - ^
no :c

dkun wrote:

Hi Ai! JAKA asked me to stop by. Here's a mod! yeah >o<

modding key

this is unrankable.
this should be highly considered.
this is just a normal suggestion/praise.

I sincerely hope you found my mod to be helpful. Let me know if you have any questions pertaining anything I say below!

General

1. You have unused sb elements. Check lyrverse3-10, 3-11, and 3-12. oh ... deleted ><
2. The SB is supposed to be colored and black&white with kiai? That's just simply unfitting. I suggest you flip it around, it feels nicer when playing. changed. I moved it to the break :>
3. The kiai times are inconsistent. Why does Normal have a gap with the third kiai? me baka ;A;
4. All in all, this is a really solid set! (hence why this mod post is pretty short!) Great job and choice in music. Thank youuu >.</

Hard

1. 00:46:610 (4,5,6) - Move this combo in the direction of 3. It looks and flows much nicer. this would be a nice example. I changed. hope it is okay >.<
2. 00:59:428 (3) - This slider could be composed better to hug 2. fixed
3. 03:43:882 (5) - You should align this with 3,4. Move it down a grid~ done
4. 03:58:537 (3,4,5) - This sounds way off. Snap to 1/8ths and move the notes back a tick on the timeline. (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/604869) done

Normal

1. 00:36:519 (1) - This slider could use some work to be more symmetrical. I believe that's what you intended, seeing the Y-axis is used for the midpoint of the slider. This an image for reference. done. I tried my best xDD dunno but I think it's fine now ^^
2. 01:37:064 (6,1) - Just copy and paste the slider from ^ ^
3. 02:03:246 (1) - Very, very nice! I enjoyed playing this on the first run. yeah >o</
4. 02:35:973 (3) - Might want to space this out a little. Looks a bit clustered for a novice to hit. Maybe combine both 2,3 into one repeating slider? I changed this part
5. 02:46:337 (1,3) - Why not curve these sliders just like the rest of the map? They don't play well imo. done
6. 03:05:428 (2,1) - Same slider remark as the first point. done
7. 03:58:610 (3,4,5) - This would be the same remark as Hard. done
8. 04:10:337 (1) - Same slider remark ^ done
   04:33:246 (4) - Remove the clap, it's inconsistent with the rest of your hitsounding.I didn't even add clap there o.o

TicClick wrote:

General

1. Use 西野 カナ for artist's name Okay :3
2. 01:29:973 - change your kiai start point to an uninherited one, because the metronome needs to be reset here to follow the song in a correct way
3. 02:58:337 - same here. You need this because the artist skips two measures before starting a chorus.

After applying timing changes, you may want to review your comboing on Normal and fix it in some parts I didn't mention. Hope you'll just check this difficulty and do it yourself.
I didnt change anything about kiai time. since I like it like now :/

[Normal]

1. 01:38:700 (1,2) - please, don't map jumps on lower difficulties Uups there were something wrong ><
2. 02:21:519 (2) - I suggest you to change it to a single note on the white tick, so it could be played better after a break. Also, it's more intuitive to play nuuuuh I dont like it ><
3. 03:58:541 (3,4,5) - due to singer's failure they sound soooooo off.. I personally would remove them at all and leave these ticks empty okay done =w=
4. 04:27:791 (3) - add finish to beginning Okay :3
5. 04:33:246 (4) - add whistle to beginning? Okay :3

[Hard]

1. 00:44:973 (7) - well if you skipped the downbeat here by putting slider's end on it, at least add whistle to it
2. 00:46:746 (5,6) - I'd remove whistle from 6's beginning and add it to 5 and 6's end to follow the vocals better
3. 00:52:064 (2) - there's no sound here, I'd remove it and map a 3/4 slider from 00:51:791 to 00:52:200
4. 01:08:155 (5) - are you sure you can't change this slider somehow so it doesn't go by exactly the same way as the previous one? They even have the same colour, and I find it.. disturbing
5. 01:36:519 (7,1) - I'd use a slider of the same length instead of these notes
6. 01:54:519 (4) - it needs to be started 1/4 later to follow the vocals the way you want it
7. 02:49:064 (3,4,5) - you better reverse this long slider for a better play experience, since it's more comfortable to move in one direction (i.e. left and down) instead of turning back to catch it
8. 03:15:519 (5,6) - the curve these notes create with the start of the slider doesn't match the curve of slider itself. Since it doesn't fit even the slider before, I'd do something like this: http://puu.sh/21puP
9. 03:56:155 (1,2) - this pattern doesn't look good for me, because the first slider overlaps the second one, leaving a disgusting hitburst after itself that covers the slidertrack. Also, it doesn't have a flow, because you have to change the direction of your movement to almost opposite one
10. 04:07:064 (5) - a beat blanked would look better, I assure you. Also, since this part is copypasted and mirrored horizontally, I suggest you to apply all I've said regarding to the first kiai, and vice versa. I know this will most likely not be done, but I should at least mention it.
    
    Didn't change anything there. Sorry but I'm not agree with that :c gomen >< just only the last point. I've tried to blanket it better ^^

Jacob wrote:

[General]

why is "Ai" in the tags? Searching it in beatmap listing doesn't give any results and searching it in osu! will give a bunch of non-related results.
The artist for the hard difficulty is inconsistent. It should be "西野 カナ". deleted and done

[Normal]

01:31:610 (2) - Remove the whistle from the end of this slider, but not the clap. A whistle and a clap together sounds weird. okay
02:37:610 (6) - why is there a clap on this slider? It doesn't follow your hitsound pattern. I did it because of the song, since you can hear 'clap' there too
02:38:428 (7,8) - Slight spacing error fixed
03:46:337 (1) - This doesn't follow the rhythm of the song very well. Try something like this that follows the piano sound. okay
03:59:428 (1) - silence this entire spinner. it would create a better atmosphere for this part of the song IMO. done

[Hard]

00:48:519 (3) - Align this slider with 00:47:428 (1). the current pattern seems lopsided.
01:32:155 (3) - whistle at the beginning of this slider. It sounds empty.
02:28:882 (2,3) - if you're going to use (2) the blanket (3), then you need to make the curve of (2) a bit sharper for it not to look odd.
02:48:519 (1,4) - Align these for a perfect trapezoid pattern
03:45:791 (8) - same thing as the normal difficulty; this doesn't follow the rhythm well. move this 1/2 foward to follow the piano.

changed everything

Kurai wrote:

1. There are many unsnapped notes in both Normal and Hard, chack AiMod (ctrl+shift+A) and fix them.
2. In Normal : 02:44:973 (2) - This circle is badly stacked with the endpoint of (1). Actually stacking it is a bad idea in my opinion, and I'd rather you unstacked this circle. Like that for example : Changed yes
   
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3. Are the "to Love missing sad" tags really needed, I don't think people are going to look for this map with such key words. ''to Love'' is tha album; ''missing'' this son is about missing an stuff so I think yeah >< and deleted sad xD

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