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Feint - Vision Driver

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phaZ
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Donnerstag, 21. März 2013 at 23:26:43

Artist: Feint
Title: Vision Driver
Tags: dnb Drum 'n' Bass Katty Pie
BPM: 178
Filesize: 7699kb
Play Time: 03:33
Difficulties Available:
  1. Normal (4,17 stars, 241 notes)
  2. Overdrive (4,9 stars, 741 notes)
  3. Pie's Easy (2,92 stars, 224 notes)
Download: Feint - Vision Driver
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fwS7VltJGGk

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Pie's Easy by Katty Pie thx
Normal by me
Overdrive by me
Seisshi
Nice map. But change the AR from10 to 8 >_<
Topic Starter
phaZ

[ JJ-core ] wrote:

Nice map. But change the AR from10 to 8 >_<
changed to AR 9
Tshemmp
AR 10 just completely doesn't fit, neither to the song nor to the map. AR 9 would be perfect.
Seisshi

Tshemmp wrote:

AR 10 just completely doesn't fit, neither to the song nor to the map. AR 9 would be perfect.
I agree :<!
caren_sk
good map !
i fit AR10 XD

00:19:071 (1) - spinner end 00:21:767
01:45:447 (1) - too
Tshemmp
Nevermind.
Topic Starter
phaZ

caren_sk wrote:

good map !
i fit AR10 XD

00:19:071 (1) - spinner end 00:21:767
01:45:447 (1) - too
Thanks. I dont know why they spinners didnt end there
Topic Starter
phaZ
What do you think?
Change it? yes/no and maybe say why you think so! :3
would be awsome if you help me improving my map
[Overdrive]

00:00:678 - add object.
01:38:430 - add a circle here.
rezoons
Hello ^-^,

I 've found your map and i must say i like it. Here is a *star*.

Oh! And i've noticed a few things:

Pie's Easy
00:17:702 (2) - I think you should move up the slider a little bit in order for it to start between the start and the end of 00:16:354 (1).
01:13:320 (2) - It's nearly at the center. Move it 1 grid up.

Normal
00:20:231 (1) - Add a finish hitsound.
00:40:624 (1) - I'm not sure if the new combo is really useful.
01:52:084 (3) - Why this slider isn't of the same lenght than 01:49:387 (1) and 01:50:736 (2)?
01:58:826 to 02:06:915 - I think you can map this part of the song because i find this break and the one at 01:26:466 a litlle bit close.
02:53:263 - It's a long wait for just a spinner. Maybe you should end the map here.

But i can't paly Overdrive. Maybe when i'll be better :D.
Topic Starter
phaZ
rezoons

rezoons wrote:

Hello ^-^,

I 've found your map and i must say i like it. Here is a *star*.

Oh! And i've noticed a few things:

...

Normal
00:20:231 (1) - Add a finish hitsound. yea i think i forgot it
00:40:624 (1) - I'm not sure if the new combo is really useful. no it isnt. but after 2 measures i always added nc
01:52:084 (3) - Why this slider isn't of the same lenght than 01:49:387 (1) and 01:50:736 (2)? hmm it actually should be like this..changed
01:58:826 to 02:06:915 - I think you can map this part of the song because i find this break and the one at 01:26:466 a litlle bit close.BUT I W O N T BECAUSE IM LAZY ok maybe later :)
02:53:263 - It's a long wait for just a spinner. Maybe you should end the map here. :O why? is that really a reason to delete the work?

But i can't paly play Overdrive. Maybe when i'll be better :D.
thank you for mod and star^^
rezoons

phaZ wrote:

thank you for mod and star^^
You welcome. But why no kudosu? :(
StarStream
[Normal]
00:41:296 (1) - Soll der Spinner so sein? Außerdem sind 100% zu viel für den Teil. Nimm 70, klingt besser.
00:54:105 (1) - Finish vergessen.
01:52:082 (3) - Slider nicht lang genug.
03:33:205 (1) - Finish wär nice.

[Overdrive]
00:41:466 (1) - Finish, Finish, kein Finish, Finish, kein Finish, Finish, kein Finish, Finish??
00:42:815 (9) - Klingt nicht so gut find ich ... So kurz vor 00:42:983 (10) - noch eine whistle zu setzen. Wenn du die whistle vom Ende des Sliders 00:42:815 (9) - nimmst dann kommt eine whistle pro Klick. Klingt villeicht besser, villeicht nicht so toll. Probiers mal aus.
01:16:354 (5) - Der Teil davor war von den hitsounds so leise, da wird man hier fast erschlagen ;) Mach villeicht die hitsounds von deiner Inherit Section 43320 etwas lauter, dann hört man auch die hitsounds aus der KIAI time.
01:39:275 (1) - Lass doch die whistle auf dem Offbeat. Klingt doch viel besser als hier ...
01:44:331 (2) - Whistle vergessen?
01:44:668 (1) - Das gefällt mir :D
02:17:028 (3) - Whistle vergessen.

Generell find ich die hitsounds zu leise. Ich mein, 25% bei ner KIAI time, das hörst du doch überhaupt nicht mehr, obwohl die relativ wichtig sind, weil die Teilstellen vom Song noch etwas individualistisches geben (der ist ja sonst eher generic).

Easy guck ich später durch.
Topic Starter
phaZ

rezoons wrote:

phaZ wrote:

thank you for mod and star^^
You welcome. But why no kudosu? :(
you first have to mod my Insane :P
sorry blame me >.< now you get 2kudos ;)

Blaze

Blaze wrote:

[Normal]
00:41:296 (1) - Soll der Spinner so sein? Außerdem sind 100% zu viel für den Teil. Nimm 70, klingt besser. ja, er klingt iwie komisch, wenn er aufm weißen endet ja ok 70%
00:54:105 (1) - Finish vergessen. :O
01:52:082 (3) - Slider nicht lang genug.omg >.<
03:33:205 (1) - Finish wär nice. klar

[Overdrive]
00:41:466 (1) - Finish, Finish, kein Finish, Finish, kein Finish, Finish, kein Finish, Finish?? hä? was ging mir da durch den kopf? gefixt (immer auf die drum)
00:42:815 (9) - Klingt nicht so gut find ich ... So kurz vor 00:42:983 (10) - noch eine whistle zu setzen. Wenn du die whistle vom Ende des Sliders 00:42:815 (9) - nimmst dann kommt eine whistle pro Klick. Klingt villeicht besser, villeicht nicht so toll. Probiers mal aus. ok habs vom ende des sliders entfernt. ich habe es eig nur auf den ganzen slider gesetzt weil ich den hitsound für die sliderbahn haben wollte
01:16:354 (5) - Der Teil davor war von den hitsounds so leise, da wird man hier fast erschlagen ;) Mach villeicht die hitsounds von deiner Inherit Section 43320 etwas lauter, dann hört man auch die hitsounds aus der KIAI time. ja, klingt logisch. hab jetzt 33% lol
01:39:275 (1) - Lass doch die whistle auf dem Offbeat. Klingt doch viel besser als hier ... hmm hab sie wahrscheinlich nach dem copy-paste vergessen zu löschen :D
01:44:331 (2) - Whistle vergessen? ja, an ein paar anderen stellen auch ;)
01:44:668 (1) - Das gefällt mir :D \:D/...(habs weg- und dann nochmal draufgeschoben -> fix)
02:17:028 (3) - Whistle vergessen. fix

Generell find ich die hitsounds zu leise. Ich mein, 25% bei ner KIAI time, das hörst du doch überhaupt nicht mehr, obwohl die relativ wichtig sind, weil die Teilstellen vom Song noch etwas individualistisches geben (der ist ja sonst eher generic). asollte jetzt 33% sein^^

Easy guck ich später durch.willste n extra kudo^^
thx for mod :)
StarStream
[Easy]
00:59:498 (1) - Finish vergessen.
01:31:857 (1) - ^
01:42:644 (1) - ^

Viel hab ich nicht gefunden. Die claps auf den sliderticks gefallen mir :)

Kein Kudo, zählt zu meinem vorherigem mod. Falls du dich trotzdem erkenntlich zeigen willst, kannste ja meine map modden :D
Topic Starter
phaZ

Blaze wrote:

[Easy]
00:59:498 (1) - Finish vergessen.
01:31:857 (1) - ^
01:42:644 (1) - ^

Viel hab ich nicht gefunden. Die claps auf den sliderticks gefallen mir :)

Kein Kudo, zählt zu meinem vorherigem mod. Falls du dich trotzdem erkenntlich zeigen willst, kannste ja meine map modden :D
ok ich werds probieren, ich kenn se schon ;)
rezoons
you first have to mod my Insane :P
It's not that i don't want to do it but that i can't. In fact, since i can't play the map my suggestions would not be very reliable but if you think i deserve theses kudos only if i mod the insane so i've tried my best. But remember that i can't play the map so it's not really reliable ;) :

OVERDRIVE
00:40:116 (7) - The Spacing is awkward. It's rather constant before the note and after 00:40:285 (8) but right here it's higher. Maybe it's done on purpose but it seems a little awkward.
00:41:464 (1) - The note isn't in the right position to do a circular stream.
00:48:712 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - There is an alternation of high-low spacing maybe done on purpose but rather difficult to play.
01:40:453 (4) - When playing it's nearly impossible to tell if it's the 4 of the five 5 which is the slider (at least for me).
03:07:419 (5) - ^
01:45:172 - I think you can add a note here.
02:19:048 (1) - Remove the new combo.
Topic Starter
phaZ

rezoons wrote:

you first have to mod my Insane :P
It's not that i don't want to do it but that i can't. In fact, since i can't play the map my suggestions would not be very reliable but if you think i deserve theses kudos only if i mod the insane so i've tried my best. But remember that i can't play the map so it's not really reliable ;) :

OVERDRIVE
00:40:116 (7) - The Spacing is awkward. It's rather constant before the note and after 00:40:285 (8) but right here it's higher. Maybe it's done on purpose but it seems a little awkward. i hope i fixed most~ i alrdy started to do this before you posted but i didnt submit
00:41:464 (1) - The note isn't in the right position to do a circular stream. changed but is was never supposed to be a circular stream :O.
00:48:712 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - There is an alternation of high-low spacing maybe done on purpose but rather difficult to play. swapped (4,5)
01:40:453 (4) - When playing it's nearly impossible to tell if it's the 4 of the five 5 which is the slider (at least for me). fixed
03:07:419 (5) - ^ well i dont want to fix. you know you can set in "options" -> "animated slider" means you can see how the slidertrack spawns from the sliderhead and this means you know where it starts
01:45:172 - I think you can add a note here.
02:19:048 (1) - Remove the new combo.
it was more a joke "you first have to mod my Insane". i just forgot you to give kudos :O
thx anyways :)
here is you third kudosu \o/
Moway
Random mod.

[General]

Try offset 177, I think the current offset sounds a bit too early to me.
I can see the box around the cursortrail, and I don't think you wanted that to happen. I don't know how to fix it, but I thought I would let you know.

[Overdrive]
00:00:678 - I feel like you either need an object here for the purpose of consistency. The rest of the section has this same strong drum beat, but you have constant 1/2 playing, so I think an object here fits.
00:12:139 (4) - I think replace this with a circle stacked on 00:11:633 (3) so it can be like 00:10:959 (1,2).
00:18:880 - This empty space feels awkward, since that melody line is still going here. Add a circle.
00:42:813 (9) - NC
00:47:195 (5,6) - Nazi, but space this so that the ends don't overlap like they do right now.
00:50:060 (8) - NC
00:50:734 (1) - remove NC, this puts the NC on the downbeat and fits better.
00:56:296 (3,4,5) - This doesn't flow very well. 00:55:285 (5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3) establishes this rotational flow which is suddenly broken by this part. I'd say place (4,5) to follow that rotation.
00:56:633 (5) - I don't like this repeating slider because it goes over the downbeat of the next section and forces awkward comboing. I'd suggest replacing this with a circle and then a 1/2 slider with no repeat, then putting an NC on the 1/2 slider.
00:58:487 (6,1) - I don't really like this. I expected to be following the star, so whe this becomes an antijump that breaks the star pattern, it doesn't flow or feel right.
01:01:015 (7) - NC
01:10:284 (3) - NC
01:16:352 (5,6,7,8) - The finishes here are too spammed and don't really fit the music. I'd suggest just removing all of them.
01:35:902 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - remove all the finishes here.
01:37:251 (2) - add a finish on the slider head
01:37:588 - This empty space doesn't feel right, add a circle or add a repeat to 01:37:251 (2).
01:38:430 - add a circle here.
01:40:706 (5) - move this back 1/4. think this was a mistake by you.
02:09:610 - 02:30:846 - I think that you should remap this part with a lower SV. This section is much calmer than the section immediately after so the high SV doesn't fit here.
02:21:243 (5,1) - Not sure why you have this jump. The placement of these aren't mirrored across the y-axis, which I think should be the case, nor are they spaced in consistency with the rest of the previous section. Fix either way.
02:21:412 (1) - remove NC
02:21:749 (2) - NC
02:25:794 (5) - NC
02:26:468 (1) - remove NC
02:27:142 (3) - NC
02:29:839 (4) - NC
02:34:052 (5) - NC
02:34:389 (1) - remove NC
02:35:400 (6) - NC
02:35:737 (1) - remove NC
02:38:940 (9) - I think this plays better ctrl+g.
02:42:643 (1) - remove NC
02:43:318 (4) - NC
02:50:396 (2,3) - I'm not a fan of this pattern. This is unintuitive because this entire section is just a drum roll, but the slider repetition is varied awkwardly so it doesn't fit any musical cues, making it hard to read. The way I'd suggest you do it is to have a 1/4 slider repeating twice first, then 4 circles, then another 1/4 slider repeating twice, then 4 circles.
03:34:553 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - remove all the whistle
02:51:414 - lower volume here to 10% then add green lines from here until the kiai that make the volume gradually increase.
03:02:194 (6) - NC
03:10:621 (1) - remove NC
03:10:789 (1) - ^
03:11:464 (1) - ^
03:11:632 (2) - NC
03:12:306 (1) - remove NC
03:12:980 (4) - NC
03:13:655 (1) - remove NC
03:18:374 (6) - NC
03:25:789 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - remove these finishes, they don't sound good.
03:27:816 (1) - add finish
03:31:183 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
03:33:205 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'm not a fan of this pattern for the same reasons as the one like it before.
03:34:553 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - remove all the whistles from this section, they don't really fit.

that's all, good luck!
Topic Starter
phaZ
Moway

Moway wrote:

Random mod.

[General]

Try offset 177, I think the current offset sounds a bit too early to me. im very sure it is 175^^ but thanks anyways
I can see the box around the cursortrail, and I don't think you wanted that to happen. I don't know how to fix it, but I thought I would let you know. going to fix

[Overdrive]
00:00:678 - I feel like you either need an object here for the purpose of consistency. The rest of the section has this same strong drum beat, but you have constant 1/2 playing, so I think an object here fits. need some opinions on that
00:12:139 (4) - I think replace this with a circle stacked on 00:11:633 (3) so it can be like 00:10:959 (1,2). done
00:18:880 - This empty space feels awkward, since that melody line is still going here. Add a circle. done
00:42:813 (9) - NC done
00:47:195 (5,6) - Nazi, but space this so that the ends don't overlap like they do right now. done
00:50:060 (8) - NC done
00:50:734 (1) - remove NC, this puts the NC on the downbeat and fits better.
00:56:296 (3,4,5) - This doesn't flow very well. 00:55:285 (5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3) establishes this rotational flow which is suddenly broken by this part. I'd say place (4,5) to follow that rotation. fixed
00:56:633 (5) - I don't like this repeating slider because it goes over the downbeat of the next section and forces awkward comboing. I'd suggest replacing this with a circle and then a 1/2 slider with no repeat, then putting an NC on the 1/2 slider. fixed
00:58:487 (6,1) - I don't really like this. I expected to be following the star, so whe this becomes an antijump that breaks the star pattern, it doesn't flow or feel right. changed~
01:01:015 (7) - NC no
01:10:284 (3) - NC ok
01:16:352 (5,6,7,8) - The finishes here are too spammed and don't really fit the music. I'd suggest just removing all of them. changed in an other way
01:35:902 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - remove all the finishes here. done but now again i miss hitsounds :S
01:37:251 (2) - add a finish on the slider head noooo
01:37:588 - This empty space doesn't feel right, add a circle or add a repeat to 01:37:251 (2).fixed
01:38:430 - add a circle here. not sure here, need more opinions
01:40:706 (5) - move this back 1/4. think this was a mistake by you. oops
02:09:610 - 02:30:846 - I think that you should remap this part with a lower SV. This section is much calmer than the section immediately after so the high SV doesn't fit here.remaped in some ways~
02:21:243 (5,1) - Not sure why you have this jump. The placement of these aren't mirrored across the y-axis, which I think should be the case, nor are they spaced in consistency with the rest of the previous section. Fix either way.changed, dunno why it wasnt mirrored though
02:21:412 (1) - remove NC done
02:21:749 (2) - NC done
02:25:794 (5) - NC done
02:26:468 (1) - remove NC done
02:27:142 (3) - NC nope
02:29:839 (4) - NC nope
02:34:052 (5) - NC yep
02:34:389 (1) - remove NC ^
02:35:400 (6) - NC ^
02:35:737 (1) - remove NC ^
02:38:940 (9) - I think this plays better ctrl+g. never
02:42:643 (1) - remove NC has some optical reason
02:43:318 (4) - NC ^
02:50:396 (2,3) - I'm not a fan of this pattern. This is unintuitive because this entire section is just a drum roll, but the slider repetition is varied awkwardly so it doesn't fit any musical cues, making it hard to read. The way I'd suggest you do it is to have a 1/4 slider repeating twice first, then 4 circles, then another1/4 slider repeating twice], then 4 circles. none of my testers had problems yet and the "loud" drum appears when you press the other key..must improve my english T.T
03:34:553 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - remove all the whistle changed
02:51:414 - lower volume here to 10% then add green lines from here until the kiai that make the volume gradually increase. did sth other but nice idea! <3
03:02:194 (6) - NC no
03:10:621 (1) - remove NC ^
03:10:789 (1) - ^^, to hard ot explain...
03:11:464 (1) - ^ok
03:11:632 (2) - NC^
03:12:306 (1) - remove NC
03:12:980 (4) - NC
03:13:655 (1) - remove NC
03:18:374 (6) - NC
03:25:789 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - remove these finishes, they don't sound good. meh no~
~03:27:816 (1) - add finish is alrdy?:o
03:31:183 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
03:33:205 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'm not a fan of this pattern for the same reasons as the one like it before. blah:>
03:34:553 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - remove all the whistles from this section, they don't really fit. did more sensefull hitsoundoing, reduced volume

that's all, good luck! thank you^^
thank you!
Secretpipe
I'd love this map ranked actually ;_;

If you feel like to rank it , call me , I can do an Hard diff !
Topic Starter
phaZ

Secretpipe wrote:

I'd love this map ranked actually ;_;

If you feel like to rank it , call me , I can do an Hard diff !
Ok time for remap! Somewhen...
Jade Forest
Very nice. Please get it ranked :)
Topic Starter
phaZ

Jade Forest wrote:

Very nice. Please get it ranked :)
haha thanks, i will try really soon :3
Yorium
Love this style of map <3
Topic Starter
phaZ

phaZ wrote:

Jade Forest wrote:

Very nice. Please get it ranked :)
haha thanks, i will try really soon :3
will i try really soon :3?
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