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Beridzebeth - Seijin no Tou [Osu|Taiko]

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Strawberry
osu! Alumni
1,536 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Strawberry
谢啦飞翔 和 老妮~ will check tomorrow then ww
quiz-chan_DELETED
quiz-chan_DELETED
Yo~ from my modding queue....
I am a blanket nazi so don't wonder if I get picky. heheh
Everything marked with a :!: must be fixed. But mostly these are just suggestions.

[General]
Everything's fine.

[Beginner]
Hmmm.... you often use one-repeat sliders but sliders like 00:28:841 (1) or 00:53:583 (1) can trick weak players.
Maybe you should adjust that.
And also, why no breaks?

00:02:862 (3) - Fix blanket.
00:25:748 (1) - ^
00:30:078 (2) - Ends on a blue tick but that should not be in an Easy diff. And besides.... fix blanket :P
00:33:790 (1) - Blanket! :D Sorry, but the sliders need to be perfect~
01:05:645 (1) - Terrible slider. Please re-drag this.
01:09:666 (2) - Slider is not beautiful. Please remake it.
01:24:511 (1) - Maybe drag second node down? Looks better:
SPOILER
01:33:171 (2,1,2) - Remake please.
01:38:119 (2) - Ends on blue tick. And besides.... blanket!! xP

[Normal]
Same plan. Fix all blankets that don't look like blankets.

00:59:769 - I'd recommend not setting that many new combos. Influences HP drain rate.

Nice diff!

[Hyper]
I would recommend raising HP drain rate by +1.

01:23:893 (3) - So random slider. Please re-arrange it.
01:31:934 - Please don't set so many new combos on Etna sliders. Make a NC every 4th slider.

Very nice diff!!

[Another]
01:35:723 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Strange stream curve. Make it circular.
01:33:016 (15) - This might be considered NAZI: move 1 grid to the left for more circular curve?
01:33:094 (16) - ^
SPOILER

Whew, that's it! I hope I was helpful though 8-)
I enjoyed this map! Good luck getting this ranked!
Strawberry
osu! Alumni
1,536 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Strawberry

Loneight wrote:

早灣 >w<
Request from QQ群???lol.



  • "re" 意思是 "remove"
    黑色 只是建議,不喜歡可以略過~OAO
    藍色 是建議改掉
    紅色 是unrankable

[Hyper]

  1. 00:13:223 (1) - 試試看這樣的節奏? 這邊咱聽起來節奏怪怪的 改了以后也觉得怪怪的..先保留好了
  2. 00:42:449 (10,1) - 交換NC, (10)感覺是個開始 √
  3. 00:44:924 (8,1) - ^ √
  4. 00:47:398 (10,1) - ^ √
  5. 01:45:542 (4) - NC, 因為01:46:006 (5) - 顏色加stack, 會在這邊猶豫一下 √

[Another]

  1. 00:09:357 (7) - 被combo的數字擋住了, 試著移開一點 [/color]
  2. 00:16:625 (1,1) - 總覺得這邊沒有對到音樂, 只能單純的看圈圈按, 試試這節奏, 記得調距離~ 我觉得现在这个节奏听起来更舒服:p
  3. 00:21:882 (6) - 改成這樣比較適合音樂, 在這邊也比較不會打起來卡卡的 恩，有考虑过，但是不太好处理后面怎么接连打的flow..所以先保留:p
就這些, Another咱盡力了 lol 打不起來
good luck~ :3
草莓醬加油 :)

Nymph wrote:

[Gereral]
In my opinion, this music really fit normal hitsounds more than soft... current I really can't hear the hitsounds well during playing normal hitsounds are noisy for me.. the whistles of soft are obvious to heard and helpful for stream imo. :p

[Hyper]
00:02:862 (1) - spacing could be more farther? would feel better during playing √ well, i think it would be much better for now.
01:46:006 (5) - this feel very hard to read for the overlap and the combo colour...at least use a new combo here, or try to make different spacing √ added nc at 01:45:542 (1)


[Another]
nice~ ❤~

Quiz-chan wrote:

Yo~ from my modding queue....
I am a blanket nazi so don't wonder if I get picky. heheh
Everything marked with a :!: must be fixed. But mostly these are just suggestions.

[Hyper]
I would recommend raising HP drain rate by +1. nope.. for the difficulty rating..

01:23:893 (3) - So random slider. Please re-arrange it. √ adjusted
01:31:934 - Please don't set so many new combos on Etna sliders. Make a NC every 4th slider. i love these nc~. sorry ;w;

Very nice diff!!

[Another]
01:35:723 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Strange stream curve. Make it circular. it's fine for me. :p
01:33:016 (15) - This might be considered NAZI: move 1 grid to the left for more circular curve? √ seems pretty.
01:33:094 (16) - ^
SPOILER

Whew, that's it! I hope I was helpful though 8-)
I enjoyed this map! Good luck getting this ranked!
thank you guys.~
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,460 posts
Joined July 2011
Flask
飛翔

Loneight wrote:

[Normal]

  1. 這Normal ..looool, OD 跟 HR 都-1吧, 讓這難度簡單些 HP-1其他沒動 O:

  2. 00:36:264 (3) - 這裡的slider開始, 試試看在加個Additions:normal-whistle,finish 好吵;w;
  3. 00:37:501 (1) - 若上面有改, 這個也加Additions:normal-whistle,finish試試看 ^
  4. 01:00:078 ~ 01:19:563 的2 circles部分, 可以用anti-jump(這樣)來增加趣味, 個人是覺得stack在一起比較難, 而且比較無趣 再看看好惹QAQ
妮母芙

Nymph wrote:

[Gereral]

[Normal]
01:29:460 (1) - maybe better if this slider could be more nearer from the center of the screen, it will feel more comfortable 好啦spinner前移
Quiz Chan

Quiz-chan wrote:

[Normal]
Same plan. Fix all blankets that don't look like blankets. pointed them out plz.

00:59:769 - I'd recommend not setting that many new combos. Influences HP drain rate. That's intentional yeah

Nice diff!
thanks~

@草苺姥爺: 01:26:985 (1) - end at 01:28:841 - 幫我改一下 就不附件了
Sagisawa-Yukari
216 posts
Joined March 2009
Sagisawa-Yukari



[General]
Source建议改成beatmania IIDX 19然后IIDX19写进Tags中
Tags里建议加入PRASTIK DANCEFLOOR，虽然Artist是Beridzebeth但是IIDX19的BK里有写这是PRASTIK DANCEFLOOR的马甲。
以上虽然只是建议，但是最近经常有XAT喜欢挑这样的毛病，你懂的

[Beginner]
00:47:398 (3) - NC
00:52:346 (2) - ^
01:39:357 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - 对新人而言这一段全是重叠会让他们很难读图。我建议你重做下
01:44:305 (3) - 这个slider干脆不要了，直接转盘从这开始


[Normal]
00:20:181 (1) - remove whistle
00:25:130 (1) - ^
00:56:058 (3) - NC and whistle
01:46:779 (1) - 是不是和下面贴的太紧了？移动到x:96 y:80好点
01:49:253 (1) - 去掉whistle


[Hyper]
AR-1
00:01:625 (3) - 做成和00:04:099 (3) - 一样？
00:13:841 (2) - 下移一格，y:308
00:34:099 (2,3) - 我感觉这里可以做成和00:33:790 (1) - 一样的两条slider节奏更好点
01:11:367 (4) - NC从这里开始
01:44:305 (1) - add circle


[Another]
看了下hyper的Hp Drain感觉你不要顾虑那么多，会打的自然会打，不会打的你调再低也没用，建议Hyper用6，然后这个难度用7
至于OD，我觉得OD可以+1，其他也说不出太多的了，这个难度没啥问题

good luck
raririn
1,002 posts
Joined October 2011
raririn
哎感觉有些。。
http://puu.sh/1Vexz
almost all fixed ;_;
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,460 posts
Joined July 2011
Flask
好像NC那個沒修吧 頻率太高233
osu file format v11

[General]
AudioFilename: Beridzebeth .mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 49795
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 30078
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Seijin no Tou
TitleUnicode:聖人の塔
Artist:Beridzebeth
ArtistUnicode:Beridzebeth
Creator:Strawberry
Version:Normal
Source:beatmania IIDX
Tags:Flask raririn Firce777 mintong89 prastik dancefloor lincle kingdom battle track
BeatmapID:211619
BeatmapSetID:66968

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

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indyinyou
887 posts
Joined June 2009
indyinyou
hi

[Beginner]

00:30:078 : this slider end at 00:31:006 ?
01:38:119 : this slider end at 01:39:047 ?

they're just suggestions

so sry too short mod

i m no good in fast bpm
Irie Miyuki
388 posts
Joined October 2010
Irie Miyuki
大懒比来了 思前想后还是换回了黑轴 爽炸
SPOILER
[Another]

其实我觉得这都不是Another了QAQ 改成Extra松松的

  1. 00:02:552 (9) - Grid 4 向左移一格
  2. 00:03:790 (4) - spacing? 虽然影响不大
  3. 00:09:047 (5,6) - spacing 1.18 ，00:09:666 (8,9) - 1.22 我很好奇..
  4. 00:10:903 (2,5) - 不平行..
  5. 00:19:949 (8,9,10) - 我是觉得spacing突然这么大有点反应不过来 但是打起来爽炸 但是连不上。。
  6. 00:21:264 (1,3) - 换一下NC?
  7. 00:22:346 (1,5) - 同上 感觉长白线NC比较好?
  8. 00:25:130 (2,3,4) - spacing也0.62吗
  9. 00:29:614 (4) - NC?
  10. 00:37:501 (3) - 像00:35:955 (1,2,1) - 一样NC了吧ww
  11. 00:39:279 (8,1) - 感觉接口不太好看
  12. 00:39:589 (4) - spacing太厉害
  13. 01:11:058 (3) - Ctrl+G?
  14. 01:21:728 (6) - 把01:21:418 (5) - 复制然后Ctrl+J?
  15. 01:28:841 (1,2,3) - 全部用短滑条比较好? 然后像0108轻轻跳一下啥的
  16. 01:35:027 (5) - NC
[Hyper]
  1. 00:41:212 (4,5,6,7) - 整体往上移一点
    00:41:212 (4) - x:452 y:268
  2. 00:35:336 (2) - 形状修一下 和4没包好..
  3. 01:17:398 (2,3) - 不平行?

。。感觉其他好像没啥了。。打着很爽是真的O O
normal有点无情/.\
Strawberry
osu! Alumni
1,536 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Strawberry

Irie Miyuki wrote:

大懒比来了 思前想后还是换回了黑轴 爽炸
SPOILER
[Another]

其实我觉得这都不是Another了QAQ 改成Extra松松的

  1. 00:02:552 (9) - Grid 4 向左移一格 感觉没什么必要..而且不太喜欢直的:3
  2. 00:03:790 (4) - spacing? 虽然影响不大 对啊~感觉不大出:3
  3. 00:09:047 (5,6) - spacing 1.18 ，00:09:666 (8,9) - 1.22 我很好奇.. 差不多啦>_> 要调的话反而不齐了..
  4. 00:10:903 (2,5) - 不平行.. √
  5. 00:19:949 (8,9,10) - 我是觉得spacing突然这么大有点反应不过来 但是打起来爽炸 但是连不上。。为了贴歌曲啦..
  6. 00:21:264 (1,3) - 换一下NC? √ good
  7. 00:22:346 (1,5) - 同上 感觉长白线NC比较好? √
  8. 00:25:130 (2,3,4) - spacing也0.62吗 恩。这里没问题..
  9. 00:29:614 (4) - NC? √ 好。然后后面的滑条上的nc去掉了
  10. 00:37:501 (3) - 像00:35:955 (1,2,1) - 一样NC了吧ww √
  11. 00:39:279 (8,1) - 感觉接口不太好看 √ 做了微调
  12. 00:39:589 (4) - spacing太厉害 √
  13. 01:11:058 (3) - Ctrl+G? for flow
  14. 01:21:728 (6) - 把01:21:418 (5) - 复制然后Ctrl+J? 太远了 丑
  15. 01:28:841 (1,2,3) - 全部用短滑条比较好? 然后像0108轻轻跳一下啥的 真的不太合..
  16. 01:35:027 (5) - NC有点多余
[Hyper]
  1. 00:41:212 (4,5,6,7) - 整体往上移一点
    00:41:212 (4) - x:452 y:268
  2. 00:35:336 (2) - 形状修一下 和4没包好..
  3. 01:17:398 (2,3) - 不平行?

。。感觉其他好像没啥了。。打着很爽是真的O O
normal有点无情/.\
野牛的都改了.
updated. :3
Kawayi Rika
osu! Alumni
3,635 posts
Joined December 2010
Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ Strawberry ~ :)

Mod time for my Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. You are missing change titleunicode : 聖人の塔 to both taiko diff.
  2. Change same kiai time point for standard diff?

[Hyper]


  1. 00:34:099 (2,3) - I support use 1/2 slider to here,follow with piano.
  2. 00:53:893 (6) - ^
  3. 00:56:985 (5) - Use ctrl+g,flow much better.
  4. 01:20:491 (2) - Try make symmetry slider.
  5. 01:22:965 (2) - ^
  6. 01:31:934 (1) - Move to X:24 Y:288,looks more better parttern,like this.
    Screenshot
  7. 01:49:331 (1) - Remove clap soumd much better,same as another diff.

[Normal]


  1. 00:05:336 (1,3) - Missing symmetry to here.
  2. 00:10:284 (1,3) - ^
  3. 00:37:810 (2,3) - Try make symmetry slider.
  4. 01:26:985 (1) - I would like the spinner end to 01:28:841 is much better,since next note is too far.
  5. 01:44:460 - Why not add a note to here? it's really fits with music.
  6. 01:54:202 - Change to soft whitle,sound much better.

[Beginner]


  1. 00:18:944 - Increase volume to 45%,sound better to me.
  2. 00:28:841 (1) - Reduce once repeat,make more easy playable.
  3. 01:13:686 (1,2) - More better rhythm,like this.
  4. 01:39:357 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I highlight suggest don't use many stack on easy diff,
    Unstack or change to repeat slider is better.
  5. 01:54:202 (2) - Add whistle,sound much better.

OK ~ That's all ~ Amazing map and cool music ~

Find more taiko mods and call me a recheck ~ ;)
Strawberry
osu! Alumni
1,536 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Strawberry

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ Strawberry ~ :)

Mod time for my Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. You are missing change titleunicode : 聖人の塔 to both taiko diff. √
  2. Change same kiai time point for standard diff?
umm.. i'd prefer kiai fountain on these diffs :3

[Hyper]


  1. 00:34:099 (2,3) - I support use 1/2 slider to here,follow with piano. √ also adjusted the position of them.
  2. 00:53:893 (6) - ^ √
  3. 00:56:985 (5) - Use ctrl+g,flow much better. i don't think so.. i tried to make the slider's head on the same line with the previous notes..
  4. 01:20:491 (2) - Try make symmetry slider. √ tried my best :p
  5. 01:22:965 (2) - ^ √ as above~
  6. 01:31:934 (1) - Move to X:24 Y:288,looks more better parttern,like this. √ oh pretty, also fixed the next bar with the same patter~
    Screenshot
  7. 01:49:331 (1) - Remove clap soumd much better,same as another diff.
√ yep
OK ~ That's all ~ Amazing map and cool music ~

Find more taiko mods and call me a recheck ~ ;)
thank you Rika-chan~
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,460 posts
Joined July 2011
Flask
http://puu.sh/1XGrE
全修了 owo!
Cihyaa
363 posts
Joined December 2011
Cihyaa
hi ~ from Strawberry's mod req ~

d=small don
k=small kat
D=BIG DON
K=BIG KAT
del=delete

[General]
taiko map is not need <Letterbox during breaks> ,so please delete. (both)

[mint's Taiko Muzukashii]
  1. 00:24:666 change k
  2. 00:25:904 (2,1) - change k d
  3. 00:27:141 (2,1) - change k d
  4. 00:29:614 change k
  5. 00:39:511 add k
  6. 01:10:439 (2,1) - change d k
  7. 01:38:274 add k
  8. 01:38:583 add k
[Firce777's Taiko Oni ]
  1. 00:02:707 add k
  2. 00:05:181 add k
  3. 00:07:656 add k
  4. 00:10:130 change k
  5. 00:17:089 change k
  6. 00:24:666 ~ 00:25:130 change and add kkkkkkd
  7. 00:39:511 ~ 00:39:820 change and add ddddd
  8. 00:38:583 (6,1,2,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,4) - change dkkdkdkdddd is better . (please listen (Playback Rate is 25%))
  9. 00:58:376 (1,1) - change d k (please listen (Playback Rate is 25%))
  10. 00:58:918 change d (please listen (Playback Rate is 25%))
  11. 00:59:382 change d (please listen (Playback Rate is 25%))
  12. 01:13:068 change d
  13. 01:43:686 add k
  14. 01:44:305 change k
  15. 01:51:573 change k
good song and interesting map ♪
Gogo rank >w<//
raririn
1,002 posts
Joined October 2011
raririn
all fixed
http://puu.sh/1YbUi
thank you for modding ><
jomnhnk
276 posts
Joined March 2010
jomnhnk
from Strawberry's mod req ><!!!

d=small don
k=small kat

[mint's Taiko Muzukashii]
00:34:099 (1) - d
00:34:408 (1) - k
00:34:717 (1) - d
00:53:893 (1,1,1) - ^(d k d)

01:00:078 (1,1) - d k
01:00:542 (1,1) - ^
01:05:026 (1,1,1,1) - ^
01:14:923 (1,1) - d k
01:24:202 (3,4,1) - d d k (or) d k k

Fight　Fight~~!!!　I hope Ranked!!! :)
mintong89
3,698 posts
Joined July 2011
mintong89
thanks for mod~

SPOILER
osu file format v11

[General]
AudioFilename: Beridzebeth .mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 49795
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 1
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 30078,59769,89460
DistanceSpacing: 0.6
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Seijin no Tou
TitleUnicode:Seijin no Tou
Artist:Beridzebeth
ArtistUnicode:Beridzebeth
Creator:Strawberry
Version:mint's Taiko Muzukashii
Source:beatmania IIDX
Tags:Flask raririn Firce777 mintong89 prastik dancefloor lincle kingdom battle track
BeatmapID:213262
BeatmapSetID:66968

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:5
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
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30078,-100,4,1,0,70,0,1
39975,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
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59769,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
89460,-100,4,1,0,70,0,1
99357,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0


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Combo2 : 248,72,40

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Strawberry
osu! Alumni
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Topic Starter
Strawberry
all updated!!~
Kawayi Rika
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Kawayi Rika
Recheck ~ no kds pls ~

[General]


  1. Inconsistency in Source,Tags and Titleunicode,pls check again.

[Another]


  1. 01:46:005 (2) -Unsnapped slider (end point).(please use Aimod check.)
  2. 01:46:469 (2) - ^

[Hyper]


  1. 00:27:294 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end point).
  2. 00:53:274 - Finish missing,same as 00:33:480 - .

[Normal]


  1. 01:08:737 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end point).
  2. 01:09:201 (1) - ^
  3. 01:18:170 (1) - ^
  4. 01:18:634 (1) - ^

Call me back again ~
Strawberry
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Strawberry
all fixed. thank you for patience ><
Kawayi Rika
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Kawayi Rika
OK ~ Looks fine now ~

Here you go :3

Strawberry
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Strawberry
thank you Rika moew ;)
NatsumeRin
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NatsumeRin
[Beginner]
01:05:181 (2) - confused me a bit. in the part around you only used 1/1 notes, this makes the part seems not that organized...
01:19:563 (1,2) - 2 sliders would fit better here than notes imo (also try not let newbies hit 3/2
01:34:408 (1) - http://puu.sh/1ZgG8 add a point to make the curve look better.
01:35:645 (2) - similar
01:43:532 (1) - this sounds really out of place... just a simple 3/2 here then spinner? shouldn't that be better?

[Normal]
...advanced? also considered the difficulty here, i'd suggest to use CS3, really.
00:05:336 (1) - I'd highly suggest you to try another way. stack notes under slidertrack is nearly unacceptable in such a diff.
00:25:130 (1,2) - i think you could use the same shape here... looks a bit strange to me
01:00:078 (1) - .......
01:45:388 (3,4,5) - use the same direction here plz?

[Hyper]
Consider AR8, OD6 here.
01:30:697 (1) - just make it a normal type slider.

[Fierce777's Taiko Oni]
Make the speed change tiny, or it'd be even better to just remove them.
Coro
2,394 posts
Joined September 2010
Coro
Taiko mod~
All are suggestions unless in red.

[mint's Taiko Muzukashii]
Disable letterboxing during breaks
00:10:748 - add d? there's a drumbeat here
00:13:223 - ^
00:15:697 - ^
00:18:171 - ^
00:49:717 - slider end move to 00:49:563
01:01:006 - (wrong combo colour? copied to all the similar sets as well orz)

[Firce777's Taiko Oni]
Disable letterboxing during breaks
00:00:388 to 00:10:284 - I think equal length streams sound better, maybe try it out and see what you think. e.g. move 00:01:470 to 00:01:315, so both streams are equal.
01:49:563 to 01:54:047 - same as above, so 01:50:336 to 01:50:181 and 01:52:810 to 01:52:656 ?

IIDX~
good luck for rank~
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,460 posts
Joined July 2011
Flask
@NR 00:25:130 (1,2) - i think you could use the same shape here... looks a bit strange to me 我覺得還好 反正同個節奏

http://puu.sh/1ZhZ3
mintong89
3,698 posts
Joined July 2011
mintong89
fixed

SPOILER
osu file format v11

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AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 49795
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 1
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

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DistanceSpacing: 0.6
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Seijin no Tou
TitleUnicode:聖人の塔
Artist:Beridzebeth
ArtistUnicode:Beridzebeth
Creator:Strawberry
Version:mint's Taiko Muzukashii
Source:beatmania IIDX 19 LINCLE
Tags:iidx19 Flask raririn Firce777 mintong89 prastik dancefloor lincle kingdom battle track
BeatmapID:213262
BeatmapSetID:66968

[Difficulty]
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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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raririn
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NatsumeRin wrote:

[Beginner]
01:05:181 (2) - confused me a bit. in the part around you only used 1/1 notes, this makes the part seems not that organized... moved to 01:05:336 -
01:19:563 (1,2) - 2 sliders would fit better here than notes imo (also try not let newbies hit 3/2 done
01:34:408 (1) - http://puu.sh/1ZgG8 add a point to make the curve look better. done
01:35:645 (2) - similar ^
01:43:532 (1) - this sounds really out of place... just a simple 3/2 here then spinner? shouldn't that be better? done
thx >,<
http://puu.sh/1ZEAz
Strawberry
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all updated. thanks for modding!~
NatsumeRin
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I can't really agree with the scroll speed change in the Taiko Oni, also the Normal can be done in a better way imo...

Rebubbled here, so the next XAT could give your opinion on that.
Strawberry
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thank you ntr!~
Niva
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(don't kd, just mentioning few things) :

  1. As we talked earlier via in-game PM, 'LINCLE' in Source isn't capitalized like that (should be 'Lincle')
  2. Another : 00:51:650 (4) - Remove clap, should be on (3)
  3. Normal : 00:18:944 (1) - Move to ~x:163 y:329? It's not really intuitive to use the slowdown spacing here (keeping the normal spacing would be much better though)
  4. Normal : On 01:05:027 (1,1,1) - and other parts like this, I don't see the overlap between one another really fitting here, I'd give more space between them such as the following:
    SPOILER
  5. Beginner : 00:25:748 (1) - Err, is the curve intentional? idk why you made the second half look VERY unnatural here o.o
    476,192,25748,6,0,P|436:96|436:96|359:128|296:72,1,240
One more thing I'd like to suggest is I think it's good if you can find a good green-ish star2.png for the mapset (you can just use the default star2.png and Hue/Saturation -> Recolor) but it's not a must (:

Anyway NatsumeRin's opinion is interesting, but in the same time I also saw the Firce's Taiko Oni has been modded by a lot of experienced modders (spboxer3, CoroQuetz, etc., and no complaints about it previously) so I'll ask some Taiko players I know to testplay for now (and in the meantime, please fix the issues mentioned above and feel free to contact me again after the fixes :3)
Niko-nyan
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o3o goodluck for rank and let Niva do that :)
Strawberry
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all fixed and added star2.png. thanks for modding Niva~! and you Frans Niko~

updated!
Niva
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Umm, Strawberry, I'm sorry but after hearing once more (especially in Beginner diff) I got this timing (yes, the current opening synth sounds off-beat >_<)



I got this timing via 25% playback while holding CTRL (you can try it too~)

The opening synth plays ~30ms later than the beats actually, you can hear on 25% playback that on 00:10:290 the beats started quite different with the synth xD

Taiko is fine though, I've asked 3 different Taiko players they all said the speed change is fine (:

SPOILER
18:16 -Senritsu-: ga bisa strim orz
18:16 Niva: umm, speed changenya nggak masalah kan?
18:16 -Senritsu-: nggak ada kok~

17:37 Niva: umm, I just want to know whether you're having problem with the speed change o.o
17:39 HeatKai: which part?
17:39 HeatKai: all of it?
17:39 Niva: oh, the beginning
17:39 Niva: the transition between slow part -> normal speed
17:39 HeatKai: lol I was too enjoy forgot that this is a test play
17:39 HeatKai: wait I play agian :3
17:40 Niva: ok~
17:40 HeatKai: nope

17:30 Niva: err, maksudnya transisi dari pelan jadi cepat itu
17:30 Niva: kebaca kan?
17:30 Frans Niko: kebaca

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EDIT : All good now >_<

I can't rank because of timing change though, sorry Strawberry ._.

Rebubbled ~
Strawberry
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also thank you niva!~ ^^
Kawayi Rika
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Rechecked ~ I guess we are ready for go ~

Congratulation ~!

Strawberry
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XD thankyou Rika~!
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大草莓又rank, 恭喜\:D/...等等我一看Rika那post是11小時前的就顫抖了, 差點一天4 ranked嗎
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草莓我依舊愛你 >A<
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Yeaaaah gratz moe :3
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